福建省三校2026 届高三上学期10 月联考
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Anthony and his family always enjoyed the weekends, but this particular
Saturday would be even more enjoyable(伏笔) because
his cousins
were coming for a
visit. While Anthony and his younger sister, Kate, started to eat
breakfast,
their
mom and dad sat down at the table with a piece of paper and a pen.
“We have so much to do before Alyssa and Nicolas arrive,” Anthony’s mom
said as she
checked the list
. “We need to buy groceries, clean the floors, and
finish several other chores(名词短语).We have plenty of time to complete everything(伏笔)
since your cousins won’t be here until
after dinner.
”
“Can I go to the grocery store with you, Mom?” Anthony asked. He liked helping
his mom with the shopping, and sometimes she rewarded him with a small treat.
Anthony thought about the kind of treat he might choose at the store, such as
the cinnamon gum that his friend Caleb loved to chew. When he thought of Caleb,
suddenly Anthony jumped up from the kitchen table(伏笔).
“Today is Field Day at the recreation center!” Anthony cried out with a
worried look on his face(冲突出现，主要任务). “Caleb is counting on me to run the team
races with him. We have to beat the team that won last year!”
“Did you tell Mom and me about this before today?” his dad asked.
Anthony shook his head. “I'm sorry,” Anthony said. “I lost the flier Mr Jacobs
gave us after soccer practice, and I forgot to tell you about it. Field Day starts at
noon with a picnic, and the games and races begin after lunch(伏笔).”
Anthony sighed, “I need to call Caleb so he can find a new partner.”
Anthony knew his parents would not let him skip his responsibilities around
the house(冲突点) just because he forgot
to mention the event.
While Anthony
loved
hanging out with his cousins
and
wanted to make everything
presentable for their
visit, he also wanted to keep his word to Caleb(冲突点).
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “Maybe there’s a way to do both,” Anthony thought.
Paragraph 2: Everyone went right to work.
福建省三校2026 届高三上学期10 月联考
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Anthony and his family always enjoyed the weekends, but this particular
Saturday would be even more enjoyable because his cousins were coming for a visit.
While Anthony and his younger sister, Kate, started to eat breakfast, their mom and
dad sat down at the table with a piece of paper and a pen.
“We have so much to do before Alyssa and Nicolas arrive,” Anthony’s mom said
as she checked the list. “We need to buy groceries, clean the floors, and finish several
other chores.We have plenty of time to complete everything since your cousins won’t
be here until after dinner.”
“Can I go to the grocery store with you, Mom?” Anthony asked. He liked helping
his mom with the shopping, and sometimes she rewarded him with a small treat.
Anthony thought about the kind of treat he might choose at the store, such as the
cinnamon gum that his friend Caleb loved to chew. When he thought of Caleb,
suddenly Anthony jumped up from the kitchen table.
“Today is Field Day at the recreation center!” Anthony cried out with a worried
look on his face. “Caleb is counting on me to run the team races with him. We have
to beat the team that won last year!”
“Did you tell Mom and me about this before today?” his dad asked.
Anthony shook his head. “I'm sorry,” Anthony said. “I lost the flier Mr Jacobs
gave us after soccer practice, and I forgot to tell you about it. Field Day starts at noon
with a picnic, and the games and races begin after lunch.”
Anthony sighed, “I need to call Caleb so he can find a new partner.”
Anthony knew his parents would not let him skip his responsibilities around the
house just because he forgot to mention the event. While Anthony loved hanging out
with his cousins and wanted to make everything presentable for their visit, he also
wanted to keep his word to Caleb.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “Maybe there’s a way to do both,” Anthony thought.
Paragraph 2: Everyone went right to work.
