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Unit 1 Time to Relax
单元话题（休闲活动）写作必背满分范文15篇
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情
况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1．休闲活动在我们的日常生活中起着重要作用。从过去到现在，我国青少年的休闲活动有很大改
变。请以“Teenagers’ Leisure Life”为题，根据以下要点和提示，用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点：
1）过去青少年的休闲活动种类少，如：看露天电影、玩纸飞机、滚铁环（roll iron rings）……
2）现在的休闲活动多种多样；
3）你有什么感悟或期待。
2.要求：
1）文中不得出现所在学校校名和师生姓名；
2）词数100左右。
Teenagers’ Leisure Life
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【答案】例文：
Teenagers’ Leisure Life
As we all know, leisure activities play an important role in our daily life. But the leisure activities of
teenagers have changed a lot.
In the past, there were few kinds of leisure activities and most of them were carried out outdoors. Teenagers
often flew paper planes, rolled iron rings, and sometimes got together to play hide-and-seek or watch open-air
movies.
Nowadays, with the development of the society, leisure activities are various. Outdoors, teenagers can play
team sports, such as basketball and football, which can help them stay healthy and active. They can also visit
some museums and places of interest with their families to get close to both the nature and the culture. If they
don’t want to go out, they can watch TV, play games, or surf the Internet at home.
In short, teenagers make their life so colorful and wonderful that they are happy every day. I hope they can
make full use of the spare time and make progress day by day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”穿插。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点的描写要真实可信，令人信服。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，明确青少年休闲生活的重要性。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。通过“过去”以及“现在”两个时间点的比较，展现了青少年休闲生活的
变迁。
第三步，书写结语。感叹青少年的精彩生活，并期待他们充分利用自己的空闲时间并且日渐进步。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role 扮演重要角色
②with the development of 随着……的发展
③get close to 亲近
[高分句型]
①Outdoors, teenagers can play team sports, such as basketball and football, which can help them stay healthy and
active.（定语从句）
2．假定你是李华，上周你们学校就同学们的课余休闲方式做了一项调查。请结合以下调查结果和
要点，以“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”为题，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。要点：
1. 活动目的； 2. 调查结果； 3. 你的休闲方式和建议。
备注：dull (not interesting)
要求：1. 80-100词；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy
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【答案】例文
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy
Last week, our school did a survey on how students relax after class. Here are the results. 30% of the
students choose to read books in their free time. 30% of the students prefer doing sports. And 25% of them like to
play computer games. The rest of them like to take trips to somewhere interesting.
As for me, I’d like to do sports and take trips. Doing sports can keep me healthy. And taking trips can open
my eyes.
In my opinion, we should relax in proper ways. And remember that all work and no play makes Jack a dull
boy.
【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍调查内容和结果；
第二步，表明自己的休闲方式；
第三步，陈述自己的观点和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①choose to do 选择做某事
②prefer doing 更喜欢做某事
③take trips to sp 去某地旅行
④in proper ways 按照合适的方式
[高分句型]
①Last week, our school did a survey on how students relax after class. (how引导宾语从句)
②Doing sports can keep me healthy. (动名词作主语)
③And remember that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. (that引导宾语从句)
3．在“双减”政策背景下，同学们的周末不再是在课外班中度过，而是有了更多的空闲时间去参
加课外活动，拉近亲子关系。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇文章介绍你的周末活动及你对周末活动的看
法。
话动 频率 地点及选择的理由 最爱类型
看电 一个月两/三 万达电影院，屏幕最
最喜欢……，因为……
影 次 大……
做运
动
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校及班级名称；
2. 注意书写工整、语句通顺，句意连贯；
3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
提示词：“双减”政策double reduction policy
Thanks to the double reduction policy, I have more free time to do something I like on weekends.
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【答案】例文：
Thanks to the double reduction policy, I have more free time to do something I like on weekends. Doing
exercise is my favorite because it is not only healthy for the body but also for the mind. Both my friend Bob, Anna
and I love running. Therefore we get together at the park three times a week to run along the river. Besides
watching films is a great way to relax and learn something new. My family and I go to the cinema about twice or
three times a month. Usually our first choice is Wanda Cinema because it has the biggest screen. We watch
documentaries most of the time because I think they’re more educational than other kinds.
