专题 01 应用文-征文投稿
近三年考情分析
年份 卷区 话题 命题形式
全国甲卷 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 提纲类
2023年 全国乙卷 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及
从中获得的体验和感受。 提纲类
世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛
全国甲卷 提纲类
2022年 全国乙卷 英语学习方式的调查 提纲类
邀请英国好友Jim参加关于英语写作的
北京卷 线上经验交流。 提纲类
天津卷 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
浙江卷6月 邀请外国留学生一同体验。 提纲类
介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方
天津卷 提纲类
2021年
新高考全国I卷
庆祝Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年
提纲类
写作方法指导
1. 认真审题，提炼主题
分析标题或材料所提供的信息，进而确定主题。 注意标题的含义很多，写自己最擅长和熟悉的人和
事。
2. 联系生活，确定要点
以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，确定写作的要点。高考英语书
面表达试题凸显时代性，学生要多关注社会生活实际。
3. 细化要点，布局谋篇细化要点，使文章更丰满。可以采用三段式的写作模式来行文。最好拟个提纲，以明确主次，切忌心
中无数、边想边写。
4. 斟词酌句，组句成篇
选择适当的词语或结构将要点表达出来，选择适当的句型和适当的过渡语组句成文。（1）切忌一边
用汉语思考，一边“翻译”。要尽可能运用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式来表达相关内容， （2）要避免
过多地使用同一种表达方式，尽量使用不同的单词、短语和语法结构，使表达多样化。（3）适当使用连
接词，使句子间的衔接自然、流畅。
写作模板
Dear Editor,
I’d like to submit an article entitled______________ which I’m sure will catch your attention.
Nowadays, when _________ ,_____________appeared in our view. More and more __________ are becoming
increasingly interested in ___________The reasons why there exists this phenomenon can be listed as follows. For
one thing_______ . For another, _______ Even more impressive is that ___________ .
In my view, it’s ___________ that ______________.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
常用表达
1.Beijing successfully held the 2022 Winter Olympics , which is bound to strengthen the east and west culture
bridge again . （be bound to do 一定会.....）
2.I believe , with innovative ideas and perseverance , we human beings will be able to fly further and further not
only from the Earth to the Moon , but to the Mars and beyond .
我相信，只要有创新的思想和坚持不懈的精神，我们人类一定能够飞得越来越远，不仅能从地球飞到月球，
还能飞到火星甚至更远的地方。
3.In conclusion , to realize a dream is not that easy , so we must study hard to fulfill our dreams .
总之，实现梦想不是那么容易的，所以我们必须努力学习来实现我们的梦想。
高考真题精讲
【2023▪全国甲卷】
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文
投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
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Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral
values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to
countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of
Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even
today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of
knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of
the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写
一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
著名的：well-known → famous
人物：figure → person
强调：emphasize → stress
基础：foundation → basis
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority,
harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
拓展句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, which fostered respect for
authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
【2023▪全国乙卷】
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That
was the first time I had watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginners. In the beginning, it was quite difficult
to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice
piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece
completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It
is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，
及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：opportunity → chance
使沮丧：demoralize → discourage
满意的：satisfied → content
空闲的：leisure → spare
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for
beginner.
拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for
beginner.
【2022年全国甲卷】
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】
When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the
balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our
daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call
on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect
ourselves.
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建
议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
越来越：more and more→increasingly
重视：place importance on→attach importance to
重要的：key→significant
此外：what’s more→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运
用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型)
[高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句)
【2022年天津卷第二次】
假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员，口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短
视频。请按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿：
(1)向同学们发出入社邀请；
(2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；
(3)分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. I’m here to invite you to join
us. This will be a good chance for all English lovers.The club offers various interesting activities. We can participate in English speech contests, watch classic
English movies, sing English songs and attend inspiring lectures. All of them help to stimulate our interest in
learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lot. I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot
of friends.
Now, it’s your turn to join us. We are looking forward to having you in the club!
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语口语社的纳新视频写一段文字稿，向同学们发出邀请，
并介绍口语社的主要活动，分享入社以来的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance →opportunity
参加：participate in →take part in →join in
愉快的：enjoyable →joyful
激发：stimulate →motivate →activate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The club activities have benefited me a lot.
拓展句：The club activities which I have joined in have benefited me a lot.
【2021年天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，
请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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【答案】
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest,
such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is
its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance
to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here.
Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still
playing an important part in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction
Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜
欢或去过的地方。
【解析】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，
第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求：
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置：中国西南部
②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be located in；world-famous；places of interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；
have a chance to do…；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be amazed by
第三步：连词成句
(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.
(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.
(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.
(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden
monkeys.
(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.
