A P P L I E D W R I T I N G T E M P L A T E S
高一英语
应用文写作
万能模板与升格训练
——九大文体 · 三级进阶 · 问诊急救室
适用对象：高一学生 / 艺考生 / 应用文复习学生
覆盖文体：邀请信 · 申请信 · 建议信 · 感谢信 · 道歉信 · 通知 · 演讲稿 · 倡议信 · 活动报道
体特设计：基础→升级→满分 · 格式急诊室 · 阅卷评分细则
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前 言
✍ 本节重点：
“
”
“
”
应用文写作不是背范文，是套结构。记住这个公式：格式正确
+
内容完整+
语言亮点= 高分。
应用文写作是高考英语中最容易拿分也最容易丢分的题型。很多同学觉得只要
背几篇范文就能拿高分，其实不然。背范文只能保证你不会拿低分，但要拿高分，
必须掌握“套结构”的能力。所谓套结构，就是知道每种文体的开头怎么写、中间
怎么展开、结尾怎么收，然后在每个位置填入合适的句子。
本讲义覆盖了邀请信、申请信、建议信、感谢信、道歉信、通知、演讲稿、倡
议信、活动报道九大高频文体。每种文体都提供“基础模板（保底分）→升级模板
（高分）→满分范文（满分）”三级进阶。同时设置了格式错误急诊室、真实学生
习作批改、阅卷组评分细则等板块。
记住这个公式：格式正确
+
内容完整
+
语言亮点
=
高分
。格式是场门磨，内容
是基础，语言是亮点。三者缺一不可。
第一章 邀请信
✍ 本节重点：
“
邀请信的核心是说清楚什么活动、什么时候、什么地点、为什么
”
→
→
→
邀请他。套用这个结构：开门见山
说明活动
发出邀请
期待回复。
一、基础模板（保底分）
这个模板适合基础较差的同学，能保证格式正确、内容完整，拿到基本分。
结构
句式
称呼
Dear [Name],
开头
I am writing to invite you to [activity].
正文①
The activity will be held at [place] on [date].
正文②
We will [do something] during the activity.
正文③
I hope you can come.
结构
句式
结尾
Looking forward to your reply.
落款
Yours, Li Hua
二、升级模板（高分）
这个模板在基础模板上增加了细节和语言亮点，能拿到较高的分。
结构
句式
称呼
Dear [Name],
开头
I am writing to invite you to participate in [activity], which will be held
at [place] on [date].
正文①
The activity is designed to [purpose]. During the activity, we will
[detail 1].
正文②
Besides, [detail 2], which I believe will be of great interest to you.
正文③
As you are an expert in [field], your presence will surely make the
activity more meaningful.
结尾
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Looking
forward to your early reply.
落款
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
★阅卷老师加分点：开头用which 引导非限制性定语从句，体现语法能力；正文用
Besides 递进，逻辑清晰；结尾用I would appreciate it if 句型，礼貌且高级。
三、满分范文
★ 满分范文：邀请外教参加中秋诗词会
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to extend a warm invitation to you to attend our Mid-Autumn Poetry Reading,
which is scheduled to be held in the school hall at 7:00 p.m. next Friday.
The event, aiming to promote traditional Chinese culture, will feature a variety of activities. Not
only will we recite classic poems about the moon, but we will also share mooncakes and
exchange stories behind this festival. As you have always been fascinated by Chinese culture,
your participation will undoubtedly add color to the event.
It would be a great honor if you could join us. Please let me know your decision at your earliest
convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、升格对比
普通表达
高级替换
闪光句型
I am writing to invite you to...
I am writing to extend a warm
invitation to you to...
It is my great honor to
extend a warm invitation to
you to...
We will have many activities.
A variety of activities will be
organized.
Not only will we..., but we
will also...
I hope you can come.
I would appreciate it if you
could come.
It would be a great honor if
you could join us.
Please reply soon.
Looking forward to your early
reply.
Please let me know your
decision at your earliest
convenience.
第二章 申请信
✍ 本节重点：
“
申请信的核心是说清楚申请什么、为什么申请、自己有什么优
”
→
→
→
势。套用这个结构：表明意图
阐述理由
展示优势
表达期待。
一、基础模板（保底分）
结构
句式
称呼
Dear Sir/Madam,
开头
I am writing to apply for [position/activity].
