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专题 09 书面表达 20 篇
1．（23-24高一上·浙江宁波·期末）假定你是李华，你的朋友Jack最近写信向你求助，信中提到了自己最
近染上了网瘾，请你写信告知他网瘾的危害，并提出一些建议。内容如下：
1. 说明网瘾的危害；
2. 提出建议。
网瘾 network addiction
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to the Internet. Not only does it ruin your health but it also affects your
academic performance.
Here are my suggestions. Firstly, it is highly recommended to do some sports, which equips you with a strong
body and iron will. Secondly, expanding your social network is worth trying. Socialize with like-minded friends
and join in their activities regularly. As long as you feel life is full of fun and wonder, you will resist the temptation
of network.
I do hope you will find my suggestions of some use. Best regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给向自己求助的朋友Jack回信，告知他
网瘾的危害，并为他提出戒除网瘾的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
毁掉：ruin→destroy, devastate
影响：affect→influence, impact
充满：be full of→be filled with
抵挡：resist→withstand
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Secondly, expanding your social network is worth trying. Socialize with like-minded friends and join in
their activities regularly.
拓展句：Secondly, expanding your social network is worth trying, which means you can socialize with like-
minded friends and join in their activities regularly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only does it ruin your health but it also affects your academic performance. (运用了
not only… but also…固定句型、not only置于句首引起的部分倒装句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, it is highly recommended to do some sports, which equips you with a strong body and iron
will. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] As long as you feel life is full of fun and wonder, you will resist the temptation of network. (运用了
as long as引导条件状语从句)
2．（23-24高一上·山东青岛·期末）假定你是校英文报编辑。近期，你发现同学们在投稿中使用缩略语
（abbreviation）的现象较为普遍。请你就此为校英文报写一篇文章，内容包括：
1. 陈述现象；
2. 表达看法。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
Recently, as the editor of our school’s English newspaper, I have observed a growing trend among students to
use English abbreviations in their contributions. Abbreviations, however, are commonly used in informal
communication, such as text messages and social media posts.
In my opinion, while incorporating some abbreviations can enhance the efficiency of written communication,
it is essential to strike a balance. Overusing abbreviations will possibly lead to misinterpretation and difficulties in
comprehending the intended message. It is crucial for students to recognize that effective communication requires
utilizing appropriate vocabulary and sentence structures.
Let us strive towards maintaining the richness and elegance of the English language in our publication!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以校英文报编辑的身份，讨论近期同学们在投稿中使用
缩略语的现象，需简要陈述该现象，并发表自己的看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
趋势：trend→tendency, inclination
在我看来：in my opinion→from my perspective, as far as I am concerned
加强：enhance→strengthen
必要的：essential→necessary, vital
导致：lead to→bring about, give rise to
理解：comprehend→understand
意识到：recognize→realize, be conscious of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Overusing abbreviations will possibly lead to misinterpretation and difficulties in comprehending the
intended message.
拓展句：It is possible that overusing abbreviations will lead to misinterpretation and difficulties in comprehending
the intended message.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In my opinion, while incorporating some abbreviations can enhance the efficiency of
written communication, it is essential to strike a balance. (运用了while引导让步状语从句、动名词短语
incorporating…作主语)
[高分句型2] It is crucial for students to recognize that effective communication requires utilizing appropriate
vocabulary and sentence structures. (运用了that引导宾语从句、动名词短语utilizing…作宾语)
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司3．（23-24高一上·江西九江·期末）假定你是李华，你和同学喜欢在周末一起去爬山，经常看到有人在山
上捕鸟杀鸟，觉得有必要向当地的野生动物保护协会反映这一情况。请用英语写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 山上看到的情况；
2. 保护鸟类的原因；
3. 保护鸟类的措施。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student. I am writing to tell you the situation where some people are catching or
even killing the lovely birds in the woods on the top of the mountain in our area.