(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表递进关系：what is more
2.表转折关系：however
3.表示列举：such as, like
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.（what引导的主语从句）
[高分句型2]
Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.
（现在分词作状语）
名校模拟题提升
练 10 篇
1．（2023·浙江·统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，某英文网站发布了以“A Symbol of China”为题的征稿启事，
请你撰稿介绍你眼中的中国象征。内容包括：1.象征物名称； 2.象征物特色；3.推荐理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Symbol of China
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【答案】
A Symbol of China
Among the many symbols representing China and its unique culture, the Great Wall is top on my
recommendation list.
The Great Wall is one of the greatest miracles created by the ancient Chinese as the witness of China’s long
history. Originally built by Emperor Qinshihuang and expanded and strengthened in the Ming Dynasty, it became
the world’s largest military structure. And its historic and strategic importance is matched only by its architectural
significance, making it a symbol of the unity and strength of the Chinese people.
The Great Wall is now the biggest tourist attraction in China. As the old saying goes, “He who has never been
to the Great Wall is not a true man”. So come and experience it at first hand.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写一篇英文稿，介绍自己眼中的中国象征，包括象征物名
称、象征物特色和推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累许多的：many→numerous
奇迹：miracle→wonder
旅游景点：tourist attraction→scenic spot
亲自：at first hand→by oneself
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Among the many symbols representing China and its unique culture, the Great Wall is top on my
recommendation list.
拓展句：Among the many symbols that represent China and its unique culture, the Great Wall is top on my
recommendation list.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Originally built by Emperor Qinshihuang and expanded and strengthened in the Ming
Dynasty, it became the world’s largest military structure.（运用了过去分词作状语）
【高分句型2】As the old saying goes, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”.（运用了as
引导的非限制性定语从句）
2．（2023·四川遂宁·统考三模）21st Century Teens英文报正在就“越来越多的外国人爱上中国传统文化”
这一现象举办征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿，内容要点如下：
1.分析原因；
2.你的看法。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
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【答案】One possible version
Nowadays, more and more foreigners are becoming increasingly interested in Chinese traditional culture. The
reasons why there exists this phenomenon can be listed as follows.
For one thing, China has a long history and evolves colorful, mysterious and unique cultures in its
development, which makes it more attractive. For another, our country’s economy has been developing at a good
pace and more and more foreign people are coming to travel, work and even live here. During their stay, they are
also exposed to and fascinated by our diverse traditional cultures.
In my view, it’s our country’s being stronger that has made the cultural aspect of our country more appealing
and charming. And I think every one of us should take responsibility to spread our excellent traditional culture to
the world. Only in this way can our country go further and be more stable on the way to realizing the Chinese
Dream .
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。21st Century Teens英文报正在就“越来越多的外国人爱上中国传统文化”这一现象举办征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
在我看来：in my view→in my opinion
实现：realize→make…come true
吸引人的：attractive→appealing
特别：unique→special
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：For another, our country’s economy has been developing at a good pace and more and more foreign people
are coming to travel, work and even live here.
拓展句：For another, more and more foreign people are coming to travel, work and even live here because our
country’s economy has been developing at a good pace.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] For one thing, China has a long history and evolves colorful, mysterious and unique
cultures in its development, which makes it more attractive. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Only in this way can our country go further and be more stable on the way to realizing the Chinese
Dream . (运用了部分倒装)
3．（2023·安徽·高三专题练习）你校英文报Teens正在为“用英语讲好中国传统文化”专栏征稿，请你选
择一项喜欢的传统文化项目，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．介绍文化内容；
2．阐述喜欢原因。
注意：
1．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2．在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】参考范文：
The traditional Chinese culture item I introduce is dian cha, a kind of tea art popular in the Song Dynasty. The
technique begins with pouring hot water over powdered tea to create a paste. Then, more hot water is slowly added
as the tea is constantly whisked by hand with a bamboo stick. This action of pouring hot water is called dian,
giving this art the name dian cha.
I appreciate it because it is unique in the world. Besides, it makes drinking tea more enjoyable, which also
gives us an insight into people’s lifestyle in the Song Dynasty.
【导语】这篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英文报Teens正在为“用英语讲好中国传统文化”专栏征稿，请
你选择一项喜欢的传统文化项目，写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累介绍：introduce→present
开始：begin→start
不断地：constantly→continuously
搅拌：whisk→stir
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This action of pouring hot water is called dian, giving this art the name dian cha.
