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2026人教版高中英语选择性必修第一册学生AI智能体深度理解16法:第2篇|UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT·Reading and Thinking

2026人教版高中英语选择性必修第一册学生AI智能体深度理解16法:第2篇|UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT·Reading and Thinking——深度理解16法之「视域融合」

人教版高中英语选择性必修第一册 UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Reading and Thinking 完整精讲

🏫 学校:dxyc2360      👨‍🏫 指导教师:张元方

📖 一、深度理解16法之「视域融合」

两个视域在「青蒿素」那一个词上叠合

视域融合讲的是理解里最难也最要紧的一件事:读一篇文字的时候,读者身上带着一整套自己的看法,文字背后也站着一整套别人的看法,两套看法都不是随手能拆掉的。融合不是让一套吞掉另一套,而是让两套在同一个共同的问题上对齐,各自都动一动,合出一个新的看法来。这一页里,那两套看法离得格外远:一头是公元四世纪一本中医书上记下来的经验,一头是 2015 年诺贝尔奖评审给出的判定;中间隔着一千六百多年,也隔着两种完全不同的说话方式。把两头接上的那个词,是 artemisinin。

页首那两个讨论问题,就是融合留出来的接口。第一问 1 What kind of person makes great discoveries? 要你先把心里关于「什么人做得出大发现」的那套看法摆到桌面上;第二问 2 Which is more important for making a great discovery, talent or effort? 把问题逼得更细,要你在天赋与努力之间做个比较。两问都不是回课文里找原句就能答的题,它们问的恰好是读者这一头。教材把这两问印在课文之前,用意正在这里:先把读者的视域请出来,后面那两页的字才有东西可对。

这一页的文字层里站着三重视域。第一重是古人的视域,教材原样记着一本第四世纪的医书里的办法 One medical text from the fourth century suggested using the extract from sweet wormwood to treat a fever. Tu’s team tested a collection of dried,那是凭经验积下来的用法。第二重是实验室的视域,写的是提取、温度、失败与重来 wormwood leaves but found no effect. They then tried boiling fresh wormwood, and using the liquid obtained from this to treat malaria, but this did not work either. Their project got stuck. However, Tu Youyou would not acknowledge,句子短、动词密、时间清楚。第三重是公共视域,2015 年那条消息 TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE 与日期行 6 October 2015 把它放到全世界的尺度上算:一种被写成新闻标题的发现,背后是数以十万计的生命。三重视域在同一个词上叠合,那个词就是 artemisinin。

语篇体裁本身也是两套说话方式的叠合。报道走的是新闻的写法,主体以被动语态陈述事实 awarded to Tu Youyou (co-winner), whose research led to the discovery of artemisinin, a crucial new treatment for malaria.,句子短、信息密、几乎不给评价;当事人只在靠近末尾的地方以一段直接引语出现 hearing that she had been awarded the Nobel Prize, she said, “The honour is。新闻的视域讲的是「这件事在世界上处在什么位置」,当事人的视域讲的是「这件事是谁一起做成的」。两个视域并不互相取消:报道把功劳写进医学史,引语把荣誉还给团队与同国人 not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country.。

融合在末段那一句引语上完成。读到 According to Tu Youyou, the discovery of artemisinin was a team effort. Upon hearing that she had been awarded the Nobel Prize, she said, “The honour is 时,引语里的说法与前面那一串数字来回一对,两个视域才真正对齐:一个被写在新闻标题里的个人名字,底下站着一整代人。这层对齐,光读开头两段是读不出来的;它非得靠末段与前面那些数目字对一遍才显形。理解了这一点,再看页首第二问 2 Which is more important for making a great discovery, talent or effort?,天平该往哪一头偏,心里就有数了。

落到读法上,这一页可以走三步。一步是先亮出自己的视域:合上书,写下三句自己对「成就」的默认看法,一句话也行,不必用英语。二步是让页上的字来撞它:把这三句逐句与页上的字对照,特别是与末段那一句引语对照,对得上的画一横,对不上的画一圈,圈就是被改动的地方。三步是把改过的看法写回去,再念一遍本单元主题句的中文意思:「Try to become not a man of success, but try rather to become a man of value.」意思是,不要去做一个成功的人,而要去做一个有价值的人。三步走完,两个视域才算真正叠在一起。

📊 二、思维导图

导图覆盖内容

这张导图以 UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Reading and Thinking 为中心,往外分六支:页首的板块标识、两个讨论问题与两页页脚;四条阅读活动指令与活动二的方法栏 Find descriptive words;单元主课文这篇新闻的五个段群;页面上出现的全部数目字与它们各自的重量;活动三与活动四两组理解题的题干与选项;活动五那张流程图的指令与十个待填的残段。六支合起来,就是教材第 2 页到第 3 页的全部内容;照着导图回头复习,一句该有的都不会掉。

UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Reading and Thinking(思维导图)

🔑 三、重点与难点

重点

重点1:页首两个讨论问题的落点。第一问 1 What kind of person makes great discoveries? 问的是人,答的时候要说出这个人身上哪一样品质起决定作用;第二问 2 Which is more important for making a great discovery, talent or effort? 问的是条件之间的比较,答的时候不能只说一个词,要说清为什么把天平压向那一头。两问都要求先表态再给理由,这一层是本页最先要练的。

重点2:两条活动指令里的事与人。活动一的指令 1 Before you read, discuss these questions in groups. 把任务定在「讨论」上,落点是口头表达;活动二的指令 2 Scan the text and find descriptive words about Tu Youyou. 把任务定在「扫读」与「找出描述性词语」上,落点是眼力。两条指令一个管说、一个管找,读的时候要分清哪条要动嘴、哪条要动笔。

重点3:方法栏里那条可以搬走的读法。页面上单辟一栏印着 Find descriptive words,底下几行说明 Pay attention to the descriptive words in a passage. These will help you form a better impression of the subject described in the passage. 交代了它的用法:抓住文段里的描述性词语,靠这些词给所写的人留下更准的印象。这不是本页专用的技巧,往后读任何写人的文字都用得上,属于这一册最该带走的东西。

重点4:这篇报道的体裁特征与它带来的读法。标题 TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE 与日期行 6 October 2015 合起来,把这篇文字钉在新闻的格子里:标题给事件,日期给时点。新闻体的句子以事实为主体,动词形态与语态都跟着事实走,读的时候要把注意力放在「发生了什么、有关键意义的数字是什么」这两处上,而不是找抒情句子。

重点5:末段那段引语的分量。整篇报道以事实开头,只在收尾处放进一段直接引语 According to Tu Youyou, the discovery of artemisinin was a team effort. Upon hearing that she had been awarded the Nobel Prize, she said, “The honour is not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country. This success proves the great value of traditional Chinese medicine. It is indeed an honour for China’s scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world.”。这段引语承担两件事:把荣誉交回团队与同国人,再把这件事的意义提到传统中医药与国家的科学研究上。读漏它,这一篇就只剩下一份成绩单。

难点

难点1:描述性词语与事实性词语混在一处。这篇报道里既有 Tu Youyou, a committed and patient scientist, was born in Ningbo, China, on 那样带评价的写法,也有 disease. Her team examined over 2,000 old medical texts, and evaluated 280,000 plants for their medical properties. From their research, they discovered 那样纯记数的写法。要找描述性的词,就得先能把这些词与数目字、与机构名分开;分不开,扫读一遍抓上来的多半是数字,不是印象。

难点2:数目字一多,各自的重量就混。页面上从 2015 到 1971 一路排下来,有年份,有人的数目,有植物的种数。年份说的是时间坐标,人的数目说的是分量,植物的种数说的是工夫。三类放在一处而分量各不相同,读的时候要一类一类过,不能都当成「数字大就是重要」。

难点3:被动语态里的施动者是谁。报道开头连用被动 awarded to Tu Youyou (co-winner), whose research led to the discovery of artemisinin, a crucial new treatment for malaria.,主语是那项奖与那种药,做事的人隐在介词后面。要答「谁做了什么」,就得把每一处被动还原成主动,找出被省略的那个人;这一步不练,答活动三第二题时就只能凭印象选。

难点4:活动五那张流程图的空与残段对不上号。流程图上的每一行都由几段短残段拼成 Tu Youyou’s team examined , and evaluated .,快照里的抽取次序并不是读的次序。要填对,得先把残段按意思接回句子里,再回课文找出哪一段话对应哪一格,顺序一乱,末了那一格的 The medicine became for malaria. 就接不上前文。

难点5:题目里那些「没有写进文章的信息」。活动三第三题列了七个选项 A A quote from Tu Youyou. B The details of how artemisinin was discovered. C Tu Youyou’s important contributions other than the discovery of artemisinin. D Tu Youyou’s personal life. E Tu Youyou’s road to discovering artemisinin. F What Tu Youyou was awarded. G Why artemisinin is an important discovery.,要挑出两条文中没有的。判据是逐条回原文找对应,找不到才算数;凭「觉得这篇报道不该写这个」去猜,很容易把 D Tu Youyou’s personal life. 这类真的没写的与 B The details of how artemisinin was discovered. 这类写得最细的看反。

📝 四、易考题与易错题

易考题

易考题1:这篇报道最可能出自哪里。题面:1 Where would you most likely find this passage? 底下给了四个选项 A In a blog. B In a book. C In a letter.      D In a newspaper.。思路:看标题 TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE 的写法与日期行 6 October 2015 的位置,再回头看整篇的语言:以事实为主、时点清楚、开头一句就把事件与获奖人交代完。解答:这一篇是新闻报道,最可能出自报纸,也就是第四个选项。易错警示:看见开头有引语就猜博客,或者看见人名与年份就猜书本;判据是体裁特征,不是有没有引号。

