猜押 10 书面表达
3年真
猜押考点 考情分析 押题依据
题
1. 应用场景：申请信（如海外
学校交流）、倡议书（如低碳
生活）。
2023年6
月上海高
考英语 2. 热点话题：
近年题型包括邮件建议（2023年选中
书 面 表 2024年1
文课程）、演讲词（2024年倡导义务
达 月上海春
- 环保行动：设计校园环保方
献血）。
季高考英
案，结合数据与措施。
语
- 教育选择：文理分科利弊，
职业规划与兴趣结合。
一，申请信
2025届上海市高考3月教学质量监测英语试题
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你有意报考上海纽约大学（NYU Shanghai），上海纽约
大学将通过开展“校园日活动”（Open Campus Day）进行招生选拔，申请参加“校园日活
动”的学生必须先提交一封自述信，请你根据招生网站上公布的要求（如下所示）写自述信。
Applicants are required to independently compose a personal statement, elaborating
on their academic strengths, fields of interest, future plans, and reasons for
applying, among other aspects. (No more than 250 words)
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Dear Admissions Committee,
I am Li Hua, a senior student from Mingqi High School, and I am writing to express my strong
interest in participating in NYU Shanghai’s Open Campus Day.
My academic strengths lie in mathematics and science, where I have consistently excelled,
earning top grades and participating in national competitions. I am particularly passionate about
computer science and its potential to solve real-world problems. My future plan is to pursue a career
in artificial intelligence, focusing on developing technologies that can improve healthcare. NYU
Shanghai’s interdisciplinary approach and global perspective align perfectly with my aspirations. I
am drawn to the university’s diverse community and its emphasis on innovation and collaboration.
I believe NYU Shanghai will provide me with the resources and opportunities to grow
academically and personally. I am eager to contribute to the university’s vibrant community and to
learn from its diverse student body and faculty. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生有意报考上海纽约大学，上海纽约大学将通过开展
“校园日活动”进行招生选拔，申请参加“校园日活动”的学生必须先提交一封自述信，要
求考生按照要求写自述信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参与：participate in→ take part in
特别：particularly → exceptionally
解决：solve→ settle
追求：pursue → seek
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Hua, who is a senior student from Mingqi High School, and I am writing to expressmy strong interest in participating in NYU Shanghai’s Open Campus Day.
拓展句：I am Li Hua, a senior student from Mingqi High School, and I am writing to express my
strong interest in participating in NYU Shanghai’s Open Campus Day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My academic strengths lie in mathematics and science, where I have
consistently excelled, earning top grades and participating in national competitions.（运用了where
引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】My future plan is to pursue a career in artificial intelligence, focusing on developing
technologies that can improve healthcare.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
学易金卷：2025年高考第一次模拟考试
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
假设你是海平中学高三学生李明，你所在的社区将在暑假开设面向小学生的日间托管服务，
现招募社区高中生志愿者，要求每一位志愿者能根据自己的特长开设一门微课程。请写一封
应聘信(信中请不要出现真实的个人信息)，信的内容须包括：
1)简单的自我介绍；
2)你准备开设的微课程的名称和主要内容；
3)你开设这门微课程的理由。
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Ming from Class 1, Senior 3 of Haiping Middle School. I’m writing to apply for the
position to help the primary school students in our community.
I am very good at mathematics, and I often make some micro-courses for primary school
students. I plan to set up a micro-course, the name of which is “Mathematics in our daily life”. Thiscourse mainly introduces how to use math in everyday life so that primary school students can have a
deeper understanding of the importance of mathematics through examples.
The reason why this micro-course is set up is that many students are not interested in learning
mathematics. What’s more, mathematics is rarely used in real life, so many people think that learning
mathematics is meaningless. I hope this course can help more primary school students, and I also
hope to get this opportunity to improve myself.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封应聘信应聘社区高中生志愿者，内容包
括简单的自我介绍，准备开设的微课程的名称和主要内容以及开设该课程的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
计划：plan →intend
而且：what’s more →moreover
机会：opportunity →chance
提高：improve →promote
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to apply for the position to help the primary school students in our community.
