专题 01 感谢信 （应用文写作）
【考情分析】
年份 卷别 体裁 话题 内容
2023 新高考I&II卷 建议信 学校生活 给外教提建议
2023 全国甲卷 投稿 历史文化 介绍中国历史人物
2023 全国乙卷 投稿 生活学习 假期习得新技能
2023 浙江卷 投稿 学校生活 写一篇报道“认识身边的植物”
2023 北京卷 建议信 学校生活 社团活动给出建议
2022 新高考I&II卷 邀请信 访谈 节目访谈
2022 全国甲卷 投稿 世界海洋日 保护海洋
2022 全国乙卷 投稿 调查结果 学习英语的状况
2022 北京卷 邀请信 社会科技 英语写作的线上交流
2022 浙江卷 邀请信 校园生活 邀朋友体验图书馆学习室
2021 天津卷 感谢信 社会生活 感谢Chris家的帮助并回复相关内容
【写作指导】
把握感谢信的写作框架。感谢信是在收到别人的邀请、帮助、馈赠或祝贺等时，对收信人表达感谢的
一种信件。其写作框架如下：
第一段：问候并且说明写信的原因和目的
第二段：描述对方帮助自己的过程和对自己的意义
第三段：再次表达感谢
【素材宝库】
词汇积累之第一段1. On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for...
我谨代表全家对......表示真诚的感谢。
2. Many thanks for all the efforts you made in helping me...
非常感谢你帮助我所做的一切努力。
3. I am writing to convey/express my thanks for your timely and kind help.
表 我写这封信是为了表达我对你及时的和善良的帮助的谢意。
4. My true gratitude is beyond any words’ description.
达 任何语言都不能表达我的真挚谢意。
5. Please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes.
谢
请接受我诚挚的感谢和最美好的祝愿。
6. Your kind help is very much appreciated by each one of us.
意
我们每个人都非常感谢你善意的帮助。
7. I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely
help and assistance.
我谨借此机会感谢你给予我们的及时帮助和支持。
8. I am much obliged to you for your unselfish assistance during...
非常感谢你在......期间给予我的无私的帮助。
词汇积累之第二段
1. Without /But for your help, I would not have made so much progress in my English.
如果没有你的帮助，我的英语就不会有那么大的进步了。
2. You were kind enough to show me around...
说 你非常友善，领我参观......
3. Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English.
明 多亏了你的帮助，我在英语上取得了迅速的进步。
4. So happy a time did we have that it was not until we went back to the hotel where we
原 stayed that we realized that
我们玩的非常高兴，以至于直到返回居住的宾馆我才意识到......
因 5. Many thanks for all the things that you have done in helping us to...
非常感谢你为帮助我们......所做的一切。
6. During the entire stay, my friends and I were overwhelmed by your generous help.
在整个逗留中，我和我的朋友们都被你的慷慨帮助所包围。
7.Thanks to your efforts and devotion，our English，especially oral English，has improved a
lot.Words fail to express how grateful we are!
多亏您的努力和奉献，我们的英语，特别是口语有了很大的进步。言语无法表达我们的感激之
情！词汇积累之第三段
1. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果你能接受我真诚的谢意，我将感激不尽。
再 2. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
我将永远记得你的善意和帮助。
次 3. Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever.
没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。
感 4. I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help.
我想借此机会对你及时的帮助表示非常的感谢。
谢 5. My true gratitude is beyond any words/description.
任何语言都不能表达我真挚的谢意。
6. Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.
我想再次向你表示我们衷心的感谢。
7. Thanks again for your kind help.
再次感谢您善意的帮助。
8. I will keep what you have helped me with in mind forever.
我会将你对我的帮助永远记在心里。
谚语积累
1. great kindness, bear in mind.大恩大德，铭记在心。
2. "Gratitude is the memory of the heart."
感恩就是心灵的记忆
3. Hope has a good memory, gratitude a bad one.
人们很容易记住希望，却很难记住感恩。
4. Virtue and a trade are the best portion for children.
德行和一门技能是孩子的遗产。
5. "Adversity shows insight," Thank you help me tide over their difficulties!谢谢你和我同舟共济 ！
6. your kindness, I did not Tooth unforgettable.
