2025 年北京市高考英语写作范文
书面表达题目：
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡
议征集活动。你的外国好友 Jim 打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议
内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 提出的建议；
2. 建议的理由。
提示词：倡议 proposal
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
(1) 范文一：
Dear Jim,
I’m glad you’re joining the UN proposal activity! Here’s
my suggestion: focus on reducing plastic waste.
First, plastic pollution is a global crisis. It harms marine
life and takes hundreds of years to decompose,
threatening our environment. As teenagers, we can
propose practical solutions, like urging schools to replace
plastic products with reusable ones or organizing
community clean-ups. Second, your proposal can highlight
youth power. Teenagers’ voices are influential—using social
media to spread awareness or creating educational videos
can inspire more people to act.
This topic is both meaningful and actionable. I believe
your proposal will make a difference!
Yours,
Li Hua1. 好单词
proposal 倡议
global crisis 全球危机
reusable 可重复使用的
influential 有影响力的
actionable 可行动的
2. 好句子
I’m glad you’re joining the UN proposal activity! Here’s
my suggestion: focus on reducing plastic waste.
（开篇直接切入主题，"focus on" 明确建议方向，简洁有力）
It harms marine life and takes hundreds of years to
decompose, threatening our environment.
（用 "and" 连接两个后果，"threatening" 现在分词表结果，逻辑
连贯）
Teenagers’ voices are influential—using social media to
spread awareness or creating educational videos can
inspire more people to act.
（破折号后补充具体行动，体现 "建议理由" 的细节支撑，符合题目
要求）
3. 全文翻译
亲爱的 Jim：
很高兴你要参加联合国的倡议征集活动！我的建议是：关注减少塑料垃圾。
首先，塑料污染是全球性危机。它危害海洋生物，需要数百年才
能分解，威胁我们的环境。作为青少年，我们可以提出切实可行的
解决方案，比如呼吁学校用可重复使用的用品替代塑料制品，或组
织社区清洁活动。其次，你的倡议可以突出青年力量。青少年的声
音具有影响力 —— 通过社交媒体传播意识或制作教育视频，能激
励更多人行动起来。
这个话题既有意义又具备可操作性。相信你的倡议会带来改变！
你的，
李华
(2) 范文二：
Dear Jim,
I’ m excited about your plan for the UN proposal!
Here’ s my suggestion: promote green travel among
teenagers.
First, green travel like biking or taking public transport
can reduce carbon emissions, which helps fight global
warming. Air pollution is a major issue worldwide, and
small actions from youth can lead to big changes—
imagine thousands of students choosing buses over cars!
Second, your proposal can emphasize community impact.Organizing "bike-to-school days" or creating maps of local
transit routes can make green travel easier and encourage
others to join. Teenagers are great at spreading ideas
through social media, too!
This topic connects personal action to global goals. I’m
sure your proposal will stand out!
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 好单词和短语
promote 推广
carbon emissions 碳排放
transit routes 交通路线
community impact 社区影响
stand out 突出
2. 好句子
Here’ s my suggestion: promote green travel among
teenagers.
（直接点明建议，"promote" 比 "focus on" 更具行动感）
Air pollution is a major issue worldwide, and small
actions from youth can lead to big changes—imagine
thousands of students choosing buses over cars!
（用 "big changes" 与 "small actions" 对比，破折号后用场景想象增强感染力）
Organizing "bike-to-school days" or creating maps of
local transit routes can make green travel easier and
encourage others to join.
（通过具体活动举例，让建议更具操作性，符合 "建议理由" 要
求）
3. 全文翻译
亲爱的 Jim：
我为你参与联合国倡议活动的计划感到兴奋！我的建议是：在青
少年中推广绿色出行。
首先，骑行或乘坐公共交通等绿色出行方式可以减少碳排放，帮
助应对全球变暖。空气污染是全球性重大问题，青少年的微小行动
能带来大改变 —— 想象成千上万的学生选择公交而非私家车！其
次，你的倡议可以强调社区影响力。组织 "骑车上学日" 或制作本地
交通路线图能让绿色出行更便捷，并鼓励更多人参与。青少年也很
擅长通过社交媒体传播理念！
这个话题将个人行动与全球目标相结合。相信你的倡议一定会脱
颖而出！
你的，
李华
(3) 范文三：Dear Jim,
I’ m thrilled you’ re preparing a proposal for the UN!
