第28 讲 生活趣事篇
目录
知识点1 五大万能句型.................................................................................................................................. 2
知识点2 高频金句......................................................................................................................................3
生活趣事类读后续写通常围绕家庭聚会、朋友互动等日常场景展开，常见主题包括：
家庭幽默：如错用物品引发尴尬（如误戴长辈眼镜看书）
社交互动：朋友间因误会或意外产生笑料（如姐弟重逢时的戏剧性情节）
突发意外：日常小事引发连锁反应（如生日聚会上的意外惊喜）
核心套路
①矛盾塑造：通过意外事件制造幽默效果（如主人公因紧张误操作）
②情感变化：从尴尬到释然，最终以温馨收尾（如家人包容化解误会）
③人物塑造：突出主人公的应变能力和幽默感，展现人际关系升华（如朋友互助化解危机）
知识点1 五大万能句型
万能句式 1：日常引入，铺垫趣事
句式：
It was just another ________ day until ________ happened.
（替换“________”可为时间/场景 + 意外事件，制造反差）
例句：It was just another Saturday afternoon until the dog wore my dad’s slippers like shoes.
（那只是一个普通的周六下午，直到狗把爸爸的拖鞋当鞋子穿了起来。）
仿写句 1：那只是一个普通的网课早晨，直到弟弟穿着恐龙睡衣冲进了镜头。
It was just another online class morning until my brother ran into the frame in his dinosaur pajamas.
仿写句 2：那只是我们平常的野餐，直到风筝突然飞进了邻居家的泳池。
It was just another picnic until the kite suddenly flew into the neighbor’s swimming pool.
仿写句 3：那只是一个安静的自习课，直到一只蜜蜂飞进了教室。
It was just another quiet self-study class until a bee flew into the classroom.
万能句式 2：意外发生，打破平静
句式：Suddenly, ________ went completely wrong, and chaos broke loose.
（替换“________”为具体事件，突出
失控感
）
“
”
例句：Suddenly, the cake batter exploded out of the mixer, and chaos broke loose.
（突然，蛋糕糊从搅拌机里喷了出来，场面顿时一片混乱。）
仿写句 1：突然，气球被钉子扎破，所有的装饰都掉了下来。
Suddenly, the balloon popped on a nail, and chaos broke loose as all the decorations fell down.
仿写句 2：就在他按下播放键的瞬间，音响发出了刺耳的啸叫。
Suddenly, the speaker let out a loud screech when he pressed play, and chaos broke loose.
仿写句 3：她刚站起来发言，假发突然滑到了肩膀上。
Suddenly, her wig slipped onto her shoulder as she stood up, and chaos broke loose.
万能句式 3：趣味发展，笑料迭出
句式：Everyone tried to help, but their efforts only made ________ even .
（替换“
为问题
”
+ 程度词，体现
越帮越忙
的喜剧效果）
“
”
例句：Everyone tried to help, but their efforts only made the mess even bigger.
（大家都想帮忙，但他们的努力反而让混乱更加严重了。）
仿写句 1：我们都想抓住那只逃跑的鸡，结果把它吓得飞上了屋顶。
Everyone tried to catch the escaped chicken, but their efforts only made the situation even worse.
仿写句 2：他想用胶带修好书包，结果把手臂和书包粘在了一起。
He tried to fix his bag with tape, but his efforts only made the problem even stickier.
仿写句 3：他们想悄悄关掉警报，反而按响了更响的铃声。
They tried to quietly turn off the alarm, but their efforts only made the noise even louder.
万能句式 4：爆笑解决，荒诞收场
句式：In the end, we solved it not by ________, but by ________ — and we couldn’t stop laughing.
（用“not... but...”突出荒诞解决方式，增强幽默）
例句：In the end, we solved it not by skill, but by letting the cat knock the cookie jar off the shelf — and we couldn’t stop
laughing.（最后，我们不是靠技巧解决的，而是让猫把饼干罐从架子上碰了下来
我们笑得停不下来。）
——
仿写句 1：最终，我们不是靠工具，而是靠弟弟用玩具吸尘器吸出了钥匙
然后我们一起大笑。
——
In the end, we solved it not by tools, but by my brother using a toy vacuum to suck out the key — and we couldn’t stop
laughing.
仿写句 2：我们不是用梯子，而是用跳绳把风筝拽了下来，结果绳子缠住了树。
In the end, we solved it not by ladder, but by using a jump rope to pull down the kite — and we couldn’t stop laughing.
仿写句 3：我们不是靠说明书，而是靠猜按钮，竟然成功关掉了跳舞的机器人。
In the end, we solved it not by reading the manual, but by guessing the buttons — and we couldn’t stop laughing.
万能句式 5：感悟升华，温情收尾
句式：That day taught me that ________ isn’t about ________ — it’s about ________.
（替换后半部分，体现
生活真谛
的升华，适用于结尾段）
“
”
例句：That day taught me that happiness isn’t about perfection — it’s about laughing together when everything goes wrong.
（那天让我明白，快乐不在于完美，而在于一切出错时还能一起大笑。）
仿写句 1：那次经历让我明白，美好的回忆不在于计划周全，而在于意外发生时的笑声。
That experience taught me that great memories aren’t about perfect plans — they’re about the laughter when things go
sideways.