拓展句：This action of pouring hot water is called dian, which gives this art the name dian cha.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Then, more hot water is slowly added as the tea is constantly whisked by hand with a
bamboo stick. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型 2】 Besides, it makes drinking tea more enjoyable, which also gives us an insight into people’s
lifestyle in the Song Dynasty.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
4．（2023·湖北孝感·高三校联考阶段练习）假定你是校英文报“Culture”栏目的编辑李华，请你给交换生
George写封邮件邀请他给该栏目投稿，内容包括：
1. 栏目介绍；
2. 写作要求和交稿时间。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear George,
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Yours,
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【答案】Dear George,
I’m Li Hua, editor of English newspaper Culture of our school. Knowing you are familiar with the culture in
your country, I’m writing to invite you to contribute an essay to share something with us.
In our column, we publish different cultures from different countries once a week, covering a large variety of
topics, including history, culture, travel and school life. From these articles, we students can enjoy the beautiful
customs and traditions all over the world.
Hope you can finish it as soon as possible and submit it before Sep. 25th. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给交换生George写封邮件邀请他给校英文报“Culture”栏目投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累投稿：contribute to→submit sth. for publication
熟悉：be familiar with→know...well
各种各样的：a large variety of→various
话题：topic→theme
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m Li Hua, editor of English newspaper Culture of our school.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua, who is editor of English newspaper Culture of our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing you are familiar with the culture in your country, I’m writing to invite you to
contribute an essay to share it with us.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Hope you can finish it as soon as possible and submit it before Sep. 25th.（由省略连词that引导
的宾语从句）
5．（2023·福建模拟预测）假定你是李华，上周你校举办了中国传统文化周活动。请你为校英文报写一篇
报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
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【答案】One possible version:
A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance
students’confidence in our national culture.
During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including
singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals.
Every one of us chose one to our taste and we enjoyed ourselves very much.
The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us
tofurther spread Chinese culture in future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为上周你校举办的中国传统文化周活动写一篇报道，内容包
括：活动目的；活动内容；活动反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累增加：enhance→boost
参加：participate in→take part in
许多：numerous→masses of
获得：gained→obtained
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句 ： A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance
students’confidence in our national culture.
拓展句：A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school, whose purpose was
to enhance students’confidence in our national culture.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural
activities, including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional
Chinese festivals. (运用了非谓语动词作宾语)
[高分句型2] The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage
us to further spread Chinese culture in future. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．（2022·广西南宁·统考三模）今年，你的家乡开展了一系列历史和传统文化保护活动。请你写一篇以
Impressive Activities为题的报道介绍这些活动，刊登在你校英语报上，内容包括：
1.活动内容；2.活动效果。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 标题已给出，文中不得透露个人真实信息。
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【答案】One possible version:
Impressive Activities
With unique history and culture, my hometown is famous all over the country. This year has witnessed many
impressive activities held to protect its history and traditional Chinese culture.
Some cultural relics, among which are our old town walls, have been well restored as a way to keep history
alive. Besides, Chinese-style costume shows and paper-cutting are held annually in the art center to offer a great
chance for the people to learn more about the traditional Chinese culture. Moreover, there are exhibitions of
Chinese paintings, calligraphy and traditional local drama, which deepen our understanding of Chinese culture and
give us a sense of pride as a Chinese.
These activities are highly appreciated because they offer us chances to enjoy our traditional culture and
protect our history.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生写一篇以Impressive Activities为题的报道，介绍今年家乡开展的一系列历史和传统文化保护活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：well-known→famous
遍及：throughout→all over
机会：opportunity→chance
学习：study→learn
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This year has witnessed many impressive activities held to protect its history and traditional Chinese
culture.
拓展句：This year has witnessed many impressive activities which have been held to protect its history and
traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some cultural relics, among which are our old town walls, have been well restored as a
way to keep history alive. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型 2】Moreover, there are exhibitions of Chinese paintings, calligraphy and traditional local drama,
which deepen our understanding of Chinese culture and give us a sense of pride as a Chinese. (运用了which引导
的非限制性定语从句)
7．（2023·海南海口·统考一模）你校的校报栏目To My Dear School正在面向全校高中毕业生征集毕业感
言。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 回顾在校的生活和收获；
2. 表达感激与不舍；
3. 献上祝福。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
To My Dear School
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【答案】Possible versions:
To My Dear School
With our high school life drawing to an end, I am more than delighted to have the chance to express my
gratitude to our school.
There were varieties of courses and activities, which not only equipped me with rich knowledge, but also
broadened my horizons. Besides, warm-hearted classmates and knowledgeable teachers enabled me to get valuable
friendship and grow up into a well-rounded person. Without our school, I wouldn’t have become the person I am
today. Words fail to express the gratitude deep in my heart.
I promise I will try my best to face the coming challenges and create wonders. Wish our school all the best.To My Dear School
It’s really hard to say goodbye! But meanwhile, I’m writing these few lines to extend my heartfelt gratitude to
you.