拓展句：I’m writing to apply for the position where I can help the primary school students in our
community,
【点睛】【高分句型1】I plan to set up a micro-course, the name of which is “Mathematics in our
daily life”.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The reason why this micro-course is set up is that many students are not interested
in learning mathematics.（运用了why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句）
2025届上海市浦东新区高三上学期一模考试英语试卷
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
明启中学将组织学生开展为期三天的研学活动，现有三个主题，分别为：“访问友校” “走
进大学” “深入企业”。假如你是该校学生李华，请写一封申请信给负责人，报名参加其中
一项活动，内容须包括：1. 你选择的主题；
2. 你希望学到的内容；
3. 你学这些内容的理由。
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【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the “Visit Universities” program of the three-day study tour organized
by our school. I am particularly interested in this theme because I hope to gain a better understanding
of campus culture, advanced teaching methods, and university learning environments. Visiting
universities will provide me with valuable firsthand experience, allowing me to reflect on my future
academic goals and inspire my passion for higher education.
The reason why I want to learn these aspects is that they are crucial for my preparation for
college life. By exploring universities, I can develop clearer academic aspirations, improve my self-
discipline, and plan my studies more effectively. Also, being exposed to a university setting will
motivate me to study harder to achieve my goals.
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your approval.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，报名参加一个学校组织的为期
三天的研学活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
热情：passion→enthusiasm
至关重要的：crucial→vital
志向：aspiration→ambition实现：achieve→realize
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to apply for the “Visit Universities” program of the three-day study tour
organized by our school.
拓展句：I am writing to apply for the “Visit Universities” program of the three-day study tour which
is organized by our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Visiting universities will provide me with valuable firsthand experience,
allowing me to reflect on my future academic goals and inspire my passion for higher education. (运
用了现在分词作结果状语)
【高分句型2】The reason why I want to learn these aspects is that they are crucial for my
preparation for college life. (运用了why引导的限制性定语从句和that引导的表语从句)
2024届上海市青浦区高三下学期二模英语试题
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。学校将举办“中国工坊”（Chinese Workshop）活动，主题
涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中国传统手工艺（handicraft）、中国书法（calligraphy）和中国绘
画。届时，英国姐妹学校的师生代表将到校访问。学校拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请写
一封自荐信，内容必须包括：
申请参加本次活动；
阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；
结合个人兴趣和特长，说明一项你想要教授的技能，并陈述理由。
（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）
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【答案】
Dear Organizing Committee,I am Li Qing, a Grade 12 student from Purun High School. I am writing to express my keen
interest in participating in the upcoming “Chinese Workshop” event.
This cultural exchange holds profound significance as it offers a platform for our British
counterparts to intimately experience the richness of Chinese culture. Through this workshop, we can
bridge cultural divides and foster mutual understanding. Given my passion for Chinese calligraphy, I
am eager to share this ancient art with our guests. Calligraphy is not just about writing; it’s a
reflection of one’s spirit and character. Teaching this skill will not only impart knowledge but also
promote cultural appreciation.
I believe that my enthusiasm and proficiency in calligraphy will contribute to the success of
this workshop. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Li Qing
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将举办“中国工坊”（Chinese Workshop）活动，主
题涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中国传统手工艺（handicraft）、中国书法（calligraphy）和中国
绘画。届时，英国姐妹学校的师生代表将到校访问。学校拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。要
求考生根据提示写一封自荐信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
强烈的：keen→ strong
参加：participate in→ engage in
即将到来的：upcoming→ forthcoming
重要性：significance→ importance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Qing, a Grade 12 student from Purun High School..
拓展句：I am Li Qing, who is a Grade 12 student from Purun High School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my keen interest in participating in the upcoming
“Chinese Workshop” event.（运用了动名词participating作宾语）
【高分句型2】I believe that my enthusiasm and proficiency in calligraphy will contribute to the
success of this workshop.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）二，热点话题
2025届上海市青浦区高三上学期一模考试英语试题
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，你校英语报面向高三学生开辟了“未来之路”的专栏，征
集学生对于大学专业选择和未来职业规划的想法，请你投稿，你的文章须包括：
(1)简要描述你心仪的大学专业和未来职业规划；
(2)陈述你的理由。
(注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。)
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【答案】范文
As a senior student at Purun High School, I am eager to contribute to the “Path to the Future”
column with my vision for my future.