仿写句 2：我终于懂得，家庭的温暖不在于整洁有序，而在于一起收拾烂摊子时的默契。
I finally realized that family warmth isn’t about neatness — it’s about the teamwork when cleaning up the mess.
仿写句 3：现在我明白，童年的乐趣不在于玩具多少，而在于和朋友一起制造的
灾难
。
“
”
Now I understand that childhood joy isn’t about how many toys you have — it’s about the “disasters” you create with
friends.
知识点2 高频金句
场景一：日常引入
这个场景是故事的开始，为后续的趣事埋下伏笔。它通常描述一个平凡而熟悉的日常生活场景，人物处于放松、好
奇或无聊的状态，为即将到来的意外做铺垫。
1.The family was gathered around the table for a regular Saturday night dinner.
一家人正围坐在桌旁，进行一个普通的周六晚餐。
解析：gather around 表示
围坐、聚集
，
“
”
regular 表示
普通的、常规的
。
“
”
2.John was bored and scrolling through his phone when a strange idea popped into his head.
约翰正无聊地刷着手机，突然一个奇怪的想法冒了出来。
解析：scroll through one's phone 表示
刷手机
，
“
”
pop into one's head 是固定搭配，表示
突然想到
。
“
”
3.In the middle of a boring chemistry class, Mike's stomach suddenly growled loudly.
在一节无聊的化学课上，迈克的肚子突然大声咕咕叫起来。
解析：in the middle of 表示
在
“
...过程中
，
”
growl 常指动物咆哮，这里幽默地形容肚子叫。
4.My dad, confident as always, announced he would cook a fancy meal for us.
我爸爸和往常一样自信，宣布要为我们做一顿大餐。
解析：confident as always 是插入语，表示
和往常一样自信
，
“
”
announce 表示
宣布
。
“
”
5.The atmosphere in the room was relaxed and full of laughter until we heard a loud crash from the kitchen.
房间里的气氛轻松而充满欢笑，直到我们听到厨房传来一声巨响。
解析：atmosphere 表示
气氛
，
“
”
crash 表示
撞击声、破碎声
。
“
”
场景二：意外发生
这是故事的转折点。一个突然的、意想不到的意外状况或新奇元素打破了平静的日常，引发了后续一系列有趣的事
件。人物通常表现出惊讶和慌乱。
6.Suddenly, black smoke started pouring out of the toaster!
突然，黑色的烟雾开始从烤面包机里冒出来！
解析：pour out of 表示
从
“
...涌出
，
”
toaster 是
烤面包机
。
“
”
7.To everyone's astonishment, the dog jumped onto the table and stole the whole chicken.
令所有人惊讶的是，狗跳上桌子，偷走了整只鸡。
解析：to one's astonishment 表示
令某人惊讶的是
，
“
”
steal 表示
偷窃
。
“
”
8.The kite got stuck in a tree, and our picnic blanket was blown into the river by a strong wind.
风筝卡在了树上，我们的野餐垫被一阵大风吹进了河里。
解析：get stuck in 表示
卡在
“
...里
，
”
blow away 表示
吹走
。
“
”
9.She slipped on a banana peel and almost fell, but she waved her arms wildly to keep balance.
她踩在一块香蕉皮上滑了一下差点摔倒，但疯狂地挥舞手臂以保持平衡。
解析：slip on 表示
在
“
...上滑倒
，
”
keep balance 表示
保持平衡
，
“
”
wildly 增加了滑稽感。
10.The computer screen suddenly went blue, and all his unsaved work disappeared in a second.
电脑屏幕突然蓝屏了，他所有未保存的工作一秒钟内全消失了。
解析：go blue 指
电脑蓝屏
，
“
”
unsaved 表示
未保存的
。
“
”
场景三：趣味发展
这是故事的主体部分。人物开始手忙脚乱地应对意外，过程中充满滑稽的动作、巧合和误会，让人忍俊不禁。不同
性格人物的互动也增添了幽默色彩。
11.We all rushed to help, but we only ended up getting in each other's way.
我们都冲过去帮忙，结果却只是互相碍事。
解析：end up doing 表示
最终以
“
...结束
，
”
get in one's way 表示
妨碍某人
。
“
”
12.He tried to fix it with a hammer, which, of course, made the situation even worse.
他试图用锤子修理它，这当然让情况变得更糟了。
解析：make the situation worse 表示
使情况更糟
，
“
”
of course 插入语增强了幽默感。
13.In a panic, she used salt instead of sugar, making the cake taste extremely strange.
慌乱中，她把盐当成了糖，让蛋糕吃起来味道怪极了。
解析：in a panic 表示
惊慌中
，
“
”
instead of 表示
而不是
。
“
”
14.They were trying to be quiet, but every move they made seemed to create a louder noise.
他们试图保持安静，但他们的每一个动作似乎都发出了更大的响声。
解析：try to do sth 表示
试图做某事
，
“
”
seem to 表示
似乎
。
“
”
15.I was laughing so hard that I couldn't breathe, let alone offer any useful help.