易考题2:这类文章常用的语态与内容倾向。题面:2 Passages like this are most often written in and . 后面三个选项 A the active voice/offer many opinions B the first person/talk about feelings C both active and passive voices/mostly contain facts。思路:把整篇的动词过一遍,数一数主动与被动各占多少;再看内容里有没有大段抒情或评论。解答:这一篇主动与被动都有,内容以事实为主,第三个选项最合。易错警示:把「有引语」当成「谈感受」,或者把「以事实为主」读成「不带感情」,两头都是把体裁与内容混在一起谈。

易考题3:文中的数目字各自说明什么。题面:3 What numbers are mentioned in the text? What do they suggest? 思路:把页面上的数目字按年份、人的数目、种植物的种数三类分开,再看每一类出现在哪一句话里。解答:年份交代过程,人的数目交代这种药救了多少人,植物的种数交代筛选的工夫有多大。易错警示:答成「数字很多,说明成果很大」这种空话,一类都不点;或者把 30 December 1930, and graduated from Peking University Medical School in 1955. After she graduated, she worked at the China Academy of Traditional 里的年份也当成成果数字。

易考题4:青蒿素发现的关键。题面:2 What was the key to getting a good extract from the wormwood? 思路:回课文找提取方法那两处,一处是失败的煮,一处是成功的低温。解答:关键在温度:用较低的温度把提取物取出来,才得到起作用的物质,前面用煮的办法反而把那点作用弄坏了 that boiling the sweet wormwood apparently destroyed its medical properties.。易错警示:把答案写成「反复试验」或「看了很多古书」,那是过程,不是这一问要的那一处关键。

易考题5:为什么说这是一个了不起的人。题面:4 Why is Tu Youyou considered a great person? 思路:把课文中写她的品质、写她的办法、写她收尾那段话三处合起来看。解答:她带团队筛过大量古书与植物,失败了近两百次仍不罢手 worked. After failing more than 190 times, the team finally succeeded in 1971.,还敢在自己身上试药 Tu Youyou and her team members even insisted on testing the medicine on themselves to make sure that it was safe. Later, the medicine was tested on,成名后把荣誉交回团队与同国人 not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country.。易错警示:只答「她得了诺贝尔奖」,把奖当成理由而不是结果;或者只答「她很努力」,把工夫与品格混成一句。

易错题

易错题1:把标题里的年份当成获奖年份之外的另一件事。错在哪:标题 TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE 给事件,下面那行日期 6 October 2015 给时点,两样是同一件事的两面,被读成两个事件后,时间线就多了不存在的节点。怎么纠:读标题与日期行时把它们合成一句念:这条消息讲的是 2015 年 10 月 6 日公布的这件事。

易错题2:把描述性词语当成形容词清单来找。错在哪:Find descriptive words 那一栏要的是能给所写的人留下印象的词,其中既有形容词,也有名词与动词短语;只圈形容词,扫读一遍下来往往只剩一两个词 Tu Youyou, a committed and patient scientist, was born in Ningbo, China, on,印象立不起来。怎么纠:扫读时按「这个词说了她的什么」来判,凡是交代品格、态度、做法的词都圈,圈完再看这些词各自落在哪一段。

易错题3:把被动句里的施动者省掉不补。错在哪:awarded to Tu Youyou (co-winner), whose research led to the discovery of artemisinin, a crucial new treatment for malaria. 这类句子主语是奖与药,谁申报、谁研究、谁判定全在介词短语里;省掉不补,答「谁做了什么」时就会把团队的活算成一个人的。怎么纠:每读到一处被动,就在旁边用中文补一句「谁做的」,补完全文再回头对一遍,看有没有前后不一致的地方。

易错题4:流程图里的空格填成中文概括。错在哪:活动五 5 Complete the flow chart. Then tell the story of how artemisinin was discovered. 底下那张图,每一格要填的是课文里的原词,填成中文概括后与前后残段接不上,末了 sweet wormwood extract. 那一格就没法收口。怎么纠:填之前先把残段按意思接回句子,接好再回课文找出对应的那一句,从那一句里取原词填进去,填完把整格连起来念一遍。

易错题5:把末段引语读成客套话。错在哪:末段 According to Tu Youyou, the discovery of artemisinin was a team effort. Upon hearing that she had been awarded the Nobel Prize, she said, “The honour is 之后的几句把荣誉交回团队与同国人,有人把它当成获奖感言的套话略过,于是全篇只留下成果,没有留下这个人。怎么纠:读这一句时回看前文那串数目字 disease. Her team examined over 2,000 old medical texts, and evaluated 280,000 plants for their medical properties. From their research, they discovered,把两处放一起读,就会看出这句话把「一个人」还原成了「一群人」,它是全篇的收口,不是装饰。

🛠 五、五步学习法应用

第一步:每天锻炼一个小时。这一页读的是一段长报道,最配的练法是出声读。快走或慢跑回来,气还顺的时候翻开第 2 页,把 Tu Youyou, a committed and patient scientist, was born in Ningbo, China, on 30 December 1930, and graduated from Peking University Medical School in 那两行与 disease. Her team examined over 2,000 old medical texts, and evaluated 280,000 plants for their medical properties. From their research, they discovered 那两行连起来念三遍;念的时候把重音压在年份与数目字上,念完用自己的话说一遍这一段的走向。身体刚活动开,嘴也松,连着念十几遍就顺,比坐着默读管用。

第二步:扎实掌握第一个知识点。这一页的第一个知识点是板块标识与两条活动指令的分工 Describe people of achievement Reading and Thinking 1 Before you read, discuss these questions in groups. 2 Scan the text and find descriptive words about Tu Youyou.。不要急着把课文全吞下去,先把「讨论」与「扫读找词」这两件事分开:前者要动嘴,后者要动笔圈。两条分工站稳了,后面四个问题的答案该从哪里取,心里就有了准头。

第三步:能积微者速成。这两页看着只有两页,零件可不少:两个讨论问题、两条活动指令、一栏方法说明、五个段群的长报道、两组理解题共八个小题、一张十格的流程图。一天啃一块,把长报道按段群拆成五天,一天读一段、抄一句关键词,一周正好一轮。到一周末合上书,把这条新闻按时间顺序讲一遍,能讲顺就是进度。

第四步:运用对标思维突破学习困境。找一个读得比你顺的同学当参照,只盯他做活动二的顺序:他是不是先扫全文圈词,再按段落归类,末了才回头补漏。把自己卡住的那一步单独拎出来对一对,卡处往往不在词汇量,而在顺序:先归类再圈词,圈上来的词就顺;顺序反过来,圈完还得重排一遍。

第五步:运用杠铃法则缓解学习疲劳。把这一页的任务分成轻重两头。轻的一头是念顺标题与日期行 TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE 6 October 2015、把 1 What kind of person makes great discoveries? 2 Which is more important for making a great discovery, talent or effort? 两问答成三句话、默写年份与数目字,几分钟就能做完;重的一头是把末段那段引语 hearing that she had been awarded the Nobel Prize, she said, “The honour is not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country. This success proves the great value of traditional Chinese medicine. It is indeed 用自己的话讲给家人听,再答一遍 4 Why is Tu Youyou considered a great person?。中间那些抄写与选择题少量穿插。两头一夹,练的是说得出与说得准。

📄 六、课本原文

UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Reading and Thinking(教材第2–3页)

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知识点范围:教材第 2 页顶上是板块标识 Describe people of achievement 与 Reading and Thinking,接着是两条活动指令,一条要求分组讨论页首的两个问题 1 What kind of person makes great discoveries? 2 Which is more important for making a great,一条要求扫读全文并找出描写人物的词 2 Scan the text and find descriptive words about Tu Youyou.;页面上另辟一栏印着 Find descriptive words,用几行说明 Pay attention to the descriptive words in a passage. These will help you form a better impression of the subject described in the passage. 交代怎么靠这类词读人。第 2 页下半到第 3 页上半是这篇报道的正文,标题与日期行是 TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE 与 6 October 2015,正文自 This year’s Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine has been 起,至 around the world.” 止,其间 4 Read the text again and answer the questions. 以下即是第 3 页的题目行 5 Complete the flow chart. Then tell the story of how artemisinin was discovered.。第 3 页排着三组活动:4 Read the text again and answer the questions. 底下四问,3 Circle the answers to the questions below. 底下三道选择题,5 Complete the flow chart. Then tell the story of how artemisinin was discovered. 底下那张流程图的残段自 Tu Youyou’s team examined 排到 malaria.。两页页脚同文,都是 UNIT 1  PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT。以上每一条的讲解见本文第七节,题目口径见第八节。

例题与练习:这两页的编号活动共五个,依次是活动一 1 Before you read, discuss these questions in groups.、活动二 2 Scan the text and find descriptive words about Tu Youyou.、活动三 3 Circle the answers to the questions below.、活动四 4 Read the text again and answer the questions.、活动五 5 Complete the flow chart. Then tell the story of how artemisinin was discovered.。它们都不是听力题,都附着课文语篇,因此本文给出做答方法与判据;活动三属于从原文取证的题,本文按判据逐项说明,活动五那张流程图按残段序列说明填法。页面上出现插图的地方,以教材插图为唯一依据,画面里没有画出来的东西一个都不补。

💡 七、知识点完整拆解

知识点1:板块标识、学习指向与两页页脚

原文:Describe people of achievement Reading and Thinking /两页页脚 UNIT 1  PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT UNIT 1  PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT

讲解:第 2 页左上角排着两行短字,一行说这一节的落点,一行是这一节的名称 Reading and Thinking,两行合起来交代这一节读什么、练什么。页脚那一行由单元序号与单元名组成 UNIT 1  PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT,两页各印一次,位置固定在页面下缘。页脚不是课文的一部分,它的作用是在翻页时告诉你自己还在哪个单元里。

用法、考点:写单元名时序号与单元名要分开写,中间空一格,序号不带点号;单元名里每个词以大写起头,两个词之间空一格。默写时不要把页脚当成标题抄进作文。读目录或做单元索引时,页脚这一行就是最稳的定位标记。

知识点2:页首两个讨论问题

原文:1 What kind of person makes great discoveries? / 2 Which is more important for making a great discovery, talent or effort?

