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【写作备考】2026年高中英语读后续写专练18

【写作备考】2026年高中英语读后续写专练18

贵州2026年5月高三年级适应性考试英语笔试试卷

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Leo and I had been close friends since we were very little, but after starting high school, we slowly grew apart. It wasn’t because of a big fight, but simply because we spent less and less time together as we made new friends and developed different hobbies. What really hurt me was the spring talent show. I had practiced a piano piece nervously for weeks, hoping to perform with Leo, who was quite a good singer. But when I asked him to do it with me, he just said vaguely, “Maybe, but I’m kind of busy with the basketball team.” His reply, though casual, made me feel like a door was closing between us.

On the night of the show, I performed alone, my notes trembling in the silent auditorium. Afterward, I saw Leo in the hallway, surrounded by his teammates, their laughter echoing. He gave me a quick smile from across the crowd, but it felt like a polite gesture meant for a stranger, not a best friend. I turned away, a cold lump forming in my throat. We didn’t speak for weeks.

Then, during a history class group project, fate — or our teacher — threw us together. The initial silence was awkward and heavy. We divided the work with clinical efficiency, communicating only through brief notes and shared documents online. The friendship we once had seemed like a thing of the past, from another lifetime.

The project deadline approached, requiring us to finally meet in person to rehearse our presentation. We met at the library, the air between us thick with unspoken words. As we went through the slides, an old inside joke of ours slipped out. For a moment, the awkwardness between us lifted. We looked at each other, and in that glance, I saw a flash of the old friendship. Then, just as quickly, we looked away, and the heavy silence returned. But that brief moment had changed something.

注意:

1.续写词数应为150词左右;

2.请按如下格式作答。

Working on the final slide, Leo finally broke the silence.

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Walking home that evening, the autumn air felt different. 

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【参考答案】      

Working on the final slide, Leo finally broke the silence. His voice was hesitant. “Look, about the talent show... I was an idiot. I was so wrapped up in trying to fit in with the team that I didn’t realize I was pushing you away.” He paused, his eyes fixed on the screen. “I really missed hearing you practice that piece. It sounded... lonely, from the hallway. I’m sorry.” His apology hung in the air, raw and sincere. The wall between us didn’t crumble, but a door within it clicked open. “I missed this too,” I found myself saying, my own voice quiet. “Working with you.”

Walking home that evening, the autumn air felt different. It was no longer just cold, but crisp and clear. The heavy silence that had weighed me down for months had lifted, leaving a light, hopeful emptiness ready to be filled. We didn’t magically revert to our sandbox selves, but the knot in my chest was gone. We had started a conversation, and that was everything. The unspoken understanding was returning, word by word. I knew rebuilding our friendship would take time, but for the first time in a long time, I was looking forward to the work.

【解析】

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了“我”和从小亲密的好友里奥进入高中后逐渐疏远,因才艺表演邀约被敷衍而心生隔阂,直到历史小组项目合作中,两人借一个旧玩笑打破僵局,最终里奥主动道歉、两人开启友谊重建之路的故事。

【详解】1. 段落续写

① 由第一段首句可知,接下来可描写里奥主动打破沉默,坦诚自己在才艺表演时的过错——因急于融入篮球队而敷衍“我”,表达歉意和对两人友谊的思念,以及“我”的回应,打破彼此间的隔阂。

② 由第二段首句可知,接下来可描写两人一起回家时的氛围变化,体现隔阂消散后的轻松,以及“我”对重建友谊的期待,点明两人友谊虽不能立刻回到从前,但已迈出关键一步。

2. 续写线索

里奥主动打破沉默道歉——坦白才艺表演敷衍的原因(急于融入篮球队、忽视友谊)——表达对“我”的愧疚和对旧友谊的思念——“我”回应并表达对两人合作的怀念——两人一起回家,氛围轻松——期待友谊重建

3.词类激活

行为类

①集中于:fixed on/focused on

②开始:start/initiate

情绪类

①孤寂的:lonely/solitary

②诚恳的:sincere/genuine

【点睛】【高分句型1】I was so wrapped up in trying to fit in with the team that I didn’t realize I was pushing you away. (运用了so...that...句型引导的结果状语从句以及省略引导词that的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】The heavy silence that had weighed me down for months had lifted, leaving a light, hopeful emptiness ready to be filled. (运用了that引导定语从句和现在分词leaving作状语)

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