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专题八 短文改错
— 五年高考 —
Proofreading 1(2021全国乙) 学生用书 P122
I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom
whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person.
Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What's most, doing housework can be a form of
mentally relaxation from study. That's our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!
答案
dish
I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the after meals. I
dishes❶
tidying whatever
also water the flowers in the yard and up my own bedroom
tidy❷ whenever/when❸
∧
necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework.
from/by❹
was
Firstly, doing housework helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our
is❺
parents more time to do what they
are
most
❻ like and it improves the family relationship. What's , doing housework can be a
more❼
mentally our hopes
form of relaxation from study. That's view on housework. And this
mental❽ my❾ hope❿
can inspire more thinking on the topic!
Proofreading 2(2021全国甲) 学生用书 P122
Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are:Who will you go in times of trouble?Here are the results. Many
students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they're of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or
teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept very much
to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust mostly.
答案
are
Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions
is❶
∧
:Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they
to❷
friend
will talk to their or classmates because they're of the same age and can
friends❸
understand each other. Some will turn
out
little
❹ to their parents or teachers for help. Only a choose to deal with the problems
few❺
our talk kept
on own. Their answers also show that they dislike to others. They
their❻ talking❼ keep❽
where
very much to themselves. In my opinion, in trouble, we should seek help from
when❾
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mostly
those we trust .
most❿
Proofreading 3(2020课标全国Ⅰ) 学生用书 P122
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how
to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I
poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove. I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.
“Not that way,” my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.
答案
simply frying
Today I tried cooking a dish myself. I like eating tomatoes with eggs,
simple❶ fried❷
and I thought it must
to
preparing
❸ be easy to cook. My mom told me how to it. First I cut the tomatoes into
prepare❹
but
pieces put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly
and❺
chopstick off
with . After that I poured oil into a pan and turned the stove. I waited
chopsticks❻ on❼
unless ∧
patiently the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into
until/till❽ the❾
us
pan together.“Not that way,”my mom tried to stop but failed. She was right. It
me❿
didn't turn out as I had wished.
Proofreading 4(2020课标全国Ⅱ) 学生用书 P122
Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I'm glad to know that you've come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I'm
surely you'll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home
in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours
learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
答案
what
Thank you for your letter, really made me happy. I'm glad to know that you've
which❶
∧ surely
come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I'm you'll have a
to❷ sure❸
start for
good time. Actually, I to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, I
started❹ but/yet❺
have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer
vacations such
. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, that we can practice
vacation❻ so❼
together
on
yours sooner
❽ every day. Best of luck with learning kung fu in China. See you .
your/you❾ soon❿
Proofreading 5(2020课标全国Ⅲ) 学生用书 P122
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific
plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I don't
enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions,
I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.
答案
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concerning families
My mom is really with the health of everyone in our . In
concerned❶ family❷
surely
order to make all of us are in good health,
sure❸
and
the
❹ she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have
a❺
had don’t
bowl of egg soup while I to eat an apple. My dad like the soup and I
have❻ doesn’t❼
∧
don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill.
to❽
he
But insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the
she❾
what
food is provided by Mom with appreciation.
that❿
Proofreading 6(2019课标全国Ⅰ) 学生用书 P123
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school
playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone's
surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to
play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
答案
interesting
I became in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon
interested❶
where ∧
I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly
when❷ a❸
but
football fell just in front of me almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it
and❹
hardly surprising
back to the playground. To everyone's , the ball went into the net. All
hard❺ surprise❻
player say
the football on the playground cheered loudly, that I had a talent for
players❼ saying❽
now
football. From on, I started to play
then❾
my
❿ football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
Proofreading 7(2019课标全国Ⅱ) 学生用书 P123
Since I was a kid, I've considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was
in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or
decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after
seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
答案
job
Since I was a kid,I've considered different I would like to do.First, I wanted to
jobs❶
coolly five
be a fireman, whose uniform looked so . Then, when I was in the grade, I
cool❷ fifth❸
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too
wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher much.When I studied
very/so❹
∧ or They
chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal decided to be a doctor.
in/at❺ and❻ There❼
amazing
were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was at the fact that a sick
amazed❽
person could feel much
mor
e
is
❾ better after seeing a doctor. And the other that I wanted to help people in need.
was❿
Proofreading 8(2019课标全国Ⅲ) 学生用书 P123
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What
I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe, customers will
enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in
many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
答案
opens
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to a cafe.
open❶
required
Though it may appear simple, it a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not
requires❷
ordinarily ∧
just an cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe have a special theme
ordinary❸ to❹
such as
like
yourselves
❺ “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe,customers will enjoy in the historical
themselves❻
what manage
environment is created for them. If I succeed in one,I will open more.
that/which❼ managing❽
city
I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different . Each of my cafes will have a
cities❾
an
different theme and unique style.❋ ❋
a❿
Proofreading 9(2018课标全国Ⅰ) 学生用书 P123
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there,
they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens
of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their
life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
答案
∧
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my
the❶
f ind
grandparents. I a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in
found❷
another here
a small house with dogs, ducks, and animals. Last winter when I went
other❸ there❹
chicken
again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of . They also had a small
chickens❺
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∧
pond
in
which sell
they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by
where❻ selling❼
happily
the fish. I felt that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my
happy❽
father that I planned to return
for
but
❾ every two years, he agreed.
and❿
Proofreading 10(2018课标全国Ⅱ) 学生用书 P123
When I was little, Friday's night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved
to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games
would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn't realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The
games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
答案
Friday’s
When I was little, night was our family game night. After supper, we
Friday❶
sort the
would play card games of all in the sitting room. As kid, I loved to watch
sorts❷ a❸
watching
cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to them, my parents would
watch❹
not
to
us
❺ let me. They would say to that playing card games would help my brain. Still I
me❻
∧ for
unwilling to play the games them sometimes. I didn't realize how right my
was❼ with❽
are where
parents until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me I was
were❾ when❿
a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
Proofreading 11(2018课标全国Ⅲ) 学生用书 P124
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph
aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I
was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said,“The classroom is a place for learning
and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”Immediate, I raised my hand.
答案
begin
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just . Everyone was silent,
begun❶
wait and
to see who would be called upon to read his her paragraph aloud. Some of
waiting❷ or❸
∧
us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and
to❹
myself
anxious. I had done homework, but I was shy. I was afraid
my/the❺
that
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larger
❻ to speak in front of a group of people. At that moment, I remembered that
large❼
include
my father once said,“The classroom is a place for learning and that learning
includes❽
mistake Immediate
from textbooks, and as well.” , I raised my hand.
mistakes❾ Immediately❿
Proofreading 12(2017课标全国Ⅰ) 学生用书 P124
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I
thought I had learned the instructor's orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept
repeating the word,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turning left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes
late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
答案
eighteen
In the summer holiday following my birthday, I took driving lessons. I still
eighteenth❶
∧
remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had
the/my❷
so
learned the instructor's orders, once I started the car, my mind goes¿went❹
but/yet❸
word
blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the
words❺
Turning
,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“ left!”I was so
Turn❻
muc
h
late
❼ nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes , the
later❽
suddenly
instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a stop just
sudden❾
on
in the middle the road.❋ ❋
of❿
Proofreading 13(2017课标全国Ⅱ) 学生用书 P124
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their
spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables
together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will
invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!
答案
all
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang /
both
all
a
❶ work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about
an/one❷
interesting
hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are in
interested❸
that
planting vegetables in their garden, is on the rooftop of their house. They often get
which❹
earlier
up and water the vegetables together. They have also bought
early❺
for
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Beside inf ormations
❻ some gardening tools. , they often get some useful from the
Besides❼ information❽
came ∧
Internet. When summer , they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!
comes❾ to❿
Proofreading 14(2017课标全国Ⅲ) 学生用书 P124
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About
one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture
are the things they were very important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes,
playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
答案
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize
of
had and
❶ how fast time flies. I grown not only physically, also mentally in the past
have❷ but❸
took
few years. About one month after this photo was , I entered my second year of high
taken❹
become ∧
school and a new member of the school music club. Around me in
became❺ the/this❻
they
picture are the things were very important in my life at that time:car magazines
that/which❼
difference
and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying kinds of cars and planes, playing
different❽
late
pop music, and collecting the music albums. This picture often brings back to me
latest❾
your
many happy memories of high school days.
my❿
C组 教师专用题组
Proofreading 1(2016课标全国Ⅰ)
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but
the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times.
Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is
honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for
cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.
Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
答案
that
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to ① I live. Though not very
where
big, ②
but
the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal
had
times. Some people even ③ to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his
have
honest or
success is ④ . Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables ⑤ high quality
honesty and
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using
oil are ⑥ for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams ⑦∧of becoming rich
used
the our
in ⑧ short period of time. Instead, he hopes that ⑨ business will grow ⑩
a his
steady
.
steadily
解析
①考查宾语从句。where引导宾语从句且在从句中作状语。
②考查连词。though和but不能连用。though引导的让步状语从句是一个省略句,不能再省
略,故只能去掉but。
③考查动词的时态。文章通篇叙述的是客观事实,采用的是一般现在时,且句子的主语some
people为复数,故需将had改为have。
④考查名词作表语。宾语从句中的主语为名词短语the key to his success,故从逻辑上看应
该用名词作表语,来解释名词短语的含义,即“什么是什么”结构。
⑤考查并列连词。此处表示并列关系,故用并列连词and。
⑥考查动词的被动语态。主语fresh vegetables and high quality oil和use之间为被动关系,
故需用被动语态。
⑦考查介词。从dreams后的动名词becoming可知此处应加一个介词of。dream of梦想。
⑧考查冠词。in a short period of time“在短时间内”。
⑨考查形容词性物主代词。由句子的主语he可知,他希望他的(his)生意稳步增长。
⑩考查副词。此处用副词作状语修饰动词grow。steadily意为“(发展、增长等)稳步地,持续
地”。
Proofreading 2(2016课标全国Ⅱ)
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do
during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at
home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will
learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain
knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of
interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still
learn a lot.
答案
how
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about ① to
what
chose take
do during the holiday. We can ② between staying at home and ③ a trip.
choose taking
but
If we stay at home, it is comfortable ④ there is no need to spend money. But in
and
that case, we will learn little about ⑤∧the world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can
your knowledges
broaden ⑥ view and gain ⑦ we cannot get from books. Some
our knowledge
can
classmates suggest we ⑧ /
should
can
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thought
go to places of interest nearby. I ⑨ that it is a good idea. It does not
think
many
cost ⑩ , yet we can still learn a lot.
much
解析
①考查“特殊疑问词+不定式”。do后边缺少宾语,故用what。
②情态动词后应该用动词原形。
③和staying并列,故用taking。
④根据句意“如果我们待在家里,舒服而且没有必要花钱”可知前后不是转折关系。
⑤world前需要加定冠词 the。
⑥此处为“我们能开阔我们的视野”,故把your 改为our。
⑦knowledge 是不可数名词。
⑧本题考查虚拟语气。suggest“建议”后的从句的谓语动词应用“should+动词原形”,
should可以省略。
⑨本句表示的是作者现在的看法而不是过去的看法。
⑩此处表示“不需要花费很多钱”,故用much。
Proofreading 3(2016课标全国Ⅲ)
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also
the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could
make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always
tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't
understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent
by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my
own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
答案
year
The teenage ① from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were
years
worse
also the best and ② years in my life. At ③
worst
the
yourself
first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by ④ .
myself
such tell
However, my parents didn't seem to think ⑤ . They always ⑥ me what to do
so told
and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped
freely wear
I could be ⑦ from them. I showed them I was independent by ⑧
free wearing
to
strange clothes. Now I am leaving home ⑨ college. At last, I will be on my own,
for
but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever ⑩∧I need help.
解析
①考查名词。由from 13 to 19可知year应改为years。
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②考查形容词最高级。由并列连词and前的the best可知此处应用形容词的最高级形式。
③考查固定结构。at first“起初”为固定结构。
④考查反身代词。表示“我自己”用反身代词myself。
⑤考查副词。so在此处替代前边出现的“I knew everything and could make decisions by
myself”。
⑥考查动词的时态。前后文语境告诉我们应使用一般过去时,故需用该动词的过去式told。
⑦考查形容词。be free from“从……释放/解脱”为固定短语。
⑧考查动名词。by为介词,其后要接动名词。
⑨考查固定结构。leave...for...“离开……去……”为固定结构。
⑩考查代词。whenever引导的时间状语从句缺主语,由句意可知答案。
Proofreading 4(2016浙江)
When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember
well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door.
He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother
would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and
hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the
fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was
so cool for putting us there.
答案
children
When I was a very young ① , my father created a regular practice I
child
late
remember well years ② . Every time he arrived home at ③∧theend of the day, we'd
later
her was knowing
greet ④ at the door. He would ask who we ⑤ and pretend not to ⑥
him were know
us. Then he and my mother would have ⑦
had
a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.
chat in
While they ⑧ , my father would lift my sister and me up to sit ⑨ the top of
chatted on
excited
the fridge. It was both ⑩ and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought
exciting
he was so cool for putting us there.
解析
①考查名词单复数。句中主语是I,为单数,故应用child。
②考查副词。late adj.迟到的,晚的;later adv.后来,以后。
③考查冠词。at the end of...是固定短语,意为“在……结束的时候”,故at后应加上冠词
the。
④考查代词。此处指的是“我的父亲”,故应用him。
⑤考查主谓一致。主语是we,为复数, 故应该是were。
⑥考查非谓语动词。pretend not to do sth.假装不做某事,所以应该用动词原形。
⑦考查时态。根据上文Every time和句中would 可知父母经常这么做,would 后加上动词原
形,表示过去经常做某事。
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⑧考查时态。此句是时间状语从句,讲述的是父母过去的事情,故应用一般过去时,chat 应改
为它的过去式chatted。
⑨考查介词。on the top of...为固定短语,意为“在……顶部,在……上面”,此处指在冰箱的顶
部。
⑩考查形容词。此句主语是it,指孩子们被父亲放在冰箱顶部这件事是令人兴奋的,exciting
常修饰事物,故用exciting。excited 常用来修饰人。
Proofreading 5(2016四川)
It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great
mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the
morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I
found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I
cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to
her, “Happy Mother's Day!” Mom was grateful and moving.
答案
It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.
so houseworks
Mom has a full-time job, ① she has to do most of the ② . She is
but housework
or get
a great mother. Both Dad ③ I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We ④
and got
up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went ⑤
on
her
shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in ⑥ hand. I asked
his
Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in ⑦∧the kitchen. The dishes ⑧
what
/
that/which
what
favoritest
I cooked were Mom's ⑨ . At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother's
favorite
moving
Day!” Mom was grateful and ⑩ .
moved
解析
①考查并列连词。两个分句之间为转折关系,并非因果关系,故用but。句意:妈妈有一份全职
工作,但是她还得承担大部分家务活儿。
②考查名词。housework家务,为不可数名词。
③考查并列连词。both...and...为固定搭配,意为“……和……都……”。
④考查动词时态。根据上下文以及in the morning可知本句是在叙述过去的事情,故用一般
过去时。
⑤考查固定搭配。句意:爸爸打扫完房子,然后就去购物了。go shopping去购物。
⑥考查物主代词。根据句中的he可知此处为his。
⑦考查冠词。此处特指家里的厨房,故在kitchen前加定冠词the。
⑧考查定语从句。先行词为 the dishes,且定语从句中 cooked后缺少宾语,故用关系代词
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that/which引导定语从句,因其在从句中作宾语,故也可以省略关系代词。
⑨考查名词。favorite最喜欢的事物。
⑩考查形容词。此处作表语,主语为Mom,故用moved(感动的)。moving感人的;动人的。
Proofreading 6(2015课标全国Ⅰ)
When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I
am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the
mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment
has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already
become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much
rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to
do so,we'll live to regret it.