In my opinion, it’s important and necessary for us students to take part in more after-class activities which
can enrich our life and bring the family closer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍自己在“双减”政策背景下的周末活动及
对周末活动的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引言，导入正文；
第二步，介绍自己在“双减”政策背景下的周末活动；
第三步，谈谈对周末活动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
② love doing sth喜欢做某事
③ take part in参加
[高分句型]
① Besides watching films is a great way to relax and learn something new.（使用非谓语动词）
② Doing exercise is my favorite because as it is not only healthy for the body but also for the mind.（使用because引导的原因状语从句）
4．请根据要求完成短文写作。
每个人都有各自度过周末的方式，或忙碌或休闲，由此产生的感受也不尽相同。请你以“A Special
Weekend”为题，写一篇短文向校刊的英文专栏投稿。
内容包括：
（1）叙述你某个周末的特别经历；
（2）说说你的感受或收获；
（3）对如何度过一个有意义的周末给出两点建议。
参考词汇：有意义的周末 a meaningful weekend
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯, 词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Everyone has his or her special weekend. So do I.
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【答案】例文：
A Special Weekend
Everyone has his or her special weekend. So do I.
Last weekend, my friends and I did some voluntary activities. So we went to Old People’s Home. We
helped old people clean rooms and told them some funny stories. We found it very meaningful to help others.
How happy we were!
How to spend a meaningful weekend? Here is some advice. First, you can develop some hobbies such as
drawing and swimming. They can help you relax. Second, you can do some voluntary activities. You can find
pleasure by helping others.
【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时、一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”叙述某个周末的特别经历和感受，并对如何度
过一个有意义的周末给出两点建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引言，导入正文；
第二步，叙述周末的特别经历和感受；
第三步，对如何度过一个有意义的周末给出两点建议。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
② such as 例如
③ help others 帮助他人
[高分句型]
① How happy we were!（使用感叹句）
② We found it very meaningful to help others.（使用非谓语动词）
5． 周末到了，English Weekly 将发布一篇以“周末休闲好去处”为主题的推文。假如你是本篇推文的
撰稿人，请根据以下内容写一篇文章，向读者推荐适合周末休闲的好场所（包括推荐理由）。
(1) 推荐表格中的第1、2两个场所并说明理由，然后联系实际，推荐你心目中的第3个场所并给出两个
理由；
(2) 文章要分段，卷面要工整，词数控制80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(3) 可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯，符合逻辑；
(4) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Places to recommend (推荐) Reasons (原因)
1. FAYOO Cinema (华耀国际影
最大的屏幕；最舒服的座椅；
城)
2. HEYTEA Shop (喜茶奶茶店) 最便宜的价格；最好的服务；
3.
The weekend is coming soon. Where do you want to go with your family or friends? Today I will
recommend some great places to
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The weekend is coming soon. Where do you want to go with your family or friends? Today I will
recommend some great places to you.
First, you can visit FAYOO Cinema. It has the largest screen and the most comfortable seats, perfect for a
relaxing movie experience. In addition, HEYTEA Shop is a fantastic choice. It offers the cheapest prices and
excellent service. Lastly, you can visit Central Park. It is very suitable for picnics and walks. The scenery is
beautiful, the air is fresh, and it is a great resort. I think you and your family can have a wonderful time.
Enjoy your weekend!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍已给出的两个推荐场所及其理由；
第二步，推荐自己选择的一个场所并给出两个理由；
第三步，书写结语呼应主题。
[亮点词汇]
① in addition此外
② be suitable for适合
③ great resort很棒的度假胜地
[高分句型]
I think you and your family can have a wonderful time.（宾语从句）
进阶拓展训练5篇
6．手机短视频越来越受学生的欢迎。很多学生在空闲时间经常在抖音上看短视频。就此学生们发
表了不同的看法。请根据下面提示，写一篇文章，同时发表自己的观点及针对如何安排空闲时间向大家
提供建议。
一些学生认为：看短视频令人放松，打发时间……
一些学生认为：长时间看短视频对眼睛有害，浪费时间，不利于学习……
你的观点及建议：……提示词：TikTok 抖音； short videos 短视频； a waste of time 浪费时间
要求：
1、必须用上所给的内容提示，可适当发挥；
2、语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，词数不少于80。
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【答案】
范文：
Nowadays, short videos on mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among students. Many
students often watch short videos on TikTok in their free time.