I have my sights set on majoring in environmental science at university, because I anticipate
preparing myself for a fulfilling career as an environmental consultant. This field, which is dedicated
to understanding and safeguarding our planet, resonates deeply with my passion for sustainability, a
passion that has been fostered through my active involvement in our school’s environmental club.
My decision to pursue this path is fueled by the urgent need to fight climate change, which will
have an impact on future generations. Therefore, only through proactive and collective action, can
we hope to lessen the environmental harm we’ve inflicted and ensure a healthier planet for future
generations.
Looking forward to the journey ahead, I am filled with enthusiasm for the opportunities that lie
in wait and the exploitation of my potential to make a significant impact.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生投稿，表达对大学专业选择和未来职业规划的
想法。【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：opportunity→chance
期待：anticipate→expect
确保：ensure→make sure
致力于：be dedicated to→be committed to
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句：My decision to pursue this path is fueled by the urgent need to fight climate change, which
will have an impact on future generations.
拓展句：The reason why I pursue this path is that I was fueled by the urgent need to fight climate
change, which will have an impact on future generations.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This field, which is dedicated to understanding and safeguarding our planet,
resonates deeply with my passion for sustainability, a passion that has been fostered through my
active involvement in our school’s environmental club. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I have my sights set on majoring in environmental science at university, because I
anticipate preparing myself for a fulfilling career as an environmental consultant. (运用了because引
导原因状语从句)
2024届上海市复兴高级中学高三下学期5月信心考英语试卷
Directions: Write an English composition in no less than 150 words according to the instructions
given below in Chinese.
假设现在学校要为高二学生多设置一节必修课，该课放在每周周五进行，现在向全校学生征
询建议。作为一名即将高中毕业的学生，你会向学校提出怎样的课程建议呢？你的作文需包
括以下内容：
1.你建议多设置怎样的一节必修课；
2.设置该课程的2-3个原因。
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A Proposal for an Additional Compulsory Course for High School Juniors
As a student on the verge of graduating from high school, I believe that adding an additional
compulsory course on Fridays for our second-year students would be beneficial. Specifically, I
propose the introduction of a course focused on “Life Skills and Career Development.”
The rationale behind this suggestion is threefold. Firstly, life skills are essential for our future
success in both academic and professional fields. By acquiring practical skills such as time
management, effective communication, and problem-solving, we can better prepare ourselves for the
challenges that lie ahead. Secondly, career development guidance is crucial at this stage of our
education. Understanding our interests, strengths, and potential career paths can help us make
informed decisions about our future studies and jobs. Lastly, such a course would provide a valuable
opportunity for us to engage in interactive and experiential learning, complementing the traditional
classroom-based teaching methods.
By introducing this new compulsory course, I believe our school can empower its students with
the necessary skills and knowledge to navigate their future with confidence and success.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就设置怎样一节必修课提出自己的看法和说明
原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
获得：acquire→obtain
引入：introduce→bring in
赋予：empower→enable
重要的：crucial/essential→vital
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Secondly, career development guidance is crucial at this stage of our education.
Understanding our interests, strengths, and potential career paths can help us make informed
decisions about our future studies and jobs.
拓展句：Secondly, career development guidance is crucial at this stage of our education becauseunderstanding our interests, strengths, and potential career paths can help us make informed
decisions about our future studies and jobs.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As a student on the verge of graduating from high school, I believe that
adding an additional compulsory course on Fridays for our second-year students would be beneficial.
(运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] By acquiring practical skills such as time management, effective communication, and
problem-solving, we can better prepare ourselves for the challenges that lie ahead. (运用了动名词作
宾语和that引导的定语从句)
上海市崇明区2024届高三英语一模试题
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，学校最近就如何组织好每天上午30分钟的大课间活动征求
全校学生的意见。你给负责的王老师写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 有关组织大课间活动的建议；
2. 你的理由。
注意：不要在邮件中提及你的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Xu Jing, a senior student. I am writing to share some suggestions regarding how to organize
our daily 30-minute mid-morning break activities.
I suggest incorporating a variety of activities during the break time. This could include physical
activities like sports, dance or yoga sessions, as well as creative activities such as art workshops or
music clubs. Providing diverse options would cater to different interests and allow students to choose
activities that they enjoy and find beneficial. In addition, it would be great to involve student clubsand organizations in organizing these activities. This not only offers opportunities for student
leadership and teamwork, but it also ensures a wider range of options and promotes a sense of
belonging among students.