答案
think
When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I ① I would be happy
thought
there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in ②∧the countryside.There the air
or on
is clean ③ the mountains are green.Unfortunately,④ the development of
and with
industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have⑤
been
seriously airs
shown that global warming has already become a very ⑥ problem.The ⑦
serious air
Much
we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. ⑧ rare animals are dying out.We must
Many
found your
⑨ ways to protect ⑩ environment.If we fail to do so,we'll live to regret
f ind our/the
it.
解析
①考查动词的时态。由was、hoped和would be可知,此处叙述的是过去的事情,故用一般过
去时。
②考查冠词。in the countryside“在农村/乡下”为固定表达。
③考查并列连词。由本句句意可知,此处表示并列关系,故须用并列连词and。
④考查介词。表示“随着……”用介词with。
⑤考查动词的语态。主语studies和动词show之间为主动关系,故须用主动语态。
⑥考查形容词。修饰名词须用形容词。
⑦考查名词的数。air为物质名词,是不可数名词。
⑧考查代词。many修饰可数名词复数,much修饰不可数名词。此处修饰复数名词animals,
故用many。
⑨考查情态动词。情态动词后的动词须用原形。
⑩考查代词或冠词。此处为形容词性物主代词作定语,句子的主语为we,故须用our与之相呼
应。也可用定冠词the来限定。
Proofreading 7(2015课标全国Ⅱ)
One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very
crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly
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walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found
where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him
crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw parents.Mom
said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her
that this would never happen again.
答案
parent
One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his ① .It was very
parents
on
crowded.Tony saw a toy ② a shop window.He liked it so ③
in
very
looks
much that he quickly walked into the shop.After ④ at the toy for some
looking
where
time,he turned around and found ⑤ /
that
whe
re
begun
his parents were missing.Tony was scared and ⑥ to cry.A woman saw him
began
telling a
crying and⑦ him to wait outside ⑧ shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw ⑨∧his
told the
terrible
parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again!Dad and I were ⑩ worried.”
terribly
Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
解析
①由第五句和第八句可知Tony是和“parents”一起去了购物中心,故parent改为parents。
②Tony是“在商店橱窗(shop window)里”看到了玩具,故用in。
③此句为so...that...句型,so用来修饰much,very为多余词,故去掉。
④此句中After为介词,其后应用动名词作宾语,故looks改为looking。
⑤考查宾语从句。此处宾语从句中不缺成分且意思完整,故用that引导(that也可以省略)。
⑥考查时态。and连接两个并列谓语,时态应一致。begin的过去式应为began。
⑦此处and连接的是两个并列的谓语动词,前文用的是saw,故telling改为told。
⑧考查冠词。此处提到的shop与上文提到的是同一个,故用定冠词the。
⑨此处提到的父母是主人公Tony的父母,故加上代词his。
⑩形容词worried应用副词修饰,故terrible改为terribly。
Proofreading 8(2015四川)
Hi,Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you
some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time,I made three new friend here.We hang out together during
lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been
three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-
wasting activity!In fact,I don't like to go anymore,so I'm afraid I'll lose their
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friendship.How do you think I should do?If you are me,would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
答案
Hi,Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want ①∧to share
with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
tell friend
As I ② you last time,I made three new ③ here.We hang out together
told friends
sing
during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time ④ in karaoke
singing
many
bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me ⑤ .And I started to see
much
so
this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I don't like to go anymore,⑥ I'm afraid I'll lose
but
How are
their friendship.⑦ do you think I should do?If you ⑧ me,would you talk to
What were
him
⑨ ?
them
Please help ⑩
with
me and give me some advice.
Grace
解析
①want to do为固定搭配,故在want后加to。
②根据时间状语last time可知,本句时态应为一般过去时,故将tell改为told。
③句中three表示复数概念,后面的名词应为复数形式,故将friend改为friends。
④spend some time (in) doing sth.为固定搭配,故将sing改为singing。
⑤much在此处为代词,表示花的钱,故将many改为much。
⑥根据“我不想再去了”和“我害怕失去他们的友谊”可知,此处应为转折关系,故将so改
为but。
⑦在此句中,特殊疑问词充当第二个do的宾语,故将How改为What。
⑧条件从句与现在事实相反,谓语动词使用虚拟语气,故将are改为were。
⑨根据上文可知,这里指作者的三个新朋友,此处代词指代错误,故将him改为them。
⑩help为及物动词,与me构成动宾结构,因此,with在此处多余,故去掉with。
Proofreading 9(2015浙江)
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made
from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand
side of the class,I could easy see the football field.In the mornings,it was full of students
exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school
there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance,I could not
enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was
always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom
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with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in
that classroom,I will never forget it.
答案
side
My old classroom was interesting because three ① of the classroom were made
sides
from sit
② glass.I enjoyed ③ close to the windows and looking at the view.On the
of sitting
easy
left-hand side of the class,I could ④ see the football field.In the mornings,it was
easily
is
full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom ⑤ also
was
them
splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around ⑥
it
.Farther in the distance,I could ⑦
not
enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I
was always interested to see the drivers in ⑧∧a hurry in the morning.The position of the
felt If
classroom with its view made me ⑨ like I was dreaming.⑩ I
feel Although/Though
was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.
解析
①side是可数名词,前面有three修饰,side要改为sides。
②be made from由……制成,看不出原材料;be made of由……制成/组成,看得出原材料,所以
from要改为of。
③enjoy 后加动名词形式,所以sit要改为sitting。
④修饰动词see应用副词,所以easy改为easily。
⑤时态误用。全文用的都是过去时,所以要把is改为was。
⑥代词误用。这里指代的是park,所以要把them改为it。
⑦根据上下文可知这里表肯定,所以把not删掉。
⑧固定短语 in a hurry仓促;匆忙。
⑨make sb.do sth.使某人做某事,所以felt要改为feel。
⑩句意:虽然我在那个教室学习时还是个孩子,但是我永远都忘不了它。根据句意可知要把If
改为Although或Though。
Proofreading 10(2014课标全国Ⅰ)
Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some
cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been
allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing
somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often
share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same
place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are
growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
答案
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before by
Nearly five years ① ,and with the help ② our father,my sister and I
ago of
planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these ③
year had
—we④ been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As ⑤∧a
years have
somewhere
result,the plants are growing ⑥ .The fruits are small in size,but juicy and ⑦
everywhere
taste much
.There are so ⑧ that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we
tasty many
allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,⑨
but
but
/ we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing ⑩
yet
wonderfully
tomatoes at no cost!
wonderful
解析
①此处讲述的是过去发生的事情,和一般过去时连用的应是ago,before常和完成时连用。
②with the help of...在……的帮助下,为固定短语。
③句中year是可数名词,前面的these应修饰复数形式的名词。
④时间状语since then 通常和现在完成时连用,而不是过去完成时。
⑤as a result 结果,为固定短语。
⑥根据句意可知此处表示“圣女果到处生长”,所以用everywhere。
⑦本句中small,juicy和tasty是并列的表语,所以要用形容词。
⑧根据前面的be动词are和后面的them可知应是代替可数名词复数的many。
⑨引导让步状语从句的although不能和连词but连用,但是可以和副词yet连用。所以可以删
掉but,也可以把but改为yet。
⑩修饰名词时应用形容词。
Proofreading 11(2014课标全国Ⅱ)
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in
the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework.
Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading
for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees
around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake
listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers
but also our friends.
