第30 讲 险境求生篇
目录
知识点1 五大万能句型.................................................................................................................................. 2
知识点2 高频金句......................................................................................................................................3
陷入绝境 是险境求生主题中比较常见的情节之一，故事中的主人公在外出游
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玩或探险的过程中，遭遇各种意外被
困或面临野兽袭击，在实施自救或获得救援之前往往经历了一段异常艰难的时期。本情节一般包含 突遭意外雪上加
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霜 和 峰回路转 三个部分。
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知识点1 主题升华
通过议论或抒情提炼故事内核，将个体经历上升到普遍情感或人生哲理，如亲情、成长、价值观等，让结尾富有思
想深度。
万能句式 1：突遭意外，陷入绝境
句式：Without warning, ________ struck, and I was suddenly .
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为灾难
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场景 + 被动状态，突出
突发性
与
无助感
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例句：Without warning, a landslide struck, and I was suddenly buried under rocks and mud.
（毫无预兆地，山体滑坡突然发生，我瞬间被埋在了岩石和泥土之下。）
仿写句 1：毫无预兆地，洪水袭来，我们瞬间被困在了屋顶上。
Without warning, the floodwaters rose, and we were suddenly trapped on the roof.
仿写句 2：毫无预兆地，野火蔓延，我瞬间被浓烟包围。
Without warning, the wildfire spread, and I was suddenly surrounded by thick smoke.
仿写句 3：毫无预兆地，地震爆发，整个山谷瞬间陷入混乱。
Without warning, the earthquake hit, and the entire valley was suddenly in chaos.
万能句式 2：雪上加霜，危机升级
句式：Just when I thought things couldn’t get worse, ________ happened.
（强调
最坏时刻
的二次打击，增强戏剧张力）
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例句：Just when I thought things couldn’t get worse, my flashlight died, leaving me in total darkness.
（就在我以为情况不可能更糟时，我的手电筒却没电了，让我陷入完全的黑暗。）
仿写句 1：就在我以为情况不可能更糟时，我的手机也失去了信号。
Just when I thought things couldn’t get worse, my phone lost signal, cutting off all contact.
仿写句 2：就在我以为情况不可能更糟时，脚下的冰面突然裂开了。
Just when I thought things couldn’t get worse, the ice beneath my feet suddenly cracked.
仿写句 3：就在我以为情况不可能更糟时，一只狼从树林中缓缓走出。
Just when I thought things couldn’t get worse, a wolf slowly emerged from the woods.
万能句式 3：峰回路转，希望初现
句式：In the distance, I spotted ________, and a spark of hope lit up my heart.
（“spark of hope” 比喻希望之火，极具画面感和情感张力）
例句：In the distance, I spotted a faint light through the trees, and a spark of hope lit up my heart.
（远处，我看到树影间透出微弱的光，心中顿时燃起一丝希望。）
仿写句 1：我远远望见一架直升机在盘旋，心中顿时燃起一丝希望。
In the distance, I spotted a helicopter circling above, and a spark of hope lit up my heart.
仿写句 2：我看到山顶升起一缕青烟，心中顿时燃起一丝希望。
In the distance, I spotted a thin column of smoke rising from the hill, and a spark of hope lit up my heart.
仿写句 3：我听见远处传来搜救犬的吠叫声，心中顿时燃起一丝希望。
In the distance, I spotted the barking of search dogs, and a spark of hope lit up my heart.
万能句式 4：成功脱险，重获新生
句式：As ________ pulled me to safety, I burst into tears, knowing I had made it.
（突出
被救
瞬间的情感释放，增强感染力）
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例句：As the rescue team pulled me to safety, I burst into tears, knowing I had made it.
（当救援队将我拉到安全地带时，我泪如雨下，知道自己终于得救了。）
仿写句 1：当爸爸冲进山洞把我抱出来时，我忍不住哭了，知道自己终于安全了。
As Dad rushed into the cave and pulled me out, I burst into tears, knowing I had made it.
仿写句 2：当绳索将我从悬崖边拉起时，我哭了出来，知道自己活下来了。
As the rope lifted me from the cliff edge, I burst into tears, knowing I had made it.
仿写句 3：当消防员破门而入把我救出时，我泪流满面，知道自己逃过一劫。
As the firefighter broke in and pulled me to safety, I burst into tears, knowing I had made it.
万能句式 5：感悟升华，生命顿悟
句式：That experience taught me that ________ isn’t about avoiding danger — it’s about ________.
（用于结尾段，升华主题，体现成长与顿悟）
例句：That experience taught me that survival isn’t about avoiding danger — it’s about staying calm and never giving up.
（那次经历让我明白，求生不在于躲避危险，而在于保持冷静、永不放弃。）
仿写句 1：那次经历让我明白，勇气不在于无所畏惧，而在于恐惧中依然前行。
That experience taught me that courage isn’t about having no fear — it’s about moving forward despite fear.
仿写句 2：那次经历让我明白，生命的意义不在于安逸，而在于绝境中依然相信希望。
That experience taught me that the meaning of life isn’t about comfort — it’s about believing in hope even in despair.
仿写句 3：那次经历让我明白，真正的力量不在于身体强壮，而在于内心的坚韧。
That experience taught me that true strength isn’t about physical power — it’s about inner resilience.
知识点2 高频金句
突遭意外
场景 1：暴雪
1.A fierce snowstorm had swept through the area.
