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Unit 5 Nature’s Temper
书面表达10篇
内容导航
单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习
单元话题聚焦
自然灾害
基础语篇练习
稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值
重难语篇练习
突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数
基础语篇练习
1．根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述“一次你经历过的自然灾害（如暴风雨、雷雨
等）”，要求用上过去进行时和一般过去时。
提示：
1. 灾害发生的时间、场景；
2. 你当时正在做什么；
3. 发生了什么情况，你是如何应对的。
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例文
One evening last summer, I was doing my homework when a storm suddenly started. The wind was
blowing hard and rain was hitting the windows. I felt a bit scared, so I quickly closed the windows and turned off
the lights and TV. Then I called my parents because they were not home. I waited quietly in the living room until
the storm passed.
That experience taught me to stay calm and act quickly during natural disasters.(词数统计：77词)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时与过去进行时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，并突出重点，注意字母大
小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，交代事件发生的时间与背景，并用过去进行时描述当时正在进行的活动；
第二步，描述灾害发生时的情景以及“我”采取的应对措施；
第三步，总结此次经历的教训或感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①a storm suddenly started风暴突然开始
②turned off关掉
③waited quietly安静等待
④natural disasters自然灾害
[高分句型]
①One evening last summer, I was doing my homework when a storm suddenly started. (过去进行时与when引
导的时间状语从句连用，表示一个动作正在进行时另一个动作突然发生)
②The wind was blowing hard and rain was hitting the windows. (过去进行时的并列结构，描绘持续的景象)
③That experience taught me to stay calm and act quickly during natural disasters. (动词不定式作宾语补足语)
2．为了增强全民防灾减灾意识，推广避灾自救技能，无锡防灾减灾中心将举行“防灾减灾，守护
安全”短视频创作比赛。假如你是阳光中学的李华，你打算参加本次活动。请根据以下流程图为你的短
视频写一篇英文旁白。
注意：词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
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【答案】例文：
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua, a Grade 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. Today I want to share how to
keep yourself safe during an earthquake.
When an earthquake happens, there will be loud noise. Buildings will fall down because of the shaking of
the earth and people will be in danger.
Now I’d like to give you some tips in case there’s an earthquake. Hide under a table if you’re at home. If
possible, you can also go to an open space. Remember to stay away from buildings, or you’ll get hurt.
That’s all for my video. Thanks for watching.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己；
第二步，描述地震灾害；
第三步，给出地震时的安全建议。
[亮点词汇]
①fall down倒塌
②stay away from远离
[高分句型]
①When an earthquake happens, there will be loud noise. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Hide under a table if you’re at home. (if引导的条件状语从句)
3．地震是一种自然灾害。学会在不同的地方用不同的方法自救非常重要。请结合下表内容,写一篇
80词左右的短文,介绍一些自救常识。
At home In the classroom Outside In a car
·Stop by the roadside
·Stay under the table ·Move to an open
and stay inside
·Stay under the desk area
·Cover your head and
·Do not stop near the
neck with your arms ·Stay away from...
bridge
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【答案】例文
An earthquake is a kind of natural disaster. It may lead to serious results and make lots of people lose their
homes or even lives. So it’s important for us to know how to keep safe in an earthquake.
If you are at home, it’s safe to hide under strong tables. Cover your head and neck with your arms. If you
are in a classroom, stay under the desk. When you are outside, you should quickly run to an open space. Stay
away from buildings or trees. When you are driving a car, stop it by the roadside at once, and stay inside. Never
stop your car near a bridge.