1. 文章类型与续写思路分析
家庭责任与友情承诺冲突型故事
续写构思框架
构思要素
具体内容
核心冲突
家庭责任（迎接表亲）vs 友情承诺（运动会）
布局设计
第一段：解决方案的提出与实施
第二段：冲突解决的过程与结果
框架提炼
问题提出 → 解决方案 → 协作实施 → 圆满结局
实施重点
保持人物性格一致性，合理解决冲突，体现成长主题
承接原文事项：
保持Anthony 负责任、有担当的性格特点
延续家庭温馨和睦的氛围
承接"Maybe there's a way to do both"的积极思路
维持时间紧迫感（表亲晚饭前到达）
语言风格：与原文保持一致的口语化叙述
主题深化：突出责任、承诺、家庭协作
情感基调：积极向上，解决问题导向
巧妙设计技巧
设计合理的分工方案体现家庭协作
通过时间管理展现Anthony 的成长
用细节描写增强故事真实感
设置小障碍增加情节波折性
2. 故事山模式分析
上升行动：Anthony 想起运动会承诺
冲突顶点：家庭责任 vs 友情承诺
下降行动：寻找解决方案 → 圆满结局
3. 原文分析与表格整理
故事关键要素分析
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
Anthony：负责任、健
忘但勇于承担
"Anthony knew his parents would not let
him skip his responsibilities..."
情感层次
期待→焦虑→愧疚→
决心
"Anthony cried out with a worried look on
his face"
关键情节
点
想起运动会承诺
"Today is Field Day at the recreation
center!"
语言特色
口语化、直接引语丰
富
"Can I go to the grocery store with you,
Mom?"
关键词分
析
responsibilities,
counting on, keep his
word
"Caleb is counting on me..."
心理描写
内心矛盾与责任感冲
突
"While Anthony loved hanging out with his
cousins... he also wanted to keep his word
to Caleb."
动作描写
突然想起的焦急表现
"suddenly Anthony jumped up from the
kitchen table"
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
环境描写
家庭早餐场景
"While Anthony and his younger sister,
Kate, started to eat breakfast..."
隐含主题
责任担当与问题解决
"Maybe there's a way to do both"
情感转折
从享受周末到面临抉
择
从"enjoyed the weekends"到"worried
look"
空间转换
厨房餐桌→多个任务
地点
暗示后续的多场景转换
时间过渡
早餐时间→中午运动
会→晚饭前
"your cousins won't be here until after
dinner"
伏笔与冲突点分析
伏笔处：妈妈的任务清单："buy groceries, clean the floors, and finish several other
chores"
Anthony 喜欢帮助购物并得到奖励
表亲晚饭才到，留有解决时间
冲突点：主要冲突：家庭责任 vs 对朋友的承诺
次要冲突：时间管理冲突（中午运动会 vs 全天家务）
隐含线索：Anthony 的健忘性格（丢失传单）
家庭的理解与支持氛围
Anthony 的责任感本质
解决方案方向：时间合理分配
家庭成员协作分工，Anthony 的高效参与
可能的提前完成方案
3. 环境、心理、动作描写语料库
动作描写
His fingers drummed nervously on the table. （他的手指紧张地在桌上敲打
着。）
She dashed a text message to Caleb, explaining the situation. （她给凯勒布匆匆
发了条短信，解释情况。）
Anthony grabbed the vacuum cleaner with renewed energy. （安东尼重新燃起
干劲，抓起了吸尘器。）
They divided the chores and tackled them in unison. （他们分好家务，然后齐心
协力地干了起来。）
He glanced at the clock, mentally calculating the time. （他瞥了一眼时钟，心里
计算着时间。）
A wave of relief washed over him as the last task was completed. （当最后一项
任务完成时，一阵宽慰涌上他的心头。）
His mom gave him an approving pat on the back. （妈妈赞许地拍了拍他的
背。）
He sprinted out the door, waving goodbye to his family. （他冲出家门，向家人
挥手告别。）
They worked like a well-oiled machine, each knowing their role. （他们像一台润
滑良好的机器一样工作，各司其职。）
Anthony carefully arranged the snacks for his cousins. （安东尼仔细地为表兄妹
们摆放好零食。）
心理描写
A glimmer of hope sparked in his mind. （一丝希望在他脑海中闪现。）
Guilt gnawed at him for forgetting his promise. （忘记承诺让他内心备受煎
熬。）