讲解:两问都带序号,各以疑问词起头。第一问以表示「什么」的疑问词加一个名词起头,问的是做出大发现的人属于哪一种人;第二问把两个候选条件并在一处比高低,一个是天赋,一个是努力,问的是两者当中哪一个更要紧。两问都排在这两页的最前面,位置比课文还高,说明它们不是读后练习,而是读前热身。

用法、考点:第一问的句式是疑问词加名词加动词的排法,答的时候直接替换主语与谓语即可,不必另起结构;第二问里比较的两个对象由连接词串起,答的时候要说清比较的根据,只说一个词不算答完。两问都用一般现在时,因为它们问的是常理,不是某一件已经过去的事。

知识点3:活动一的指令

原文:1 Before you read, discuss these questions in groups.

讲解:这一行是活动一的指令,开头一个序号加一格空白,接着是一截表示「读之前」的时间状语,核动词是那个表示「讨论」的词,末了用一个介词短语交代形式:分组。指令把动作定在读之前,说明这一步不看课文也能做,靠的是各人手上已有的看法。

用法、考点:凡是活动指令,先读开头的动词短语,它决定了这一步是口头任务还是书面任务。这一条里表时间的短语插在句首、两个动作之间,位置固定,抄写时不能挪到句尾。做这一步不必写长文,每组说出三四句有根据的话即可。

知识点4:活动二的指令

原文:2 Scan the text and find descriptive words about Tu Youyou.

讲解:这一行是活动二的指令,核动词表示「扫读」,后面接到要读的对象、要找的东西,末了是那个要找的人名。扫读的意思是快速过一遍、只盯目标,不是逐字精读。要找的是描写性的词,方向定得很死:不是找事实,不是找数字,而是找那些能让人对这个人产生印象的写法。

用法、考点:这一类指令里两个动词后接的成分各管一件事,一个管读法、一个管目标,混起来就会把扫读做成精读。做这一步时可以在纸上先画两栏,左栏写读法,右栏写目标,再动笔。找出来的词要能指出它在哪一句里,脱离句子的词不算数。

知识点5:方法栏 Find descriptive words 与它的几行说明

原文:Find descriptive words / Pay attention to the descriptive words in a passage. These will help you form a better impression of the subject described in the passage.

讲解:页面上单辟一栏,栏名是词组 Find descriptive words,底下几行说明交代做法:要留意一段文字里的描写性词语 Pay attention to the descriptive words in a passage. These will,这些词能帮你对所写的那个人形成更准的印象 help you form a better impression of the subject described in the。说明短,说的是一个可以反复搬用的读法:读人先读词,词站稳了,印象才站得住。

用法、考点:这一类方法栏的文字常用祈使句与一般现在时,讲的是通则,不是某一次的做法;抄写时动词短语与介词短语一并抄下。做描写类作文时,可以把这一栏当自检表:写完之后回头数一数,用了几个能留下印象的词,一个都没有就说明写成了记事,不是写人。

知识点6:新闻标题与日期行

原文:TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE / 6 October 2015

讲解:标题整行以大写排出,动词以分词形态出现,把「被授予」这件事压缩成一个名词短语,省掉了所有可以省的小词;这是新闻标题的常态写法,求的是一眼看完。标题下一行另起一行的短行是日期,只有月日与年份,没有星期,也没有地点。两行合起来把这件事钉在时间上:某年某月某日,这条消息公布。

用法、考点:写新闻标题时省掉的常是冠词与助动词,动词用分词或一般现在时;日期行里月份首字母大写,日与年之间用逗号隔开。改写标题时不要把那几个被省掉的词补回去,一补就变成了句子,不再是标题。

知识点7:第一段开头两句:奖项与那种药

原文:This year’s Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine has been awarded to Tu Youyou (co-winner), whose research led to the discovery of artemisinin, a crucial new treatment for malaria.

讲解:这两句把整件事的头绪交代完。第一句用的是被动,主语是那一年的诺贝尔生理学或医学奖,动词是「被授予」,获奖人后面用括号补了一个共同获奖人的身份,再用一个定语从句把她的研究与那项发现接上。第二句用同位语给那种药定性:一种治那种病的关键新疗法。两句都以事实为骨,没有一句评论。

用法、考点:非限制性定语从句在这里的用处是补信息而不是限定范围,从句前有逗号,把这个人已经点出的研究再解释一层;同位语常用来给前面那个名词加一个身份或性质。写新闻类短文时开头两句按这个路子走:先说事件,再给事物的性质,都别加评价。

知识点8:第一段的数目字与它们各自的分量

原文:Artemisinin has saved hundreds of thousands of lives, and has led to improved health for millions of people. Over 200 million people around the world get malaria each year, and about 600,000 die from it. Artemisinin has become a vital part of the treatment for malaria, and is thought to save 100,000 lives a year in Africa alone.

讲解:这几句里的数目一个接一个。人的数目说的是那种药救回了多少生命 Artemisinin has saved hundreds of thousands of lives, and has led to improved health for millions of people. Over 200;每年生病的人数与因此离世的人数说的是这种病的规模 million people around the world get malaria each year, and about 600,000 die from it. Artemisinin has become a vital part;末了那句把范围缩到一个洲,说光在那一处地方每年就能救下多少条命 of the treatment for malaria, and is thought to save 100,000 lives a year in Africa alone.。三个层次从大到小收下来,读的时候要能一层一层分。

用法、考点:写数字时千位之间用逗号,表示数量的短语常用「数以十万计」这一类说法,读作概数;「每年」由表时间的名词短语承担,位置在句尾。做数字归纳题时先分类,年份一类、人数一类、种数一类,分开列再比重量,比混在一起数更有说服力。

知识点9:第二段开头:身份与学业

原文:Tu Youyou, a committed and patient scientist, was born in Ningbo, China, on 30 December 1930, and graduated from Peking University Medical School in 1955. After she graduated, she worked at the China Academy of Traditional

讲解:这一段起头先给人名,紧跟一个同位结构,用两个并列的形容词点出她的品格:一个说她投入,一个说他有耐性。再往后是出生地与出生日期 Tu Youyou, a committed and patient scientist, was born in Ningbo, China, on 30 December 1930, and graduated from Peking University Medical School in,接着写毕业的年份与学校 1955. After she graduated, she worked at the China Academy of Traditional。几句全是事实,只有那一对形容词是评价,这一对词正是活动二要圈的目标之一,因为全篇用来写她品格的词寥寥可数。

用法、考点:同位语里两个形容词并列时中间用连接词,前一个后面不加逗号;写人物履历时,时间状语的次序是日期在前、地点在后。同位语是这一篇里最常出现的评价位,读人物报道时先在这一处找品格词,效率最高。

知识点10:团队的成立与首批入选

原文:Chinese Medicine in Beijing. In 1967, the Chinese government formed a team of scientists with the objective of discovering a new treatment for malaria, and Tu Youyou was among the first researchers chosen. In the beginning, Tu Youyou

讲解:这里交代了任务的来路:某一年政府为着寻找一种新的疗法组织了一支科学家队伍 Chinese Medicine in Beijing. In 1967, the Chinese government formed a team of scientists with the objective of discovering a new treatment for malaria, and,她是头一批被选中的人之一 Tu Youyou was among the first researchers chosen. In the beginning, Tu Youyou。要注意那个表示目标的名词短语,它把成立队伍的目的写死在句子里,不是笼统地说「研究一种病」;也要注意「之一」这层意思,它说明入选的不止一个,这一篇写的是其中一人。

用法、考点:表示目的时既可用带 to 的不定式,也可用名词加介词的结构,后者更适合正式文体;「其中之一」在英语里用序数词加名词加表示选择的说法来表达。答「谁做了什么」的题时,这一句要把政府与队伍两方都提到,只写人名就漏了任务的来源。

知识点11:从海南的病人到北京的项目

原文:went to Hainan, where malaria was more common, to study malaria patients. In 1969, she became the head of the project in Beijing, and decided to review

讲解:先写她去了哪里、为什么去 went to Hainan, where malaria was more common, to study malaria patients.,那里这种病更常见,她去是为了研究病人;再写她回国后接下的担子,以及她随后做出的一个关键选择 In 1969, she became the head of the project in Beijing, and decided to review:回头去查古代的医书,从传统的草药疗法里找办法。这一句是全篇的转折,前面全是背景,从这里开始进入正题。

用法、考点:非限制性定语从句在这一句里补的是地点的情况,从句前有逗号;表示目的的不定式紧跟在动作之后,中间不加逗号。这一句也是研读题目常考的一句:问「她为什么改从古书入手」,答案要从「查古书」这个动作与它的目的之间取,不能答成她的个人兴趣。

知识点12:一段里的三组数目:古书、植物与疗法

原文:ancient Chinese medical texts to find traditional botanical treatments for the disease. Her team examined over 2,000 old medical texts, and evaluated 280,000 plants for their medical properties. From their research, they discovered and tested 380 distinct ancient Chinese medical treatments that showed promise in the fight against malaria.

