20250507-安阳市2025 届高三第三次模拟考试
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Last summer, a group of friends who loved adventures-brave Jack, nature-
loving Lily, and energetic Tom-made a brave decision to go on a mountain-hiking
trip. They were really excited.They couldn't wait to see the beautiful views on the
mountain and test how far they could go in body and mind.
When they started climbing, the sun was shining brightly. The path looked easy,
but it was not as simple as it seemed. They talked and laughed happily. Their laughter
spread through the valleys. They really enjoyed the fresh air and the wonderful natural
beauty around them. The birds were singing, and the leaves were moving gently in the
wind. lt was like a beautiful picture.
But as they climbed higher, the weather changed suddenly. Dark clouds came
quickly and covered the sky. A strong wind started to blow hard. Then it rained
heavily, and the path became very slippery. Lily , who was walking at the back , lost
her balance and slipped. She twisted(扭伤)her ankle and cried out in pain. As soon as
Jack and Tom heard her, they ran back to help. But they found themselves in a
difficult situation. It was too dangerous to keep climbing because of the rain, and
going down the steep(陡峭的) and slippery path was also very hard.
Finally, they found a small and wet cave to stay in. The wind outside was
blowing loudly like a wild animal. The rain just kept falling. Jack and Tom tried to
make Lily feel better, but they were also worried. They didn't have much food, and it
was getting colder. They knew they had to find a way out quickly. They were thinking
about all the bad things that might happen if they couldn't leave , but they still hoped
they could find a safe way out.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, Jack remembered his emergency whistle in his backpack.
Paragraph 2: After a while, they heard voices approaching.
20250507-安阳市2025 届高三第三次模拟考试
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Last summer, a group of friends who loved adventures-brave Jack,
nature-loving Lily, and energetic Tom(主要人物出场，老师特别善良，特点都给你们了)-made a brave
decision to go on a mountain-hiking trip. They were really excited. They couldn't
wait to see the beautiful views on the mountain and test how far they could go in
body and mind.(交代故事背景信息)
When they
started
climbing
(又开始你能想到？), the sun was shining brightly(环境描写). The
path looked easy, but it was not as simple as it seemed. They talked and laughed
happily. Their laughter spread through the valleys( 无灵主语句). They really enjoyed
the fresh air and the wonderful natural beauty around them. The birds were
singing, and the leaves were moving gently in the wind.(环境描写，寓情于景) It was like a
beautiful picture.
But as they climbed higher, the weather changed suddenly(冲突1). Dark clouds
came quickly and covered the sky( 无灵主语句，环境描写). A strong wind started to blow
hard. Then it rained heavily, and the path became very slippery. Lily , who was
walking at the back , lost her balance and slipped(冲突2). She twisted(扭伤)her ankle
and cried out in pain. As soon as Jack and Tom heard her, they ran back to help.
But they found themselves in a difficult situation. It was too dangerous to keep
climbing because of the rain, and going down the steep
( 陡峭的
) and slippery path
(动名词
短语做主语) was also very hard.
Finally, they found a small and wet cave to stay in. The wind outside was
blowing loudly like a wild animal.(环境描写) The rain just kept falling. Jack and Tom
tried to make Lily feel better, but they were also worried. They didn't have much
food, and it was getting colder( 冲突3). They knew they had to find a way out
quickly. They were thinking about all the bad things that might happen if they
couldn't leave , but they still hoped they could find a safe way out.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, Jack remembered his emergency whistle in his backpack.
Paragraph 2: After a while, they heard voices approaching.
