2025 届河北省“五个一”名校联盟高三下学期4 月联考英语试题
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
Ten years ago, a man named Richard moved to a big city. The city was very
differentfrom the quiet town he had left, It was full of tall buildings and busy streets.
Richard lookedtired, but he was determined to find a job.
However, luck was not on his side. After a series of unsuccessful interviews, he
feltdisheartened. To make matters worse, he realized he had lost his phone and wallet,
the verytools that connected him to his loved ones and his means of survival. Panic set
in as the sunbegan to set, casting long shadows across the city streets. Feeling small
and alone, Richardlooked for help in a shop near the bus station, The warm lights of
the shop cheered him up.The shop was a cosy little space, filled with the smell of
fresh bread and the sound of music. The owner, an elderly gentleman with kind eyes,
noticed Richard's distress. His name was Mr Smith, a man known for his warm smile
and generous spirit. Richard, with avoice trembling with anxiety, explained his
difficulty to Mr Smith. “Sir, I'm really in trouble,” Richard said. “I lost my phone and
wallet, and I don't know how I'm going to gethome.
“Don't worry!” r Smith said gently, “Let me get you something to eat first. You
seemto need it, " Then he gave Richard a hot meal. The sweet smell from the
sandwich and thesoup made Richard feel grateful. After eating, Mr Smith helped
Richard purchase a bus tickethome, insisting that he take some extra money for his
journey. Richard's eyes welled up withtears of relief and gratitude, The kindness of a
stranger in a strange city was a lifeline he hadnot expected.
The next morning, as Richard got on the bus, he looked back at the shop. The
lightsnow seemed like a sign of hope and humanity. At that moment, the thought of
Mr Smith'swarm smile and the simple yet delicious meal he had provided made
Richard feel peaceful.Richard promised to return and thank Mr Smith for his
kindness.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150 左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: A few months later, Richard, who now had a job, returned to the city.
Paragraph 2: Richard found the shop just as he had left it.
2025 届河北省“五个一”名校联盟高三下学期4 月联考英语试题
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ten years ago, a man named Richard(过去分词做后置定语，给出人物1) moved to a big city. The
city was very different from the quiet town he had left. It was full of tall
buildings and busy streets. Richard looked tired(写人物的状态), but he was determined to
find a job(交代背景信息，给出人物1
·).
However, luck was not on his side(总括人物的接下来的走向，可参照这里进行全文的安排). After a series
of unsuccessful interviews, he felt disheartened. To make matters worse, he
realized he had lost his phone and wallet, the very tools that connected him to
his loved ones and his means of survival(冲突或者转折1，人物的困境). Panic set in(情绪描写) as the
sun
began to set
(环境描写), casting
long shadows across the city streets
(现在分词做后置定语).
Feeling
small and alone
(现在分词做伴随动作), Richard looked for help in a shop near the bus
station. The warm lights of the shop cheered him up(环境描写刻画人物的情绪).The shop was a
cosy little space, filled with
the smell of fresh bread and the sound of
music
(过去分词
短语做后置定语，暗示转机的出现). The owner, an elderly gentleman with kind eyes(人物描写), noticed
Richard's distress. His name was Mr Smith( 人物2), a man known
for his warm
smile and generous spirit(过去分词做后置定语，交代人物特点). Richard, with a
voice trembling with
anxiety(情绪描写), explained his difficulty to Mr Smith. “Sir, I'm really in trouble,”
Richard said. “I lost my phone and wallet, and I don't know how I'm going to get
home”.
“Don't worry!” Mr Smith said gently, “Let me get you something to eat first.
You seem to need it, " Then he gave Richard a hot meal. The sweet smell from the
sandwich and the soup made Richard feel grateful. After eating, Mr Smith helped
Richard purchase a bus ticket home, insisting( 现在分词做伴随动作) that he take some
extra money for his journey. Richard's eyes welled up with tears of relief and
gratitude. The kindness of a stranger in a strange city was a lifeline he had not
expected.
The next morning, as Richard got on the bus, he looked back at the shop. The
lights now seemed like a sign of hope and humanity( 环境描写). At that moment, the
thought of
Mr Smith'swarm smile and the simple yet delicious meal
he had
provided made Richard feel peaceful( 人物心理描写). Richard promised to return and
thank Mr Smith for his kindness(故事的走向还是很清楚的，感恩和回报，有点仿2024 高考题).
注意:
1.续写词数应为150 左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: A few months later, Richard, who now had a job, returned to the city.
