2025 届高三下学期5 月青桐鸣大联考 英语
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Before attending a hockey game between the Seattle Kraken and the Vancouver
Canucks, Nadia Popovici's main concern was which sports shirt to wear.
Originally from Canada, the hockey fan only started rooting for the Kraken after
moving to Seattle, the Washington area a few years ago, That night she chose to wear
the Seattle shirt, although she was seated directly behind the Canucks' bench. As it
turned out, Nadia was sitting exactly where she needed to be.
Twenty-two-year-old Nadia plans to attend medical school next year, and she has
already developed a sharp eye for anything that doesn't look quite right. As she
watched the game, she happened to spot an irregularly-shaped mole on the back of
one of the Canucks’ staff members. Brian Red Hamilton is the assistant equipment
manager for the team, and he had no idea that he even had a mole back there, much
less a concerning one.
“I spotted some of the classic signs, you know, irregular borders, a bit of color
change, and it was pretty big," Nadia recalled. She wondered whether or not she
should let him know, eventually deciding to go for it. “I thought, you know, it can't
hurt just to say something.
Since Red couldn't hear her through the glass, Nadia typed out a message on the
Notes app of her iPhone. Red admits that he didn't think much of it when he read her
message, but later he had the team doctor take a look at it, It turned out to be the worst
kind of skin cancer, called malignant melanoma.
The mole was removed by a doctor several days later, Red and his family were
flooded with gratitude for Nadia's message, and the Canucks posted a message to fans
asking for their help locating his mysterious “angel”.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: It took the Internet just two hours to track Nadia down.
Paragraph 2: Nadia, deeply moved by the appreciation, said ,“I just did what anyone
would do in that situation.
2025 届高三下学期5 月青桐鸣大联考 英语
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Before
attending a hockey game
between the
Seattle Kraken
and the
Vancouver Canucks, Nadia Popovici's(人物1) main concern was which sports shirt to
wear(表语从句，应该是选择那只队伍).
Originally from Canada, the hockey fan only started rooting for the Kraken(你猜
我要给你讲什么) after moving to Seattle, the Washington area a few years ago. That night
she chose to wear the Seattle shirt, although she
was seated
directly behind the
Canucks' bench. As it turned out, Nadia was sitting exactly where she needed to be.
Twenty-two-year-old( 人物信息) Nadia plans to attend medical school next year, and
she has already developed a sharp eye for anything that doesn't look quite right.
As she watched the game, she happened to spot an irregularly-shaped mole(痣) on
the back of one of the Canucks’ staff members. Brian Red Hamilton( 人物2) is the
assistant equipment manager for the team(人物信息介绍), and he had no idea that he even
had a mole back there(同位从), much less a concerning one.
“I spotted some of the classic signs, you know(插入语), irregular borders, a bit
of color change, and it was pretty big(名词并列，做细分解释)," Nadia recalled. She wondered
whether or not she should let him know, eventually deciding
to go for it
(现在分词做伴随
动作). “I thought, you know(插入语), it can't hurt just to say something.”
Since Red couldn't hear her
through the glass
, Nadia typed out a message on
the Notes app of her iPhone. Red admits that he didn't think much of it when he
read her message, but later he had the team doctor take a look at it(have sb do sth). It
turned out to be the worst kind of skin cancer, called
malignant melanoma
(过去分词做后置
定语).
The mole was removed by a doctor several days later. Red and his family were
flooded with gratitude for Nadia's message, and the Canucks posted a message to
fans asking
for their help locating his mysterious “angel”
(现在分词做伴随动作，重要事件).
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: It took the Internet just two hours to track Nadia down.
Paragraph 2: Nadia, deeply moved by the appreciation, said ,“I just did what anyone
would do in that situation.
