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组合练(三) 五育之劳育+意外事件
Ⅰ.应用文写作
(2024 山东临沂二模)
假如你是李华,请你写一篇短文向校英文报Labor and Health 栏目投稿,内容包括:
1.一次难忘的家务劳动经历;
2.你的收获和感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
A Memorable Housework Experience
参考范文
A Memorable
Housework
Experience
One memorable housework experience for me was that I decided to clean the entire
kitchen on my own.It was a Sunday afternoon,and I saw my mother exhausted after a week of
hard work.Taking the initiative,I started with the dishes and moved on to the
counters,floors,and even the cabinets.The process was boring,and I encountered stubborn
stains that required extra effort to remove.
As I worked,I realized how much time and effort my mother spends on maintaining the
house.It gave me a deeper appreciation for her dedication and hard work.Moreover,the sense
of accomplishment after seeing the clean and sparkling kitchen was indescribable.It taught
me the value of hard work and the importance of contributing to the household.I’ll always
cherish this experience.
1.词汇积累
决定:decide→determine
疲惫不堪的:exhausted→extremely tired
此外:moreover→in addition
成就:accomplishment→achievement
2.高分句型
(1)The process was boring,and I encountered stubborn stains that required extra effort to
remove.(that 引导的限制性定语从句)
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(2)As I worked,I realized how much time and effort my mother spends on maintaining the
house.(as 引导的时间状语从句和how much 引导的宾语从句)
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024 湖南常德一模)
Brandon,a father of two and an ordinary worker in a company,was making his way
home on a typical Thursday evening.The sun had just dipped below the horizon,casting a
warm glow over the sky.Brandon’s heart was filled with joy and excitement as he was eager
to share the news of his recent promotion with his beloved wife and children.Little did he
know that this particular Thursday would be anything but ordinary.All of a sudden,there was
a faint ominous(不祥的) feeling around him,but he pushed aside any thoughts of potential
danger,focusing instead on getting home.However,just as he arrived there,a thunderous noise
shattered the peaceful silence of the evening.He looked up just in time to see a train running
into a truck,sending debris(残骸) flying in all directions.
It was an accident that he had never witnessed before.Brandon was frozen in shock.It
was a messy scene as people ran from the dangerous site,hidden behind flames and thick
smoke.In an instant,everything around him seemed to be in chaos.People were screaming and
cracks filled the air with the explosive force.“Get away from that train!Don’t go near it!”
warned the train conductor,as he called 911 for help.Brandon was about to run away when he
heard a cry for help.Brandon’s instincts kicked in.Without a second thought,he raced towards
the voice,pushing through the panicked crowd.His heart pounded in the chest as he
approached the crash site.As he came closer,the cries for help became clearer.They were
coming from the burning truck stuck on the train tracks.He ran up to the window and saw the
young driver trapped in his seatbelt and held down by the steering wheel as the fire closed in
around him.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Brandon’s mind was racing when he saw the situation.
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The train conductor came to Brandon and hugged him tightly.
【语篇导读】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Brandon 作为一名普通公司员工和两个孩
子的父亲,在回家的路上目睹了一场车祸,火车撞上了一辆卡车并发生爆炸。混乱中,他
听到了呼救声,没有犹豫地冲向危险现场,发现一名年轻司机被困在燃烧的卡车内,大火
正在向他逼近。
【思路分析】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当Brandon 看到这种情况时,他的头脑飞快地转动着”可知,第一
段可描写Brandon 内心在权衡到底是救人还是赶紧离开,以及他决定采取行动,开始营救
这名司机,并把司机送到安全的地方。
②由第二段首句内容“列车员走到Brandon 跟前,紧紧地拥抱了他”可知,第二段可描写
列车员赞扬Brandon 的英勇行为,以及Brandon 内心觉得自己只是做了一个负责的公民
应该做的事。
2.续写线索:Brandon 的头脑转动——Brandon 内心权衡——Brandon 开始营救——列车
员拥抱Brandon——列车员赞扬Brandon——Brandon 的感受
【参考范文】
Brandon’s mind was racing when he saw the situation.Thoughts of his family flashed
through his mind as he realized if he did the rescue,he would put his life at risk.Brandon took
a deep breath and stepped back.Suddenly a sense of guilt washed over him at the sight of the
trapped man.Brandon knew he had to act.He reached through the window,ignoring the pain
from the burn on the hands.He tried to untie the seatbelt and helped the panicked young man
break away from the steering wheel.Thankfully,the train conductor and some crew members
were now rushing over to assist.Together,they managed to pull the young man out through
the broken window and to safety.What a great relief to everyone at the crash site!
The train conductor came to Brandon and hugged him tightly.The conductor put his
arms around Brandon,leading him away from the chaos.“You just saved more than one
life.Your action is a great example of the value of bravery.You’re a true hero.What you did
brought warmth to our hearts and tears to our eyes.” All of a sudden,thunderous applause
burst out from the crowds.Brandon looked at the conductor,a mixture of emotions sweeping
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across his face.In his eyes,he just did what a responsible citizen should do.He was not a
hero,and all he could think about was getting home to his family.He had news to share,and
now he had a story to tell about how an ordinary man had done something extraordinary.
