专题 01 高考英语应用文写作评分标准与技巧精讲
一、精讲应用文写作评分标准
（一）评分原则
1.本题总分为15分,按5个档次给分。
2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定
或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于 80 或多于120的,从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点,应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的
连贯性。
5.拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考
虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接爱。
6.如果书写较差,以致影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次。
7.若用铅笔答题,不给分。
（二）分档划分标准
第五档(很好)(13~15分):
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
(1)覆盖所有内容要点,表达清楚、合理;
(2)应用了较多复杂、高级的语法结构和词汇;
(3)语法结构或词汇方面使用准确,即使有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级
词汇所致;表现了较强的语言运用能力;
(4) 自然流畅地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
整体而言，完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)(10~12分):
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
(1)基本覆盖所有内容要点,表达比较清楚、合理;
(2)应用的复杂高级的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;
(3)语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致;
(4)应用了语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
整体而言,达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当)(7~9分):基本完成了试题规定的任务。
(1) 虽漏掉一些要点内容,但覆盖所有主要内容,尚能表达出作文要求;
(2) 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，句子结构有一定的变化;
(3) 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解;
(4) 能应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差)(4~6分):
未适当完成试题规定的任务。
(1) 漏掉或未描述清楚一些内容要点,有些内容与主题无关;
(2) 应用的语法结构单调,词汇项目有限;
(3) 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;
(4) 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差)(1~3分):
未完成试题规定的任务。
(1) 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容，偏离主题;
(2)语法结构非常单调,词汇项目非常有限;
(3)较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解,词不达意;
(4)缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
信息未能传达给读者。0分:
未作答;所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判,所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
（三）解读应用文写作评分标准
在高考英语写作中，内容的完整性、语言的准确性、逻辑连贯性和高级表达是四个关键的
评分维度。下面我们通过一篇具体的英语作文来详细剖析这四个方面。
1、内容完整度
（1）如何识别题目所有要点
（2） 要点遗漏的常见原因及避免方法
2、语言准确性
（1） 高考常见语法错误类型分析
（2）易混淆词汇对比表
（3） 拼写错误预防技巧
3、逻辑连贯性（1） 衔接词分类与应用场景
（2） 段落发展技巧（总分总、因果、对比等）
（3）范文逻辑分析练习
4、高级表达
（1）基础句型到高级句型的转换方法
（2）同义替换词汇库建设
（3）修辞手法在高考作文中的适度运用
典例剖析
（一）写作流程优化
（1）审题技巧与提纲构建 （
（2）时间分配策略
（3）检查与修改的步骤
（二）常见问题与解决方案
（1）开头结尾的万能模板
（2）字数控制技巧
（3）写作焦虑应对方法
（三）题目及作文示例
（2025·浙江·二模）假如你是李华，你们学校的校报英语论坛（English Forum）正在组织
一次讨论活动。主题是“AI And Our Study”。请你写一篇英语文章投稿。
内容包括：1. AI用于学习的现状； 2. 你的看法或建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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（一）内容完整度分析
1. 题目要点识别方法（1）题干核心词："AI And Our Study"
（2）显性要点：现状（current applications）、看法 / 建议（opinions/suggestions）
（3）隐性要求：体现 "our study"（第一人称）
（4）字数严格控制在 120 词
2. 要点遗漏原因及对策
（1）常见遗漏：现状描述过于笼统（如仅写 "AI helps us"）
（2）典型错误：建议部分缺乏具体措施（如 "we should use AI properly"）
（3）解决策略：现状需举例说明（智能工具名称、具体功能）
（二）语言准确性分析
1. 高考常见语法错误
错误类
典型案例 修正建议
型
非谓语 固定搭配 help sb.
AI helps us learning → AI helps us learn
误用 do
比较级
more efficiently → efficiently 副词无需比较级
错误
连词缺 AI is useful, we should use it → AI is useful, so 逗号不能连接两个
失 we should use it 独立分句
2. 易混淆词汇对比
词汇 正确用法 错误用法
affect AI affects our study methods AI effects our study methods
principal principal functions of AI principle functions of AI
3. 拼写错误预防
（1）高频易错词：intelligent（注意 i-e 顺序）、beneficial（注意 e 位置）
（2）记忆技巧：拼写时默念发音（in-tel-li-gent）
（三）逻辑连贯性分析
1. 衔接词分类应用逻辑关
衔接词 应用场景
系
现状引
Currently, For instance 举例说明时
入
观点转
However, Despite this 引出潜在问题
折
建议强
It is essential that..., First and foremost 提出核心建议
调
2. 段落发展技巧
对比结构：
（1）现状：AI 提升效率（正面）
（2）问题：过度依赖削弱能力（反面）
（3）建议：平衡使用（解决方案）
（四）高级表达提升
1. 句型转换示例
基础句：AI can help students.
