2025 学年第一学期杭州市高三年级教学质量检测
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
It was a hot day in New York City. I had brunch with a friend and picked up
my new glasses. All done and headed back on the train. I wanted to yell at a couple
of people for their rude behavior(伏笔刻画人物), but wisely just sat quietly.
An old black gentleman entered the far end of the train car. In worn but neat
clothes, he tipped his faded cap and greeted everyone with a warm “Good
afternoon, folks.” Most ignored him(冷漠？伏笔？), with cold blank faces
. Then, he started
to sing. I didn't turn my head, but I felt a smile in my soul. Many people ask for
money on the train, but I always feel happy when someone offers music instead. It
feels like a gift.
I let the notes settle in for a second before my eyes wandered(无灵主语句). A young
boy across from me, maybe ten, watched him, swaying
( 摇摆
) to the rhythm
(现在分词
短语做伴随动作), his mother
too distracted by her phone to notice
(独立主格刻画人物).
He started his second song and my heart did a happy dance. “Lean on me, when
you 're not strong. I’ll be your friend...” I love that song! Without thinking, I softly
sang a little harmony with him. Right away, I decided he could have the $5 bill in
my purse.
He looked tall and thin, but he had a strong voice and kind energy. Life had
clearly been hard for him, but he still stood tall and carried himself with quiet
dignity(刻画人物).
I rolled the bill tightly and waited for him to make his way to me. He held the
overhead bar to steady himself as he inched down the car, pausing
briefly beside
each seat(现在分词短语做伴随动作) like he was waiting for a sign --- though no one glanced up.
No one was making any moves to give him coins or reach for their wallet(伏笔，冷漠的社
会).
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Somehow, he noticed me singing along.
Paragraph 2: It was still hot and sticky inside the car; but something had changed.
2025 学年第一学期杭州市高三年级教学质量检测
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
It was a hot day in New York City. I had brunch with a friend and picked up my
new glasses. All done and headed back on the train. I wanted to yell at a couple of
people for their rude behavior, but wisely just sat quietly.
An old black gentleman entered the far end of the train car. In worn but neat
clothes, he tipped his faded cap and greeted everyone with a warm “Good afternoon,
folks.” Most ignored him, with cold blank faces. Then, he started to sing. I didn't turn
my head, but I felt a smile in my soul. Many people ask for money on the train, but I
always feel happy when someone offers music instead. It feels like a gift.
I let the notes settle in for a second before my eyes wandered. A young boy
across from me.maybe ten, watched him, swaying (摇摆) to the rhythm, his mother
too distracted by her phone to notice.
He started his second song and my heart did a happy dance. “Lean on me, when
you 're not strong. I’ll be your friend...” I love that song! Without thinking, I softly
sang a little harmony with him. Right away, I decided he could have the $5 bill in my
purse.
He looked tall and thin, but he had a strong voice and kind energy. Life had
clearly been hard for him, but he still stood tall and carried himself with quiet dignity.
I rolled the bill tightly and waited for him to make his way to me. He held the
overhead bar to steady himself as he inched down the car, pausing briefly beside each
seat like he was waiting for a sign--- though no one glanced up. No one was making
any moves to give him coins or reach for their wallet.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Somehow, he noticed me singing along.
Paragraph 2: It was still hot and sticky inside the car; but something had
changed.
