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第一次月考复习之书面表达 20 篇
（Units1-3单元话题）
基础语篇巩固练
1．（23-24八年级下·江西上饶·阶段练习）Black太太的两个儿子分担家务的故事使你深受启发，你
计划利用周末时间，做一些力所能及的家务。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文，介绍你的计划。
写作要点：
1.What’s your idea about doing chores?
2.What’s your weekend plan for doing chores?
3.What does the plan mean to you?
要求：
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As for chores, I
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【答案】例文
As for chores, I think it’s very important for us to do chores. It can help us learn to take care of ourselves
and develop good habits.
This weekend, I plan to do some chores at home. On Saturday morning, I will clean my room and wash my
clothes. In the afternoon, I will help my mother cook dinner. On Sunday morning, I will do the dishes and sweep
the floor. In the afternoon, I will water the flowers in the garden.This plan means a lot to me. It can not only help my parents share the housework, but also make me more
independent and responsible. I believe I can learn a lot from doing chores.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时” ；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意回答清楚对做家务的看法、具体的家务安排和安排的意义，可以
适当拓展，注意详略得当。
[写作步骤]
第一步, 写对做家务的看法, 引出话题；
第二步, 具体写周末的家务计划；
第三步, 写对家务计划的看法，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① take care of照顾
② develop good habits培养好习惯
③ independent独立的
④ responsible负责的
[高分句型]
It can not only help my parents share the housework, but also make me more independent and responsible. (not
only...but also...句型)
2．（22-23八年级下·湖北十堰·阶段练习）你是张亮的朋友。上周日张亮和几个同学组建了一支志
愿者小分队，去一所贫困乡村学校服务。请你根据信息介绍一下他们的活动。并谈谈你对此的感想。你
是否愿意参加类似的活动？请说明理由。
提示要点：1.打扫学校和教室；2.帮助修理桌椅；3.赠送书籍，衣服和玩具；4.教唱英语歌曲等。
要求：包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；语言通顺，行文连贯；词数80左右。
I’m Zhang Liang’s friend and I have known that he and his classmates always go to different places to do
some volunteer work.
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【答案】例文
I’m Zhang Liang’s friend and I have known that he and his classmates always go to different places to do
some volunteer work.
Last Sunday, they set up a team to volunteer in a poor village school. First, they cleaned up the school and
the classrooms with the students. Then, they helped to fix up the broken desks and chairs in the classrooms. After
that, they gave away books, clothes and toys to the students. They taught students to sing English songs. To cheer
them up, they also played games with them.
I think what they do is meaningful. I also want to be a volunteer like them. As we know, helping others is
helping ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，介绍一下他们的志愿活动；
第三步，谈谈自己对此的感想，对参加志愿活动的意愿及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①set up组建
②clean up清扫
③fix up修理
④cheer up（使）高兴起来
⑤meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
I think what they do is meaningful.(宾语从句)
3．（23-24八年级下·四川德阳·阶段练习）Tony之前是一个问题学生，自从转到我校之后，他的变
化很大。请根据以下提示以“The Changes of Tony”为题描述他的变化。
1. 他现在每天都锻炼一个小时，吃健康的食物，他变得更加健康了。2. 在家，他帮助父母做家务，比如铺床、洗衣服、叠被子、扫地等，也会照顾自己了。
3. 在学校，当他遇到困难时，愿意向老师寻求帮助，努力学习，取得了更好的成绩。
4. 在星期六，他会去医院看望生病的小孩，并鼓励他们振作起来，他愿意帮助别人了。
5. 在星期天，他在课外阅读项目组当志愿者，教小朋友们学会如何更好的阅读。
注意：
1.词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
The changes of Tony
Tony wasn’t a good student before, but he has changed a lot after he comes to our school.
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【答案】例文
The Changes of Tony
Tony wasn’t a good student before, but he has changed a lot after he came to our school.
Now, he exercises for an hour every day and eats healthy food. He has become healthier. At home, he helps
his parents do chores, such as making the bed, washing clothes, folding the quilt, and sweeping the floor. He can
also take care of himself.
In school, when he encounters difficulties, he is willing to ask teachers for help. He studies hard and has
achieved better grades. On Saturdays, he goes to the hospital to visit sick children and encourages them to cheer
up. He is willing to help others. On Sundays, he volunteers in the after-school reading program and teaches
children how to read better.
