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What if 高考作文是道歉信?

What if 高考作文是道歉信?

今天我们一起来鉴赏下Nvidia 前 CEO 黄仁勋先生的道歉信🙇‍♂️看看对大家的信件作文写作(道歉信...)是否会有启发

I owe my family and all of you an apology.

开门见山,明确道歉

owe 比简单的 say sorry 更有分量,还可以写owe sb an explanation

I was unfaithful to my wife. My actions hurt her and our children. There is no excuse for what I did. I am deeply sorry.

承认错误,不找借口

简洁有力, 校园场景批评行为可以写There is no excuse for such irresponsible behaviour.

Throughout my life, my family has given me love and support. They deserve my honesty and loyalty. Instead, I let them down and damaged the life we built together. I take full responsibility for what I did and the hurt I caused, and I accept the criticism that comes with it.

表达愧疚,承担责任

instead形成鲜明对比

let sb down 意为让某人失望、辜负某人。相比 disappoint更自然 作者没有使用语气更强烈的 destroy,而是选择 damage,语气很克制

To my wife and family: I love you. I know an apology cannot undo what I have done. I hope our family will heal and that, over time, I can earn back your trust.

面向家庭,寻求修复关系

heal(愈合、恢复)、over time(随着时间推移)

earn back your trust这个earn用的确实地道,比regain更强调自己的态度是要通过行动重获信任

To my colleagues at NVIDIA, including those I have worked alongside for decades, and to our board, partners, and shareholders around the world: you deserve better from me. Leading NVIDIA is the privilege of my life. My responsibility is to serve you and be worthy of your trust. I have fallen short of that responsibility. I am fully committed to NVIDIA and will work to earn back your confidence.

面向公司,重建信誉 the privilege of my life 我一生中最大的荣幸

be worthy of your trust 配得上你的信任, 和deserve替换

fallen short of 未达到

注意这里的confidence不是自信了,是信心, 和trust替换

Regarding the national security concerns raised in news reports, NVIDIA’s Board of Directors has initiated an independent investigation. I support the investigation and will cooperate fully. I love our country and our company. I am committed to protecting NVIDIA and supporting America’s national security. I am proud and grateful to be an American.

回应外部,表达立场

本段明显正式很多

My family bears no responsibility for my choices. I do. Please give them privacy.

划清责任边界,保护家人

bear no responsibility 对……不承担责任

Jensen

可以借鉴的写作技巧

用准确的动词代替复杂的形容词 

damage the relationship、earn back trust、take responsibility

通过逻辑关系组织情感

They deserve my honesty and loyalty. Instead, I let them down.

用简洁的句子表达更有力度 My family bears no responsibility for my choices. I do.

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