正文①
I am a student from [school].
正文②
I am good at [skill].
正文③
I hope you can give me a chance.
结尾
Looking forward to your reply.
落款
Yours, Li Hua
二、升级模板（高分）
结构
句式
称呼
Dear Sir/Madam,
开头
I am writing to express my interest in applying for [position], which
was advertised on [source].
正文①
I believe I am qualified for this position for the following reasons.
正文②
First, I have a good command of [skill], which enables me to [ability].
正文③
Second, I am outgoing and good at communicating with others, which
is essential for [position].
结尾
I would be grateful if you could consider my application. Looking
forward to your favorable reply.
落款
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
★阅卷老师加分点：用which 引导非限制性定语从句补充说明，体现语法能力；用First/
Second 条理清晰，逻辑严密。
三、满分范文
★ 满分范文：申请志愿者
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my strong desire to apply for the position of volunteer for the upcoming
international cultural exchange festival, which is to be held in our city next month.
I believe I am well-qualified for this position. To begin with, having learned English for over
ten years, I have a good command of both spoken and written English, which enables me to
communicate with foreign visitors fluently. Furthermore, being outgoing and patient, I am good
at interacting with people from different cultural backgrounds. Last but not least, I have previous
experience as a volunteer in several school events, which has equipped me with necessary
skills.
I would be extremely grateful if you could take my application into consideration. Looking
forward to your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、升格对比
普通表达
高级替换
闪光句型
I am writing to apply for...
I am writing to express my
interest in applying for...
I am writing to express my
strong desire to apply for...
I am good at English.
I have a good command of
English.
Having learned English for
over ten years, I have a good
command of...
I am outgoing.
I am outgoing and good at
communicating.
Being outgoing and patient,
I am good at interacting
with...
Please give me a chance.
I hope you can consider my
application.
I would be extremely
grateful if you could take
my application into
consideration.
第三章 建议信
✍ 本节重点：
“
”
建议信的核心是针对问题提出具体建议。套用这个结构：表示同
→
→
→
情
分析问题
提出建议
表达祝愿。
一、基础模板（保底分）
结构
句式
称呼
Dear [Name],
开头
I am sorry to hear that you have some problems.
正文①
I would like to give you some advice.
正文②
First, you should [advice 1].
正文③
Second, you can [advice 2].
结尾
I hope my advice is helpful.
落款
Yours, Li Hua
二、升级模板（高分）
结构
句式
称呼
Dear [Name],
开头
I am sorry to learn that you are having trouble with [problem]. I would
like to offer you some practical suggestions.
正文①
To begin with, it would be a good idea to [advice 1], which can [benefit
1].
正文②
In addition, you might as well [advice 2], because [reason].
正文③
Last but not least, I strongly recommend that you should [advice 3].
结尾
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Wish you all the best.
落款
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
★阅卷老师加分点：用To begin with/In addition/Last but not least 三层递进，结构清晰；每
条建议后加which 从句补充好处，逻辑严密。
三、满分范文
★ 满分范文：给学习英语有困难的同学提建议
Dear Li Ming,
I am sorry to learn that you are having difficulty learning English. As your friend, I would like
to offer you some practical suggestions, which I hope will be of some help to you.
To begin with, it would be a good idea to develop a habit of reading English every morning,
which can not only enlarge your vocabulary but also improve your sense of language. In
addition, you might as well keep an English diary, because writing regularly can help you
consolidate what you have learned. Last but not least, I strongly recommend that you should
actively participate in English corners, where you can practice speaking with others.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Rome was not built in a day, so be patient with
yourself. Wish you great progress.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、升格对比
普通表达
高级替换
闪光句型
I want to give you some
advice.
I would like to offer you some
suggestions.
I would like to offer you
some practical suggestions,
which I hope will be of some
help.
You should read more.
It would be a good idea to
read more.
It would be a good idea to
develop a habit of reading,
which can not only... but
also...
You can write a diary.
You might as well write a
diary.
You might as well keep an
English diary, because
writing regularly can...
I hope this helps.
I hope you find these helpful.
I hope you will find these
suggestions helpful. Rome
was not built in a day.
第四章 感谢信
✍ 本节重点：
“
”
感谢信的核心是说清楚感谢什么、为什么感谢。套用这个结构：
→
→
→
表达感谢
述说原因
表达感受
再次感谢。
一、基础模板（保底分）
结构
句式
称呼
Dear [Name],
开头
I am writing to thank you for [what].
