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高考作文精讲1:热点主题深度拆解,高分范文助你突破写作瓶颈

高考作文精讲1:热点主题深度拆解,高分范文助你突破写作瓶颈

学校英语角本期活动讨论主题是“What is youth?”。请你写一篇短文参加讨论,内容包括:

1. 青春是什么;

2. 我们应该如何度过青春。

注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

 思路 

此题属于半开放提纲类作文,要求考生根据要点提示,合理添加细节,进行适当拓展。

此题写作要点和拓展可以归纳为:(1)青春是什么;(2)青春的特点:美好、短暂;(3)如何度过宝贵的青春:梦想、责任与担当和拼搏奋斗。写作过程中应避免使用冗长繁杂的句式;要点要全面,表达要准确,适当发挥拓展;句、段之间的衔接要自然,尽可能使用多样化的句式。

根据题目要求及要点提示,本文可分为三段。第一段:青春的美好;第二段:青春年少的梦想和责任与担当;第三段:为自己和祖国,应该努力拼搏。

 范文 

What is youth?

What is youth? It is the most energetic and positive period in our life. Living in this golden age, we young people have every reason to try anything that comes to mind.

So what can we do to spend our youth in a meaningful way? First of all, we should have a dream. It is beneficial not only to ourselves, but also to our country. Then, we must chase the dream to make it come true.In a word, dream what we can dream and shoulder what we should shoulder. 

As youth provides us with endless possibilities, why not work hard to create a better future for ourselves and our country?

 其他可用表达 

1. Waving goodbye to childhood, we step into the most beautiful season of life—youth, which is unparalleled.

2. Although youth means a period of beauty and wonders, only when you have filled it with sweat and dedication can you really taste the sweetness of the fruit. 

3. The road ahead of us leads to a world full of challenges and opportunities, where we will fully discover our potential and seize the opportunity to showcase our talents to realize our dreams.

4. Youth means the road to adulthood, which in turn requires us to assume relevant responsibilities. 

5. To be honest, when filled with beautiful dreams, I am full of passion and energy. I sincerely invite you to share your golden youth.


▍本文来源:《学英语》报 高中编辑部

▍封面图源:摄图网(未经授权禁止转载)

▍编辑:赵蓉 

▍一校:卫国君 二校:陈艳芳 三校:张艺璇 

▍初审:王乾宇 复审:王晓霞 终审:安婷婷

▍发布:小倩

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