Tony’s changes are really great. We should learn from him and try to become better ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，注意大小写，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，开篇点题，引出下文；
②第二步，具体阐述Tony的改变；
③第三步，书写结语，向Tony学习。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②be willing to 愿意去做某事
[高分句型]
In school, when he encounters difficulties, he is willing to ask teachers for help. (时间状语从句)
4．（23-24八年级下·安徽宿州·阶段练习）健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。
请根据下列方框内的英语提示，以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇英语短文。词数70~90，开头已
给出，不计入总词数。
should (✔) shouldn’t (×)
do sports every day refuse to exercise
keep a balanced diet have junk food
eat fruit and vegetables stay up too late
have enough sleep play computer games a lot
keep happy sit for a long time
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to
keep healthy.
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【答案】例文
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to
keep healthy.
Here are some things that we should do. First, we should do sports every day and keep a balance d diet. As
for food, we should eat more fruit and vegetables. Besides, we should have enough sleep. It’s good for our health.
The most important thing is that we should keep happy every day.
On the other side, we shouldn’t do the things that are bad for health. For example, we shouldn’t refuse to
exercise, and having junk food too much is bad for us. Then we shouldn’t play computer games a lot or sit for a
long time. What's more, we shouldn’t stay up too late, either, because it’s the most dangerous for us.
All in all, if we follow these ways, each of us will have a healthy body.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，介绍一些应该做的事情；
第三步，介绍一些不应该做的事情；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep a balanced diet保持均衡饮食
②be good for…对……有好处
③refuse to do sth.拒绝做某事
④stay up late熬夜
⑤all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
On the other side, we shouldn’t do the things that are bad for health.(that引导定语从句)
5．（23-24八年级下·陕西西安·阶段练习）让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动，对其成长具有重要意义。可以帮助他们学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。
你们学校上周六与一个乡村学校开展了手拉手帮扶活动。你们乘公交车前往，开展了丰富多彩的活
动。如：捐赠书籍和学习用品、帮助辅导英语、帮助打扫教室和校园、体验农村生活、学习干农活、互
相了解学习与生活等。假如你是此次活动的志愿者之一，写一篇关于此次志愿活动的英文短文。
要求：
1. 根据提示，写出活动的具体内容，也可以再添加活动项目；
2. 根据提示，写出自己对本次活动的认识与感受；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80至100。
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【答案】例文
Volunteer in the Village School
Last Saturday, our school organized a volunteer activity with a village school. We went to the village by bus
and did all kinds of activities. We donated books and school things to the students there. We also helped them
learn English and cleaned the classroom and campus. In addition, we experienced rural life by learning to do farm
work. Through these activities, we got to know each other better and learned about each other’s study and life.
This volunteer activity is very meaningful to me. It not only allows me to help others, but also teaches me
new skills and improves my communication skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示具体描述活动的具体内容；
第二步，表达对这个活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]①all kinds of各种各样的
②in addition此外
③allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
[高分句型]
It not only allows me to help others, but also teaches me new skills and improves my communication skills.（not
only...but also句型）
6．（23-24八年级下·湖北十堰·阶段练习）假如你是某中学八年级的一名学生，寒假期间，英语老
师为大家布置了以“家务劳动”为主题的实践作业，鼓励大家在学做家务的同时，尝试用英语完成实践
报告。请你根据提示，写一篇实践报告，谈谈自己做家务的感受。
提示：
1.What chores did you do during the winter holiday?
2.How did you feel when you did the chores?
3.Do you think teenagers should do chores at home? Why?
要求：
1.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；
2.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰；
3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
During the winter holiday, one of the most interesting things I did was to do chores at home.
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【答案】例文：
During the winter holiday, one of the most interesting things I did was to do chores at home. In order to
keep the house clean and tidy, my family did housework every day before the Spring Festival. I swept the floor
and took out the rubbish every day. I washed clothes and did the dishes twice a week. I also learned to make
dumplings. Doing chores is easier said than done. It was really hard for me to do them well. For this reason, I
understand how hard my parents are. They have to do all the chores every day.
I think we teenagers should do chores at home. It isn’t a waste of time. In fact, doing chores helps us
develop our independence so that we can take care of our family and ourselves better.