一、类型分析与续写构思
项目
内容
续写类型
情节类 · 危机突发→自救获援型（典型冒险类情节）
构思方向
团队协作 + 求救自救 + 外援获救 + 情感升华（信任、勇气、友
谊）
布局思路
悬念（吹哨）→等待（心理转折）→援助出现（反转）→成功脱险
（升华）
提炼框架
①动用应急工具 → 信念不放弃②心理描写与人物对话 → 情感升
华③外部援助到来 → 环境转变④安全脱险，总结收获 → 升华主
题
实施建议
注意时间衔接与天气变化
角色个性一致：Jack 果断、Lily 坚强、Tom 积极
使用非谓语、倒装、定语从句等加分句式
二、续写时注意事项与设计建议
1. 原文承接点：
类别
内容
事件承接
从“困在山中”“受伤”“暴雨”“饥寒交迫”出发，设计求救
方式与等待过程
人物承接
三人性格明确：Jack 主导行动，Lily 受伤但坚强，Tom 协助与安
慰
环境承接
雨大风猛、山路湿滑、藏身山洞，体现自然威胁
情感承接
担忧 → 希望 → 互相鼓励 → 获得安全感与友谊升华
2. 设计建议：
内容
建议
巧妙设置
可引入动物声或人声误导再确认制造小悬念；也可让救援者是意
外发现他们（如附近搜救者）
心理变化
从恐惧不安→希望→激动→安心，推动情节发展
语言使用
使用非谓语（Feeling hopeless, he…），定语从句（the man who
appeared from the fog），强调句等语法点
内容
建议
情节推进
保持“时间+空间+心理”的线性进展，合乎现实逻辑
三、Story Mountain 故事结构分析
阶段
内容
Introduction（介绍）
三人徒步登山，兴奋期待
Rising Action（上升）天气突变，Lily 受伤，困在山中
Climax（高潮）
找到山洞，情况恶劣，三人焦虑无助但不放弃
Falling Action（缓解）吹响哨子，听见人声，产生希望
Resolution（结局）
获救脱险，总结经验，情感升华
四、原文分析表格（核心元素分解）
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
Jack 果敢、Tom 积极、
Lily 坚韧
“Jack and Tom tried to make Lily feel
better.”
情感层次
兴奋 → 担忧 → 害怕
→ 希望 → 安心
“They were also worried.” “They still
hoped…”
关键情节点
天气突变，Lily 受伤，被
困山中，吹哨求救
“Lily...slipped.” “...a wet cave to stay in.”
语言特色
生动比喻、自然描写、感
官描写丰富
“The wind...like a wild animal.”
关键词分析
slippery, twisted,
emergency, hope, safe
与求生、自然、心理变化相关
心理描写
担心、痛苦、希望、安全
感
“They were also worried.” “...thinking
about all the bad things...”
动作描写
登山、滑倒、奔跑、寻
找、吹哨
“...ran back to help.” “found a
small...cave.”
环境描写
天气恶劣、山路险峻、山
洞简陋
“Dark clouds...strong wind...slippery
path.”
隐含主题
友情、勇气、自然力量、
自救互助
全文体现团队精神与成长
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
情感转折
从绝望转为希望，从担忧
转为安心
“Suddenly, Jack remembered...”
空间转换
山间→山洞→等待救援→
脱险
“...found a small and wet cave.”
时间过渡
早上阳光明媚→下午突变
→夜晚焦灼→天亮被救
“When they started climbing...But as they
climbed higher...”
3. 动作 / 心理 / 环境描写推荐英文例句（每类10 句，含翻译）
动作描写
Jack grabbed the whistle with trembling hands.杰克颤抖着双手抓起了口哨。
Tom leaned forward to shield Lily from the wind.汤姆向前倾身为莉莉挡风。
She struggled to sit up despite the pain.尽管疼痛，她仍努力坐起来。
Jack blew the whistle as hard as he could.杰克用尽全力吹响口哨。
Tom wrapped his coat around Lily.汤姆把外套裹在莉莉身上。
They huddled together in the narrow cave.他们在狭窄的山洞里挤在一起取暖。
Jack reached into his backpack quickly. 杰克迅速伸手进背包里。
He pressed his ear against the cave wall, listening.他把耳朵贴在洞壁上，仔细聆
听。
Lily held onto Tom's shoulder for support.莉莉扶着汤姆的肩膀站稳。
They waved desperately when they saw a flashlight.当他们看到手电筒光时，拼命
挥手呼救。
英文句子
中文翻译
Jack fumbled through his backpack, his fingers
trembling slightly.