Some students think that watching short videos is relaxing. It helps them pass the time and have fun.
However, other students believe that spending too much time on short videos is harmful. It may hurt their eyes,
waste time, and affect their studies.
In my opinion, watching short videos is OK if we do it for a short time. But we should not spend too much
time on it. I suggest that we should do more meaningful things in our free time. For example, we can read books,
play sports, or help with housework. These activities can make us healthier and happier.
Let’s use our free time wisely!
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：需包含双方观点、个人看法及建议，使用提示词。
【写作步骤】第一步：引入话题，说明短视频在学生中的流行现象；
第二步：分别阐述支持者和反对者的观点，使用提示词；
第三步：提出个人观点和建议，并给出具体例子。
【亮点词汇】①more and more popular 越来越受欢迎的
②in one’s free time 在某人空闲的时候
③help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
④spend time on sth. 花时间在某事上
⑤make sb.+adj. 使某人……⑥in one’s opinion 在某人看来
【高分句型】①Some students think that watching short videos is relaxing. (含有that的宾语从句)
②However, other students believe that spending too much time on short videos is harmful. (含有that的宾语从句；
动名词作从句中的主语)
③In my opinion, watching short videos is OK if we do it for a short time. (动名词作主语；if引导的条件状语从
句)
④Let’s use our free time wisely! (祈使句的肯定形式；let sb. do sth.“让某人做某事”)
7．有的学生喜欢周末待在家里，有的学生喜欢周末和朋友出去。你更喜欢哪一种休闲方式？学校
校刊英文专栏正在开展以“How I enjoy my weekends”为题的征文活动，请你根据写作要求，从以下两种
观点中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。
Stay at home Hang out with friends
have more personal time enjoy different environments
take a good rest have fun with others
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含所选观点的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How I enjoy my weekends
Some students like to stay at home on their weekends while others enjoy hanging out with friends.
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How I enjoy my weekends
Some students like to stay at home on their weekends while others enjoy hanging out with friends. As for
me, I like hanging out with friends better.We have to stay in the classroom from Monday to Friday, so on weekends I like to hang out with my
friends so that we can experience a totally different environment and enjoy ourselves through different activities.
Sometimes we play basketball together or we just go to some places to enjoy the delicious food. We have fun
during the time and feel relaxed.
In a word, I really enjoy hanging out with friends on weekends.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己喜欢的周末休闲方式；
第二步，介绍喜欢这种休闲方式的原因；
第三步，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①a totally different environment一种完全不同的环境
②as for至于
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
We have to stay in the classroom from Monday to Friday, so on weekends I like to hang out with my friends so
that we can experience a totally different environment and enjoy ourselves through different activities. (so that引
导的目的状语从句)
8．随着社会的快速发展和双减政策的落地，青少年的休闲活动也发生了诸多变化。请你以
“Changes in Teenagers’ Leisure Activities” 为题，结合自己或身边同龄人的经历，写一篇100-120词左右
英语短文，描述青少年现在和过去休闲活动的变化，并分享对此变化的感受。提示词语：double reduction
policy 双减政策 carry out 颁布，实施
写作要点：
1. 描述过去常进行的1-2种休闲活动(比如室内活动、传统玩具玩耍等)；
2. 描述现在常进行的1-2种休闲活动(比如电子设备相关活动、新型社交聚会，户外探索类活动等)；
3. 阐述你对休闲活动变化的感受或看法(比如对变化的理解、对过去活动的怀念或对现在活动的态度等)。
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【答案】例文
Changes in Teenagers’ Leisure Activities In the past, teenagers often spent their free time playing board
games with family or reading books at home. These activities were simple but helped us relax and connect with
others face to face.
Now, with the double reduction policy carried out, things have changed. Many of us enjoy online games or
watch short videos. At the same time, some teenagers join outdoor activities like hiking or cycling with friends on
weekends.
