【写作备考】2026年高中英语读后续写专练20

2026届重庆市渝中区重庆市巴蜀中学校高三下学期考前模拟考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I had been so busy with work that I had little time to spend with my nine-year-old son,Mike. Last summer, when I finally had a day off, Mike told me the school would be hosting a cookie auction (拍卖). Each student was supposed to bake cookies with their father.

I’d never baked cookies, so we followed the instructions carefully. We opened a packet of instant cookie mix, added the required ingredients, shaped the dough (面团) into small rounds, and confidently placed them on a baking tray in the oven. Taking them out after fifteen minutes, I was surprised that the cookies were not the golden and perfectly shaped ones I’d seen in ads. In fact, some were unevenly baked, while others had spread too much on the tray.Mike, however, cherished this opportunity to work with me and was so happy that he didn’t seem to notice the problem.

After letting them cool, we tried decorating the cookies with icing. As a finishing touch, I sprinkled (撒) a few chocolate chips on top, hoping to add a bit of chocolate flavor to the cookies that didn’t look very appetizing. Mike gave me a proud grin; he thought they looked good. By then, we were already running late.

` When we finally hurried to the auction, I was stunned. A long table was filled with a fantastic array of exquisitely designed cookies. In contrast, ours looked embarrassing; some were misshapen, the icing had melted, and the chocolate chips were scattered everywhere. I felt a flush coming to my face, but Mike didn’t seem to be ashamed of our creation. He solemnly placed our cookies at the end of the table. I gave Mike eight dollars, telling him to bid (出价)on the cookies he liked, hoping he would get some nicely made ones to make up for the embarrassment our cookies might bring him.

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Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began.

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Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure.

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【解析】

【导语】本文以饼干拍卖为线索展开，讲述了很少陪伴儿子的作者和儿子一起烤饼干参加学校拍卖，成品外形糟糕，作者感到十分尴尬的故事。

【详解】1. 段落续写：

①由第一段首句可知，第一段可描写拍卖开始的过程，作者一直为外形糟糕的自制饼干感到尴尬，而儿子却始终坚定地关注着自家的饼干，等待拍卖。

②由第二段首句可知，第二段可描写儿子用所有钱拍下自家饼干，作者从中感悟到亲子陪伴比饼干完美更重要，决定多花时间陪伴儿子。

2. 续写线索：拍卖开始——作者尴尬不安——儿子锁定自家饼干——儿子全款拍下饼干——品尝饼干——领悟陪伴的意义

3. 词汇激活：

行为类

①举起：raise/lift/hold up

②承诺：promise/pledge

情绪类

①轻笑：giggle/chuckle

②喊：shout/yell

【点睛】[高分句型1] When the auctioneer finally picked up our lopsided bag, I held my breath, waiting for quiet giggles from the crowd. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和现在分词作伴随状语)

[高分句型2] Before anyone else could call a bid, Mike had already raised his hand and shouted ‌“Eight dollars!” loudly, his voice clear and proud across the room. (运用了before引导时间状语从句)

【参考答案】

Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began. Parents and kids called out bids one after another, and the beautifully shaped cookies quickly got higher and higher offers. I kept sneaking glances at our messy cookies at the end of the table, my cheeks heating up again. I tried to pull Mike to look at a nicely decorated bag of strawberry cookies, but he shook his head, his eyes fixed firmly on our own cookies. When the auctioneer finally picked up our lopsided bag, I held my breath, waiting for quiet giggles from the crowd.

Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. Before anyone else could call a bid, Mike had already raised his hand and shouted ‌“Eight dollars!” loudly, his voice clear and proud across the room. The auctioneer paused, then knocked the hammer down, and Mike walked briskly to the front to get our cookies. On the way home, he bit into one of our uneven cookies and told me it was the most delicious cookie he had ever eaten. At that moment, I realized what mattered wasn’t how perfect the cookies looked. This messy, imperfect batch baked together with my son was the most precious treasure I had ever had, and I promised myself I would spend more time making such beautiful memories with him.

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