Jack 手指微微颤抖地在背包里摸
索。
Tom sprang to his feet and rushed toward Lily
without hesitation.
Tom 毫不犹豫地跳起来冲向
Lily。
They huddled together, trying to stay warm in the
damp cave.
他们挤在一起，试图在潮湿的山
洞中保暖。
Lily gritted her teeth and tried to stand, but pain
Lily 咬紧牙关想站起来，但脚踝
英文句子
中文翻译
shot through her ankle.
一阵剧痛。
Jack blew the whistle with all his strength, hoping
someone would hear.
Jack 用尽全力吹响哨子，希望有
人能听见。
Tom gently supported Lily’s shoulders to keep her
from falling.
Tom 轻轻扶住Lily 的肩膀，防
止她跌倒。
They used a piece of cloth to bandage Lily’s ankle
temporarily.
他们用布临时包扎了Lily 的脚
踝。
He wiped the rain from his eyes and scanned the
distance.
他擦去眼中的雨水，环顾远方。
Their hands were numb, but they kept working to
keep the fire alive.
他们的手已经麻木，却依旧努力
维持火种。
Jack signaled with his flashlight into the misty
woods.
Jack 用手电筒向雾气缭绕的树林
中发出信号。
心理描写
Fear crept into his heart like a cold shadow.恐惧像冷影一般爬上了他的心头。
Lily felt helpless, but she didn’t want to give up.莉莉感到无助，但她不想放弃。
A mixture of hope and doubt flashed across Jack’s mind.希望与怀疑交织在杰克心
中闪现。
Tom’s heart sank as the wind grew louder.随着风声变大，汤姆的心沉了下去。
They were mentally exhausted, but their spirits remained strong.他们在精神上已筋
疲力尽，但意志仍坚定。
Jack was haunted by the fear of what might go wrong.杰克被可能出错的恐惧困扰
着。
Relief washed over them when they heard human voices.当他们听到人的声音时，
一股如释重负的感觉涌上心头。
A sense of guilt weighed on Jack’s shoulders.一股愧疚感压在杰克肩上。
The uncertainty of the situation made them anxious.局势的不确定性令他们焦虑。
For a moment, they felt utterly lost.他们有一刻完全感到迷失。
英文句子
中文翻译
Fear gripped his heart as the wind howled
outside.
外面风声呼啸，他心中被恐惧紧紧攫
住。
Doubt crept into their minds, threatening to
shake their hope.
疑虑悄然滋生，威胁着他们的希望。
Lily fought back tears, determined not to be a
burden.
Lily 强忍泪水，决心不成为负担。
Jack’s heart sank when he saw how pale Lily
looked.
当Jack 看到Lily 苍白的脸色时，心顿
时沉了下去。
A sense of helplessness overwhelmed them in
the darkness.
黑暗中，一种无助感涌上心头。
Hope flickered in their eyes at the distant
sound.
远处的声音点燃了他们眼中的希望。
Guilt gnawed at Tom for not noticing Lily’s
injury earlier.
Tom 因没早发现Lily 受伤而自责不
已。
Jack kept telling himself to stay strong for his
friends.
Jack 不断提醒自己要为朋友坚强。
Relief flooded over them when the footsteps
got closer.
当脚步声越来越近时，一种如释重负
的感觉涌上心头。
Determination replaced fear in his chest as he
blew the whistle.
当他吹响口哨时，内心的恐惧被坚定
取代。
环境描写
英文句子
中文翻译
The sky turned a menacing shade of gray, heavy
with impending rain.
天空变成威胁般的灰色，预示着
大雨将至。
Trees bent under the force of the wind, their leaves
torn away.
树木在强风中弯曲，叶子被吹得
七零八落。
Rain hammered the ground, creating small streams
on the trail.
雨水猛烈地击打地面，在小道上
形成了小溪。
The cave walls were damp and cold, covered with 山洞的墙壁又湿又冷，长满了苔
英文句子
中文翻译
moss.