一场猛烈的暴风雪席卷了这个地区。
2.The cars in the parking lot were hidden under the snow.
停车场里的汽车都被雪掩埋了。
3.The path was blocked by a two - meter - high wall of snow.
道路被一堵两米高的雪墙拦住了。
4.That area was heavily stricken by a snowstorm last night.
那片区域昨晚遭受了严重的暴风雪袭击。
场景 2：狂风暴雨
1.The wind was picking up.
风越来越大。
2.The roaring wind pulled up many trees.
呼啸的风将许多树根连根拔起。
3.It had been raining heavily for almost two weeks.
大雨已经下了接近两周了。
4.Out of the window, a violent storm swept across the town.
窗外猛烈的暴风雨席卷了整个小镇。
5.The branches of the trees were swinging and the garbage bin tipped over.
树枝在摇摆，垃圾桶被掀翻了。
6.After a flash of lightning and a burst of thunder, rain started to pour down, beating heavily against the windows.
一阵电闪雷鸣之后，大雨倾盆而下，重重地打在窗户上。
场景 3：洪水海啸
1.The river roared through the countryside with tremendous force.
河流以巨大的力量咆哮着，穿过乡村。
2.They could hear a terrible roar coming from the far end of the river.
他们能听到从河流的尽头传来的可怕吼声。
3.Waves about twelve meters high came rushing in, drowning everything.
大约 12 米高的海浪涌来，淹没了一切。
4.The wall of water was coming faster. It seemed to be swallowing everything in its way.
浪潮更为迅猛。它所到之处，似乎一切都要被它吞噬。
场景 4：地震
1.Suddenly, the ground shook as if the earth were splitting apart.
忽然间，地面震动，大地仿佛要裂开了。
2.An earthquake with a magnitude of 5.7 had struck the mountain.
一场 5.7 级的地震袭击了这座山。
3.I could see the road below me breaking and trees shaking from their roots up.
我可以看到我脚下的路在断裂，树木从根部向上全都在摇晃。
4.The wall - length window broke in front of me, with huge sharp pieces of glass raining down upon the sofa.
大开窗在我面前碎掉了，巨大而又锋利的玻璃碎片如雨点般落在沙发上。
场景 5：火灾
1.Everything on the road was consumed by fire.
路上的一切都化为灰烬。
2.Fanned by a westerly wind, the fire spread rapidly through the forest.
在西风的助推下，火势在森林中迅速蔓延。
3.Heavy smoke filled the air as the wind - blown flames skipped from one tree to another.
借着风势，火从一棵树烧到另一棵树，空气中弥漫着浓烟。
场景 6：迷路
1.I tried to take a short cut but got lost.
我想走捷径，但迷路了。
2.The climbers had lost their way in the dark.
登山者们在黑暗中迷失了方向。
3.We headed off in the wrong direction and got lost.
我们走错了方向，迷路了。
4.Soon their path was completely covered with snow and they realized they were lost.
很快，他们的路完全被雪覆盖，他们才意识到迷路了。
5.Having been walking anxiously for about an hour around the forest, we failed to find our way out.
我们在森林里焦急地走了大约一个小时，也没能找到出路。
场景 7：猛兽
1.The cougar inched towards its prey.
美洲狮向它的猎物逼近。
2.Suddenly, a cougar rushed into the trees.
突然间，一只美洲狮冲进了树林。
3.A piercing howl echoed through the sandbank.
一声刺耳的嚎叫在沙丘上回荡。
4.A giant cougar made its way through the tall grass.
一只巨大的美洲狮在高高的草丛中穿行。
雪上加霜
场景 1：环境恶化
1.The sky blackened as the storm approached.
风暴将至，天空变得一片漆黑。
2.There was a sudden fall/drop in temperature.
温度骤降。
3.The darkness of night was rapidly coming on.
夜幕迅速降临。
4.When he came to himself, he found himself trapped in the dark.
他醒来时，发现自己眼前一片漆黑。
5.As the black clouds gathered, the darkness increased around him.
乌云聚集，他周围越来越黑。
6.The temperature climbed to 40 degrees as the sun beat down.
太阳火辣辣地照着，温度攀升到 40 度。
7.The sun began to sink and he was getting colder by the minute.
太阳开始落下，他感到越发寒冷。
8.Hearing the roar of the lion, the children stood rooted to the spot, unable to move.
听到狮子的吼叫声，孩子们站在原地不敢动弹。
场景 2：物资短缺
1.Besides, food and water were running out.
此外，食物和水快用完了。
2.To make matters worse, the motor stopped working.
更糟糕的是，发动机停止了运行。
3.The GPS they had brought with them had stopped working, which only made the situation worse.
他们带来的 GPS 停止了工作，这只会让情况变得更糟。
4.What's worse, he didn't have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies.
更糟糕的是，他没有带任何食物和水，更不用说手机或其他用品了。
场景 3：疲惫受伤
1.Lying on the ground, I felt dizzy.
我躺在地上，头晕目眩。
2.His left leg had been twisted and he couldn't move it at all.
他的左腿已经扭伤了，根本不能动。
3.During those days, he suffered from both cold and hunger.
在那些日子里，他饥寒交迫。
4.With his right leg trapped under a stone, he looked helpless and desperate.
他的右腿被一块石头压住了，他看起来无助又绝望。
5.We felt tired and hungry. What's worse, two of us were injured on the way.