Paragraph 2: Richard found the shop just as he had left it.
1. 读后续写类型分析及构思布局
类型：本文属于“困境-转机-感恩回报”类读后续写，核心主题是陌生人善
意引发的正向循环。
构思框架：
步骤
内容
承接原文
续写需围绕Richard 的感恩行动展开，呼应Mr Smith 的善意和
“希望之光”的象征意义。
布局
段落1：Richard 重返城市，寻找Mr Smith；段落2：回报善意或
传递善意。
设计技巧
通过动作描写（如“推开店门”）和环境对比（如“灯光依
旧”）强化情感联结。
注意事项：
必须保留原文关键词（如“warm smile”“lights of hope”）。
延续第三人称视角和心理描写（如“Richard felt determined”）。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
故事山模式：
阶段
原文内容
开端
Richard 初到城市，遭遇失业和丢失财物。
发展
Mr Smith 提供食物、车票和金钱，给予希望。
阶段
原文内容
高潮
Richard 感恩承诺，灯光象征人性光辉。
回落/结局
续写需完成回报善意的闭环（如Richard 帮助他人或Mr Smith 的惊
喜）。
伏笔与冲突点：
伏笔：Mr Smith 的“generous spirit”暗示他可能拒绝回报，或需要帮助。
冲突点：Richard 的生存危机（丢失钱包）与城市冷漠的潜在对比。
隐含线索：“灯光象征希望”可延伸为Richard 未来照亮他人。
3. 原文分析表格
分析
角度
内容
原文反应句
人物
刻画
Mr Smith 善良慷慨，
Richard 坚韧感恩。
“an elderly gentleman with kind eyes”“Richard's
eyes welled up with tears”
情感
层次
从绝望→感激→希望
→决心回报。
“panic set in”→“felt grateful”→“thought...made
Richard feel peaceful”
关键
情节
点
丢失财物→获助→承
诺回报。
“lost his phone and wallet”→“Mr Smith
helped...purchase a bus ticket”
语言
特色
感官描写（嗅觉、视
觉）强化情感。
“smell of fresh bread”“lights now seemed like a
sign of hope”
分析
角度
内容
原文反应句
心理
描写
通过动作和表情间接
体现心理。
“voice trembling with anxiety”“looked tired”
动作
描写
细节动作推动情节。
“gave Richard a hot meal”“looked back at the
shop”
隐含
主题
善意传递与人性温
暖。
“kindness of a stranger...was a lifeline”
