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高中英语读后续写高分开头技巧
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仿写句式一 无灵主语开头 (没有生命的名词作主语)
【示例】 久别重逢让这对夫妻很开心。
The reunion after long separation brought great delight to the couple.
[仿写 1]He felt a bit sad inside him.
翻译：他的内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。
改写：A ripple/flush/wave/surge of sadness welled up inside him.
[仿写 2]With tears streaming down her face, she couldn't say a word.
翻译：眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。
改写：Words failed her, with tears streaming down her face.
[仿写 3]Suddenly she felt very excited when she caught sight of a familiar figure.
翻译：突然她看到一个熟悉的身影，内心涌起一阵兴奋。
改写：Suddenly a wave of excitement seized/took hold of/swept over her when she caught sight of a familiar figure.
[仿写 4]I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. I noticed a flash of movement.
翻译：我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。一瞬间的动作引起了我的注意。
改写：I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention.
[仿写 5]When the host announced that I won the first prize, I felt very excited.
翻译：当主持人宣布我获得一等奖时，我激动得心怦怦跳。
改写：When the host announced that I won the first prize, my heart was thumping/pounding with excitement．
仿写句式二 倒装句开头
【示例】 只有这样你才能学好英语。
Only in this way can you learn English well.
[仿写 1]A young man sat by the lake with a book in his hand.
翻译：一位年轻的男士坐在湖边，手里拿着一本书。
改写：By the lake sat a young man with a book in his hand.
[仿写 2]When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags.
翻译：他们一回到家就做了很多爆米花，并将其放在特殊的袋子里。
改写：Hardly had they got home when they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags.
[仿写 3]Their mother never expected her day to start with such a warm gift.
翻译：他们的母亲绝对不会想到她的一天是以这样的暖心礼物开始的。
改写：Under no circumstances did their mother expect her day to start with such a warm gift.
[仿写 4]Jenna was so ashamed that she shed guilty tears with her head drooping.
翻译：詹娜羞愧得低着头流下了愧疚的泪水。
改写：So ashamed was Jenna that she shed guilty tears with her head drooping.
[仿写 5]I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food.
翻译：我永远不会忘记他们被给予食物时看着我的样子。
改写： Never will I forget the way they looked at me when they were given food.
仿写句式三 对话或独白开头
【示例】 “太可怕了，” 这个年轻人用颤抖的声音回答道。
“How terrible it is， ” the young man answered in a trembling voice.
[仿写 1]Rachel called to see who got there first as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
翻译：“让我们看看谁先到那里！” 瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。
改写：“Let's see who gets there first！” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
[仿写 2]The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul shouted at Mac and told him to get into the car.
翻译：汽车突然停在他面前。“上车！” 保罗对马克喊道。
改写：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. “Get into the car，” Paul shouted at Mac.
[仿写 3]Their father told them not to panic and handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly.
翻译：“别慌！” 父亲告诉他们并递给每人一块湿毛巾，帮他们迅速收拾残局。
改写：“Don't panic！” their father told them and handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly.
[仿写 4]The happiest mother in the world kept thanking her twins.
翻译：“谢谢你们，我的宝贝们，” 这位世界上最幸福的妈妈不停地重复着这句话。
改写：“Thank you, my dears，” the happiest mother in the world kept repeating these words.
[仿写 5]They shouted enthusiastically and cheered for him.
翻译：他们都热情地叫喊着，“加油！你能做到！我们为你自豪！”
改写：“Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you！” they shouted enthusiastically.
仿写句式四 介词短语开头
【示例】 孩子们高兴地找到了出路。
In delight, children found their way out.
[仿写 1]They kept their eyes open to read the results surprisingly.
翻译：他们惊讶地睁大眼睛查看结果。
改写：In surprise, they kept their eyes open to read the results.
[仿写 2]The man didn't say a word and picked Jim up off the motorbike.
翻译：那个男人一言不发地把吉姆从摩托车上扶下来。
改写：Without saying a word, the man picked Jim up off the motorbike.
[仿写 3]Soon the kitchen was filled with sweet smell.
翻译：刹那间，厨房里芳香四溢。
改写：In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen.
[仿写 4]We were relieved that they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
翻译：让我们如释重负的是，他们看到我的微笑也礼貌地报之以微笑。
改写：To our relief, they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
[仿写 5]It is with your recognition and guidance that I wrote the article well.
翻译：没有你的认可和指导，我就不会写好这篇文章。
改写：Without your recognition and guidance, I couldn't have written this article well.
仿写句式五 独立主格结构开头
【示例】 她的衬衫被钉子钩住了，她动弹不得。
Her shirt caught on a nail, she could not move.
[仿写 1]As his friends will come tonight, he is busy preparing the dinner.
翻译：他的朋友今晚要来，他正忙着准备晚餐。
改写：His friends to come tonight, he is busy preparing the dinner.
[仿写 2]As there was no bus, we had to walk home.
翻译：由于没有公共汽车，我们只好走回家。
改写：There being no bus, we had to walk home.
[仿写 3]If weather permits, we shall go there on foot.
翻译：如果天气允许，我们将步行去那里。
改写：Weather permitting, we shall go there on foot.
[仿写 4]Soon Bernard returned with an empty basket and some coins were in his hand.
翻译：伯纳德很快带着空篮子回来了，手里拿着一些硬币。
改写：Coins in hand, Bernard soon returned with an empty basket.
