教学内容分析
初中英语书面表达是学生的薄弱环节,教师在教学中必须从基础抓起,尤其是在课堂上加强对
学生英语同步教学听、说、读、写的训练。本节课的写作要求是请学生根据自己身边的实际情
况,以“Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment” 为题写一篇80词左右的短文,给出对低
碳生活的建议。作文话题贴近生活,能够很好的吸引学生的写作兴趣。
2学情分析
初中生在写作方面有很多优点,他们大胆、热情、积极主动且富有想象力,但在写作习惯、语言
运用方面存在一些问题。他们需要尽快地从机械模仿、创造性模仿最后过度到语言的创造性
运用。
3教学目标
教学目标
(一)知识技能目标
1. 掌握环境污染的内容,能够提出有效的解决环境污染的措施。
2. 了解并掌握写作的的基本步骤,学会把握语篇的整体性、关联性和逻辑性。
3. 培养写作中的创新意识和想象力,学会运用正确的评价方式反思自己的写作
行为和结果。
(二)学习策略目标
1. 从字词到句子,再到文章的写作流程,形成谋篇布局的整体思维。
2. 采取小组合作形式.与同伴合作交流,互相帮助共同提高写作技能,树立写作
的自信心。
(三)情感目标
唤起学生对大自然的爱和拯救地球、保护环境的责任感,培养学生自主学习
意识和团队合作精神。
4重点难点
1、培养学生根据题目要求组织写作素材,运用“短语—句子—段落—文章”的思维模式,用
通顺、恰当得体的英语予以表达。
2、掌握书面表达的基本写作技巧,使学生了解谋篇的重要性,从而主动地培养谋篇的习惯、发
展谋篇的能力。
5教学过程
5.1 第一学时
5.1.1教学活动活动1【导入】Pre-writing
Task 1: Watch
Play a video “The earth song”and ask the students what they can see in the video.
Task 2: Discuss
Ask the students to discuss the environment problems around us.
活动2【讲授】while- writing
Task 1: Look
Ask students to look at the information. And find out the topic, tense and the
number of the words etc.
Task 2: Think
First let the students work in groups of four to get the key words. Teach the
students how to get the key words and how to use effective sentences to
complete a composition.
Then according to them, ask students to write a short passage.
After finishing writing, give some advice about two students’ works.
Task 3: Link
Give the students a few minutes to discuss how to make the
passage more effective, then askstudents to add somelink words into them.
Then ask the students to compare two passages, and find out three parts of the
passage. And ask them to add the beginning and the ending into their passages.
Task 4: CheckAsk students to change their passages to their partners and check them each
other. Let the students try to find out as many mistakes as they can.
活动3【作业】after-writing
Task 1: Summary
Ask students to think about What a perfect composition is and how to get a perfec
t composition. Emphasize the way of writing this
kind of composition.
Task 2:Homework
Ask students to write another passage as homework.
活动4【活动】teacher`s hope
We love the earth, we would like to live in a wonderful environment, so we must
protect the environment to save the earth. Everyone should make a contribution
to making our earth more beautiful.
活动5【活动】blackboard design
中考英语专题复习—书面表达
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
Look----Think----Link----Check
活动6【活动】teaching reflection
写作能全面反映学生的英语水平,它既能再现学生的英语基础知识,又能表现
学生灵活运用英语的能力。从本节课可以看出,学生的小组合作写作模式给学
生从审题到收集素材,再到写作文提纲和起草作文阶段都起到了很大的帮助作
用。这样的写作模式能让学生在共同的合作探究学习中对英语的基本句型和文章的结构布局,再到句子的润色加工等方面都有不同的收获。提高学生写作
能力的方法是多种多样的,只要教师能面对现实,以学生的实际出发,平时注重
加强训练,学生就能
不断完善自己的作文,逐步提高写作能力。