讲解:这一段的中心是工夫有多大。她的团队翻过两千多部旧医书 disease. Her team examined over 2,000 old medical texts, and evaluated,为着它们的药用性质评估了二十八万种植物 280,000 plants for their medical properties. From their research, they discovered,从中找出并试验了三百八十种不同的古疗法 and tested 380 distinct ancient Chinese medical treatments that showed,这些疗法在对抗这种病上显出过希望 promise in the fight against malaria.。三个数目一句比一句重,末了一个动词短语把结果收住:显出希望,不是成功。这个分寸很重要。

用法、考点:表示「为着某个用途」时介词短语紧跟被说明的名词,位置固定;「寻找并试验」两个动作用连接词并起,后一个不再重复主语。答「这片段想说明什么」时,要把三个数目与末句的分寸一起说,只说数目多,答不出「显出希望但尚未成功」这层意思。

知识点13:第四世纪的医书与头一次试验

原文:One medical text from the fourth century suggested using the extract from sweet wormwood to treat a fever. Tu’s team tested a collection of dried wormwood leaves but found no effect. They then tried boiling fresh wormwood,

讲解:一本第四世纪的医书给了方向:用那种草的提取物来退热 One medical text from the fourth century suggested using the extract from。她先试的是晒干的叶子,没有效果 sweet wormwood to treat a fever. Tu’s team tested a collection of dried;接着改试煮沸的新鲜植株,用煮出来的液体去治,同样不行 wormwood leaves but found no effect. They then tried boiling fresh wormwood,。两句连着推,写出的是同一条路的两头都堵上。注意那个表示「晒干」与「煮沸」的写法,一个用分词作定语,一个用动名词,形态不同,位置也不同。

用法、考点:过去分词作前置定语表示被动与完成,动名词短语可以跟在动词后面作宾语;表示「也没有」时用表示否定的词加表示「也」的词收尾。这一段是研读题最容易出题的地方:两次失败的方法各是什么,要靠那两个形态分辨,不能凭印象。

知识点14:项目受阻与她不认输

原文:and using the liquid obtained from this to treat malaria, but this did not work either. Their project got stuck. However, Tu Youyou would not acknowledge defeat. She analysed the medical texts again, and by chance, she found one

讲解:前一句把局面写到最紧:路都试过了,项目卡住。紧接着一个转折 either. Their project got stuck. However, Tu Youyou would not acknowledge,写出她不承认失败;再往下写她重读那些医书 defeat. She analysed the medical texts again, and by chance, she found one,偶然发现一句提示了另一种处理那种草的办法。这几句里,表示转折的那个词与表示不肯低头的那个说法是全段的骨头;后者是活动二要圈的另一处品格词。

用法、考点:表示否定意义的情态说法,比直接说「不」语气重,常用在写人品的句子里;表示「偶然」的短语插在动词前,交代这件事并非有计划的结果,读的时候不能省。答「失败之后她做了什么」时,答案要落在「重读医书并注意到一句话」上,不能答成「她换了一种草」。

知识点15:低温提取与一九七一年的成功

原文:sentence suggesting a different way to treat the wormwood. She concluded that boiling the sweet wormwood apparently destroyed its medical properties. Using a lower temperature to draw out the extract, she found a substance that worked. After failing more than 190 times, the team finally succeeded in 1971.

讲解:先给结论 sentence suggesting a different way to treat the wormwood. She concluded that boiling the sweet wormwood apparently destroyed its medical properties.:煮沸把那种草里起作用的性质弄坏了;再写改用的办法 Using a lower temperature to draw out the extract, she found a substance that,把温度降下来取提取物,于是找到了起作用的物质;末了一句交代代价:失败一百九十多次之后 worked. After failing more than 190 times, the team finally succeeded in 1971.,团队在那一年终于成功。三句合起来,把「关键在温度」这层意思说透,也把「工夫」与「成功」放在一句话里结账。

用法、考点:表示「把某物提取出来」时用介词短语交代手段与结果,顺序不能颠倒;表示「在若干次失败之后」用介词短语起头。这一句是活动五那张流程图的骨架,填图时先找出温度那一处的原词,其余格子才好接。

知识点16:以身试药、病人试验与成为标准疗法

原文:Tu Youyou and her team members even insisted on testing the medicine on themselves to make sure that it was safe. Later, the medicine was tested on malaria patients, most of whom recovered. This medicine, which was called artemisinin, soon became a standard treatment for malaria.

讲解:这里连着写了三步验证。先是她与队员坚持在自己身上试药,为的是确认安全 Tu Youyou and her team members even insisted on testing the medicine on themselves to make sure that it was safe. Later, the medicine was tested on;再是把药试到病人身上,多数人康复了 malaria patients, most of whom recovered. This medicine, which was called;末了给出这种药的名字与地位,它很快成了治这种病的标准疗法 artemisinin, soon became a standard treatment for malaria.。三句话排下来,正好是「安全、有效、被认可」三道关,一步都不少。

用法、考点:表示「坚持做某事」时动词后接介词再加动名词;非限制性定语从句在末句里给那种药补名字,从句前有逗号,去掉它句子照样成立。答「这种药为什么可信」时,三道关都要说到,只答「试过很多人」是不完整的。

知识点17:末段引语的三层意思

原文:According to Tu Youyou, the discovery of artemisinin was a team effort. Upon hearing that she had been awarded the Nobel Prize, she said, “The honour is not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country. This success proves the great value of traditional Chinese medicine. It is indeed an honour for China’s scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world.”

讲解:这段引语分三层。头一层把功劳交出去,说荣誉不只属于她一个人,背后有团队,还有全国的人 not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country.;第二层把这件事的意义提到中医药上,说这次成功证明了传统中医药的极大价值 This success proves the great value of traditional Chinese medicine. It is indeed;第三层把它放到国家层面,说这是国家的科学研究与中医药走向世界的一件体面事 an honour for China’s scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world.”。三层从个人退到团队,再从团队升到传统与国家,一步比一步高。

用法、考点:直接引语用弯引号包起来,引语里的句末标点放在引号内;引语前常用一个逗号把「她说」与引语隔开。答「作者为什么把这段话放在末尾」时,要把三层一起说,只说「她谦虚」是只看到头一层。

知识点18:活动四的四个问题

原文:4 Read the text again and answer the questions. / 1 Why is the discovery of artemisinin important? / 2 What was the key to getting a good extract from the wormwood? / 3 What numbers are mentioned in the text? What do they suggest? / 4 Why is Tu Youyou considered a great person?

讲解:活动四的指令要求重读全文并回答问题,底下四问的方向各不相同。第一问问这项发现为什么重要 1 Why is the discovery of artemisinin important?,要从第一段的数字里取;第二问问取得好提取物的关键是什么 2 What was the key to getting a good extract from the wormwood?,要从温度那一处取;第三问问文中出现哪些数字、它们说明了什么 3 What numbers are mentioned in the text? What do they suggest?,这是一个汇总题;第四问问为什么说她是一个了不起的人 4 Why is Tu Youyou considered a great person?,要在全篇里跨段取证。

用法、考点:四问依次落在「重要性、关键、数字、为人」四处,读题时要能看出每一问的取证范围:前两问范围小,后两问跨度大。答这类题先标段落,再落笔,避免答案写到别的段里去。四问都以疑问词起头,答的时候按陈述句的次序排。

知识点19:活动三的三道选择题与七个选项

原文(题干):3 Circle the answers to the questions below. 1 Where would you most likely find this passage? A In a blog. B In a book. C In a letter.      D In a newspaper.

原文(第二题):2 Passages like this are most often written in ______ and ______ . A the active voice/offer many opinions B the first person/talk about feelings C both active and passive voices/mostly contain facts

原文(第三题):3 Which two pieces of information were not included in the passage? A A quote from Tu Youyou. B The details of how artemisinin was discovered. C Tu Youyou’s important contributions other than the discovery of artemisinin. D Tu Youyou’s personal life. E Tu Youyou’s road to discovering artemisinin. F What Tu Youyou was awarded. G Why artemisinin is an important discovery.

讲解:第一题问这篇文字最可能从哪里读到,四个选项分别是博客、书本、信件与报纸,判据是体裁特征:标题加日期、事实为主、时点清楚。第二题是两个空,要补出这类文章常用的语态与内容倾向,三个选项各是一对搭配。第三题从七个选项里挑出文中没有的两条,七个选项自引语、发现过程、其他贡献、私人生活、发现之路、所获奖项、发现的重要性,覆盖面很宽。

用法、考点:这一类选择题的判据是「逐条回文中找对应」,找到的划掉,找不到的留下,七个选项要一条一条过。第二题的两个空要根据整篇的语态分布与内容倾向来定,不能只看第一句。第三题最容易错的是把写得最细的那一条也当成了「没有写」。

知识点20:活动五的指令与流程图的十格残段

原文(指令):5 Complete the flow chart. Then tell the story of how artemisinin was discovered.