您的恩情，我没齿难忘。
7. Gratitude is not only the memory but the homage of the heart rendered to God for his goodness.
Nathaniel P. Willis .
感恩不仅是记忆，而且是内心对上帝恩德的敬意。
8. Our favorite attitude should be gratitude.
我们最应该具有的态度是感激的态度。
万能写作模板
Dear Jim,
How are you doing? I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude/thanks to you for
____________________________________________(具体的帮助).
When ____________________________________ (回首往事)， I just cant’t help thinking of what you
have done for me. It was so kind of you to ________________________________(帮助一). In addition,
you ________________________________________(帮助二)， which really surprised me. What’s more, I
shall always remember __________________________________________(帮助三) . Nothing will be able to
erase my wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever.
____________________________(再次感谢）for what you have done for me. May you be blessed in
everything you do.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【 高考真题】
（2021·天津·高考真题）假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲
Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，
内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during
my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian
'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the
elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid
development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people
to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for
consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris
家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请
你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该
专业做何准备。
【详解】1.词汇积累
照顾：take care of→look after
另外，此外：in addition→besides→what’s more
雇佣：employ→hire既然：now that→since
1. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts
more and more people to join the Internet tide.
拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly，the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and
more people to join the Internet tide.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more
efficient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. (运
用了now that引导的原因状语从句)
【 名校模拟题提升练】
1．（2023·重庆·高三重庆南开中学校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，作为交换生在美国一所中学学习。在入
学报到当天得到了学校志愿者 Jones 的帮助。请根据以下要点，写一封感谢信。内容如下：
1.表达感谢;
2.描述至少两个帮助的细节;
3.请 Jones看电影作为答谢。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jones,
How is everything going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jones，
How is everything going? It’s been a while since I started my academic life here as an exchange student, but
I’m still in great appreciation of what you have done for me on the very first day of my enrollment.
As a freshman in a totally alien environment, I had to carry luggage loaded with bedding stuff as well as a bag
full of daily supplies.Then came your timely assistance, which saved me a lot of energy. What’s more, on the way
to the dormitory, but for your accurate guidance and precise introduction to different areas around, I would have
already been lost in such a vast campus.
Again, I’d like to extend my heartfelt gratitude for your volunteer work, and desire to treat you to a movie.
Hope to receive your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。作为交换生在美国一所中学学习。在入学报到当天得到了学校志愿者
Jones 的帮助。要求考生给Jones写一封感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：appreciation→gratitude
此外：what’s more→ besides
精准的：precise→ accurate
希望：expect→ hope
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a freshman in a totally alien environment, I had to carry luggage loaded with bedding stuff as well as a
bag full of daily supplies.
拓展句：As a freshman in a totally alien environment, I had to carry luggage which was loaded with bedding stuff
as well as a bag full of daily supplies.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s been a while since I started my academic life here as an exchange student, but I’m
still in great appreciation of what you have done for me on the very first day of my enrollment.（运用了what引导
宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Then came your timely assistance, which saved me a lot of energy.（运用了which引导的定语从
句）
2．（2022·福建漳州·高三校考期中）假定你是李华，读完外教Mr. Brown推荐的一些英文小说后，你的收
获很大。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；
2. 你的收获；
3. 希望得到进一步指导。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m Li Hua, one of your Chinese students. Thank you very much for recommending some English novels to
me last semester. I think these novels are very interesting and meaningful. After reading these novels, I have a deep
feeling about them. Especially after reading the novel Pride and Prejudice created by British female novelist Jane
Austen, I think a marriage can’t only have love or material, but should be considered comprehensively. Only when
both aspects are considered can we really get happiness. Extensive reading can broaden our horizons. The
knowledge in books is all inclusive. Reading can enrich knowledge and broaden vision. If we read more books, we
will naturally know more. When we are frustrated or need help, reading will make us feel good. Thank you again
for recommending these English novels to me. At the same time, I also hope to get your further guidance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，读完外教Mr. Brown推荐的一些英文小说后，你的收
获很大。请你给他写一封感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：thank→appreciate
沮丧的：frustrated→upset
有趣的：interesting→amusing同时：at the same time→meanwhile
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Thank you very much for recommending some English novels to me last semester. I think these novels are
very interesting and meaningful.