一、【读后续写类型归类】
分类维度
类型说明
本文归类
故事主题社会温情、人际理解、善意传递
社会温情类
✅
情感主线从冷漠 → 共情 → 温暖 → 反思
心理成长类
✅
叙事角度第一人称（I）叙述，观察与参与结合
第一人称参与
✅
型
场景类型封闭公共空间（地铁车厢）
空间聚焦型
✅
核心冲突冷漠的城市 vs. 个体的温情善意
情感冲突类
✅
二、【续写总体思路与布局】
段落安排与“故事山”逻辑
段落
功能
内容要点
写作思路
Paragra
ph 1
上升与
高潮段
老人注意到“我”在唱歌 → 二人互
动（眼神、对唱或微笑）→ 周围人开
始被感染
承接“他注意到我唱
和”，形成情感共鸣 +
氛围变化
Paragra
ph 2
结局与
反思段
“我”递上钱/感谢 → 环境仍热但内
心变暖 → 对城市冷漠的反思
对比外界与内心变化，
升华主题（“温暖传
递”“微光成炬”）
三、【续写布局与构思技巧】
步骤
内容
具体操作
1. 承接原文
线索
从“he noticed me singing along”
入手
让人物有目光互动、音乐共鸣，形
成情感连接
2. 设计人物
互动
对唱、点头、微笑、简短交谈
暖心而自然，切忌“说教”
3. 提炼情感
转折
从“城市冷漠”到“人间温情”
注意使用象征意象：音乐、笑容、
阳光、热气
4. 安排环境
变化
“Still hot and sticky, but
something changed”
对比外界闷热与内心清凉/温暖
步骤
内容
具体操作
5. 升华主题善意的小行动也能点亮他人
点题“Lean on me”歌词意象：相
互支撑
四、【与原文的衔接要点】
衔接角度
要承接的元素
写作提示
情绪承接
从“心里开心”到“互动温暖”
继续保持温馨语调
动作承接
“他走到我身边”
自然描写对视、递钱、微笑等动
作
环境承接
“hot and sticky inside the car”
环境不变，但心境变化
语言呼应
“Lean on me” 歌词可再次出现
形成首尾呼应、主题升华
心理描写
内心由观望到主动、由感受者变传
递者
体现人物成长
五、【故事山】
阶段
原文/续写内容
功能说明
开端 (Beginning)
在地铁上感受他人冷漠
背景与冲突建立
上升 (Rising Action) 老人唱歌、我被感染
氛围转变的伏笔
高潮 (Climax)
老人注意到我 → 我与他互动情感共鸣达到高点
下降 (Falling Action) 我递上钱或鼓掌、他感谢
行动带来温度
结局 (Resolution)
外界依旧炎热，内心温暖
主旨升华：善意与理解
六、【原文衔接分析表】
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
老人：外表破旧但有尊严；
“我”：理智、善感
“He looked tall and thin, but he had a strong
voice and kind energy.”
情感层次
冷漠 → 感动 → 温暖 →
反思
“I felt a smile in my soul.”
关键情节老人开唱；我跟唱；他走向“Somehow, he noticed me singing along.”
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
点
我
（续写起点）
语言特色
口语化、简洁、生动；音乐
贯穿全文
“Lean on me, when you’re not strong.”
关键词分
析
smile, soul, gift, strong,
dignity
体现温情与尊重
心理描写由旁观到共鸣，内心被触动“I felt a smile in my soul.”
动作描写
老人走近、握杆、点头、唱
歌
“He held the overhead bar to steady
himself.”
环境描写炎热、地铁车厢、乘客冷漠“It was a hot day... cold blank faces.”
隐含主题
人际冷漠中传递善意，音乐
带来共情
以“Lean on me”象征“相互支撑”
情感转折
由愤怒（想骂人）→ 感动
→ 温暖
“I wanted to yell... but I felt a smile in my
soul.”
空间转换
从远处观察 → 他走近我
→ 我递钱
动作空间由远到近
时间过渡
歌曲一首接一首 → 心境渐
变
“He started his second song...”
七、【伏笔、冲突与隐含线索分析】
项目
内容
功能
伏笔
“I wanted to yell at a couple of people…” → 内心压
抑，期待情绪出口
为后文“音乐治愈”
做铺垫
冲突点冷漠车厢 vs. 热情歌声
构建外冷内热的对比
隐含线
索
“Lean on me”歌词主题：彼此依靠
指向温暖人心的主旨
解决方
案
我以微笑、歌声和善意回应老人
行动解决情感冲突，
升华主题
八、【续写思考】
承接性技巧
以“他注意到我唱和”为切口，自然进入互动
避免跳跃式描写（如突然结束或突然告白）
可加入非语言互动（眼神、手势、笑容）
情感递进技巧
使用感官细节（听觉+视觉+触觉）表现氛围变化
内心独白体现成长：“也许城市并不冷漠，只是太匆忙。”
结尾升华技巧
对比开头：环境仍热、但心已凉爽
点题歌词“Lean on me”象征人际温情
九、 动作环境心理描写
动作描写
He tipped his faded cap slightly, a humble smile curling on his lips.
