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高中英语新教材中的长难句跨版本对比(2)
高中英语新教材中的长难句跨版本对比(2)CARD 12 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：人教选修第四册 (P87) 📏 词数：66 词 ⭐ 难度：4.0 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 Up until just over a year ago, before I was given the great privilege of becoming a volunteer for UNICEF, I used to be overwhelmed by a sense of desperation and helplessness when watching television and reading about the indescribable misery of the developing world's children and their mothers. 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 直到一年多以前，在我获得成为联合国儿童基金会志愿者这一巨大荣幸之前，每当我看电视、读到发展中国家儿童及其母亲难以形容的苦难时，我常常被一种绝望和无助感所压倒。 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ 时间状语前置 (Up until...; before...) ❖ 被动语态 (was given; be overwhelmed) ❖ 动名词短语 (becoming a volunteer; watching; reading) ❖ 时间连词后接分词省略 (when watching... and reading...) ❖ 介词短语嵌套 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：先找主句 I used to be overwhelmed...；理解 when watching... and reading... 是省略主语的分词结构。 🎯 教师教学剖析：情感记叙。重点讲时间状语前置、被动语态和 when + doing 省略结构。 CARD 13 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：译林选修第二册 (P51) 📏 词数：66 词 ⭐ 难度：4.0 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 It was filled with various objects that were intended to show what life was like in America at the time the capsule was created: a toothbrush, a fountain pen, a baseball, a toy car, a small camera, microfilm rolls recording modern literature, contemporary art and news events of the 1930s, a variety of seeds including wheat, and many more. 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 它里面装满了各种物品，旨在展示时间胶囊被创建时美国的生活面貌：一把牙刷、一支钢笔、一个棒球、一辆玩具车、一台小相机、记录现代文学、当代艺术和 20 世纪 30 年代新闻事件的缩微胶卷、包括小麦在内的各种种子，以及更多物品。 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ 被动语态 (was filled with; were intended; was created) ❖ 定语从句 (that were intended to show...) ❖ 宾语从句 (what life was like...) ❖ 时间状语从句 (at the time the capsule was created) ❖ 冒号后同位语列举 ❖ 现在分词后置定语 (recording...; including...) 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：先抓主干 It was filled with various objects；再处理 that 定从和 what 宾从；列举部分只需按类别理解。 🎯 教师教学剖析：说明文。重点讲被动+定从+宾从，以及冒号后长串同位语列举。 CARD 14 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：译林选修第四册 (P62) 📏 词数：66 词 ⭐ 难度：4.5 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 What that boy was looking at was really and truly a tree full of angels; there is no other way of expressing concretely what he saw: and to say that he was looking at the morning sun shining on the early dew covering the leaves of the tree would give a false idea about the vision of the child. 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 那个男孩所看到的，真的是一棵满是天使的树；没有别的办法能具体表达他所看到的东西：如果说他看到的是早晨的阳光照在覆盖树叶的晨露上，那就会对孩子的幻象产生错误的理解。 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ 主语从句 (What that boy was looking at...) ❖ There be 存在句 ❖ 动名词短语 (expressing concretely...) ❖ 宾语从句 (what he saw ) ❖ 不定式作主语 (to say that... would give...) ❖ 宾语从句 (that he was looking at...) ❖ 分词嵌套 (shining on... covering...) 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：先找第一个主干 What... was a tree...；再找 there is no other way...；最后分析 to say that... would give... 中不定式作主语。 🎯 教师教学剖析：文学评论/抽象表达。重点讲主语从句、不定式主语和分词嵌套。 CARD 15 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：北师大选修第三册 (P86) 📏 词数：65 词 ⭐ 难度：4.0 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 For example, in Li Bai's poem, "Seeing Meng Haoran Off at Yellow Crane Tower", the poet describes the sail of his friend's boat disappearing into the could seem merely like the description of a beautiful scene, but by reading into the poem, you can sense the deep sadness and loneliness that his friend's leaving has caused him. 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 例如，在李白的诗《黄鹤楼送孟浩然之广陵》中，诗人描写朋友的船帆消失在……这看起来可能只是对美景的描写，但深入阅读这首诗，你能感受到朋友离去给他带来的深深悲伤和孤独。 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ 介词短语前置 (For example, in Li Bai's poem...) ❖ 现在分词复合结构 (the sail... disappearing...) ❖ 插入/转折 (but) ❖ 介词短语作方式状语 (by reading into the poem) ❖ 定语从句 (that his friend's leaving has caused him) 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：先找主句 the poet describes... 和 you can sense...；注意 disappearing 是分词，不是谓语；that 定从修饰 sadness and loneliness。 🎯 教师教学剖析：古诗英译评论。重点讲 describe... doing 和 by reading... 方式状语，以及 that 定从。 CARD 16 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：北师大选修第四册 (P72) 📏 词数：65 词 ⭐ 难度：4.0 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 They had a house of crystal pillars on the planet Mars by the edge of an empty sea, and every morning you could see Mrs K eating the golden fruits that grew from the crystal walls, or cleaning the house with handfuls of magnetic dust which, taking all dirt with it, blew away on the hot wind. 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 他们在火星上、一片空寂大海的边缘，拥有一座水晶柱房子；每天早晨，你都能看到 K 太太吃着从水晶墙壁上长出的金色果实，或者用一把把磁尘打扫房子，磁尘带走所有灰尘，随热风飘走。 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ 并列复合句 ❖ 感官动词宾补 (see Mrs K eating... or cleaning...) ❖ 定语从句 (that grew from...) ❖ 定语从句 (which... blew away...) ❖ 插入分词 (taking all dirt with it) 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：先找 They had a house... 和 you could see Mrs K eating... or cleaning...；注意 which 指 magnetic dust，taking... 是插入分词。 🎯 教师教学剖析：科幻描写。重点讲 see sb doing、定语从句和插入分词。 CARD 17 | 高中英语长难句 📚 权威出处：译林必修第一册 (P68) 📏 词数：63 词 ⭐ 难度：4.5 / 5.0 【英文原句 · ORIGINAL SENTENCE 】 They also had a father who was just perfect—never cross, never unjust, and always ready for a game—at least, if at any time he was NOT ready, he always had an excellent reason for it, and explained the reason to the children so interestingly and funnily that they felt sure he couldn't help himself. 【参考译文 · TRANSLATION 】 他们还有一位近乎完美的父亲——从不发脾气，从不不公正，总是愿意玩游戏——至少，如果他什么时候没准备好，他总有一个极好的理由，并且把理由讲给孩子们听，讲得那么有趣、那么滑稽，以至于他们确信他是情不自禁。 【句法结构 · SYNTACTIC ANALYSIS 】 ❖ 定语从句 (who was just perfect...) ❖ 破折号插入形容词排比 (never cross, never unjust, always ready...) ❖ 条件状语从句 (if at any time he was NOT ready) ❖ 结果状语从句 (so... that...) ❖ 宾语从句 (he couldn't help himself) 【学习提示 · KEY FOCUS & TIPS 】 💡 学生自学要领：先找主干 They had a father...；定语从句到 perfect 后插入解释；注意 so interestingly and funnily that... 结果结构。 🎯 教师教学剖析：人物描写。重点讲定语从句+破折号插入+so...that结果状语。