藓。
Thunder rumbled in the distance, echoing through
the mountains.
雷声在远处轰鸣，在山间回荡。
Darkness fell quickly, and visibility dropped to
almost nothing.
天很快黑了下来，几乎什么也看
不见。
Mist curled around the trees, adding to the sense of
isolation.
雾气缠绕在树间，增添了孤立
感。
A chill hung in the air, biting into their skin.
空气中弥漫着寒意，刺入皮肤。
The forest that once looked peaceful now seemed
haunting.
先前看着似乎很平静的深林变得
吓人。
The wind howled through the trees like a wild beast.风在树林间咆哮，像一头野
兽。
Cold droplets trickled from the cave roof.冰冷的水珠从洞顶滴落。
The fog wrapped around them like a thick blanket.雾像厚毯一样将他们包裹。
The rain pounded against the rocks relentlessly.雨无情地拍打着岩石。
Darkness swallowed the mountain trail.黑暗吞噬了山间小路。
Their breaths formed small clouds in the freezing air.他们的呼吸在寒冷空气中形成
小团雾气。
A flash of lightning lit up the gloomy cave for a second.一道闪电照亮了昏暗的洞穴
一瞬。
Every gust of wind brought a chill that cut through their clothes.每一阵风都带来穿
透衣物的寒意。
The mountain seemed to be asleep under the stormy sky.在暴风雨的天空下，山仿
佛沉睡着。
The forest beyond was a wall of black silhouettes.前方的森林像一堵黑色的剪影
墙。
高级词替换分类总结（
✅
5 组 · 场景分类）
场景常用词
高阶替换词
情绪scared petrified / alarmed / uneasy
天气rain
downpour / torrential rain / rainfall
动作run
rush / dash / sprint
声音loud
deafening / piercing / thunderous
看见see
spot / notice / catch sight of
4. 地道搭配、固定表达与词法解析
常见搭配和表达（含语法点）
表达
语法点
示例句
翻译
blow the whistle
动宾结
构
Jack blew the whistle in the
storm.
杰克在暴风雨中吹响
了口哨。
wrapped…
around…
短语动
词
He wrapped his jacket around her
shoulders.
他把夹克裹在她肩
上。
find oneself doing
sth.
固定结
构
They found themselves trapped in
the cave.
他们发现自己被困在
洞穴中。
too…to…句式
比较结
构
It was too dangerous to go down
the path.
路太危险，无法下
山。
not much… left
表数量They didn’t have much food left. 他们所剩食物不多。
可积累语料
单词 / 短
语
词性
词
义
近义词
反义词
例句1
例句2
slippery
adj.
滑
的
slick, greasy
rough,
dry
The path was
slippery due to the
rain.
Slippery roads are
dangerous for
drivers.
twist one’s
ankle
短语
扭
伤
脚
踝
sprain one’s
ankle
heal
one’s
ankle
Lily twisted her
ankle on the wet
path.
He twisted his
ankle while
hiking.
emergency
whistle
n.短紧
survival
whistle
—
Jack used the
emergency
Always carry an
emergency whistle
单词 / 短
语
词性
词
义
近义词
反义词
例句1
例句2
语
急
口
哨
whistle to signal
help.
in the wild.
find a way
out
v.短
语
找
到
出
路
figure out a
solution
get stuck
They hoped to
find a way out
before night.
It took them hours
to find a way out
of the maze.
hope
n./v.
希
望
expectation,
optimism
despair
She held onto
hope in the
darkness.
They never lost
hope despite the
danger.
5. Possible Versions(3)
【Version 1】Paragraph 1
Suddenly, Jack remembered his emergency whistle in his backpack.
