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2027中考热门写作话题
写作话题《职业与梦想》
【题型分析】
分析全国中考真题可知此类话题通常考查:①个人梦想或职业介绍;2个人实现梦想的途径、职业精神;③自己对未来的畅想等。
【写作要点】
梦想的重要性(why)
1. Different persons have different goals. I also have my own goal.
2. Life is full of challenges and hopes. That's why everyone longs for the future.
3.The life goal is like a light which guides you in darkness and helps you overcome difficulties.
表述梦想(what)
1. Everyone has his or her dream. So do I. My dream is to be a writer.
2.I dream of being a doctor when I grow up.
3. I want to be a scientist like Qian Xuesen in the future.
4.I want to be a writer because I love writing.
5. The reason why I dream of being a doctor is that I admire Zhong Nanshan very much.
6.I am good at communicating and I like working with children, so I want to be a teacher.
实现梦想的方法(how)
1.I plan to study in an art school and take acting lessons after I finish my high school.
2.I have to get a good education and learn how to teach children so that I can be a good teacher.
3.I will try my best to learn more dancing skills to give wonderful performances. I hope dancing will bring happiness to the people who watch my performances.
4.I would like to study hard and try my best to learn more dancing skills.
5.Because of my love for English, I listen to English songs, watch English movies and read English newspapers aloud for an hour every day. Thus, I have the opportunity to be an excellent English teacher and teach more students how to learn English well and how to get good grades.
6.To make my dream come true, I need to gain much knowledge about teaching. Besides, I am going to spend my spare time volunteering in a village school so that I can get some experience.
7. To achieve my dream, I need to get much knowledge about medicine.
8.To achieve my goal, I will try to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university. Besides, I will do a part-time job during the vacation to practice myself. These are a part of achieving my goal.
9. In order to achieve my dream, from now on, I have to study hard and be strict with myself. I will try not to waste time on useless things. I must learn as much as I can to improve myself. When I meet any difficulty, I won't give it up, and do my best to get it over.
10.First, I must have a strong body, so I will take exercise every day. Second, I will do my best to
study hard at all subjects. Third, I will read more books to enrich my knowledge.
11. It's necessary for us to work harder to realize our dreams.
决心及愿望
1. I believe as long as I work hard, my dream will come true.
2.I believe if I put my heart into it, I can be a famous musician one day.
3.I believe that my dream will come true some day.
4. I've decided to hold on to my dream until it comes true.
5. Though it is difficult to make my dream come true, nothing will prevent me from achieving it.
6.As long as we work hard, we will realize our dreams.
7.All in all, I believe that trying to achieve my goal will make my life meaningful.
俗语谚语
1.Great dreams are the key to everything.
远大的理想是开启万物的钥匙。
2.Where there's a will, there is a way.
有志者,事竟成。
3.If the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.
心中有目标,风雨不折腰。
4.The world always makes way for the dreamers.
这个世界总会给梦想家让路。
【写作指导】
五步写作法——审列扩连查
毕业之际,学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想,从下面两个职业中选择一个你所喜欢的理想职业,写一篇英语短文,向校英文报投稿。
Items (条目) | A teacher | A scientist |
Reasons | lbe good at communicating llove kids | lbe interested in science linvent new products |
How to do that | lget a good education llearn how to teach children | lstudy science hard ldo science research |
提示:
1. What do you want to be when you grow up?
2. Why do you have such a dream?
3. How are you going to do that?
注意事项:
1. 词数100左右。必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
第一步细审题定要点(五审法:审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点)
1)审人称:第一人称
2)审时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
3)审文体:说明文
4)审主题:自己喜欢的职业
定要点 1:介绍理想职业
定要点 2:有此理想的原因
定要点 3:实现理想的做法
第二步分段落列要点
首段Beginning:引出主题:介绍理想职业是什么。
中间段Body:陈述选择这一职业的原因并逐条阐述理由。
结尾Ending:如何实现梦想:具体做法。
第三步扩句子精加工
首段:介绍理想职业是什么
[一般句] I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
[高分句] As for me, I want to be a scientist when I grow up. /I dream of being a scientist when I grow up. (as for me;dream of)
中间段:逐条阐述选择这一职业的理由
【理由一】
[一般句] I have become very interested in science.
[高分句] I have been very interested in science for a long time. (be interested in)
【理由二】
[一般句] I want to invent new products and hope to discover new things.
[高分句] 1.(不定式表目的)
结尾:实现梦想的具体做法
【做法一】
[一般句] I’m going to study science really hard.
[高分句] I’m going to make great efforts to study science well.
【做法二】
[一般句] I will read many books about science.
[高分句] I’ll read as many books about science as possible. /Books about science will be on my reading lists.
【做法三】
[一般句] My dream will come true if I work hard.
[高分句] 2. (I believe, as long as)
第四步连句子成短文
My dream job
We all have dream jobs. As for me, I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
I have been very interested in science for a long time. It’s my dream to invent new products to improve people’s life and to discover the mysteries of the world.
To be a scientist, I need to take action right now. First, I’m going to make great efforts to study science well. Second, I plan to do science research. And most importantly, I’ll read as many books about science as possible. If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate with more experts. I believe that as long as I put my heart into it, I will achieve my dream.
第五步查全文得高分
首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确,要点是否齐全;然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
实战演练
一个国家有梦想,一个民族有梦想,作为时代未来主人的我们,也应该有梦想!请以“My Dream”为题,介绍你自己的梦想和实现梦想的计划并向你校英语校报投稿,内容包括:
1. 我理想的工作;
2. 为什么 (至少3条理由);
3. 怎样做准备 (至少2种方式)。
要求:
1. 短文内容应包括所有要点;
2. 紧扣主题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
3. 词数80左右。
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