中考英语写作---人生经历(三)

       你在生活或学习中遭遇过什么困难，请结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何克服困难，并取得了何种收获或成功。注意：

1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

写作分三步，审题-列提纲-写作

1. 本篇作文的文体是什么？

2. 话题是什么？

3. 作文的人称是什么？

4. 本篇作文的时态是什么？

5. 字数多少？

The difficulty I overcame

     I used to lack confidence and be afraid of answering questions in class.

     One day, our English teacher asked me a question, but I was so nervous that my mind went blank. However, instead of criticizing me, she looked at me with patience and encouraged me by saying “Just believe in yourself and keep trying”. Being inspired by my teacher, I managed to answer the question. From that day on, I started to gain more confidence in myself, and gradually became one of the top students in my class.

    The experience taught me that only with a positive attitude towards difficulties can we succeed in dealing with all the challenges we face in life.

   本篇文章共117词，在中考写作中，是一个很理想的篇幅长度，太长或太短都不好。太短会让阅卷老师觉得词数不够；太长会让阅卷老师觉得太过啰嗦。因此，100-120这是一个很理想的区间。

   本篇文章，有状语从句，分词作状语，倒装句等，长短结合，高级词汇，是一篇佳作，同学们可以积累一下里面的素材，变成自己的好词好句。

   I used to lack confidence and be afraid of answering questions in class.

过去常常做某事    used to do

缺乏自信               lack confidence

害怕做某事            be afraid of doing

     One day, our English teacher asked me a question, but I was so nervous that（1）my mind went blank. However, instead of criticizing me, she looked at me with patience and encouraged me by saying “Just believe in yourself and keep trying”. Being inspired by my teacher（2）, I managed to answer the question. From that day on, I started to gain more confidence in myself, and gradually became one of the top students（3） in my class.

如此...以至于...          so... that...

大脑空白                    go  blank

代替                          instead of

相信自己                   believe in oneself

继续尝试                   keep trying

获得自信                   gain confidence

尖子生                      top student

渐渐地                      gradually

    The experience taught me that only with a positive attitude towards difficulties can we succeed in dealing with all the challenges we face in life.

积极的态度          positive attitude

成功做某事          succeed in doing

处理生活中面的的困难  

deal with all the challenges we face in life.