原文(第一格):Tu Youyou’s team examined ______ , and evaluated ______ . /(第二格):They found a medical text suggesting ______ . /(第三格):They tested ______ . /(第四格):They tried ______ , but ______ .

原文(第五格):They used a ______ the ______ sweet wormwood extract. /(第六格):They tested the ______ medicine ______ to see if safe. /(第七格):They tested the ______ medicine on ______ . /(第八格):The medicine became ______ for ______ malaria.

讲解:活动五的指令是两件事:把流程图补完,再把这种药被发现的过程讲成一个故事。那张图从团队翻医书开始,一格一格写到成药,八格串起来正好是全文的骨干。前四格写查找与试错,中间三格写提取与检验,末一格写结果。每格的空白处要填课文里的原词,填完连起来念一遍,句子要能通。

用法、考点:做完图再讲故事,讲的时候用表示时间先后的小词把八格串起来,不要照格子逐格念。空白处的词一律取课文原词、原形不改。这一题也是全篇的复盘题:八格都能补上,说明五个段群的关系已经理清。

📝 八、例题完整拆解

例1(教材第2页) 两条活动指令的分工与落点

题目:第 2 页上排着两条活动指令,请把两条都抄下来,说出每一条要你做什么、在哪一步做,并说明两条的作用能不能互换。

思路:先看每条指令的核动词:一条是 1 Before you read, discuss these questions in groups. 里的那个表示「讨论」的词,一条是 2 Scan the text and find descriptive words about Tu Youyou. 里的那个表示「扫读」的词。再看两条各自摆在页面的什么位置:一条在课文之前,一条紧接着课文标题。位置决定先做哪一条,核动词决定动嘴还是动笔。

解答:第一条是 1 Before you read, discuss these questions in groups.,要你在读之前分组讨论页首那两个问题 1 What kind of person makes great discoveries? 2 Which is more important for making a great discovery, talent or effort?,落点是口头表达,做的时间在动课文之前。第二条是 2 Scan the text and find descriptive words about Tu Youyou.,要你扫读全文并找出描写那个人物的词,落点是笔头圈画,做的时间在读过一遍课文之后。两条不能互换:第一条问的是读者自己的想法,手上还没有课文也能答;第二条要的是课文里的证据,没读课文就无从圈起。

易错警示:把两条都当成「读后回答」的题,于是第一条也去课文里找答案,答出来的话全是抄的;或者把第二条做成精读,一词一句地查,扫读变成细抠,半天只圈到一个词;再就是把两条的次序颠倒,先做第二条再做第一条,页首那两个问题就失去了课前表态的价值。

核心发现:教材把两条指令分开摆在课文前后,是在告诉你读前与读后各有一件事要做,且做的方向相反:读前向内取自己的看法,读后向外取文中的证据。看清这层分工,这一节的四个问题该从哪里取答案就一目了然。

例2(教材第2页) 标题与日期行里省掉的成分

题目:标题 TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE 整行以大写排出,请说出它省掉了哪些成分、动词以什么形态出现,并说明下一行的 6 October 2015 在这篇报道里起什么作用。

思路:先把标题还原成一句完整的话,看补上哪些词才成句;再数一数被省掉的是哪几类词。日期行单看内容,只有月、日与年份三样,缺星期与地点,按新闻的惯例判断它的功能。

解答:标题还原成句是「这位科学家被授予诺贝尔奖」这一件事。省掉的是冠词与助动词一类的虚词,动词改用分词形态,与人名一起压缩成一个名词短语,为的是一眼看完。日期行 6 October 2015 交代这条消息的时间坐标:这件事在某年的那一天公布。它不在正文里,也不归入任何一段,作用就是给整篇报道钉一个时点。

易错警示:把标题改写成完整的句子交上去,看着像认真,其实改掉了新闻标题的写法;把标题与日期行当两件事,各说一段,时间线上就凭空多出一个节点;把日期行里的年份当成获奖人做研究的那一年,与正文里的另几个年份混起来。

核心发现:新闻标题与日期行合起来才是一条完整的消息头。标题给事件,日期给时点,两样都省到了不能再省。以后读任何一条新闻,先把这两行照这个样子认一遍。

例3(教材第2页) 第一段三组数目字的分层

题目:第一段里的数目字连着出现,请把它们分成三类,说出每一类各自说明什么,并解释末了一句为什么把范围收到一个洲上。

思路:先把带数目的句子一句一句摘下来 Artemisinin has saved hundreds of thousands of lives, and has led to improved health for millions of people. Over 200 million people around the world get malaria each year, and about 600,000 die from it. Artemisinin has become a vital part of the treatment for malaria, and is thought to save 100,000 lives a year in Africa alone.,再按数目的性质分类:说的是人、说的是时间、说的是范围。分类之后再比大小与层级,看哪一类是结论性的。

解答:第一类是救回的生命,说的是那种药已经立下的功 Artemisinin has saved hundreds of thousands of lives, and has led to improved health for millions of people. Over 200;第二类是每年患病人数与因此离世的人数,说的是这种病在今天有多大的规模 million people around the world get malaria each year, and about 600,000 die from it. Artemisinin has become a vital part;第三类是一个洲里的年份数目,说的是即便把范围缩到一处地方,这种药一年救下的人也还是以十万计 of the treatment for malaria, and is thought to save 100,000 lives a year in Africa alone.。末句收到一个洲,为的是让分量更实:全球的数目容易听成空话,缩小到一处具体的地方,数目就有了落脚点。

易错警示:把三类数目混着数,答成「数字很多,说明成果很大」;把 30 December 1930, and graduated from Peking University Medical School in 1955. After she graduated, she worked at the China Academy of Traditional 里的年份也算进成果的数目里,时间与分量就混成一团;把末句的收窄读成「范围变小了」,没读出收窄是为了加重,方向刚好反了。

核心发现:数目字在这篇报道里不是装饰,是论证。三类数目各站一层,从已立的功到病的规模,再收到一处具体的地方,三层叠起来才有第一段那股分量。

例4(教材第3页) 两次失败的方法与关键那一处

题目:课文写了两次不成功的尝试与一次成功,请把两次失败各用了什么办法、为什么不奏效写清楚,再指出 2 What was the key to getting a good extract from the wormwood? 这一问的答案落在哪一处。

思路:把描写试验那几句按次序排好:先是晒干的叶子 sweet wormwood to treat a fever. Tu’s team tested a collection of dried,接着是煮沸的新鲜植株 wormwood leaves but found no effect. They then tried boiling fresh wormwood,,末了是把温度降下来取提取物 Using a lower temperature to draw out the extract, she found a substance that。三句里两处交代办法、一处交代结果,把办法与结果配上,再回头看那句结论 sentence suggesting a different way to treat the wormwood. She concluded that boiling the sweet wormwood apparently destroyed its medical properties.。

解答:第一次试的是晒干的叶子,试完没有效果;第二次试的是把新鲜植株煮开、再用煮出来的液体去治,同样不奏效。两次失败的原因写在那句结论里 sentence suggesting a different way to treat the wormwood. She concluded that boiling the sweet wormwood apparently destroyed its medical properties.:煮这一步把那种草里起作用的性质弄坏了。成功那一次改的是温度 Using a lower temperature to draw out the extract, she found a substance that,用较低的温度把提取物取出来,才得到起作用的物质。所以 2 What was the key to getting a good extract from the wormwood? 这一问的答案就落在温度上:能不能避开高温,是拿到有效提取物的关键。

易错警示:把两次失败都说成「试验了很多次」,把具体办法省掉,于是答不出关键为什么会在温度上;读过一遍就凭印象答成「古书给的启示」,那是信息的来源,不是这一问要的关键;把 worked. After failing more than 190 times, the team finally succeeded in 1971. 里那句失败一百九十多次当成第二次失败,次数与办法就串了行。

核心发现:这一篇最要紧的一句知识在 sentence suggesting a different way to treat the wormwood. She concluded that boiling the sweet wormwood apparently destroyed its medical properties.:同一个办法换个温度就成,说明关键常藏在细节里,不在方法的大名上。答关键类问题时,先找出那句把原因说死的结论,再回推。

例5(教材第3页) 七选二:文中没有写的信息

题目:活动三第三题从七个选项里挑出文中没有的两条。题干是 3 Which two pieces of information were not included in the passage?,选项依次是 A A quote from Tu Youyou. B The details of how artemisinin was discovered. C Tu Youyou’s important contributions other than the discovery of artemisinin. D Tu Youyou’s personal life. E Tu Youyou’s road to discovering artemisinin. F What Tu Youyou was awarded. G Why artemisinin is an important discovery.。请说明判据与做法。

思路:七个选项逐条回原文找出处。找到的那几条在旁边写下段落位置,找不到的留下。判据只有一条:文中有一段或一句能对应上就算写了,全篇都找不到才是没有写。查的时候按段推进,读完一段划掉一批,剩下的再复查一遍。

解答:七个选项逐条挂出处。说引语的那一条,末段 hearing that she had been awarded the Nobel Prize, she said, “The honour is 一带有原句,写进去了;说发现过程的那一条占了正文一整段,写得最细;说所获奖项的那一条落在标题 TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE 上,说这种发现之重要性的那一条落在第一段 discovery of artemisinin, a crucial new treatment for malaria. 上,两条都在文中;说发现之路的那一条横跨第二段与第三段,也在文中。剩下两条找不到对应:一条是她在这一项发现之外的其他重要贡献,另一条是她的私人生活。要挑出来的就是这两条。做法是把七条逐条写成一行,找到出处的在行末标上段号,末了没标上段号的那两行就是要挑的两项。