我笑得太厉害，气都喘不过来了，更别提提供任何有用的帮助了。
解析：laugh hard 表示
大笑
，
“
”
let alone 表示
更不用说
。
“
”
场景四：爆笑解决
这是故事的高潮部分。所有的误会可能在一个滑稽的场面中被解开，或者众人的努力最终以一种意外、荒诞的方式
（甚至是失败）解决了问题，但结果却产生了新的趣味。
16.Finally, the dog ran back with an empty plate, looking very pleased with himself.
最后，狗叼着空盘子跑回来了，看起来对自己非常满意。
解析：look pleased with oneself 是固定搭配，表示
自我感觉良好、洋洋得意
，非常形象。
“
”
17.It turned out that the ‘ghost' noise was just the old refrigerator humming.
原来，
鬼
的声音只是老冰箱的嗡嗡声。
“
”
解析：It turned out that... 表示
结果是
“
...，原来是...”，hum 表示
发出嗡嗡声
。
“
”
18.We solved the problem not with skill, but with a lot of luck and even more laughter.
我们解决问题靠的不是技术，而是很多运气和更多的笑声。
解析：not... but... 表示
不是
“
...而是...”，突出了幽默的核心。
19.In the end, we all sat on the floor, eating slightly burnt but delicious sandwiches.
最后，我们都坐在地板上，吃着有点焦但美味的三明治。
解析：slightly burnt 表示
微焦的
，形成一种反差趣味。
“
”
20.His face was covered in flour, and he presented the ‘cake' which was actually a pizza.
他脸上沾满了面粉，端出了那个
蛋糕
，结果实际上是个披萨。
“
”
解析：be covered in 表示
覆盖着
“
...”，present 表示
呈现、端上
。
“
”
场景五：趣味收尾
风波过后，故事以一种轻松、愉快的方式收尾。大家可能会一起谈笑，回忆刚才的滑稽经历，气氛变得融洽和满足。
21.We spent the rest of the evening sharing stories and laughing about our little ‘adventure'.
我们晚上剩下的时间都在分享故事，笑谈我们这次小小的
冒险
。
“
”
解析：spend time doing sth 表示
花费时间做某事
，
“
”
adventure 加了引号，指代刚才的趣事。
22.That day became a legendary story in our family, told and retold at every gathering.
那天的事成了我们家的一个传奇故事，每次聚会都会被反复讲述。
解析：legendary 表示
传奇的
，
“
”
repeatedly 表示
反复地
。
“
”
23.We took a silly group photo to remember the moment forever.
我们拍了一张傻乎乎的合影，以永远记住这一刻。
解析：silly 表示
傻的、滑稽的
，
“
”
group photo 表示
合影
。
“
”
24.Even though the plan failed completely, we all agreed it was the most fun we'd had in ages.
尽管计划完全失败了，但我们都一致认为这是很久以来我们玩得最开心的一次。
解析：even though 引导让步状语从句，in ages 表示
很久
。
“
”
25.We cleaned up the mess together, still joking about what had happened.
我们一起清理了烂摊子，仍然拿刚才发生的事开玩笑。
解析：clean up the mess 表示
清理烂摊子
，
“
”
joke about 表示
拿
“
...开玩笑
。
”
场景六：感悟升华
这是故事的结尾，进行简单的感悟升华。主人公从中体会到乐观心态的重要性，或意识到这些趣事增进了彼此的感
情，懂得了珍惜生活。
26.I learned that the best memories often come from the most unexpected moments.
我明白了，最美好的回忆往往来自于最意想不到的瞬间。
解析：come from 表示
来自于
，
“
”
unexpected 表示
意想不到的
。
“
”
27.It taught us that laughing together is the best way to overcome any small trouble.
它告诉我们，一起大笑是克服任何小麻烦的最好方法。
解析： overcome trouble 表示
克服麻烦
，动名词短语
“
”
laughing together 作主语。
28.We realized that it's not perfection, but imperfection that makes life fun and real.
我们意识到，让生活有趣而真实的不是完美，而是不完美。
解析：强调句句型 It is... that...，强调了 imperfection（不完美）。
29.This funny incident brought us closer together than ever before.
这个有趣的事件让我们比以前更加亲密了。
解析：bring together 表示
使相聚、使亲密
，比较级
“
”
closer than ever before 表示
比以往任何时候都更亲密
。
“
”
30.Now I understand that a positive attitude can turn a disaster into a fun story.
现在我明白了，积极的态度可以把一场灾难变成一个有趣的故事。
解析：turn A into B 表示
把
“
A 变成B”，a positive attitude 表示
积极的态度
。
“
”
高考真题演练
2025 年1 月八省联考（ 彪悍机车党的柔软爱心）
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片)
about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge
to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street
alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored.
The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem
particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I
turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers–very big, tough-looking bikers.
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a
strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men–all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in
some sort of club–standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right
theater? Had I misread the date of the event?
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush
back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater.
Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
Paragraph 2: When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
【范文1】
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank and I felt a bit panicked. But I
noticed that they were all very orderly. Some were chatting quietly about the dogs they had rescued. I took a deep breath and
found an empty seat as far away from them as possible. I was still a bit nervous but tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film
to start.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They were here for the same reason as me
- to support the local animal shelters. I felt so ashamed of my initial fear. As the film played, I saw their efforts in saving the
abandoned dogs. They were so passionate and kind. After the film, I went up to them and apologized for my misjudgment. They
just laughed and said it was okay. We even exchanged contact information to keep in touch about future animal - saving activities.
