专题13 祝贺信
第一部分：祝贺信核心认知
祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学或成功完成了某事等时，向对方表
示祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。内容通常包括：开篇表明祝贺事由；正文说明被
祝贺人所取得的成绩，肯定对方的努力及优点；结尾表达祝愿。
1. 写作目的：对收信人所取得的成就、荣誉或重要人生时刻（如获奖、毕业、生日、比赛获胜等）表达
真诚、热烈的祝贺和分享喜悦之情。
2. 核心要素：
· 时机要快：祝贺应及时。
· 事件要清：开门见山点明祝贺事由。
· 赞美要诚：对对方的成就给予高度、真诚的赞美。
· 付出要提：（可选，但能增色）提及对方为此付出的努力，使赞美更具体。
· 祝愿要深：表达对对方未来的美好祝愿。
第二部分：万能写作模板
模板一：经典三段式
Paragraph 1: 开门见山，表达祝贺 & 点明事由
I am writing to extend my warmest/sincerest congratulations to you on your remarkable achievement in
[成就事件，如 the National English Speech Contest].
The moment I heard the exciting news from [消息来源，如 our teacher / the school broadcast], I could
not wait to express how happy and proud I am for you.
【译文】：我写这封信是为了对你在于 [成就事件] 中取得的卓越成就表示我最热烈/最诚挚的祝贺。当
我从 [消息来源] 听到这个令人兴奋的消息时，我迫不及待地想告诉你我为你感到多么高兴和自豪。
Paragraph 2: 赞美成就，阐述意义 (核心段落)
This outstanding achievement is, without doubt, a testament to your [品质1，如 hard work] and [品质
2，如 exceptional talent] that you have demonstrated over the past years.
写作指导
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I know how much effort you have invested in [ 相关领域，如 practicing spoken English]. Your
perseverance and dedication have finally paid off, and it is incredibly inspiring to all of us.
You have not only won the honor for yourself but also set a shining example for our entire school.
【译文】：这一杰出成就无疑证明了你在过去几年中所展现出的 [品质1] 和 [品质2]。我知道你在 [相
关领域] 投入了多少努力。你的坚持和奉献终于得到了回报，这对我们所有人来说都是一种极大的鼓舞。
你不仅为自己赢得了荣誉，也为我们整个学校树立了光辉的榜样。
Paragraph 3: 再次祝贺，表达祝愿
Please accept my heartfelt congratulations once again. I wish you continued success in your future
studies and endeavors. I am looking forward to celebrating this joy with you in person soon.
【译文】：请再次接受我衷心的祝贺。祝你在未来的学习和努力中取得持续的成功。我期待着不久后能
与你当面庆祝这份喜悦。
模板二：万能模板
Dear Mrs Wang ,
This highlight moment in your life prompts me to write at once, and in my peculiar way, to attempt
to offer my warmest congratulations.
I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ... . I’m amazed at your extraordinary
achievement since it is difficult to ... It is your untiring diligence, perseverance and immense devotion that stand
you out in the crowd. What deserves being emphasized is that it is your consistent efforts that push you to this
level. If possible, ...
I have confidence that you will gain more shinning achievement in your future life. I shall,one more
time, offer you my sincerest congratulations.All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第三部分：高频场景 & 核心素材库
场景一：比赛获奖（演讲、辩论、体育等）
· 赞美成就：remarkable achievement, outstanding performance, brilliant success
· 提及品质：
· Hard work and perseverance (努力与坚持)
· Exceptional talent and eloquence (卓越的才华与口才)
· Strong willpower and team spirit (坚强的意志力与团队精神)
· 常用句式：
· Your victory in the... competition is well-deserved. (你在……比赛中的胜利是实至名归的。)
· You have made us all proud. (你让我们所有人都感到骄傲。)
场景二：升学/毕业
· 赞美成就：brilliant academic record, this new chapter in your life
· 提及品质：
· Diligence and intelligence (勤奋与智慧)
· Consistent effort (持续的努力)
· 常用句式：
· Congratulations on your admission to [大学名称] University! (祝贺你被[大学名称]录取！)
· Wishing you all the best as you embark on this exciting new journey. (在你开启这段激动人心的新
旅程之际，祝你一切顺利。)
场景三：生日/节日祝贺
· 表达祝福：on the occasion of your birthday
· 常用句式：
· I hope your birthday is filled with joy and laughter. (愿你的生日充满欢乐和笑声。)
· May all your wishes and dreams come true in the year ahead. (愿你在新的一年里所有的愿望和梦想
都能成真。)
第四部分：高分亮句 & 升级技巧
1. 开头句升级：
· 平淡：I'm writing to congratulate you.