[仿写 5]When everything was settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
翻译：一切安排妥当，父亲离开厨房，答应他们会保密。
改写：Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
仿写句式六 形容词开头
【示例】 又累又饿，安妮跪了下来。
Tired and hungry, Anne knelt down.
[仿写 1]Sam was curious to know who she was, so he tiptoed into the room.
翻译：萨姆很好奇她是谁，因此他踮着脚走进了屋子里。
改写：Curious to know who she was, Sam tiptoed into the room.
[仿写 2]Bob was unable to say a word and was frozen because of the horrible scene.
翻译：那可怕的场面让鲍勃一句话也说不出来，他惊呆了。
改写：Unable to say a word, Bob was frozen because of the horrible scene.
[仿写 3]Though she was weak, Jenny struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.
翻译：尽管很虚弱，但珍妮挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
改写：Weak though/as she was, Jenny struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.
[仿写 4]Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. As I was afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
翻译：突然一只小兔子从我的马匹前跳出来。由于担心会伤到这只可爱的小动物，我不由自主地大喊一声让马停下来。
改写：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
[仿写 5]As she was speechless and happy, Mum held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
翻译：妈妈说不出话来，高兴极了，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
改写：Speechless and happy, Mum held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
仿写句式七 副词开头
【示例】 悄悄地，他一句话没说离开了。
Quietly, he left without saying a word.
[仿写 1]Arthur skipped up the street joyfully.
翻译：亚瑟高兴地在街上蹦蹦跳跳地走。
改写：Joyfully, Arthur skipped up the street.
[仿写 2]Soon the forest became very dark.
翻译：黑暗立刻笼罩了整个森林。
改写：Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.
[仿写 3]As long as we work hard, we can certainly overcome the difficulties we face.
翻译：当然，只要我们努力，我们就能克服我们面临的困难。
改写：Certainly, we can overcome the difficulties we face as long as we work hard.
[仿写 4]It is apparent that he is one of these extreme sports nuts.
翻译：很显然他是极限运动的铁杆爱好者。
改写：Apparently, he is one of these extreme sports nuts.
[仿写 5]I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
翻译：我自豪地拿出自己的钱递给爸爸。
改写：Proudly, I took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
仿写句式八 现在分词开头
【示例】 好奇地四处闲逛后，吉姆溜进了厨房。
Wandering around with curiosity, Jim slipped into the kitchen.
[仿写 1]He slowly walked across the grassland, aimed at the lion and shot.
翻译：他慢慢地走过草地，把枪对准了狮子后射击了。
改写：Slowly walking across the grassland, he aimed at the lion and shot.
[仿写 2]But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Though Jane felt disappointed, she had to stay alone for another night.
翻译：但是再也没有直升机飞来，天又黑了。简感到很失望，不得不一个人再待一个晚上。
改写：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night.
[仿写 3]It was daybreak when Jane woke up. As she felt refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
翻译：简醒来的时候天已经亮了。她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪行走，寻找出去的路。
改写：It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
[仿写 4]After looking at the well‑prepared breakfast, the three exchanged an understanding smile.
翻译：看着备好的早餐，三人会意地笑了。
改写：Looking at the well‑prepared breakfast, the three exchanged an understanding smile.
[仿写 5]He held my hands and said, “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.”
翻译：他握着我的手说， “祝贺你！你是一位优秀的作家，要一直写下去！ ”
改写：Holding my hands, he said, “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.”
仿写句式九 过去分词开头
【示例】 这篇文章写得很匆忙，错误百出。
Written in a hurry, the essay was full of many mistakes.
[仿写 1]As he was surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful.
翻译：被孙子孙女们环绕着，这位老人感到很快乐。
改写：Surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful.
[仿写 2]The girl was lost in thought, so she didn't notice the approaching danger.
翻译：那个女孩陷入沉思，因此没有注意到危险正在靠近。
改写：Lost in thought, the girl didn't notice the approaching danger.
[仿写 3]As he was torn by sorrow and compassion, Franklin stood silently, weighing what to say.
翻译：富兰克林默默地站着，悲伤和同情让他心碎，他斟酌着该说些什么。
改写：Torn by sorrow and compassion, Franklin stood silently, weighing what to say.
[仿写 4]Father was shocked by the unexpected scene, and he was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrows frowning.
翻译：被这突如其来的场景震惊，父亲愣在原地，皱着眉头注视着眼前的场景。
改写：Shocked by the unexpected scene, Father was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrows frowning.
[仿写 5]After he was encouraged by my words, David looked at me with shining eyes, with his big toothy smile on his lovely face.
翻译：受我的话语的鼓励，戴维用闪亮的眼睛看着我，可爱的脸上挂着大大的笑容。
改写：Encouraged by my words, David looked at me with shining eyes, with his big toothy smile on his lovely face.
仿写句式十 动词不定式开头 (多作目的状语)
【示例】 为了准时到达那里，我们匆忙从家里出发。
To get there on time, we hurriedly departed from home.
[仿写 1]I turned around and left quietly in order to avoid embarrassment.
翻译：为了避免尴尬，我转身悄悄地离开了。
改写：To avoid embarrassment, I turned around and left quietly.
[仿写 2]The firefighter laid down his life in order to save the child.
翻译：为了救那个孩子，消防员献出了自己的生命。
改写：To save the child, the firefighter laid down his life.
[仿写 3]She slipped into the room and shut the door softly to meet her curiosity.
翻译：为了满足她的好奇心，她溜进了房间并轻轻地关上了门。
改写：To meet her curiosity, she slipped into the room and shut the door softly.
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