主旨大意
文章主要讲述了
我
在费城参加会议期间，因热爱动物想独自去观看一场关于动物救助站的纪录片筹款活动
“
”
，
途中遇到一群看起来很凶悍的摩托车骑手，尽管害怕但还是决定进入剧院，为后续在剧院内的发现等情节做铺垫，
展现出一场因误解产生紧张又意外的经历。
伏笔
文中提到
有二十个左右身材高大的男人
都佩戴着表明他们属于某个俱乐部的徽章
站在我面前
，以
“
——
——
”
及
我
内心的担忧和纠结要不要进入剧院等描写，都为后文揭示这些骑手的真实身份埋下伏笔，让读者也跟着
“
”
我
一起好奇他们到底是怎样的群体。
“
”
情节发展
先是
我
看到活动广告想参加却因无人陪同而犹豫，最终决定独自前往。接着在剧院外看到一群令人生畏的
“
”
骑手，一番思想斗争后进入剧院，发现里面还有更多骑手，最后在电影开始时才明白他们原来是动物救援团体，情
节层层递进，充满意外感。
情绪变化
从一开始对活动的期待，到独自出行时的些许不安，看到骑手后的极度紧张、害怕，再到进入剧院后的忐忑，
最后得知真相后的释然，情绪变化丰富且符合情节发展逻辑，使读者能很好地代入
我
的视角感受整个过程。
“
”
主题句
1. "Don't judge a book by its cover, as those who seem intimidating might have a kind heart."
不要以貌取人，那些看似令人生畏的人或许有着善良的心。
2. "Appearances can be deceiving, and unexpected kindness may come from the most unlikely people."
外表可能具有欺骗性，意想不到的善意或许来自最不可能的人。
3. "One should never make assumptions based on looks alone, for there's often more than meets the eye."
人们绝不应该仅凭外表就妄下论断，因为往往有很多内在的东西是看不到的。
4. "Underneath a tough exterior could lie a warm and caring soul, just as those bikers did."
在强硬的外表之下可能藏着一颗温暖且有爱心的灵魂，就像那些骑手一样。
5. "We should look beyond appearances to discover the true nature of others, as the bikers' story shows."
我们应该透过外表去发现他人的真实品性，正如那些骑手的故事所展示的那样。
【范文2】
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank and I felt like I had walked
into a lion's den. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. I quickly found an empty seat in a corner,
trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I kept stealing glances at them, still feeling extremely nervous.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They were here for the same reason as I
was-to support the animal shelters. They had organized this event to raise funds and awareness for the abandoned dogs. As I
watched them watching the film with such passion and care in their eyes, I felt ashamed of my initial judgment. I was touched by
their love for animals and glad that I hadn't let my fear stop me from coming.
生词归纳：
1.“inconspicuous”：形容词，意为
不显眼的；不引人注意的
，例句
“
”
“He tried to make himself inconspicuous in the
crowd.”（他试图在人群中让自己不引人注意。）
2.“initial”：形容词，意思是
最初的；开始的
，例如
“
”
“Her initial reaction was one of shock.”（她最初的反应是震
惊。）
高级句式解析：
1.“only to find there were even more bikers inside”是不定式作结果状语，表示意料之外的结果，生动地体现出
我
“
”
进入剧院后看到更多骑手时那种糟糕又意外的心情。
2. “I felt ashamed of my initial judgment.”使用了“be ashamed of”这一短语，表示
为
感到羞愧
，准确地传达出
“
……
”
我
得知真相后对自己一开始仅凭外表判断他人的惭愧心理。
“
”
【范文3】
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. I froze for a moment, my palms sweating
and my mind racing with all kinds of worst-case scenarios. But since I was already inside, I took a deep breath and walked slowly
towards an empty row, constantly aware of their presence around me.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. It turned out that they were using their
club's influence to advocate for these poor animals. They were the ones who had put a lot of effort into organizing this fundraising
event. Watching them so engrossed in the documentary, I couldn't help but smile. I was relieved that my unfounded fears had been
just that-unfounded. And I was truly inspired by their dedication to the cause of helping animals.
生词归纳：
1. “scenarios”：名词，复数形式，意为
设想；方案；情节
，如
“
”
“We need to consider different scenarios before
making a decision.”（在做决定之前我们需要考虑不同的设想情况。）
2. “engrossed”：形容词，
全神贯注的；专心致志的
，常用搭配
“
”
“be engrossed in”，例如“He was engrossed in
reading the book.”（他全神贯注地读那本书。）
高级句式解析：
1. “I froze for a moment, my palms sweating and my mind racing with all kinds of worst-case scenarios.”此句运用了独立主
格结构，“my palms sweating”和“my mind racing”分别对
我
当时的状态进行了细节描写，使画面感更强，更生动地
“
”
展现出
我
紧张害怕的样子。
“
”
2. “It turned out that they were using their club's influence to advocate for these poor animals.”中“It turned out that...”是一
个常用句型，意为
结果是
；原来是
，用于引出意想不到的结果或真相，在这里很好地起到了揭示骑手真实身
“
……
……”
份和目的的作用。
2021 年1 月浙江卷（尴尬的万圣节）
Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I
compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins
back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner.
Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard
at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the
pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got
jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally
I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork ( 软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge
pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping
to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I
realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a
panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get
it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
3. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
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【参考范文1】
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Growing more panic, I began to cry. Fortunately, hearing me
crying, dad came and helped me lay my head on the table, so my neck could rest for a while. Then he said to me “Listen, honey. I
have to cut this pumpkin in half. ” I had no choice but to keep still with my eyes tightly closed and listening to the knife moving
on the pumpkin. Moments later, my head was finally released from this horrible pumpkin cage. Then mom told me she had just
filmed me managing to pull my head out of the pumpkin.
That video was posted the day before Halloween. Actually my mom had asked whether she could post it on the Internet,
because after all I was so embarrassed and looked so silly in it. Anyway, I nodded and supported her idea. It turned out that people
liked and forwarded it crazily on the Internet, only to make me an Internet celebrity.
【参考范文2】
It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer. The air inside the hollow vegetable was full of my anxious breath. I
could hear my sister’s laughter and Jason’s muffled voice talking about cutting the giant thing open. “No! Not my
precious pumpkin!” I protested. Eventually, Dad helped me adjust my body to a more relaxed position, and pulled the pumpkin
gently off my head. Hair in knots, nose and chain covered in pumpkin flesh, I let out a sigh of relief. That’s when I realized the
camera had been rolling the whole time!
The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.I looked just like a pumpkin head in it. Embarrassed and a little
annoyed, I fled to my room, but Mom stopped me. “You haven’t read the comments yet.” I scrolled down the screen and marveled
at the stories the viewers shared about Halloween. One girl recalled celebrating it with her brothers and sisters, and thanked us for
“bringing her home”. The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes. I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet
loving family.
模拟演练
1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day, I found a wallet on the street. The wallet contained only three dollars and a very old letter. The envelope was
worn and the only thing on it was the return address. I started to open the letter, hoping to find some information. Then I saw
the date-1990, and the signature-Beatrice. The letter was written several decades ago.
Then I made every effort and found out that Beatrice was now working in a hospital. I showed her the letter. The second
she saw the letter, she took a deep breath and said, “Young man, this letter was the last contact I ever had with Henry. He is my
only brother. I loved him very much. I was only 16 at the time and my brother is two years younger than me. If you can find
him, tell him I'm still looking for him,” she said and tears began to well up in her eyes. “Mother is waiting for him to come
back home.”
When I walked out of the building with the wallet in my hand, the guard of the building recognized the wallet, and with
his help, I finally found its owner, Henry. I handed the wallet to Henry and he said, “Yes, that's mine! It must have dropped out
of my pocket this afternoon.”
“I read the letter in the hope of finding out who owned the wallet.” I said. The smile on his face suddenly disappeared. He
asked, “You read that letter?” “Not only did I read it, but also Beatrice read.” I replied. He suddenly became excited.
“Beatrice? You know where she is? How is she? Please tell me,” he begged. “She's fine. She has been looking for you.” I said
softly.
He grabbed my hand and said, “Sir, you know she is my only sister in this world. I've always missed her.”
Henry and I took the elevator (电梯) down to Beatrice's room. I walked over to her. “Beatrice,” I said softly, pointing to
Henry, who was waiting with me in the doorway. “Do you know the man?”
注意：
1．续写词数应为150 左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word．
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About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice．
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Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word．Henry said softly, almost in a whisper,
“Beatrice, it’s Henry. Do you remember me? ” She said excitedly, “Henry! I don’t believe it! Henry! It's you! My Henry! ” He
walked slowly towards her and they hugged. The nurse and I left with tears falling down our faces.
比阿特丽斯调整了一下眼镜，看了一会儿，但一句话也没说。亨利轻声说，几乎是轻声说，
比阿特丽斯，是
“
亨利。你还记得我了吗？她兴奋地说，
亨利！
我不相信！亨利！是你的名字！我的亨利先生！他慢慢地向她走
“
”
去，他们拥抱在一起。护士和我离开了，眼泪流了下来。
Paragraph 2：
About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice．“Can you break away on Sunday to attend a party?
Henry and Beatrice are going to have a party in the home! ” It was a beautiful party with all the people dressed up to join in
the celebration. If you ever wanted to see a woman and a man acting like two teenagers, you had to see this elder sister and
younger brother. It was a perfect ending for a family affection that had lasted nearly several decades.