It is known that birds are human beings’ friends. They can catch pests of the plants for farmers and make our
environment much livelier. So we should live harmoniously with them.
In order to protect birds from being caught or killed, we should widely spread the laws of animal protection.
Besides, education and raising people’s awareness are effective measures.
Yours,
Li Hua
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写一封信，向当地的野生动物保护协会反映有人在山上捕鸟杀鸟这一情
况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
告知：tell→inform
众所周知：It is known that→As is known
和谐地：harmoniously→with harmony
此外：besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句： It is known that birds are human beings’ friends.
拓展句：As we all know, birds are human beings’ friends.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to tell you the situation where some people are catching or even killing the
lovely birds in the woods on the top of the mountain in our area.（由where引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】It is known that birds are human beings’ friends.（由that引导的主语从句）
4．（23-24高一上·广东深圳·期末）假定你是李华，你的美国交换生好友Tom对中国传统节日很感兴趣。
你所在的学校将要举办一场春节庆祝活动，你和同学想邀请Tom参加，并一起表演一个中西合璧的节目。
请你写一封信给Tom，内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点；
2. 庆祝活动的内容；
3. 邀请Tom一起表演。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司You have told me that you are very interested in how we Chinese celebrate our traditional festivals. With the
Spring Festival approaching, I would like to invite you to join us in the celebration in our school.
A variety of activities will be included at the celebration, such as performances, games and gift-exchanging,
which will surely enable you to know better about our culture. To get fully involved, I, together with my
classmates, hope that you can put on a performance with us. And I think it will be a good combination of both our
culture and yours.
By the way, the celebration will take place in the school lecture hall from 7:00 p.m. to 10:00 p.m. on
December 30, 2023. We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇邀请信，邀请Tom一起表演一个中西合璧的节目，内
容包括：活动时间和地点；庆祝活动的内容；邀请Tom一起表演。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have interest in
庆祝：celebrate→observe
各种各样的：a variety of→all kinds of
肯定：surely→certainly
完全地：fully→completely
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：With the Spring Festival approaching, I would like to invite you to join us in the celebration in our school.
拓展句：As the Spring Festival is approaching, I would like to invite you to join us in the celebration in our
school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】A variety of activities will be included at the celebration, such as performances, games
and gift-exchanging, which will surely enable you to know better about our culture. (使用了which引导非限制性
定语从句、不定式作宾补)
【高分句型2】To get fully involved, I, together with my classmates, hope that you can put on a performance with
us. (使用了不定式作目的状语、that引导宾语从句)
5．（23-24高一上·山东滨州·期末）假如你是李华，你在中国留学的英国朋友Peter打算拍摄短视频介绍中
国传统文化，为此征求你的意见。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐拍摄内容；2. 陈述理由；3. 表达祝愿。
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司提示词：拍摄短视频shoot a short video
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I am very glad to hear that you are going to introduce Chinese culture by shooting a short video. I'd like to
recommend Chinese Calligraphy to you, which is the essence of Chinese culture.First, you can shoot videos of four
treasures of the study, including writing brush, ink, paper and ink stone. They are the necessities to learn Chinese
calligraphy. Besides, you can shoot some videos about Calligrphy works of some famous calligraphists, such as
WangXizhi andYanZhen qing.
Finally, I wish your program a success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在中国留学的英国朋友Peter写封邮件，给他要拍摄短视
频介绍中国传统文化的想法提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→pleased
此外：Besides → What’s more
例如：for instance→ such as
最后：Finally→ At last
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司原句：First, you can shoot videos of four treasures of the study, including writing brush, ink, paper and ink stone.
拓展句：First, you can shoot videos of four treasures of the study, which are writing brush, ink, paper and ink
stone.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I'd like to recommend Chinese Calligraphy to you, which is the essence of Chinese
culture.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I am very glad to hear that you are going to introduce Chinese culture by shooting a short video.
