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高中英语新教材中的长难句跨版本对比(1)
高中英语新教材中的长难句跨版本对比(1)CARD 06 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：人教选修第四册 (P74) 📏 词数：78 词 ⭐ 难度：4.0 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 The bird life was so rich and varied there seemed no end to new kinds, and they lived not in ones and twos but in thousands upon thousands: tiny green-and-yellow parakeets Fee used to call lovebirds, but which the locals called budgerigars; scarlet-and-blue smallish parrots called rosellas; big pale-grey parrots with brilliant purplish-pink breasts, underwings and heads, called galahs; and the great pure white birds with cheeky yellow combs called sulphur-crested cockatoos. 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 那里的鸟类生活如此丰富多样，似乎新品种无穷无尽；它们不是一两只地生活，而是成千上万地群居：有 Fee 过去称作爱情鸟、但当地人称作虎皮鹦鹉的小型绿黄色长尾鹦鹉；有被称为玫瑰鹦鹉的猩红与蓝色的小型鹦鹉；有胸、翅下和头部呈亮紫粉色的大灰鹦鹉，被称为粉红凤头鹦鹉；还有带黄色羽冠、被称为葵花凤头鹦鹉的纯白色大鸟。 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ 结果结构 (so... there seemed...) ❖ 并列分句 ❖ 冒号后列举 ❖ 省略关系词的定语从句 (Fee used to call...) ❖ 非限制性定从 (which the locals called...) ❖ 过去分词后置定语 (called rosellas; called galahs; called sulphur-crested cockatoos) 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：先找总起句 The bird life was so rich...；再按分号列举鸟类；注意 called... 是后置定语，不是谓语。 🎯 教师教学剖析：科普/文学描写中的“列举+命名”结构。重点讲 called 后置定语和 which 定从。 CARD 07 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：译林必修第一册 (P60) 📏 词数：77 词 ⭐ 难度：3.5 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 To this end, we have decided to: turn Canteen B into an IT Centre to offer students and teachers modern learning and teaching facilities, and then connect it with the Library; redevelop part of the existing Sports Centre to create a multi-use game area—a dedicated and secure space for students to play and have fun; plant more trees inside the school to reduce traffic noise and give students a greener study environment. 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 为此，我们决定：把 B 食堂改造成信息技术中心，为师生提供现代化的学习与教学设施，然后将其与图书馆连接起来；重新开发现有体育中心的一部分，打造一个多用途运动区——一个专供学生玩耍娱乐的安全空间；在校内种植更多树木，以减少交通噪音，为学生提供更绿色的学习环境。 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ 目的状语 (To this end) ❖ decide to do 后接冒号列举 ❖ 三个并列不定式 (turn...; redevelop...; plant...) ❖ 不定式作目的状语 (to offer; to create; to reduce...) ❖ 破折号同位语 (a dedicated and secure space...) 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：找出三个核心动词 turn / redevelop / plant；注意每个不定式后面的目的状语；模仿写校园改进提案。 🎯 教师教学剖析：应用文/提案写作。重点讲“决定做某事”后如何用冒号+分号列出并列措施。 CARD 08 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：外研选修第二册 (P1) 📏 词数：76 词 ⭐ 难度：4.5 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue, Or walk with kings nor lose the common touch; If neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you; If all men count with you, but none too much; If you can fill the unforgiving minute With sixty seconds' worth of distance run Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it, And which is more you'll be a Man, my son! 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 如果你能与人群交谈而不失美德，或与国王同行而不失平民本色；如果敌人和挚友都不能伤害你；如果所有人都信赖你，但又不至过分依赖；如果你能用六十秒的奔跑填满那无情的一分钟，那么大地和其中的万物都属于你，而且，更重要的是，你将成为一个真正的人，我的儿子！ 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ 多重条件状语从句 (If you can...; If neither...; If all...) ❖ 排比 ❖ 主句表语前置/倒装感 (Yours is the Earth...) ❖ 定语从句 (that's in it) ❖ 插入语 (which is more) 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：先划出多个 If... 条件从句，再找主句 Yours is the Earth...；理解 which is more 是插入语。 