高级句：AI, an indispensable educational assistant, has the potential to transform learning
patterns.
2. 高级语法运用
倒装结构：Not only does AI provide instant feedback, but it also...
强调句：It is the combination of AI and human efforts that...
3. 替换词汇升级
普通表达：solve problems → address challenges
动词短语：improve → optimize, enhance
名词升级：help → assistance, support
答案示例
AI has brought unprecedented changes to our study. Adaptive learning systems analyze our
weaknesses and offer customized exercises, while intelligent tutors provide 24/7 explanations.
like Doubao can even help us practice oral English. However, over-reliance on AI may lead to
reduced critical thinking.It is essential that we use AI as a tool to supplement, not replace, independent learning. We should
prioritize solving problems on our own first, then seek AI's assistance.
Most importantly, maintaining human interaction in group discussions ensures
comprehensive development. After all, true learning lies in the synergy between human creativity
and technological innovation.
1、答案亮点解析
内容完整：现状（自适应系统、智能导师、语音助手）+ 建议（自主学习优先、保持人际
互动）
语言准确：虚拟语气（It is essential that...）、强调句（It is...that...）
逻辑连贯：However 转折现状与问题，Most importantly 突出核心建议
高级表达：unprecedented changes, synergy 等学术词汇，倒装结构（Not only...）
2、写作技巧总结：
1、提纲挈领：先列要点，确保覆盖所有任务要求。
2、精准表达：避免直译，选用地道词汇（如 "cultural heritage" 而非 "culture history"）。
3、逻辑衔接：使用连接词（firstly, furthermore）和代词（this, these）建立关联。
4、句式升级：尝试非谓语动词（如 "Known for its symbolism…"）和从句（"which
will…"）。
5、检查润色：通读修改语法错误，替换重复词汇，提升流畅度。
二、高考英语应用文写作技巧精讲技巧
三步审题法：关键词提取→文体判断→要点梳理
黄金结构模板：开头（目的/背景）→主体（分点论述）→结尾（总结/呼吁）
典例剖析
（2025·江苏南通·一模）国产动画电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》在国外热映，请你
以此写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括：1. 分析这一现象； 2. 简述哪
吒的故事给你的启示。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇： animated film “Ne Zha: The Reign of the Demon Child”
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（二）审题与谋篇步骤分析
1. 三步审题法
关键词提取：国产动画电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》、国外热映、现象分析、故事启示
文体判断：议论文（需包含现象分析 + 个人启示）
要点梳理：
现象分析：文化输出、动画技术提升、国际合作
故事启示：打破偏见、自我认同、家庭支持
2. 黄金结构模板
开头：引入电影热映现象（背景 + 目的）
主体：
现象分析（原因 1 + 原因 2）
故事启示（启示 1 + 启示 2）
结尾：总结意义 + 呼吁行动
（三）范文示例
The global success of "Ne Zha: The Reign of the Demon Child" reflects China's
growing cultural influence. Advanced animation techniques bring ancient myths to
life, while the film's universal themes—like overcoming prejudice and self-identity—
resonate worldwide. Ne Zha's journey teaches us that true power comes from self-
acceptance, not external labels.
His relationship with his parents also highlights the importance of unconditional
love in shaping one's destiny. As Chinese stories gain global recognition, we should
be proud of our cultural heritage and continue to share it with the world.