易错警示:把写得最细的那一条当成「没有写」,因为「写得太详细了,不像是没写」这种感觉与判据无关;只凭「这篇报道不该写别人的私生活」去猜,理由对了但没回原文核对;把 A A quote from Tu Youyou. 里那条引语当成没有写,因为引语在末段、翻得太快没看到。

核心发现:「没有写」这一类题的判据是取证,不是印象。七个选项逐条挂段号,挂不上的那两条自己会浮出来,比逐个猜快,也比逐个猜准。

例6(教材第3页) 末段引语的三层意思与它的位置

题目:末段是一整段直接引语 According to Tu Youyou, the discovery of artemisinin was a team effort. Upon hearing that she had been awarded the Nobel Prize, she said, “The honour is not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country. This success proves the great value of traditional Chinese medicine. It is indeed an honour for China’s scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world.”。请说出这段话分了哪三层,并解释作者为什么把它放在全篇末了的位置。

思路:把引语按意思切成几截,看每一截在说谁:先说谁,再说一样东西,末了说一个国家。切完再看它前后各写了什么,对比一下就知道它为什么收尾。

解答:头一层说人:荣誉不只属于她,背后有团队,还有同国的人 not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country.。第二层说药:这次成功证明了传统中医药的极大价值 This success proves the great value of traditional Chinese medicine. It is indeed。第三层说国家:这是国家的科学研究与中医药走向世界的一件体面事 an honour for China’s scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world.”。三层从个人退到团队,再从团队升到传统与国家。放在全篇末了的位置,是因为前面几段全是事实与数字,读到末了读者手上的是一份成绩单;这一段把成绩单还原成一群人手上的活,再把这件事的意义顶到传统与国家上,全篇的分量才落地。

易错警示:只说「她谦虚,把功劳让给别人」,把第二层与第三层丢掉;把引语里的原句改几个词再引用,标点也不照原样,等于改了教材原文;把这一段读成客套话略过去,于是答 4 Why is Tu Youyou considered a great person? 那一问时手里只剩成果,没有这个人。

核心发现:引语的层次与它的位置合起来才是意思。写在末段的引语往往承担收口的功能:把前面散落的事实拢成一句可以带走的话。读报道时先看引语在哪一段,再看它拢住了什么,全篇的走向就清楚了。

📚 九、练习与习题完整拆解

📚 教材第2页 板块标识、两条活动指令、方法栏与报道前三段逐条拆解(教材第2页)

板块标识与两页页脚(教材第2页)

题目:第 2 页左上角排着 Describe people of achievement 与 Reading and Thinking 两行,两页下缘各排着一行 UNIT 1  PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT UNIT 1  PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT。请说出这四处各起什么作用,并把页脚那行按原样写一遍。

做法:先看位置:两行短字在页内正文之上,页脚在页面下缘之外,属于版式标记。再看内容:一行交代这一节读什么,一行是这一节的名称;页脚由单元序号与单元名组成,两页同文。抄写页脚时单元名里两个词都以大写起头,中间空一格,序号与单元名之间也空一格。

易错警示:把两行短字当成课文标题抄进笔记,与真正的课文标题混起来;把页脚那一行抄成小写,或者把序号与单元名之间的空格删掉写成一体;漏抄页脚,以为两页只有一处。

核心发现:板块标识管定位,页脚管归属。这两样都不进正文,却决定了翻页时你知道自己在哪一节里。做单元复习时把它们当索引,比翻目录快。

活动一的指令 1 Before you read, discuss these questions in groups.(教材第2页)

题目:把活动一的指令抄一遍,说出它要你做什么、在哪一步做、以什么形式做。

做法:三个问题分开答。做什么:核动词是表示「讨论」的那个词,讨论的对象是页首两个问题。哪一步:句首那截时间状语写着「读之前」,说明这一步在动课文之前完成。什么形式:句尾的介词短语写着「分组」。抄写时序号后那一格空白照原样留,不要把空白删掉另起一行。

易错警示:把时间状语挪到句尾,写成「讨论这两个问题,在读之前」,语序变了意思也变;把分组当成答案要求,以为每一组要写一份书面稿;把序号后那一格空白当成排版误差删掉。

核心发现:活动指令里三样东西各管一件事:核动词管做什么,时间状语管哪一步,介词短语管形式。三样拆开看,一条指令就不会读漏。

活动一的两个讨论问题 1 What kind of person makes great discoveries? 2 Which is more important for making a great discovery, talent or effort?(教材第2页)

题目:把两问抄下来,分别写出作答方法与判据。这两问都是开放题,请说明答案从哪里取、要答到什么程度。

做法:第一问 1 What kind of person makes great discoveries? 的答案从自己已有的经验与阅读里取,作答骨架是先给出一种人的样子,再给出一条能支撑它的理由。第二问 2 Which is more important for making a great discovery, talent or effort? 的答案从对比里取,作答骨架是先选出天平压向的那一头,再用一两句说清为什么。判据有两条:一是要给出理由,只丢一个词不算答完;二是两问都不许去课文里抄句子,课文是读后才有的东西。

易错警示:把第一问答成一个名字了事,没有理由;把第二问答成「两个都重要」,等于没有比较;答完这两问再读课文,读到末段引语时改了主意也不回头改答案,课前表态就成了走过场。

核心发现:这两问是留给读者的接口。先在纸上写下自己的答案,读完课文再回来对一遍,两次答案的差就是这个单元真正教给你的东西。

活动二的指令 2 Scan the text and find descriptive words about Tu Youyou.(教材第2页)

题目:请说明这条指令要你扫什么、找什么、找谁,并说出扫读与精读在这条指令里的分别。

做法:核动词是表示「扫读」的那个词,扫的对象是整篇课文,找的是描写性的词,找的是与那个人物有关的部分。扫读这一步只求快与准,眼睛过全文、手只圈目标词,不查词、不通句;找出词之后再逐句看它落在哪一句里,那才是精读的一步。

易错警示:一上手就精读,逐句抠语法,扫读的目标词一个没圈;只圈形容词,把名词性的身份词与动词短语漏掉;找出来的词不标句子,回头复习时不知它从哪来。

核心发现:扫读与精读是同一条指令的两步:先用扫读定目标,再用精读定位置。目标一步没做完就精读,等于把两张网混成一张,末了两头都松。

方法栏 Find descriptive words 与它底下几行说明(教材第2页)

题目:页面上单辟一栏印着 Find descriptive words,底下几行说明 Pay attention to the descriptive words in a passage. These will help you form a better impression of the subject described in the passage.。请说出这一栏给的是什么,怎么把它用到本篇上。

做法:先读栏名,它给的是做法而不是知识,栏名本身就是一个可以带走的读法。再读那几行说明:要留意一段文字里的描写性词语,这些词能帮你对所写的那个人形成更准的印象。用到本篇上分三步:一步扫出全篇的描写性词;二步按段把这些词归堆,看每一段在写这个人的哪一面;三步把归好的词连成两三句,用来回答 4 Why is Tu Youyou considered a great person? 那一问。

易错警示:把这一栏当成背景介绍读过就算,不拿它去读课文;把描写性词与事实性词混在一处圈,圈上来的多半是数字;归堆之后不连成话,手上有一堆词却答不出那个问。

核心发现:方法栏是这一册最便宜的东西:它只有几行,却能搬到每一篇写人的文字上。读过一栏方法,就在下一篇里用一次,这个方法才算归你。

新闻标题与日期行 TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE 6 October 2015(教材第2页)

题目:把标题与日期行各抄一遍,说出标题里被省掉的成分与动词的形态,并说明这两行合起来给读者的是什么。

做法:把标题还原成一句完整的话,比一比省掉了哪几类词;动词的形态在还原后会变,说明它被压成了分词。日期行只有月、日与年份,抄的时候日与年之间那个逗号照原样写。两行合起来给的是一条消息头:事件加时点。

易错警示:抄标题时把被省掉的虚词补回去,写成一句完整的话;把日期行里的逗号删掉,或者把年份挪到日之前;把两行拆成两条消息,时间线上就多出一个节点。

核心发现:标题与日期行是新闻体的门牌。它们省掉的成分与保留下来的成分一样有信息:省掉的是虚词,留下的是事件与人名。

报道第一段:奖项、那种药与一串数目(教材第2页)

题目:第一段自 This year’s Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine has been 起,到 a year in Africa alone. 止。请说出它的三件事各是什么,为什么把这一段的位次排在整篇最前。

做法:把这一段切成三块:第一块交代奖项与获奖人 This year’s Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine has been awarded to Tu Youyou (co-winner), whose research led to the,第二块给那种药定性 discovery of artemisinin, a crucial new treatment for malaria.,第三块摆出三组数目 Artemisinin has saved hundreds of thousands of lives, and has led to improved health for millions of people. Over 200 million people around the world get malaria each year, and about 600,000 die from it. Artemisinin has become a vital part of the treatment for malaria, and is thought to save 100,000 lives a year in Africa alone.。切完再看切块的道理:先给事件,后给性质,再给分量,是新闻导语常见的排法。答 1 Why is the discovery of artemisinin important? 那一问时,答案就落在第三块上。

易错警示:把三块当成三件事分开复述,说不出它们是一条导语的三个层次;把第一句的被动看成「没有人做事」,把施动者省掉不补;把 discovery of artemisinin, a crucial new treatment for malaria. 里那处同位语当成句子主干,读成两个并列的主语。

