2025 年高考英语一卷写作优秀范文
高考写作原题
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出
“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家
选择。请给Jenny 写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)你的选择；(2)说明理由。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our
English newspaper.
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1. 范文一：
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our
English newspaper. Both options sound interesting, but I
prefer "Fun at my school" for several reasons.
This topic connects closely with our daily life, so everyone
can share interesting stories easily—like funny moments in
English class or unexpected surprises at lunchtime. It will
showcase our vibrant campus activities, from exciting
sports matches and colorful art festivals to lively English
corners
and
cheerful
picnic
days.
More
importantly,
sharing happy moments helps foster better friendships
among classmates and makes our school life more
memorable. I believe it will become a popular part of our
newspaper.
I hope you'll consider my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
好单词
vibrant / va br nt/
ˈ
ɪ
ə
充满活力的
showcase /
ke s/
ˈʃəʊ
ɪ
展示，陈列
foster / f st (r)/
ˈ ɒ
ə
促进，培养
memorable / mem r bl/
ˈ
ə ə
难忘的，值得纪念的
cheerful / t
fl/
ˈ ʃɪə
愉快的，高兴的
好句子
"Both options sound interesting, but I prefer 'Fun at my
school' for several reasons."
分析：先肯定两个选项，再明确自己的选择，过渡自然，体现了考
虑的全面性。
"This topic connects closely with our daily life, so
everyone can share interesting stories easily— like funny
moments in English class or unexpected surprises at
lunchtime."
分析：在因果关系基础上，用破折号引出具体例子，让理由更具体
生动，增强说服力。
"It will showcase our vibrant campus activities, from
exciting sports matches and colorful art festivals to lively
English corners and cheerful picnic days."
分析：扩展了 “from...to...” 结构列举的活动，使用多个形容词修
饰，画面感更强，突出校园活动的多样性。
"I
believe
it
will
become
a
popular
part
of
our
newspaper."
分析：表达对栏目的积极预期，使建议更具吸引力，体现了对栏目
的信心。
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亲爱的珍妮：
我真的很喜欢给我们的英语报增设一个新栏目的想法。两个选项听
起来都很有趣，但出于几个原因，我更喜欢 “校园趣事” 这个栏目
这个主题与我们的日常生活紧密相关，所以每个人都能轻松分享有
趣的故事 —— 比如英语课上的欢乐瞬间或午餐时的意外惊喜。它
将展示我们充满活力的校园活动，从激动人心的体育比赛、色彩斑
斓的艺术节，到热闹的英语角和愉快的野餐日。更重要的是，分享
快乐的瞬间有助于增进同学们之间的友谊，让我们的校园生活更加
难忘。我相信它会成为报纸中受欢迎的一部分。
希望您能考虑我的建议。
您真诚的，
李华
2. 范文二：
Dear Jenny,
I'm excited about the new column plan for our English
newspaper.
Between
the
two
choices,
I'd
like
to
recommend "Fun at my school".
This theme is easy for everyone to relate to. We can
share stories like funny mistakes in group projects or
joyful moments at club meetings. It will enrich the
newspaper with lively content, showing our campus life
beyond textbooks—from morning exercise laughs to after-
class game times. What's more, it encourages us to
discover happiness around us and practice writing in a
relaxing way.
I hope you'll like this suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
好单词
recommend / rek
mend/
ˌ
əˈ
推荐，建议
enrich / n r t /
ɪ ˈ ɪ ʃ 使丰富，充实
encourage / n k r d /
ɪ ˈ ʌ ɪ ʒ 鼓励，激励
relaxing /r læks ŋ/
ɪˈ
ɪ
令人放松的
好句子
"I'm excited about the new column plan for our English
newspaper.
Between
the
two
choices,
I'd
like
to
recommend 'Fun at my school'."
分析：开篇用积极情绪表达对计划的支持，接着清晰表明选择，语
气自然友好，符合邮件沟通场景。
"We can share stories like funny mistakes in group
projects or joyful moments at club meetings."
分析：用 “like” 引出具体事例，让理由更贴近学生生活，具体可
感，增强了建议的可行性。
"It will enrich the newspaper with lively content, showing
our campus life beyond textbooks—from morning exercise
laughs to after-class game times."
分析：“enrich...with...” 结构准确表达栏目的作用，破折号后的
列举拓展了内容维度，体现校园生活的丰富性。
"What's more, it encourages us to discover happiness
around us and practice writing in a relaxing way."
