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【写作备考】2026年高中英语读后续写专练11

【写作备考】2026年高中英语读后续写专练11

山东烟台市2026届5月高考适应性测试英语试卷

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Vast grasslands on the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau, known as the “roof of the world”, have long been home to the black-necked crane (鹤). Very fond of the graceful birds, Tibetan people have regarded them as the plateau’s messengers — soft-natured, strong enough to survive the plateau’s extremes and deeply tied to the balance of their land.

Drolma and Tashi were a couple who had tended yaks (牦牛) for decades in Lhunzhub, a county near the Yarlung Zangbo River. They often paused, watching the cranes flying or dancing. As loyal protectors of the plateau’s wildlife, they had long heard of TARWPA (Tibet Autonomous Region Wildlife Protection Association), but they never thought they would contact it one day.

One cool autumn morning, while rounding up yaks near a stream, Tashi suddenly froze. There, beneath the woods, lay a black-necked crane — its body muddled and left leg missing below the knee, likely from the attack of a predator like a fox. It let out a weak cry of pain. Tashi said, “We can’t leave it here.” Drolma bent down, gently wrapping the crane in her woolen scarf.

They carried it home. Drolma gently cleaned its body with care, removed blood from its left leg and dressed its wound carefully. Then they made it a soft bed near the stove and fed it with wheat. For three days, they took turns looking after it. Its bleeding wound began to heal, but anxiety still weighed heavily on the couple. The crane could neither walk nor fly.

However, a turning point came. On Saturday, their 15-year-old son Dawa returned home from boarding school. At the sight of the injured crane, his eyes widened with surprise. Drolma and Tashi told about the whole story. Dawa’s expression turned serious and then his eyes lit up with hope. “My teacher once talked about artificial legs for animals!” Dawa said cheerfully. “But it requires professional knowledge and skills from specialized institutions.”

注意:

(1)续写词数应为150个左右:

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

“That sounds a good idea!” Drolma and Tashi responded.

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A month later, a call of surprise came from TARWPA.

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【参考答案】

One possible version:

“That sounds a good idea!” Drolma and Tashi responded. Dawa picked up the phone and successfully got in touch with TARWPA, explaining what had happened to the crane. The association was moved by their acts of kindness, promising to send staff workers to fetch the crane and have an artificial leg fitted onto it. The next day, their vehicle arrived. Drolma held the crane and put it into the vehicle gently. The crane, with its long neck stretched backwards, let out soft sad calls, as if unwilling to part with the family, who were tearfully waving goodbye.

A month later, a call of surprise came from TARWPA. It told the family that the crane had fully recovered and invited them to visit it. They could hardly believe their ears and headed for TARWPA without delay. The moment they came into sight, the crane, with its wings spreading, raced to greet them. It circled them joyfully. Drolma and Tashi stroked the crane’s feathers, delighted to see its well-fitted artificial leg. The heartwarming reunion scene was frozen in time, touching everyone present. Kindness and love bridge humans and wildlife, safeguarding this magical land.

【解析】

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了青藏高原牧民夫妇卓玛和扎西偶遇受伤断腿的黑颈鹤,悉心照料。儿子想到为动物安装假肢的办法,联系野生动物保护协会。协会救助并为黑颈鹤装上假肢使其康复,一家人前去探望,人鹤温情重逢,尽显人与野生动物之间善意与爱的联结。

【详解】1.段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写儿子想到为动物安装假肢的办法,联系野生动物保护协会。

②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写协会救助并为黑颈鹤装上假肢使其康复,一家人前去探望,人鹤温情重逢,尽显人与野生动物之间善意与爱的联结。

2.续写线索:联系保护协会——协会提供帮助——前去探望——人鹤温情重逢——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①保护:safeguard/protect

②联系:get in touch with/contact

③承诺:promise/pledge

情绪类

①感动:moved/touched

②高兴地:joyfully/happily

【点睛】[高分句型1] Dawa picked up the phone and successfully got in touch with TARWPA, explaining what had happened to the crane.(运用了what引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] The association was moved by their acts of kindness, promising to send staff workers to fetch the crane and have an artificial leg fitted onto it.(运用了现在分词作状语)

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