高考应用文必背08：求助信
【经典范文背诵】
假定你是李华，下个月即将参加某外国语大学的入学英语面试,希望向你校外教Davd 请
教相关事宜，邮件内容包括:1.面试技巧;2.注意事项,词数80 左右，可增加细节，以使行文连
贯。
Dear David,
I’m Li Hua( 与对方不熟悉最好写我是李华),I will participate in an English admission
interview (我将参加英语入学面试) by Shanghai International University next month. Imbued
with tension, 'm writing here to consult (咨询) you about some relevant details (内心充满紧
张，我写信向你咨询一些相关细节).第一段:说明事由+写信的目的
As far as I'm concerned , techniques of interview are of great necessity to an interviewee.(就
我所知面试技巧对于一个面试者来说是极为必要的) First of all, I think the proficiency(精
通)in English ranks first to such an interview.(我个人认为英语方面的精通对这样的面试是第
一位)Consequently, I'm in urgent need of your professional guidance in my oral English.(因
此，在我的口语上我急需你的专业指导)/Additionally , as for some feasible (可行的) ways to
deal with certain questions put forward by interviewers ,l also need your precious tips.(而且,对
于一些可行的应对主考官提出的问题的方式也需要你的指导) Finally, if there are any
dos and don'ts (该做的和不该做的) in terms of(关于 ..方面) dressing manners and so on,please
do tell me in detail.(如果有一些该做的和不该做的，请务必详细地告诉我)
第二段:求助的内容口语指导+提问的应答+注意的细节
Exceedingly looking forward to your earliest reply at your earliest convenience.
第三段:期待答复
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【首尾地道套句】
1. 我很难用合适的英语单词表达我的想法，所以我写信向你求助。
I have some trouble in using proper English words to express my thoughts, so I’m writing to you to
seek some help.
2. 不知道你是否能给我一些建议。I wonder if you could give me some advice.
3. 但不幸的是，我发现很难适应新环境。Unfortunately, I find it quite difficult to adapt to a
new environment.
4. 面对这些问题，我感到十分恐惧与焦虑，希望你能帮我。
Facing these problems, I’m seized with fear and anxiety and I hope that you will be kind enough
to help me.
5. 我相信你的任何建议都会帮到我。I’m sure that any advice will be a big help to me.
6. 如你能及时回复，我将感激不尽。Your kind early reply would be greatly appreciated.
7. 我写信是想了解您是否可以提供一些关于……的信息。
I’m writing to know whether it is possible for you to provide me with some information
regarding...
【历年真题再现】
1.【2020 年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教
师Jim 因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim 写一封电子邮件，请他推
荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
【答案】
Dear Jim,
How are you doing? I hope everything's OK with you.
Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama
teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us?
He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both
directing and teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when
necessary.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
2.【2018 年浙江卷11 月】假定你是李华，乘坐FL753 航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航
空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1. 行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方
式。
【答案】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. On 1st November, 2018 I flew business class on
your flight 753 from China to London.
I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However, on arrival in
London Heathrow Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the
flight. It is a black leather one with around 200 dollars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it. Along
with the items mentioned above, the wallet contains a family photo, my precious memory. As you
can imagine, these matter a lot to me.
Has anybody happened to find it? Please email me at xxx@googlemail.com
Thank you for your time and support.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.【2016 年新课标Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人
简历（resume ）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式
（format）。
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation
and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital
company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time
that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there is
something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I
will be very grateful if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【提分必备语块】
1.
I'm writing to ask if you could do me a favor.
我写信是想问问您能否帮我一个忙。
例句：I'm writing to ask if you could do me a favor regarding my college application essay.
我写信是想问问您能否就我的大学申请文书帮我一个忙。
2.
I wonder if it would be possible for you to...
我想知道您是否有可能……
例句：I wonder if it would be possible for you to proofread my speech draft?
我想知道您是否有可能校对我的演讲稿？
3.
I am turning to you because...
我向您求助是因为……
例句：I am turning to you because I know you have extensive experience in this field.
我向您求助是因为我知道您在这个领域有丰富的经验。
4.
seek some help/advice on...
寻求关于……的一些帮助/建议
例句：I'm writing to seek some advice on how to prepare for the oral interview.
我写信是想寻求一些关于如何准备口语面试的建议。
5.
I'm having trouble (in) doing...
我在做……方面遇到了困难
例句：I'm having trouble finding reliable sources for my research project.
我在为研究项目寻找可靠资料来源方面遇到了困难。
6.
The main difficulty I am encountering is that...
我遇到的主要困难是……
例句：The main difficulty I am encountering is that I can't balance my study schedule
effectively.
我遇到的主要困难是无法有效地平衡我的学习计划。
7.
I would appreciate it if you could...
如果您能……我将不胜感激
例句：I would appreciate it if you could share some sample essays with me.
如果您能与我分享一些范文，我将不胜感激。
8.
Would you be so kind as to...?
您是否能好心……？
例句：Would you be so kind as to explain this grammatical point again?
您是否能好心再解释一下这个语法点？
9.
I need your guidance on...
我需要您在……方面的指导
例句：I need your guidance on how to structure this report properly.
我需要您在如何正确组织这份报告结构方面的指导。
10. Could you possibly...?
您是否可以……？
例句：Could you possibly spare 15 minutes to discuss this with me?
您是否可以抽出15 分钟与我讨论一下这个问题？
11. I was hoping you might be able to...
我希望您或许能够……
例句：I was hoping you might be able to recommend some useful reference books.