分析：“What's more” 递进说明额外好处，从生活和学习两方面
阐述价值，让理由更全面。
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亲爱的珍妮：
我对我们英语报的新栏目计划感到很兴奋。在两个选项中，我想推
荐 “校园趣事” 这个栏目。
这个主题大家都很容易有共鸣。我们可以分享诸如小组作业中的搞
笑失误或社团活动中的欢乐瞬间之类的故事。它会用生动的内容丰
富报纸内容，展示我们课本之外的校园生活 —— 从晨练时的笑声
到课后的游戏时光。此外，它还能鼓励我们发现身边的快乐，并以
轻松的方式练习写作。
希望您会喜欢这个建议。
您真诚的，
李华
3. 范文三：
Dear Jenny,
I'm glad to hear about the new column for our English
newspaper. After thinking carefully, I choose "Fun at my
school" as my favorite option.
This column can cover various interesting parts of our
campus life. For example, we can write about funny
interactions with teachers or exciting moments in school
competitions. It will make the newspaper more fascinating
and interactive, as everyone has their own stories to
share. Besides, it helps us express ourselves in English
happily instead of feeling stressed.
I think this column will be well-received.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
好单词
various / ve ri s/
ˈ
ə ə
各种各样的，不同的
interactions / nt r æk nz/
ˌɪ
ə ˈ
ʃ
互动，交流
fascinating / fæs ne t ŋ/
ˈ
ɪ
ɪ ɪ
极有吸引力的，迷人的
interactive / nt r ækt v/
ˌɪ
ə ˈ
ɪ
互动的，互相作用的
express / k spres/
ɪ ˈ
表达，表露
stressed /strest/ 感到有压力的，紧张的
well-received / wel
ˌ
r si vd/
ɪˈ ː
受欢迎的，受好评的
好句子
"I'm glad to hear about the new column for our English
newspaper. After thinking carefully, I choose 'Fun at my
school' as my favorite option."
分析：开篇用 “ glad to hear” 表达积极态度，“ after
thinking carefully” 体现选择的慎重，让表述更具诚意。
"For example, we can write about funny interactions with
teachers or exciting moments in school competitions."
分析：用 “for example” 引出具体场景，贴近校园生活实际，
让理由更具说服力和代入感。
"It
will
make
the
newspaper
more
fascinating
and
interactive, as everyone has their own stories to share."
分析：“as” 引导原因状语从句，将报纸的变化与同学们的参与联
系起来，逻辑清晰，突出栏目的互动性优势。
"Besides, it helps us express ourselves in English happily
instead of feeling stressed."
分析：“besides” 补充说明额外益处，“instead of” 对比突出
栏目在英语学习中的轻松氛围，理由更全面。
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亲爱的珍妮：
听说我们英语报要增设新栏目，我很高兴。经过仔细考虑，我选择
“校园趣事” 作为我最喜欢的选项。
这个栏目可以涵盖我们校园生活中各种各样有趣的部分。比如，我
们可以写写和老师之间有趣的互动，或者学校比赛中的激动瞬间。
它会让报纸更具吸引力和互动性，因为每个人都有自己的故事可以
分享。此外，它能帮助我们愉快地用英语表达自己，而不是感到有
压力。
我觉得这个栏目会很受欢迎。
您真诚的，
李华
4. 范文四：
Dear Jenny,
I'm delighted with the plan to add a new column to our
English newspaper. I'd like to choose "Fun at my school"
as my pick.
This column lets us share vivid stories from campus life,
such as funny incidents during sports meets or joyful
surprises in class games. It makes the newspaper more
lively and relatable, as every student can find something
familiar. Moreover, it helps us cherish happy memories
and improve our English writing in a joyful way.
I believe this column will be a great addition.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
好单词
delighted /d la t d/
ɪˈ
ɪ ɪ
高兴的，欣喜的
vivid / v v d/
ˈ ɪ ɪ
生动的，清晰的
incidents / ns d nts/
ˈɪ
ɪ ə
事件，事情
relatable /r le t bl/
ɪˈ
ɪ ə
有共鸣的，能理解的
cherish / t er /
ˈ ʃ
ɪʃ 珍视，珍惜
joyful / d
fl/
ˈ ʒɔɪ
快乐的，令人高兴的
addition /
d n/
əˈ ɪʃ
增加物，添加物
好句子
"I'm delighted with the plan to add a new column to our
English newspaper. I'd like to choose 'Fun at my school'
as my pick."