→ 他微微掀了掀那顶褪色的帽子，嘴角浮现出谦逊的笑。
He steadied himself by gripping the metal bar above his head.
→ 他抓紧头顶的金属杆以保持平衡。
The boy swayed gently to the rhythm, his sneakers tapping the floor.
→ 小男孩轻轻随着节奏摇摆，运动鞋拍打着地面。
I rolled the bill tightly and waited for the right moment.
→ 我把钞票卷紧，等着合适的时机。
Our eyes met for a brief second, and he nodded in quiet gratitude.
→ 我们的目光短暂相遇，他微微点头，默默表示感谢。
He pressed his hand to his chest as if to say “thank you.”
→ 他把手放在胸口，好像在说“谢谢”。
A few passengers lifted their heads, curious smiles spreading.
→ 几位乘客抬起头，好奇的笑容慢慢浮现。
I reached out to drop the note into his worn hat.
→ 我伸出手，把钞票放进他那顶旧帽子里。
He straightened his back, his voice rising strong and clear.
→ 他挺直了背，声音洪亮而坚定。
The train slowed down, yet the melody still floated in the air.
→ 列车慢慢减速，但旋律仍在空气中回荡。
心理描写
A wave of warmth rushed through me as his song filled the car.
→ 当他的歌声充满车厢时，一股暖流涌上心头。
I felt a tiny smile bloom somewhere deep inside.
→ 我感到内心深处绽放出一丝笑意。
For the first time that day, I forgot the heat and the noise.
→ 那天第一次，我忘记了炎热与喧嚣。
Something about his calm dignity made my heart ache.
→ 他那份平静的尊严，让我心头一阵酸楚。
I was ashamed of how easily I had judged people before.
→ 我为自己过去那种轻易评判他人的心态感到羞愧。
The song reminded me that kindness needs no stage.
→ 这首歌让我明白，善意不需要舞台。
I felt a strange urge to make a difference, even in a small way.
→ 我突然有种冲动，哪怕以微小的方式去改变什么。
His voice seemed to wash away the fatigue of the day.
→ 他的歌声似乎冲淡了整天的疲惫。
I realized that sometimes, all it takes is a simple smile.
→ 我意识到，有时只需一个简单的微笑。
My heart grew lighter as the music faded away.
→ 随着音乐渐渐消散，我的心也变得轻盈起来。
环境描写
The air inside the car was thick with heat and silence.
→ 车厢里的空气闷热而寂静。
The dim lights flickered as the train rattled on.
→ 列车隆隆行进，昏暗的灯光闪烁不定。
Faces around me were blank, eyes glued to their screens.
→ 周围的人面无表情，目光都粘在手机屏幕上。
A faint smell of metal and sweat filled the air.
→ 空气弥漫着淡淡的金属与汗味。
The rhythm of the train blended with the rhythm of his song.
→ 列车的节奏与他的歌声的节奏融为一体。
Even the noisy wheels seemed to quiet down for him.
→ 连吵闹的车轮似乎都为他静下来。
The sun filtered through the dirty windows, painting everything gold.
→ 阳光透过污浊的窗户，将一切染上金色。
The humid air clung to my skin, yet my heart felt strangely light.
→ 潮湿的空气黏在皮肤上，但我的心却莫名轻快。
The carriage felt different now — softer, somehow alive.
→ 车厢此刻有了不同的感觉——更柔和，更有生气。
When the train stopped, it was as if a beautiful dream ended.
→ 当列车停下时，就像一场美梦结束了一样。
情绪表达类
普通词
高级替换
例句
happy
delighted / thrilled / overjoyed
I was thrilled by the simple joy of his
song.
sad
sorrowful / downhearted
His voice carried a sorrowful tenderness.
surprised astonished / taken aback
I was taken aback by his strong voice.
touched
moved / deeply affected
I was deeply moved by his sincerity.
angry
irritated / frustrated
I felt frustrated at the cold faces around.
动作与状态类
普通词
高级替换
例句
walk
stride / pace / make his way
He slowly made his way down the
car.
look
glance / gaze / stare / peer
He glanced at me and smiled.
say
whisper / murmur / remark
He murmured a soft “thank you.”
stand
rise / straighten up
He straightened up with quiet pride.