（运用了that连接的宾语从句作hear的宾语）
6．（23-24高一上·江西景德镇·期末）假定你是李华。你的外教Tanya计划春节到你的家乡景德镇旅游两
天，想征询你的建议。 请你给她回一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 景点推荐及理由。
提示词：御窑厂 Imperial Kiln Museum, 古窑 ancient kiln porcelain factory
陶溪川 ceramic art avenue, Taoxichuan
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80字左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tanya,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tanya,
I am delighted to receive your Email telling me that you are going to pay a visit to my hometown Jingdezhen
in the upcoming Spring Festival. The following are my suggestions for your two-day trip.
On the first day, after enjoying the local food I strongly recommend the Imperial Kiln Museum where
archaeologists have been excavating a huge amount of porcelain relics since 1982. In the afternoon, it will be a
great delight to visit the ancient kiln porcelain factory. In order to attract tourists, bands are often arranged there to
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司play porcelain musical instruments. You can finish the day by enjoying a wonderful light show on the biggest
porcelain bowl in the world in Changnanli. As for the following day, it’s definitely a wise choice for us to travel
around Yaoli in Fuliang County, where you will be undoubtedly thrilled by its breathtaking natural beauty. In the
evening, if time permits, we can go to the Internet-famous ceramic art avenue, Taoxichuan, to experience the rich
artistic atmosphere and buy some exquisite ceramic artworks.
I wish you an enjoyable and worthwhile journey.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Tanya回一封电子邮件，向她推荐你的家乡景德镇的
旅游景点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
收到：receive→get
建议：suggestion→advice
欣赏：enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to attract tourists, bands are often arranged there to play porcelain musical instruments.
拓展句：Bands are often arranged there to play porcelain musical instruments, which aims to attract tourists.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On the first day, after enjoying the local food I strongly recommend the Imperial Kiln
Museum where archaeologists have been excavating a huge amount of porcelain relics since 1982. (运用了where
引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 I am delighted to receive your Email telling me that you are going to pay a visit to my hometown
Jingdezhen in the upcoming Spring Festival. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
7．（23-24高一上·安徽宣城·期末）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Mike即将来你校作交换生，请你给他写
一封邮件，结合自己的经历简单介绍一下这里的校园生活。内容包括：
1. 课程安排；
2. 社团活动；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司2. 不要出现个人信息；
3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m Li Hua. Knowing that you will come to China to study as an exchange student in our school next term,
I’m so glad to introduce our school life to you.
We live a busy life here with 9 subjects to learn in Senior one. In Senior two, apart from Chinese, Maths, and
English, we are offered various options according to the new reform. As for me, Maths and Chemistry are quite
easy and enjoyable, because interest makes a difference.
In addition, what makes our school special lies in its colorful clubs. The one that may fascinate you most is the
Chinese Calligraphy, where you can enjoy the unique traditional art form and cultivate your mind.
Looking forward to your coming soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合自己的经历，向即将来你校作交换生的外国朋友Mike
简单介绍一下你校的校园生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
各种各样的：various→a variety of
在于：lie in→consist in
欣赏：enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We live a busy life here with 9 subjects to learn in Senior one.
拓展句：We live a busy life here, because we have 9 subjects to learn in Senior one.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In addition, what makes our school special lies in its colorful clubs. (运用了what引导
的主语从句)
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司【高分句型2】The one that may fascinate you most is the Chinese Calligraphy, where you can enjoy the unique
traditional art form and cultivate your mind. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和where引导的非限制性定语
从句)
8．（23-24高一上·福建三明·期末）假如你是李华，你校国际交换生Peter打算成立一个观鸟俱乐部（Bird
watching Club），邀请你参加，同时希望你对如何开展活动提出建议。请你给他写一封E-mail，内容包括：
1.感谢邀请；
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80词左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One Possible Version
Dear Peter.
Thank you for inviting me to join the Bird watching Club and I’d like to take part. Here is my advice on club
activities.
