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高考英语专题复习
专题12 应用文写作强化训练
目 录
一、应用文写作.........................................................................3
Passage 1................................................................................3
Passage 2...............................................................................4
Passage 3...............................................................................5
Passage 4...............................................................................6
Passage 5................................................................................7
Passage 6................................................................................8
Passage 7...............................................................................9
Passage 8..............................................................................10
二、参考范文及点评...............................................................11
Passage 1...............................................................................11
Passage 2.............................................................................12
Passage 3.............................................................................13
Passage 4..............................................................................14
Passage 5..............................................................................15
Passage 6..............................................................................17
Passage 7..............................................................................18
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Passage 8..............................................................................19
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一、应用文写作
Passage 1
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“我最喜爱的一本
书”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 该书简介；
2. 喜爱的原因。
注意：1.词数80 左右；
2. 短文题目已为你写好。
My Favourite Book
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Passage 2
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tristan 对你校正在举行的
“中华好书分享”活动很感兴趣，希望 你向他介绍此项活
动并为他推荐好书。请你写封信，内容包括：
1. 该活动的意义；
2. 同学们参与的情况；
3. 你推荐的书籍及理由。
注意：1.词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tristan,
Yours,
Li Hua
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Passage 3
假定你是李华，你校正在筹备70 周年校庆，准备招收一
批志愿者学生。请你写信应聘，内 容包括：
1. 应聘目的；
2. 自身优势：熟悉情况、沟通能力、团队合作、实践经
验等。
注意：
1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
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Passage 4
假定你是李华，你班英国交换生 Jack 下周要回国，你
周六因参加汉语诗词比赛，不能参加同 学们为他举行的欢
送派对，请根据以下要点给他写封电子邮件。
1. 回顾美好时光；
2. 说明不能参加派对的原因；
3. 表达美好祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Yours,
Li Hua
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Passage 5
假定你是李华，你原定下个月去英国参加笔友 Kevin 的
高中毕业典礼，现因故无法成行。请
给他发 一 封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 深表歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3. 衷心祝福。
注 意 ：
1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Kevin,
Yours,
Li Hua
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Passage 6
假设你是高三学生李华，你非常喜欢听英文歌和看英文
电影，但是你的家长并不支持，于是你 决定写信给你的英
语外教Linda,咨询解决的办法。内容包括：
1. 说明你的想法；
2. 家长反对的理由；
3. 征求老师的意见。
注意 ：
1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Linda,
Sincerely,
Li Hua
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Passage 7
假设你是学生会主席李华，你校拟组织本校的国际生一
日游，委托你通知相关事宜并随行，请 你写一则书面通知，
要点包括：
1. 集合时间和地点；
2. 目的地：文昌孔庙；孔庙附近的橙园。
注意：
1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：孔庙 the Confucius Temple
Notice
The Students'Union
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Passage 8
假定你是李华，新西兰某中学的师生交流团来访你校。
请你代表学生会用英文写一封电子邮 件，将本周末郊游的
安排传达给来访的新西兰师生。内容包括：
1. 集合时间及地点；
2. 活动安排：参观古寺，随后采摘草莓(strawberry);
3. 注意事项：穿舒适的运动鞋。
注意：
1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and students,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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二、参考范文及点评
Passage 1
【参考范文】
My Favourite Book
Of all the books I have read,I love A Dream of the Red
Mansions most.
It is my favourite not because it was written by Cao Xueqin,a
famous novelist in Qing Dynasty,but because of the masterpiece
itself.I deeply value the book and have read it over 10
times,firstly,for the moving love story between Jia Baoyu
and
Lin
Daiyu.Besides,if
given
enough
patience
and
devotion, the novel will also reveal the rise and decline of a
famous royal family to its readers.What I also enjoy about the
book
is
its
language
and
writing
style
of
Cao
Xueqin,which had a profound effect on the writers of his
times and later generations.
All in all,A Dream of the Red Mansions has won my
heart and I am convinced that it deserves yours too.