分析：开篇用 “delighted with” 表达愉悦心情，“as my
pick” 替换常用表达，让选择表述更自然新颖。
"This column lets us share vivid stories from campus life,
such as funny incidents during sports meets or joyful
surprises in class games."
分析：“ such as” 引出具体的校园场景例子，“ sports
meets”“class games” 贴近学生生活，让内容更具画面感。
"It makes the newspaper more lively and relatable, as
every student can find something familiar."
分析：用 “as” 引导原因从句，将报纸的特点与学生的感受联系
起来，逻辑连贯，突出栏目的亲和力。
"Moreover, it helps us cherish happy memories and
improve our English writing in a joyful way."
分析：“ Moreover” 递进说明栏目价值，“ cherish
memories” 和 “improve writing” 从情感和学习两方面体现
意义，理由更充实。
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亲爱的珍妮：
我对给我们英语报增设新栏目的计划感到很高兴。我想选择 “校园
趣事” 作为我的选项。
这个栏目能让我们分享校园生活中生动的故事，比如运动会期间的
搞笑事件或课堂游戏中的欢乐惊喜。它让报纸更活泼且更有共鸣感，
因为每个学生都能找到熟悉的内容。此外，它帮助我们珍视美好的
回忆，并以愉快的方式提高英语写作能力。
我相信这个栏目会是一个很棒的补充。
您真诚的，
李华
范文五：
Dear Jenny,
I'm thrilled about the new column idea for our English
newspaper.
After
careful
consideration,
I
strongly
recommend "Fun at my school".
This topic allows us to share captivating stories from daily
campus life, like funny mix-ups during morning reading or
unexpected laughs in science labs. It will make the
newspaper more engaging, as every student can relate to
these joyful moments. Additionally, it encourages us to
appreciate small happiness and practice English writing in
a casual way.
I'm sure this column will be a big hit.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
好单词
thrilled /θr ld/
ɪ
非常兴奋的，极为激动的
recommend / rek
mend/
ˌ
əˈ
推荐，建议
captivating / kæpt ve t ŋ/
ˈ
ɪ
ɪ ɪ
迷人的，有吸引力的
mix-ups / m ks
ˈ
ɪ
ps/
ʌ
混乱，误会
engaging / n ɡe d ŋ/
ɪ ˈ
ɪ ʒɪ
有趣的，引人入胜的
appreciate /
pri ie t/
əˈ
ːʃ
ɪ
欣赏，感激
casual / kæ u l/
ˈ
ʒ ə 随意的，轻松的
hit /h t/
ɪ 受欢迎的事物
好句子
"I'm thrilled about the new column idea for our English
newspaper.
After
careful
consideration,
I
strongly
recommend 'Fun at my school'."
分析：用 “ thrilled” 强化积极情绪，“ after careful
consideration” 和 “strongly recommend” 体现态度的郑重，
开篇既热情又正式。
"This topic allows us to share captivating stories from
daily campus life, like funny mix-ups during morning
reading or unexpected laughs in science labs."
分析：“allows us to” 清晰说明栏目的作用，“like” 引出新颖
具体的校园场景，“mix-ups”“unexpected laughs” 让内容鲜
活有趣。
"It will make the newspaper more engaging, as every
student can relate to these joyful moments."
分析：“as” 引导的从句将报纸的吸引力与学生的共鸣感关联，逻
辑紧密，突出栏目贴近学生的特点。
"Additionally,
it
encourages
us
to
appreciate
small
happiness and practice English writing in a casual way."
分析：“Additionally” 补充新的优势，从情感体验和学习实践两
方面阐述价值，“casual way” 强调轻松氛围，符合学生需求。
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亲爱的珍妮：
我对我们英语报的新栏目想法感到非常兴奋。经过仔细考虑，我强
烈推荐 “校园趣事” 这个栏目。
这个主题能让我们分享日常校园生活中迷人的故事，比如早读时的
搞笑误会或科学实验室里意想不到的笑声。它会让报纸更具吸引力，
因为每个学生都能对这些欢乐瞬间产生共鸣。此外，它鼓励我们欣
赏微小的幸福，并以轻松的方式练习英语写作。
我相信这个栏目一定会大受欢迎。
您真诚的，
李华
