2025 年东北三校高考英语二模写作范文
书面表达题目：
东北三校：哈尔滨师大附中、东北师大附中、辽宁省实验中学。
假设你是交换生Jack，对中医很感兴趣，打算主修中医。你给学校
的张老师发邮件进行咨询，内容包括:
(1)学中医的优势和前景:
(2)他的看法。
注意:
(1)词数 80 左右。
(2) 为使行文连贯，可适当增加细节，
参考词汇:Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM)
Dear Mr. Zhang,
Best regards,
Jack
(1)
范文一：
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I'm Jack, an exchange student with a profound interest
in Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM). I'm considering
majoring in TCM and would like to consult you about two
aspects.
Firstly, what unique advantages do you think TCM has
compared to Western medicine, especially in its holistic
approach to health? Secondly, with the growing global
focus on natural health, could you share your view on the
career
prospects
for
TCM
majors?
Will
there
be
opportunities to integrate TCM theories with modern
medical research?
I value your professional opinion greatly and would be
grateful for any advice you can offer. Looking forward to
your reply.
Best regards,
Jack
1. 好单词
profound interest 浓厚的兴趣
holistic approach 整体疗法（指中医注重身心统一的治疗理念）
natural health 自然健康（体现中医崇尚自然疗法的特点）
career prospects 职业前景
integrate...with... 将... 与... 结合
professional opinion 专业意见
2. 好句子
I'm considering majoring in TCM and would like to
consult you about two aspects.
（直接点明邮件目的，结构清晰）
What
unique
advantages
do
you
think
TCM
has
compared to Western medicine, especially in its holistic
approach to health?
（通过具体例子深化问题，体现思考深度）
I value your professional opinion greatly and would be
grateful for any advice you can offer.
（礼貌表达对对方意见的重视，符合邮件礼仪）
3. 全文翻译
为亲爱的张老师：
我是交换生杰克，对中医（TCM）有着浓厚的兴趣。我正考虑
主修中医，想向您咨询两个方面的问题。
首先，您认为中医与西医相比有哪些独特优势，尤其是在其整体
健康疗法方面？其次，随着全球对自然健康的日益关注，您如何看
待中医专业学生的职业前景？是否会有机会将中医理论与现代医学
研究相结合？
我非常重视您的专业意见，若能得到您的建议将不胜感激。期待
您的回复。
此致敬礼，
杰克
(2)
范文二：
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I'm Jack, an exchange student deeply fascinated by
Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM). As I'm planning to
major in TCM, I'd like to seek your guidance on two key
points.
First, what do you think are the core strengths of TCM,
such as its holistic view of the body and focus on natural
herbs with fewer side effects? Second, considering the
rising global demand for alternative medicine, could you
analyze the career prospects for TCM graduates? Do you
believe there will be increasing opportunities to apply
TCM principles in modern clinical practices or medical
research?
Your experienced perspective would be invaluable to
my decision-making. Thank you for taking the time, and I
eagerly await your reply.
Best regards,
Jack
1. 好单词
deeply fascinated 深深着迷（比 "interested" 情感更强烈）
holistic view 整体观（中医核心理论之一）
natural herbs 天然草药（体现中医用药特色）
alternative medicine 替代医学（国际通用术语，涵盖中医等传统
医学）
clinical practices 临床实践（与学术研究相对的应用场景）
experienced perspective 经验之谈（尊重对方专业背景）
2. 好句子
As I'm planning to major in TCM, I'd like to seek your
guidance on two key points.
（用 "seek your guidance" 替代 "consult"，避免重复且更显谦
逊）
What do you think are the core strengths of TCM, such
as its holistic view of the body and focus on natural
herbs with fewer side effects?
（通过具体举例（天然草药 / 副作用）让问题更具象，展现对中医
的了解）
Your experienced perspective would be invaluable to
my decision-making.
（强调对方观点的价值，增强邮件礼貌性和目的性）
3. 全文翻译
亲爱的张老师：
我是交换生杰克，对中医（TCM）怀有浓厚兴趣。由于计划主
修中医，我希望就两个关键问题寻求您的指导。
首先，您认为中医的核心优势是什么，例如其对身体的整体观和
对副作用较小的天然草药的运用？其次，鉴于全球对替代医学的需
求日益增长，您能否分析中医专业毕业生的职业前景？您认为将中
医理论应用于现代临床实践或医学研究的机会是否会不断增加？
您的经验之谈对我的决策至关重要。感谢您百忙之中给予回复，
我热切期待您的意见。
此致敬礼，
杰克
(3)
范文三：
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I'm Jack, an exchange student with a strong passion
for Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM). As I'm considering
choosing TCM as my major, I'd like to ask for your advice
on two aspects that concern me.
First, what unique advantages does TCM hold in
promoting overall health, especially its focus on Yin-Yang
balance and preventive medicine? I'm curious about how
these concepts differentiate TCM from Western medical
systems.
Second,
with
the
growing
international
recognition of TCM under initiatives like "Healthy China,"
could you share your insights into the future career paths
for TCM graduates? Do you think there will be more
cross-cultural collaboration opportunities in integrating
TCM with modern healthcare technologies?
Your expertise would be extremely helpful for my
academic planning. Thank you for your time, and I look
forward to your valuable reply.
Best regards,
Jack
1. 好单词
strong passion 强烈热爱（情感表达更饱满）
Yin-Yang balance 阴阳平衡（中医核心哲学概念）
preventive medicine 预防医学（体现中医 "治未病" 理念）
international recognition 国际认可（呼应中医全球化趋势）
cross-cultural collaboration 跨文化合作（强调国际化发展方
向）
academic planning 学业规划（明确咨询的实际用途）
2. 好句子
As I'm considering choosing TCM as my major, I'd like
to ask for your advice on two aspects that concern me.