He felt a tug-of-war between duty and desire. （他感到责任和愿望在内心激烈拉
扯。）
The weight of responsibility pressed heavily on his shoulders. （责任的重量沉重
地压在他的肩上。）
A sense of accomplishment filled his chest. （他的心中充满了成就感。）
He wrestled with the dilemma, searching for a way out. （他与这个困境作斗
争，寻找解决办法。）
The thought of letting Caleb down made his stomach clench. （想到会让凯勒布
失望，他的胃一阵紧缩。）
An idea suddenly clicked into place. （一个想法突然清晰起来。）
He was buoyed by his family's supportive smiles. （家人支持的笑容让他振奋起
来。）
A mix of excitement and nervousness bubbled within him. （兴奋和紧张交织在
他心中。）
环境描写
The morning sun streamed into the bustling kitchen. （清晨的阳光照进忙碌的
厨房。）
The list on the table seemed to grow longer with each passing minute. （桌上的
清单似乎随着每一分钟的流逝而变长。）
A sense of urgency hung in the air. （一种紧迫感弥漫在空气中。）
The house echoed with the sounds of cleaning and organizing. （房子里回荡着打
扫和整理的声音。）
The clock on the wall ticked relentlessly, marking the passage of time. （墙上的
时钟无情地滴答作响，记录着时间的流逝。）
The freshly cleaned floors gleamed in the sunlight. （刚擦干净的地板在阳光下
闪闪发光。）
The grocery bags sat unpacked on the counter, a silent reminder of the tasks
ahead. （未拆包的购物袋放在台面上，无声地提醒着即将完成的任务。）
The recreation center beckoned him in the distance. （远处的娱乐中心在向他招
手。）
The familiar comfort of his home contrasted with his inner turmoil. （熟悉而舒
适的家与他内心的纷乱形成对比。）
The evening began to cast long shadows across the tidy living room. （夜幕开始
降临，在整洁的客厅里投下长长的影子。）
常见单词高级替换词（5 组）
Say (说)高级替换：exclaim（呼喊）, mutter（咕哝）, suggest（建议）, declare
（宣称）, propose（提议）
场景总结：在对话中，根据人物情绪和目的使用更精确的动词，如exclaim 表惊
喜，propose 表正式建议。
Happy (高兴的)
高级替换：delighted（欣喜的）, thrilled（非常激动的）, overjoyed（欣喜若狂
的）, content（心满意足的）, elated（兴高采烈的）
场景总结：描绘积极结局或人物喜悦心情时，使用层次更丰富的词汇。
Sad/Upset (伤心的/沮丧的)
高级替换：disheartened（灰心丧气的）, crestfallen（垂头丧气的）, frustrated
（挫败的）, anguished（极度痛苦的）, guilty（内疚的）
场景总结：描绘人物面临冲突、失败或自责时的心理状态。
Think (想)高级替换：contemplate（深思）, ponder（思索）, consider（考
虑）, wonder（想知道）, reckon（认为）
场景总结：描述人物思考过程，ponder 比think 更显深思熟虑。
Quickly/Fast (快地)
高级替换：promptly（迅速地）, swiftly（敏捷地）, efficiently（高效地）, in no
time（立刻）, with haste（匆忙地）
场景总结：在描述解决冲突、完成任务的动作时，增强画面感和效率感。
4. 语言点深度解析
地道搭配与词法解析
count on someone：依赖，指望
解析：动词短语，on 为介词。原文"Caleb is counting on me"生动体现了朋友间
的信任与托付。
类似搭配：rely on, depend on。
keep one's word：信守承诺
解析：固定搭配，word 在此为单数，特指“诺言”。与break one's promise（失
信）相对。是体现人物品质的关键短语。
hang out with：与...一起闲逛
解析：非常地道的口语化短语，常用于朋友或家人之间非正式的相处。比stay
with 或play with 更能体现轻松随意的氛围。
with a worried look on his face：脸上带着担忧的表情
解析："with + [a] + 形容词 + 名词 + on one's face" 是一个非常实用的结构，
用于简洁地描述面部表情和伴随状态。如with a smile on her face。
go right to work：立即开始工作
解析：go to work 是开始工作，加上right 起强调作用，表示“立刻、马上”，
生动描绘了毫不拖延投入任务的状态。
可积累语料与生词短语
1. chore 词意：家庭杂务；琐事词性：n.