First of all, we can go to the library or surf the Internet to learn more information about birds. In addition, it
would be a good idea to invite experts to give some professional guidance on wildlife protection. Besides, it’s also a
wise decision to have field trips to observe birds in the wild.
I believe the club will be a stage for those who have a passion for wildlife protection. Wish our club a big
success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校国际交换生Peter打算成立一个观鸟俱乐部（Bird watching
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司Club），邀请你参加，同时希望你对如何开展活动提出建议。要求考生给朋友回信感谢他的邀请并提出建
议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part→ attend
建议：advice → suggestion
首先：First of all→ In the first place
此外：Besides → What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, we can go to the library or surf the Internet to learn more information about birds.
拓展句：First of all, we can go to the library or surf the Internet so that we can learn more information about birds.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, we can go to the library or surf the Internet to learn more information about
birds.（运用了不定式作目的状语）
【高分句型2】I believe the club will be a stage for those who have a passion for wildlife protection.（运用了省
略连词that的宾语从句和who引导的限制性定语从句）
9．（23-24高一上·广东深圳·期末）假定你是校英语报记者李华。你校于12月21日举办了以“保护生态
环境，建设绿色家园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你就此事写一篇报道。内容包括：
1.比赛目的；
2.比赛过程；
3.比赛反响。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.提示词：保护生态环境，建设绿色家园 Protecting the Eco-environment；Building a Green Homeland
An English Speech Contest
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【答案】One possible version:
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司An English Speech Contest
On December 21st, our school held an English speech contest with the theme of “Protecting the Ecological
Environment and Building a Green Homeland”. The purpose of this contest was to raise awareness among students
about environmental protection and promote green living practices.
During the competition, participants delivered passionate speeches on the importance of preserving nature and
the impact of climate change. The judges rated them according to the participants’ oral skills and content.
The contest received an overwhelming response from students. Many of them expressed their gratitude
towards the organizers for providing a platform to discuss environmental issues. The success of this event has
encouraged the school to host more competitions aimed at fostering a green consciousness among students.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇报道，讲述英语演讲比赛的比赛目的、比赛过程、比
赛反响。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
比赛：contest→competition
目的：purpose→aim
发表演讲：deliver speeches→give speeches/talks
重要性：importance→significance
感激：gratitude→thankfulness/appreciation
2. 句式拓展
简单句改为强调句
原句：On December 21st, our school held an English speech contest with the theme of “Protecting the Ecological
Environment and Building a Green Homeland”.
拓展句：It was on December 21st that our school held an English speech contest with the theme of “Protecting the
Ecological Environment and Building a Green Homeland”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Many of them expressed their gratitude towards the organizers for providing a platform
to discuss environmental issues.(使用了动名词作宾语、不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】The success of this event has encouraged the school to host more competitions aimed at fostering a
green consciousness among students.(使用了不定式作宾补、过去分词作后置定语、动名词作宾语)
10．（23-24高一上·湖北黄冈·期末）假定你是李华，你校上周开展了“中国文物模型制作大赛”的活动，
请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1. 活动目的；2. 比赛情况；3. 活动反响。
注意：
1.词数为80左右；
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
注：模型 model
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【答案】范文
Last week, our school held a Model-Making Contest on Chinese Cultural Relics, which aimed to enhance
students' understanding of Chinese cultural heritage and develop their creativity and practical ability.
The contest attracted a large number of participants who showed great enthusiasm and ingenuity in creating
models of various cultural relics, including the Terracotta Army, the Great Wall, and the Peking Opera Mask.
This contest has received widespread praise from students and teachers. Through this activity, students have
deepened their understanding of Chinese cultural relics and felt the charm of traditional Chinese culture.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道学校上周开展的“中国文物模
型制作大赛”活动，内容包括：1. 活动目的；2. 比赛情况；3. 活动反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
加强：enhance→strengthen
培养：develop→foster
吸引：attract→appeal to
各种各样的：various→a variety of
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：This contest has received widespread praise from students and teachers. Through this activity, students have
deepened their understanding of Chinese cultural relics and felt the charm of traditional Chinese culture.