拓展句：Thank you very much for recommending some English novels to me last semester, which I think are very
interesting and meaningful.
【点睛】[高分句型1] If we read more books, we will naturally know more. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] When we are frustrated or need help, reading will make us feel good. (运用了when引导时间状语从
句)
3．（2023·天津·高三天津市第一百中学校考阶段练习）假设你是红星中学学生李华。上周你在天津举行的
亚洲青年环保论坛英语演讲中荣获一等奖(Asian Youth Forum Speech) 。在准备参加演讲期间，你的英语老
师Mark 给你提供了很多帮助。请你用英文给他写一封感谢信。要点如下：
1.对Mark给予的无私帮助，而使自己在竞赛中获奖表达感谢；
2.具体的帮助，如选材上，语言表达上及遇到困难时……
3.感谢和展望。
注意：1. 词数不少于100词；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Mark,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________
Yours,
Lihua
【答案】
Dear Mr Mark,
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the invaluable help and support you provided me during my
preparation for the Asian Youth Forum Speech, where I was honored to receive the first prize.From the very beginning, you guided me in selecting the most suitable topic for the speech, which helped me
capture the attention of the audience. Moreover, when I encountered difficulties or felt discouraged, you were
always there to offer encouragement and provide me with constructive feedback, allowing me to continuously
improve and grow. I am truly fortunate to have you as my English teacher and mentor.
Once again, thank you for everything you have done for me. I am excited about the future and how I can
continue to improve and excel under your guidance.
Yours,
Lihua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周你在天津举行的Asian Youth Forum Speech英语演讲中荣获一等
奖。在准备参加演讲期间，你的英语老师Mark 给你提供了很多帮助。要求考生用英文给他写一封感谢
信，表示对他给予你的帮助的感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真挚的：heartfelt→genuine/ sincere
此外：moreover → what’s more
遇到：encounter→ meet
提供：provide→ offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am truly fortunate to have you as my English teacher and mentor.
拓展句：I am truly fortunate that I can have you as my English teacher and mentor.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the invaluable help and support you
provided me during my preparation for the Asian Youth Forum Speech, where I was honored to receive the first
prize.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 From the very beginning, you guided me in selecting the most suitable topic for the speech,
which helped me capture the attention of the audience.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
4．（2023上·四川绵阳·高三四川省绵阳南山中学校考阶段练习）假设你是李华，为了庆祝国庆七十四周
年，你市举办了“中华之美”的中文演讲比赛，你校交换生Jerry在本次大赛中获得了第一名，请你给他写
一封邮件，向他表示祝贺，要点如下：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 评论与赞赏；
3. 表达祝愿。注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jerry,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jerry,
Having learned that you’ve won the first prize in the Chinese speech contest of the 74th anniversary of
National Day, I’m writing to extend my earnest congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.
From my perspective, it is your diligence and persistence that contribute to your success, which is a reward
that you deserve. Your performance is perfect, especially your fluent spoken Chinese and beautiful voice, which
must have left a deep impression on all the judges and audience. In addition, what surprises us most is that you are
confident and brave on the stage when faced with a large number of audience. To be honest, you are a superstar in
my heart, your experience will be of great help to me and I’d like to take this chance to learn from you.
Congratulations again! I wish you greater achievements in your study and obtain a promising future. I’m
looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，就“Jerry在‘中华之美’的中文演讲比赛中获得了第一名”一事，要
求考生给他写一封邮件，向他表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：contest → competiton
在我看来：from my perspective → as far as I'm concerned
（使）吃惊：surprise → amaze
想要做某事：would like to do sth.→ feel like doing sth.