3. 动作、心理、环境描写的推荐英文例句及翻译
动作描写（Action Descriptions）
1. He clutched the bus ticket tightly, his fingers trembling.
（他紧紧攥着车票，手指颤抖。）
2. With a deep breath, he pushed open the creaky shop door.
（深吸一口气，他推开了吱呀作响的店门。）
3. His footsteps echoed in the empty street as he hurried toward the light.
（他的脚步声在空荡的街道上回响，他匆匆朝灯光走去。）
4. Richard reached into his pocket, pulling out a crumpled bill.
（理查德把手伸进口袋，掏出一张皱巴巴的钞票。）
5. The old man leaned forward, his kind eyes studying Richard’s face.
（老人向前倾身，慈祥的目光打量着理查德的脸。）
6. He hesitated for a moment before knocking on the door.
（他犹豫了一下，才敲了敲门。）
7. Richard’s hands shook as he accepted the warm bowl of soup.
（理查德接过那碗热汤时，双手颤抖。）
8. The shopkeeper wiped his hands on his apron before handing over the change.
（店主在围裙上擦了擦手，然后递过零钱。）
9. He turned back one last time, memorizing the shop’s familiar sign.
（他最后一次回头，记住了店铺熟悉的招牌。）
10. With a grateful nod, Richard stepped onto the bus.
（理查德感激地点点头，踏上了公交车。）
心理描写（Psychological Descriptions）
1. A wave of relief washed over him as he recognized the shop.
（认出那家店时，他感到一阵释然。）
2. Doubt gnawed at him—would Mr. Smith even remember him?
（疑虑啃噬着他——史密斯先生还会记得他吗？）
3. His heart swelled with gratitude as he recalled the old man’s kindness.
（回想起老人的善意，他的心中充满感激。）
4. Fear gripped him when he realized his wallet was gone.
（发现钱包不见了时，恐惧攫住了他。）
5. A flicker of hope sparked in his chest when he saw the warm lights.
（看到温暖的灯光时，他心中燃起一丝希望。）
6. He felt a pang of guilt for not returning sooner.
（他因没有早点回来而感到一阵内疚。）
7. The weight of loneliness pressed down on him as night fell.
（夜幕降临，孤独感沉重地压在他身上。）
8. His mind raced, trying to figure out his next move.
（他的大脑飞速运转，试图想出下一步该怎么办。）
9. A quiet determination settled in his heart—he would repay this kindness.
（一种坚定的决心在他心中扎根——他要回报这份善意。）
10. For the first time in months, he felt a sense of belonging.
（几个月来，他第一次感到了一种归属感。）
环境描写（Environmental Descriptions）
The golden glow of the shop spilled onto the dark sidewalk.
（店铺的金色灯光洒在黑暗的人行道上。）
The scent of freshly baked bread lingered in the air.
（新鲜出炉的面包香气在空气中萦绕。）
The city buzzed with noise, but inside the shop, it was peaceful.
（城市喧嚣嘈杂，但店铺内却一片宁静。）
Shadows stretched long across the pavement as the sun dipped below the
buildings.
（太阳沉入高楼之间，影子在人行道上拉长。）
Raindrops tapped against the window, adding to the cozy atmosphere.
（雨滴轻叩窗户，增添了一丝温馨的氛围。）
The hum of the refrigerator and the soft radio music filled the quiet space.
（冰箱的嗡嗡声和轻柔的广播音乐填满了安静的空间。）
Neon signs flickered in the distance, casting colorful reflections on the wet
streets.
（远处的霓虹灯闪烁，在潮湿的街道上投下彩色的倒影。）
The wooden floor creaked under his weight as he stepped inside.
（他走进去时，木地板在他的重量下吱呀作响。）
A cold wind howled outside, making the warmth inside even more inviting.
（外面寒风呼啸，让室内的温暖更加诱人。）
The morning sun bathed the shop in a soft, golden light.
（晨光给店铺镀上一层柔和的金色。）
4. 高级替换词 & 固定搭配
高级替换词（场景分类）
普通词
高级替换词
适用场景
happy
elated (狂喜的)
极度高兴时
sad
despondent (沮丧的)
极度失落时
tired
weary (疲惫不堪的)
长期疲劳
kind
compassionate (富有同情心的)
描写善良人物
cold
chilly (凉飕飕的)
天气/环境描写
固定搭配 & 词法解析
cast long shadows（投下长长的影子）
用法：环境描写，常用于黄昏或清晨。
例句：The setting sun cast long shadows across the empty street.
The trees cast long shadows in the evening light.
well up with tears（泪水涌出）用法：描写强烈情感（感动、悲伤）。
例句：Her eyes welled up with tears of joy.
He tried to speak, but his eyes welled up with tears.
insist on doing sth.（坚持做某事）用法：强调某人坚决的态度。
例句：Mr. Smith insisted on giving Richard extra money.
She insisted on walking home alone.
a lifeline（救命稻草）用法：比喻关键帮助。
例句：The kind stranger’s help was a lifeline for Richard.
The scholarship became her lifeline to education.
settle in one’s heart（在心中扎根）用法：描写长期的情感或决心。
例句：A deep sense of gratitude settled in his heart.
The memory of that day settled in her heart forever.
5. 可积累的语料（生词短语）
短语/单词
词
性
词义
近义词
反义词
例句
disheartened
adj.
灰心
的
discourag
ed
encouraged
After many rejections, he
felt disheartened.
cosy
adj.
舒适
的
snug
uncomfortab
le
The small café had a
cosy atmosphere.
well up
(with tears)
v.
涌出
（泪
水）
brim
(with)
dry up
Her eyes welled up with
emotion.
generous
spirit
n.
慷慨
的精
神
kindness
selfishness
Mr. Smith was known for
his generous spirit.
lifeline
n.
生命
线
salvation
downfall
The loan was a lifeline
for his struggling
business.
6. Possible Versions
Version 1
Paragraph 1
A few months later, Richard, who now had a job, returned to the city.
Feeling
a mix of excitement and nervousness
(现在分词做伴随动作，从情绪开始衔接是比较好的表达), he
clutched a carefully wrapped gift—a loaf of homemade bread he had baked
himself, inspired
by Mr Smith’s kindness
(过去分词做原因状语). As he walked past the
familiar towering buildings(衔接原文), memories of that difficult evening surfaced(无灵主语，
回忆复现), but they
no longer
carried sadness
; instead, they reminded him how a small
act of kindness could change a life. His heart beat faster(刻画人物状态) as he
approached the cozy shop(衔接原文), the smell of fresh bread floating out and
welcoming him like an old friend(独立主格，寓情于景，衔接原文). Richard knew this moment
was about gratitude, about closing a circle that had started with desperation
and ended in hope.