正文①
Thanks to your help, I [result].
正文②
I really appreciate your kindness.
正文③
I will never forget your help.
结尾
Thank you again.
落款
Yours, Li Hua
二、升级模板（高分）
结构
句式
称呼
Dear [Name],
开头
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for [what], which meant a
lot to me.
正文①
But for your generous help, I would not have [result].
正文②
What moved me most was that [detail], which I will always keep in
mind.
正文③
Your kindness has not only helped me through the difficulty but also
taught me the value of helping others.
结尾
Again, please accept my heartfelt thanks. I wish you all the best.
落款
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
★阅卷老师加分点：用But for 虚拟语气，体现语法高度；用What moved me most was that
强调句型，突出感受；结尾用heartfelt thanks，真诚且高级。
三、满分范文
★ 满分范文：感谢老师的帮助
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your generous help during my preparation for
the English speech contest, which meant more to me than words can say.
But for your patient guidance, I would not have won the first prize. What moved me most was
that you spent your weekends helping me polish my speech, even though you were extremely
busy with your own work. Your insightful suggestions not only improved my speech but also
boosted my confidence.
Your kindness has taught me the true meaning of dedication, which I will carry with me
throughout my life. Again, please accept my heartfelt thanks. I wish you good health and
happiness.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、升格对比
普通表达
高级替换
闪光句型
I am writing to thank you.
I am writing to express my
gratitude.
I am writing to express my
sincere gratitude for...,
which meant more to me
than words can say.
Thanks to your help, I
succeeded.
With your help, I succeeded.
But for your generous help,
I would not have succeeded.
I was moved.
What moved me was your
help.
What moved me most was
that you spent your
weekends helping me...
Thank you again.
Please accept my thanks
again.
Again, please accept my
heartfelt thanks. I wish you
all the best.
五、真实学生习作批改
下面是一篇学生写的感谢信，保留了原文病句，并附上了红笔批注。同学们可
以对照学习，避免犯同样的错误。
✍✍✍学生习作批改：感谢信
Dear teacher,
I am writing to thank you. 【红笔：感情空洞，建议加具体细节】
You helped me a lot. 【红笔：太笼统，应写清楚帮了什么】
I am very happy. 【红笔：表达太幼稚，建议改为I am deeply grateful】
Thank you. 【红笔：结尾太简单，应加祝愿语】
Yours,
Li Hua
【总评】本文格式基本正确，但内容太空洞，感情不真实，缺乏具体细节。建议加入具
“
”
体事例，如你每天放学后留下来给我辅导，再用高级句型升格。预估分：10 分制。
第五章 道歉信
✍ 本节重点：
“
”
道歉信的核心是说清楚道歉什么、为什么、怎么弥补。套用这个
→
→
→
结构：表达歉意
说明原因
提出补救
请求谅解。
一、基础模板（保底分）
结构
句式
称呼
Dear [Name],
开头
I am writing to apologize to you for [what].
正文①
The reason is that [reason].
正文②
I am really sorry for this.
正文③
I hope you can forgive me.
结尾
Sorry again.
落款
Yours, Li Hua
二、升级模板（高分）
结构
句式
称呼
Dear [Name],
开头
I am writing to express my sincere apology for [what], for which I feel
deeply guilty.
正文①
The reason for this is that [reason], which was completely unexpected.
正文②
To make up for the inconvenience caused, I would like to
[compensation].
正文③
I assure you that such things will not happen again in the future.
结尾
I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my
situation.
落款
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
★阅卷老师加分点：用for which 引导非限制性定语从句，体现语法高度；用To make up
for 补救措施，诚意十足；用I assure you 保证，表明态度。
三、满分范文
★ 满分范文：道歉放鸽子
Dear Tom,
I am writing to express my sincere apology for losing the book you lent me last week, for which
I feel deeply guilty.
The reason for this is that I left the book on the bus on my way home, which was completely
unexpected. I have contacted the bus company, but unfortunately, they could not find it. To
make up for the inconvenience caused, I have ordered a new copy of the same book online,
which will be delivered to you next Monday.
I assure you that I will be more careful with borrowed items in the future. I sincerely hope you
can accept my apology and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、升格对比
普通表达
高级替换
闪光句型
I am sorry.