答案
They
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m.and ends at 3:30 p.m.① are three lessons
There
didn’t many
in the morning and two in the afternoon.We ② need to do so ③
don’t much
with
homework.Therefore,we have more time ④ after-school activities.For example,we can
for
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do reading for one and a half ⑤ and play sports for one hour every day.
hours
look
My dream school ⑥ like a big garden.There are all kinds of ⑦
looks
the
flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a
sat
rest,or ⑧ by the lake listening ⑨∧to music.The teachers here are kind and⑩
sit
helpfully
.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
helpful
解析
①表示“上午有三节课,下午有两节课”应使用there be句型。
②全文时态是以一般现在时为主,故应将didn't改为don't。
③homework是不可数名词,故应用much修饰。
④表示时间、金钱、空间等足够/足以(用于……)时,应使用介词for。
⑤“一个半小时”要说one and a half hours。
⑥主语My dream school(我梦想中的学校)是单数,谓语动词也应使用第三人称单数形式。
⑦all kinds of(各种各样的)后直接加可数名词复数或不可数名词,不用再加冠词。
⑧We can lie...,or (can) sit...
⑨listen是不及物动词,接宾语时要加介词to。
⑩and连接两个形容词作表语,故应将副词helpfully改为形容词helpful。
Proofreading 12(2014浙江)
I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was
noise and filled with people.
Before long,a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he
couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began
searching the ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his
owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner
before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern
to others on need,the world would be a better place to live in.
答案
I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I ①
had
noise
noticed that the carriage was ② and filled with people.
noisy
comes
Before long,a train inspector ③ to check our tickets.A passenger realized he
came
but
couldn't find his ticket ④ became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began
and
searching ⑤∧forthe ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from ⑥
his a
owner.The person who found ⑦ ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
its/the the
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No one in the carriage had ⑧ spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner
previously
strangers
before.Yet they had so quickly offered the ⑨ their help.If we could show
stranger
on
concern to others⑩ need,the world would be a better place to live in.
in
解析
①此处指过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。
②此处作表语,应该是形容词。
③此处是过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。
④此处是顺承关系。
⑤搜寻某个东西应该用search for。
⑥此处指票的主人。
⑦此处特指在找的那张票。
⑧此处应该用副词形式。
⑨此处指的是票的主人,只有一个人,所以用单数。
⑩此处是固定词组in need。
Proofreading 13(2014辽宁)
Dear Jeremy and Alice,
Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors,we're hoping to settle
something that bothers to us.In a word,your dog—Cleo.
We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking.It is difficult to
understanding why she barks every minute she's outside.The early morning barking have
been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside,Cleo tends to bark a
average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock.That is
too much for us,considering how closely the houses are.
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill,but we hope that you can figure a good
way of settling the matter.
Sincerely,
Jack and Rose
答案
Dear Jeremy and Alice,
Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors,we're hoping to settle
something that bothers ①
to
us.In a word,your dog—Cleo.
time
We've called several ② about Cleo's early morning barking.It is difficult to ③
times
understanding
why she barks every minute she's outside.The early morning barking ④
understand
have Beside
been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.⑤ ,Cleo
has Besides
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tends to bark ⑥ average of six hours a day.This morning she ⑦ barking even
an started
closely
before 5 o'clock.That is too much for us,considering how ⑧ the houses are.
close
our
We appreciate ⑨ apologies and goodwill,but we hope that you can figure
your
⑩∧outa good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely,
Jack and Rose
解析
①bother sb.打扰某人。
②考查名词复数。several times好几次。
③根据it's difficult to do sth.句型可知。
④考查主谓一致。the early morning barking为单数,所以谓语动词也应为单数形式。
⑤此处应为副词besides(此外)而不是介词beside(在……旁边)。
⑥考查冠词。average为以元音音素开头的单词,所以应用冠词an。
⑦考查时态。因为是今天早晨发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。
⑧考查形容词。形容词close作表语。
⑨考查物主代词。
⑩根据动词短语figure out(想出)可知答案。
Proofreading 14(2014四川)
Hello,boys and girls!Today,I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire
alarm go off.If you hear the alarm,stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead
you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Don't panic or get out of line,and
trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.If it's
a false alarm and there is no fire,your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you
notice that when someone is missing and hurt,tell your teacher immediately.
答案
with
Hello,boys and girls! Today,I am going to talk ① what you should do when a
about
go
fire alarm ② off.If you hear the alarm,stand in line at the door and wait ③∧for
goes
classmate
your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and④ .Don't panic
classmates
tr ying calmly
or get out of line,and ⑤ to remain quiet and ⑥ .Soon the firefighters will
tr y calm
a
come and put out ⑦ fire.If it's a false alarm and there is no fire,your teacher will
the
us
lead ⑧ back to the classroom.If you notice that ⑨
you
whe
n
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and
someone is missing ⑩ hurt,tell your teacher immediately.
or
解析
①talk with sb.和某人交谈;talk about sth.谈论某事。
②主语是a fire alarm,谓语动词要用单数形式。
③wait for sb.to do sth.等待某人做某事。
④classmate是可数名词,根据语境可知不止有一个同学,所以要用复数形式。
⑤and连接的是并列的两个祈使句,前面是表示否定的祈使句,后面应是肯定的祈使句,所以要
用动词原形。
⑥此处作系动词remain的表语,所以应用形容词,和quiet并列。
⑦此处应该是特指上文提到的火灾。
⑧人称代词错误。前文用的是人称代词you,所以此处也应该是you。
⑨引导词使用重复,that已经引导宾语从句,所以when多余,而且不符合语境。
⑩此处应该是选择关系而不是顺承关系。
Proofreading 15(2013课标Ⅰ)
I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing
old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me
now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard
that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself
apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared
my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he
was the gentlest man I have never known.
答案
holding
I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to ① me on her knees and
hold
passes
sing old songs.I was only four when she ② away.She is just a distant memory
passed
much
for me now. I remember my grandfather very ③ .He was tall,with broad ④
well/clearly
shoulder toward
and a beard that turned from black ⑤ gray over the years.He had a
shoulders to/into
himself
deep voice,which set ⑥ apart from others in our small town,⑦∧and he was
him
strong and powerful.In ⑧
a
during
fact,he even scared my classmates away ⑨ they came over to play or do
when
never
homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have ⑩ known.
ever
解析
①此处用used to表示“过去常常”,后面接动词原形。
②根据句中的I was only four可知,此处讲的是过去的事情,故用一般过去时。
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③根据下文的描述可知,作者对自己的祖父记忆犹新。所以把much改为well/clearly。
④shoulder是可数名词,人有双肩,所以用复数形式。
⑤turn from A to/into B表示“由一种状态转为另一种状态”。
⑥此处指深沉的声音使他和其他人不同。
⑦he was strong and powerful和He had a deep voice是并列关系。
⑧in fact是固定短语,表示“事实上”。
⑨during是介词,不能引导状语从句,when是连词,可以引导状语从句,从句中的动词既可以是
短暂性动词也可以是延续性动词。此处需要表示时间的连词,所以用when。
⑩此处表示他是我曾经认识的最温和的人。由此可知用ever。
Proofreading 16(2013课标Ⅱ)
The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started
in the early 1800's.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and
dinner,that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night.This custom soon becomes another
meal of day.Interesting,it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器)industry.Tea in
China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in
Britain,there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made
for the grow in the porcelain industry.
答案
The book I'm reading ①
of
talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800's.②
Have that
tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,③
Having which
becomes
might not be served until 8 o'clock at night.This custom soon ④ another meal
became
Interesting by
of⑤ ∧the day.⑥ ,it had a connection ⑦ the British porcelain(瓷器)
Interestingly with/to
drank
industry.Tea in China was traditionally ⑧ from cups without handles.When tea got
drunk
cup
popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good ⑨ with handles to suit British
cups
grow
habits.This made for the ⑩ in the porcelain industry.
growth
解析
①read是一个及物动词,后面可直接接宾语,不需要加介词。I'm reading是定语从句,修饰先行
词the book。
②此处应该用动名词短语充当句子的主语,动词原形不能作主语。
③that不能引导非限制性定语从句。
④此处叙述的是过去的事情,时态用一般过去时。
⑤句意:这一习俗很快成为了一天中的另一顿饭。
⑥此处修饰后面整个句子,故应该用副词形式。
⑦此处为固定搭配have a connection with/to与……有关。
⑧此处表被动,应该用drink的过去分词drunk。
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⑨cup是可数名词,与第六句中的cups without handles一样要用其复数形式。
⑩由该词前的定冠词the可知此处需用其名词形式growth。
Proofreading 17(2013浙江)
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you
want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was
lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my
school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to
share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully
tiring,but I know I'll never fall sleep.
Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and
my only friend.
Yours,
Rosemary
答案
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles ①
far
move
away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we ② last week?Dad
moved
other
lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find ③ one.”His new
another
classmate or
job meant I had to say goodbye to my ④ ,my school ⑤ just everything
classmates and
bad
else I love in the world.To make matters ⑥ ,now I have to share a room with my
worse
tiring
younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is ⑦∧the/my first day of school.I am awfully ⑧
tired
sleep
,but I know I'll never fall ⑨ .
asleep
is
Good night and remember,you,dear diary,⑩ my only souvenir from my past life
are
and my only friend.
Yours,
Rosemary
解析
①表示距离时,如果前面已经有具体的数词,就不用副词far。
②有时间状语last week,故该句陈述的是过去的事情。
③此处指另一份工作。
④此处指我的同学们,应该是复数形式。
⑤此处my classmates,my school和everything else I love in the world是并列关系,而非选
择关系,故用and。
⑥此处意思是“更糟糕的是”,所用的固定表达应该是to make matters worse。
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⑦此处需要加上限定词,特指上学的第一天。
⑧此处指人很累,应该使用tired。
⑨fall asleep入睡。
⑩此处主语是you,故用are。
Proofreading 18(2013辽宁)
Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time with his
work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard
work have made him very ill.“ He has ruined his healthy.We are worried about
him.”That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was
eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step
into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picture we had taken
together.I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
答案
with
Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time① his
on
work.With little sleep and hardly any break,②
so
have
he works from morning till night.Hard work ③ made him very ill.“He has
has
health y which
ruined his ④ .We are worried about him.” That is ⑤ other teachers
health what
say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid ⑥∧a visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside
her step
⑦ room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I ⑧ into the room.I
his stepped
picture
saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the ⑨ we had taken together.I
pictures
many
understood that he missed us just as ⑩ as we missed him.
much
解析
①spend...on sth.(在某事上花费……)是固定搭配。
②本句是一个简单句,with little sleep and hardly any break作状语,所以要去掉并列连词
so。
③句子的主语hard work是第三人称单数形式,所以have要改为has。
④此处该用名词health(健康)。healthy是形容词(健康的)。
⑤say后面少宾语,而且又没有范围,所以应该是what。
⑥pay a visit to拜访,看望,是固定短语。
⑦人称代词的逻辑错误。前文是Mr.Johnson,所以此处应该是“他的”而不是“她的”。
⑧时态误用。此处应该用一般过去时态。
⑨picture为可数名词,此处表示“一些照片”,故要用其复数形式。
⑩此处修饰动词miss,所以应该用副词much。
Proofreading 19(2013四川)
Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficulty,but I tried hardly to do
it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,asking me to let her to copy my answers.After think for
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some time,I let her copy my answers.But after the test,all of us were called to the
teacher's office.The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests.We were
warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didn't
cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why does she punish me?
答案
difficulty hardly
Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test ① ,but I tried ② to
difficult hard
asking
do it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,③ me to let her ④
asked
to
think
copy my answers.After ⑤ for some time,I let her copy my answers.But after
thinking
all
the test,⑥ of us were called to the teacher's office.The teacher was angry because
both
tests so
we had ⑦∧the same answers in the ⑧ .We were warned not to cheat again ⑨
test or
she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didn't cheat.I was just helping a
does
friend.Why ⑩ she punish me?
did
解析
①此处意为:我发现这次测试很难。本处需用形容词作宾补,以说明the test的特征。
②hardly副词,几乎不;hard副词,努力地。
③本处需用asked作谓语,而asking为非谓语动词,不能作谓语。
④let后用不定式作宾补时,需省略不定式符号to。
⑤after为介词,其后需用动名词作宾语。
⑥本句用both指I与Mary。
⑦the same为固定用法。
⑧本句指的是这一次测试,不必用复数形式。
⑨老师警告我们下次不能再作弊,否则她就要见家长。or否则。
⑩本句说的是过去的事情,需用一般过去时态。
Proofreading 20(2013陕西)
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and
headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.Before
waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently.I wanted to give up,and
my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole
and fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.
Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.
答案
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
go ours
One Sunday morning we① fishing at a lake.We took ② fishing poles and
went our
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headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,③
so
Before
we dropped the lines into the water.④ waiting for about half an hour,I was
After
impatiently and
beginning to get⑤ .I wanted to give up,⑥ my grandfather told me to wait
impatient but
were
a little longer.Finally,there ⑦ a sudden pull at the pole and⑧∧ a fish was
was
minute
caught.Within the next few ⑨ ,my grandfather also caught a fish.
minutes
Felt
⑩ hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was
Feeling
delicious.
解析
①根据One Sunday morning可判定用一般过去时。
②充当定语修饰名词时必需用形容词性物主代词。
③前面是从句,此处是主句,不用连词。
④根据上下文判断,应是等了大约半小时后。
⑤此处get是系动词,后跟形容词作表语。
⑥根据上下文判断,此处应该表示转折。
⑦there be句型的主语是a sudden pull,故be动词用单数形式。
⑧此处指一条鱼,表泛指,故用a。
⑨在接下来的几分钟里,few修饰可数名词复数。
⑩现在分词作原因状语。
Proofreading 21(2012课标)
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the
time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when
the toys worked,but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it.For a while parents
bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear
apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,“That's it.No more toys to you.”My
punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my
toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.
答案
little
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and ① aggressive.From the
less
toy
time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my ② .I was happy
toys
did
when the toys worked,but when things ③ /did∧to wrong,I got angry and broke ④
went
it
.For a while ⑤∧my parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see
them
which tear
⑥ was happening.When I ⑦ apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father
what tore
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to
said,“That's it.No more toys ⑧ you.”My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found
for
must
out that with more patience I ⑨ make my toys ⑩
could/might
to
last.My attitude changed from then on.
解析
①根据more patient可知此处也应该用比较级。
②each of后应该接名词复数形式,表示“每一……”。
③go为系动词,意为“变得”,且此处应该用过去时态;go前面加did的话表示强调。
④根据上文的toys可知此处为复数形式。
⑤根据句意可知此处指“我的父母”。
⑥see后为宾语从句,从句中缺少主语,故用what。
⑦根据上下文可知,此处应该为过去时态。
⑧表示“为某人买东西”,介词为for而不是to。
⑨句意:与此同时,我发现再耐心些,我也许就能使玩具持续久些。must意为“必须”,不符合
句意。
⑩make为使役动词,不定式作宾补时应该省去to。
— 三年模拟 —
A组 考点基础题组
Proofreading 1(2021山西一模)
My hometown, Wanning, Hainan, which is a lively city within a 90-minute drive
from Sanya.
It enjoys a warm climate with an annual average temperatures of 20℃. It is the
better surfing spot with many international competitions hold there each year. Riyue Bay,
located 25km south of Wanning, is my favourite place. With its strong waves, Riyue Bay
is a ideal beach for surfing, what always offers an incredible surfing experience. Taxis at
Wanning Station are plentiful.
Ignore others vehicles and head directly to the taxi line. Your totally travel time to
Riyue Bay should be 40 minutes or so. It is a long but slightly expensive road, but it
worth a visit!