近义词：task, duty, errand, housework
反义词：leisure, recreation, entertainment
例句：
Finishing all the chores before the guests arrive is our top priority.
He finds doing the dishes a tedious chore.
2. recreation 词意：娱乐，消遣词性：n.
近义词：entertainment, amusement, leisure, pastime
反义词：work, labor, drudgery
例句：
The recreation center provides facilities for various sports.
Reading is her favorite form of recreation.
3. responsibility 词意：责任；职责词性：n.
近义词：duty, obligation, task, accountability
反义词：irresponsibility, negligence
例句：
Taking care of the pet is your responsibility.
He has a strong sense of responsibility.
4. presentable 词意：拿得出手的；体面的；整洁的词性：adj.
近义词：tidy, neat, acceptable, decent
反义词：unpresentable, messy, untidy
例句：
We need to make the house presentable for visitors.
He made sure he looked presentable for the job interview.
5. sigh 词意：叹气，叹息词性：v. / n.
近义词：groan, moan, exhale heavily
反义词：laugh, chuckle, smile
例句：
She sighed with relief when she heard the good news.
He let out a deep sigh of disappointment.
6. skip 词意：跳过；遗漏；不参加词性：v.
近义词：miss, avoid, bypass, omit
反义词：attend, do, participate in
例句：
You cannot skip your classes.
He skipped the boring parts of the book.
5. Possible Versions（3）
Version 1
Paragraph 1: “Maybe there’s a way to do both,” Anthony thought. Anthony’s
mind raced as he looked at
the long to-do list
. Suddenly, an idea flashed across his
mind(无灵主语句). “Mom,” he said eagerly, “what if we divide the chores? I can clean the
living room with Kate while you and Dad
shop for
groceries
. If we all start early,
everything could be done by noon.” His mother hesitated for a moment, glancing at
the clock(现在分词短语做伴随动作), while his father exchanged a quick look with her. “That
might actually work,” Dad nodded slowly. “But you’ll have to keep your promise to
finish your part before leaving.” “I will!” Anthony said, eyes shining with
determination(独立主格刻画人物). They discussed the order of tasks, making
sure
(现在分词短语做伴
随动作)nothing was forgotten. As everyone agreed on the plan, Anthony felt a sense of
relief—maybe teamwork could make both things possible.
Paragraph 2: Everyone went right to work. Anthony swept the floor, folded
blankets, and helped Kate organize the books as fast as he could. His hands moved
quickly, and sweat trickled down his face, but excitement kept him going. By the
time his parents returned with groceries, the house was sparkling. “You did a great
job, son!” his dad said with a proud smile. After lunch, Anthony packed his
running shoes and dashed to the recreation center. Caleb’s face lit up when he
saw him. “You made it!” he shouted. During the race, Anthony ran like the wind,
his heart pounding with pride(独立主格刻画人物). When they crossed the finish line together,
he realized something important—being responsible doesn’t mean giving up fun; it
means doing things right first.
类别
亮点表达
同义替换
示例句
情绪描
写
eyes shining with determination
eyes glowing /
filled with resolve
His eyes were glowing
with resolve.
动作描
写
swept the floor, folded blankets,
dashed to the center
hurried / rushed /
sprinted
He dashed out of the
house in excitement.
非谓语
结构
Glancing at the clock, Mom
hesitated.
Using / Looking /
Nodding
Nodding in agreement,
Dad smiled.
强调句It was teamwork that made
强调结构
It was his effort that
类别
亮点表达
同义替换
示例句
式
everything possible.
saved the day.