I think these changes are meaningful. Although digital activities are fun, I hope we can balance screen time
with real-world experiences. It’s important to enjoy both modern and traditional leisure activities for a healthier
lifestyle.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更
完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先描述过去人们常做的休闲活动；
第二步，接下来举例说明现代社会随着双减政策落地后青少年休闲活动的变化；
第三步，总结上文，阐述自己的观点和看法。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth花时间做某事
②face to face面对面
③at the same time同时
[高分句型]
①I think these changes are meaningful.（省略that宾语从句）
②Although digital activities are fun, I hope we can balance screen time with real-world experiences.（although
引导让步状语从句）
9．每个人都有自己休闲娱乐的方式。有人喜欢运动，有人喜欢阅读，有人喜欢听音乐……这些活动，可以让我们放松身心，还可以让我们充满活力地投入到学习当中。作为一名中学生，你的休闲方式
是什么？根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文谈一下你的看法。
内容要点：
1.你的休闲方式是什么；
2.讲述一次你的经历；
3.谈谈这种方式对你学习、生活的影响。
要求：1.须包括以上所有提示信息，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息；
3.100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
As a middle school student, I have my own way to relax in my free time.
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【答案】
例文
As a middle school student, I have my own way to relax in my free time.
I enjoy reading books because it allows me to escape into different worlds. For example, last month, I read
a science fiction book that was thrilling. I was so absorbed that I finished it in one sitting. This experience not only
entertained me but also broadened my horizons. Reading helps me relax after a long day of study, and it improves
my vocabulary and comprehension skills. As a result, I perform better in my exams and feel more energetic in
daily life.
Reading is my perfect leisure choice. It relaxes me and boosts my studies, making my student life richer.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文写作围绕“阅读作为课余放松方式”展开，涵盖阅读的核心吸引力、具体经历、多重益处，
考生应注意题目要求，适当补充细节，确保不遗漏任何信息。［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。以“中学生的课余放松方式”开篇，直接点明核心主题——自己喜欢通过阅读
放松，引出下文具体经历与益处；
第二步，具体阐述阅读的经历与价值。先讲述具体阅读经历：上月读一本惊险的科幻小说，沉浸到一口
气读完；再分层说明阅读的益处：娱乐身心、开阔视野、缓解学习压力、提升语言能力，进而助力考试、
让日常更有活力；
第三步，书写结语。总结阅读的价值，升华阅读的意义。
［亮点词汇］
①way to relax放松方式
②free time课余时间
③escape into different worlds沉浸到不同世界
④science fiction book科幻小说
⑤thrilling惊险的
⑥be absorbed沉浸其中
⑦in one sitting一口气（读完）
⑧broaden my horizons开阔视野
⑨vocabulary and comprehension skills词汇与理解能力
⑩boost my study助力学习
［高分句型］
①I enjoy reading books because it allows me to escape into different worlds.（because引导原因状语从句）
②For example, last month, I read a science fiction book that was thrilling.（that引导定语从句）
③ I was so absorbed that I finished it in one sitting.（so...that...结果状语从句）
10．陶行知曾说：“思想决定行动，行动养成习惯，习惯形成品质，品质决定命运。”本周你们班
级将组织“良好习惯，伴其一生”主题班会。假如你是Billy，Danny是你的好朋友，他是个品学兼优的
学生，为了号召同学们向他学习，请你根据下列表格提升介绍他的好习惯，并谈谈自己的看法。
休闲活动 每周锻炼三到四次；每天打扫自己的房间；周末经常帮助妈妈做家务……
学习习惯 每天阅读半小时；总是按时完成作业；从不熬夜（stay up late）……
饮食健康 经常吃水果和蔬菜；每天早上喝牛奶；几乎从不吃垃圾食品……
我的看法 好习惯很重要……
要求：1.表格的内容要全部包括，可适当发挥；
2.语句通畅，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.总词数：80-100词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits.
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Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits.
He exercises three or four times a week. He is in good health. His room is very tidy because he cleans it
every day. On the weekend, he often helps his mother with housework. He enjoys reading a lot. He reads books
for half an hour every night. He always finishes his homework on time. And he never stays up. He thinks getting
enough sleep is necessary for students. What’s more, he often eats fruit and vegetables. He drinks milk every
morning. He hardly ever eats junk food. He has a very healthy lifestyle.
