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Passage 1
假定你是李华，你校外教David正在策划一场英语辩论赛，现向同学们征集辩题。请你给
他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 提供辩论题目；
2. 说明选题理由。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
Hoping this email finds you well. It would be delightful if my suggestions for the debate
competition could help.
I propose "Social Media - Pros or Cons" as the topic. Given the significance of social media,
this topic will spark insightful discussions on its impact and consequences, encouraging
exploration of various perspectives. Apart from regular arguments presenting and debating rounds,
I suggest introducing an "Audience Questions" session to create an interactive atmosphere.
The topic and novel session will hopefully make the event educational and engaging. Best
wishes for organizing it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校外教David正在策划一场英语辩论
赛，现向同学们征集辩题这一情况，给他写一封邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累
令人愉快的：delightful→ enjoyable
建议：suggestion → advice
各种各样的：various→ all kinds of
除了，此外：Apart from→ In addition to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Given the significance of social media, this topic will spark insightful discussions on its
impact and consequences, encouraging exploration of various perspectives.
拓展句：Given the significance of social media, this topic will spark insightful discussions on its
impact and consequences, which can encourage exploration of various perspectives.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It would be delightful if my suggestions for the debate competition
could help.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句。）
【高分句型2】Given the significance of social media, this topic will spark insightful discussions
on its impact and consequences, encouraging exploration of various perspectives.（非谓语动词
中的现在分词作状语。）
Passage 2
同普通话一样，地方方言也是我们中华文化的重要组成部分。请你以“Protect And Pass On
Our Dialects”为题写一篇短文向你校英语报文化专栏投稿，内容包括：
1. 地方方言的发展现状;
2. 地方方言的重要作用;
3. 呼吁大家保护地方方言。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：普通话 mandarin
Protect And Pass On Our Dialects
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【答案】
Protect And Pass On Our Dialects
Recent years have witnessed that fewer and fewer young people are capable of speaking their
dialects. Dialects are facing challenges and losing ground gradually.
While mandarin is crucial for most Chinese people, the significance of local dialects is
undeniable. Actually, not only are dialects communication tools, but they also play a very
important role in cultural heritage, representing our roots and history. Furthermore, it is dialects
that contribute to the diversity of cultures in different regions.
Therefore, it is high time that dialects should be preserved so that they can be heard by the
next generations. Let’s embrace and celebrate the diversity of our dialects, ensuring their survival
for generations to come.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Protect And Pass On Our Dialects”为题写
一篇短文向你校英语报文化专栏投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：crucial→vital
无可争辩的：undeniable→incontestable
庆祝：celebrate→observe
确保：ensure→make sure
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Recent years have witnessed that fewer and fewer young people are capable of speaking
their dialects. Dialects are facing challenges and losing ground gradually.
拓展句：Dialects are facing challenges and losing ground gradually because recent years have
witnessed that fewer and fewer young people are capable of speaking their dialects.
【点睛】[高分句型1] While mandarin is crucial for most Chinese people, the significance of
local dialects is undeniable. (运用了while引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] Let’s embrace and celebrate the diversity of our dialects, ensuring their survival for
generations to come. (运用了现在分词作状语)Passage 3
你校英文报社正在组织以“感恩(Gratitude)、独立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”为关键词的
征稿活动，请你结合自己经历，选择至少一个关键词投稿表达自己对高中生活的感悟。
注意：
1.将题目补充完整：
2.词数100词左右。
_____: the key word (s) of my high school life
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【答案】Sample 1:
Gratitude and youth: the key word(s) of my high school life
My high school life is so fascinating that it is beyond the description. Nothing can represent it
better than “gratitude” and “youth”.
The first day of my high school is still fresh in my mind. With youth and ignorance, I was
completely at a loss and had nothing to expect. I cannot imagine how long this phenomena would
last, which upset me seriously. It was the teachers’ and classmates’ concern that led me out of the
initial confusion. Gradually, I deeply realize that my high school life is full of brilliant sunshine.
