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高中英语应用文拿高分升级表达
高中英语应用文拿高分升级表达高中少年们写英语书信，很多都还在用短句、简单句：I will… We can… I want to… 意思能写对，但句式平平，很难拿到高分。 其实应用文，比如求助信、建议信、邀请信，提分有套路： 用好状语从句、定语从句、宾语从句这三大从句，作文档次立刻往上提！ 今天我们就借助一篇最近给高三宝子复习时练到的一篇范文，拆解高分密码，附带可直接抄写的万能模板，大家刷题、备考都能用。 📄 真题范文｜求助信·寻求活动建议 Dear Jim, How are you doing? I’m writing to ask for your practical advice because our school will hold the Green City Campaign. To encourage students to protect our environment, we will organize some related lectures, which can help us form a low-carbon lifestyle. After the lectures, we will have a discussion about how we can save water, paper and electricity in our daily life. Since I have no rich experience in organizing activities, I wonder if you can offer me some useful suggestions. Looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua ★ 高分短语积累｜写作直接套用 ask for your practical advice 征求你的实用建议 hold the Green City Campaign 举办绿色城市主题活动 encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 form a low-carbon lifestyle 养成低碳的生活方式 in our daily life 在我们的日常生活中 have no rich experience in doing sth. 在组织活动方面经验不足 offer sb. some useful suggestions 给某人提供有用建议 Looking forward to your early reply! 期待你的早日回复 ★重点解析｜书信里的三大从句 状语从句交代背景原因 定语从句补充介绍事物 宾语从句表达疑问、想法 1️⃣ 状语从句｜讲清“为什么写信” 引导词：because / since / when / if I’m writing to ask for your practical advice because our school will hold the Green City Campaign. Since I have no rich experience in organizing activities, I wonder if you can offer me some useful suggestions. ⭕模板： I’m writing to… because… Since I have no experience in…, I want to ask for your advice. 2️⃣ 定语从句｜一句话讲清活动+活动意义 书信中常用非限制性定语从句，用 which 指代前面的活动或整件事，避免短句堆砌。 We will organize some related lectures, which can help us form a low-carbon lifestyle. ⭕模板： We will hold an activity, which can help us… 3️⃣ 宾语从句｜写讨论话题、委婉提出请求 ① how 引导讨论内容： We will have a discussion about how we can save water, paper and electricity in our daily life. ② if 引导委婉请求： I wonder if you can offer me some useful suggestions. ⭕模板： We will have a talk about how we can… I wonder if you can give me some advice. ★综合万能模板｜直接仿写背诵 I’m writing to ask for your advice because our school will hold an activity, which is about environmental protection. We will have a talk about how we can live a green life. Since I am new to this work, I wonder if you can give me some suggestions. ✍️ 学习小结 1. 状语从句 because/since：交代写信背景、原因 2. 定语从句 which：补充修饰活动、事物，合并零散短句 3. 宾语从句 how/if：表达讨论内容、委婉提出请求 写应用文优先保证句子正确，不要盲目堆砌复杂从句。适当使用2-3处从句，就可以让作文脱颖而出！ ✍🏻今日小练笔 试着仿写一句话，同时用上 because，which，if 三个从句。