【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用“寒假期间做了家务”来引出下文中的实践内容；
第二步，介绍自己寒假期间做过的家务以及做完的感受；
第三步，简述青少年是否应该做家务以及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②twice a week一周两次
③a waste of time浪费时间
[高分句型]
①It was really hard for me to do them well.（it作形式主语）
②I understand how hard my parents are.（how引导的宾语从句）
③doing chores helps us develop our independence so that we can take care of our family and ourselves better.
（so that引导的目的状语从句）
7．（23-24八年级下·四川内江·阶段练习）假如你是玛丽，在下周班会上老师让你讲述一次做家务
的经历，请根据以下提示写一份演讲稿。
内容提示：
1.上个星期六上午，你父母不在家，忙着工作，家里很乱。
2.做了很多家务，如: 扫地、铺床、折叠衣服、倒垃圾和做饭。
3.谈谈你对这次做家务劳动的感受和收获。
参考词汇：be in a mess 杂乱
An unforgettable experience
Hello, everyone! I am Mary.
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An unforgettable experience
Hello, everyone! I am Mary. I’m pleased to share my experience about doing housework with you.
Last Saturday morning, my parents weren’t at home and were busy with their work. However, the house
was in a mess. I decided to do some housework to make my parents have more time to relax after coming back. I
swept the floor, made the bed, folded clothes and took out the rubbish. I also cooked lunch by myself.
I was very tired but happy. I think teenagers should do some chores to develop the basic skills and
shouldn’t always depend on parents.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己并点出写作目的。
第二步，具体阐述一次做家务的经历。
第三步，介绍这次做家务劳动的感受和收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy with忙于
②decide to do决定做某事
③depend on依靠；依赖
[高分句型]
I think teenagers should do some chores to develop the basic skills and shouldn’t always depend on parents.（宾
语从句）
8．（23-24八年级下·四川泸州·阶段练习）在今天的英语课上，同学们就“中学生是否应该做家
务”这一话题进行了讨论。有部分同学认为做家务浪费时间，而且那是父母的事情；还有的同学认为做
家务得要报酬。你同意他们的观点吗？请谈谈你的看法。
写作要求：
要求：
1、语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写工整；文中不出现真实的人名学校；
2、词数：90词左右；
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【答案】例文
We had a discussion about whether middle school students should do housework in English class. Some
students think there is no need for them to do that because doing housework is a waste of time, and it’s their
parents’ job. Some students think they should be paid to do housework.
In my opinion, doing housework is important. First, parents are tired after work. If we can help them with
housework, they will feel much better. Second, middle school students can learn some life skills from doing
housework. What’s more, doing housework is a good way to develop independence.
In a word, doing housework is good for both students and parents. Therefore, I strongly believe middle
school students should do some housework.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍“中学生是否应该做家务”的讨论结果；
第二步，具体介绍自己的观点；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a waste of time 浪费时间
②In my opinion 在我看来
③What’s more 此外
④In a word 总而言之
[高分句型]
①Some students think there is no need for them to do that because doing housework is a waste of time, and it’s
their parents’ job.（because引导的原因状语从句和并列句）②If we can help them with housework, they will feel much better.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③Therefore, I strongly believe middle school students should do some housework.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．（23-24八年级下·湖北武汉·阶段练习）参加志愿者服务活动可以帮助我们学习新技能，增强沟通
技能和社会责任感，对我们的成长具有重大意义。你所在的学校校刊向同学们征稿，请你以“I Want to
Volunteer at/in”为题写一篇英文短文，介绍你的志愿者活动的地点(例如：敬老院、图书馆、城市公园等)
及相应计划。
内容提示：
Which volunteer job do you want to do?
How can your interests and hobbies help you do the job?
Why do you want to do the volunteer job?
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数80左右；部分标题已给出，不计入总词数。
I Want to Volunteer at/in
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【答案】例文
I Want to Volunteer at the Local Library
As a passionate reader and knowledge seeker, I want to volunteer at our local library. I believe my love for
books and my strong communication skills can greatly contribute to this endeavor.
As a volunteer, I plan to assist in organizing the shelves, helping patrons find the books they need, and even
conducting reading sessions for children. My hobby of reading allows me to easily navigate the library’s
collection, while my strong communication skills enable me to effectively interact with the patrons.