The journey from confusion to getting the direction to persist in has taught me a lot. That is, youth
lives for diligence and we should always be grateful!
There is no youth without diligence, and gratitude makes my school life full of sunshine.
Sample 2:
When it comes to my high school life, nothing can be better than “youth” and “gratitude” to
describe it.
The first day of my high school is still fresh in my mind. With passion and dream, I entered
the promising campus, seeing faces full of youth and energy. Hopefully, my heart was full ofstrength of striving for my dreams. However, youth can also have confusion. I remember once I
failed the exam and felt so disappointed that I even couldn’t cheer up for long. It was the teachers’
and classmates’ help and concern that pulled me out of the dilemma. With encouragement and
gratitude, I’ve been working hard to make progress.
Cherishing youth and learning gratitude, I believe I will achieve my dream.
Sample 3:
Independence: the key word(s) of my high school life
Before high school, I lived a sheltered life, with my parents taking care of most things.
However, as I entered high school, a boarding one, I had to adapt to a new environment and way
of life, which forced me to become self-reliant.
With less supervision, I had to learn to manage my time effectively. Creating a study
schedule and sticking to it helped me keep organized. Besides, learning to make decisions was
another challenge: Which subject to choose? Whether to join a club? I had to consider my
preferences and interests. Making these choices allowed me to discover who I was and what I was
passionate about, which furthered my personal growth.
As a conclusion, high school is a transformative period when I developed a sense of
independence. It teaches me invaluable skills that I will carry through to my future life.
【导语】本文是一篇报社征稿。要求考生表达对自己高中生活的感悟。考生需要扣题，把
“感恩(Gratitude)、独立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”三个关键词囊括在文中，还需要添加
适合细节使文章真实自然。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
受保护的：sheltered → protected/guarded
监督：supervision → oversight/monitoring
困境：dilemma → predicament/puzzle
感激：appreciation → gratitude/acknowledgment
2. 句式拓展：
简单句变复合句
原句：With passion and dream, I entered the promising campus, seeing faces full of youth and
energy.
拓展句：When I entered the promising campus with passion and dream, I saw faces full of youth
and energy.【点睛】【高分句型1】It was the teachers’ and classmates’ concern that led me out of the
initial confusion. （it was...that引导的强调句型）
【高分句型2】Cherishing youth and learning gratitude, I believe I will achieve my dream.（现
在分词作伴随状语）
【高分句型3】Making these choices allowed me to discover who I was and what I was
passionate about, which furthered my personal growth.（who和what引导的宾语从句，which
引导的定语从句）
Passage 4
你校正在组织以旅游为主题的英语作文比赛。请你以“一次旅游经历”为题，写一篇短文
参赛，内容包括：
1.叙述旅游经历；
2.表达感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好。
A memorable trip
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A memorable trip
I had always wanted to visit the Great Wall, and I was finally able to make my dream come
true last summer.
I took a bus from my home town to Badaling, which is the most popular tourist destination.
The Great Wall is so huge and so well-preserved. I was really impressed. I also enjoyed the hiking
on the Great Wall. The views from the wall was breathtaking. I could see for miles in every
direction.
I had a great time on my trip to the Great Wall. It was an unforgettable experience that I willcherish forever.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“一次旅游经历”为题，写一篇短文参加
学校组织的以旅游为主题的英语作文比赛。内容包括：
1.叙述旅游经历；
2.表达感受。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
实现，成真：come true→come into reality
珍惜：cherish → treasure
参观：visit→pay a visit to
景点：tourist destination→ tourist attraction/place of interest
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I could see for miles in every direction.
拓展句：It is amazing that I could see for miles in every direction.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I took a bus from my home town to Badaling, which is the most
popular tourist destination.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】It was an unforgettable experience that I will cherish forever.（运用了that引导
的定语从句）
Passage 5
你校英文报将以“志愿同行, 点亮青春”为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投
稿，介绍自己曾参加过的一项志愿活动，内容包括：
1. 志愿活动简介；
2. 意义和启示。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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____________________________________________________________【答案】During my winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer tour guide at a history museum.