我们感到又累又饿。更糟糕的是，我们有两个人在途中受了伤。
6.With her head, arms, and legs all bleeding, she suffered great pain, making miserable sounds.
她的头、胳膊和腿都在流血，她遭受巨痛，发出痛苦的声音。
场景 4：孤立无援
1.They kept shouting for help, but no one came.
他们一直在喊救命，但没有人来。
2.They hadn't seen a single person in the past three days.
在过去的三天里，他们没有看到一个人。
3.He called out his wife's name, but there was no response.
他喊着妻子的名字，但没有收到任何回应。
4.He yelled, but the sound of the rushing water drowned him out.
他大喊大叫，但湍急的水声淹没了他的声音。
峰回路转
场景 1：一线希望
1.He had one last hope to hold on to.
他还抱着最后一线希望。
2.I could do nothing but hope for the best.
我别无选择，只能往好处想。
3.She pinned all her hopes on someone noticing the smoke.
她把所有的希望都寄托在有人能注意到烟雾上。
4.There was still a remote chance that they would find her alive.
他们仍然有一线希望能把她活着找到。
5.She had not yet given up hope that she would be found by the rescuers.
她还没有放弃，期待被救援人员发现。
6.She sped up, hoping against hope that her friend would be waiting for her.
她加快了速度，心中抱着一线希望：她的朋友会在等她。
7.Though our food wouldn't last long, we stuck to the hope that we would be rescued soon.
虽然我们的食物维持不了多久，但我们坚信我们很快就会获救。
场景 2：成功脱险
1.The cougar fled immediately.
这只美洲狮立即逃走了。
2.The three children were safe and sound.
这三个孩子安然无恙。
3.News of the heroic deed spread through her little village like wildfire.
这个英雄事迹的消息在她的小村子里不胫而走。
4.The cougar disappeared, but the story of Larrane's wisdom and bravery was still spreading around the village and beyond.
美洲狮走了，但 Larrane 充满智慧和勇气的故事依然在村子内外流传。
5.To their surprise, the furry giant suddenly stopped chasing them, as if it had realized they meant no harm.
令他们惊讶的是，这个毛茸茸的 巨人 突然不再追逐他们，好像意识到了他们没有恶意。
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练习
一、结合以上所学表达，翻译句子。
1.这时候，我们开始感到疲乏，雨也下大了。
By now we were beginning to get tired and __________.
2.Grady 绝望地冲到他们的营地，大喊救命。
Grady dashed to their camp desperately, __________.
3.它突然出现，把孩子们吓得站在原地不敢动弹。
As it suddenly appeared, the children were so scared that they __________, unable to move.
4.我们抱有一线希望，希望我们的儿子是幸存者之一。
We were __________ that our son was among the survivors.
5.我们大声呼救，但不出所料，没有收到任何回应。
We yelled for help, but unsurprisingly, __________.
6.他在地上翻来覆去睡不着，时不时地发出痛苦的声音。
He tossed and turned on the ground, __________.
7.几分钟内狂风升级成猛烈的暴风雨，像是要把我和帐篷一起吹走。
Within a few minutes, the winds increased to __________ that threatened to blow my tent away and me along with it.
8.我们往快熄灭的火里加了些木柴，把所有希望都寄托在有人能注意到火光上。
We fed some wood into the dying fire, __________.
9.我们迷路了，又累又饿。更糟的是，天又下起雨来了。
We __________, __________. To top it all off, it started to rain.
10.意识到这个动物没有恶意，他们就收拾好所有的东西，以最快的速度离开了露营地。
__________, they gathered all their stuff and left the camping site as quickly as they could.
二、结合以上所学，补全段落内容。
The bear quickly rose to its feet, looking fiercer than before. Colin threw some sausages at it, hoping the food would distract its
attention.
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翻译句子详解
1.it was raining heavily/the rain was pouring down
翻译：雨下得很大；雨倾盆而下
解析：“rain heavily” 是常用表达，描述雨下得大；“pour down” 形象体现雨如倾倒般落下 ，二者都用于描绘雨势。
2.shouting for help
翻译：呼喊求救
解析：“shout for...” 表示 为
呼喊；大声要求，
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“help” 是 帮助，整体就是因需要援助而呼喊 。
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3.stood rooted to the spot
翻译：站在原地一动不动（像扎根在那里一样 ）
解析：固定短语，“rooted” 有 扎根 含义，形象表现人因惊讶、恐惧等，双脚像扎根在
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spot（地点、 spot（地
点、场所 ） 场所 ） ，无法挪动 。
4.hoping against hope
翻译：抱一线希望；绝望地希望（明知希望渺茫仍怀抱期待 ）
解析：习惯表达，强调在几乎没希望的情况下，仍怀揣期待，试图出现转机 。
5.there was no response
翻译：没有回应；没有反应
解析：“response” 是 回应、反应 ，该句简洁说明不存在回应的情况 ，比如呼喊、询问后没得到反馈 。
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6.making miserable sounds now and then
翻译：不时发出凄惨的声音
解析：“miserable” 是 凄惨的、痛苦的 ，
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“now and then” 表示 不时、偶尔 ，即时不时传出那种让人觉得难受
“
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的声响 。
7.a violent storm
翻译：一场猛烈的暴风雨
解析：“violent” 有 猛烈的、强烈的 意思，用于形容
“
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storm（暴风雨 ） ，体现其强度大、破坏力可能强 。
8.pinning all our hopes on someone noticing the light
翻译：把我们所有的希望都寄托在有人注意到这束光上
解析：“pin one’s hopes on...” 是固定搭配，意为 把希望寄托在
上 ，就是寄希望于他人发现光线，盼能带来转
“
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机 。
9.got lost; feeling tired and hungry
翻译：迷路了；感觉又累又饿
解析：“get lost” 是 迷路 常用表达；
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“tired”（疲惫的 ） 和 “hungry”（饥饿的 ） 用 “and” 连接，描述身体感受
。
10.Realizing the animal meant no harm
翻译：意识到这只动物没有恶意
解析：“realize” 是 意识到、认识到 ，
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“mean no harm” 是 没有恶意；不伤人 ，整体是说察觉到动物不会带来
“
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伤害 。
二、结合以上所学，补全段落内容。
Unfortunately, it didn’t work. The beast charged at him, biting his left leg. The acute pain made Colin scream out with fright.