· 高分：I was absolutely delighted to hear the wonderful news that you [成就事件]. Please accept my
heartiest congratulations! (听到你[成就事件]这个好消息，我欣喜万分。请接受我最衷心的祝贺！)
2. 赞美成就句式多样化：
· What a fantastic achievement! (多么了不起的成就！)
· I must express my admiration for your incredible success in... (我必须表达对你在于……方面取得的巨
大成功的钦佩。)
· This success is a true reflection of your dedication and talent. (这次成功是你奉献精神和才华的真实写
照。)
3. 提及付出的高级表达：
· I am aware of the countless hours and immense effort you have devoted to... (我知道你为……投入了
无数的时间和巨大的努力。)
· Your achievement is the well-deserved reward for your perseverance. (你的成就是对你坚持不懈精神的
应得回报。)
4. 结尾句升级：
· 平淡：Good luck.
· 高分：I have no doubt that you will achieve even greater things in the future. Keep up the excellent
work! (我毫不怀疑你未来会取得更大的成就。继续保持出色的工作！)
· 更高分：May this success be just the beginning of a series of brilliant accomplishments in your life.
(愿这次成功仅仅是你人生中一系列辉煌成就的开始。)
温馨提示：
1. 感情要真挚：祝贺信的核心是“情”，语气要热情、真诚，避免空洞。
2. 内容要具体：提到具体事件，甚至一个具体细节（如“记得你在实验室……”），能让信件瞬间生动
起来。
3. 基调要积极：全文应充满喜悦、赞美和鼓励。
4. 格式不忘却：注意书信格式（称呼、结尾、署名）。
【2020 四川成都三模】假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Eric 在汉语演讲比赛（the Chinese Speech Contest）中荣获一等奖。请
你用英文给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 表扬他为此付出的努力;
3. 表达对他未来的祝愿。
注意：1.词数100 字左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
答案：
一、审题：祝贺信；Peter；第一、二人称为主；一般现在时和一般过去时为主，现在完成时和将来时
为辅；祝贺对方获奖，肯定对方的努力并求教。
二、构思: 高兴+衷心祝贺；肯定付出+求教；再次祝贺
三、句子信息拓展句：
1. Inspired by the good news that you won first prize in the World Educational Robot Contest, I am
writing to express my sincerest congratulations.
2.Having learned with delight that you won first prize in the World Educational Robot Contest, I’m
writing to convey my heartfelt congratulations to you.
3. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits.”
4. comes as no surprise the time and efforts you have devoted.
comes as no surprise your hard work and preparations for the competition
5. It is your diligence, perseverance and superb programming skill that contribute to your success.
There is no denying that your diligence, perseverance and superb programming skill contribute to
your success.
6. I’d appreciate it if you can offer me some advice on designing a robot.
Dear Eric,
How’s everything going? Learning that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest,
I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
As your friend, I am well aware that it is your diligence, perseverance and effective learning methods
that contribute to your success. I am deeply impressed with your standard pronunciation and fluent
Chinese. There is no doubt that having a good command of Chinese enables you to see the world through
a new window. Chinese learners like you will play an important role in promoting better understanding
and cooperation between China and your country.
Wish you greater progress and further success in learning Chinese!
Yours,
Li Hua
【Writing 1】 假如你是李华，你的朋友Wang Tao 参加高考被北京大学录取。请根据以下提示写一封英
文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1)祝贺他被录取；
2)肯定他付出的努力；
3 表达自己向他学习的愿望。。
注意：
1. 词数100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
答案：
Dear Wang Tao,
I have learned with delight that you have passed the college entrance examination. And you are lucky
to be a new student of Beijing University. I’d like to offer you my congratulations on your
success. Congratulations to you !
Beijing University is one of the most famous universities in our country. It has trained thousands of
Chinese youths into scholars and experts. I wish you would be an extraordinary expert in the future.
Your success has greatly encouraged me to study harder. I hope that I’ll have the same chance as you
now have. Kindly let me know when you are in the university, tell me your life and study in Beijing.
My best wishes for your further success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【Writing 2】 假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter 获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等
奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：
1. 天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功；
2. 继续努力，有机会来中国留学；
3. 希望见面和交流。
注意：1. 词数100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
“汉语桥”世界大学生中文比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest
答案：
Dear Peter,
How is everything going with you recently? I am more than delighted to hear that you won the first
prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your
achievement.
As we all know, it is your hard work and persistence that lead you to the current success. In the past
few months, you have been devoting time and effort to practicing Chinese every day, because of which
you made great progress. But in order to achieve more in your study and embrace a better future in your
life, you’d better go on studying Chinese harder. Eventually, would you tell me when it’s convenient for
you? I feel like seeing you and communicating with you.
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Yours,
Li Hua