My main responsibility was to introduce the history of each exhibit, using clear and engaging
language to vividly convey the intended allusions. When telling the stories for each exhibit, I paid
special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various
countries.
This tour guide role not only enriched my knowledge of national history, but also helped
shape my passions and values. In addition to personal growth, volunteering shows that even small
efforts can have a significant impact on many people. The world can be transformed through our
choices, acts of kindness and engagement in volunteer activities.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生以“志愿同行, 点亮青春”为主题，写一篇短文投稿，
介绍自己曾参加过的一项志愿活动，参加英语征文比赛。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
假期：vacation→holiday
不同的：various→different
帮助：help→assist
影响：impact→influence
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：When telling the stories for each exhibit, I paid special attention to cultural differences to
foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries.
拓展句：When I told the stories for each exhibit, I paid special attention to cultural differences to
foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When telling the stories for each exhibit, I paid special attention to
cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries. (运用了状
语从句中的省略)
【高分句型2】This tour guide role not only enriched my knowledge of national history, but also
helped shape my passions and values. (运用了not only…but also连接谓语)
Passage 6
Teens正在就我国社会老龄化越来越严重的问题举办征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.关爱老人的原因；2.关爱老人的方式；3.倡议大家共同关爱老人。
注意：字数100左右。
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【答案】 As the aging population in our society grows, it’s crucial to show love and
respect to our elders. They have contributed significantly to our society and deserve our care.
There are various ways to show love and care for the elderly. Firstly, we can visit them
regularly, listen to their stories, and spend time with them. Secondly, we can provide practical
help, such as assisting with daily tasks, providing transportation, or offering medical support.
Additionally, we can also support policies and programs that benefit the elderly, such as pensions
and healthcare.
I urge everyone to join hands in showing love and care for our elderly. By doing so, we can
create a warmer and more harmonious society.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文投稿，陈述关爱老人的原因、关爱老人的
方式，并倡议大家共同关爱老人。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
增加：grow→increase
重要的：crucial→important/essential/vital
各种各样的：various→a variety of/all kinds of
提供：provide→offer
此外：additionally→in addition
2. 句式拓展
简单句改为倒装句
原句：By doing so, we can create a warmer and more harmonious society.
拓展句：Only by doing so can we create a warmer and more harmonious society.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the aging population in our society grows, it’s crucial to show loveand respect to our elders.(使用了As引导时间状语从句、it is+adj.+to do…句型)
【高分句型2】Additionally, we can also support policies and programs that benefit the elderly,
such as pensions and healthcare. (使用了that引导定语从句)
Passage 7
你校正举办主题为“A Cool Try!”的英语征文活动。请你以自身经历写一篇短文投稿，内容
包括：
1. 简述尝试的过程；
2. 收获或感想。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Cool Try!
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A Cool Try!
Last summer vacation, to gain different life experience, I was accompanied by my parents to
give Bungee Jumping a first try.
Before the jump, professional instructors provided a detailed safety briefing, explaining the
equipment, the jump procedures, and what to expect during the fall and rebound. Then I was fitted
with a harness, which was attached to the rubber cord. As the moment of truth arrived, I stood on
the edge of the jumping platform, heart pounding and legs trembling. Eyes closed, I took the leap,
with a mixed sensation of excitement, terror and weightlessness.
The whole experience was over in a matter of seconds, but the memory of the thrill and the
sense of achievement last a lifetime, giving me confidence to face new challenges and embrace
adventure.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以自身经历参与主题为“A Cool Try!”的英语征文活动，需涵盖尝试的过程和收获或感想。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
获得：gain→acquire
提供：provide→offer
装备：fit→equip
来临：arrive→come
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The whole experience was over in a matter of seconds, but the memory of the thrill and the
sense of achievement last a lifetime, giving me confidence to face new challenges and embrace
adventure.