答案
My hometown, Wanning, Hainan,
whic
h
❶ is a lively city within a 90-minute drive from Sanya.
temperatures
It enjoys a warm climate with an annual average of 20℃. It is the
temperature❷
better hold
surfing spot with many international competitions there each year. Riyue Bay,
best❸ held❹
located 25km south of Wanning, is my favourite place. With its strong waves, Riyue Bay
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a what
is ideal beach for surfing, always offers an incredible surfing experience. Taxis
an❺ which❻
at Wanning Station are plentiful.
others totally
Ignore vehicles and head directly to the taxi line. Your travel time to
other❼ total❽
but
Riyue Bay should be 40 minutes or so. It is a long slightly expensive road, but it
and❾
∧
worth a visit!
is❿
Proofreading 2(2021黑龙江齐齐哈尔一模)
I was riding my bike down to the corner shop in a Saturday morning when I
attracted by a cute boy who was walking his dog. Suddenly my neighbour drives past and
honked(按喇叭)at me. I was so surprising that I crashed into an old lady walk down the
street! Lucky, the old lady wasn't hurt, but I fell off my bike and landed in the hole. My
neighbour saw me to fall so she stopped her car and rushed out to help her. The worst
part was that the cute boy stopped to watch all happen. What an embarrassing but
dangerous day!
答案
in ∧
I was riding my bike down to the corner shop a Saturday morning when I
on❶ was❷
drives
attracted by a cute boy who was walking his dog. Suddenly my neighbour past
drove❸
surprising walk
and honked(按喇叭)at me. I was so that I crashed into an old lady
surprised❹ walking❺
Lucky
down the street! , the old lady wasn't hurt, but I fell off my bike and landed in
Luckily❻
the
hole. My neighbour saw me
a❼
to
her
❽ fall so she stopped her car and rushed out to help . The worst part was that the
me❾
but
cute boy stopped to watch all happen. What an embarrassing dangerous day!
and❿
Proofreading 3(2021河南3月适应性测试)
Among so much proverbs, I like “The early bird catches the worm.”best.
This proverb means that to being successful, one needs to start early or before
anyone else. It advises us seize the day and take every opportunity. That is why I liked it
so much.
Looking back, I have come to realize that success is never goes to those who are
lazy! Often the mostly successful people are those who do something before anyone else
do. Success takes hard work and time. The early one wakes up, the more work time you
will have and the more one will get.
Are you a early bird?
答案
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much
Among so proverbs, I like “The early bird catches the worm.”best.
many❶
being
This proverb means that to successful, one needs to start early or before
be❷
∧ liked
anyone else. It advises us seize the day and take every opportunity. That is why I
to❸ like❹
it so much.
Looking back, I have come to realize that success
is
mostly
❺ never goes to those who are lazy! Often the successful people are those
most❻
do
who do something before anyone else . Success takes hard work and time. The
does❼
early you
one wakes up, the more work time will have and the more one will get.
earlier❽ one❾
a
Are you early bird?
an❿
Proofreading 4(2021云南昆明一中仿真模拟)
I grew up in a small town about a hour outside of Chicago. There were only a
handful of local shops and cafes, and everyone know their neighbors as there were only
twenty thousands people in the whole town! My parents used to let my brother and me
walking to and from the kindergarten every day, and we were allowed to do whichever
we liked before dark. The only thing we had to worry about was getting bite by insects
or getting sunburned from staying outdoor for too long! After high school, I went to
college in the city. Taking the subway was much faster than riding my bike. People from
all over the world spoke languages I never heard before. There were huge department
stores, where sold everything. The entertainment at all hours was my most favorite thing
about the city.
答案
a
I grew up in a small town about hour outside of Chicago. There were only a
an❶
know
handful of local shops and cafes, and everyone their neighbors as there were only
knew❷
thousands
twenty people in the whole town! My parents used to let my brother and me
thousand❸
walking whichever
to and from the kindergarten every day, and we were allowed to do
walk❹ whatever❺
bite
we liked before dark. The only thing we had to worry about was getting by insects
bitten❻
outdoor
or getting sunburned from staying for too long! After high school, I went to
outdoors❼
college in the city. Taking the subway was much faster than riding my bike. People from
∧
all over the world spoke languages I never heard before. There were huge department
had❽
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where
stores, sold everything. The entertainment at all hours was my
which❾
mo
st
❿ favorite thing about the city.
Proofreading 5(2021四川成都二次诊断)
Today I went out with my friend Ann for lunch at a restaurant. It is a pretty
specially one, what is called“Signs Restaurant”. In order to make the order for food,
you have to use sign language. All the waiters and waitresses are without hearing. The
waitress who served us was amazed. She taught we a bunch of signs while we had
waited for our food. She was patient for me as I tried. My friends helped me out a little,
either. The waitress said I did a good job. I feel inspired now take an ASL course and
will do so next year.I will do some learning online before the course starts. I just can't
wait.
答案
Today I went out with my friend Ann for lunch at a restaurant. It is a pretty
specially what the
one, is called“Signs Restaurant”. In order to make order for food,
special❶ which❷ an❸
you have to use sign language. All the waiters and waitresses are without hearing. The
amazed we
waitress who served us was . She taught a bunch of signs while we
amazing❹ us❺
had
for friends
❻ waited for our food. She was patient me as I tried. My helped me out a
with❼ friend❽
either ∧
little, . The waitress said I did a good job. I feel inspired now take an ASL
too❾ to❿
course and will do so next year.I will do some learning online before the course starts. I
just can't wait.
Proofreading 6(2020四省八校上学期二次质检)
Last summer vacation I travelled to America and I met a lot of foreigner. I found a
tour guide which spoke both English and Chinese because of I was not confident of my
English. Interesting, some native English speakers joined me in the trip. When we are in
the Grand Canyon, we lost contact with our guide but everyone was worried. All of
sudden, my phone rang and it was from the guide, said that he would wait for us at the
gate of the Canyon. He asked I to inform the other members. I collected my courage to
tell them in English, and then I was praising by them. I felt more confident afterwards.
答案
foreigner
Last summer vacation I travelled to America and I met a lot of . I found
foreigners❶
which
a tour guide spoke both English and Chinese because
who/that❷
of
Interesting
❸ I was not confident of my English. , some native English speakers joined
Interestingly❹
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are
me in the trip. When we in the Grand Canyon, we lost contact with our guide
were❺
but ∧
everyone was worried. All of sudden, my phone rang and it was from the
so/and❻ a❼
said I
guide, that he would wait for us at the gate of the Canyon. He asked to
saying❽ me❾
inform the other members. I collected my courage to tell them in English, and then I was
praising
by them. I felt more confident afterwards.
praised❿
Proofreading 7(2020河南名校线上联考)
I think teenagers in China should have a specially festival that I would call it
Teenager Volunteer Day. As is known to all, most teenagers in China are brought up as a
only child in the family. They usually given too many care and attention.Through
volunteering, teenagers may learn to think of others and many other important life lesson.
In Teenager Volunteer Day, teenagers are encouraged to volunteer wherever you are
needed. They may help to raise money for people which suffer from a serious disease.
They may go to a home for the aged to do what is good for old people, or collecting
books for children in poor areas.
答案
specially
I think teenagers in China should have a festival that I would call
special❶
it
❷ Teenager Volunteer Day. As is known to all, most teenagers in China are brought up
a ∧ many
as only child in the family. They usually given too care and attention.
an❸ are❹ much❺
Through volunteering, teenagers may learn to think of others and many other important
lesson In
life . Teenager Volunteer Day, teenagers are encouraged to volunteer wherever
lessons❻ On❼
you which
are needed. They may help to raise money for people suffer from a serious
they❽ who❾
disease. They may go to a home for the aged to do what is good for old people, or
collecting
books for children in poor areas.
collect❿
Proofreading 8(2020河南顶级名校1月质量测评)
My friend Frank is one of the most amazing peoples I have ever met. He just never
seemed to suffer from any kind of stress, even when he faces unexpected difficulties. To
everyone's surprised, he has never failed an exam. Frank believes that exams are just
exams but that it's unnecessary worry about them all the time. He is an optimistic person
by nature and I real admire his way of thinking. That makes me ashamed is that I am
always nervous facing the exams. For an example, I can't concentrate to my studies before
the exams. It's time for me to learn from her now.