I believe implementing these suggestions would make our mid-morning break more enjoyable
and productive. Thank you for taking the time to consider my suggestions.
Sincerely,
Xu Jing
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给负责征求如何组织好每天上午30分钟大
课间活动意见的王老师写一封电子邮件，需陈述个人对于组织大课间活动的建议，并提供相
应的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
关于：regarding→concerning/with regard to
各种各样的：a variety of→various/a wide range of
选择：choose→pick/select
确保：ensure→guarantee/secure
促进：promote→advance/facilitate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I suggest incorporating a variety of activities during the break time.
拓展句：It is suggested that a variety of activities during the break time should be incorporated.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Providing diverse options would cater to different interests and allow
students to choose activities that they enjoy and find beneficial. (运用了动名词短语作主语、that
引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe implementing these suggestions would make our mid-morning break more
enjoyable and productive. (运用了that引导宾语从句并被省略、动名词短语作从句的主语)
2024届上海市金山区高三下学期二模英语试题
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。内容需包括：
1）说明你的选择；
2）阐述你的理由。
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【答案】范文
My Decision on the Second English Test
I'm Wu Lei, a student from Mingqi High School. I am writing to share my thoughts on whether
to participate in the second English test scheduled for June. After careful consideration, I have
decided to forego the second test.
My primary reason for this decision stems from the encouraging score of 118 I achieved in the
first exam. This result indicates that I possess a solid foundation in the language, and I believe that
with continued effort and dedication, I can further enhance my proficiency. Additionally, I recognize
that my time is valuable, and I wish to utilize it effectively. Participating in the second test might not
significantly impact my overall score, but it could potentially detract from my focus on other subjects
and extracurricular activities.
In conclusion, I am confident in my current English proficiency and believe that my efforts
should be directed towards maintaining and improving my performance in other areas. Therefore, I
have chosen not to participate in the second English test.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了
118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→join in
此外：additionally→besides
提高：enhance→strengthen
总之：in conclusion→in short2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Additionally, I recognize that my time is valuable, and I wish to utilize it effectively.
拓展句：Additionally, after I recognize that my time is valuable, I wish to utilize it effectively.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to share my thoughts on whether to participate in the second
English test scheduled for June.(运用了特殊疑问词+不定式作宾语)
[高分句型2] In conclusion, I am confident in my current English proficiency and believe that my
efforts should be directed towards maintaining and improving my performance in other areas. (运用
了that引导宾语从句)
2024届上海市徐汇区高三下学期二模考试英语试题
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
在一堂写作课上，老师给出了以下三个题目供学生选择。
题目一：
以“盛年不重来，一日难再晨。”（Prime years do not return; a day’s morning is hard to come
by again.）为题，结合你的生活体验，写一篇文章。
题目二：
针对目前因为了升学考试而导致的学生知识结构很不平衡（unbalanced knowledge
structures）的现象，你觉得有什么好的方法或手段能够改变这种情况，谈谈你的想法。
题目三：
续写“当最后一个地球人（earthling）坐在房间里时，传来了敲门声……”
如果你是这个班级的学生，你会怎么选择呢?
写一篇短文，说明你选择的题目，简述理由并介绍你的写作思路。
文章必须包括以下内容：
1. 你选择的作文题目及理由；
2. 你的写作思路。
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【答案】Sample 1
If I were a student in this class, I would choose topic one: “Prime years do not return; a day’s
morning is hard to come by again.”
I am drawn to this topic because it speaks to the essence of seizing the moment and cherishing
the present. It prompts reflection on the fleeting nature of time and the importance of making the
most of our youth and opportunities.
My approach to this topic would be to draw from personal experiences and observations to
illustrate the significance of embracing each day and living with purpose. I would share anecdotes of
moments where I felt the weight of time passing, inspiring me to take action and pursue my passions.
I would explore themes of ambition, resilience, and gratitude, emphasizing the value of
perseverance in the face of challenges and the importance of cultivating meaningful relationships.
Ultimately, I would aim to convey a message of empowerment and motivation, encouraging others to
embrace the present moment, seize opportunities, and live with intention. By recognizing the fleeting
nature of time and the preciousness of each day, we can strive to make a positive impact and create
lasting memories.Sample 2
If I were a student in this class, I would choose topic two: addressing the unbalanced
knowledge structures caused by the current emphasis on entrance exams. My choice stems from the
relevance and importance of this issue in the educational landscape today.