I am writing to apologize.
I am writing to express my
sincere apology for..., for
which I feel deeply guilty.
Because I lost it.
The reason is that I lost it.
The reason for this is that I
left the book on the bus,
which was completely
unexpected.
I will buy a new one.
I would like to buy a new one.
To make up for the
inconvenience caused, I
have ordered a new copy of
the same book.
Please forgive me.
I hope you can forgive me.
I sincerely hope you can
accept my apology and
understand my situation.
第六章 通知
✍ 本节重点：
“
”
通知的核心是说清楚什么活动、什么时候、什么地点、谁参加。
→
→
→
套用这个结构：通知事项
活动细节
参加要求
联系方式。
一、基础模板（保底分）
结构
句式
标题
Notice
开头
There will be [activity] on [date].
正文①
The activity will be held at [place].
正文②
All [who] are welcome to attend.
正文③
Please come on time.
结尾
If you have questions, contact [person].
落款
Student Union
二、升级模板（高分）
结构
句式
标题
Notice
开头
In order to [purpose], [activity] is scheduled to be held at [place] on
[date].
正文①
During the activity, we will [detail 1], which is sure to be both
interesting and meaningful.
正文②
All those who are interested are warmly welcome to participate.
正文③
Please arrive 10 minutes ahead of time and bring [items] with you.
结尾
For further information, please contact [person] at [phone].
落款
Student Union
★阅卷老师加分点：用In order to 表目的，逻辑清晰；用which 从句补充说明，体现语法
能力；用warmly welcome 表示欢迎，语气热情。
三、满分范文
★ 满分范文：英语角通知
Notice
In order to provide a platform for students to practice spoken English, an English Corner is
scheduled to be held in the school garden at 4:00 p.m. this Friday afternoon.
During the activity, not only will we have free talks on various topics, but we will also invite
our foreign teacher Mr. Smith to share his learning experience, which is sure to be both inspiring
and rewarding. All those who are interested are warmly welcome to participate. Please arrive 10
minutes ahead of time and bring your notebooks with you.
For further information, please contact Li Hua at 123456789.
Student Union
四、升格对比
普通表达
高级替换
闪光句型
There will be an activity.
An activity will be held.
In order to..., an activity is
scheduled to be held at...
on...
We will talk.
We will have free talks.
Not only will we have free
talks, but we will also
invite...
Everyone can come.
All are welcome to attend.
All those who are interested
are warmly welcome to
participate.
Come on time.
Please arrive on time.
Please arrive 10 minutes
ahead of time and bring...
with you.
第七章 演讲稿
✍ 本节重点：
“
”
演讲稿的核心是有观点、有论据、有号召。套用这个结构：问候
→
→
→
开场
提出观点
列举论据
发出号召。
一、基础模板（保底分）
结构
句式
问候
Good morning, everyone.
开头
Today I want to talk about [topic].
正文①
I think [opinion].
正文②
First, [reason 1].
正文③
Second, [reason 2].
结尾
Thank you for listening.
二、升级模板（高分）
结构
句式
问候
Good morning, everyone. It is my great honor to stand here and share
my thoughts on [topic].
开头
When it comes to [topic], opinions vary from person to person. As far
as I am concerned, [opinion].
正文①
To begin with, [reason 1], which is of great importance.
正文②
Furthermore, [reason 2], as we all know.
正文③
Therefore, it is high time that we took action to [call to action].
结尾
That's all. Thank you for your attention.
★阅卷老师加分点：用It is my great honor 开场，礼貌且得体；用When it comes to 引出话
题，自然过渡；用it is high time that 虚拟语气号召，体现语法高度。
三、满分范文
★ 满分范文：珍爱时间
Good morning, everyone. It is my great honor to stand here and share my thoughts on the
importance of cherishing time.
When it comes to time, opinions vary from person to person. As far as I am concerned, time is
the most precious resource we have, yet it is often the most easily wasted. To begin with, time
is irreversible, which means once it is gone, it will never come back. Furthermore, as we all
know, the competition in modern society is increasingly fierce, and only those who make full
use of their time can stand out.
Therefore, it is high time that we took action to cherish every minute. Let us start from now
on, make reasonable plans, and never put off what can be done today until tomorrow.
That's all. Thank you for your attention.
四、升格对比
普通表达
高级替换
闪光句型
I want to talk about...