Suddenly, Colin remembered the bear spray in his pocket. Hardly had he taken it out when he sprayed it onto the bear’s face with
full strength. The sudden attack drove the bear away.
解析：这段讲 Colin 遭遇野兽（熊 ） 攻击，被咬伤左腿后，想起口袋里的防熊喷雾，刚拿出来就全力喷向熊脸，
把熊赶走的过程 。“Hardly had he taken it out when...” 是 一
就
结构，体现动作接连发生，符合紧急情境下迅
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速采取行动的逻辑 ，和前面学的表达（如描述危险场景、行动反应等 ） 可关联，用于练习在叙事段落里运用相关短
语、句式 。
高考真题演练
2020 年7 月浙江卷（拍照北极熊遇险）
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the
polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed
from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But
sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He
stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun
shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear
down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.
Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I
use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through
the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2. 至少使用5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.
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【解析】
本文主要讲述了人与熊对抗，之后成功脱险的故事。主人公的感情线变化为：兴奋渴望
惊恐
放松。剧情线以主
→
→
人公如何与北极熊周旋并成功摆脱它展开。
由第一段的段首提示句可知：几分钟后，熊又回到营地。接下来可通过场景渲染，描写当时令人颤栗惊恐的画面，
例如“Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness.”这不仅合理地描写了熊的反应，也描绘出让人战栗
的场景。
由第二段的段首提示句可知：此时，直升机到了。如果想要进行续写两段的合理衔接，第一段的结尾可描写成
“After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, the bear trotted forward a few steps.”这样可以营造出危急的场景。
我们
看到直
“
”
升机的到来，感到绝处逢生的喜悦，可以以人物心理描写作为第二段的开头，重点描写喜极而泣的状态，例如“ My
heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved.”
最后，结尾部分需要迅速收束，并说明成功逃脱的结局。
参考范文1
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for
he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this
critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack
and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we
got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear
had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare
scene — we were robbed by a polar bear!
参考范文2
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness.
The noises turned Elli and I pale with horror. I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence. He roared repeatedly,
shattering what was left of the silence. Elli seized this opportunity to take some pictures of the bear. The animal’s noises echoed
all around us. We betrayed our feelings by huddling together, shivering with fear. After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, he trotted
forward a few steps.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved. Elli used pepper
spray again to buy us enough time. But this time the bear became more alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity of
hunger, so we throw all the food we have. He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli
prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound.
2018 年6 月浙江卷（森林骑马遇险）
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild
West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle
Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the
guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning. Uncle Paul
woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the
chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul
riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t
going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly
towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my
dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the
brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven
(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2. 至少使用5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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【解析】
读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚
故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发
挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。
通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，
于是亲身上马体验。
根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit 出
现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。
第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul 的叮嘱——不要误吃晚
饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。
参考范文1
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a
while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. “We may not be able to make it back
to the farm house in time for supper.” I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and
tired.
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the
difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of
breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we
will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.
参考范文2
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on
tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on!” All of a sudden the horse began to run. My dad
tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and
realized that we were way off the track.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for
the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My
dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us
over. What a night!
2017 年6 月浙江卷（骑行遇狼）
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with
his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would
catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He
hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he
saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright
red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then
it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only
to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep
uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his
flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw
two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running
alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He
pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2. 应使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
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【解析】
本文主要讲述了Mac 在骑自行车前往阿拉斯加的途中，被一只狼追赶的故事。时态要考虑以一般过去时为主，人称
以第三人称为主。同时要兼顾字数的要求，不要过多，关键词列出5 个以上，需要均匀分布在两段中。考生要注意几个
关键信息和情节变化并结合给出的内容提示进行合理构思。
参考范文1
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could
open the door, the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wolf
back off, Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him
heavily. Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Soon after, the
animal ran off.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends. “It was really a nightmare
and I thought I was going to die,” said Mac in a shaky voice, tears gathering in his eyes. For him, life could never be more
beautiful. After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men continued their trip, agreeing never to separate
again.