答案
peoples
My friend Frank is one of the most amazing I have ever met. He just
people❶
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seemed
never to suffer from any kind of stress, even when he faces unexpected
seems❷
surprised
difficulties. To everyone's , he has never failed an exam. Frank believes that
surprise❸
but ∧
exams are just exams that it's unnecessary worry about them all the time. He is
and❹ to❺
real That
an optimistic person by nature and I admire his way of thinking. makes me
really❻ What❼
ashamed is that I am always nervous facing the exams. For
an
to
❽ example, I can't concentrate my studies before the exams. It's time for me to
on❾
her
learn from now.
him❿
Proofreading 9(2019陕西汉中联考一)
Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to making dough
figurines( 面 人 ). When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm
welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he shows us the basic steps
and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him or watched attentively. Then
we started to have a try itself. The old man walked around and helped us patient. Finally,
we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.
Looking on the figurines, we were all very exciting. We hope we can have more activity
of this kind!
答案
Last Friday, our class
was
making
❶ invited an old craftsman to teach us how to dough figurines(面人).When the
make❷
∧
craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boys helped
a❸
shows
him with the tool box. First, he us the basic steps and skills of making dough
showed❹
or
figurines. We stood around him watched attentively. Then we started to have a try
and❺
itself patient
. The old man walked around and helped us . Finally, we put the figurines
ourselves❻ patiently❼
on
we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking the figurines,
at❽
exciting activity
we were all very . We hope we can have more of this kind!
excited❾ activities❿
Proofreading 10(2019江西八所重点中学联考)
It was raining hardly outside, which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch.
Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our
classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in fifties, which brought me
lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our
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children. But what had the children done in return? All too often, most children just take
it for granted that their parent should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum or
dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. How shall I do for you?
答案
hardly
It was raining outside, which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch.
hard❶
passed
Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure by
passing❷
∧ which
our classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in fifties,
her❸ that/who❹
brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices
our had
for children. But what the children done in return? All too often, most children
their❺ have❻
parent
just take it for granted that their should serve
parents❼
for
or
❽ them unconditionally. My dear mum dad, thank you very much for bringing me
and❾
How
up. shall I do for you?
What❿
B组 综合应用题组
Proofreading 1(2021贵州天之王教育三模)
My friends made a plan go to the seaside last week. I was very excited and asked
for my parents' permission. To my delight, they agree. We gathered at 6:30 but set off at
once. Honest speaking, it took us more than an hour to arrive there by bike. When we
arrived, there was plenty of visitors. Some were playing in the sand, playing the
volleyball happily while others were walking along the seaside. On addition, some even
sat on their chair, enjoying the beautiful sight. What made us happy was whether we
could swim safely. We enjoyed us that day and returned home at about three o'clock.
答案
∧
My friends made a plan go to the seaside last week. I was very excited and asked
to❶
agree but
for my parents' permission. To my delight, they . We gathered at 6:30 set off
agreed❷ and❸
Honest
at once. speaking, it took us more than an hour to arrive there by bike. When
Honestly❹
was
we arrived, there plenty of visitors. Some were playing in the sand, playing
were❺
the
On
❻ volleyball happily while others were walking along the seaside. addition, some even
In❼
chair whether
sat on their , enjoying the beautiful sight. What made us happy was we
chairs❽ that❾
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us
could swim safely. We enjoyed that day and returned home at about three
ourselves❿
o'clock.
Proofreading 2(2021安徽合肥二模)
I'll never forget the last winter holiday in my hometown. On the way to my grandpa,
my father drove very carefully or slowly all the way, for it was snowing heavily.When
we arrived, my cousin Maomao grabbed my arm at once, inviting me collect snow with
our grandpa.We felt not a little excitedly. After a while, in the yard was some snowmen,
all look funny. “Look, here's another snowman,”shouted Maomao, joyfully clapping his
hand. It was our grandpa who grey hair was blowing in the wind. We laughed, which
made our grandpa a kind of awkward. How I wish I can go back there next year!
答案
I'll never forget the last winter holiday in my hometown. On the way to my
grandpa or
, my father drove very carefully slowly all the way, for it was snowing
grandpa’s❶ and❷
∧
heavily.When we arrived, my cousin Maomao grabbed my arm at once, inviting me
to❸
excitedly
collect snow with our grandpa.We felt not a little . After a while, in the yard
excited❹
was look
some snowmen, all funny.“Look, here's another snowman,”shouted Maomao,
were❺ looking❻
hand who
joyfully clapping his . It was our grandpa grey hair was blowing in the wind.
hands❼ whose❽
We laughed, which made our grandpa
a
can
❾ kind of awkward. How I wish I go back there next year!
could❿
Proofreading 3(2021广西柳州三次模拟)
I still remember my first presentation in front of my entire class. When it comes to
my turn, I was very much nervous! My head went blank and I had no idea that to say.
Then I took deep breath and slowly breathed out. I kept do so for some times. That
helped me feel less terribly. After a while, I calmed down but began my speech. I did a
good job in the end. It was deep breathing that helped me out of anxious. So remember
to breathe deeply when you feel nervous in a presentation. Focus on your speech and
don't worry with not making my presentation perfect. The world won't end even if you
mess up.
答案
comes
I still remember my first presentation in front of my entire class. When it to
came❶
my turn, I was very
much
that ∧
❷ nervous! My head went blank and I had no idea to say. Then I took deep
what❸ a❹
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do
breath and slowly breathed out. I kept so for some times. That helped me feel less
doing❺
terribly but
. After a while,I calmed down began my speech. I did a good job in the
terrible❻ and❼
anxious
end. It was deep breathing that helped me out of . So remember to breathe
anxiety❽
deeply when you feel nervous in a presentation. Focus on your speech and don't worry
with my
not making presentation perfect. The world won't end even if you mess up.
about❾ your❿
Proofreading 4(2021江西九江3月二次模拟)
I had a very special winter vacation this year. A terrible disease calling COVID-19
struck Wuhan on January 2020.The whole nation is under the shadow of the outbreak in
a short time. Tens of thousand of people were infected with the virus. Thankful, the
government took timely measures and called on ourselves to stay at home to avoid close
personal contact. In the meantime, a plenty of medical experts and nursing professionals
went to Wuhan voluntarily, who showed that Chinese could unite firmly in the face of
difficulties. The disaster did bring huge pain to China and it pushed the country overcome
difficulties and come out much stronger.
答案
calling
I had a very special winter vacation this year. A terrible disease COVID-19
called❶
on is
struck Wuhan January 2020.The whole nation under the shadow of the outbreak
in❷ was❸
thousand Thankful
in a short time. Tens of of people were infected with the virus. , the
thousands❹ Thankfully❺
ourselves
government took timely measures and called on to stay at home to avoid close
us❻
personal contact. In the meantime,
a
who
❼ plenty of medical experts and nursing professionals went to Wuhan voluntarily,
which❽
showed that Chinese could unite firmly in the face of difficulties. The disaster did bring
and ∧
huge pain to China it pushed the country overcome difficulties and come out
but❾ to❿
much stronger.
Proofreading 5(2021山西临汾3月考前适应性训练Ⅲ)
I'm a Senior Three student. I like making friends with like-minded fellow and usually
they get on well with each other. However, I overheard one of my friends speaking ill
me yesterday, say she didn't want to play with me. As the matter of fact, she plays tricks
on me occasional because I'm fat. I am just can't understand how she can't be friendly to
me while I'm kind to her. It was hard for me to pretend to know nothing but even hard
to let go of our friendship.
答案
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fellow
I'm a Senior Three student. I like making friends with like-minded and
fellows❶
they
usually get on well with each other. However, I overheard one of my friends
we❷
∧ say the
speaking ill me yesterday, she didn't want to play with me. As matter of
of❸ saying❹ a❺
occasional
fact, she plays tricks on me because I'm fat. I
occasionally❻
am
how was
❼ just can't understand she can't be friendly to me while I'm kind to her. It
why❽ is❾
hard
hard for me to pretend to know nothing but even to let go of our friendship.
harder❿
Proofreading 6(2020山西1月适应性调研)
During my last summer holiday, I visited to my primary school. Arrived at the
school gate, I am amazed at the great changes. Two modern teaching buildings came into
my view. Behind the buildings was a new library which children could read their favorite
books to broaden our horizons. There were many more trees in the school yard. Entering
my familiar classroom, I found the old tables and chairs replaced by new ones but the
walls beautifully decorated. In front of the classroom was a computer screen, which could
make teachers' lesson interesting and lively. Sitting in the classroom, I remembered the
good old days spent here with my classmates. I felt proudly that my school was
becoming better and better.