2.句式拓展
同义句改写原句：Having learned that you’ve won the first prize in the Chinese speech contest of the 74th anniversary of
National Day, I’m writing to extend my earnest congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.
拓展句： Because I have learned that you’ve won the first prize in the Chinese speech contest of the 74th
anniversary of National Day, I’m writing to extend my earnest congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.
【点睛】 [高分句型1 ] From my perspective, it is your diligence and persistence that contribute to your success,
which is a reward that you deserve. (强调句型和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2 ] In addition, what surprises us most is that you are confident and brave on the stage when faced with
a large number of audience. (what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
5．（2023上·江苏连云港·高三校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回
自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头，结束语已为你写好。
Dear Alex,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Alex,
Hearing that you will return to your country soon, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send my sincere
gratitude for your kind help with my English learning.
I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing. Besides, you alsofrankly shared your learning experience with me. Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top
student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest. All in all, words fail to express my
thankfulness to you.
I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给即将返回自己国家的朋友Alex写一封邮件，对于他经常帮
助自己学习表示感谢并表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
沮丧的：upset→distressed/frustrated
诚挚的：sincere→genuine
此外：besides→what’s more
比赛：contest→competition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the
English Speech Contest.
拓展句：Additionally, if it had not been for your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would
not have won the English Speech Contest.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you will return to your country soon, I feel a bit upset.（运用了非谓语动
词作状语和that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would not
have won the English Speech Contest.（运用了含蓄条件句的虚拟语气）
6．（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Caroline来信说她的书法(calligraphy)作
品在所在学校举办的文化节活动中获奖。请你给她回信，内容包括：
1. 你的祝贺。
2. 你的书法学习计划。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Caroline,____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Caroline,
Congratulations on your outstanding achievement! I am so impressed with your calligraphy skills and jealous
of your talent.
I have always been fascinated by the art of calligraphy ever since I was young. Recently, I have decided to
take action. I plan to purchase some calligraphy tools and start learning the basics of calligraphy. I will practice
daily to improve my skills, and also search the internet for some resources and videos on calligraphy.
I believe that your enthusiasm and efforts will enable you to achieve more achievements in the future
calligraphy road.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Caroline来信说她的书法(calligraphy)作
品在所在学校举办的文化节活动中获奖。请你给她回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
打算：plan to do sth→intend to do sth
购买：purchase→buy
羡慕的：jealous→envious
成就：achievement→accomplishment
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I will practice daily to improve my skills, and also search the internet for some resources and videos on
calligraphy.
拓展句：I will practice daily to improve my skills, and also search the internet for some resources and videos oncalligraphy, which will help me further enhance my abilities.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I believe that your enthusiasm and efforts will enable you to achieve more achievements in
the future calligraphy road. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I plan to purchase some calligraphy tools and start learning the basics of calligraphy. (运用了不定式
和动名词作宾语)
7．（2023·贵州六盘水·高三校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，在外教David的帮助下，你的英语成绩取得很
大进步。请你就此给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．表达感谢；
2．今后的英语学习计划。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
How are you going? I want to take a moment to express my sincere gratitude for your invaluable assistance in
improving my English. Your guidance and support have made a significant difference to my academic performance.
I cannot thank you enough for your patience and dedication. With your help, I have gained confidence in my
English and achieved results that I never thought possible.
Looking ahead, I am eager to continue working with you to further enhance my English proficiency. Your
lessons have been both enjoyable and informative, and I believe that with your guidance, I can reach even greater
heights in my language skills.Once again, thank you, David, for being such an outstanding teacher and mentor.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于在外教David的帮助下，你的英语成绩取得很大进步这
一情况，就此给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→ appreciation
意义重大的：significant→ important
收获：gain→ obtain
渴望做某事：be eager to do sth.→ desire to do sth.
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Your guidance and support have made a significant difference to my academic performance. I cannot thank
you enough for your patience and dedication.