参考范文2
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac crashed into the car with a loud bang. As a result, he fell off the bicycle and
had his left ankle twisted. Hardly had Mac stood up when the wolf arrived and was about to launch another attack. Mac was going
to die when suddenly the wolf was hit right on the head by a piece of rock. The wolf fell back, howling with pain. It was Paul who
did this. Becky helped Mac climb into the car, while Paul kept shouting and throwing stones at the wolf.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They were shocked at what they saw and joined Paul. One of Mac’s
friends picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf. Satisfied with what he got, the wolf ran into the woods. Mac thanked
Paul and Becky, “How grateful I am that you stopped to save me and I owe it to you that I’m still alive.” As Mac got injured, the
three men had to give up the rest of their journey and returned home.
2016.10 浙江卷（森林迷路）
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.
Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was
so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked
away.
With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping
to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that
she was lost.
“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the
more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the
dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling ( 滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she
followed the sound to a stream
. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her
life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the
lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it
impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off
her yellow
blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2.应使用5 个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Paragraph 1:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane
had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night.
Although she felt a little sad, she didn’t get fearful. She thought about Tom. “He must have called for those helicopters. Maybe he
was in one of them and will come back again! I have to guide him tomorrow.” She fell asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.
Paragraph 2:
It was day break when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place
to guide the helicopter. Fortunately, she saw a huge flat rock in an open area at a distance. She rushed to the rock, climbed onto it
and waited. To her great joy, the helicopter appeared again. The nearer it got, the more she flagged the yellow blouse. Luckily, the
helicopter didn’t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and ran towards Jane.
She broke down and burst into tears.
【解析】
读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络和关系。续写这篇短文时，考
生需要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上，考生顺着文章的思路，根据
线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用英语表达出来。同时，在组织语言时，切记使用5 个以上给出的提
示词。
◆故事主线
已知
索：
线
吵架——出走——迷路——失联——自救——思念——寻路——直升机——飞离……拂
……
晓
可
写
索：
续
线
失望？坚信？曲折？直升机？Tom？自救？获救？
◆续写词汇
已
提示
：
给
词汇
Jane, Tom, lake, walk, climb, at a distance, to her great joy, helicopter, yellow blouse
激活
：
话题
词汇
环境：forest, stream, rock, berry, valley, steep, cave, lake, waterfall (人口、环境与自然)
困
：
难hunger, starve, thirsty, injure, broken, blood, panic, shelter, survive (survival), suffer, cold, severe (天气与自然灾害)
活动: walk, climb, fall, crawl, taste, attempt, struggle to one’s feet, make one’s way to, pick up (人体与
作
动
)
情
：
绪to one’s great joy, break down
救援：rescue team, doctor, search for, spot (天气与自然灾害)
意志品
：
质calm, courage, will (性格与行
特征
为
)
模拟演练
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One of my most memorable trips took place during the summer vacation about three years ago, when my sister, my aunt
and I took a trip to Spain because we were moving. On the day of the trip, I lay in bed thinking about my friends whom I was
going to leave behind and thoughts were flooding in.
When we arrived at the hire station, we seemed to have some problems with our luggage because it was too much for a
taxi, so we had to book a van (厢式送货车) to take our luggage to the airport. We waited for a long period to find a perfect
van that would fit our luggage.
Before leaving, I felt very bad because I was going to a different country and was going to miss all my friends and
family. I was not comfortable and cried.
The journey was almost perfect at the beginning, but soon it began to rain. Because of the rain, the drivers could not see
far away, which caused a huge traffic jam. I was sitting by the window with a can of Coke that I had bought in the store
earlier. My aunt and sister fell asleep, and during this time. I felt bored and thought about other things that bothered me. My
eyes turned to the mountain in front of us.
A bus suddenly appeared in the picture. It was very close to us. Cars sped past us without any speed limit. Beside me
was a very deep lake: I wondered to myself what if something or someone fell inside it. Suddenly, a bus in front of our van
stopped, and because it was raining heavily and the van was going fast, no one could see what was going to happen. Then,
bang, we bumped into each other. Our van overturned, but luckily, it didn’t fall into the lake. People came to help us get out
of the van because we were blocked and the driver was half-dead.
注意：1.续写词数应为150 左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone.
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We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone. Everything was very strange. I had never had that
kind of experience before. It was like watching a horror movie. Some people who were also in the accident started crying,
looking for their children, tears beginning to increase. My leg was badly injured. My aunt was calling to seek some help, and
my sister was full of injury. It almost seemed that the tragedy was never going to end.
I was losing a lot of blood and then the emergency aid came. They took us to hospital where we were treated. We had to
pay for some fees, but we had no money. The doctors and nurses who were present learned of our condition and paid for us.
Although we had experienced a bad accident, we were all lucky to have received help from those warm-hearted people. After
that we went on with our journey and reached our destination successfully at last.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索开展故事，作者讲述了三年前去西班牙度暑假时，在去飞机场的路上，遭遇车
祸的故事。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容
我们挣扎着从厢式送货车里爬出来，发现我们的一切东西都不见了。
可知，第一段可
“
”
描写作者目睹遭遇车祸后的惨状。
②由第二段首句内容
我正在流血，救护车来了。
可知，第二段可描写医生和护士抢救我们的经过。
“
”
2．续写线索：爬出运货车——目睹惨状——绝望——救护车到达——医院救助——医护人员筹钱——感动
3．词汇激活
行为类
①寻找：look for/search for
②结束：go to end/come to a stop
③照顾：treat/take care of
情绪类
①哭泣：start crying/burst out crying
②糟糕的：bad/terrible
【典型句式】
[ 句式1]. Some people who were also in the accident started crying, looking for their children, tears beginning to
increase.(运用了who 引导的定语从句以及现在分词作状语和独立主格结构)
[句式2]. They took us to hospital where we were treated. (运用了where 引导的定语从句)
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler booked off a week from his job as a maintenance manager for
the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own, finding a route he would eventually use to
climb Mount Doggie Dowler.
