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专题 12 书面表达解题技巧
内容早知道
☛第一层 巩固提升练
书面表达解题技巧
☛第二层 能力培优练
☛第三层 拓展突破练
写作2步思路、再加3步骤
【思路】
①审好题
仔细审查所给的内容提示（包括文字和图表等），明确要求写的内容，确定文章的体裁、
人称、时态等，理顺思路，确定主旨。
②看要点，写片段
对于易于表达的内容，一次成句；对于一时难于表达的内容，写出词组。此时，既注意
不遗漏内容要点，也不要随意添加任何内容。
【步骤】
①定句型，连词成句
这个环节是成文的关键，一定要注意做到：
（1）选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上，
鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了……”时，可用 in order to do 或 so
as to do.也可用so that引导目的状语从句。
（2）写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有
据。
（3）表达限定的内容有困难时，就要想到“All roads lead to Rome.”（条条大路通罗马）这句
话，用变通的方法，以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话，表达起
来似乎很难，但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来：His cousin looks
strong but in fact, he is rather weak.
学学学科科科网网网（（（北北北京京京）））股股股份份份有有有限限限公公公司司司（4）尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”，不可写成：She slept very
late.应该写成：She went to bed very late.因为“sleep late”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他
一点都不担心他的英语”，不可写成：He is not a little worried about his English.实际上意思完
全相反，表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是：He is not a bit worried about his English.
或：He is not worried about his English at all.
②连词成句，添减相宜
单句写出后，根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发
展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。
即：文章的开头（Introduction）、文章的主体(Main body)和文章的结尾(Conclusion).这样
写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中，还要注意以下几点：
（1）句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题，也是个逻辑思维方面的问题，这两者是不能
分开的。能注意到这一点，你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。
（2）为了使句子或段落语义连贯，表达合理准确，可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折
可用 but, however, otherwise 等，表达递进可用 and, also, besides, What’s more 等，表达因果
so, therefore, as a result等，表达对比可用at the same time, mean while，while等，表达让步
可用though, although, even if等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。
（3）仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套，给人一种为了用复杂句而用复
杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要，与整个文章浑然一体。
③检查，修改，定稿，誊写
检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序，这时要对照题目要求，认真检查以下
几点：
（1）内容有无遗漏或误词，最好一一对应检查。
（2）体裁格式对不对。
（3）句子是否有语法结构错误，特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、
语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。
（4）句子是否合乎英语表达习惯，是否达意。
（5）书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰，词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短
文，即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍，力求完美。
【巩固练习】
1．初中生的星期五忙碌而快乐。请参考下面的思维导图以“Tom’s busy but happy Friday”为题，介绍
汤姆的周五生活。
要求：
学学学科科科网网网（（（北北北京京京）））股股股份份份有有有限限限公公公司司司1. 语句通顺，语意连贯。
2. 词数：70词左右。
3. 所给提示信息必须都用上，可适当发挥。
Tom’s busy but happy Friday
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2．七年级上学期的学习生活即将结束，你一定在这半年中结识了很多新朋友吧！谁是你最好的朋友
呢？假如你是Sally，你最好的朋友是Paul。现在请你根据下面的提示，以My best friend为题，写一篇60
词左右的英语短文。（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）
提示：
1. How old is he? When is his birthday?
2. What’s his favorite subject? When is the class?
3. What sports does he like and dislike（不喜欢）?
4. Why do you like him?
要求：以上信息不可缺少，可以适当发挥，不得透露真实校名、人名。
My best friend
Hi, I’m Sally. I’m very happy to make some new friends this term. _________________________________
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学学学科科科网网网（（（北北北京京京）））股股股份份份有有有限限限公公公司司司3．“一年之计在于春，一日之计在于晨。”新学期终于开学了，相信同学们对新学期又有了很多新
的规划。请你以李明的名义写篇70词左右的短文介绍一下你的规划。
要点如下：
1. 你将多运动，多吃健康食品，这对你身体有好处；
2. 你会加入一些社团，学习绘画、唱歌等；
3. 你想努力学好各门学科，取得好的成绩；
4. 你希望多交朋友，让自己变得开心；
5. 适当补充一两点看法。
注意：不得逐条翻译，内容要连贯得体；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： join…club 加入……社团 get good grades 取得好成绩 make friends 交朋友
My Plan For The New Term
Hello, everyone! The new term begins now and we are back to school again. For the new term, I’m going to…
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Best wishes for us all!