普通词
高级替换
例句
sit
settle down / sink into / perch I settled back in my seat, smiling.
心理变化类
普通词
高级替换
例句
think
reflect / realize / come to
understand
I came to realize that kindness spreads
quietly.
feel
sense / perceive / be
overwhelmed by
I sensed his calm energy.
understand grasp / appreciate / recognize
I finally appreciated the beauty of his
song.
want
long for / yearn for / be tempted
to
I longed for more people to notice him.
remember
recall / be reminded of
I was reminded of how music heals.
核心搭配与短语
make one’s way to — 慢慢走向……
→ He made his way to me slowly.
（=walk slowly towards）
be glued to (something) — 目不转睛地盯着
→ People were glued to their phones.
burst into (song / laughter / tears) — 突然唱起/笑/哭
→ He burst into song with a bright smile.
feel a smile in one’s soul — 内心微笑（原文表达的诗意搭配）
carry oneself with dignity — 举止端庄、有尊严
→ He carried himself with quiet dignity.
be lost in (thought / music / memories) — 沉浸于……
→ The boy was lost in the rhythm.
in contrast to / compared with — 与……形成对比
→ His warmth stood in contrast to the cold faces.
lean on sb. / sth. — 依靠（主题呼应）
→ “Lean on me, when you’re not strong.”
bring a smile to one’s face — 让某人露出微笑
→ His voice brought a smile to my face.
a wave of (emotion) — 一阵情绪的涌现
→ A wave of warmth swept over me.
高频词语料积累
①dignity (n.) 尊严
近义词：grace, self-respect, honor
反义词：shame, disgrace
例句：He lived with quiet dignity despite the hardship.
→ 即使生活艰难，他仍保持平静的尊严。
The old man’s dignity touched everyone in the car.
②sway (v.) 摇摆，影响
近义词：swing, rock, influence
反义词：stabilize, steady
例句：The boy swayed gently to the rhythm.
Her words swayed my decision.
③faded (adj.) 褪色的，衰老的
近义词：worn, dim, pale
反义词：bright, vivid
例句：He wore a faded cap and a proud smile.
The photo looked old and faded.
④gesture (n./v.) 手势，做手势
近义词：motion, signal, indicate
反义词：ignore, neglect
例句：He gestured for me to keep singing.
A simple gesture can warm a stranger’s heart.
⑤murmur (v.) 低声说
近义词：whisper, mutter, sigh
反义词：shout, cry out
例句：He murmured a soft “thank you.”
She murmured a few comforting words.
⑥glance (v./n.) 匆匆看
近义词：peek, glimpse, gaze briefly
反义词：stare, observe
例句：He glanced at me with gentle eyes.
A quick glance told me he was tired.
⑦settle in / down (phrasal v.) 安定下来
近义词：relax, get comfortable
反义词：rise, stand up
例句：I settled back in my seat, still humming.
The class finally settled down after the song.
⑧hum (v.) 哼唱
近义词：sing softly, croon
反义词：shout, yell
例句：I hummed along without realizing it.
He hummed a tune under his breath.
⑨tune (n.) 曲调
近义词：melody, rhythm, harmony
反义词：noise, discord
例句：The familiar tune brought tears to my eyes.
She played a gentle tune on her guitar.
⑩embrace (v.) 拥抱；欣然接受
近义词：accept, hug, welcome
反义词：reject, refuse
例句：We embraced the moment of kindness.
He embraced life with hope despite the odds.
十、Possible Versions(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1
Somehow, he noticed me singing along. He turned his head slightly, a flash of
surprise crossing his face(独立主格). Then, with a warm nod, he began to sing the next
line directly to me, his voice rich and full of soul(独立主格刻画人物). My heart skipped a
beat as I joined him
voluntarily, our voices blending in quiet harmony(独立主格).
The song filled the air, cutting through
the noise of the train
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). A few
passengers lifted their heads, curiosity replacing indifference(独立主格). The boy
laughed, clapping softly(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and I couldn’t help smiling back. When the
song ended, he gave a small bow, and I slipped the $5 bill into his hat. He
looked down at it, then at me, and said softly, “Haven’t sung with someone in years.”