His wife Jenifer didn't like the sound of her husband's latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on adventures by
himself, but this time he'd boat to an unknown bay, bike an unpopulated road , hike through grizzly bear country, and camp
overnights alone. There was too much room for disaster.
The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld
GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausage, and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-
inch stainless steel pocket knife given to him by his dad.
The weather that Sunday, July 28 was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port and quickly launched and
set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight o'clock in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm, and
found a spot to tie the boat near a logging (伐木)camp where he chatted with some logging workers.
One of the workers , Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin took off his bike and backpack
from the truck and started his hiking and route searching. In order not to lose the way back, he marked his trail with blue
ribbons (布条).
As he made his seven-kilometer marker, he came around a bend and suddenly put on the brakes—a dirty grizzly bear
stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin calculated his chances of turning around for a quick
escape, but the bear could easily catch up and stop him before he picked up speed.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150 左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way.
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The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way. Meanwhile, Colin threw the sausages in his backpack towards the
bear, hoping the flavor would attract it. Unfortunately, the bear rushed to him. Colin was pushed to the ground and bit in the
left leg. “Ah!” he screamed with the unbearable pain. Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket.
He stabbed the bear’s neck as fast and strong as possible. The bear roared with pain and ran away. Losing much blood, Colin
lost his consciousness afterwards.
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After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself. He found himself surrounded by the logging workers in the camp.
He was being cared for by a doctor. It was Vito who saved Colin. When he drove back, he spotted the bleeding bear and
sensed that something terrible must have happened. With the blue ribbons leading his way, he finally found Colin. “You are
so lucky, Colin.Without being noticed, you could have been killed for loss of blood. God help those who help themselves.”
said the doctor.
【写作指导】本文以冒险旅行为线索展开，讲述了Colin Dowler 为庆祝生日计划骑自行车穿过无人行走的道路
上，然后徒步穿越灰熊的领地，最后可以攀登Doggie Dowler 山，结果在灰熊领地，路遇灰熊，与灰熊搏斗，受伤，
最终被人发现并获救的故事。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容
那只熊突然站了起来，以一种威胁的姿态。
可知，第一段可描写
“
”
Colin 和灰熊搏斗，
结果负伤。
②由第二段首句内容
似乎过了好几个小时，科林才清醒过来。
可知，第二段可描写
“
”
Colin 苏醒后被照顾的
获救过程。
2．续写线索：搏斗——不幸负伤——幸运——获救
3．词汇激活
行为类
①搏斗：struggle with the bear/fight the bear/ be pushed to the ground
.
②负伤：be injured /be hurt/be bit
.
③获救：be saved/be cared for/ be rescued
情绪类
.
①不幸：unfortunately /unluckily
.
②幸运：so lucky /good fortune
【典型句式】
[句式1]. Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket.(独立主格结构作状语)
[句式2]. Losing much blood, Colin lost his consciousness afterwards.(现在分词作状语)
[句式3]. It was Vito who saved Colin.(强调句运用)
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On my seventh birthday, I got a gift from my father, which was a book titled Guide to Reptiles and Amphibians. It was
my favorite. I kept it under my pillow and read every page over and over every night enjoying the pictures of colorful
animals. Some of the sakes were the most beautiful creatures I had ever seen.
Little did I know that my book would end up saving a life.
Years ago, my family moved into a new house near the woods. My father built a sandbox in our yard. The cat sometimes
used the sandbox for a litter box, so my father had to put a plastic cover over it .When I wanted to build sand castles, I had to
pull the cover off.
One day before dinner, I ran to the sandbox to build 8 miniature city. I pulled off the plastic cover, and there in the
sandbox was a snake. It was lying very sill, all coiled up, and it was beautiful. The snake had rings of color around it. I had
seen a picture just like it in my guidebook, and I remembered that it was one of the prettiest snakes in it. It said in the book
that the poisonous coral snake looked very much like the harmless king snake, the only difference was in the order of the
colors. 1 ran inside to get the guidebook.
“Mom! Mom! There’s a snake in the sandbox!” I yelled. “I have to find out what kind it is!”
Mom came running. “Don’t touch it, Chris! It might be poisonous!”
Dad was at work, so my mother went to get our neighbor, Mr. Cook.
“Mr. Cook!” my mother yelled across the fence, “We have a snake in the sandbox, and it might be poisonous!”
Mr. Cook was retired and lived with his wife in the house on the other side of our back fence. He came running toward
the gale with a shovel and tried to kill the snake.
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2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Wait!” I shouted, waving the guidebook in my hand.
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Para. 1:
“Wait!” I shouted, waving the guidebook in my hand. “Let me have a check!” I yelled at the top of my throat, and then
observed the snake carefully. I really want to keep the little snake alive because I love the little, lovely creature. So cautious I
was that I couldn't think anything else, the only sound rang our in my mind was that. “Save it!” I could even felt my heart
pounding ever wildly in my chest because I was pretty nervous. Ultimately, I made a judgement “It’s not a poisonous but a
harmless snake,” I said with extremely excitement.
