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【RSB学案19】人教版高中英语必修第一册Unit3 Sports and Fitness 第4课时学案(写作专项课 体育人物介绍)
【RSB学案19】人教版高中英语必修第一册Unit3 Sports and Fitness 第4课时学案（写作专项课 体育人物介绍）
作者：Risibo
本套学案遵循日思搏英语学习法（Reasonable English）“背、悟、用”模式，构建实用高效的特色课堂。RSB即Recite（背诵）、Study（领悟）、Build（运用）。
一、狂背阶段·素材输入（课前预习）
1.话题词块狂背：背诵本单元写作高频词块，分类记忆，随用随取。人物品质类：strong determination, never give up, positive attitude, strong will, hard-working运动经历类：win the championship, suffer from injuries, set a good example, overcome difficulties评价类：be regarded as, be proud of, make a great difference, inspire others
2.高分句型狂背：背诵5个本课核心写作句型，做到脱口而出。例：定语从句、强调句、it作形式主语句、让步状语从句
二、真悟阶段·规律内化（课中探究）
写作逻辑真悟
本次写作主题为“我最敬佩的体育人物”，属于人物介绍类记叙文，采用三段式逻辑结构：
•第一段：引入点题——人物身份、总体评价（总起）
•第二段：主体展开——核心事迹、面对的困难、人物品质（细节）
•第三段：结尾升华——个人感悟、学习的精神（升华）
理性拆解高分要点：
1.语法升级：多用定语从句、让步状语从句、强调句，替换简单句
2.词汇升级：用本单元核心词块替换基础词汇
3.逻辑连贯：用although, however, besides, therefore等衔接词串联句子
范文真悟：The athlete I admire most is Lang Ping, who is a famous volleyball coach and former player in China.As a player, she won many honours for our country. As a coach, she once faced huge difficulties when the team was falling apart. However, she never lost heart. With strong determination and hard work, she led the Chinese women’s volleyball team to win the world championship again.Lang Ping sets a good example to all of us. Her spirit inspires me to keep trying and never give up when I meet difficulties in my study and life.
课堂任务：圈出范文中的单元词块、高分句型，梳理段落逻辑。
三、神用阶段·输出落地
当堂巩固练习
练习一写作词块汉译英（共8题）
1.坚强的决心________
2.永不放弃________
3.获得冠军________
4.树立好榜样________
5.克服困难________
6.积极的态度________
7.被认为是________
8.激励他人________
练习二句段搭建（用提示词补全句子，组成连贯段落，共7空）
The player ________ I admire most is Yao Ming. He ________ (regard) as one of the greatest basketball players in China. Although he met many difficulties and ________ (injure) during his career, he never ________ ________ (放弃). His hard work and strong ________ (determine) helped him achieve success. He ________ ________ ________ (树立榜样) to all young people who love basketball.
课后提升练习
练习三句子仿写（用指定句型仿写，贴合人物话题，共8题）
1.用定语从句：我最敬佩的运动员是郎平。
2.用although引导让步状语从句：虽然他受了重伤，但他没有放弃比赛。
3.用set an example to：这位教练为所有队员树立了好榜样。
4.用never lose heart：面对失败时，我们永远不要灰心。
5.用make a difference：他的精神对很多年轻人产生了很大影响。
6.用be determined to：她下定决心要赢得下一场比赛。
7.用强调句：正是他的决心让他获得了成功。
8.用be regarded as：他被认为是史上最伟大的运动员之一。
练习四篇章写作任务
以The Athlete I Admire Most为题，写一篇80-100词的短文。要求：包含人物身份、主要事迹、精神品质、个人感悟，至少使用3个本单元短语、1个定语从句、1个让步状语从句。
RSB背悟用复盘区
① 今日狂背的3组写作词块：________② 今日真悟的写作结构逻辑：________③ 写作中出现的语法/词汇错误：________
★本课时习题参考答案
练习一写作词块汉译英
1.strong determination
2.never give up
3.win the championship
4.set a good example
5.overcome difficulties
6.positive attitude
7.be regarded as
8.inspire others
练习二句段搭建
who/that; is regarded; injuries; gave up; determination; sets an example
练习三句子仿写（参考）
1.The athlete who I admire most is Lang Ping.
2.Although he got seriously injured, he didn’t give up the match.
3.The coach sets a good example to all the players.
4.When facing failure, we should never lose heart.
5.His spirit makes a great difference to many young people.
6.She is determined to win the next match.
7.It is his determination that makes him successful.
8.He is regarded as one of the greatest athletes of all time.
练习四篇章写作（参考范文）
The Athlete I Admire Most
The athlete I admire most is Lang Ping, who is a legendary figure in Chinese volleyball.As a player, she won great honour for our country. As a coach, she once faced a tough situation when the team was falling apart. Although she suffered from great pressure and many difficulties, she never lost heart. With strong determination, she led the team to win the world championship again.Lang Ping sets a good example to all of us. Her spirit inspires me to keep fighting whenever I meet difficulties in my life.
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