My approach to this topic would involve first acknowledging the root causes of the problem,
such as excessive focus on exam-oriented learning and neglect of holistic education. Then, I would
propose practical solutions like curriculum reforms to encourage interdisciplinary learning,
promoting critical thinking skills over rote memorization, and incorporating project-based
assessments to gauge a student’s true understanding.
I believe this topic offers a chance to explore innovative educational strategies that can lead to more
well-rounded and adaptable learners, better equipped to navigate the complexities of the modern
world. By addressing the issue of unbalanced knowledge structures, we can foster a learning
environment that values both academic achievement and personal growth.Sample 3
If I were a student in this class, I would choose topic three: continuing the story of “When the
last earthling sat in the room, there came a knock on the door...”I am drawn to this topic because of its open-ended nature, which allows for creativity and
imagination to take flight. It presents an opportunity to explore themes of loneliness, curiosity, and
the unknown, offering a canvas for storytelling that can captivate both the writer and the reader.
My approach to this topic would involve delving into the emotions and thoughts of the last
earthling as they hear the knock on the door. I would consider various possibilities for who or what
could be on the other side of the door – perhaps it’s another survivor, an alien visitor, or even a
symbolic representation of hope or redemption.
I would aim to create a narrative that builds suspense and intrigue, keeping the reader engaged
as they eagerly await the revelation behind the mysterious knock. Through descriptive language and
vivid imagery, I would seek to evoke a sense of wonder and anticipation, leaving the reader with a
lingering sense of curiosity and a desire for more.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生在所给的三个题目中选择一个题目，并写
一篇短文，说明你选择的题目、简述理由并介绍写作思路。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
选择：choose→select
充分利用：make the most of → take full advantage of
机会，机遇：opportunity→chance
努力：strive→endeavour
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I am drawn to this topic because it speaks to the essence of seizing the moment and
cherishing the present.
拓展句：The reason why I am drawn to this topic is that it speaks to the essence of seizing the
moment and cherishing the present.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am drawn to this topic because it speaks to the essence of seizing the
moment and cherishing the present. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I would explore themes of ambition, resilience, and gratitude, emphasizing the value
of perseverance in the face of challenges and the importance of cultivating meaningful relationships.
(运用了现在分词作状语以及动名词短语作宾语)上海市长宁区2024届高三一模英语试题
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
AI技术日新月异，有些职业比如翻译可能将被人工智能翻译软件所替代。因此，你认为未
来还有学习外语的需要吗？为什么？请写一篇短文说明你的观点。
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【答案】AI technology is advancing rapidly, and many people believe that manual translation may
be replaced by artificial intelligence translation software. We should view this matter objectively.
Firstly, AI translation has both advantages and disadvantages. AI translation is popular and
widely used due to its high efficiency, accuracy, and support for multilingual translation. However,
the drawbacks of intelligent translation cannot be ignored. For example, it is difficult to understand
language and cultural differences, and a lack of understanding of contextual information may lead to
inaccurate or unsmooth translation.
On the contrary, manual translation still has irreplaceable advantages. Manual translation is
more professional and accurate. Manual translation has a strong human touch. Manual translation can
carefully understand cultural differences and language habits, making the translation create a human
touch and emotional effect.
Therefore, in the future, we must learn foreign languages well and continue to strengthen our
cultivation in language, culture and industry to obtain more opportunities and development
opportunities in various industries.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就“AI技术日新月异，有些职业比如翻译
可能将被人工智能翻译软件所替代，未来还有没有学习外语的需要”这一话题说明自己的观
点。【详解】1.词汇积累
进步：advance →improve
看待：view → treat
缺点：drawbacks → shortcomings
导致：lead to → result in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language habits, making
the translation create a human touch and emotional effect.
拓展句：Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language habits,
which makes the translation create a human touch and emotional effect.
【点睛】【高分句型1】AI technology is advancing rapidly, and many people believe that manual
translation may be replaced by artificial intelligence translation software. (使用了that引导的宾语
从句)
【高分句型2】Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language
habits, making the translation create a human touch and emotional effect. (使用了现在分词作结果
状语)