答案
During my last summer holiday, I visited
to
Arrived am
❶ my primary school. at the school gate, I amazed at the great changes.
Arriving❷ was❸
Two modern teaching buildings came into my view. Behind the buildings was a new
∧ which our
library which / children could read their favorite books to broaden
in where❹ their❺
horizons. There were many more trees in the school yard. Entering my familiar classroom,
but
I found the old tables and chairs replaced by new ones the walls beautifully
and❻
∧
decorated. In front of the classroom was a computer screen, which could make
the❼
lesson
teachers' interesting and lively. Sitting in the classroom, I remembered the good old
lessons❽
here proudly
days spent with my classmates. I felt that my school was becoming better
there❾ proud❿
and better.
Proofreading 7(2020陕西铜川二模)
About how to keep healthy, I'd like to offer my advices. As we know, we teenagers
are going through a rapid growth which needs to be support by a healthy and balanced
diet. Thus, we need a variety of food but cut out the food rich in sugar or fat. However,
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we should take physical exercise regular. For example, we can play basketball or take
walk after school. Have enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, you should have
at least eight hours of sleep every day and not stayed up too late. Only in this way that
can we keep fit.
答案
advices
About how to keep healthy, I'd like to offer my . As we know, we teenagers
advice❶
support
are going through a rapid growth which needs to be by a healthy and balanced
supported❷
out
diet. Thus, we need a variety of food but cut the food rich in sugar or fat.
down❸
However regular
, we should take physical exercise . For example, we can
Besides/Moreover/Furthermore❹ regularly❺
∧ Have
play basketball or take walk after school. enough sleep is of great importance.
a❻ Having❼
you stayed
Therefore, should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not up
we❽ stay❾
too late. Only in this way
that
❿can we keep fit.
Proofreading 8(2020山西大同一中模拟VI)
My friend Tom likes shopping online. He always spends much money buying
different clothes and decoration. Yesterday, he received the coat he has ordered online. He
felt happy after opening the box. He thought he must look handsome in them. However,
at the sight of the coat, he felt disappointed and angrily. The coat was too large and it
didn't look the same as describing online. He contacted the salesgirl and told her that she
should exchange it free of the charge. The salesgirl didn't think that she had made a
mistake, but she agreed change the coat if he paid the fee. Tom did so but he decided
that he should think twice before he did something from now on.
答案
My friend Tom likes shopping online. He always spends much money buying
decoration has
different clothes and . Yesterday, he received the coat he ordered online.
decorations❶ had❷
after them
He felt happy opening the box. He thought he must look handsome in .
before❸ it❹
angrily
However, at the sight of the coat, he felt disappointed and . The coat was too
angry❺
describing
large and it didn't look the same as online. He contacted the salesgirl and
described❻
told her that she should exchange it free of
the
∧
❼ charge. The salesgirl didn't think that she had made a mistake, but she agreed
to❽
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but
change the coat if he paid the fee. Tom did so he decided that he should think
and❾
now
twice before he did something from on.
then❿
Proofreading 9(2019四川攀枝花统考)
I am a third-grade student in China. I hope to go to your university to learn English
after finish my high school. English played an important part in our daily life but I like
it so much that I want to be a teacher of English. I have a little difficult in English. But
I will study hardly to improve it if I have an opportunity go to your university. Besides,
I like your city because it has an environment which differs with my city. And I will
make many friend and communicate frequently with him. I'd appreciate it if you could
take my application into the consideration.
答案
I am a third-grade student in China. I hope to go to your university to learn English
finish played but
after my high school. English an important part in our daily life I
finishing❶ plays❷ and❸
difficult
like it so much that I want to be a teacher of English. I have a little in
difficulty❹
hardly ∧
English. But I will study to improve it if I have an opportunity go to your
hard❺ to❻
with
university. Besides, I like your city because it has an environment which differs my
from❼
friend him
city. And I will make many and communicate frequently with . I'd appreciate
friends❽ them❾
it if you could take my application into
the
❿consideration.
Proofreading 10(2019贵州遵义航天高中七模)
I was about to go back home after school while I heard someone crying nearby. I
looked around and found the boy sitting on the ground.I went up to him and asking
gently what had happened. The boy looked at me, still crying, pointed out to a ball in a
deep hole and told me everything. I decided lend him a hand, and the ball was out of
my reach. Where could I get the ball? I thought it over and then had an idea.I quickly
fetched some bottles of water and poured them into the hole. With the water rising, the
ball floated up. The boy got the ball happy and expressed his thank for my offer.
答案
while
I was about to go back home after school I heard someone crying nearby. I
when❶
the asking
looked around and found boy sitting on the ground.I went up to him and
a❷ asked❸
gently what had happened. The boy looked at me, still crying, pointed
out
∧ and
❹ to a ball in a deep hole and told me everything. I decided lend him a hand,
to❺ but❻
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Where
the ball was out of my reach. could I get the ball? I thought it over and then
How❼
them
had an idea. I quickly fetched some bottles of water and poured into the hole.
it❽
happy
With the water rising, the ball floated up. The boy got the ball and expressed his
happily❾
thank
for my offer.
thanks❿
— 一年原创 —
Proofreading 1(2021 5·3原创题)
Looking up in the sky,you may to see many types of clouds.
A cloud is a group of tiny ice crystals or water droplets floated in the air. When
millions of these droplets or crystals come together, it form a cloud.
The wind moves clouds along in the sky. Unless it is windy day, you'll see the
clouds move very fast. In calm days, the clouds hardly seem to move at all.
Clouds form at different height in the sky:high, middle, and low. Cirrus clouds are
highly clouds, looked thin and long, like streamers.Cirrus clouds are fair-weather clouds.
They don't make rain. Stratus clouds are low clouds.They are usually gray or cover up
the whole sky. Rain can fall from these clouds.
答案
Looking up in the sky,you may
to
❶ see many types of clouds.
floated
A cloud is a group of tiny ice crystals or water droplets in the air. When
floating❷
it
millions of these droplets or crystals come together, form a cloud.
the y❸
Unless
The wind moves clouds along in the sky. it is ∧a❺ windy day, you'll see
If❹
In
the clouds move very fast. calm days, the clouds hardly seem to move at all.
On❻
height
Clouds form at different in the sky:high, middle, and low. Cirrus clouds
heights❼
highly looked
are clouds, thin and long, like streamers.Cirrus clouds are fair-weather
high❽ looking❾
or
clouds. They don't make rain. Stratus clouds are low clouds.They are usually gray
and❿
cover up the whole sky. Rain can fall from these clouds.
Proofreading 2(2021 5·3原创题)
Of the four skill, I think listening is the hardest. I like watching English films and I
can't understand it without the Chinese subtitles.
I am not satisfying with this situation. So recent I had a talk with my friend Wang
Ting. She told me some good ways improving listening. She suggested that using CDs to
listen to English songs and learned English expressions. “Trying to listen to native
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speakers are also helpful,” she added.
I will do as she advises. I'm sure I will gradually make progress.
答案
skill
Of the four , I think listening is the hardest. I like watching English films
skills❶
and it
I can't understand without the Chinese subtitles.
but❷ them❸
satisfying recent
I am not with this situation. So I had a talk with my friend
satisfied❹ recentl y❺
Wang Ting. She told me some good ways ∧of ❻ improving listening. She suggested
that
learned
❼ using CDs to listen to English songs and English expressions. “Trying
learn❽
are
to listen to native speakers also helpful,”she added.
is❾
advises
I will do as she . I'm sure I will gradually make progress.
advised❿
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