I think it’s important for us to develop good habits. They can help us get good grades and live happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围
绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从休闲活动、学习习惯以及饮食健康等方面介绍Danny 的好习惯，并谈谈
自己的看法。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①in good health身体健康
②help sb with sth帮某人做某事③get enough sleep得到充足的睡眠
④stays up熬夜
[高分句型]
①His room is very tidy because he cleans it every day. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think it’s important for us to develop good habits. (宾语从句)
能力综合实践5篇
11．你平时是如何度过课余时光的？参加体育活动、外出旅游、看电视、玩游戏，还是听音乐、读
课外书呢？假如你是李华，请以“My Free Time”为题，根据以下提示要点，用英语写一篇短文谈谈你对
空闲时间的安排。
提示：1.你在空闲时通常做什么？
2.这对你是好还是坏？为什么？
3.你将来将发展什么兴趣爱好？为什么？
要求：1.短文须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3.70词左右；
4.不能抄袭试卷原文。
My Free Time
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例文
My Free Time
In my free time, I usually read books because books are good for my study and I can get more knowledge
from them. Also I like listening to English songs. I think it is helpful for my English learning. And music can
make me relaxed so that I can get good grades. In the future, I want to develop an interest in drawing. I think it is
creative and fun.【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围
绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先介绍自己空闲时间通常做什么，然后介绍自己空闲时间做的事对自己
是好还是坏及原因，最后介绍将来在空闲时间会有什么爱好以及原因。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②be good for对……有好处
③be helpful for对……有帮助
④in the future未来、今后
[高分句型]
①In my free time, I usually read books because books are good for my study and I can get more knowledge from
them. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think it is helpful for my English learning. (宾语从句)
12．请你以“My Winter Holiday”为题，写一篇英语短文，分别从学习、休闲娱乐及家务劳动三个
方面谈一谈你的寒假活动或计划。
注意：1.短文应包括已给的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名，可以适当发挥；
3.词数不少于80。
My Winter Holiday
To have a happy and meaningful winter vacation, I made some good plans for it.
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【答案】例文
My Winter HolidayTo have a happy and meaningful winter vacation, I made some good plans for it.
First, I will keep studying English during the holiday. I will review my lessons and read English books
every day to improve my English. Second, I will do lots of sports to relax myself, such as playing ping-pong and
running. Last but not least, I will help my parents by cleaning the house and cooking meals. I’m sure to feel great
to learn some new skills successfully by doing housework.
I hope I’ll have a colorful, happy and meaningful winter holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：话题作文（以“My Winter Holiday”为题，围绕个人寒假计划展开）
②时态：一般将来时（用will描述计划安排）
③提示：从学习、休闲娱乐及家务劳动三个方面介绍活动，条理清晰，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：用开头句介绍整体计划（已给出）。
第二步：用first, second, last but not least分别描述学习、休闲娱乐和家务劳动三个方面。
第三步：用结尾句总结假期意义，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①review（复习）
②housework（家务）
[高分句型]
①I will review my lessons and read English books every day to improve my English.（运用了will引导的将来
时态表达计划）
②I will help my parents by cleaning the house and cooking meals.（动名词作宾语）
13．如今，数码科技已深度融入青少年生活的方方面面。请以“The positive sides of digital
technology for us teenagers”为题，写一篇短文。内容需阐述数码科技在沟通交流、学习求知及休闲娱乐等
方面为青少年带来的积极影响。(词数不少于60)
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【答案】例文Digital technology has brought many positive changes to our lives. Firstly, it greatly facilitates
communication. We can easily keep in touch with friends and family through social media platforms like WeChat
and QQ, no matter how far apart we are.
Secondly, it is beneficial for our learning. There are abundant online resources such as educational videos
and e-books. We can learn various subjects beyond the classroom.
Moreover, digital technology provides diverse entertainment options. We can watch movies, listen to music,
or play games in our free time, which helps us relax and relieve stress after a busy day of study.