4．同学们已经成为中学生一学期了，相信大家的初中生活一定丰富多彩！假设你是Amy，你在澳大
利亚的笔友 Tonya想了解你的校园生活。请根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一封邮件给 Tonya。
要点提示：
内部设施 学校又大又漂亮，有花园、图书馆、操场……
周边设施 附近有餐馆、服装店、书店、礼品店……
学校8:00上课，下午5:00放学，学很多有趣的学科，最喜欢……因为……
学校有不同的俱乐部，我参加了……
校园生活
学校有美味且健康的午餐和晚餐，有蔬菜、米饭、水果……
老师和同学都很友好且乐于助人……
节日活动 每年元旦 (New Year’s Day)，学校都举行元旦庆祝活动……
注意事项：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）内容必须包含表格中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数 100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
学学学科科科网网网（（（北北北京京京）））股股股份份份有有有限限限公公公司司司（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear Tonya,
I’ve been a middle school student for a term. I love my school very much. I would like to tell you something
about my school and school life.__________________________________________________________________
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Lots of love,
Amy
5．对于我们每个人来说，生日是一个特殊的日子，有着重要的意义。周二是学校英语社团活动日，
这周大家聊的话题是“How do you celebrate your birthday?”假如你是社团成员李明，请你根据提示内容写一
篇英语短文介绍自己如何过生日。
写作要点：
1. Where do you have dinner?
2. What gifts do you get?
3. How do you feel?
要求：
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3.词数70左右。
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一、完形填空
请先通读下面的短文，掌握其大意，然后在每小题的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。
Linda is our new classmate. She is a left-behind child (留守儿童). Her parents 1 in another city.
She lives 2 her grandparents.
It’s November 8th and it is Linda’s eleventh 3 . My classmates and I want to have a 4 for
her. In the morning, we decorate the 5 with some beautiful paper and balloons. Judy and I 6 a
big birthday cake and eleven candles for her. On the cake, there 7 a red flower and a sentence, “Happy
学学学科科科网网网（（（北北北京京京）））股股股份份份有有有限限限公公公司司司Birthday to you, Linda!”
The party begins 8 nine thirty. Tony lights the candles, and then we 9 the song “Happy
Birthday to You” to her. After 10 the cake, we dance and play games in the classroom. All of us have a
good time.
1．A．work B．think C．sleep D．miss
2．A．to B．by C．with D．in
3．A．school B．time C．class D．birthday
4．A．wish B．party C．card D．smile
5．A．hall B．playground C．classroom D．library
6．A．buy B．give C．sell D．go
7．A．are B．is C．am D．be
8．A．at B．for C．on D．of
9．A．write B．sing C．speak D．hear
10．A．eat B．play C．eating D．cooking
二、阅读理解
A
National ParkRiding horses
Music ClubMusic lessons
Boating
(guitar, violin, piano and drums)
Time: 11:00 a.m.-7:00 p.m. every day
Time: 8:30 a.m.-9:30 a.m. every Sunday
Price: person (ages over 7) $15,
Price: Only $20 each
children (ages 3-7) $8
Address: 25 Jiefang Road
Address: 95 the Fifth Avenue
Tel: 420-258-1200
Tel: 208-683-3400
Art Museum200 famous pictures
More than 300 works
Opening hours: 8: 00 a.m.-6: 00 p.m. on weekdays
Price: adults $10, children $5.50
Address: 120 Xinjin Street, Thermopolis Town
Tel: 307-864-2997
11．When can we visit Art Museum?
A．11:00 a.m.-7:00 p.m. every day. B．8:00 a.m.-6:00 p.m. on weekdays.
C．8:00 a.m.-9:30a.m every Sunday. D．8:00 a.m.-6:00p.m.on weekends.
12．Where can we go if we want to learn music?
A．25 Jiefang Road. B．95 the Fifth Avenue.
C．120 Xinjin Street. D．Thermopolis Town.
学学学科科科网网网（（（北北北京京京）））股股股份份份有有有限限限公公公司司司13．If you and your parents visit National Park, how much should you pay?
A．$15. B．$30. C．$38. D．$45.
14．What can you do on a Saturday?
A．We can go to the Music Club. B．We can visit the National Park.
C．We can visit the Art Museum. D．We can’t go to any of the three places.
15．Where can you read the passage (文章)?
A．In a storybook. B．In a science book.
C．In an animal magazine. D．On a noticeboard (布告栏).
B
Susan and Lizzie are my children. They get up at a quarter to seven in the morning. 16 I get up at
half past seven. 17 Then we have breakfast at eight o’clock.