（用 "ask for your advice" 替代 "seek guidance"，丰富句式
变化）
What unique advantages does TCM hold in promoting
overall health, especially its focus on Yin-Yang balance
and preventive medicine?
（引入中医特有理论 "阴阳平衡" 和 "治未病"，展现专业认知深
度）
Do
you
think
there
will
be
more
cross-cultural
collaboration opportunities in integrating TCM with
modern healthcare technologies?
（结合 "现代医疗技术" 提问，体现对学科交叉发展的思考）
3. 全文翻译
亲爱的张老师：
我是交换生杰克，对中医（TCM）怀有强烈的热爱。由于正考
虑将中医作为主修专业，我想就两个关心的问题征求您的建议。
首先，中医在促进整体健康方面有哪些独特优势，尤其是其对阴
阳平衡和预防医学的重视？我很好奇这些理念如何使中医区别于西
方医学体系。其次，随着 "健康中国" 等倡议下中医获得越来越多的
国际认可，您能否分享对中医专业毕业生未来职业路径的见解？您
认为在将中医与现代医疗技术结合方面，是否会有更多跨文化合作
的机会？
您的专业见解对我的学业规划非常有帮助。感谢您抽出时间，期
待您的宝贵回复。
此致敬礼，
杰克
(4)
范文四：
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I'm Jack, an exchange student deeply enthusiastic
about Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM). As I weigh the
decision to major in TCM, I hope to gain your insights on
two key points.
First, could you elaborate on TCM's distinct advantages,
such as its holistic healing philosophy and personalized
treatment
through
syndrome
differentiation?
I'm
particularly interested in how these features contribute to
long-term wellness compared to conventional medicine.
Second, with TCM gaining global attention for its natural
therapies,
what
do
you
see
as
the
primary
career
opportunities for graduates? Are there growing demands
in areas like international clinics, research institutions, or
integrative medicine centers?
Your guidance would be pivotal as I plan my academic
path. Thank you for your time, and I eagerly await your
thoughts.
Best regards,
Jack
1. 好单词
deeply enthusiastic 满怀热忱（强化兴趣的强烈程度）
syndrome differentiation 辨证施治（中医诊断核心方法）
long-term wellness 长期健康（区别于短期病症治疗）
natural therapies 自然疗法（中医非药物治疗特色）
integrative medicine centers 中西医结合中心（体现学科融合趋
势）
pivotal 关键的（强调建议的重要性）
2. 好句子
As I weigh the decision to major in TCM, I hope to
gain your insights on two key points.
（用 "weigh the decision" 替代 "consider"，体现慎重态度，句
式更生动）
Could you elaborate on TCM's distinct advantages, such
as its holistic healing philosophy and personalized
treatment through syndrome differentiation?
（引入 "辨证施治" 这一专业术语，展现对中医理论的具体认知）
Are there growing demands in areas like international
clinics, research institutions, or integrative medicine
centers?
（通过具体职业场景提问，使问题更具针对性和现实意义）
3. 全文翻译
亲爱的张老师：
我是交换生杰克，对中医（TCM）满怀热忱。在考虑主修中医
之际，希望能听取您对两个关键问题的见解。
首先，您能否详细说明中医的独特优势，例如其整体疗愈哲学和
通过辨证施治实现的个性化治疗？我尤其想了解这些特点如何相较
于传统医学促进长期健康。其次，随着中医因其自然疗法获得全球
关注，您认为该专业毕业生的主要职业机会有哪些？在国际诊所、
研究机构或中西医结合中心等领域是否有日益增长的需求？
您的指导对我规划学业道路至关重要。感谢您抽出时间，期待您
的回复。
此致敬礼，
杰克
(5)
范文五：
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I'm Jack, an exchange student with a strong interest in
Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM). As I plan to major in
TCM, I'd like to ask for your advice on two key points.
First, what do you think are the main advantages of
TCM, such as its holistic approach to the body and use of
natural herbs for long-term health? I wonder how these
features make TCM different from Western medicine.
Second, with TCM becoming more popular globally, could
you share your view on the career prospects? Will there
be good opportunities in areas like international clinics or
research on integrating TCM with modern medicine?
Your insights would be very helpful for my decision.
Thank you for your time, and I look forward to your
reply.
Best regards,
Jack
1. 好单词
holistic approach 整体疗法（体现中医身心统一的健康理念）
natural herbs 天然草药（突出中医药物的自然属性）
long-term health 长期健康（强调中医注重根源调理的特点）
career prospects 职业前景（明确咨询的现实意义）
integrating...with... 将... 与... 结合（体现学科融合趋势）
insights 见解（礼貌表达对专业意见的期待）
2. 好句子
As I plan to major in TCM, I'd like to ask for your
advice on two key points.
（直接点明邮件目的，结构简洁明了）
What do you think are the main advantages of TCM,
such as its holistic approach to the body and use of
natural herbs for long-term health?
（通过具体例子展开问题，展现对中医特点的了解）
Will
there
be
good
opportunities
in
areas
like
international clinics or research on integrating TCM
with modern medicine?
（结合具体职业场景提问，增强问题的针对性）
3. 全文翻译
亲爱的张老师：
我是交换生杰克，对中医（TCM）怀有浓厚兴趣。由于计划主
修中医，我想就两个关键问题征求您的建议。
首先，您认为中医的主要优势是什么，例如其对身体的整体调理
方法和用于长期健康的天然草药？我想知道这些特点如何使中医区
别于西医。其次，随着中医在全球日益流行，您能否分享对其职业
前景的看法？在国际诊所或中西医结合研究等领域会有良好的机会
吗？
您的见解对我的决定非常有帮助。感谢您抽出时间，期待您的回
复。
此致敬礼，
杰克