大约三周后，我接到比阿特丽斯的电话。
你星期天可以参加聚会吗？
亨利和比阿特丽斯将在家里举办一个
“
”
聚会！
这是一个美丽的派对，所有人都盛装参加庆祝活动。如果你想看到一个女人和一个男人像两个青少年，你
“
必须看到这个姐姐和弟弟。这是一个持续了近几十年的家庭感情的完美结局。
【解析】
本文以信封为线索展开，讲述了作者在街上发现了一个钱包，在里面发现一封破旧的信，通过努力找到信主人
的姐姐，通过保安大叔找到了钱包主人，最后，姐弟重逢的故事。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容
比阿特丽斯扶了扶眼镜，看了一会儿，但没有说一句话。
可知，第一段可描写姐弟两
“
”
人重逢的温馨场景。
②由第二段首句内容
大约三周后，我在办公室接到比阿特丽斯的电话。
可知，第二段可描写作者对重逢事
“
”
件的感慨。
2．续写线索：发现信封
找到信封主人姐姐
找到主人
姐弟重逢
感谢
感悟
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——
——
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3．词汇激活
行为类
接电话：get a call at/put sb on to/pick up the telephone/answer the phone
抽出时间：break away on/take time off/spare one’s time
情绪类
兴奋：did excitedly/thrilled
泪流满面：tears bathe/stream down/one’s cheeks
【点睛】
[高分句型1]：The nurse and I left with tears falling down our faces.这句话运用了with 的复合结构。
[高分句型2]：It was a perfect ending for a family affection that had lasted nearly several decades 这句话运用了that 引
导的定语从句。
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150 左右。
“I will have revenge(复仇) on him, and make him regret what he did to me,” said Philip to himself, his face red with
anger. Stephen, who happened at that moment to walk past and hear him talking to himself.
“Who is that you want to take revenge on?” asked Stephen. Philip looked at his friend and said, “You remember my new
ball given by my father? Look! It is punctured! It was farmer Robinson’s son who did this!”
Stephen asked him why young Robinson had ruined it. “I was walking and kicking my ball.” Philip replied, “By
accident, when I was opposite the gate, my ball bumped over a bucket of water left in the pathway by him.”
“He came up and began to yell at me. I assured him that what I had done was an accident, and that I was terribly sorry
for it. I also offered to fetch another bucket of water for him. But despite all I had said, he took a nail out of his pocket and
twisted it into the ball, as you see. I will make him pay for this.”
“Honestly speaking,” said Stephen, “he is already punished for what he has done, because nobody likes him and he often
walks around alone. He is just a lonely and miserable boy. This will be enough revenge for you.”
“But the ball is my favorite gift and I enjoy playing with it so much…” murmured Philip.
“Now Philip,” said Stephen, “I think you can act better than him in terms of getting revenge. I will tell you what
happened to him not long ago.”
“A while ago he saw a bee hovering about a flower. He caught the bee and was going to pull off its wings for fun. The
bee, of course, stung him. The pain made him so angry that, like you, he decided to get revenge. He got a stick, and pressed it
into the beehive (蜂巢).”
“Immediately the whole swarm of bees flew out and stung him so badly that he had to spend a few days in bed.”
“So you see, he was not very successful in getting revenge. What if he could act better and forgive the bee for stinging
him?” asked Stephen.
Paragraph 1: “I must say,” replied Philip, “that your advice seems very good”.
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答案：
“I must say,” replied Philip, “that your advice seems very good. So come with me please, and I will tell my father what
happened to the ball, and I think he will not be angry with me.” They went, and Philip told his father what had happened. He
thanked Stephen for the good advice he had given his son, and promised Philip to give him another ball exactly the same as
the first.
我得说，
菲利普回答说，
你的建议似乎很好。所以请跟我来，我要告诉我父亲舞会发生了什么事，我想
“
”
“
他不会对我生气的。他们走了，菲利普把发生的事告诉了他父亲。他感谢斯蒂芬给他儿子的好建议，并答应菲利普
再给他一个和第一个完全一样的舞会。
A few days afterwards, Philip saw this young Robinson fall as he was carrying home a heavy log of wood. It was too
heavy for him to lift up again. Philip ran to him, and helped him to put it on his shoulder again. The boy was embarrassed to be
treated so kindly when he had ruined Philip’s ball the week before! He said that he was very sorry for his behavior. Philip went
home quite happy. “This,” he said,“ is the best revenge I could take, in returning good for bad.”
几天后，菲利普看见这个年轻的罗宾逊带着一根沉重的木头回家时倒下了。它太重了，他不能再抬不起来了。
菲利普跑到他跟前，帮他又把它放在肩上。这个男孩在一周前毁了菲利普的球，对这样友好感到很尴尬！他说他对
自己的行为感到非常抱歉。菲利普很高兴地回家了。
这是，
他说，
这是我所能得到的最好的报复。
“
”
“
”
解析：
通过阅读所给文章可知,Philip 因为农夫Robinson 的儿子用钉子刺穿了自己新买的球而非常生气,扬言要报复他。
Stephen 劝他说没有人喜欢Robinson 的儿子,他经常一个人走来走去。他只是一个孤独可怜的男孩。Stephen 还告诉
Philip,几天前Robinson 的儿子被蜜蜂蛰了,就去打蜜蜂巢,结果被一大群蜜蜂蛰了,不得不在床上躺了几天的事情。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:“我得说,” Philip 回答说,“你的建议似乎很好。
所以后文应该是讲述
”
Philip 放
弃了报复的计划,告诉了父亲实情,Philip 的父亲感谢Stephen 给他儿子的忠告,答应Philip 再给他买一个球,和第一个一
模一样的。第二段开头是:几天后,Philip 看到Robinson 的儿子在把一根沉重的木头搬回家时摔倒了。本段应该写
Philip 帮助了Robinson 的儿子,Robinson 的儿子为自己几天前的行为道了歉,Philip 高高兴兴地回了家,认为以德报怨就
是最好的报复。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150 左右。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:be angry with;good advice;the same as;too…
to…;embarrassed 等高级词汇;He said that he was very sorry for his behavior.宾语从句等高级句式。
3.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25 分）
During lunchtime，Emma suggested going to the zoo to feed the animals and her mom agreed.