拓展句：Not only has this contest received widespread praise from students and teachers, but also students have
deepened their understanding of Chinese cultural relics and felt the charm of traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last week, our school held a Model-Making Contest on Chinese Cultural Relics, which
aimed to enhance students' understanding of Chinese cultural heritage and develop their creativity and practical
ability. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司[高分句型2] The contest attracted a large number of participants who showed great enthusiasm and ingenuity in
creating models of various cultural relics, including the Terracotta Army, the Great Wall, and the Peking Opera
Mask. (运用了动名词作宾语)
11．（23-24高一上·江西南昌·期末）因为连日大雨, 你所在的城市发生水灾, 你是学校一名小记者, 请你用
英语向校刊写一份报道。主要内容包含：
(1)水灾发生的原因;
(2)水灾造成的影响;
(3)灾后情况。
注意：
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【答案】A flood struck our city because it had been raining heavily for several days. As people received the
warning message in advance, none of them were trapped in the flood. And what’s most important is that no people
were injured or killed. But it caused the traffic to stop for a few hours and destroyed power facilities, making the
electricity supply in some areas cut off, which affected people’s daily life.
After the flood, people all take action. Generous people make donations to those people in need. With strong
support from the local government and the joint efforts of local people, now everything has returned to normal.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你所在的城市发生水灾向校刊写一份报道。其内容包括：
水灾发生的原因、水灾造成的影响和灾后情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提前：in advance →ahead of time
被困于：be trapped in →be stuck in
重要的：important→significant
影响：affect→influence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司原句： Generous people make donations to those people in need.
拓展句： Generous people make donations to those who are in need.
【点睛】【高分句型1】And what’s most important is that no people were injured or killed. （运用了what引
导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
【高分句型2】 But it caused the traffic to stop for a few hours and destroyed power facilities, making the
electricity supply in some areas cut off, which affected people’s daily life.（运用了现在分词作状语和which引导
的非限制性定语从句）
12．（23-24高一上·湖北十堰·期末）请根据所给标题“How I benefit from English writing lessons”完成英语
老师布置的作文，内容包括：
1. 你得到的益处：
2. 你对该课程的建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How I benefit from English writing lessons
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How I benefit from English writing lessons
English writing lessons have greatly benefited me in several ways. Firstly, these lessons have helped me
improve my overall writing skills. Through the practice and guidance provided by my English teacher, I have
learned how to construct well-organized essays, allowing me to effectively convey my ideas. Secondly, these
lessons have expanded my vocabulary and enhanced my grammar. Furthermore, these lessons have boosted my
critical thinking abilities, enabling me to think more critically and express my opinions more effectively.
Certainly, I have some advice. I hope that my English teacher can provide more opportunities for us to practice
writing independently.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给标题“How I benefit from English writing lessons”完
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司成英语老师布置的作文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
几个：several→ a few
帮助：help→ assist
改善：improve→ upgrade
指导：guidance→ instruction
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Through the practice and guidance provided by my English teacher, I have learned how to construct well-
organized essays, allowing me to effectively convey my ideas.
拓展句：Because my English teacher have provided me the practice and guidance, I have learned how to construct
well-organized essays, allowing me to effectively convey my ideas.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Furthermore, these lessons have boosted my critical thinking abilities, enabling me to
think more critically and express my opinions more effectively.（运用了现在分词enabling作状语）
【高分句型2】I hope that my English teacher can provide more opportunities for us to practice writing
independently.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
13．（23-24高一上·江苏·期末）假定你是高一学生李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信说进入高中后，学习压
力大，没有时间运动，渐渐不喜欢运动，请你写一封信鼓励他参加运动，要点如下：
1. 运动的意义；
2. 推荐一项运动项目。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司【答案】Dear Mike,
I was overwhelmed with worry and concerned when I heard your present situation. It is a wonderful thing to have
regular exercise in our daily schedule. Not only does it relax our body and soothe our emotions, but also doing
exercise stretches our muscles to better physical conditions. Besides, it can help make friends who have the
common interest.