Paragraph 2
Richard found the shop just as he had left it. The warm lights still shone
through the window, and the cheerful chime above sounded(环境描写，衔接原文) as he
entered. Mr Smith looked up from behind the counter, a smile breaking across his
face(独立主格刻画人物) the moment
he recognized Richard
(the moment 一... 就). With a voice thick
with emotion, Richard handed over the bread and a handwritten note. Mr
Smith’s eyes softened(人物刻画) as he listened to Richard’s words of thanks. "Kindness
doesn’t cost much but means everything," Mr Smith said warmly. As they talked,
Richard realized that some encounters are not coincidences—they are life’s way
of reminding us that even in the biggest cities, humanity still shines through.
总结
a. 搭配短语/近义词替换：
clutch = grasp, hold tightly
surface = emerge, come up
carry sadness = bear sadness
close a circle = complete a journey
thick with emotion = heavy with feeling
b. 情绪/动作描写亮点：
feeling a mix of excitement and nervousness（复杂情绪）
clutched a carefully wrapped gift（动作细节）
heart beat faster（动作心理结合）
voice thick with emotion（高级情绪表达）
c. 读后续写积累语料：
原词
升级替换
联想词
例句
excited
thrilled, overjoyed
thrilled,
exhilarated
He was thrilled to finally meet the
person who had once saved him.
gift
token, offering
tribute,
keepsake
He brought a small token of
appreciation.
sad
sorrowful, heavy-
hearted
mournful,
depressed
The memory was once sorrowful, but
now it warmed his heart.
remember recall, reminisce
reflect,
recollect
Every corner of the city made him
reminisce about that evening.
Version 2
Paragraph 1
A few months later, Richard, who now had a job, returned to the city.This
time, he carried a carefully wrapped basket filled with
homemade jam and
bread(过去分词做后置定语), products he had learned to make after being inspired by the little
shop. As he walked along the bustling streets, his steps were lighter(动作刻画人物), his
heart filled with gratitude(独立主格刻画人物). The city no longer felt cold and
unwelcoming(主动表被动); instead, it was a place where good memories lived(定从，无灵主语句).
Passing
the bus station
(现在分词做伴随动作，衔接原文) where he had once felt so lost, Richard
smiled, remembering Mr Smith’s gentle voice and warm generosity(现在分词短语做伴随动作).
Today, it was his turn to give something back.
Paragraph 2
Richard found the shop just as he had left it. The familiar tune of the music
and the scent of baked bread filled him with warmth(环境描写，衔接原文). Mr Smith was
wiping the counter, but upon seeing Richard(upon doing... 一...就), he broke into a wide
grin. Richard approached, holding out
the basket with a shy but genuine smile
(现
在分词做伴随动作). “I wanted to thank you properly,” he said. Mr Smith accepted the gift with
a nod, his kind eyes reflecting pride and joy(独立主格，刻画人物). As they chatted about life
and changes, Richard realized that kindness, once planted, could grow into
something beautiful and lasting.
a. 搭配短语/近义词替换：
bustling streets = busy streets
steps were lighter = walked more cheerfully
cold and unwelcoming = harsh and unfriendly
reflect pride = show satisfaction
b. 情绪/动作描写亮点：
steps were lighter（身体动作反映心情）
shy but genuine smile（复杂情绪）
broke into a wide grin（生动表情描写）
c. 读后续写积累语料：
原词
升级替换
联想词
例句
busy
bustling, lively
crowded, jam-packed
The bustling city seemed less
原词
升级替换
联想词
例句
intimidating now.
give
back
repay, return the
favor
express gratitude, make
amends
He was eager to repay the kindness
he once received.
proud
honored,
satisfied
joyful, pleased
Mr Smith looked honored to see him
return.
smell
scent, aroma
fragrance, odor
The aroma of fresh bread drifted out
invitingly.