一、读后续写分类与写作构思分析
分析维度
具体内容
题型分类
人与人情感类 纪实类人物事件续写（Real-life event, touching story
involving ordinary people doing extraordinary things）
续写目的
衔接原文内容，延续真实感，展现正能量，升华主题，突出主人
公善举的社会反响
构思思路
以“网络寻人成功→两人相认→情感升华→公众感动”为主线，
展开正能量传播路径，注意心理+动作+对话+环境细节+社会反响
等要素描写
布局设计
✅段落一：事件传播与寻人成功（承上启下）
✅段落二：人物回应与主题升华（总结与升华）
框架提炼
1. 网络寻找→2. 现场重逢或视频连线→3. Nadia 回应→4. Red 表
达感谢→5. 媒体报道/社会反响→6. 升华主题
实施方法
延续原文纪实风格，控制语体；
塑造“普通人善举感动世界”的逻辑链；
合理使用心理、动作、语言描写推进情节
衔接要点
1. 保持人物不变（Nadia 和Red）
2. 情节上承接“寻找Nadia”的背景
3. 风格应与原文一致：真实、温情、朴素
4. 延续核心事件线索（那条留言）
二、Story Mountain
结构阶段
内容
原文支撑语句
设定背景
（Beginning）
Nadia 看比赛，坐在
Canucks 板凳后
“Before attending a hockey game... she
was seated directly behind the Canucks’
bench.”
引发事件（Build-
up）
发现Red 脖子上的痣并
发出提醒
“She wondered whether or not she
should let him know... typed out a
message...”
冲突/转折点
（Climax）
Red 原本不在意，后发
现是恶性肿瘤
“Red admits that he didn't think much
of it... turned out to be malignant
melanoma.”
后果发展（Falling
Action）
痣被切除，全家感激并
寻人
“Red and his family were flooded with
gratitude... asking for help locating his
mysterious angel.”
结局/升华
（Resolution）
→ 需要续写部分：网
络寻人成功，感人重
逢，升华主题
三、原文细节
分析角度
内容
原文反映句
人物刻画
Nadia 善良、细心、有责
任感
“She has already developed a sharp eye… ‘it
can’t hurt just to say something.’”
情感层次
从犹豫→勇敢→感动→感
恩
“She wondered... eventually deciding to go
for it.”
关键情节点
Nadia 发现痣→留言→Red
检查→癌症确诊→感恩寻
人
“typed out a message... turned out to be...
posted a message to fans...”
语言特色
简洁朴素、纪实风、客观
陈述中带情感
采用真实口吻、直接引语还原事件
关键词分析mole, message, melanoma,
gratitude, angel
这些词可用于续写情感推进
心理描写
犹豫、责任感、欣慰
“She wondered whether... eventually
deciding...”
动作描写
打字、观看比赛、医生检
查
“typed out a message... had the team doctor
take a look...”
环境描写
体育馆场景（板凳、玻
璃）
“seated directly behind... couldn’t hear her
through the glass”
隐含主题
善意、责任感、平凡中的
伟大
普通人能改变他人命运
情感转折
Red 从漠不在意→感激涕
零
“didn’t think much of it... flooded with
gratitude”
空间转换
家庭-球场-网络平台
“behind the bench” → 网络寻找
时间过渡
比赛中 → 赛后几天 →
网络寻找阶段
“Several days later... asking for help
locating...”
四、伏笔、冲突、隐含线索与解决方案
元素
内容
原文支撑
伏笔
Nadia 学医背景，善于观察异常
“she has already developed a sharp
eye...”
冲突点
Red 起初未在意提示，差点错失治
疗机会
“Red admits he didn’t think much
of it...”
隐含线索
“mysterious angel”——后续关键寻
人线索
“help locating his mysterious
‘angel’”
解决方案
球队社媒发帖→网络热议→两人重
逢
续写应围绕“网络寻找成功+两人
相见”展开
3. 动作 / 心理 / 环境描写例句
动作描写
英文句子
中文翻译
She tapped hurriedly on her phone screen, typing out
the message with trembling fingers.
她急切地敲打着手机屏幕，颤
抖着手指打出那条信息。
Red leaned closer to the glass, squinting to read the
message.
Red 靠近玻璃，眯着眼睛看那
条信息。
The crowd erupted into cheers as the announcer
spoke her name.
当播音员喊出她的名字时，观
众爆发出欢呼。
Nadia covered her mouth in disbelief, her eyes
widening with surprise.
Nadia 难以置信地捂住嘴，眼睛
瞪大。
He raised his hand in a grateful wave when he saw
her in the stands.