连接过
渡
while, by the time, after,
suddenly, meanwhile
过渡词多样
By the time he finished, it
was noon.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: “Maybe there’s a way to do both,” Anthony thought. He
frowned at the long list, guilt weighing heavily on his mind.(独立主格)Then, an idea
began to form. “Mom, Dad, what if I finish the cleaning before noon, and you two do
the shopping? I can still make it to Field Day in time,” he said cautiously. His mom
raised her eyebrows. “That’s quite a lot to do, Anthony.” “I know,” he admitted, “but
I promised Caleb. I’ll work twice as hard.” His father smiled slightly. “That’s the
spirit. We’ll count on you.” Kate clapped her hands in excitement. “I’ll help, too!”
Hearing
her
words
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Anthony’s heart lightened. Together, they made
a quick schedule—cleaning, shopping, lunch, and then the race. The plan sounded
tough, but it was fair, and everyone agreed.
Paragraph 2: Everyone went right to work. The house buzzed with energy.
Anthony vacuumed, wiped the windows, and kept encouraging Kate beside him.
“Almost done!” he cheered. When his parents came back, everything looked
perfect. After lunch, Anthony changed clothes in a hurry and grabbed his water
bottle. He reached the field just as the whistle blew. Caleb waved from the track,
thrilled(过去分词短语做补语). They ran side by side, their laughter mixing with cheers
around them(独立主格). Crossing the finish line(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Anthony breathed out,
exhausted but satisfied(adj 做补语). He had kept both promises—and learned that being
responsible sometimes just takes effort and teamwork.
类型
亮点表达
同义/替换
例句
心理描
写词汇
guilt weighing heavily / heart
lightened / exhausted but satisfied
burdened /
relieved / content
His heart lightened as
the plan worked.
动作动
词升级
vacuumed / wiped / grabbed /
dashed
hurried / snatched
/ polished
He grabbed his water
bottle and ran.
类型
亮点表达
同义/替换
例句
高阶语
法点
what if 引导假设；并列动词组；
非谓语结构
—
What if we divide the
chores?
逻辑衔
接
when, as soon as, just as, after,
while
—
Just as he arrived, the
race began.
短语积
累
keep one’s promise / count on sb /
make it in time / work twice as hard
—
You can count on me
to be there.
素材与替换积累
功能
高级表达
同义替换 / 搭配扩展
“想到办法”
come up with a
solution
figure out a way / hit upon an idea
“迅速行动” spring into action
get down to work / set to work
“充满兴奋”
be filled with
excitement
feel thrilled / glow with joy
“保持承诺” keep one’s word
live up to one’s promise / honor one’s
commitment
“感到自豪” swell with pride
beam with pride / wear a proud smile
“冲向…”
dash / race / sprint
toward
hurry to / rush for
“体会成长”
learn a valuable
lesson
grow in responsibility / realize what maturity
means
例句积累：
He finally figured out a way to solve both problems at once.
The whole family sprang into action, turning chores into laughter.
Anthony beamed with pride when his mom praised him for being responsible.
He realized that maturity means keeping promises, even when it’s hard.
官方：
“Maybe there’s a way to do both,” Anthony thought. “What if we all work
together quickly to finish by noon?” he suggested. “That way, the house will be
ready, and I can still go to Field Day.” His parents nodded in agreement, and
Anthony laughed with relief. He checked the chore list and decided to stay home
with
his dad and
sister
to complete the jobs
. While the children talked about how
to divide the chores, their mom took the grocery list and walked toward the door.
After finalizing their plan, Anthony suggested finishing the tasks before his mom
returned.
Everyone went right to work. Anthony and Kate made the beds while
their dad
vacuumed the carpet.
Afterward, Kate helped their dad clean the bathroom as
Anthony
swept the kitchen floor.
Anthony’s mom arrived at the door with her arms
full of bags just as everyone in the house was finishing. “Great Timing!” Anthony
shouted. “I have thirty minutes before
Field Day
begins
!” He grabbed his
backpack, gave his family a quick wave, and dashed out the door, eager
to join
Caleb and make the most of
Field Day
(adj 短语做补语).