Para. 2:
“So what to do now?” Mr. Cook put down the shovel. Without any doubt that we should let it out, but where? It
suddenly dawned on me that king snake prefer warm dry places, which was why the snake in my sand box. “Maybe we can
put it in the weeds there always under the sunshine” “Hmm. ok. We’ll do it.” Mr. Cook replied after thinking a while. Finally,
Mr. Cook and I brought the harmless snake to the woods and made it back to nature. Fully satisfaction I had, this experience
not only gives a chance to see the snake but also let me know the importance of the harmony between people and nature.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一条蛇爬到了作者的沙箱里，作者告诉了妈妈，妈妈去找来了邻
居库克先生，他拿着铲子跑来，试图杀死那条蛇。幸亏作者最后认出了这条蛇没有毒，于是他们把蛇放生了。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容
等等！
我大喊着，手里挥舞着旅行指南。
可知，第一段可描写作者辨认出蛇无毒
“‘
’
”
的经过。
②由第二段首句内容
那现在该怎么办呢？
库克先生放下铲子。
可知，第二段可描写作者和库克先生把
“‘
’
”
蛇放生的经过。
2．续写线索：检查蛇——证实无毒——把蛇带到树林——放生
3．词汇激活
行为类
检查：have a check / examine
叫喊：yell/scream
跳动：pound/beat
情绪类
可爱：lovely /cute
满足：satisfaction /content
【典型句式】
[句式1] I really want to keep the little snake alive because I love the little, lovely creature. (运用了because 引导的原
因状语从句)
[句式2] It suddenly dawned on me that king snake prefer warm dry places, which was why the snake in my sand box.
(运用了why 引导的表语从句和which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There was a huge pond just a few kilometers from where we stayed. Since moving into our new home in the
countryside, my brother, Jim and I used to often sneak out to the pond where we would meet another friend. Mom had
warned us not to get close to the pond, especially after a friend informed her that an alligator(鳄鱼) had been spotted there.
We ignored her advice though.
On this particular afternoon, the three of us had fun in the pond. As evening approached, we finished swimming. Jim
and Syed were unwillingly making their way towards the place where they had left their clothes. I stayed back and was
bathing in the water when I suddenly became aware of ripples(涟漪) forming on the surface of the water. I raised my head
and looked at the ripples. My eyes caught a motion in the water. A log, I thought. Then I saw it—its scary nose and its two
mean eyes. “Jim…” I cried. Then I screamed with all my might.
Jim turned his head in my direction and immediately recognized the danger. “Get out of the water, Jeff. Hurry! It’s just
behind you.”
I waded(瞠水) clumsily(笨拙地) in the water. With great effort, I reached the edge of the pond. I looked over my
shoulder. Moving quickly towards me was a huge alligator. I froze. Then suddenly I felt a great pain in my leg. Meanwhile,
Jim and Syed screamed and started throwing stones at the alligator and managed to distract it. The alligator went for them
now. As it opened its jaws, I could see its sharp teeth. I tried to move but a pain shot through me. I was in a pool of blood.
Jim and Syed were scared.
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1． 续写词数应为150 左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago.
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I was about to give up struggling when I thought of the two hunters who passed by just a moment ago. I shouted to Jim
and Syed, “Run to the hunters quickly. They can help me.” Waking from the dream, Jim rushed away like an arrow. Syed
continued to throw stones at the alligator and I continued to fight against it. Luckily, in a few minutes, Jim and the two
hunters arrived. One of the hunter fired a shot in the air. It had the desired effect. The alligator wound its way away in the
water. Then, I passed out.
When I woke up, I found myself in a totally unfamiliar environment, a hospital. Mom stood over me. Seeing her, tears
flooded down. Later I learned from my mother that I was rushed to the hospital by the kind hunters. My eyes began to water
again. I made an apology to Mom. She ran her fingers on my face and wiped my tears. Mom reminded me of how fortunate I
was to have escaped from the jaws of the alligator. It was a narrow escape.
【写作指导】本文以地点和人物为线索展开，讲述了作者忽视妈妈的警告，和朋友一起在危险的池塘里游泳，
结果被鳄鱼咬伤，然后被送往医院救治的故事。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容
我正要放弃挣扎，这时我想起了刚才经过的两个猎人。
可知，第一段可描写作者寻求
“
”
猎人的帮助，并成功获救。
②由第二段首句内容
当我醒来，我发现自己在一个完全陌生的环境，医院。
可知，第二段可描写作者后悔
“
”
没有听从妈妈的警告，并表示对妈妈的歉意和对猎人的感谢。
2．续写线索：快跑——到达——幸运——晕倒——道歉——感谢
3．词汇激活
行为类
.
①快跑：run quickly/rush
.
②到达：get/arrive
情绪类
.
①幸运：luckily/ fortunately
.
②道歉(后悔的)：make an apology/say sorry to/be regretful
【典型句式】
[句式1]. Later I learned from my mother that I was rushed to the hospital by the kind hunters. (运用了that 引导宾语从
句)
[句式2]. Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was to have escaped from the jaws of the alligator. (运用了how 引导宾
语从句)
5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A holiday in Penang is an annual affair for my family. My parents grew up in Penang and are very fond of Penang food.
In December every year, we would drive up to the island to spend three days visiting their favorite food haunts (常去的地方).
This year, we started our journey up north on a Friday morning. It took us six hours to reach our destination. We always
stayed at one of the hotels in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was just a short walk from the hotel entrance and our rooms had a
lovely view of the sea. We spent our first evening playing on the beach. After dinner, we returned to our rooms to play games.