拓展句：The whole experience was over in a matter of seconds, but the memory of the thrill and
the sense of achievement last a lifetime, which gave me confidence to face new challenges and
embrace adventure.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Before the jump, professional instructors provided a detailed safety briefing,
explaining the equipment, the jump procedures, and what to expect during the fall and rebound.
(运用了现在分词作状语、“特殊疑问词＋不定式”作宾语)
[高分句型 2] Eyes closed, I took the leap, with a mixed sensation of excitement, terror and
weightlessness. (运用了独立主格结构)
Passage 8
你校英文报正举办以“The Power of Smile”为题的征文比赛，请结合自身经历写一篇短文投
稿，内容包括：
1.自身经历；
2.你的感悟。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
The Power of Smile
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【答案】The Power of Smile
A smile has the power to transform not only our own mood, but also the atmosphere around
us. I remember a time when I was feeling down, but a simple smile from a friend brightened up
my day. It made me realize that even in the toughest moments, a smile can bring a glimmer of
hope.
Smiling is like a universal language that connects us with others. It shows kindness, empathy,
and positive energy. It has the ability to uplift spirits, foster connections, and create a more
pleasant and harmonious world.
So, let’s embrace the power of smile. Let it be a constant reminder to see the good in life and
share it with those around us. A smile is a small act that can have a big impact.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的稿件。要求考生结合自身经历写一篇短文，参加校英文
报正举办的以“The Power of Smile”为题的征文比赛。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
艰难：tough→ hard/difficult
培养：foster → develop
拥抱：embrace → hug
影响：impact→ effect/influence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Let it be a constant reminder to see the good in life and share it with those around us.
拓展句：Let it be a constant reminder to see the good in life and share it with those who are
around us.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】I remember a time when I was feeling down, but a simple smile from a friendbrightened up my day.（运用了when引导的定语从句）
【高分句型 2】. It made me realize that even in the toughest moments, a smile can bring a
glimmer of hope.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
Passage 9
你校英语报近期将推出一个主题为“高中生如何养成良好的心理状态”的专栏。你与美国
教育专家Dr. Smith进行了交流后写一篇英语文章投稿，主要内容如下：1. 交流的主要内容：
2. 交流后的收获。
注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】 Recently, I had the opportunity to interview Dr. Smith, a renowned
American education expert, on the topic of fostering a positive mindset among high school
students.
Dr. Smith emphasized the importance of maintaining a balance between academic pressure
and personal well-being. He highlighted the significance of self-care practices such as regular
exercise, adequate sleep, and mindfulness techniques. According to Dr. Smith, cultivating hobbies
and spending quality time with friends and family can also greatly contribute to a healthy mental
state.
I came to realize that achieving academic success in high school shouldn’t come at the
expense of mental health. Dr. Smith’s insights serve as a reminder for students to prioritize their
well-being while striving for excellence.
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求就“高中生如何养成良好的心理状态”的问题
与教育专家进行交流后，写篇交流心得投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：renowned→prestigious
培养：foster→cultivate
强调：emphasize→underline压力：pressure→stress
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Recently, I had the opportunity to interview Dr. Smith, a renowned American education
expert, on the topic of fostering a positive mindset among high school students.
拓展句：Recently, I had the opportunity to interview Dr. Smith, who is a renowned American
education expert, on the topic of fostering a positive mindset among high school students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】According to Dr. Smith, cultivating hobbies and spending quality time
with friends and family can also greatly contribute to a healthy mental state. （运用了动名词作
主语）
【高分句型2】I came to realize that achieving academic success in high school shouldn’t come
at the expense of mental health. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
Passage 10
假定你是李华，你校英文杂志社要举办以“与科学家跨时空对话(Talk to a Scientist across
Time and Space)”为主题的书信征文活动，请你写一封信给你最崇敬的一位科学家。内容包
括：
1. 表达对他(她)的崇敬之情；
2. 解释你崇敬他(她)的原因。
注意：1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Grandpa Yuan Longping，
I am writing to express my admiration for you. You devote yourself to the research to hybridrice with willingness to serve the country.