Playing table tennis is a good way to relieve your stress. You can do it after class with your classmate. It can build
up your body, keep you healthy and train your brain. What’ more, it can help you learn to cooperate with others.
Hopefully my advice will be of some help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Mike写信，鼓励他参加体育运动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提高：better→improve
此外：besides→in addition
减轻：relieve→reduce
增强体质：build up one’s body→improve one’s fitness
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Playing table tennis is a good way to relieve your stress.
拓展句：Playing table tennis is a good way that can relieve your stress.
【点睛】【高分句式1】I was overwhelmed with worry and concerned when I heard your present situation. (运
用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句式2】Not only does it relax our body and soothe our emotions, but also doing exercise stretches our
muscles to better physical conditions. (运用了not only...but also...连接两个句子，第一个句子用部分倒装)
14．（23-24高一上·上海·期末）学校举行作文比赛以你身边敬爱或爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。（字
数150）
内容包括：
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司1、受到敬爱、爱戴的人的简介；
2、说明理由
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The person I respect
There are a lot of people around us, who are respectable. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our
elders. As for me, my father is the person who I respect most in my heart. My father is a teacher, who loves his
work and his students very much and devotes himself to his work and students. He works very hard every day but
he will also spare some time to keep me company and share many funny things with me about his work. When I
come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to
overcome the difficulties bravely. With his help and encouragement, I do well in my lessons. He achieved a lot in
his work, and thus was respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person who I respect most and I
love him deeply.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校举行作文比赛以你身边敬爱或爱戴的人为题，要求考生按照要求
写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很多：a lot of → a great many of
值得尊敬的：respectable→ venerable
尊敬：respect→ honour
陪伴某人：keep sb. company→ accompany sb.
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：He achieved a lot in his work, and thus was respected by his students.
拓展句：Because he achieved a lot in his work, he was respected by his students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are a lot of people around us, who are respectable. （运用了who引导的非限制
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司性定语从句）
【高分句型2】When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and
encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.（运用了When引导的时间状语从句）
15．（23-24高一上·河南三门峡·期末）假如你是李华，下周你校将开展中国传统文化周活动。你已邀请交
换生John观看下周六学校太极俱乐部举行的太极表演，但该表演因故取消。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 告知表演取消；
2. 提议参加其它活动；
3. 期待回复。
参考词汇：太极Tai Chi
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I’m terribly sorry to inform you that the Tai Chi performance scheduled at 6 P.M. next Saturday has to be
canceled. It happens that some of the actors will participate in the art festival of the city at that time.
It is really a pity that we can’t appreciate the splendid performance by actors, especially their graceful and
well-balanced movements. Would you like to attend the Chinese Paper-cutting Exhibition on Friday instead? It
provides another opportunity to explore the charm of Chinese culture. I bet it will never fail to satisfy you.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假如是李华，写封邮件告诉John学校太极俱乐部的表演因故
取消，对此表示歉意，并提议一起参加其他活动。
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：attend→take part in
取消：cancel→call off
非常：terribly→extremely
机会：opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：It provides another opportunity to explore the charm of Chinese culture. I bet it will never fail to satisfy you.