I would like to share my
thoughts on...
It is my great honor to stand
here and share my thoughts
on...
普通表达
高级替换
闪光句型
I think time is important.
As far as I am concerned,
time is important.
As far as I am concerned,
time is the most precious
resource we have.
Time is gone.
Time is irreversible.
Time is irreversible, which
means once it is gone, it will
never come back.
We should cherish time.
It is time to cherish time.
It is high time that we took
action to cherish every
minute.
第八章 倡议信
✍ 本节重点：
“
”
倡议信的核心是针对问题提出倡议、号召行动。套用这个结构：
→
→
→
描述现象
分析危害
提出倡议
发出号召。
一、基础模板（保底分）
结构
句式
称呼
Dear friends,
开头
Nowadays, [problem] is a serious problem.
正文①
We should do something to solve it.
正文②
First, we should [action 1].
正文③
Second, we can [action 2].
结尾
Let us work together.
落款
Li Hua
二、升级模板（高分）
结构
句式
称呼
Dear friends,
结构
句式
开头
Nowadays, with the rapid development of society, [problem] has
become a matter of great concern, which deserves our immediate
attention.
正文①
If we turn a blind eye to this problem, [consequence], which will
eventually affect our own lives.
正文②
Therefore, I would like to make the following appeals. First and
foremost, it is imperative that we should [action 1].
正文③
In addition, we are supposed to [action 2], which can make a difference.
结尾
Every effort counts. Let us join hands to build a better future.
落款
Li Hua
★阅卷老师加分点：用with the rapid development of 开头，背景介绍充分；用If we turn a
blind eye 假设后果，警示作用强；用it is imperative that 虚拟语气，体现语法高度。
三、满分范文
★ 满分范文：保护环境倡议信
Dear friends,
Nowadays, with the rapid development of society, environmental pollution has become a matter
of great concern, which deserves our immediate attention.
If we turn a blind eye to this problem, the consequences will be disastrous, which will eventually
affect our own lives and those of future generations. Therefore, I would like to make the
following appeals. First and foremost, it is imperative that we should reduce the use of plastic
bags and recycle whenever possible. In addition, we are supposed to plant more trees and use
public transportation instead of private cars, which can make a real difference.
Every effort counts. Let us join hands to build a greener and more beautiful world for ourselves
and for the generations to come.
Li Hua
四、升格对比
普通表达
高级替换
闪光句型
Nowadays, pollution is bad.
Nowadays, pollution is a
serious problem.
Nowadays, with the rapid
development of society,
pollution has become a
matter of great concern.
If we don't care, it's bad.
If we ignore it, the result is
bad.
If we turn a blind eye to this
problem, the consequences
will be disastrous.
We should use less plastic.
It is important to use less
plastic.
It is imperative that we
should reduce the use of
plastic bags.
Let's work together.
Let us work together to
protect the earth.
Every effort counts. Let us
join hands to build a
greener world.
第九章 活动报道
✍ 本节重点：
“
”
活动报道的核心是客观记录活动过程。套用这个结构：概述活动
→
→
→
详述过程
活动意义
结束语。
一、基础模板（保底分）
结构
句式
标题
[Activity] Held Successfully
开头
On [date], [activity] was held in [place].
正文①
Many students took part in it.
正文②
During the activity, they [did something].
正文③
Everyone was happy.
结尾
The activity was a success.
二、升级模板（高分）
结构
句式
标题
[Activity] Held Successfully
开头
On [date], a meaningful [activity] was successfully held in [place],
which attracted a large number of participants.
正文①
The activity began with [opening], during which [detail 1].
正文②
What followed was [main activity], where participants [detail 2],
showing great enthusiasm.
正文③
Not only did the activity enrich students' campus life, but it also raised
their awareness of [theme].
结尾
It is hoped that more such activities will be organized in the future.
★阅卷老师加分点：用which 引导非限制性定语从句补充说明，体现语法能力；用What
followed was 过渡，逻辑清晰；用Not only...but also 倒装句型，亮点突出。
三、满分范文
★ 满分范文：义卖活动报道
Charity Sale Held Successfully
On the afternoon of last Friday, a meaningful charity sale was successfully held on the school
playground, which attracted a large number of students and teachers.