Version 3
Paragraph 1
A few months later, Richard, who now had a job, returned to the city. The
memory of that cold, desperate evening remained vivid in his mind, yet it no
longer brought pain but gratitude(衔接原文，情绪，心理描写). In his hands was a simple
bouquet of daisies(倒装句)—flowers his late mother had loved, symbolizing
hope
and new beginnings(现在分词短语做后置定语). As he
navigated
the familiar streets
, he
marveled at how different the city looked now through grateful eyes(情绪描写). Every
corner, once intimidating, now(对比描写) felt like a piece of a larger, kinder world(主动表
被动). Approaching
the little shop
(现在分成短语做伴随动作) that had once been his shelter,
Richard breathed deeply, feeling
a surge of emotion
(现在分词短语做伴随动作).
Paragraph 2
Richard found the shop just as he had left it. The door creaked open(无灵主语句),
and Mr Smith looked up, his expression brightening instantly(独立主格，刻画人物). Richard,
with trembling hands, offered the flowers and a handwritten card. "You helped
me more than you know," he said quietly. Mr Smith took the flowers gently,
smiling(现在分词做伴随动作) as if receiving a priceless treasure(状语从句压缩). They sat down for a
while, sharing
stories over fresh coffee
(现在分词做伴随动作). For Richard, the visit wasn’t
just a thank-you—it was a reminder(递进描写) that in a world often busy and
indifferent, a single act of kindness could leave a lasting legacy.
a. 搭配短语/近义词替换：
vivid in his mind = clear in his memory
navigate streets = move through streets
surge of emotion = rush of feeling
brightening instantly = lighting up immediately
b. 情绪/动作描写亮点：
marveled at（心理感受描写）
breathed deeply（动作+情绪）
trembling hands（情绪外化）
smiled as if receiving a priceless treasure（比喻手法强化情绪）
c. 读后续写积累语料：
原词
升级替换
联想词
例句
emotion
surge, flood
wave, rush
A surge of emotion overwhelmed him.
move
navigate, wander stroll, drift
He navigated the familiar streets with
ease.
different
transformed,
altered
changed,
reshaped
The city looked transformed through his
grateful eyes.
remember recall, retain
treasure, honor
He treasured every moment of that
evening.
Version 4
Paragraph 1:
A few months later, Richard, who now had a job, returned to the city.
Holding
a small box of handmade cookies and a thank-you card
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he
felt both nervous and excited. His life had changed greatly — he had found stable
work in a nearby town and was saving up for a new start(描写人物的变化). Yet through all his
successes, he never forgot the man who had helped him when he was at his lowest.
Stepping
off the bus
(现在分词做伴随动作), he made his way through the familiar streets(衔接原
文), his heart pounding with every step(独立主格刻画人物的心理). The city that had once
seemed cold and overwhelming now(对比描写) appeared full of life and opportunity(无
灵主语句). As he neared the bus station(衔接原文), memories of that evening came flooding
back(回忆涌来): the warmth of the shop, the kindness in Mr Smith’s eyes, and the
comfort of that hot meal(名词并列衔接原文) that had meant more than words could
express.
Paragraph 2:
Richard found the shop just as he had left it. The cozy lights still glowed
softly in the windows, and the smell of fresh bread floated into the street.(衔接原文)
Pushing
open the door
(现在分词做伴随动作), he was greeted by the same cheerful tune
and the sight of Mr Smith behind the counter(衔接原文), just as he remembered. When
Mr Smith looked up and recognized him, his face lit up with a welcoming smile(独
立主格刻画人物). “I knew you’d do well!” he said warmly. Richard handed him the small
box and the card, his voice thick with emotion(独立主格刻画人物情绪) as he
expressed his
thanks. Mr Smith opened the card and chuckled, touched
by the heartfelt words
(过
去分词做原因状语). They sat together for a while, sharing
stories over coffee
(现在分词做伴随动作).
This time, it wasn’t a rescue — it was a reunion(递进描写), one built on gratitude,
kindness, and the simple belief(名词并列点题) that even the smallest acts of goodness
could change a life forever.
词汇短语总结
短语/词汇
释义
应用效果
holding a small box
拿着一个小盒子（生动描绘动作）动态描述，引导情感
pounding with every step
每走一步心脏都在狂跳（形象表达
紧张感）
强化心理描写
come flooding back
（记忆）涌上心头
形象表达记忆汹涌
cozy lights
温馨的灯光
营造温暖氛围
cheerful chime
欢快的铃声
生动细节描写
lit up with a welcoming
smile
绽放出欢迎的微笑
生动人物表情描写
thick with emotion
充满情感
高级情绪描写短语
短语/词汇
释义
应用效果
built on gratitude,
kindness
建立在感激与善意之上
高级抽象总结，呼应
主题