拓展句：It provides another opportunity to explore the charm of Chinese culture, which I bet will never fail to
satisfy you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m terribly sorry to inform you that the Tai Chi performance scheduled at 6 P.M. next
Saturday has to be canceled. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It provides another opportunity to explore the charm of Chinese culture. (运用了不定式作定语)
16．（23-24高一上·福建南平·期末）假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter来信告知他对中国汉字很感兴趣，
希望了解更多。请你给他写封邮件回复，内容包括：
1. 介绍汉字历史；
2. 简述汉字作用；
3. 欢迎来华学习。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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【答案】One possible version:
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司Dear Peter,
Delighted to learn that you have a keen interest in Chinese characters, I’m writing to offer you some
information.
Chinese characters have developed from symbols carved on animals’ bones to a well-formed writing system
over thousands of years. They have been playing an important part in Chinese civilisation. Not only do they help
connect China’s present with its past, but also contribute to uniting people divided geographically. Nowadays, an
increasing number of international students are appreciating the beauty of Chinese characters, which will certainly
deepen their understanding of Chinese splendid culture.
I’m looking forward to your coming and exposing yourself to Chinese characters personally.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生回复对中国汉字很感兴趣的笔友Peter的来信，需向他
介绍汉字历史，简述汉字作用，并表示欢迎他来华学习。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提供：offer→provide, give
连接：connect→link
有助于：contribute to→be beneficial to, be conductive to
灿烂的：splendid→magnificent
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Chinese characters have developed from symbols carved on animals’ bones to a well-formed writing system
over thousands of years.
拓展句：Chinese characters have developed from symbols which was carved on animals’ bones to a well-formed
writing system over thousands of years.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Delighted to learn that you have a keen interest in Chinese characters, I’m writing to offer
you some information. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Nowadays, an increasing number of international students are appreciating the beauty of Chinese
characters, which will certainly deepen their understanding of Chinese splendid culture. (运用了which引导非限
制性定语从句)
17．（23-24高一上·河南·期末）假定你是李华，你班英国交换生Peter回国前送了你一本《英语写作指
南》（The English Writing Guide）作为留念。请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司1. 表达思念；
2. 阅读收获；
3. 表示感激。
注意：1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Is everything going well?
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【答案】Dear Peter,
Is everything going well? It’s three months since you returned to England. I miss you very much.
The English Writing Guide you gave me is very beneficial to my English study. It contains rich materials that
I need most, which greatly broaden my horizons. Now I have become more interested in English and have
improved a lot in expressing myself in oral and written English. Thanks to your kindness and consideration, I’ve
made rapid progress in English study. I owe all my achievements to you.
I’m looking forward to meeting you again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假定是李华，你班英国交换生Peter回国前送了你一本《英
语写作指南》（The English Writing Guide）作为留念。请你给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有益的：beneficial→helpful
由于：thanks to→due to
表达：express→convey
取得进步：make progress→make advances
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The English Writing Guide you gave me is very beneficial to my English study.
拓展句：The English Writing Guide given by you is very beneficial to my English study.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It contains rich materials that I need most, which greatly broaden my horizons. (运用了that
引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] I’m looking forward to meeting you again! (运用了动名词作宾语)
18．（23-24高一上·河北唐山·期末）昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画(Chinese paintings)作品展。请给校
英文报写一篇宣传稿，内容包括：
1. 展览时间、地点；
2. 观展感受；
3. 推荐观展。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Exquisite Chinese Paintings Are Exhibited On Campus
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【答案】 Exquisite Chinese Paintings Are Exhibited On Campus
Aiming to enrich students’ school life and stimulate interest in traditional culture, our school held an
exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings yesterday.
As scheduled, the exhibition was held on October 6 in our school lecture hall, lasting for a week, during which
a wide variety of our students’ exhibits (展品) were on display. The exhibition provides us with a great opportunity
to have a close contact with the authentic works, through which some of our interest in traditional Chinese painting
will definitely be sparked. Besides, the exhibition is without doubt of vital significance to promote your sense of
beauty.
It’s strongly recommended that you should come and enjoy the exhibition which must be a feast for your eyes.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校英文报写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司【详解】1.词汇积累
激发：stimulate→arouse
提供：provide→supply
有重要意义：be of vital significance→be very significant
除此之外：besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, the exhibition is without doubt of vital significance to promote your sense of beauty.