“We’ll stop by the bakery and pick some bread up. Now hurry and eat and then we’ll go. It’s going to be a lovely day.
Grandma is coming with us. She’ll be here any minute，”mom said.
Emma ate her lunch and then ran into her room to get her shoes.The problem was that she could only find one of them.
She looked under her bed, but all she could see were dirty towels and pants. She moved some of her toys out of the way，but
still couldn’t find her shoe. After she’d checked everywhere in her room，she ran into the kitchen. “Mom，I can’t find my
shoe.Will you wait while I look for it？”she asked.
Her mom thought about how many times she’d told Emma to clean her room up. She whispered something to Emma’s
grandma and then said to Emma，“You will have to stay home.Your dad and I will take Ryan to the zoo. Grandma will
stay here with you.”
“No！Please wait for me. I want to go to the zoo，”Emma cried. “I’m sorry, Emma. I’ve told you a dozen times to
clean your room and you ignored me.You can’t find your shoe now. It’s your own fault for not doing as I asked.You will stay
home.”
Emma ran into her bedroom, crying. Her mom came to the door and said，“Emma，clean that room of yours before I
get home. I’ve told grandma not to give you any sweets until you finish the work.” She went out to the car with Ryan and
Emma’s dad and then they drove away.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2．应使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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【答案】Emma sat on her bed and cried for a long time. And then she wiped her eyes and started to clean her room. It
took her two hours to clean up the room.“I did it！”she said proudly. She even found her missing shoe. She ran into the
living room.“Grandma！Come and see. I cleaned my room and found my shoe.” Grandma looked in Emma’s room. “If you
had kept it this way, you wouldn’t have lost your shoe.Come and have some sweets now，”she said.
艾玛坐在床上哭了很长时间。然后她擦了擦眼睛，开始打扫房间。她花了两个小时才打扫房间。
我做了！
“
”
她骄傲地说。她甚至找到了她丢失的鞋子。她跑进客厅。
奶奶！
来看看吧。我打扫了我的房间，找到了我的鞋
“
”
子。奶奶看着艾玛的房间。
如果你一直这样做，你就不会丢鞋了。现在就来吃点糖果吧，
她说。
“
”
Emma and her grandma were sitting at the table，eating when her mom，dad，and Ryan came home.“Well，look at
Emma’s room！It’s clean，”her dad said.“How was the zoo？Did you have fun？I wish I could have gone there with
you，”Emma said.“If you keep your room clean，we may go and see animals again，”her mom said. From then on，
Emma tried her best to keep her room clean.
艾玛和奶奶坐在桌边吃饭，妈妈、爸爸和瑞恩回家。
嗯，看看艾玛的房间！它很干净，
她爸爸说，
动物
“
”
“
园怎么样？你玩得开心吗？我希望我能和你一起去，
艾玛说。
如果你保持房间干净，我们可以再去看动物，
”
“
”
她妈妈说。从那时起，艾玛就尽力保持她的房间干净。
4.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Thanks to my conservative(保守的）family background,I didn't believe in angels(天使）.That is,not until Christmas
Eve of 1979, when an angel brought unexpected joy to my home.
After divorce,my two daughters not only lost the safety of a whole family,they also tearfully(泪汪汪地）left behind
neighborhood friends, a familiar school, and a large house. These had all been replaced with a narrow two-bedroom
apartment in a poorer part of town .
I arranged to take my vacation during my children's winter holiday. We spent evenings planning activities: games, a
pizza night , and evening car rides to view neighborhood holiday lights .With expectation , they seemed to be in good spirits .
The week before the school break, however, I was fired because of the company's poor performance. By Christmas
Eve,sadness covered our vacation plans. An afternoon outing did little to improve our mood .
On returning to our apartment, we were astonished to see a beautiful,six-foot Christmas tree propped(支撑）against our
front door. In silent wonder, we looked back and forth, from the tree to one another and around the empty street. Excitement
built,and the girls begged to keep the tree.
"Maybe it's for us,"my older daughter guessed.
"Yeah,"repeated my younger child,"I bet an angel brought it to us!"
I laughed aloud at the idea of an angel bringing a Christmas tree to my family. Caught up in their happiness, I announced
the tree "ours".
We moved it inside and headed out to the only upermarkets in our small town open that late on Christmas Eve. With
holiday goods down to half price,I agreed to buy a tree stand(底座）,two boxes of colorful balls , some colorful lights , and
one paper angel.
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Paragraph 2:The annual winter holiday became a family tradition.
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Back home , we moved " our " tree into our tiny living room . Cheerfully, the girls painted some paper decorations. With
delight that had been absent for months, we started to add the things we bought from the supermarket around the Christmas
tree. We put up the lights, hung the colorful balls and placed the paper angel on top. Finally, with a girl in each of my arms,
we sat in the darkness,attracted by the bright Christmas tree lights. There was full of joy in our new home .