当他在看台上看到她时，感激
地挥了挥手。
She stepped forward hesitantly, overwhelmed by the
attention.
她犹豫着迈步向前，被众人的
关注压得喘不过气。
Cameras flashed around them as they shook hands
warmly.
当他们热情握手时，四周闪光
灯不停地闪烁。
Her shoulders relaxed as he smiled at her sincerely.
当他真诚地对她微笑时，她放
松了肩膀。
She nodded slightly, acknowledging the crowd’s
applause.
她轻轻点头，回应了人群的掌
声。
He clutched the handwritten note tightly, as if it were
a treasure.
他紧紧握住那张手写的字条，
仿佛那是一件珍宝。
心理描写
英文句子
中文翻译
A wave of doubt washed over her, but she knew
she had to speak up.
一阵怀疑涌上心头，但她知道自己
必须开口。
Her heart pounded in her chest as she waited for
a response.
她等待回应时，心跳如擂鼓般剧
烈。
She felt a strange mix of pride and nervousness. 她感到一种奇特的骄傲与紧张交织
的情绪。
Gratitude filled her eyes as she listened to his
words.
当她听到他的话时，感激涌上眼
眶。
She questioned whether she had done the right
thing.
她怀疑自己是否做了正确的事。
英文句子
中文翻译
Relief swept over her as the diagnosis proved
her instinct right.
当诊断证实她的直觉是对的时，一
股释然涌上心头。
She was overwhelmed by the unexpected
attention from strangers.
陌生人意想不到的关注让她受宠若
惊。
Her mind replayed the moment over and over
like a movie reel.
她的大脑像电影胶片一样反复回放
那个瞬间。
A sense of purpose settled in her heart.
一种使命感在她心中生根发芽。
She was humbled by the gratitude shown by the
family.
家人表现出的感激之情令她感到谦
卑。
环境描写
英文句子
中文翻译
The arena buzzed with excitement as the crowd
awaited the face-off.
场馆中充满了紧张的氛围，观众们
等待着比赛开始。
Cold air and the smell of popcorn filled the
hockey stadium.
冰冷的空气与爆米花的味道弥漫在
冰球馆中。
Behind the bench, fluorescent lights cast a
sterile glow on the players.
板凳后方，荧光灯在球员身上投下
冷白的光。
Fans pressed against the glass, eager to see their
favorite team.
球迷们紧贴着玻璃，渴望看清自己
喜爱的球队。
Outside, the Seattle rain drizzled down steadily. 外面，西雅图的细雨持续地下着。
The press room was filled with flashing cameras
and hushed whispers.
新闻发布室内闪光灯不断，低语声
此起彼伏。
On the big screen, her photo appeared with a
headline beneath.
大屏幕上出现了她的照片，下面是
一行标题。
The sound of skates slicing the ice echoed in the
arena.
冰刀切割冰面的声音在场馆中回
荡。
People stood in silence as the announcer told the
story.
当播音员讲述故事时，人们肃然站
立。
The bench area where she sat now felt oddly
sacred.
她曾坐过的板凳区如今显得格外神
圣。
4. 高级替换词
基础词
高级替换词
使用语境
say
remark / state / declare
正式场合，表达感言或声明
happy
thrilled / overjoyed / delighted
描述感动、欣慰的情绪
基础词
高级替换词
使用语境
help
assist / aid / come to the rescue
强调主动提供帮助
good
admirable / remarkable / touching 描述行为或品质
see
spot / observe / catch sight of
表现细致观察、发现异常
常见地道搭配
高频搭配 & 解析
搭配短语
词性解析
含义
举例
develop a sharp eye
for sth.
动词短语对某事有敏锐观
察力
She developed a sharp eye for skin
irregularities.
flood sb. with
gratitude
动宾结构对某人充满感激His family flooded her with
gratitude.
can’t hurt to do sth.
情态动词
结构
做某事无妨/值
得一试
It can’t hurt to say something.
track sb. down
动词短语追踪到某人
The Internet tracked her down
quickly.
post a message to sb. 动词短语向……发布消息They posted a message to fans
online.
生词短语解析
生词短语
词
性
词义
近义词
反义词
例句1
例句2
malignant
melanoma
n.