【范文点评】所给范文语言简明，准确地道，要点全面。
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其中有很多值得学习的表达，例如：Of all the books I have
read. 一 句中使用了of 结构和定语从句；if given enough
patience and devotion..一 句 中使用了“连词+分词”结构；
What I also enjoy about the book is its language and writing
style of Cao Xueqin,which had a profound effect on the writers
of his times and later generations 一 句中使用了what 引导的
主语从句和 which 引导的非限制性定语从句，都体现了作
者较高的英语语言水平。此外， Besides、All in all 等过渡
词的使用，使得文章结构紧凑，衔接自然。
Passage 2
【参考范文】
Dear Tristan,
I'd be glad to introduce this wonderful activity.It aims to
enlarge our reading horizon by sharing good books and helps
to appreciate our own culture as well.Many of my classmates
have taken an active part and recommended many fantastic
classical Chinese books to me.I'd like to share with you a book
named
Journey
to
the
West(Chinese
pinyin
as
Xiyouji),which is listed in the Four Great Chinese Classical
Novels.The adventures in the book are described in a
fascinating style,and it has been translated into many
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languages,English of course included.
Could you recommend some good books to me as well?I'd
be really thankful.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文点评】本题要求根据所给提示，给你的美国朋友
Tristan 写封信，向他介绍你校正在举行的 “中华好书分
享”活动，并为其推荐好书。所给范文要点齐全，语言得
体，其中有很多值得学习的 语言亮点。首先，文章使用了
一些高级词汇和短语，如：enlarge our reading horizon 、
appreciate our own culture 、take an active part 、share with
等。其次，文章使用了一些高级句型，如：定语从句which
is listed in the Four Great Chinese Classical Novels 和独立
主格结构English of course included。整篇 范文写作非常成
功，体现了作者较高的英语语言水平。
Passage 3
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hearing that our school will serve the 70th anniversary
celebration of our school,I'm more than excited to apply for the
position as a volunteer.
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As a Senior 3 student,I know our school better than the
younger schoolmates.Thus,there's no problem for me to
communicate with our guests on the history and development of
our school.Also,I have the ability to work individually or as a
part of the team.In addition,I have ever acted as a receptionist in
the Xinhua Bookstore,making myself more competitive and
qualified for this position.
I would appreciate it if I could be accepted.Looking forward
to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文点评】本题要求写申请信，应聘70 周年校庆的志
愿者。所给范文要点全面，语言表达准确 得体，其中有很
多值得学习的语言亮点。首先，范文使用了一些高级词汇
例如：apply for、 individually 、competitive 、qualified for
等。其次，Thus、Also、In addition 等过渡词的使用，使得
文章结 构紧凑，衔接自然。此外，范文使用了一些高级句
式，例如：Hearing that.. 和 making myself more
competitive... 两句中，都使用了非谓语动词结构，体现了
作者较高的英语语言水平。
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Passage 4
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I'm very sorry to tell you that I cannot attend your farewell
party to be held this Saturday evening.
As you know,a Chinese Poetry Competition is being held in
our school and I have successfully entered the final round
competition,which happens to be scheduled on this Saturday and
will not end until late into the evening.It's a great pity that I can't
make it to your party.But I've prepared a gift for you and
hopefully the gift will remind you of the days we have spent
happily together.
May the party be a great success and enjoy yourself that day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文点评】本题要求给你班交换生写信，说明你不能
参加欢送派对的原因。所给范文要点全面， 表达准确，语
言地道得体。在语言表达上，有一些值得学习的亮点结构
和句型，例如：your farewell party to be held.. 一句中，使用
了不定式作定语；which happens to be scheduled on..一句中，
使用 了非限制性定语从句；It's a great pity that. 一句中使用
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了主语从句，都体现了作者较高的英语语 言水平。
Passage 5
【参考范文】
Dear Kevin,
I am awfully sorry to tell you that I can't go to your
graduation ceremony.Hearing that you would graduate from
high school,I had intended to attend your graduation
ceremony.However,my little brother suddenly fellll and needed
to stay in hospital for a week.What's worse,my parents are so
busy that they don't,have time to look after him,so I have to take
care of him there.Therefore,I can't meet you in Britain.I hope
you won't be angry with me.As soon as I'm free,I will pay a visit
to you.