I want to do this volunteer job because it aligns with my belief in the importance of reading and knowledge
sharing. Moreover, it’s a wonderful way to enhance my organizational and teamwork skills, while fostering a
sense of community and responsibility among us all. By volunteering at the library, I hope to make a positive
impact on the lives of others and contribute to the growth of our community.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作内容重点阐述志愿活动，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明文章主题——想要在当地图书馆做志愿者活动；
第二步，详细阐述做这项志愿活动的具体计划以及自己的兴趣对这项工作的帮助；
第三步，写出选择这项志愿者工作的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①contribute to有助于，促成
②allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
③the importance of...……的重要性
[高分句型]
①I want to do this volunteer job because it aligns with my belief in the importance of reading and knowledge
sharing.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②My hobby of reading allows me to easily navigate the library’s collection, while my strong communication
skills enable me to effectively interact with the patrons.（while连接的并列句）
10．（23-24八年级下·浙江杭州·阶段练习）假如你是李明，你的好朋友Bill最近向你倾诉了一些令
他烦恼的事情。请根据下面的内容提示，用英语给他写一封邮件，提些合理的建议。
内容提示：
Bill的问题：
1.最近经常感冒，不爱吃蔬菜水果；
2.内向，朋友很少，感觉生活乏味；
3. ……
要求：
1.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.必须包括提示中的所有问题，可适当发挥。
Dear Bill,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here is some advice for you.
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【答案】例文
Dear Bill,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here is some advice for you.
Firstly, you often get sick and hate to eat vegetables and fruit. In fact, you can try other useful ways to
become strong, like doing exercise and eating some fresh and healthy food. Second, you are so shy that you have
few friends. So you feel a bit bored in life. I believe you can join some clubs to find friends with common
interests. You can also develop some hobbies, such as playing the guitar, swimming, painting. Lastly, you can’t get
along with your parents. It’s such a great way for you to talk to them when both of you are available.
Hope you find my advice helpful.
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文主要是根据Bill的问题给他提出一些建议，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简述Bill的问题；
第二步，针对他的问题提出自己相应的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①get sick生病
②common interests共同兴趣
③get along with与……相处得好
④available有空的，有闲暇的
[高分句型]
①Second, you are so shy that you have few friends.（so … that引导的结果状语从句）
②It’s such a great way for you to talk to them when both of you are available.（it作形式主语）
11．（23-24八年级下·四川内江·阶段练习）假如你是Li Hua，上周你的学校举行了一次关爱贫困生
的志愿者活动，下面请你给你的朋友Li Ming写一封信，告诉他你的志愿者活动。时间：上周六
地点、活动：参观希望小学
1. 分发食物；
2. 帮忙打扫卫生 ；
3. 听老师讲一些贫困生的故事 ；
4.在操场募捐。
要求：
1. 句子通顺，语意连贯；
2. 包括表格中所有提示内容，但不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3. 不少于80词。
提示：希望小学hope school 操场playground
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【答案】例文
Dear Li Ming,
Last Saturday we visited a hope school. It’s a great way to to know some other children’s life.
We had a party with the students there and gave out food there. We also helped them clean up their
classrooms. The head teacher told some stories about some hardworking students who are from very poor
families. And in order to raise money for them, we held a big sale in our playground the next day. We raised a lot
of money.
I think being a volunteer is really great and I would like to help more people. The volunteer work makes a
big difference to me.
Yours,
Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍上周六去参观了希望小学；
第二步，详细介绍为希望小学的孩子们做的事情；
第三步，书写结语，介绍自己从志愿者活动中得到的收获以及志愿者活动对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①give out 分发
②clean up 打扫干净
③in order to 为了
④raise money 筹钱
⑤make a difference 对……有影响
[高分句型]
①The head teacher told some stories about some hardworking students who are from very poor families.（who引
导定语从句）
②I think being a volunteer is really great and I would like to help more people.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
12．（23-24八年级下·浙江绍兴·阶段练习）假设你是Li Ming，你的英国笔友David半个月前来绍兴
交流学习。以下是他发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给他回一封邮件。
要求：(1) 邮件中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
(2) 80—100词，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ming,
How is everything going? I have a hard time these days. As you know, I’m still not used to the life in
Shaoxing. Sometimes it’s easy for me to get sick. My parents make me spend most of my free time on study but it
makes me very tired and bored. I really want to join in some volunteer activities to improve myself. Could you
give me some advice? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
David
Dear David,
I’m sorry to hear that you are going through a hard time.
