投稿万能模板及写作指导
一、万能模板
模板①
（校园生活投稿）
标题：The Warmth in My School Life
Dear Editors,
I’m writing to share a story that touched my heart deeply in
my school life.
Last ______ (时间，如Friday afternoon), I ______ (事件起因，
如forgot to bring my math textbook). Just when I felt worried,
______ (人物，如my deskmate Li Yue) noticed and ______ (行为，
如lent me her book and shared notes with me during class). What
impressed me most was ______ ( 细节，如she said “ We’ re
partners in study” with a smile).
This small act made me realize ______ (感悟，如the beauty of
friendship in school). I hope this story can remind more
students to cherish the warmth around us.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
（社会现象投稿）
标题：My Thoughts on ______ (现象，如“Online Shopping”)
Dear Editors,
I’m writing to talk about a common social phenomenon: ______
( 现象名称，如the popularity of online shopping among
teenagers).
Nowadays, more and more teens ______ (行为，如buy daily items
or study tools online). It brings convenience, but I’ve also
seen ______ (问题，如some students spend too much money on
unnecessary things). Once, my friend ______ (例子，如spent
200 yuan on toys online and regretted it later).
In my opinion, teens should ______ ( 建议，如use online
shopping wisely and control their spending). I hope this can
draw everyone’s attention to rational consumption.
Yours faithfully,
Zhang Wei
模板③
（环保建议投稿）
标题：Let’s Build a Greener Campus
Dear Editors,
I’ m writing to put forward some suggestions on making our
campus greener.
At present, ______ (校园环保问题，如we can see waste paper
and plastic bottles in the playground sometimes). To solve
this, I suggest:
1. ______ (建议1，如setting up more classified dustbins in
every corner of the campus);
2. ______ ( 建议2 ，如holding a “ Green Week” activity to
teach students to reuse old items).
I believe if we all take action, our campus will ______ (效果，
如become cleaner and more beautiful). Let’s start from small
things!
Yours truly,
Wang Ming
模板④
（文化体验投稿）
标题：My Wonderful Experience with Paper-Cutting
Dear Editors,
I’m excited to share my experience of learning traditional
paper-cutting last month.
Last ______ ( 时间，如Sunday), our class visited a paper-
cutting workshop. The old craftsman ______ (过程，如taught us
to fold the paper and cut patterns step by step). At first, I
______ (困难，如couldn’t control the scissors well), but with
his help, I finally made a paper-cut of a “lucky rabbit”.
This experience let me ______ ( 感悟，如feel the charm of
traditional culture). I hope more teens can try such
activities to learn about our cultural heritage.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Lin
模板⑤
（学习方法投稿）
标题：A Useful Method to Improve English Listening
Dear Editors,
I’ m writing to share a method that helped me improve my
English listening greatly.
Before, I ______ (过去问题，如found it hard to follow English
conversations in exams). Then my teacher suggested ______ (方
法，如listening to English podcasts for 15 minutes every day
and writing down key words). I tried it: I chose podcasts
about ______ ( 内容，如teen life), and after one month, I
______ ( 效果，如could understand 80% of the content in
listening tests).
I think this method works because ______ (原因，如it combines
interest and practice). I hope it can help other students
with their English learning.
Yours faithfully,
Li Tao
模板⑥
（人物故事投稿）
标题：The Most Respectable Person in My Eyes
Dear Editors,
I’m writing to introduce a person who deserves our respect—
my neighbor Uncle Wang.
Uncle Wang is ______ (身份，如a cleaner in our community).
Every morning, I see him ______ (行为，如sweeping the street
carefully even in cold winter). Last month, when it rained
heavily, he ______ ( 事件，如helped an old lady carry
groceries home and fixed her broken umbrella).
He often says, “______ (引语，如It’s my duty to make our
community clean and warm).” His dedication teaches me ______
(感悟，如that ordinary people can do great things).
Yours truly,
Zhao Na
模板⑦
（健康生活投稿）
标题：Let’s Say “No” to Unhealthy Habits
Dear Editors,
I’ m writing to talk about the unhealthy habits among some
students and call for a healthier lifestyle.
Now, many teens ______ (习惯，如stay up late playing phones
or eat too much junk food). Last term, my classmate ______ (例
子，如got a stomachache because of eating fast food every
day). These habits are bad for our ______ (影响，如physical and
mental health).
To change this, we should ______ (建议，如go to bed before
10:30 pm and eat more vegetables). Let’s develop good habits
to keep healthy!
Yours sincerely,
Sun Jia
模板⑧
（志愿者活动投稿）
标题：My Volunteer Experience in the Old People’s Home
Dear Editors,
I’m glad to share my volunteer experience at the local old
people’s home last weekend.
When we arrived, the elders ______ ( 状态，如welcomed us
warmly). We ______ (活动，如chatted with them, sang old songs
and helped clean their rooms). An 80-year-old grandma ______
( 细节，如told us stories about her youth and held my hand
tightly).
This activity made me ______ (感悟，如know that the elders
need company). I hope more people can spend time with them
and bring them happiness.
Yours faithfully,
Hu Yi
模板⑨
（书籍推荐投稿）
标题：A Book That Changed My Mind
Dear Editors,
I’m writing to recommend a book that has influenced me a lot
—*The Little Prince*.
I read this book last summer. It tells the story of ______ (内
容，如a little prince who travels to different planets and
learns about love and responsibility). What touched me most is
______ (观点，如the sentence “The most important things are
seen with the heart, not the eyes”).
This book teaches me ______ (感悟，如to cherish the people
and things around me). I think it’s worth reading for every
teenager.
Yours truly,
Qian Hong
模板⑩
（节日感悟投稿）
标题：The Meaning of the Spring Festival
Dear Editors,
I’ m writing to share my new understanding of the Spring
Festival after this year’s celebration.
Before, I thought the Spring Festival was just about ______
( 过去看法，如getting red envelopes and eating delicious
food). But this year, I helped my parents ______ (行为，如
prepare New Year’s Eve dinner and visit my grandparents). My
grandma said, “______ (引语，如The festival is about family
getting together).”
Now I know the Spring Festival is a time to ______ (新感悟，
如express love to family and pass on our traditions). It’s the
most precious festival for us Chinese.
Yours sincerely,
Deng Fan
二、写作指导
1.标题要求：点明投稿核心（如故事、观点、体验），简洁有吸引
力。
2.开头格式：以“Dear Editors,”开头，明确说明投稿目的（分享故
事/建议/感悟等）。
3.主体逻辑：
- 故事类：按“起因→经过→细节/亮点”展开；
- 建议类：先提问题，再给具体建议；
- 感悟类：结合具体事件，自然引出思考。
4.结尾要点：总结核心观点/感悟，呼应投稿主题。
5.语言技巧：
- 用第一人称增强真实感；
- 加入具体细节（动作、对话、例子），让内容更生动；
- 避免生硬表达，用自然的连接词（如“ Just when” “ What
impressed me most”）衔接。