核心发现:导语把最要紧的三件事压在一段里:发生了什么、这东西是什么、它有多重。读懂导语的三层,后面几段就好按图索骥。

报道第二段:人物、学业、团队与三组工夫(教材第2页)

题目:第二段自 Tu Youyou, a committed and patient scientist, was born in Ningbo, China, on 起,到 In 1969, she became the head of the project in Beijing, and decided to review 止。请按时间顺序把这一段的事件排一遍,并指出活动二要圈的那两处品格词落在哪里。

做法:先把年份与年份短语摘出来,按先后排好:出生 30 December 1930, and graduated from Peking University Medical School in、毕业 1955. After she graduated, she worked at the China Academy of Traditional、工作 1955. After she graduated, she worked at the China Academy of Traditional、团队成立 Chinese Medicine in Beijing. In 1967, the Chinese government formed a team of scientists with the objective of discovering a new treatment for malaria, and、入选 Tu Youyou was among the first researchers chosen. In the beginning, Tu Youyou、赴海南 went to Hainan, where malaria was more common, to study malaria patients.、主持项目 In 1969, she became the head of the project in Beijing, and decided to review。再看品格词,那一对并列的形容词就在本段第一句的同位语里 Tu Youyou, a committed and patient scientist, was born in Ningbo, China, on;另一处表示不肯低头的写法在第三段 either. Their project got stuck. However, Tu Youyou would not acknowledge。答 B The details of how artemisinin was discovered. 这类题时,这一段是主要取证区。

易错警示:把同位语里那两个形容词当成事实略过,于是活动二只圈到一两个词;把「入选」读成「唯一被选」,漏掉那层「之一」的意思;把这一段的年份与第一段的年份混着排,把获奖的年份排到最前。

核心发现:这一段的骨架是时间线,血肉是两个品格词。时间线让你答得出过程,品格词让你答得出人,两样都要落下。

报道第三段:查书、试错与那一句转折(教材第2页)

题目:第三段自 ancient Chinese medical texts to find traditional botanical treatments for the 起,到 that boiling the sweet wormwood apparently destroyed its medical properties. 止。请说出这一段的三组数目各说明什么,两次失败各用了什么办法,并把全段那个转折句找出来。

做法:三组数目按顺序数:旧医书的部数 disease. Her team examined over 2,000 old medical texts, and evaluated、植物的种数 280,000 plants for their medical properties. From their research, they discovered、古疗法的种数 and tested 380 distinct ancient Chinese medical treatments that showed。两次失败的办法按出现次序认:一次用晒干的叶子 sweet wormwood to treat a fever. Tu’s team tested a collection of dried,一次用煮开的新鲜植株 wormwood leaves but found no effect. They then tried boiling fresh wormwood,。转折句在段的中后部,那句表示不肯低头的写法 either. Their project got stuck. However, Tu Youyou would not acknowledge 之后,紧跟着她重读医书并注意到一句话 defeat. She analysed the medical texts again, and by chance, she found one。答 2 What was the key to getting a good extract from the wormwood? 那一问时,答案落在段末那句结论 sentence suggesting a different way to treat the wormwood. She concluded that boiling the sweet wormwood apparently destroyed its medical properties. 上。

易错警示:把三组数目都当成「成果」,忘了那一句「显出希望」说的是尚未成功;把两次失败的办法说反,把煮沸放在前面;把转折句找成那个表示「然而」的词单独一行,不把后面重读医书那一句连上。

核心发现:这一段的次序是工夫、失败、不认输、转机。四步里有三步是负面的,转机只占一句,而成败的关键就在那一步里换了温度。

📚 教材第3页 报道后两段、活动三、活动四与活动五逐条拆解(教材第3页)

活动五的指令 5 Complete the flow chart. Then tell the story of how artemisinin was discovered.(教材第3页)

题目:把活动五的指令抄一遍,说出它要你做的两件事,并说明这两件事谁先谁后、为什么。

做法:指令开头一个序号,接着一个核动词带宾语,宾语是一张图;后面又一个句子,用一个表示「讲述」的动词带宾语。两件事是补图与讲故事。次序定死在句子里:先把图补完,再讲故事。原因也写在字面上:故事的内容就是那张图里的事,图没补,故事没有提纲。

易错警示:先讲故事再回头补图,讲到一半卡住又要重排;把这一条当成听力任务,以为有录音要听(这两页没有任何录音材料,这一题不需要听);把「讲述」译成「背诵」,一字不差地背课文。

核心发现:这一条指令先给图后给故事,是在教你一条复述的方法:把长文压成几格,再照格子把话讲顺。这个方法往后读任何一篇过程性文字都用得上。

报道第四段与第五段:低温提取、验药与一段引语(教材第3页)

题目:第 3 页上半的报道自 Using a lower temperature to draw out the extract, she found a substance that 起,到 around the world.” 止。请说出这两段各写了什么,并把验药的三道关按次序说清。

做法:第四段写结果与代价:改低温提取得到了起作用的物质 Using a lower temperature to draw out the extract, she found a substance that,在失败一百九十多次之后于一九七一年成功 worked. After failing more than 190 times, the team finally succeeded in 1971.。验药三道关按顺序数:自己人先试 Tu Youyou and her team members even insisted on testing the medicine on themselves to make sure that it was safe. Later, the medicine was tested on,再试到病人身上 malaria patients, most of whom recovered. This medicine, which was called,末了得到它的名字与地位 artemisinin, soon became a standard treatment for malaria.。第五段是一整段引语 According to Tu Youyou, the discovery of artemisinin was a team effort. Upon hearing that she had been awarded the Nobel Prize, she said, “The honour is not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country. This success proves the great value of traditional Chinese medicine. It is indeed an honour for China’s scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world.”,分三层说荣誉、传统与国家。答 3 What numbers are mentioned in the text? What do they suggest? 那一问时,年份与人数两类数目要分开列。

易错警示:把验药的三道关缩成两道,把自己人试药那一步当成细枝末节略过;把引语与叙述混在一处复述,分不清哪一句是她说的、哪一句是作者写的;引号写成直引号,与教材里的弯引号不一致。

核心发现:这两段一实一议。第四段把工夫结清,第五段把意义收口。写记叙类短文时照这个次序走:先把事写完,末了给一句能带走的话。

活动四:四问的取证范围 4 Read the text again and answer the questions. 1 Why is the discovery of artemisinin important? 2 What was the key to getting a good extract from the wormwood? 3 What numbers are mentioned in the text? What do they suggest? 4 Why is Tu Youyou considered a great person?(教材第3页)

题目:活动四的指令 4 Read the text again and answer the questions. 要求重读全文并回答四问。请把四问逐条抄下,写出每问的取证范围与作答骨架。

做法:第一问 1 Why is the discovery of artemisinin important? 的取证范围是第一段,骨架是先说那种药救了多少人,再说它每年还在救多少人。第二问 2 What was the key to getting a good extract from the wormwood? 的取证范围是第三段与第四段交界处,骨架是先说两次失败的办法,再说改温度这一步起的作用。第三问 3 What numbers are mentioned in the text? What do they suggest? 的取证范围是全篇,骨架是先按年份、人数、种数三类列出数目,再逐类说明分量。第四问 4 Why is Tu Youyou considered a great person? 的取证范围横跨全篇,骨架是品格一处、办法一处、末段引语一处,三处合起来答。

易错警示:第一问只答「救了很多生命」,不落到具体的两类数目;第二问答成「反复试验」或「看了古书」,那两样都没有落在关键上;第四问只答「她得了诺贝尔奖」,把结果当理由;四问的答案跨段串行,把第三问的数目写到第四问里去。

核心发现:四问的跨度一圈比一圈大:一段、两段、全篇、全篇之外还要落到人品上。答之前先定范围,落笔就不会串行。

活动三第一题:这篇文字最可能从哪里读到 3 Circle the answers to the questions below. 1 Where would you most likely find this passage? A In a blog. B In a book. C In a letter.      D In a newspaper.(教材第3页)

题目:题干 3 Circle the answers to the questions below. 1 Where would you most likely find this passage? 底下四个选项依次是 A In a blog. B In a book. C In a letter.      D In a newspaper.。请说出作答方法与判据。

做法:判据是体裁特征,看三处:标题与日期行的写法 TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE 6 October 2015、正文里事实与评论的比例、句子长短与信息密度。三处合起来指向报纸。作答分两步:一步排除最先能排除的,信件与博客通常带称呼与个人口气,这一篇两样都没有;二步在剩下的两个里定夺,书本通常给章节与注释,这一篇给的是时点与消息头。

易错警示:看见末段有引语就猜博客,把引语当成个人口气;看见有人名与年份就猜书本;只凭「我记得在哪里见过」选,不回到体裁特征上找依据。

核心发现:「最可能从哪里读到」考的是体裁辨识,不是记忆。新闻体的三个特征记住了,这一题两秒钟就能定。

活动三第二题:两个空填语态与内容倾向 2 Passages like this are most often written in and . A the active voice/offer many opinions B the first person/talk about feelings C both active and passive voices/mostly contain facts(教材第3页)

题目:第二题题干 2 Passages like this are most often written in and . 里留了两个空,三个选项依次是 A the active voice/offer many opinions B the first person/talk about feelings C both active and passive voices/mostly contain facts。请说出填法、答案与判据。