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear David,
I’m sorry to hear that you are going through a hard time. Here are some suggestions for you.
Firstly, try to do some sports and eat more vegetables to keep healthy. Learning is important, but your body is
also important. As you know, health always comes first. I think you must be used to the life soon. Secondly, it’s a
good idea to make a plan for your daily study. Of course, you also need to have a break when you are tired. All
work and no play will make you become a dull boy. Thirdly, it is good for you to attend some volunteer activities.
Last but not least, why not talk to your parents about your feelings and situations? They will surely understand
you.
I hope my advice helps.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：邮件内容已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，提出建议；
第二步，从健康、学习、志愿活动以及父母等方面提出建议；
第三步，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②Last but not least最后但同样重要的是
③be used to习惯于
[高分句型]
①You need to have a break when you are tired.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Thirdly, it is good for you to attend some volunteer activities.（动词不定式作主语）13．（23-24八年级下·湖北襄阳·阶段练习）学校校报正在开展以“我服务，我快乐，我成长”为主
题的志愿服务征文活动，请你根据提示用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次你践行志愿服务的故事，与大家一
起分享。
1. 写作要点提示：
1） 故事发生的时间、地点、原因；
2） 故事发生的具体过程（你是如何帮助或奉献他人的）；
3） 你的收获或感受。
2. 要求：
1） 词数：80词左右；
2） 短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3） 文中不得出现真实姓名、班级和学校名称。
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Volunteering in the school library
Many people do volunteer work when they are free, so do I. I volunteered to clean the school library last
weekend because I wanted to create a clean place for others to read.
Last Saturday morning, I swept the floor. The school library was so big that I couldn’t finish the work
quickly. Besides, I cleaned some of the bookcases carefully. I asked my friends to help me, so we finished it
quickly. Then, we put those books in order. It was difficult for us because there were too many books.
Although I felt tired that day, I still got a feeling of satisfaction. I hope to bring beauty to people by my work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍去做了什么；
第二步，具体介绍故事发生的过程；第三步，介绍收获或感受。
[亮点词汇]
①volunteer to do sth 志愿做某事
②ask sb to do sth 叫某人做某事
③put...in order 把……放好
④hope to do sth 希望做某事
[高分句型]
①I volunteered to clean the school library last weekend because I wanted to create a clean place for others to read.
（because引导的原因状语从句）
②The school library was so big that I couldn’t finish the work quickly.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）
14．（23-24八年级下·湖南长沙·阶段练习）社区卫生服务站 (Community Health Center) 正在招募志愿者
来帮助人们了解健康生活知识。假设你是李华，你想申请成为一名志愿者，请根据以下提示，给卫生服
务站的张医生写一封自荐信。
内容提示：
1. Why do you want to do the volunteer job?
2. What’s your advice about healthy life?
3. When are you free to do the job?
要求：
1. 词数：80左右；
2. 内容完整，条理清晰，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Doctor Zhang,
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【答案】参考范文：
Dear Dr.Zhang,My name is Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m writing to you about volunteering in the Community Health
Center.
I want to do the volunteer job because I can get a strong feeling of satisfaction. I believe I can do this job
well. I’m outgoing and patient. I have good living habits.
Here is my advice about healthy life. First, we should eat more healthy food and less junk food. Good eating
habits can help us stay healthy. Second, we’d better get up and go to bed early. We shouldn’t stay up late. Finally,
it’s important for us to exercise every day.
I can do the volunteer job on weekends. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封自荐信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使
用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍个人情况，表达想成为一名志愿者的意愿；
第二步，表达想成为一名志愿者的原因；
第三步，陈述关于健康生活的建议；
第四步，表达可以参与的时间以及愿望。
［亮点词汇］
① get a strong feeling of satisfaction 获得强烈的满足感
② stay healthy 保持健康
③ stay up late 熬夜
［高分句型］
① I believe I can do this job well. (宾语从句)
② Finally, it’s important for us to exercise every day. (it作形式主语)
15．（23-24八年级下·辽宁葫芦岛·阶段练习）在学习之余，你都做哪些事情来使自己的校外生活丰
富而有意义呢？《学生生活》杂志社以“What do I do out of school?”为题举行征文活动，请你从自我提升、
尽家庭义务、履行社会责任几方面，谈谈自己的做法。
要求：1.表达正确、语句通顺。
2.短文必须包括上述所提示的内容。
3.80—100词。What do I do out of school?