I felt a lump rise in my throat.
Paragraph 2
It was still hot and sticky inside the car; but something had changed. The song
lingered like a gentle breeze. I watched as
the old man
steadied himself
, ready
to leave(adj 做补语), and I realized how music had connected two strangers. The train
screeched to a halt, and before stepping off, he tipped his cap again — this time,
just for me. As the doors closed, I caught my reflection in the window: tired, yes,
but somehow lighter. Maybe the city hadn’t changed. Maybe it was me.
语言与语料分析
类型
词汇/短语
同义/替换/联想
情绪
描写
a flash of surprise, heart skipped a beat, lump
rise in my throat
astonishment, emotion welling
up, touched deeply
动作
描写
lifted their heads, clapping softly, tipped his
cap
raised their gaze, applauded
lightly, nodded slightly
心理
描写
realized how music had connected, felt a lump
came to understand, sensed
warmth
环境
描写
song lingered like a gentle breeze, train
screeched
metaphor of warmth vs harsh
sound
高级
Maybe the city hadn’t changed. Maybe it was
类型
词汇/短语
同义/替换/联想
表达
me. → 对称排比结构，哲理性收尾
Version 3
Paragraph 1
Somehow, he noticed me singing along. His eyes widened with gentle
surprise, and a slow smile spread across his face. Holding
the bar tightly
(现在分词短语
做伴随动作), he shuffled toward me, each step steady but careful.(独立主格刻画人物)I could see
the sweat glistening on his forehead, yet there was calm dignity in his
movement. When he reached me, I handed him the rolled bill, but he shook his
head slightly, whispering(现在分词短语做伴随动作), “Keep it—your voice is the best gift.” The
words caught me off guard. For a second, I was speechless, my throat
tightening(独立主格刻画人物). Then, as if reading my thoughts, he began another verse, and
I joined in softly. The air seemed to lighten with each note, our voices blending
like two quiet rivers(独立主格) meeting in peace(现在分词短语做后置定语).
Paragraph 2
It was still hot and sticky inside the car; but something had changed. The boy
across the aisle began to hum, his eyes shining with delight(独立主格刻画人物). A man in a
suit glanced up from his phone, smiling faintly(现在分词短语做伴随动作). One by one, faces
softened, and the rhythm of the song replaced the dull hum of the wheels. When
we reached the next station, the old man tipped his cap and stepped off, leaving
behind a silence(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that felt strangely full. I sat back, my heart glowing
with something gentle and real(独立主格)—a reminder that kindness, once shared,
never leaves; it simply moves on, like a melody carried down the tracks.
亮点分析
类型
内容
语法亮点
非谓语动词（Holding, whispering, reading, blending）；倒装（Only
then did I realize…）
衔接亮点
第一段结尾“our voices blending” → 第二段首句“something had
changed”，实现情感转折衔接
人物衔接保持原文老人“dignity”、叙述者“内敛温暖”的特点
情感层次从惊讶—感动—温柔的领悟
类型
内容
主题升华善意与音乐的力量可温暖冷漠的城市
地道表达与替换语料
表达
近义词/替换
例句
shuffle toward sb.
move slowly / edge closer
He shuffled toward me with
care.
glisten with sweat
be damp with sweat / shine
with effort
His forehead glistened with
sweat.
be caught off guard
be taken aback / be surprised
Her words caught me off guard.
soften one’s face
relax / show warmth
His face softened into a smile.
be carried down the
tracks
drift away / fade into distance
The melody was carried down
the tracks.
情绪与动作亮点短语
动作：shuffled toward, tipped his cap, handed, joined in softly
情绪：gentle surprise, quiet dignity, heart glowing, softened faces
积累词汇升级：
happy → content / serene / delighted
smile → beam / grin / soften into a smile
touching → heartwarming / stirring / moving
Version 4
Paragraph 1
Somehow, he noticed me singing along. A flicker of surprise crossed his face,
and for a moment, the rhythm faltered. Then, with a faint nod, he turned his voice
toward me, inviting
me silently to continue.