Remember to keep calm and try to protect yourself when an earthquake starts.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给表格内容须完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，强调地震中自我保护的重要性。
第二步：按表格顺序，用简洁的句子描述不同场景下的自救方法。
第三步：总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①protect保护
②cover遮盖
③open space空旷区域
④roadside路边
[高分句型]
①If you are at home, it’s safe to hide under strong tables.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Remember to keep calm and try to protect yourself when an earthquake starts.（祈使句+时间状语从句）
4．Daming所在的城市昨天晚上发生了一场暴风雪。幸运的是，暴风雪持续时间并不长，他们全家
安然无恙。假如你是Daming，请描述一下暴风雪发生时家里人的活动情景。
写作要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和校名;2．可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯;
3．语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。80词左右。
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【答案】范文：
My name is Daming. In my city, there was a snowstorm yesterday evening. My mother was cooking dinner
in the kitchen when it started. My father was watching TV, and my little sister was playing with her toys. I was
doing my homework in my room. Suddenly, the wind howled loudly, and the snow fell heavily. We were all scared
because it was so loud and unexpected. Luckily, the snowstorm didn’t last long. After it ended, we checked
everything and felt relieved that we were all safe and sound.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时；
③提示：以Daming的身份，描述昨晚暴风雪发生时家人的活动场景，需内容充实连贯、语言精练，80词
左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇介绍身份及暴风雪发生的时间；
第二步：描述暴风雪开始时家人各自的活动及大家的反应；
第三步：说明暴风雪的结果及家人平安后的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①snowstorm暴风雪
②howled呼啸
③scared害怕的
④unexpected意外的
⑤relieved释然的[高分句型]
①My mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen when it started.（用“be doing…when…”结构，自然体现暴风
雪发生的突发性，增强场景即时感）
②We were all scared because it was so loud and unexpected.（用“because”引出害怕的原因，逻辑清晰，真
实传递情绪）
5．假设你是李辉，刚刚在英文杂志上读到一篇关于自然灾害的文章，你非常想要跟你的英国朋友
David分享。请你给他写一封电子邮件。
写作要点：
1. What kind of natural disaster do you fear most?
2. Talk about the disaster and explain why you fear it most.
3. Express your expectation.
写作要求：
1. 邮件应包括所有写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 邮件不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Long time no see. Recently I have read an article about natural disasters.
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Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear David,
Long time no see. Recently I have read an article about natural disasters. And I want to share my thoughtswith you.
The disaster I fear most is the earthquake. It happens suddenly without warning, and buildings may collapse
within seconds. Last year, I watched a documentary about the 5.12 Wenchuan Earthquake, and it shocked me
deeply. People lost their homes, family, and even lives in just a few minutes. Unlike floods or storms, earthquakes
give almost no time to escape, which makes them especially terrifying.
What about you? Which natural disaster scares you the most? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hui
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章围绕“最害怕的自然灾害”展开，包含灾害类型、原因分析和期待回复，内容完整，逻辑
连贯，符合书信格式。
【写作步骤】
第一步：以“Long time no see”问候，点明读了一篇关于自然灾害的文章，引出分享话题；
第二步：点明最害怕的灾害是地震，并说明其“突发、无预警、破坏力强”的特点；结合汶川地震的纪
录片经历，具体说明地震的危害，对比洪水、风暴，突出地震的可怕之处；
第三步：表达期望并自然询问对方看法。
【亮点词汇】
①natural disaster自然灾害
②without warning毫无预警
③collapse倒塌
④documentary纪录片
⑤escape逃跑
【高分句型】
①The disaster I fear most is the earthquake.(定语从句修饰“disaster”)
②Unlike floods or storms, earthquakes give almost no time to escape, which makes them especially terrifying.
(“which”引导非限制性定语从句)
6．根据2a~2e阅读内容，结合所学知识，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍“如何应对飓风这类自然
灾害”，包含以下要点：
1. 飓风来临前的准备工作；
2. 飓风来临时的安全做法；
3. 飓风过后的注意事项。
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【答案】例文
How to Deal with Hurricanes
Hurricanes are dangerous natural disasters, so we need to know how to cope with them.
Before a hurricane, we should check weather forecasts regularly and prepare emergency kits with food,
water and flashlights. Secure windows and outdoor items to avoid damage. When the hurricane comes, stay
indoors and keep away from windows. Follow evacuation orders if required.
After the hurricane, don’t touch fallen power lines and avoid flooded areas. Cooperate with community
clean-up efforts. By following these steps, we can stay safe during hurricanes.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：根据阅读材料要点，分三个阶段（前、中、后）介绍应对飓风的具体措施。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明做好准备的重要性；
第二步，按顺序描述飓风前、中、后三个阶段的应对措施；
第三步，总结建议，强调安全。
[亮点词汇]
①check weather forecasts查看天气预报
②emergency kits应急包
③stay indoors待在室内
④fallen power lines掉落的电线
[高分句型]
①When the hurricane comes, stay indoors and keep away from windows. (When引导的时间状语从句，祈使句
结构)
②By following these steps, we can stay safe during hurricanes. (By doing作方式状语，情态动词can表能力)
7．假设你是李华，上周经历了一场暴雨引发的洪水，请给你的笔友 Tom写一封邮件，描述当时的
情况。提示：
1. 洪水发生时你正在做什么；
2. 洪水带来的影响（如道路被淹、停电等）；
3. 你和家人的应对措施及感受。
要求：80 词左右，语句通顺，语法正确。
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【答案】例文：
Dear Tom,
Last week, I experienced a terrible flood caused by heavy rain. At that time, I was doing my homework
quietly at home. Suddenly, water rushed in very quickly. The roads outside were soon completely under water and
the power went out suddenly. It was dark and really scary outside.