You live a very simple life, but you contributions are invaluable to the field of science and
agriculture. Without you and your team, there would still be millions of people having to face the
threat of hunger.
It was your hard-working spirit and perseverance that worth us studying. You are my role
model and has been inspiring me to study hard and insist on my dream of making contributions to
my country.
I am really proud that we have such a great scientist like you.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生代替李华以“与科学家跨时空对话(Talk to a Scientist
across Time and Space)”为主题写信给你最崇敬的一位科学家，参加书信征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
致力于：devote oneself to→commit oneself to
简单的：simple→plain
不懈努力：perseverance→determination
坚持：insist on→persist in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：You live a very simple life, but you contributions are invaluable to the field of science and
agriculture.
拓展句：Though you live a very simple life, you contributions are invaluable to the field of
science and agriculture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Without you and your team, there would still be millions of people having to face the threat of
hunger.（运用了虚拟语气）
【高分句型2】It was your hard-working spirit and perseverance that worth us studying.（运用
了强调句型）
Passage 11
上周你参加了学校组织的主题为“以劳动感恩父母”的活动。请你给校英文报写一篇稿件，
分享你的经历，内容包括：（1）劳动过程；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Show Gratitude to Parents through Labor
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【答案】
Show
Gratitude to Parents through Labor
In order to arouse our awareness of being grateful to our parents, our school held an activity
last weekend.
To show my thanks, I decided to do something for my parents. Getting up earlier than usual
last Saturday, I spent much time preparing their breakfast and then I began to help do cleaning in
our house, which made me tired and exhausted. When I saw my parents’ satisfied smiles, I felt that
my labor was worthwhile.
Through this activity, I’ve learnt that it is not easy for my parents to work and take care of us
at the same time. It is their selfless and unconditional love that I should appreciate.
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给校英文报写一篇稿件，分享你的通过劳动感恩父母的
经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold→host
感恩：thanks→appreciation/gratitude
照顾：take care of→look after
感激：appreciate→be grateful for2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to arouse our awareness of being grateful to our parents, our school held an
activity last weekend.
拓展句：Our school held an activity last weekend, which was aimed at arousing our awareness of
being grateful to our parents.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Getting up earlier than usual last Saturday, I spent much time preparing
their breakfast and then I began to help do cleaning in our house, which made me tired and
exhausted.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】When I saw my parents’ satisfied smiles, I felt that my labor was worthwhile.(运
用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型3】It is their selfless and unconditional love that I should appreciate.(运用了强调句)
Passage 12
你校英语报正在举行主题为“Success Comes from Hard Work”的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文
投稿，内容包括：
1. 阐述勤奋的意义；
2. 举一个勤奋促使你成功的事例；
3. 描述成功后的感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
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【答案】Success Comes from Hard Work
Hard work is the key to success. It is the commitment to working hard that allows us to
achieve greatness in the relentless pursuit of our goals.
One example of how hard work led to my success was when I prepared for the senior high
school entrance examination. Besides attending classes, I spent countless hours studying,
reviewing and practicing. I sought help when faced with challenges. As a result, I passed theexamination with flying colors.
The feeling of success that follows diligence is indescribable. I’ve gained a sense of
confidence and accomplishment. I know that no goal is out of reach as long as we are willing to
put in the necessary effort.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Success Comes from Hard Work”为主题给
校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实现：achieve→accomplish
无数：countless→numerous
帮助：help→assist
获得：gained→obtained
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：Besides attending classes, I spent countless hours studying, reviewing and practicing.
同义句：In addition to attending classes, I dedicated numerous hours to studying, reviewing, and
honing my skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I know that no goal is out of reach as long as we are willing to put in
the necessary effort.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和as long as引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】One example of how hard work led to my success was when I prepared for the
senior high school entrance examination. (运用了how引导的宾语从句和when引导的时间状
语从句)
Passage 13
你校正举办英语征文比赛。请以An Unforgettable Activity为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 活动简介；
2. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
An Unforgettable Activity
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【答案】An Unforgettable Activity
Among all the activities that I participated in, working as a volunteer at a nursing home is the
most unforgettable.