我希望您或许能够推荐一些有用的参考书。
12. Any assistance would be greatly appreciated.
任何帮助都将不胜感激
例句：Any assistance you can offer would be greatly appreciated.
您能提供的任何帮助都将不胜感激。
13. Thank you in advance for...
提前感谢您……
例句：Thank you in advance for your kind attention to this matter.
提前感谢您对此事的关注。
14. Your expertise in this area would be invaluable.
您在这个领域的专业知识将是无价的
例句：Your expertise in academic writing would be invaluable to me right now.
您学术写作方面的专业知识目前对我将是无价的。
15. I'm at a loss as to how to...
我不知道该如何……
例句：I'm at a loss as to how to improve my listening comprehension quickly.
我不知道该如何快速提高听力理解能力。
16. This matter is of some urgency.
此事有些紧急
例句：This matter is of some urgency, so I'd be grateful for a prompt reply.
此事有些紧急，因此如能及时回复，我将感激不尽。
17. I would be eternally grateful if...
如果……我将永远感激
例句：I would be eternally grateful if you could help me with this application.
如果您能帮我处理这个申请，我将永远感激。
18. Please consider my request.
请考虑我的请求
例句：Please consider my request for an extension on the deadline.
请考虑我延长截止日期的请求。
19. Your help would mean a lot to me.
您的帮助对我意义重大
例句：Your help with this problem would mean a lot to me.
您对这个问题的帮助对我意义重大。
20. Looking forward to your favorable reply.
期待您的好消息
例句：Thank you for your consideration. Looking forward to your favorable reply.
感谢您的考虑。期待您的好消息。
【作文小练】
假定你是李华。你正在准备参加"全国中学生英语创新大赛"的初赛，需要提交一份关于
科技与生活的英语研究报告。你在资料收集和报告结构方面遇到了困难。请你给你的英语老
师Ms. Wilson 写一封电子邮件，内容包括：说明写信目的；描述具体困难（至少两点）；提
出明确的求助请求；表达感谢和期待。
参考范文1
Dear Ms. Wilson,
I'm writing to ask if you could do me a favor with my English Innovation Contest report. I'm
encountering some difficulties that I can't resolve on my own.
Firstly, I'm having trouble finding authoritative English sources on my topic "AI in Daily
Life". Secondly, the main difficulty is organizing the information into a logical structure. I'm at a
loss as to how to present my findings coherently.
Would you be so kind as to recommend some reliable websites or databases? I would also
appreciate it if you could spare 20 minutes to review my outline next week.
Thank you in advance for your guidance. Your help would be invaluable /ɪnˈvæl.ju.ə.bl/ 极
其宝贵的 to me.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
我写信是想请您在我的英语创新大赛报告上帮我一个忙。我遇到了一些自己无法解决的困
难。
首先，我在为我"日常生活中的人工智能"这一主题寻找权威的英文资料方面遇到了困难。其
次，主要困难是如何将信息组织成逻辑结构。我不知道该如何连贯地呈现我的发现。
您是否能好心推荐一些可靠的网站或数据库？如果您能下周抽出20 分钟审阅我的大纲，我也
将不胜感激。提前感谢您的指导。您的帮助对我来说将是极其宝贵的。
参考范文2
Dear Ms. Wilson,
I am turning to you for help with my contest preparation. I wonder if it would be possible
for you to offer some assistance regarding my research report.
The main difficulty I am encountering is selecting the most relevant information from the
abundant materials I've gathered. Additionally, I need your guidance on crafting a compelling
thesis statement and maintaining academic tone throughout the paper.
Could you possibly share some exemplar reports or schedule /ˈʃed.juːl/ 安排 a brief
consultation session? Your expertise in academic writing would be invaluable.
Any assistance would be greatly appreciated. I look forward to your favorable reply.
Respectfully,
Li Hua
我为比赛准备向您求助。我想知道您是否有可能为我的研究报告提供一些帮助。
我遇到的主要困难是从我收集的大量材料中筛选出最相关的信息。此外，我需要您在如何构
思一个引人注目的论点陈述以及在全文中保持学术语气方面的指导。您是否可以分享一些范
文或安排一次简短的咨询？您在学术写作方面的专业知识将是无价的。
任何帮助都将不胜感激。期待您的好消息。
参考范文3
Dear Ms. Wilson,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to seek your expert advice on a pressing matter
concerning the National English Innovation Contest.
My dilemma /dɪˈlem.ə/ 困境 is two-fold: I am overwhelmed /ˌəʊ.vəˈwelmd/ 不知所措
的 by the plethora /ˈpleθ.ər.ə/ 过多 of online sources and uncertain about
their credibility /ˌkred.əˈbɪl.ə.ti/ 可信度. Furthermore, structuring the report to meet
contest criteria /kraɪˈtɪə.ri.ə/ 标准 while ensuring originality poses a significant challenge.
I was hoping you might be able to provide curated /kjʊəˈreɪ.tɪd/ 精心挑选的 resource
suggestions and feedback on my preliminary framework. This matter is of some urgency as the
deadline approaches.
Your assistance would mean a lot to me. Thank you in advance for considering my
request.
With gratitude,
Li Hua
希望您一切安好。我写信是想就全国英语创新比赛的一件紧迫事宜寻求您的专业建议。
我的困境有两方面：面对网络上过多的资料感到不知所措，且不确定它们的可信度。此外，
在构建报告结构以满足比赛标准的同时确保原创性，构成了重大挑战。我希望您或许能够提
供一些精选的资源建议，并对我的初步框架给予反馈。此事有些紧急，因为截止日期临近。
您的帮助对我意义重大。提前感谢您考虑我的请求。