The annual winter holiday became a family tradition. We'd feel complete with a Christmas tree in our house. For many
years, we held our breath and experienced the familiar feeling up our arms when we placed the original paper angel on the
top of each tree. Still, every Christmas Eve, my daughters and I talked about the unexpected joy that Christmas tree had
brought us and about the special childhood memories at that time.
5.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
After dinner, Mrs. Quimby told the family that Grandma, who lived on a farm, had sent in a lot of pumpkins for jack-o’-
lanterns (空心南瓜灯) for the neighborhood children. There was one in the basement waiting to be carved, she added.
Ramona sprang to her feet and dashed down to bring it up, but it was too heavy for a second-grader. Finally Mr. Quimby
gave a hand.
“Let’s make it smile like last year,” exclaimed Ramona.
“Hmm. Let’s see.” Mr. Quimby studied the pumpkin, turning it to find the best side for the face. With a pencil he
sketched (素描) a nose-shaped nose, not a triangle. Then the mouth turned up on both sides. “smiling!” Ramona clapped her
hands.
Mr. Quimby nodded with a smile, cut a circle around the top of the pumpkin and lifted it off for a lid. Without being
asked, Ramona found a big spoon for scooping out the seeds. Picky-picky, the Quimbys' shabby old cat, came into the
kitchen to see if something had been put in his dish. When he found that it had not, he paused, sniffed the pumpkin smell and
angrily walked out with his tail twitching.
Mr. Quimby began to whistle as he carved with skill and care, first a mouthful of teeth, each one neat and square, then
eyes and eyebrows. He was working on two ears shaped like question marks when Mrs. Quimby announced it was bedtime
for Ramona. Unwillingly Ramona ran, took a shower and quickly returned. Now, Mr. Quimby had just carved a few C-
shaped curls (卷发) around the hole in the top of the pumpkin. He reached inside and dug a candle holder in the bottom.
“There,” he said, putting down his knife. “A work of art.” Mrs. Quimby found a candle stub (残根), inserted it in the
pumpkin, lit it and set the lid in place. Ramona turned off the light. The jack-o’-lantern was smiling with a flickering flame.
“Wow!” Ramona threw her arms around her father before going to bed with great satisfaction.
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Paragraph 1: In the middle of the night Ramona awoke to a noise.
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Paragraph2: On the table their jack-o’-lantern no longer had a whole face.
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In the middle of the night, Ramona awoke to a noise. Ramona turned on the light and jumped out of bed angrily. It
turned out that the cat accidentally bumped the jack-o’-lantern to the floor while catching mice. It was broken. Looking at her
beloved jack-o-lantern lying on the floor, the candle in it went out, Ramona began to cry. Mr. Quimby was also woken up, got
up to comfort Ramona and helped her take the jack-o’-lantern to the table.
On the table their jack-o’-lantern no longer had a whole face. Ramona continued to cry, and dad decided to carve the
pumpkin again. He picked up the knife and carved along the incomplete face of the pumpkin. The incomplete face became
funnier, and the lantern laughed more brightly. Dad said, “Ramona, don't cry. Look at your pumpkin lantern. It’s alive again.”
Ramona dried her tears and smiled with greater satisfaction.
6.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was at least two months before Christmas when nine-year-old Almie Rose told her father and me that she wanted a
new bicycle. Her old Barbie bicycle was just too babyish, and besides, it needed a new tire.
As Christmas drew nearer, her desire for a bicycle seemed to fade, —or so we thought, as she didn’t mention it again.
Merrily, we started purchasing the latest fashion—Baby Sitter’s Club dolls—and beautiful story books, a doll house, a
holiday dress and toys. Then, much to our surprise, on December 23rd, she proudly announced that she “really wanted a bike
more than anything else.”
Now we didn’t know what to do. It was just too late, with all the details of preparing Christmas dinner and buying last-
minute gifts. So here we were—Christmas Eve around 9:00 p.m., having just returned from a wonderful party, looking
forward to our evening ahead—hours of wrapping children’s presents, parents’ presents, a brother’s presents and friends’
presents. With Almie Rose and her six-year-old brother, Dylan, lay comfortably in their beds. Now we could only think of the
bicycle, the guilt and the idea that we were parents who would disappoint their child.
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Paragraph 1: “What if I make a little bicycle out of clay (黏土) and she can trade it for a real one later?” my husband
Ron thought.
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Paragraph 2: On Christmas morning, we were excited for Almie to open the package with the clay bike.
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“What if I make a little bicycle out of clay (黏土)and she can trade it for a real one later?" my husband Ron
thought.He also wrote a note that she could trade it for a real bike. "This is an expensive item and she is 'such a big girl,' it
would be much better for her to pick it out." he thought. So he spent the next four hours painstakingly (尽心地) working with
clay to make a tiny bike. Finally, his face expanded with a satisfied smile when he finished it.
On Christmas morning, we were excited for Almie to open the package with the clay bike. Almie’s heart raced when she
opened it and found the note. "Does this mean that I will trade this bike that Daddy made me for a real one?" Smiling, I said,
"Yes." With tears in her eyes, she replied, "I could never trade in this beautiful bicycle that Daddy made me. I'd rather keep
this than get a real bike." At that moment, we were too amazed to hear her response and her father hugged her tightly.