短
语
恶性黑
色素瘤skin cancer benign mole
The doctor
diagnosed it as
malignant
melanoma.
Malignant
melanoma can be
life-threatening.
assistant
equipment
manager
n.
职
位
助理器
材经理
staff
member
head coach
He works as
an assistant
equipment
manager.
The assistant
equipment manager
handles gear
maintenance.
irregular
border
n.
短
语
不规则
边缘
uneven
edge
smooth
margin
She spotted an
irregular
border on the
mole.
Irregular borders are
a warning sign in
skin checks.
Notes app
n.
应
用
备忘录
应用程
序
memo app camera app
She typed the
message into
her Notes app.
I often jot down
ideas in the Notes
app.
gratitude
n.
感激
thankfulnes indifference Gratitude
They expressed their
生词短语
词
性
词义
近义词
反义词
例句1
例句2
s /
appreciatio
n
filled her
heart.
gratitude sincerely.
五、 Possible Versions(3)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: It took the Internet just two hours to track Nadia down. Soon,
her photo went viral online, and comments poured in praising
her sharp eye
and kindness(无灵主语句，刻画人物). The Canucks invited her to a press conference before
their next game, where Brian Red Hamilton, holding back tears(现在分词短语做后置定语),
hugged her tightly. “You didn’t just save my life,” he said emotionally, “you
reminded all of us to care, to notice, and to speak up(非谓语动词并列).” Cameras
flashed, fans applauded, and even the Kraken posted a heartfelt tribute to
her(简单句并列). Nadia, though slightly overwhelmed(adj 做主语补语), handled the attention
with grace. It was at that moment that she realized the power of a simple act
and the importance of courage in everyday life(强调句). She had never imagined
that one small decision—only
sharing
some
knowledge
related
to
her
passion
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)—could create such a ripple. As she stood in the spotlight, Nadia’s
heart swelled not with pride, but with a deep, quiet joy.
Paragraph 2: Nadia, deeply moved by the appreciation, said, “I just did what
anyone would do in that situation.” But the truth was, not everyone would have
done what she did. Many people might have ignored the mole(虚拟语气，表示推测与过去情况不符).
Nadia’s humility touched the crowd, and students across the country began
sharing stories of their own small acts of kindness, inspired
by her
(过去分词短语做原因状语).
Later that week, she received a handwritten letter from Red, thanking
her for
giving their family “many more years of memories.(现在分词做伴随动作)” The words
brought tears to Nadia’s eyes, and she folded the letter carefully to keep forever.
Reflecting
on the moment
(现在分词做伴随动作), she felt even more determined to pursue
medicine—not just as
a career
, but as
a way to serve
(递进句式). Her small act at the
hockey game had become a spark that lit hope and kindness in others. In a world
often focused
on fame and fortune
(过去分词短语做后置定语), Nadia had reminded everyone of
the value of empathy.
Version 2:
Paragraph 1: It took the Internet just two hours to track Nadia down. Social
media exploded with praise(无灵主语句). “Find the angel behind the glass!” one fan
wrote. Nadia, unaware
of the storm online
(adj 做主语补语), was studying for her medial
exam when she received a phone call from
a Canucks spokesperson
. Invited
to the
next home game(过去分词做原因状语), she was honored on the ice in front of thousands of
fans. Brain Red Hamilton gave a speech thanking
her for noticing something
(现在分
词做伴随动作) he couldn’t see himself. “Because of her,” he said, “I got the treatment I
didn’t know I needed—just in time.” The crowd erupted in applause(无灵主语句刻画环境，赛
场必备). As the lights shone and the cheers echoed(环境描写过渡), Nadia stood quietly, her
mind flashing back to the moment(独立主格) she debated whether to type that
message. It had been a split-second decision—one based on(过去分词短语做后置定
语)compassion and confidence in her medical instincts. And now, it was shaping
her future.