Here’s an idea: advocate for school food waste reduction.
First, food waste is a serious global problem—about a
third of food is wasted worldwide, while many lack
enough to eat. As students, we can suggest practical
steps like smaller portion sizes in school cafeterias or
"food sharing" programs for uneaten snacks. Second, your
proposal can highlight youth leadership. Organizing poster
campaigns or lunchtime talks to raise awareness about
food waste can inspire classmates and even schools
worldwide to act. Teenagers’ voices are powerful in driving
sustainable changes!
This topic is relevant, actionable, and full of
compassion. I’m sure your proposal will make an impact!
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 好单词
advocate for 倡导
portion sizes 份量
sustainable changes 可持续改变
compassion 同理心 relevant 相关的
2. 好句子
Here’ s an idea: advocate for school food waste
reduction.
（用 "advocate for" 替代 "promote"，避免重复且更贴合 "倡
议" 主题）
food waste is a serious global problem—about a third
of food is wasted worldwide, while many lack enough
to eat.
（通过数据对比（三分之一浪费 vs 粮食短缺）增强说服力，破折
号补充具体事实）
Organizing poster campaigns or lunchtime talks to raise
awareness about food waste can inspire classmates and
even schools worldwide to act.
（用 "poster campaigns" 和 "lunchtime talks" 等具体活动举
例，体现建议的可操作性）
3. 全文翻译
亲爱的 Jim：
很高兴你在为联合国倡议活动准备提案！我的建议是：倡导校园
减少食物浪费。
首先，食物浪费是严峻的全球性问题 —— 全球约三分之一的食
物被浪费，而许多人却食不果腹。作为学生，我们可以提出切实建议，比如学校食堂减小餐量或设立未食用零食的 "食物分享" 计划。
其次，你的提案可以突出青年领导力。组织海报宣传活动或午餐时
间演讲，提高对食物浪费的认识，能激励同学们甚至全球学校采取
行动。青少年的声音在推动可持续变革中具有强大力量！
这个话题兼具现实意义、可操作性和人文关怀。相信你的提案一
定会产生影响！
你的，
李华
(4) 范文四：
Dear Jim,
I’ m excited about your UN proposal! Here’ s a
meaningful idea: advocate for teenage mental health
awareness.
First, mental health is crucial for our growth. Academic
pressure and social challenges often cause stress, but
many teens hesitate to seek help. Your proposal could
suggest creating school mental health corners with books
and relaxation tools, or organizing workshops to teach
stress management skills. Second, highlight the power of
peer support. Teens trust each other more, so starting
online forums where we share stories or advice canreduce stigma and build a caring community. Small steps
like these help everyone feel supported.
This topic connects with global youth well-being and
shows our generation’s empathy. I’m sure your proposal
will resonate!
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 好单词
advocate for 倡导
crucial 至关重要的
stress management 压力管理
peer support 同伴支持
resonate 引起共鸣
2. 好句子
Academic pressure and social challenges often cause
stress, but many teens hesitate to seek help.
（用 "but" 对比现象，引出建议的必要性，逻辑清晰）
creating school mental health corners with books and
relaxation tools, or organizing workshops to teach
stress management skills
（通过 "with" 和 "or" 列举具体措施，让建议更具操作性）
Teens trust each other more, so starting online forumswhere we share stories or advice can reduce stigma
and build a caring community.
（用 "so" 连接因果关系，"where" 引导定语从句细化行动，层次
分明）
3. 全文翻译
亲爱的 Jim：
我为你参与联合国倡议活动的计划感到兴奋！这里有个很有意义
的建议：倡导青少年心理健康意识。
首先，心理健康对我们的成长至关重要。学业压力和社交挑战常
引发焦虑，但许多青少年羞于寻求帮助。你的提案可以建议在学校
设立心理健康角，配备书籍和放松工具，或组织工作坊传授压力管
理技巧。其次，强调同伴支持的力量。青少年更愿意信任彼此，因
此创建线上论坛分享故事或建议，能减少偏见并构建关爱的社区。
这些小举措能让每个人都感受到支持。
这个话题关联全球青少年福祉，展现我们这代人的同理心。相信
你的提案一定会引起共鸣！
你的，
李华
(5) 范文五：
Dear Jim,
I’m glad you’re working on the UN proposal! Here’s agreat idea: encourage teenagers to protect wildlife.