18 I like to begin the day well, so our breakfast is always a good one.
My husband reads his newspaper and smokes a cigarette (抽烟). He also drinks some coffee. Then he goes to
work. 19
Then Lizzie and Susan begin to clean the house, wash up, make the beds, and get the vegetables ready for
lunch. 20
At about seven or eight o’clock in the evening, we have dinner. At eleven o’clock I go to bed, but my husband
likes to stay up late (熬夜).
A．We have lunch at one o’clock.
B．He begins his work at nine o’clock.
C．We have breakfast in the dining room.
D．My husband gets up at half past seven, too.
E．I write some letters and emails on the computer.
F．Then they make a fire (生火) and open the windows.
一、阅读理解
左栏是五位同学的兴趣爱好或需求，右栏是7家俱乐部或兴趣班的广告，请为每位同学选择他们最合适
的俱乐部或兴趣，并选择对应的选项。
1 Li Lei is going to the USA for a
A．World of Japanese (Time: 3 p.m.-5 p.m. Saturday)
holiday next year.
You should have some basic knowledge of Japanese before you
2 Wu Hua can speak some Japanese.
take this course.
She wants to learn more about it.
B．Teenagers in America (Time: 9 a.m.-11 a.m. Saturday)
3 Linda wants to learn a kind of
After this course (课程), you will be able to speak some
musical instrument. She is free on Sunday
American English.
morning.
学学学科科科网网网（（（北北北京京京）））股股股份份份有有有限限限公公公司司司C． Swimming Club (Time: 9 a.m.-11 a.m. Sunday)
After this course, you’ll be able to swim breaststroke (蛙泳)，
backstroke (仰泳) and crawl (自由泳).
D．Yoga Club
This kind of sports originated in India. It can help you relax your
body and mind. You can join us on Sunday from 3 p.m.to 5 p.m.
4 Tom is very interested in Yoga and E. Tai Chi Club (Time: 9 a.m.-11 a.m. Saturday)
Tai Chi, but he has a part-time job on Sunday. In our club, you can learn something about this ancient Chinese
5 Liu Mei thinks it’s important to learn Kungfu.
to swim. She is free on the weekend. F. Guitar Club (Time: 9 a.m.-11 a.m. from Monday to
Saturday)
Do you want to sing the hottest pop songs while playing the
guitar? Then come and join in this course.
G. Piano Club
Learn to play the piano with the famous pianist Lang Lang.
You’re welcome every weekend from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m.
二、任务型阅读
It is a nice day today. Kate is at home with her family. She is on the bed reading some books. She likes
reading books very much.
Her friend Mary calls her, “Come to my house, Kate. I have something for you.” Kate goes to the
supermarket to buy three kilos of bananas and then Kate goes to Mary’s house. Kate sees a red note (便条) on the
door. It reads, “Come in, Kate. And go to the sofa.” On the sofa, Kate finds a book. On the book is a green note. It
reads, “Go to my table.”
On the table, Kate finds a birthday cake. Next to it, there is a yellow note. It reads, “Go to my bedroom.”
Kate goes to Mary’s bedroom. And what does she see? Mary, Alice and Gina are there.
“Happy birthday, Kate,” they say.
根据短文内容，回答下列问题。
6．Where is Kate with her family?
7．How many kilos of bananas does Kate buy?
8．What does Kate find on the sofa?
9．Where does Kate go at last?
学学学科科科网网网（（（北北北京京京）））股股股份份份有有有限限限公公公司司司10．How may Kate feel when she finds her friends?
三、短文填空
阅读下面短文，按照句子结构的语法和上下文的连贯性，在空格处填入一个合适的词或使用括号中词
语的适当形式。
Chris is 12 years old. He 11 (live) in a village in England. The school in his village is very 12
(beauty) and is not far from his home, so Chris often goes to school 13 bike. Chris usually gets up at
about 7: 00 in the morning. It is not early. So he has a quick breakfast. He leaves home at about 7: 50. It takes 14
(he) 10 minutes to go to school. He gets to school at about 8 o’clock. School starts at 8: 10. Chris would like 15
(have) different classes at school. His favorite subject is math. He thinks numbers are 16 (interest).
Chris has 17 dream (梦想 ). He hopes to go to London 18 he likes big cities. “I 19
(take) the subway in the future. It must be a lot of fun.” he says.
Can his dream come true? “Sure, 20 can,” says Chris.
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