In conclusion, digital technology plays an important role in improving our lives in multiple aspects.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已明确，需围绕沟通交流、学习求知、休闲娱乐三个方面展开，适当添加细节，突出
写作重点；注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，确保上下文逻辑关系紧密，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明数码科技给青少年生活带来的积极变化；
第二步，具体阐述数码科技在沟通交流、学习求知、休闲娱乐方面为青少年带来的积极影响；
第三步，总结数码科技对青少年的重要作用。
[亮点词汇]
① bring positive changes带来积极变化
② facilitate communication促进交流
③ keep in touch with与……保持联系
④ be beneficial for对……有益
⑤ abundant丰富的
⑥ play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色
[高分句型]
① We can easily keep in touch with friends and family through social media platforms like WeChat and QQ, no
matter how far apart we are.（no matter how引导的让步状语从句）
② We can watch movies, listen to music, or play games in our free time, which helps us relax and relieve stress
after a busy day of study.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
14．春去秋来, 四季交替, 你最喜欢什么季节? 请根据以下提示, 以"My favourite season"为题, 用英
语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点：1. 你最喜欢的季节是什么？
2. 它有哪些自然现象？
3. 可以进行哪些体育、休闲活动？
4. 你有哪些感受？
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包含所给的要点, 可适当发挥, 使行文连贯；
2. 语篇完整, 语句通顺, 语法正确, 书写规范；
3. 文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息, 否则一律不予评分。
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My favourite season
There are four seasons in a year. Of all the seasons, I like spring best.
In spring, the weather is getting warmer and warmer. The trees turn green and the flowers start to come out.
We can hear the birds singing happily in the trees. It usually rains lightly and the air is fresh. During this season,
there are many outdoor activities, such as going hiking, flying kites and planting trees. I usually go cycling or
have a picnic with my parents on weekends. I think these activities are colourful and meaningful.
Spring stands for a new beginning and it is full of hope. Let's enjoy this wonderful season together.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。开头介绍我最喜欢春天；接下
来介绍春天的自然现象，可以进行的体育、休闲活动和我的感受；最后鼓励大家一起享受春天。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一或第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，描述春天的天气、
自然现象、可以从事的休闲活动时，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：come out；hear sb doing sth；such as；on weekends；be full of。句型：there be句型；宾语从句；祈使句。
15．“You can either travel or read, but either your body or soul must be on the way.”去旅行，这是身体
在路上，可以拓宽人的眼界；去读书，这是灵魂在路上，让心智成长。
当今时代的中学生们，假期生活丰富多彩，也热爱读书。某英文杂志正在开展“身体和灵魂在路
上”的演讲，谈谈自己去过的地方，自己读过的好书。
1.叙述自己曾经去过的1个旅游景点。
身体在路
上 2.在旅游景点游玩时我们应该注意哪些礼仪（自由发挥 1-2
点）。
1.介绍你读过的最喜欢的书。
灵魂在路
上
2.谈谈这本书对你的影响 (自由发挥2-3句话)。
总结 你的个人观点 (自由发挥1-2句)。
要求：1. 注意人称和时态。
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
3. 不要逐字翻译，词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and
mind must be on the way.
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We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and mind
must be on the way.
In the summer vacation, I went to Suzhou and visited the great Hanshan Temple. When I walked on the
tree-lined path, I took care of the public property carefully in the scenic spot and did not doodle. When people
took photos, I also took the initiative to make places for them. Wherever I went, I kept clean and didn’t throw
rubbish freely. I think although travel is often just for recreation, it’s also educational.
As for me, reading an instructive book is just like talking with a learned person. My favorite book is the
Secret Garden. It gave me a lot of inspiration. Now I learn to care for and think of others. To keep healthy, I often
go outdoors to breathe fresh air. When in trouble, I can also maintain a peaceful state of mind.Travelling can broaden someone’s horizons, and reading can enrich his/her thoughts. Let’s keep our bodies
and souls on the road.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据写作提示，结合自己的经历或经验，谈一谈对“身体和灵
魂在路上”的理解，属于给材料作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时、一般过去时为主，以第三人称为辅来展
开叙述。写作时承接开头，根据要点提示，从旅游和阅读两个方面阐述对“身体和灵魂在路上”的理解，
最后进行总结表明观点。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