It was a sunny day. On arrival at the nursing home, my classmates and I visited the elderly in
groups and gave presents to them to show our respect and love for them. After that, we organized
various activities, some playing chess with the old and some performing traditional Chinese music
and dance. At last, we made dumplings for the elderly. They were pleased with what we did and
shared many wonderful stories with us.
Overall, the activity was of great significance. It not only taught me how to care for people in
need, but let me experience the pleasure of helping others.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正举办英语征文比赛。请考生以An Unforgettable
Activity为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参与：participate in→take part in
给：give→ offer
各种各样的：various→diverse
最后：at last→ finally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Overall, the activity was of great significance.
拓展句：Overall, the activity was of great significance, which was also greatly meaningful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Among all the activities that I participated in, working as a volunteer at
a nursing home is the most unforgettable.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】They were pleased with what we did and shared many wonderful stories with us.
（运用了what引导宾语从句）
Passage 14你校将以“我们的劳动实践课(Our labor practice course)”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你
写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包括：
1．学校开展劳动实践课程的目的；
2．你遇到的挑战和从中受到的启发。
要求：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Our Labor Practice Course
With the aim of educating students to feel freer to engage in broader exploration,
experimenting and questioning, our school has carried out a series of agricultural practices.
While working in the field, I, as a weeder, pulled out a row of young plants by mistake,
which caused my group members to scream. To make up for my mistake, I bought seeds and
replanted them in the field, using up my entire weekends.
This setback is a real disappointment for me but meanwhile an opportunity for learning. I felt
proud to have come up with solutions to the challenge. Things are never going to happen the way
we imagine. Thus, what we could do is to develop the ability to self-adjust, which is key to
responding properly in social situations.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就主题为“我们的劳动实践课(Our labor
practice course)”的英语征文比赛写一篇英语短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目标：aim→goal
参与：engage in→take part in
致使：cause→lead to
机会：opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句原句：To make up for my mistake, I bought seeds and replanted them in the field, using up my
entire weekends.
拓展句：To make up for my mistake, I bought seeds and replanted them in the field, which uses
up my entire weekends.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While working in the field, I, as a weeder, pulled out a row of young
plants by mistake, which caused my group members to scream.(运用了While引导的时间状语从
句的省略和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Thus, what we could do is to develop the ability to self-adjust, which is key to
responding properly in social situations.(运用了what引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性
定语从句)
Passage 15
你校将举办以心理健康为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1. 说明
心理健康的重要性；2. 谈谈如何保持心理健康。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Nowadays, mental health is as equally important as physical health, contributing to
shaping our character. Only with mental health can we think positively, study effectively and live
happily.
To enjoy good mental health, we must, first of all, stay positive. With a positive view, we can
look on the bright side of things and get rid of unnecessary worries. Secondly, we should strive to
surround ourselves with supportive people who encourage and inspire us. Last, make it a habit to
take regular exercise. After all, a sound mind in a sound body is what it takes to chase our ultimate
goals.
It’s time to start prioritizing mental health, so that everyone can enjoy the benefits of good
mental health.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的征稿。要求考生写一篇以心理健康为主题的英
语短文参加学校举办的英语征文比赛，谈谈心理健康的重要性和如何保持心理健康。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→ essential/significant
首先：first of all → firstly
最后：last→ finally/last but not least /lastly
最终的：ultimate→ final
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Nowadays, mental health is as equally important as physical health, contributing to
shaping our character.
拓展句：Nowadays, mental health is as equally important as physical health, which contributes to
shaping our character.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, we should strive to surround ourselves with supportive
people who encourage and inspire us.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】After all, a sound mind in a sound body is what it takes to chase our ultimate
goals.（运用了what引导的表语从句）
