【初中动态】英语微光——第六期

英语写作，是语言积累的沉淀，是逻辑思维的展现，更是初中生洞察生活、表达自我的绝佳载体。为持续夯实学生英语写作功底，丰富校园英语文化氛围，搭建优秀作品展示与交流的平台，我校初中英语组持续开展“英语微光”优秀作文展示活动。

经过老师们认真审阅、细致筛选、严格评优，英语微光第六期优秀习作正式公示！同学们笔触真挚、表达地道、逻辑缜密，在字里行间尽显少年思考与英语素养。让我们一同品读优秀范文，汲取写作力量，解锁高分技巧！

Hello everyone! I'd like to take this chance to introduce myself.

My name is Huang Yiyao. I'm 13 years old. I'm from China.I live in Henanwith my parents. I am a student. I'm in Class 1, Grade 7. I like Chinese food very much. My favourite food is rice, and my favourite sport is football. I have a pet. It's a dog. I often play with itafter school. It's very cute. We are friends. My favourite colour is white. My room is white, too. My room is small but very beautiful. In my room, I have a bed, a desk, a chair.My room is very tidy.

That's a little about me. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

Hello,everyone! My name is Yang Menghan. Let me tell you something about me.

I'm amiddle school student. I am in Class 1Grade 7. I have long black hair. l always wear my brown glasses. I love English very much. My English is great. My favourite colour is blue and my schoolbag is blue. My favorite fruit is the orange. I live with my parents in beautiful Changge. I likeanimals because they arevery cute. I like listening to music, I thinkit's relaxed to listen to music in myfreetime. I also like sports,They keepme healthy. Do you like sports?

This is me. Do you like me? Would you like to be my friend?

Hello ,everyone! My name is Xiao Jinbo.This is my uncle's farm. And it's a big farm. 

Look! The grass is so green. You can see many kinds of animals on the farm.Look at the pigs.They are black.How many pigs do you see? I see four.Look at the horses.They are brown.How many horses do you see? I see three.Look at the dogs.They are white and yellow.How many dogs do you see? I see one.

  I love my uncle's farm.It's a big and beautiful farm. Do you like my uncle's farm?

How time flies!and I often wonder what my life will be like in 20 years. With the fast development of technology, our lives will change a lot.

In 20 years, I will become a famous doctor and save many people with modern medical technology. It’s my honor to win others’respect. I will live in Beijing. My home will be smart, and there will be a lovely dog in my house. I will call him White Ball because of his soft white fur. I will usually go for a walk with him when I have free time. I’m very happy to spend time with him. I will also have a robot. It will cook and do some housework for me to reduce my stress. When I come back home after work, I can enjoy delicious food and save time to enjoy my life.

Although it’s far away from 2046, I think as long as I study hard, my dream can come true.

Last summer, I went to Yunnan with my family. The weather was fine and everyone felt excited.

On the first day, we visited the ancient town of Lijiang. We took lots of photos. On the second day, we visited Yulong Mountain. The fresh air made me feel peaceful. when I got to the top, the beautiful scenery took my breath away. After that, we tried some local food. It was delicious, especially the steamed chicken soup.

All in all, we were tired but happy. What a wonderful experience I had! I'll never forget it!

Last summer vacation, I visited my grandparents with my mum. My grandparents lived in a small village. I liked this village, because the people there were kind.

On the way, there were many trees and flowers. The beautiful scenery took my breath away. Soon, we arrived at my grandparents' house. Grandma was very happy to see us. She held my hands and asked what I was doing at school. After a little while, my grandpa took some delicious food for us. I was hungry, so I enjoyed the food. After that, my mum helped my grandparents clean the rooms. I played with the dog.

The trip was very interesting and happy. I love my family.

Last summer vacation, I went to LuoYang with my family. It was an unforgettable trip. 

 First, we visited many places such as LuoYi ancient city and the famous park. The ancient buildings there were so beautiful and I was excited to try wearing hanfu.Then we climbed LaoJun Mountain. Standing on it,I could see the beautiful scenery around. It was such an amazing experience. We also tasted many delicious food in LuoYang.

I really had a good time during this holiday. I not only had fun but also met someone friendly. How wonderful the trip is！

English is an important language, but many students find it hard to learn. As smart learners, we can use good ways to improve it.

First, take notes carefully in class and review them on time. Second, read English aloud every day and listen to English songs or short videos. It helps with pronunciation. Third, don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Try to speak English with classmates. We can also make word cards to remember new words.

Practice makes perfect. If we keep using these smart ways, we will make great progress in English.

How time flies! Many great changes have taken place in my life. I'd like to share them with you.

 When I was a pupil,I went to school on foot.But now I go to school by bus. In the past,I had more time to relax myself,but now I spend more time studying to improve myself.What's more,The way I study has changed a lot. I used to read books by myself,but now I listen to the teachers carefully, take notes and review them outside class.

 Although my life has changed, the feeling of love and happiness has not changed. I will still try my best to make greater progress.

Great changes have taken place in my life in the last few years.

First of all, my home has changed. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a bigger apartment.Besides, the way I study has improved a lot. I used to keep quiet in class, but now I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions with my classmates. What's more, my daily transport is also different. I used to walk to school with my parents, but now I take the bus with my friends every day. It is convenient for me to go to school.

My life has changed a lot. Thanks to these changes, I have a better life now, I will keep working hard and welcome more good changes.I believe my life will be better and better in the future.

结合第六期全部参评习作，初中英语组整理本期学生核心亮点与提分要点，供全体同学参考学习：

1. 紧扣热点，贴合考情：聚焦现在、过去、未来、成长等中考高频话题，素材新颖、与时俱进，摆脱陈旧套路。

2. 句式进阶，学以致用：熟练运用状语从句、宾语从句、递进句、让步句等初中重难点句型，句式丰富，拒绝单调简单句。

3. 逻辑缜密，衔接流畅：熟练使用 besides, however, finally, what’s more 等过渡词，段落衔接自然，文章结构完整。

4. 书写规范，细节满分：大小写、标点规范，语法错误极少，卷面整洁美观，做到内容与卷面双重加分。

每一篇优秀习作，都是日积月累的沉淀；每一次文字的精进，都是全力以赴的成长。“英语微光”活动始终致力于点亮每一位同学的英语书写之路，让热爱有展示的舞台，让努力有看得见的收获。

 热烈祝贺本期获评优秀的同学！愿你们保持热爱、笔耕不辍，在英语学习中不断突破自我！也希望全体同学以榜样为标杆，勤于积累、乐于动笔、善于打磨，夯实写作基础，精进语言能力。

微光汇聚，终成星河；以笔为翼，不负韶华。期待在下一期的微光舞台，遇见更多同学的精彩佳作！