做法:第一个空要填语态,判据是数全篇的动词:开头两句连用被动 awarded to Tu Youyou (co-winner), whose research led to the discovery of artemisinin, a crucial new treatment for malaria.,中段有主动句,两类都有。第二个空要填内容倾向,判据是看全篇有没有大段评论与感受:全篇以事实为主。两个空一起看,第三个选项那对搭配才对得上:主动与被动都用、内容以事实为主。

易错警示:只看第一句就断定全篇用被动,把中段的主动句漏掉;把「以事实为主」读成「没有观点」,其实末段那段引语就是观点;把第一个空填成「第一人称」,因为末段有引语,把引语里的人称当成了作者的人称。

核心发现:两个空考的是同一件事的两面:语态看动词,内容倾向看有没有评论。两样都要通读全篇才判断得准,读一半就选必错。

活动三第三题:七选二,文中没有写的信息 3 Which two pieces of information were not included in the passage? A A quote from Tu Youyou. B The details of how artemisinin was discovered. C Tu Youyou’s important contributions other than the discovery of artemisinin. D Tu Youyou’s personal life. E Tu Youyou’s road to discovering artemisinin. F What Tu Youyou was awarded. G Why artemisinin is an important discovery.(教材第3页)

题目:题干 3 Which two pieces of information were not included in the passage? 底下七个选项依次是 A A quote from Tu Youyou. B The details of how artemisinin was discovered. C Tu Youyou’s important contributions other than the discovery of artemisinin. D Tu Youyou’s personal life. E Tu Youyou’s road to discovering artemisinin. F What Tu Youyou was awarded. G Why artemisinin is an important discovery.。请说出判据、做法与要挑的两项。

做法:判据是逐条回原文找出处,找到即划掉。做法是把七条各写一行,读完一段划一批,末了剩下没划掉的就是答案。要挑的两项:一条说的是她在这一项发现之外的其他重要贡献,全篇只写了这一项发现,没有第二件成果;另一条说的是她的私人生活,全篇除出生地与出生日期之外,再无一句写她的私事。

易错警示:把写得最细的那一条当成没写;只凭对新闻体裁的预判去猜,不回原文核对;把末段引语那一条当成没写,因为翻到末段时只看了引号,没有读引语的内容。

核心发现:「没有写」不是一个印象问题,是一个取证问题。七条挂出处,挂不上的自己会浮出来,这是这一类题唯一稳的做法。

活动五:流程图十格残段的接法与填法 Tu Youyou’s team examined , and evaluated . They found a medical text suggesting . They tested . They tried , but . They used a the sweet wormwood extract. They tested the medicine to see if safe. They tested the medicine on . The medicine became for malaria.(教材第3页)

题目:流程图上的每一格都由几段短残段拼成,残段自 Tu Youyou’s team examined 排到 malaria.。请说明怎么把残段接回整句、每一格的空该填什么、以及填完怎样自检。

做法:先把残段按意思排队:第一格说团队查了医书与植物 Tu Youyou’s team examined , and evaluated .;第二格说找到一本医书 They found a medical text suggesting .;第三格说他们试了东西 They tested .;第四格说试了但不成 They tried , but .;第五格说改用低温提取 They used a the sweet wormwood extract.;第六格说验药安全性 They tested the medicine to see if safe.;第七格说试到病人身上 They tested the medicine on .;第八格说这种药成了标准疗法 The medicine became for malaria.。接好之后回课文找出对应的原句,从原句里取词填空,词形不改。自检的方法:把每一格连起来念一遍,句子要能通;再把八格连成一段话说一遍,次序要顺。

易错警示:按残段在纸上的上下位置当次序,把快照里的抽取次序当成了读的次序;空格里填中文概括,填完与前后残段接不上;填完不做自检,八格里有两格次序颠倒也不容易发现;把这一题当成听力题去找录音,这两页没有录音材料,这一题只靠课文。

核心发现:这张图是全篇的骨架,也是最好用的复述提纲。八格补完,这一篇的时间线、工夫线与成败线就都捏在手里了。

🎯 十、方法启示总结

这一页给学习的启示

一条启示:读一篇文字之前,先把自己那一头摆出来。这一页最前面的两问 1 What kind of person makes great discoveries? 2 Which is more important for making a great discovery, talent or effort? 不给答案,也不许去课文里抄,它们要的就是你先表态。手上没有自己的看法,读的时候就分不清哪些是自己原来就懂的、哪些是这一篇刚教会的;有了表态,读完再对一遍,差别一目了然。这个动作不花时间,先写三句话即可,难的是每次都写。

二条启示:一个视域要落到另一个视域里去核。这一篇里的数目字 Artemisinin has saved hundreds of thousands of lives, and has led to improved health for millions of people. Over 200 million people around the world get malaria each year, and about 600,000 die from it. Artemisinin has become a vital part of the treatment for malaria, and is thought to save 100,000 lives a year in Africa alone. 与末段那段引语 not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country. This success proves the great value of traditional Chinese medicine. It is indeed 表面上不相干:一处记数,一处说荣誉。把两处并起来读,才看出数目背后的那群人。读任何一段事实性文字,都可以问一句:这里的数据背后站着谁?问出来,读到的就不只是数字。

三条启示:关键常藏在细节里,而细节要先被记下来才看得见。这一篇的转折就在温度上:煮的做法 wormwood leaves but found no effect. They then tried boiling fresh wormwood, 不行,把温度降下来 Using a lower temperature to draw out the extract, she found a substance that 就成了。两个办法的差别只有一个词,前面若不把两个办法各记一行,读到结论 sentence suggesting a different way to treat the wormwood. She concluded that boiling the sweet wormwood apparently destroyed its medical properties. 时也对不上号。做题时按这个方法走:凡是出现两次以上的尝试,就并列记下它们的具体差别,关键多半就在那处差别上。

可以迁移的做法有三条。一条是每读一段写一行「这一段替全篇准备了什么」,写在段边;读完把几行连起来,就是全篇的提纲。一条是遇到成组的数目,先分类再比较,年份一类、人数一类、种数一类,分开列比混着数更有用。一条是遇到方法栏 Find descriptive words 这类小栏目,读一遍就用一次,用在下一篇同类文字里,方法才算学会。三条都不难,难的是不停。

再补一条与做题有关的:凡是「文中有没有写」的题,判据只有取证。七个选项 A A quote from Tu Youyou. B The details of how artemisinin was discovered. C Tu Youyou’s important contributions other than the discovery of artemisinin. D Tu Youyou’s personal life. E Tu Youyou’s road to discovering artemisinin. F What Tu Youyou was awarded. G Why artemisinin is an important discovery. 逐条挂出处,挂不上的两条自己会浮出来。凡涉及体裁与语态的题,判据是通读全篇之后的统计,不是第一句的印象。把这两句判据记熟,往后做理解题时能省下大量凭感觉的时间。

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五个问题把这两页过一遍

自问一:这一篇为什么把读者自己的问题排在课文之前?自答:因为 1 What kind of person makes great discoveries? 与 2 Which is more important for making a great discovery, talent or effort? 问的是读者这一头,答案不在课文里。教材把它们排在最前面,是要在读之前先把读者手上那套看法请出来,读完课文再对一遍,改动的地方一眼可见。摆在读后就成了普通问答题,读前那层用心就没了。

自问二:标题 TU YOUYOU AWARDED NOBEL PRIZE 与日期行 6 October 2015 各管什么?自答:标题管事件,用的是名词短语加分词的老写法,把虚词全压掉,一眼看完;日期行管时点,只给月、日与年份,不给星期与地点。两行合起来是一条消息头。少了任何一行,读者就不知道这是什么事,或者不知道这是哪一天的事。

自问三:第一段里的数目字为什么要分成三类?自答:因为它们说的不是一件事:一类说这种药已经救回多少生命 Artemisinin has saved hundreds of thousands of lives, and has led to improved health for millions of people. Over 200,一类说这种病每年还有多少人得上、多少人因此离世 million people around the world get malaria each year, and about 600,000 die from it. Artemisinin has become a vital part,一类把范围缩到一处地方 of the treatment for malaria, and is thought to save 100,000 lives a year in Africa alone.。三类合起来,一段话里就有了分量:已经立的功、还在承受的病、以及缩小到一处仍见分量的效果。混着数,答出来的就只是「数目很大」。

自问四:青蒿素能被提取出来,关键到底在哪里?自答:关键在温度。晒干的叶子没有效果 sweet wormwood to treat a fever. Tu’s team tested a collection of dried,煮开的新鲜植株也不行 wormwood leaves but found no effect. They then tried boiling fresh wormwood,,因为煮这一步把那种草里起作用的性质弄坏了 sentence suggesting a different way to treat the wormwood. She concluded that boiling the sweet wormwood apparently destroyed its medical properties.。改成较低的温度去取提取物 Using a lower temperature to draw out the extract, she found a substance that,起作用的物质才出来。两次失败与一次成功之间,差别只有一个词,这正是这一篇最值得记住的地方。

自问五:末段那段引语为什么是全篇的收口?自答:因为前面几段给的是事实与数目,读者手上拿到的是一份成绩单 not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country.。这段引语把成绩单还原成人:荣誉不只属于一个人,背后有团队、有同国的人 not just mine. There is a team behind me, and all the people of my country.;再把它顶到传统与国家上 This success proves the great value of traditional Chinese medicine. It is indeed an honour for China’s scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world.”。三层一层比一层宽,一层比一层重,全篇的分量因此落地。答 4 Why is Tu Youyou considered a great person? 那一问时,这一段的依据排在末了。

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