拓展句：Because your guidance and support have made a significant difference to my academic performance, I
cannot thank you enough for your patience and dedication.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With your help, I have gained confidence in my English and achieved results that I never
thought possible.（运用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】Looking ahead, I am eager to continue working with you to further enhance my English
proficiency.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。）
8．（2023·湖北·开滦第二中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，在购买笔记本电脑的过程中，你的外国留学
生朋友John给了你很多的建议和帮助，请你给他写封 E-mail 表示感谢，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 感谢的原因；
3. 请他去家里吃饭。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hi John,
I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for all the help and advice you provided during my
laptop purchase process.
Your guidance was immensely valuable and played a significant role in helping me make an informed decision.
Your knowledge and expertise in electronics truly impressed me, and I am extremely grateful for the time and effort
you put into assisting me.
To show my appreciation, I would like to invite you to my house for a meal. It would be an excellent opportunity
for us to catch up, enjoy good food, and further strengthen our friendship.
Once again, thank you so much for your invaluable support. I’m truly fortunate to have a friend like you!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给外国留学生朋友John写封 E-mail， 感谢他在购买笔记本电脑的
过程中给以建议和帮助。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达：express→show
明智的：informed→wise
感激：grateful→appreciative
加强：strengthen→promote
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your guidance was immensely valuable and played a significant role in helping me make an informed
decision.
拓展句：Your guidance played a significant role in helping me make an informed decision, which was immensely
valuable.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for all the help and advice you
provided during my laptop purchase process.(运用省略that的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Your knowledge and expertise in electronics truly impressed me, and I am extremely grateful for the
time and effort you put into assisting me.(省略that的定语从句)
9．（2023·浙江绍兴·统考模拟预测）假设你是李华，某国际学校校书画社主席，昨天下午外教Mr. Black应邀给书画社作题为“A Short History of Western Painting”的讲座。请你给外教写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 感谢对方作讲座；
2. 同学们的收获；
3. 希望有机会再次邀请。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Black,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Black,
First of all, I would like to thank you for your lecture entitled “A Short History of Western Painting”.
The lecture was very informative, through which the students have a deeper understanding of the history of
Western painting. The students’ interest and enthusiasm for western painting have been greatly improved, and some
students even make up their minds to go abroad to learn Western painting.
All the students hope that we can invite you to give us more lectures.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Black写封感谢信，感谢对方作讲座，描述同学们
的收获，表示希望有机会再次邀请。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热情：enthusiasm→passion
提高：improve→enhance
首先：first of all→in the first place决定做某事：make up one’s mind to do→be determined to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, I would like to thank you for your lecture entitled “A Short History of Western Painting”.
拓展句：First of all, I would like to thank you for your lecture which was entitled “A Short History of Western
Painting”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The lecture was very informative, through which the students have a deeper understanding
of the history of Western painting. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] All the students hope that we can invite you to give us more lectures. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
10．（2023·湖北武汉·武汉市黄陂区第一中学校考模拟预测）假如你是晨光中学的李华，你在英国游学期
间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安
排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
1．表示感谢并问候;
2．计划与家人一起做的事情;
3．你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：1．词数不少于80;
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my
study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I’m going to
Tian’ an men to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Oinghua Garden to enjoy
the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid
development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to
join the Internet tide. Before choosing, I plan to consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutionsfor consultation. Only with a clear learning goal, can I study in a targeted way, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，感谢游学期间你的住宿家庭Chris的妈妈，
回复她祝贺你顺利高中毕业的邮件，并告知她你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。内容包括：1．表示感谢
并问候；2．计划与家人一起做的事情；3．你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
感恩的：grateful →thankful
除此以外：in addition → what’s more
加入，参加：join →involve oneself in
游北京：travel to Beijing → pay a visit to Beijing
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Before choosing, I plan to consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for
consultation.
拓展句：Before I choose, I plan to consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for
consultation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to
Beijing.（运用了now that 引导原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Only with a clear learning goal, can I study in a targeted way, which will be more efficient.（运用
了only +状语置于句首，部分倒装句型，运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