(现在分词短语做伴随动作) My voice trembled at
first but soon steadied, carried
by his rich tone
(过去分词做原因状语). The train car, once
filled with
boredom and heat
, seemed to hold its breath(无灵主语句). I slipped the rolled
bill into his palm as we sang the final lines together. He pressed his hand over
mine briefly, eyes glistening with unspoken gratitude(独立主格). When the song ended,
the air was still, as if the city itself had paused to listen(比喻，拟人，夸张).
Paragraph 2
It was still hot and sticky inside the car; but something had changed. The
passengers, who had once looked away, now exchanged soft smiles. The little boy
clapped, his laughter bouncing off the metal walls(独立主格). Even his mother looked
up, withdrawing
from
her
phone
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), staring
at her
boy
(现在分词短语做伴随动作),
her eyes bright with something like shame—and hope(独立主格). The old man lifted his
cap once more, his voice hoarse yet steady(独立主格). “Thank you,” he said quietly,
before moving on. I leaned back, feeling(现在分词短语做伴随动作)an unfamiliar peace wash
over me. Maybe this was what music did—not just filling
silence,
but mending
hearts(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that had forgotten how to feel.
亮点分析
类型
内容
语法
亮点
分词结构及独立主格（Carried by his rich tone / Eyes glistening）；虚拟语
气（as if the city itself had paused）；强调结构（It was… that…）
逻辑
衔接
“song ended” → “something had changed”自然衔接情绪场景转变
心理
线
从羞愧、敬意到感悟，符合高中生心理成长线
文体
风格
内敛温柔，语言略带文学感
主题
升华
“音乐修复冷漠与隔阂”主题显性化
词汇与搭配积累
表达
替换/近义
例句
flicker of
surprise
flash of surprise / trace of
wonder
A flicker of surprise crossed his face.
hold one’s
breath
grow still / become silent
The carriage seemed to hold its breath.
pause to listen
stop for a while / be still to
hear
The city seemed to pause to listen.
wash over sb.
flow through / calm /
comfort
Peace washed over me.
表达
替换/近义
例句
mend one’s
heart
heal / soothe / ease
Music mended hearts that had forgotten
to feel.
动作 & 情绪亮点
动作：slipped, pressed his hand, lifted his cap, leaned back
情绪：unspoken gratitude, flicker of surprise, peace wash over me, soft
smiles exchanged
常见表达的高级替换句式
原句：I felt happy when he sang.
→ 升级：A wave of warmth swept over me as his song filled the air.
原句：He looked at me and smiled.
→ 升级：He caught my eye, a gentle smile flickering across his face.
原句：People ignored him.
→ 升级：Blank faces turned away, pretending he wasn’t there.
原句：The train was noisy.
→ 升级：The metallic rhythm of the train echoed through the car.
原句：I gave him money.
→ 升级：I slipped the folded bill into his worn hat, quietly grateful.
主题核心词场（温情 / 善意 / 音乐）
核心动词：melt, echo, linger, connect, awaken, blend, hum
核心名词：melody, harmony, rhythm, kindness, dignity, connection, silence
核心形容词：worn, gentle, soulful, fragile, quiet, vibrant
主题表达：
Music doesn’t just fill the air — it fills the heart.
Kindness travels quietly, like a song in the crowd.
Sometimes, a stranger’s voice can remind us we’re not alone.
官方：
Somehow, he noticed me singing along. He looked up and slowly walked
toward me, his eyes shining with surprise and warmth(独立主格刻画人物). I slipped the
rolled bill into his rough hand, and he gave me a grateful nod. Then, leaning
closer(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he whispered. “Sing with me, sister." Without hesitation, I
joined him. Our voices blended, his strong and soulful, mine soft but steady(独立主
格). For a moment, the crowded train car felt like a tiny concert hall, filled not
with heat and impatience(过去分词短语做后置定语), but with harmony.
It was still hot and sticky inside the car, but something had changed. One by
one, passengers lifted their heads, listening(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The young boy's
swaying turned into clapping, his laughter breaking through the dull silence(独立主
格). A few others began humming along, and even his mother put down her phone.
When the song ended, coins and bills appeared in the man's cap from every
direction(无灵主语句). He stood taller, pride glowing in his smile(独立主格), and I felt a quiet
joy---proof that even in a weary city, music could open hearts and bring strangers
together.
