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必修第二册 UNIT 5 MUSIC
佳作抢鲜背 学写作思路，背精彩范文(人与自我——自强不息)
作者的女儿简梦想成为一名歌手，在她的音乐老师玛丽的帮助下，简取得了很大
进步。突然有一天，简遭遇了车祸，自己不能站起来了，之后简再也没有提过唱
歌的话题……
精彩范文
One day ， however ， Mary came with good news .She told Jane the school
music festival was to be held the next month and that her classmates all
expected her to sing on behalf of her class.Jane’s eyes sparkled but responded
doubtfully，“Can I...？”Mary and I immediately assured her that she could
make it.In the following month ， with the help of Mary ， Jane kept on
practicing singing.Beautiful songs echoed in our house again and smiles began to
appear on her face. Finally the big day came when she could present herself.,
学习借鉴
1.富有表现力的副词
doubtfully，immediately
2.精彩的动作和神情描写
Jane’s eyes sparkled but responded doubtfully
3.提分高级句式
无灵主语句：
Beautiful songs echoed in our house again and smiles began to appear on her face.
1.perform vi.& vt.表演；履行；执行→performance n.表演；演技；表现
→performer n.表演者；演员
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子①The famous doctor is going to set out ________________ (perform) the operation，
so please keep calm.
②A wave of excitement and pride swept over me when they
___________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________.(情绪描写)
当他们在舞台上表演时，我感到既激动又自豪。
用法归纳——————————————
·perform a(n)...role in 在……中起……作用
perform an operation 进行手术
·put on/give a performance 表演
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佳句背诵 Without your timely help，I would not have performed so well in the
final exam.(感谢信)
如果没有你及时的帮助，我就不会在期末考试中考得这么好。
2.award vt.授予；判给；奖赏 n.奖，奖品；奖金；助学金
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①Learning that you ________________ (award) the medal，I am writing to express
my sincere congratulations to you.(祝贺信)
②___________________________________________________________________
，
I was so excited that tears welled up in my eyes.(心理描写)
接受这个奖的时候，我是如此激动以至于热泪盈眶。
③___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________，
she felt on top of the world，eyes twinkling with excitement.(心理描写)
因出色的表演而获奖后，她高兴极了，两眼闪烁着兴奋的光芒。,
用法归纳——————————————
·win/receive/get an award for sth 因……而得奖
take up an award 接受奖项
·award sth to sb＝award sb sth 授予/判给某人某物
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佳句背诵 When told I was awarded the first place in the writing contest，I stoodthere，frozen，surprise and joy surging through me.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)
当我被告知我在写作比赛中获得了第一名时，我站在那里，僵住了，惊喜和喜悦
涌上心头。
3.aim n.目的；目标 vi.& vt.力求达到；力争做到；瞄准 vt.目的是；旨在
→aimless adj.无目的的
以练促学 句式升级
The radio program was founded in 2016.It is aimed at providing a good platform for
the students to share their school life.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
→The radio program was founded in 2016，
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________.(定语从句)
→The radio program was founded in 2016，
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________.(分词短语作状语)
用法归纳——————————————
·achieve one’s aim 实现目标
take aim at 向……瞄准
with the aim of 有……的目的
·aim at 瞄准；目的在于
aim sth at sb/sth 用某物朝向/瞄准某人或某物
aim to do.../at doing... 旨在做……；力求达到……
be aimed at 目的是；旨在
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佳句背诵 I seized a stone and aimed it at the wolf，attempting to scare the
wolf away.(动作描写)
我抓住一块石头，把它瞄准狼，试图把狼吓走。
4.treatment n.治疗；对待；处理→treat n.乐趣；款待 vt.对待；治疗(cure)；招
待；款待
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①Seeing we were cold and hungry ，she invited us to her home and treated us____________ hot chocolate.
②At the moment I ___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________.(短文投稿，2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
现在我把英文报Youth作为我忠诚的朋友。
③I appeal to all the people ____________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
because all are born equal.(倡议书)
我呼吁所有人尊敬地对待残疾人，因为所有人生而平等。,
用法归纳——————————————
·under treatment 在治疗中
·treat sb as... 把某人看作……
treat sb to sth 用……招待某人，以……款待某人
treat sb with... 以……方式对待某人
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佳句背诵 To our great relief，the patients are under good treatment in the
central hospital.
使我们大为欣慰的是，病人们在中心医院得到了良好的治疗。
5.satisfaction n.满足；满意；欣慰→satisfy vt.使满意→satisfied adj.满意的
(content)→satisfactory adj.令人满意的→satisfying adj.令人满意的
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①Tired but ____________(satisfy)，I learned that everyone can make a difference to
a more beautiful campus.(活动介绍)
②With confidence，I was firmly convinced that I could get a ____________ (satisfy)
score in the next assignment.