First, wildlife is key to our planet’s balance, but many
species are endangered due to human activities like
deforestation and pollution. As young advocates, we can
propose creating school wildlife clubs to plant trees for
birds or organize clean-ups in local parks—small actions
that make a big difference. Second, your proposal can use
digital tools to spread awareness. Sharing animal
protection stories on social media or making short films
about local ecosystems can inspire global teens to care
for nature. Our generation’s passion can drive real change!
This topic is meaningful, actionable, and perfect for the
UN’s goals. I’m sure your proposal will stand out!
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 好单词
wildlife 野生动物
endangered 濒危的
advocates 倡导者
ecosystems 生态系统
passion 热情
2. 好句子 wildlife is key to our planet’ s balance, but many
species are endangered due to human activities like
deforestation and pollution.
（用 "but" 对比现状，"like" 举例具体问题，逻辑清晰且有画面
感）
creating school wildlife clubs to plant trees for birds or
organize clean-ups in local parks— small actions that
make a big difference.
（通过 "plant trees" 和 "clean-ups" 等具体活动，让抽象的 "保
护" 落地，增强操作性）
Our generation’s passion can drive real change!
（结尾用 "drive real change" 强化倡议的影响力，简洁有力且充
满鼓励）
3. 全文翻译
亲爱的 Jim：
很高兴你在准备联合国的倡议提案！这里有个很棒的建议：鼓励
青少年保护野生动物。
首先，野生动物是地球生态平衡的关键，但由于森林砍伐和污染
等人类活动，许多物种濒临灭绝。作为年轻的倡导者，我们可以提
议在学校成立野生动物俱乐部，为鸟类种树或组织本地公园清洁活
动 —— 这些小行动能带来大影响。其次，你的提案可以利用数字
工具传播意识。在社交媒体分享动物保护故事或制作关于本地生态系统的短片，能激励全球青少年关爱自然。我们这代人的热情可以
推动真正的改变！
这个话题富有意义、可操作性强，且完全符合联合国的目标。相
信你的提案一定会脱颖而出！
你的，
李华
(6) 范文六：
Dear Jim,
I’m excited about your UN proposal! Here’s a timely
idea: promote traditional culture preservation among
teenagers.
First, traditional culture is the root of our identities, but
many unique customs are fading due to globalization.
Your proposal could suggest school projects like
organizing "Culture Day" events where students showcase
folk dances, local crafts, or traditional recipes. This helps
us appreciate our heritage and learn from diverse cultures.
Second, leverage digital tools. Teens can create blogs
channels to share stories about endangered traditions, like
ancient dialects or handicrafts. Our generation’s creativity
can make cultural preservation cool and accessible to theworld!
This topic connects history with modern youth, perfect
for the UN’s vision. I’m sure your proposal will stand out!
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 好单词
preservation 保护
heritage 遗产
folk dances 民族舞蹈
endangered traditions 濒危传统
accessible 易接触的
2. 好句子
traditional culture is the root of our identities, but
many unique customs are fading due to globalization.
（用 "root" 比喻文化根源，"but" 对比现状，逻辑清晰且有深
度）
organizing "Culture Day" events where students
showcase folk dances, local crafts, or traditional recipes
（通过具体活动名称和举例，让抽象的 "保护" 建议落地，操作性
强）
3. 全文翻译
亲爱的 Jim：我为你参与联合国倡议活动的计划感到兴奋！这里有个与时俱进
的建议：在青少年中推广传统文化保护。
首先，传统文化是我们身份的根基，但许多独特习俗因全球化正
在消失。你的提案可以建议学校开展 "文化日" 活动，让学生展示民
族舞蹈、本地手工艺品或传统美食。这能帮助我们珍视自身遗产，
并从多元文化中学习。其次，利用数字工具。青少年可以创建博客，
分享濒危传统（如古老方言或手工艺）的故事。我们这代人的创造
力能让文化保护变得时尚，让世界触手可及！
这个话题将历史与当代青年相连，完全符合联合国的愿景。相信
你的提案一定会脱颖而出！
你的，
李华