The past three years has witnessed my giant leap in my study and life. Under the guidance of all my teachers, I
was able to be exposed to abundant knowledge and performed well at school. Facing obstacles, it was the constant
companionship and encouragement from all the teachers and classmates that cheered me up. Thanks for providing
me with such a pleasant atmosphere, without which I wouldn’t have become a well-rounded person.
Indeed, my appreciation to you is beyond words. Wish you a prosperous future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友约翰写信邀请他周末看电影，表示对他给予你的
帮助的感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance → opportunity
表达我的感激之情：express my gratitude → convey my appreciation
各种各样的：varieties of → various
而且：besides →furthermore
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Without our school, I wouldn’t have become the person I am today.
拓展句：Had it not been for our school, I wouldn’t have become the person I am today.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】There were varieties of courses and activities, which not only equipped me with rich
knowledge, but also broadened my horizons.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Without our school, I wouldn’t have become the person I am today.（运用了含蓄虚拟条件句）
8．（2023·青海海东·统考三模）假定你是李华，最近参加了学校的英语角活动。请你就此写一篇短文，向
校英语报投稿，内容包括：
1.英语角的活动；
2.你的收获；
3.呼吁更多人参与。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文的题目已为你写好。
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【答案】参考范文：
Welcome to the English Corner
Last Wednesday evening, I participated in the English Corner of our school. There were a variety of activities,
including singing English songs and reading English books. What made it more exciting was that our foreign
teacher was there and he interacted with us.Through this experience, I practised my spoken English and gained confidence in speaking English. It was the
first time that I had found it so wonderful to communicate with others in English. I think the English Corner can
help us a lot. So I want to urge more students to get involved in the English Corner.
【导语】这是一篇开放性作文，要求考生写一篇文章投稿，描述你校英语角的活动、你的收获并呼吁更多
人参与。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in/be involved in
各种各样的：a variety of→various/all kinds of
和……交流：interact with→communicate with
获得……的信心：gain confidence in→get faith in
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：What made it more exciting was that our foreign teacher was there and he interacted with us.
拓展句：What made it more exciting was that our foreign teacher was there, who interacted with us.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What made it more exciting was that our foreign teacher was there and he interacted with
us.(使用了What引导主语从句和that引导表语从句)
【高分句型2】It was the first time that I had found it so wonderful to communicate with others in English.(使用
了It is/was the first time that…句型)
9．（2023·广东·校联考模拟预测）你校英文报正在组织作文比赛，请你以“Failure Is Not Necessarily Bad”
为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的理解；
2. 举例说明。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Failure Is Not Necessarily Bad
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【答案】参考范文：
Failure Is Not Necessarily Bad
People often feel sorrowful for failure, thus trying to avoid it at any cost. However, in daily life, failure is
unavoidable. It is our attitude towards it that counts. Thus, we should treat failure as a stepping stone instead of as a
block.
Take myself as an example, I used to do poorly in math, however hard I tried. Repeated failure in the subject
was a blow to my confidence. I never thought of giving up, though. I began to reflect on my failure. By and by, I
made progress and achieved my final success. I learnt an important lesson about never giving up and determination
from the experience.In brief, failure is not necessarily bad.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英文报正在组织作文比赛，请你以“Failure Is Not Necessarily
Bad”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因此：thus→therefore
重要：count→matter
障碍：block→obstacle
开始：begin→start
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I began to reflect on my failure. By and by, I made progress and achieved my final success.
拓展句：After I began to reflect on my failure, I made progress and achieved my final success.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Take myself as an example, I used to do poorly in math, however hard I tried. (运用了
however引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] I learnt an important lesson about never giving up and determination from the experience. (运用了动
名词作宾语)
10．（2023·海南·校联考三模）你校英文报正在进行题为A Meaningful Volunteering Experience的征文，请
你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 活动内容；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Meaningful Volunteering Experience
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【答案】
A Meaningful
Volunteering Experience
Last Saturday morning, I, together with my classmates, worked as volunteers in our community centre.
We helped to hand out food and medicine donated by a local company to the elderly living in our community.
We also delivered the food and medicine to the homes of those who had difficulty walking or moving. Tired as I
was after hours of hard work, I felt very delighted.
This meaningful volunteering experience was not only a relay of love, but also a good chance for my own
personal improvement.【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生写一篇题为A Meaningful Volunteering Experience的征文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
分发：hand out→distribute
捐赠：donate→give away
困难：difficulty→trouble
劳累的：tired→weary
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We helped to hand out food and medicine donated by a local company to the elderly living in our
community.
拓展句：We helped to hand out food and medicine that had been donated by a local company to the elderly living
in our community.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】We also delivered the food and medicine to the homes of those who had difficulty
walking or moving.（由who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Tired as I was after hours of hard work, I felt very delighted.（由as引导的让步状语从句的倒装
结构）