My family and I quickly moved important things upstairs. We stayed together, feeling worried but also
trying to help each other. Luckily, we were all safe. The flood made me realize the great power of nature.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中洪水发生时的情况、洪水带来的影响、
应对措施及感受等要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“上周经历了一场暴雨引发的洪水”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“洪水发生时正在做什么、洪水带来的影响、应对措施及感受”几个方
面重点介绍当时的情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达对自然力量的感慨。
[亮点词汇]①rushed in 冲进来
②completely under water 完全被水淹没
③went out 熄灭
④realize 意识到
[高分句型]
①At that time, I was doing my homework quietly at home.（过去进行时）
②The flood made me realize the great power of nature.（make sb do sth使某人做某事）
8．近来，世界多地自然灾害频发，引起了全球对保护地球的思考。以“The Earth is our home”为题，
写一篇英语短文，呼吁人们保护地球，内容包括：
(1) Choose one natural disaster and talk about the results of it.
(2) What can people do after it?
(3) List one human activity that is damaging the Earth.
(4) What should people do to make the Earth better?
1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
3.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
The Earth is our home
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例文：
The Earth is our home
Nowadays, natural disasters happen more often around the world. For example, floods can wash awayhouses and farmlands, leaving many people homeless and hungry. After such disasters, we should donate money
and supplies, and help rebuild communities.
But we should also realize that some human activities are harming the Earth. For instance, driving cars too
much causes serious air pollution.
To make the Earth better, we can start with small actions. We should use public transport more often, save
water, and separate our waste for recycling. Let’s take action now to protect our only home.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当增加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
【写作步骤】
第一步：描述选定灾害的后果；
第二步：说明灾后行动并列举人类破坏行为；
第三步：提出环保措施并呼吁行动。
【亮点词汇】
①natural disaster自然灾害
②donate捐赠
③serious严重的
【高分句型】
①After such disasters, we should donate money and supplies, and help rebuild communities. (and表并列)
②To make the Earth better, we can start with small actions. (动词不定式表目的)
重难语篇练习
9．假设你校英文网站的学生论坛近期发起了一场关于如何在自然灾害中保护自己的讨论。请你根
据下面表格的提示写一篇短文。
Natural disasters We should We shouldn’t
A flood … …
An earthquake … …
A wildfire … …
要求: 1.短文须包含表格内的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.词数80左右。
Natural disasters happen from time to time, so it’s of great importance for us to know what to do when they
happen. Here are some tips.
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【答案】例文
Natural disasters happen from time to time, so it’s of great importance for us to know what to do when they
happen. Here are some tips.
When a flood happens, we’d better get to a higher place. We shouldn’t walk or swim through the
floodwater. If an earthquake happens, we should hide and run out of the building when the ground stops shaking.
We shouldn’t stand near a tall building. If we are outside when a wildfire begins, we should get away quickly and
call 119. We shouldn’t breathe in the smoke, or we will be easily hurt by it. Lastly, we should stay calm.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，分别描述三种灾害下的正确与错误做法；
第三步，用一句话总结，强调这些建议的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①run out of从……中跑出
②stay calm保持冷静
[高分句型]
①When a flood happens, we’d better get to a higher place.（时间状语从句）
②If we are outside when a wildfire begins, we should get away quickly and call 119.（条件状语从句）
10．近年来，我们身边发生了各种灾害。假如你是一名中学生，正参加英语写作大赛，请你根据以
下内容写一篇英语短文，介绍在不同的灾害中保护自己的方法，同时提出预防措施。
注意事项：1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，意思连贯，符合题意；
2. 词数80左右；
3. 文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
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【答案】例文：
There are many disasters, such as floods, earthquakes, fires, and sandstorms today.
When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and not walk through the water. If an earthquake
happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from windows. If a fire happens, we can use a wet towel
to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground. We should take action to prevent future disasters by
planting more trees and protecting wild animals.
Hope we can have a better world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总起，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“在不同的灾害中保护自己的方法”以及“预防措施”展开，适
当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①disasters灾难
②such as例如
③walk through走过
④stay away from远离
⑩take action to do sth采取行动做某事[高分句型]
①When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and not walk through the water. (when引导的时间状语从
句和there be句型)
②If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from windows. (if引导的条件状语从
句)