拓展句：Besides, there is no doubt that the exhibition is of vital significance to promote your sense of beauty.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As scheduled, the exhibition was held on October 6 in our school lecture hall, lasting for
a week, during which a wide variety of our students’ exhibits (展品) were on display. (运用了介词+which引导的
非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Aiming to enrich students’ school life and stimulate interest in traditional culture, our school held
an exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings yesterday. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
19．（23-24高一上·广西柳州·期末）假定你是校报记者李华，你校高一年级上周三在城市公园组织了一次
跑步捡垃圾(plogging)志愿活动。请你以“Plogging — A Win-Win Activity”为题，并用英文写一篇新闻报道，
简要介绍此次活动。内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动过程；
3.活动反响。
注意：可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；字数100左右。
Plogging — A Win-Win Activity
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【答案】Plogging —A Wim-Wim Activity
Last Wednesday witnessed a novel and meaningful activity, where students from Grade One volunteered to
pick up rubbish while jogging in City Park. The activity, whose main aim was to build up students’ bodies and
beautify the environment, turned out a great success.
学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司As scheduled, an instructor first delivered a speech of the origin and requirements of the activity, explaining
to the students its significance. After the gunshot, students who were divided into different groups started jogging
on their assigned routes, bag in hand. Whenever they spotted a piece of litter along the road, they would stop to
pick and put it into the bags. Then came the highlight — Student representatives placed all the collected garbage
onto a truck bound for a nearby landfill for further treatment.
The whole activity was highly spoken of, with favorable remarks pouring in from both students and society.
Many students hoped more beneficial activities like this would be held in the near future. (160 words)
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校高一年级上周三在城市公园组织了一次跑步捡垃圾志愿活动。请
考生以“Plogging — A Win-Win Activity”为题，用英文写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动：activity→event
目的：aim→ goal
增强：build up→strengthen
举办：hold→ launch
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The whole activity was highly spoken of, with favorable remarks pouring in from both students and society.
拓展句：The whole activity was highly spoken of, with favorable remarks which poured in from both students and
society.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last Wednesday witnessed a novel and meaningful activity, where students from Grade
One volunteered to pick up rubbish while jogging in City Park. （运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The activity, whose main aim was to build up students’ bodies and beautify the environment,
turned out a great success.（运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）
20．（23-24高一上·四川眉山·期末）假定你是李华，你刚刚收到美国朋友Peter的来信，他说自己最近在
学习上遇到一些困难，感到焦虑。请你给他写封回信，提出一些建议，内容包括：
1．转变心态；
2．寻求帮助；
3．多做运动。
注意：
1．写作词数应为100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I hope this letter finds you well. I received your message about the difficulties you’re facing in your studies,
and I truly understand how challenging it can be. Here I’d like to give you some advice．
Firstly, try to think positively. Don’t give up and do believe in yourself. Secondly, it’s OK to ask for help
from your teachers, who are willing to give you a hand. Lastly, why not spare some time to do more exercise? Not
only does it help strengthen your body, but it can also relax your mind so that you may focus on your studies.
Hopefully, these suggestions will be useful to you. Feel free to write to me when necessary.
Best,
Li Hua
(120 words)
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Peter写封回信，就他学习提出一些建议。其内
容包括：转变心态、寻求帮助和多做运动。
【详解】【详解】1.词汇积累
真正地：truly→really
建议：advice →suggestion
首先：firstly →to begin with
帮助：help→assistance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hopefully, these suggestions will be useful to you.
拓展句：It is hoped that these suggestions will be useful to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, it’s OK to ask for help from your teachers, who are willing to give you a hand.
（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Not only does it help strengthen your body, but it can also relax your mind so that you may focus
on your studies.（运用了not only放句首构成的部分倒装）
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