The activity began with an inspiring speech delivered by our headmaster, during which he
emphasized the importance of helping those in need. What followed was the sale itself, where
participants sold various items including books, handicrafts and second-hand goods, showing
great enthusiasm and creativity. Not only did the activity enrich students' campus life, but it also
raised their awareness of social responsibility.
It is hoped that more such activities will be organized in the future, so that more people in need
can benefit from our efforts.
四、升格对比
普通表达
高级替换
闪光句型
The activity was held.
The activity was successfully
held.
A meaningful activity was
successfully held, which
attracted a large number of
participants.
It started with a speech.
The activity began with a
speech.
The activity began with an
inspiring speech delivered
by our headmaster.
Then they sold things.
What followed was the sale.
What followed was the sale
itself, where participants
sold various items.
It was good.
The activity was meaningful.
Not only did the activity
enrich students' life, but it
also raised their awareness
of...
第十章 应用文常见格式错误急诊室
✍ 本节重点：下面罗列10 种高频格式失误，每种都配有错误范例与修正。同学
们一定要避免这些错误，因为格式错误会直接扣分。
错误
✖
1：日期位置错
错误范例：
✖
Dear Tom, / How are you? / Oct. 15, 2023
修正范例：
✔
Oct. 15, 2023 / Dear Tom, / How are you?
ℹ 解释：
错误
✖
2：称呼后漏逗号
错误范例：
✖
Dear Mr. Smith
修正范例：
✔
Dear Mr. Smith,
ℹ 解释：
错误
✖
3：结尾套话重复
错误范例：
✖
Thank you. Thank you very much. Thank you again.
修正范例：
✔
Again, please accept my heartfelt thanks. I wish you all the best.
ℹ 解释：
错误
✖
4：落款格式错
错误范例：
✖
yours, Li Hua
修正范例：
✔
Yours sincerely, / Li Hua
ℹ 解释：
错误
✖
5：主题句缺失
错误范例：
✖
直接写I am writing to... 没有背景介绍
修正范例：
✔
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your help during...
ℹ 解释：
错误
✖
6：时态混乱
错误范例：
✖
I am writing to thanked you for your help.
修正范例：
✔
I am writing to thank you for your help.
ℹ 解释：
错误
✖
7：人称不一致
错误范例：
✖
Dear Tom, ... I hope he can come. ...
修正范例：
✔
Dear Tom, ... I hope you can come. ...
ℹ 解释：
错误
✖
8：单复数错误
错误范例：
✖
I have some advices for you.
修正范例：
✔
I have some advice for you.
ℹ 解释：
错误
✖
9：书信体裁不完整
错误范例：
✖
只有正文，没有称呼和落款
修正范例：
✔
Dear Tom, / [body] / Yours, / Li Hua
ℹ 解释：
错误
✖
10：词数不达标
错误范例：
✖
只写了50 词（要求80 词）
修正范例：
✔
补充细节，达到80-100 词
ℹ 解释：
第十一章 阅卷组内部评分细则泄露
✍ 本节重点：下面是模拟的某次联考应用文评分时的分档标准还原，供同学们参
考。记住，阅卷老师看的不仅是内容，更看格式和语言。
★ 阅卷组内部评分细则（模拟还原）
【第五档（20-24 分）——优秀档】
格式完全正确，内容完整且切题，语言流畅且有亮点。能熟练运用复合
句、非谓语动词、高级连词等。无明显语法错误。词数在80-100 词之间。
【第四档（16-19 分）——良好档】
格式正确，内容较完整，语言较流畅。能运用一些复合句和高级连词，但
有少量语法错误。词数在80 词左右。
【第三档（12-15 分）——一般档】
格式基本正确，内容基本完整，语言一般。句子结构较简单，有一些语法
错误，但不影响理解。词数在70-80 词之间。
【第二档（8-11 分）——较差档】
格式有明显错误，内容不够完整，语言错误较多。句子结构简单，词汇贫
乏。词数明显不足或超出。
【第一档（0-7 分）——差档】
格式严重错误，内容不切题，语言错误严重，影响理解。词数严重不足或
超出。
【特别注意】出现以下情况直接降档：①格式严重错误（如无称呼、无落
款）；②明显拄题（如写了与题目无关的内容）；③词数严重不足（低于50
词）。
记住这个公式：格式正确
+
内容完整
+
语言亮点
=
高分
。套用这个结构，你也
能写出高分作文。
——本讲义结束——