Realizing( 现在分词做伴随动作) it might be their only hope, he grabbed it quickly and
blew it with all his strength( 动作描写). The sharp sound echoed through the
mountains(无灵主语句，环境描写), barely
audible
over the roaring wind
(adj 做补语). Tom helped
steady Jack
to
stand
more
higher
( 人物动作刻画，衔接原文), his eyes scanning the foggy
trail for signs of help(独立主格刻画人物). Lily, in pain but
trying
to stay strong
(介词短语，现在分词做主
语补语), squeezed Jack’s arm. ‘Keep blowing,’ she urged. Minutes passed like
hours(无灵主语句，时间过渡). They were soaked to the bone, shivering in the cold air(现在分词短语做主
语补语). Still, Jack didn’t give up. He blew again and again, until his lips hurt and his
arms ached(刻画人物). Just when he was about to stop, a faint response came—another
whistle(无灵主语句). All three of them froze(人物神态描写). Then Jack blew one last time, this
time with a smile on his face. Somewhere in the distance, footsteps began to close
in(无灵主语句).
Paragraph 2
After a while, they heard voices approaching. A team of mountain rescuers
emerged from the mist, carrying
torches and medical kits
( 现在分词做伴随动作). One
immediately knelt beside Lily, checking her ankle( 现在分词做伴随动作)( 救援动作串). ‘She’ll be
okay,’ he said reassuringly. Jack felt a surge of relief. The team offered them dry
jackets and energy bars( 救援用品). As they
huddled
under a temporary tent
, Tom
looked at Jack and said, ‘Good thing you remembered the whistle.’ Jack nodded,
humbled by the experience(过去分词做主语补语). Their return journey was slow but safe,
guided
by professionals
(过去分词做原因状语). Each step down the mountain felt like a step
back into safety.(无灵主语句，刻画人物心理) As
the trees cleared and the
edge
of
houses
came
into sight(无灵主语句), they all looked back in silence(人物神态描写). That hike had changed
them. It taught them about trust, quick thinking, and inner strength.
亮点搭配和词汇
sharp sound echoed
squeezed Jack’s arm
shivering in the cold air
a faint response came
emerged from the mist
surge of relief
guided by professionals
情绪描写亮点
trying to stay strong
humbled by the experience
felt a surge of relief
动作描写亮点
blew with all his strength
helped steady Jack
squeezed Jack’s arm
offered energy bars
可积累语料 / 高阶替换
高级替换: cold → freezing, tired → weary, wet → drenched
固定搭配: surge of relief, huddled under
联想词: echo, rescue, teamwork, fear, signal
例句: The whistle echoed across the hills. / They huddled together to keep warm. / A
surge of hope filled him.
【Version 2】Paragraph 1
Suddenly, Jack remembered his emergency whistle in his backpack. With a
flash of hope(介词短语做伴随动作), he grabbed it and blew hard(动作描写), the sound cutting
through the wind like a cry for help(独立主格). They waited, listening
for any sign
(现在分
词做伴随动作). The rain tapped steadily on the rocks(无灵主语刻画雨). Jack tried again, more
determined
this time
( 过去分词或adj 做补语). Tom leaned out of the cave entrance,
scanning
the forest
(现在分词做伴随动作). ‘Nothing yet,’ he muttered. Lily gritted her teeth,
trying to fight the pain(现在分词做伴随动作). To keep spirits up(目的状语), Jack told a funny story
from their last hike. They all chuckled weakly, even Lily. ‘We’ll be fine,’ Jack
said, though doubt lingered in his eyes(无灵主语句刻画人物神态). Then, faint but clear(adj 做补语), a
voice echoed back( 无灵主语句) They sat up, hope rekindled( 独立主格刻画人物神态). Jack blew
again, and this time the answer was nearer.
Paragraph 2
After a while, they heard voices approaching. Out of the rain emerged two
rescuers(完全倒装句), one holding a GPS(独立主格), the other a first-aid kit(独立主格). They acted
quickly, wrapping
Lily’s ankle
and offering
food and water
(现在分词做伴随动作). ‘You're
lucky you had that whistle,’ one said with admiration. Tom thanked them
repeatedly, while
Jack
sat quietly
, still
processing
everything
(现在分词做伴随动作). They
were led out, their feet slipping occasionally but supported by steady hands(独立主格
刻画被救画面). The forest no longer looked threatening; it felt like part of a lesson (无灵主语
句). Reaching
the base
(现在分词做伴随动作), Jack looked up at the fading mountain. The
storm had tested their courage, but it hadn’t beaten them()无灵主语句. In that moment,
they knew something had changed. They weren’t just friends anymore—they
were survivors(递进句式).