Paragraph 2: Nadia, deeply moved by the appreciation, said, “I just did what
anyone would do in that situation.” Still, that moment solidified her calling. She
had always been fascinated by medicine, but this experience gave her a sense of
purpose she hadn’t felt before. "If I can help someone like this outside a hospital,
imagine what I could do inside one," she thought. Red later wrote a
recommendation letter for her medical school application, calling(现在分词做伴随动作) her
“a lifesaver, both in heart and action.” Nadia read it again and again, inspired
to
live up to those words(过去分词做状语). She began volunteering at a local clinic, eager to
gain hands-on experience(adj 做主语补语). To her, medicine was no longer just science—
it was human connection. Her journey had started with a hockey game, but now it
stretched far beyond. That winter, when acceptance letters came in, she knew
exactly where she belonged.
Version 3
Paragraph 1: It took the Internet just two hours to track Nadia down. Soon
after the Canucks' post, fans identified her through photos and stadium seat
numbers(语境词汇). Her inbox filled with messages from strangers thanking(现在分词短语做伴随
动作)her for showing that small actions matter. The team invited her to meet
Brain Red Hamilton, who embraced her warmly. “You might think this was
nothing,” he said, voice trembling(独立主格刻画人物), “but you gave me a second chance.”
That evening, the arena honored her with a brief ceremony(无灵主语句), and both
teams applauded. Nadia, overwhelmed but smiling(adj 做主语补语), waved to the crowd,
not for attention, but to acknowledge the connection shared
among strangers
(过去
分词短语做后置定语). As the anthem played and the
audiences
cheered
, she realized life was
made of such moments—when ordinary people did something extraordinary
simply because it was right. She hadn’t planned to be a hero. But that night, she
became one.
Paragraph 2: Nadia, deeply moved by the appreciation, said, “I just did what
anyone would do in that situation.” But in truth, it had taken bravery(评价句). She
had doubted herself—what if she was wrong? What if she embarrassed him?(并列假
设两种情况) Yet, she acted anyway. Her classmates, teachers, and even doctors(主语并列)
praised her not only for her knowledge but for her courage. She began to see
herself differently—not just as a student, but as(递进句式) someone capable of
making a difference(adj 短语做后置定语). That belief pushed her to apply for an early-
entry medical program, where she later shared her story in an essay titled(过去分词做
后置定语) “Behind the Glass.” Nadia’s act, rooted
in empathy
and
kindness
(过去分词做后置
定语), had opened a path not just for Red’s recovery but for her own
transformation(递进句式). From that day on, she promised herself she’d never
underestimate the power of noticing—and acting.
亮点分析表
类别
表达/短语
同义/替换词
示例句
情绪描写
overwhelmed but
smiling
touched, deeply
moved
She stood there, overwhelmed but
smiling at the crowd.
动作描写
folded the letter
carefully
tucked, preserved She folded the letter carefully and
placed it in her journal.
环境描写
lights shone and
cheers echoed
stadium roared
As the lights shone and cheers
echoed, she stood still.
高阶搭配
solidified her
calling
confirmed her
dream
That moment solidified her calling to
be a doctor.
高阶表达
ripple effect
chain reaction
Her simple message caused a ripple
effect across the city.
高阶词替换积累
场景常用词
高阶替换词
联想表达
情绪happy
grateful, overjoyed deeply touched, thrilled
动作show
demonstrate, reveal bring to light
思考think
reflect,
contemplate
consider carefully
改变change transform, reshape turn things around
说话say
express, declare
speak out
It took the Internet just two hours to track Nadia down. When
she
was
finally
contacted
by
Canucks,
she was surprised and a little embarrassed by all the
attention, “I didn't think it was a big deal," she said, “I just saw something that
looked abnormal and wanted to help. " The Canucks invited her to a special event
to honor her actions, and she met Red in person for the first time. They shared a
heartfelt conversation, and Red expressed his deep gratitude once again, “You
saved my life," he told her, with tears in his eyes(人物情绪描写), “I'll never forget what you
did. ”
Nadia,deeply moved by the appreciation said,"I just did what anyone would do
in that situation." She emphasized that it was a simple act that could potentially
save a life or annoy someone else( 强调句), but she encouraged everyone to pay
attention to their surroundings and speak up if they notice something unusual.
Nadia's story quickly spread both online and offline,inspiring (现在分词做结果状语)others to
be watchful and kind, proving(现在分词做结果状语) that sometimes, the smallest actions
can make the biggest difference.