③___________________________________________________________________
，
my father created a good learning atmosphere for me.Looking at my report card，
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________，
a smile spreading across his face.(心理描写)
为了满足我的需要，爸爸为我创造了一个好的学习氛围。看着我的成绩单，我爸爸满意地点了点头，脸上绽开了微笑。,
用法归纳——————————————
·with satisfaction 满意地
to one’s satisfaction 令某人满意的是
a sense of satisfaction 满足感
·satisfy one’s needs/demands 满足某人的需要
·be satisfied with 对……感到满意
be satisfied to do sth 对做某事感到满意
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佳句背诵
Finally，my hard work paid off—we were awarded an A，which gave me a great
sense of satisfaction.(2022·浙江1月卷)
最后，我的努力得到了回报——我们获得了A，这给了我巨大的满足感。
6.(be) absorbed in sth/sb被……吸引住；专心致志
以练促学 猜测词义/单句语法填空/补全句子
①As we all know ， plants can absorb nutrients from the earth around
them.____________
②So ____________ (absorb) in his work，Tom forgot to inform me of the time of the
meeting.
③___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________，
I’ve fallen in love with skiing and keep practicing it whenever possible.(分词短语作状
语)
我沉浸在冰雪活动中，已经爱上了滑雪，并且一有机会就坚持练习。,
用法归纳——————————————
absorb oneself in... 专心于；全神贯注于
absorb one’s attention 吸引某人的注意
absorb...into... 把……吸收进……
absorb...from... 从……中吸收……
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佳句背诵 The girl was sitting on the bench in the park，absorbed in the book in her
hands.女孩坐在公园的长凳上，全神贯注于她手里的那本书。
[联想] 与 be absorbed in 类似的结构还有：be lost in，be caught in，be buried
in，be devoted to，be occupied in，be involved in。
7.get through(设法)处理；完成；打通(电话)；通过；用完；熬过(困难时期)
以练促学 猜测词义/补全句子
①I managed to get through the hard work and the pain was worth it in the
end.____________
②I couldn’t get through to him because his telephone was out of order now and
then.____________
③Luckily，he got through the exam and his efforts paid off.____________
④The little boy got through all his money in just one week and had to ask his mom
for some more.____________
⑤Learning that you have difficulty _____________________________________
___________________________________________________________________，
I am writing to offer you some tips.(建议信)
得知你与同学相处有困难，我写信给你一些建议。,
用法归纳——————————————
get (...) across to... 被传达；被理解；把……给……讲清楚
get on 上(车、船等)；进展，进行
get off 下(车、船等)；离开；逃脱惩罚
get over 越过(墙等)；克服；从(疾病、损失等)中恢复过来
get along/on with 进展；与……相处
get down to (doing) sth 开始(做)某事
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佳句背诵 It was your encouragement and support that cheered me up and helped me
get through the hard times.(感谢信)
正是你的鼓励和支持使我振作起来，帮助我度过了困难时期。
1.句型公式：as引导定语从句
【教材原句】 As one virtual choir member said, “Music helps me to...forget my
problems.With music，I become someone else.”
正如一位虚拟合唱团成员所说：“音乐帮助我……忘记我的问题。有了音乐，我变成了另一个人。”
以练促学 单句语法填空/补全句子
①____________ you can see in the short video，not only can members of the Spoken
English Club serve as tourist guides for foreign tourists but they can also engage in the
National English Speech Contest.
②Most importantly，we have developed a deep friendship through these activities，
________ has doubled my joy!
③___________________________________________________________________
，
a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a great difference.(主旨升华)
众所周知，一个小小的善举可能足以起很大作用。
④___________________________________________________________________
，
it was her carelessness that resulted in the terrible accident.
正如报纸中报道的那样，是她的粗心导致了那场可怕的事故。,
用法归纳——————————————
关系代词as引导定语从句，as在从句中可作主语、宾语或表语。
·as引导非限制性定语从句时，有“正如”之意，位置灵活，可位于句首、句中
或句末。
·as引导限制性定语从句时，先行词常被the same，such，as，so等修饰。
·which引导非限制性定语从句，意为“这一点”，不可位于句首。
·as引导定语从句的常用句式有：
as is known to us all/as we all know 众所周知
as we can see 正如我们所看到的
as is reported 正如报道的那样
as is often the case 这是常有的事
as is mentioned above 正如上面所提到的
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佳句背诵 As an old Chinese saying goes, “A man who hasn’t been to the Great
Wall is not a true man”，and it’s almost a must for foreigners to visit in China.(建议
信)
中国有句古话，“不到长城非好汉”，外国人来中国旅游几乎是必须要去长城的。2.句型公式：the way作先行词的定语从句
【教材原句】 During those times，music can help you in the same way that it
helped me.