亮点搭配和词汇
cutting through the wind
a cry for help
doubt lingered in his eyes
hope rekindled
slipping occasionally
supported by steady hands
processed everything
情绪描写亮点
hope rekindled
trying to fight the pain
chuckled weakly
doubt lingered
动作描写亮点
blew hard
told a funny story
sat up
wrapped Lily’s ankle
thanked them repeatedly
可积累语料 / 高阶替换
高级替换: scared → unsettled, funny → amusing, dangerous → hazardous
搭配: cry for help, steady hands, rekindled hope
联想词: endurance, bond, survival, reflection, trust
例句: A cry for help echoed in the distance. / He felt unsettled but stayed calm. / The
group shared a strong bond after the rescue.
【Version 3】Paragraph 1
Suddenly, Jack remembered his emergency whistle in his backpack. His heart
raced(心理描写) as he pulled it out, his fingers trembling from the cold(独立主格刻画人物状态).
With all his strength, he blew into it, the shrill sound piercing the rain(独立主格刻画声音).
For a moment, nothing happened—only the storm answered(无灵主语句). Tom looked
around nervously while Lily leaned against the wall, pale and weak(adj 做主语补语). But
Jack didn’t give up; he kept blowing rhythmically, hoping( 现在分词做伴随动作)someone
might hear. His persistence was a silent promise: they would make it out(同位语从句解释说
明). Just then, a flicker of light appeared in the distance( 无灵主语句). Jack’s breath
caught( 人物心理描写). He blew again, louder this time(adj 做补语). The light paused, then
moved toward them(无灵主语句，或者理解为借代？). Tom shouted hoarsely(人物刻画吸纳接), waving his
arm frantically(现在分词做伴随动作). They held their breath as the light approached slowly.
Jack gripped Lily’s hand. Hope, long
buried
beneath fear
and
exhaustion
(过去分
词做主语补语), began to rise again
.
Paragraph 2
After a while, they heard voices approaching. Relief washed over them like a
wave( 无灵主语句，刻画心理). Moments later, two rescuers appeared, their faces kind and
serious(adj 做主语补语). “Are you hurt?” one asked, kneeling
beside Lily
(现在分词做伴随动作). They
nodded. The rescuers immediately offered warm blankets and assessed Lily’s
injury( 救援动作串). Jack watched as they worked—fast, calm, experienced(adj 并列做补语).
Tom, exhausted(过去分词或adj 做主语补语), gave Jack a weak thumbs-up. “You saved us,” he
whispered. As they were led down the mountain under large umbrellas(细节描写), Jack
looked back at the cave—now just a dark patch in the mountainside(名词做补语). The
fear and uncertainty had passed, but the experience left a deep mark(无灵主语句，刻画收
获). He realized they had learned something valuable: teamwork, courage, and
hope(名词并列凸显中心). They had started the hike as excited teens but were returning with
something more—resilience, and a shared story of survival(进一步升华).
亮点搭配和词汇
blew into it
piercing the rain
held their breath
relief washed over
assessed Lily’s injury
gave Jack a weak thumbs-up
a shared story of survival
情绪描写亮点
hope began to rise
relief washed over them
- fear and uncertainty had passed
动作描写亮点
pulled it out
blew into it
shouted hoarsely
gripped Lily’s hand
offered warm blankets
可积累语料 / 高阶替换
'trembling' = shaking slightly from cold or fear
高级替换: tired → exhausted, scared → terrified, help → assist
联想词: resilience, survival, cooperation, darkness, echo
例句: She trembled in the cold cave. / He was exhausted after the ordeal. / They relied
on cooperation to survive.