In my free time, I do many things to make my life colorful and meaningful.
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What do I do out of school?
I my free time, I do many things to make my life colorful and meaningful.
First of all, I do sports after school to keep healthy. I usually play basketball with my friends in the park. On
weekends, I go to the library to read interesting books. In this way, I improve myself a lot. Secondly, I often help
my parents do housework, such as cleaning the rooms, taking out rubbish and so on. I think it’s my duty to do
housework at home. What’s more, I often go to the old people’s home to make the old people happy and
sometimes I help to clean the city park.
I think my life out of school is meaningful. I have a lot of fun.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：从自我提升、尽家庭义务、履行社会责任几方面介绍自己的校外生活，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，从自我提升、尽家庭义务、履行社会责任几方面介绍自己的校外生活；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①on weekends在周末
②such as例如
[高分句型]
①On weekends, I go to the library to read interesting books. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②I think my life out of school is meaningful. (宾语从句)
16．（23-24八年级下·辽宁抚顺·阶段练习）假如你所在的社区在招募志愿者。假设你是李华，想成
为一名志愿者，请你用英文给社区志愿者协会写一封邮件，谈谈你能做的志愿者工作。内容提示：
1、想成为志愿者及原因；
2、能做的工作：打扫城市公园；到老人之家做些事情；张贴标语；分发通知……
要求：1、80 词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2、内容可适当发挥，使行文连贯。
Dear madam,
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in No. 1 Middle School.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear madam,
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in No. 1 Middle School. I want to be a volunteer, because helping other
people makes me feel good. It’s also a good chance for me to improve myself. I can do many things. For example,
I can help clean up the city parks. I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old
people at the Old People’s Home. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clothes. I can also hand out
leaflets and put up notices. I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.
I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文的人称为第一人称，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍自己信息；
第二步，介绍想成为志愿者的原因，具体能做的工作；
第三步，结束语，期待回复。
［亮点词汇］
① At the same time同时
② the elderly老人
③ hand out分发
［高分句型］
① I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.（宾语从句）
② I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s
Home. （含有so的并列句）
17．（23-24八年级下·安徽合肥·阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Helen经常生病不舒服，
请根据要点提示，给她写封邮件，给她提供一些意见。
内容提示：
1.多锻炼；
2.健康饮食；
3.养成好习惯……
要求：
1.短文必须包含以上信息；
2.内容可适当发挥，以保证内容丰富与完整；
3.文章不可出现真实的人名、地名及校名；
4.词数：60-80。作文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Helen,
I’m sorry to hear that you often fall ill. Now let me give you some advice.
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Yours,
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【答案】One possible version：
Dear Helen.
I’m sorry to hear that you often fall ill. Now let me give you some advice.
First, you must take much exercise as often as possible. If you don’t have enough exercise, you’ll be easy to
feel sick. And you may get ill easily, too. You can try different sports, walking, running, dancing and so on.
Second, you should have healthy meals. Remember to eat some fruit and vegetables every day. If possible, you
need to eat some special food like corns. Finally, you need to have some good habits such as having breakfast,
keeping away from junk food, getting enough sleep and so on. They can help you keep in good health.
Hope they can work very well. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给要点提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之
间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，给Helen提供一些建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take exercise锻炼身体
②get ill生病
③healthy健康的
④special特殊的
⑤habit习惯
⑥keep away from远离[高分句型]
If you don’t have enough exercise, you’ll be easy to feel sick.(if引导条件状语从句)
重难语篇拔高练
18．（23-24八年级下·重庆沙坪坝·阶段练习）劳动最光荣，劳动创造美好生活，劳动也是学生的必
修课。做家务是青少年最实际的劳动。有的人认为做家务对青少年很有帮助，有的却认为这是浪费时间
你对做家务的观点是什么？请谈谈你家人分别做些什么家务？你有何感想？
标题：My Idea About Doing Housework
词汇：doing housework, helpful, a waste of time, do the dishes, make the bed, sweep the floor, share housework,
a clean and comfortable house, the more...the better, the more...the earlier,
My Idea About Doing Housework
Should teenagers do housework? Different people have different ideas. Some people think doing housework
is
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My Idea About Doing Housework
Should teenagers do housework? Different people have different ideas. Some people think doing housework
is necessary, while others think it is meaningless. As for me, I think it is very important for everyone to take part
in labor.