I hope you have a good time at the graduation ceremony and
wish you allthe best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文点评】本题要求写一封道歉信，为无法在下个月
去英国参加笔友 Kevin 的高中毕业典礼而道 歉。所给范文
要点全面，语言表达地道准确。 I am awfully sorry to tell
you that..中 awfully 的 使 用 诚恳自然。Hearing that..一
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句中非谓语结构的使用和Ihad intended to attend..一句中过去
完成 时的使用都非常贴切地道。 However 、What's worse
Therefore 等过渡词的使用，完美地衔接了上下 文，使得文
章过渡自然。
Passage 6
【参考范文】
Dear Linda,
I’m writing to seek your help with my English learning.
I like listening to English songs and watching English
movies,as I think using different media for study is a good
idea.But my parents are strongly opposed to this learning
method.They believe that it's not an efficient use of my time,and
that the unconventional language in some English movies and
songs might prevent me from using English properly.
Therefore,I'm confused about the way I should learn
English.Should I follow my parents'advice or stick to my own
ideas?I would really like to have your advice.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文点评】本题要求给外教写信咨询求助。所给范文
要点全面，语言使用得体贴切。开头就点 明了写作意图，
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简洁明了，文章主体部分使用了一些值得学习和借鉴的短
语和句型等。例如：
as I think using ifferent media for study is a good idea 一句
中，使用了as 引导的原因状语从句和非 谓语结构作主语；
They believe that it's not an efficient use of my time,and that the
unconventional language in some English movies and songs
might prevent me from using English properly 一 句中两个 宾
语从句的使用，都体现了作者较高的英语语言水平。
Passage 7
【参考范文】
Notice
To help you further understand Chinese culture and relax
you,our school will organize a one-day trip for you.
As scheduled,we will meet at 7:30 a.m.on May 10,2023 at
the school gate,and then take a bus to the Confucius Temple in
Wenchang,where you can have a deeper understanding of
Confucius and the traditional Chinese culture.In the
afternoon,we arrange an leisure activity for you to pick oranges
in a farm/an orange garden nearby.
We hope you will have a good time during the trip.
The Students'Union
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【范文点评】本题要求写一则书面通知，通知本校的国
际生一 日游的相关事宜。所给范文要点全面，语言得体，
符合书面通知的写作特点。此外，在语言表达方面，有一
些值得借鉴和学习的语言 亮点，例如：To help you further
understand Chinese culture and relax you.. 一句中，使用了不
定式作目的状语；As scheduled.. 一句中，使用了省略结构；
where you can have a deeper understanding of. 一句中，使用
了where 引导的非限制性定语从句，都体现了作者较高的
英语语言水平。
Passage 8
【参考范文】
Dear teachers and students,
On behalf of the Students’Union,I am writing to extend my
hearty welcome and inform you of the details about the
upcoming outing.
After assembling at the school gate at 8:00 a.m.this
Saturday,wellhead for a wood-structured temple,which won't fail
you if you are enthusiastic about ancient Chinese
architecture.Afterwards, we're to pick strawberries in a nearby
village,where you will enjoy fresh air,magnificent scenery and
juicy strawberries.You'd better wear a pair of comfortable
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sneakers as there may be a long distance to Cover.
Hopefully,you will enjoy a pleasant weekend with us.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文点评】本题要求写封邮件，把周末郊游的安排传
达给来访的新西兰师生。所给范文要点全 面，表达准确，
语言使用得体地道，其中有很多值得学习的亮点。首先，
范文使用了一些高级词汇，例如：extend one's hearty
welcome 、upcoming 、assembling 、head for 、magnificent
scenery 等。其次，范文 使用了一些高级句式，例如： …
which won't fail you if you are enthusiastic about ancient
Chinese architecture
和.where you will enjoy fresh
air,magnificent scenery and juicy strawberries 两句中都使了非
限制性定语从句，体现了作者较高的英语语言水平。