🎯 教师教学剖析：诗歌/励志文本。教学重点是条件排比和主句倒装。 CARD 09 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：北师大必修第三册 (P66) 📏 词数：74 词 ⭐ 难度：4.0 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 And there were a few countries and regions that scored very highly in boys' reading enjoyment, for example in Albania, Indonesia, Kazakhstan, Kyrgyzstan, Shanghai in China and Thailand where at least 80% of boys enjoy reading, although these positive numbers are matched and passed by girls who reported an even higher level of reading enjoyment (90% or higher). 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 还有一些国家和地区在男孩阅读乐趣方面得分很高，例如阿尔巴尼亚、印度尼西亚、哈萨克斯坦、吉尔吉斯斯坦、中国上海和泰国，在这些地方至少 80% 的男孩喜欢阅读；尽管这些积极数据被女孩追平并超越，女孩报告的阅读乐趣水平甚至更高（90% 或以上）。 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ There be 存在句 ❖ 定语从句 (that scored...) ❖ 关系副词定从 (where at least 80%...) ❖ 让步状语从句 (although...) ❖ 被动语态 (are matched and passed) ❖ 定从 (who reported...) 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：先找主干 there were a few countries and regions；再识别 that/where/although/who 四层从句；注意被动语态表达对比数据。 🎯 教师教学剖析：数据说明文。重点讲 there be + 定从、where 定从、although 让步和被动语态。 CARD 10 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：北师大选修第一册 (P36) 📏 词数：71 词 ⭐ 难度：4.0 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 I think of countless birthday parties and nights out I have missed, ruining a family holiday in France because of the endless search for a swimming pool to train in, almost missing my brother's wedding because I was too busy hiring a car in downtown Johannesburg and driving through the "no-go" areas in order to do a group ride with the local triathletes. 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 我想到自己错过的无数生日聚会和夜晚外出，想到因为无休止地寻找训练泳池而毁掉在法国的家庭假期，想到差点错过我哥哥的婚礼，因为我当时正忙着在约翰内斯堡市中心租车，并开车穿过那些“禁区”，以便和当地铁人三项运动员一起集体骑行。 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ 祈使/省略主语开头 (think of...) ❖ 省略关系词的定语从句 (parties and nights out [that] I have missed) ❖ 现在分词短语作结果/伴随状语 (ruining..., almost missing...) ❖ 原因状语从句 (because I was...) ❖ 不定式目的 (to train in; in order to do...) 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：找出 I have missed 修饰前面的 parties/nights out；理解 ruining、missing 是结果/伴随；注意 in order to 目的。 🎯 教师教学剖析：第一人称记叙/反思。重点讲省略关系词定从和分词状语链。 CARD 11 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：译林必修第三册 (P80) 📏 词数：71 词 ⭐ 难度：4.5 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 As a first preparation, therefore, the student must loosen his hold on all crude and hastily adopted notions, and must strengthen himself, through effort and resolve, to accept without prejudice any conclusion which is supported by careful observation and logical argument, even though it goes against notions he may have previously formed for himself, or taken up, without examination, from others. 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 因此，作为第一步准备，学生必须放松对所有粗糙、匆忙接受的观念的执着，并必须通过努力和决心增强自己，无偏见地接受任何由仔细观察和逻辑论证支持的结论，即使它与他自己以前形成的、或未经审视从他人那里接受的观念相悖。 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ 介词短语前置 (As a first preparation ) ❖ 插入语 (therefore) ❖ 并列情态谓语 (must loosen... and must strengthen...) ❖ 过去分词/形容词修饰 (hastily adopted; crude) ❖ 定语从句 (which is supported...) ❖ 让步状语从句 (even though it goes against...) ❖ 省略关系词定从 (notions [that] he may have...) 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：先找两个并列谓语 must loosen 和 must strengthen；再处理 which is supported... 和 even though...；注意 notions he may have formed 省略 that。 🎯 教师教学剖析：学术思辨语篇。重点讲并列谓语、被动定从、让步从句和插入语。