At home I often do some chores, such as cleaning the floor, washing the dishes, making the bed. My mother
always cooks for us, and my father often sweeps the floor. At school, I often help teachers or other classmates do
some cleaning. Besides these, I still take an active part in some garbage sorting activities in the community. By
doing so, I can not only keep my body strong but also get a lot of new knowledge. The most important thing is
that I improve my life skills for my future.
Labor makes me feel very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求以“My Idea About Doing Housework”为题，写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏
写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，谈谈自己对劳动的看法；
第二步，具体介绍自己和家人经常做的劳动；
第三步，书写结尾，介绍自己在劳动中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take an active part in 积极参加
②such as 例如
③a lot of 许多
[高分句型]
①The most important thing is that I improve my life skills for my future.（表语从句）
②Some people think doing housework is necessary, while others think it is meaningless.（宾语从句）
19．（23-24八年级下·河南周口·阶段练习）中学生在学习、生活中会遇到各种问题和烦恼。遇到困
难的时候总是要想办法解决。请你根据以下写作要点和要求，并以“The problems I meet in life”为题，写
一篇英语短文，介绍你曾经遇到的困难以及克服困难的经历。
提示：
要求：1.叙述要有条理，层次分明，语言通顺；
2.词数：70左右。
The problems I meet in life
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【答案】例文：The problems I meet in life
Life is full of problems and challenges. One of the problems I once met was that I didn’t know how to make
friends in a new place.
I used to be a shy person, so when I moved to a new school in Zhengzhou, I found it difficult to make
friends. At first, I felt upset. One day, a girl called Linda in my class came to chat with me. She even told me some
funny stories to make me laugh. Her warmth moved me deeply. With her help, I become more and more outgoing.
We have become friends who share almost everything. I also have my own circle of friends.
I feel lucky to have a friend like Linda. It’s she that has changed my life. I’ll help people in need like her in
the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材: 本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态: 时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示: 写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给要点，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，点出遇到的问题是什么；
第二步，讲述解决问题的过程，即如何解决问题的；
第三步，描述感受。
[亮点词汇]
① be full of 充满
② chat with sb. 与某人聊天
③ with one’s help 在某人的帮助下
[高分句型]
① We have become friends who share almost everything.（定语从句）
② It’s she that has changed my life.（强调句式）
20．（23-24八年级下·浙江杭州·阶段练习）假如你是李平，最近收到英国朋友 Olivia 的电子邮件。
请阅读后回复。
注意：
1.词数80个左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ping,
How are you these days? I cleaned up the city park yesterday. Unluckily, I had a cold and
sore throat after it. Can you give me some advice to get better? By the way, I heard youvolunteered last week too. What did you do? Why did you do the volunteer work? How was
your feeling? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Olivia
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【答案】例文
Hi, Olivia,
I’m so glad to hear from you! I’m very sorry to hear that you have a cold and sore throat. To get better quickly,
you should see the doctor first and not just stay at home and do nothing. Be sure to follow the doctor’s advice and
take medicine on time.
Last week, I went to an old people’s home. I brought them some flowers and I helped them do the cleaning. I
also told old people jokes to make them happy. Doing volunteer work can make me feel better. And it gives me a
sense of achievement and a sense of satisfaction. I felt very happy when I saw their happy faces at that time.
I hope you will be better soon and I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，就对方生病给出建议；
第二步，介绍自己上周的志愿活动；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①see the doctor看医生②take medicine on time准时吃药
③do the cleaning打扫卫生
④at that time在那时
[高分句型]
①I felt very happy when I saw their happy faces at that time. (when引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope you will be better soon and I am looking forward to your reply. (省略that的宾语从句和并列句）