在那时，音乐可以帮助你，就像它曾经帮助我一样。
以练促学 补全句子
①She lowered her head ， feeling ashamed of the way
___________________________________________________________.(情绪描写)
她低下头，为自己在晚会上的行为羞愧不已。
②Before leaving the lab ， he checked the data in a way
___________________________________________________________________.
在离开实验室前，他以一种让我印象深刻的方式检查了数据。,
用法归纳——————————————
·the way后面的定语从句不缺主语和宾语时，定语从句用 in which或that引导，
也可省略关系词。
·当the/a way后面的定语从句缺少主语或宾语时，关系词用 that或which，作宾
语时可省略。
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佳句背诵 I got a lesson that it is the way (that/in which) you deal with problems
that matters.(主旨升华)
我得到了一个教训，重要的是你处理问题的方式。
维度一 语境辨义练——熟词生义/一词多义
1.写出加黑部分的词性和汉语意思
①Some parents will buy any high-tech toy if they think it will help their child，but
researchers said puzzles help children with math-related skills.(2020· 全 国 Ⅱ
卷)____________
②The project also resulted in a reduction in the amount of medicines used to
perform medical-imaging(医学影像) procedures.(2021·天津3月卷) ____________
③Whatever stage of life you’re at，wherever you go and whatever project you do
in GDA，you’ll create positive changes in a poor and remote community.(北京卷)
____________2.选出cure的汉语意思
A.vt.矫正，改正(某人的不良行为) B.vt.治愈；治好(疾病) C.vt.解决 D.n.药物；
疗法
①To make matters worse，Moth was diagnosed(诊断) with a serious disease.There
was no cure，only pain relief.______
②With the help of my parents and teachers I cured myself of some bad learning
habits and made progress in my study.______
③I finally managed to cure the rattling noise in my car.______
④It is a serious illness，but it can be cured.______
维度二 语境运用练——单句语法填空
1.I enjoyed the brilliant artworks and musical ____________ (perform) from your
home country.(2022·浙江1月卷)
2.Humor can make one ____________ (energy) in his work，study，and life.(江苏
卷)
3.Finally，doing housework gives children a sense of ____________ (satisfy) and
pride.
4.My classmates will always find me ________ (absorb) in those stories carried by
Youth.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
5.The ____________ (talent) girl has suffered from a strange disease，but now she is
under ________________ (treat) and her health has ____________ (gradual) picked
up.
6.The building ____________ (previous) belonging to him has brought in some
____________ (equip)，which has ____________ (able) guests to access the Internet
faster.
7.He was a tall man with a smiling face，and he had a powerful way ____________
could attract his students’ attention.
8.____________(assume) you are interested in it，please send an email to 123456@
sina.com.
9.____________ (origin) built by Emperor Qinshihuang and expanded and
strengthened in the Ming Dynasty，it became the world’s largest military structure.
10.This programme has set up a stage __________ some people can have their dreams
achieved.练一 单元话题作文(评论——评论线上音乐会)
1.根据提示，利用本单元所学知识完成作文
①这场在线音乐会证明是绝对精彩的，这让观众立刻爱上了它。(prove，fall in
love with，which引导非限制性定语从句)
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
②两所学校的表演者尽最大的努力用一首接一首的歌来娱乐观众。(performer)
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
③他们的表演无疑具有极高的质量，使观众能够享受几乎与现场表演一样的音乐
会。(performance，enable，现在分词短语作状语，定语从句)
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
④我沉浸在音乐会的每一秒，尤其是当来自英国的男孩和女孩们开始演唱中国古
典歌曲《梁祝》时，我被吸引住了。(be absorbed in，classical，when引导时间状
语从句)
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___________________________________________________________________
⑤他们表演歌曲的方式触动了我的心灵，缓解了我的压力。(perform，relieve，
the way作先行词的定语从句)
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
⑥我的确希望未来我们中国学生和我们的国际朋友有更多的机会相互了解和相互
学习。(opportunity，强调谓语)
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
2.使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇
___________________________________________________________________练二 续写能力升华(热考话题分步构思)
构思情节第二步：呈现助人过程
1.想到办法
①A good idea came/flashed into my mind.
我突然想到一个好主意。
②It suddenly occurred to me that I knew how to solve that problem.
我突然想起我知道怎样解决那个难题了。
2.助人动作描写
We began to collect money for the less fortunate people in our school district.Then
using the collected money we bought food，clothing and toys for these needy
people.
我们开始为我们学区里那些不幸的人募捐。然后我们用募捐来的钱为这些有需要
的人买了食物、衣服和玩具。
[小试身手]
On the road，the battery of his car was dead and he was very worried，not knowing
what to do.
①___________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________.At once
②___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________.
We chatted on the way into the village and found my friend easily.When we told my
friend what had happened ， my friend said that
③___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________.
He agreed and did as my friend suggested.
在路上，他的汽车电池没电了，他很担心，不知道该怎么办。我突然想到我知道
该做什么了。我立刻开车送他去附近村子我的朋友那里求助。我们在进村子的路
上聊天，很容易就找到了我的朋友。当我们告诉我的朋友所发生的事时，我的朋
友说我们最好买一块新电池，把旧电池换成新电池。他同意了，并按照我朋友的
建议去做了。
(提示：构思情节第三步见下一单元。)