My parents had a rule for our holidays which was that we were to spend time doing things together. There was to be no TV
and no Internet.
The next morning, we went to Bukit Bendera and then spent the rest of the afternoon in town visiting our favorite
hawker stalls (小贩摊位). As we were having tea at a coffee shop, we overheard people talking about an earthquake near
Sumatera, an island in Indonesia. We headed back to the hotel and then went to the beach. We took a walk along the beach,
picking up seashells along the way. Looking up, I saw the sun shining brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree trembling
in the distance as it reflected the sun’s rays. It never occurred to us that something awful would take place. Suddenly, I
noticed a strange thing. The sea seemed to be leaving from the shore. I called my father to look at the curious occurrence. My
father took one look and went pale. We saw a grey line in the distance moving towards the shore. It seemed to grow taller by
the second.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150 左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.
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My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel. He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the hotel
gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached
the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us to keep climbing. We
stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us. It had stopped rising. After some minutes, it began to
drop.
We waited a long time before going downstairs. Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecognizable
hotel gate. There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere. Some people who were caught in the water were either
unconscious or burst into tears with pain. What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a
narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to Penang was deeply
impressed in my mind.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述了作者一家喜欢去海滩度假，一次在海边散步时，作者发现了
大海的异常，海啸发生了。
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容
我父亲大声叫我们跑回旅馆
可知，第一段可描写父亲看到风雨欲袭的场面后，想方设
“
”
法带领全家人脱险。
②由第二段首句内容
我们等了很长时间才下楼
可知，第二段可描写海水退去后旅馆一片狼藉的景象和我们
“
”
从中的感悟。
2．续写线索：在父亲带领下逃生——海啸退却——旅馆一片狼藉——灾后感悟
3．词汇激活
行为类
①对
大喊：
……
shout at/yell at
②抓住：grab/seize/hold
③下降：drop/fall
情绪类
①害怕，恐惧：fear/ fright
②令人激动的：thrilling/exciting
【典型句式】
[句式1] As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us.(运用了as 引导时间状语从句)
[句式2] Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. (运用了who
引导限制性定语从句)
[句式3] What we saw weakened our heart and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. (运用了what 引导
主语从句)
6.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a fine summer morning, perfect to be outdoors. Two sisters had been out mushroom picking, and were on their
way home with heavy baskets full of mushrooms. They sang songs on the way, and played with each other.
Soon they reached a point where they had to cross a railway track. They did not think twice about crossing it since there
was no train coming, and they could not hear any whistle. They slowly climbed the steep railway embankment, taking care
not to drop the baskets. They were very near the track and the little sister Mary was about to cross it first when a train
whistled in the distance.
Hearing the train coming, Rose the elder sister quickly ran down. She thought that the young one was following her. But
as she turned back, she was shocked to see her little sister still up there crossing the track. “Come back here! Run back fast!”
she shouted.
Mary seemed not to hear the whistle nor her sister’s cry as she was concentrating on stepping over the track with her
little feet, and holding on to the basket. Then she tripped and fell on the track, scattering her mushrooms around.
The engine driver panicked on seeing a girl between the tracks who was on her hands and knees and he blew the horn
with all his strength. Poor Mary, who was frightened by the coming danger, froze and didn’t know what to do. When Rose
saw the scene, she screamed at the top of her voice for Mary’s attention. Mary noticed that her sister was not around and
cried for help.
With the train drawing near, the engine driver grew extremely anxious. As hard as he could, he kept blowing the whistle
and started reducing speed. Yet it was not possible for him to stop the heavy train within such a short distance.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes.
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【答案】Para 1:
Rose wouldn’t watch the tragedy happen before her eyes. She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top
of her voice “Stay off the tracks!” Mary, at the sight of Rose’s coming to her rescue, burst into tears of joy. Though reducing
speed as hard as it could, the train was still approaching fast. Seeing there was little time to drag her sister out of danger, Rose
jumped over without a second thought and covered Mary’s body under hers.
Para 2:
The train rolled over and finally stopped. Frightened and worried, the engine driver quickened his pace to see what
happened to the little girl. To his great relief, the sisters lied between the rails safe and sound. What a narrow escape! He
helped them sit up and comforted them. The two sisters hugged and kissed each other, tears of joy flowing down their cheeks.
Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. They then collected all the remaining mushrooms and, hand in
hand more tightly than before, walked back home.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了两姐妹出去采蘑菇，带着沉重的蘑菇篮子回家，在穿过铁轨的时候小妹妹Mary
在铁轨上摔倒了，姐姐Rose 在危急时刻冲过去护住妹妹，最后火车停了下来，两人死里逃生。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Rose 不愿看到悲剧发生在她眼前。
可知，第一段可描写
”
Rose 是如何帮助妹妹的。
②由第二段首句内容
火车翻倒了，终于停了下来。
可知，第二段可描写火车停下，两姐妹获救。
“
”
2．续写线索：Rose 冲上铁轨——Rose 护住妹妹——火车停下——获救
3．词汇激活
行为类
①靠近：approach/get close
②捡起：collect/pick up
③回家：walk back home/get back home
情绪类
①快乐：joy/happiness
②害怕：frightened/scared
【点睛】
[高分句型1] She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!”(运用了现
在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. (运用了全部倒装)