（四）范文结构解析
结构 内容 功能
The global success...growing cultural
开头 点明现象与核心意义
influence结构 内容 功能
主体
Advanced animation 分析现象原因（技术
1 techniques...universal themes + 主题）
主体 Ne Zha's journey teaches...parents 提炼启示（个人成长
2 highlights... + 家庭）
As Chinese stories...share it with the
结尾 总结呼吁，升华主题
world
（五）写作技巧提升
1. 现象分析技巧
因果分析："Advanced techniques + universal themes → global success"
数据支撑：可补充票房数据（如 "grossing over $500 million worldwide"）
2. 启示表达技巧
隐喻运用："true power comes from self-acceptance"（用 power 隐喻成长）
对比论证："not external labels"（通过否定加强观点）
3. 文化表达升级
传统元素："ancient myths" → "time-honored legends"
文化输出："share it with the world" → "promote cross-cultural dialogue"
（六）常见错误预警
错误
典型案例 修正建议
类型
要点
只写现象未提启示 用 "teach us that..." 明确启示部分
缺失
添加过渡句："Beyond its
逻辑
现象与启示无关联 popularity, the story carries profound
断裂
lessons"
文化 "parents' love" →
使用学术词汇替代口语表达
误译 "parental affection"（更错误
典型案例 修正建议
类型
正式）
（七）深度训练建议
思维导图训练：用英文绘制 "现象 ——原因 ——启示" 的逻辑树
句型升级：将简单句改为强调句（如："It is self-acceptance that defines our destiny"）
文化对比：对比哪吒与西方超级英雄电影的异同点
（如：《哪吒》强调集体关系 vs 《蜘蛛侠》个人英雄主义）
三、高考应用文写作模拟题精练
1．（2025·宁夏石嘴山·二模）2025年，国产AI大模型DeepSeek凭借其卓越的技术能力和
广泛的应用场景，走红全球。你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以 Large Language Models:
Gain or Loss? 为题写一篇发言稿参赛。内容包括：
(1) 分析优势与不足；
(2) 提出你的使用建议。
注意：
(1) 写作词数应为80个左右；
(2) 请按如下格式作答。
Large Language Models: Gain or Loss?
This year, the advent of large language models like DeepSeek has transformed work and
study.
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【答案】
Large Language Models: Gain or Loss? This year, the advent of large language models like
DeepSeek has transformed work and study.
DeepSeek indeed brings many benefits. It can generate quick and comprehensive answers todiverse questions, saving a great deal of time on research. Also, it helps language learners practice
writing and speaking. However, it comes with disadvantages. There are occasions when it presents
wrong information, and it may be used for misinformation spread.
My advice is to use it with caution. Verify the content it provides, and never blindly trust all
the information it offers. Only in this way can we maximize its advantages.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Large Language Models: Gain or Loss? 为
题写一篇发言稿参加你校将举办英语演讲比赛。内容包括：分析优势与不足以及提出你的
使用建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很多：many→plenty of
不同的：diverse→different
而且：also→moreover
然而：however→nevertheless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It can generate quick and comprehensive answers to diverse questions, saving a great deal
of time on research.
拓展句：It can generate quick and comprehensive answers to diverse questions, which saves a
great deal of time on research.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Verify the content it provides, and never blindly trust all the
information it offers. （运用了省略that的定语从句）
【高分句型2】 Only in this way can we maximize its advantages.（运用了部分倒装）
2．（2025·江苏南通·一模）国产动画电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》在国外热映，请你以此写一
篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括：1. 分析这一现象； 2. 简述哪吒的故事给你的启示。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇： animated film “Ne Zha: The Reign of the Demon Child”
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【答案】One possible version:
Recently, the Chinese animated film Ne Zha : The Reign of the Demon Child has enjoyed
immense popularity overseas, fascinating international viewers.
This success can be attributed to its engaging story of self-discovery and rebellion against
predetermined fate, combined with breathtaking visuals and deeply developed characters.
Ne Zha’s journey, from being labeled a demon to embracing his unique identity, offers a
profound lesson: one should never give in to societal pressures but instead try to shape one’s own
destiny. This message of self-belief and determination is something that we can all learn from,
especially as we face our own challenges in life.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇投稿，分析《哪吒》这部电影在海外爆火的
现象及受到的启示。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
吸引，使着迷：fascinate →attract
挑战，困难：challenge →difficulty
令人惊叹的：breathtaking →spectacular
面临：face →be faced with
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Recently, the Chinese animated film Ne Zha: The Reign of the Demon Child has enjoyed
immense popularity overseas, fascinating international viewers.
拓展句：Recently, the Chinese animated film Ne Zha: The Reign of the Demon Child has
enjoyed immense popularity overseas, which fascinated international viewers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This success can be attributed to its engaging story of self-discovery
and rebellion against predetermined fate, combined with breathtaking visuals and deeply
developed characters. (运用了非谓语动词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】This message of self-belief and determination is something that we can all learn
from, especially as we face our own challenges in life. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句以及as
引导时间状语从句)3、（2025·黑龙江哈尔滨·二模）假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校即将举行学生运动
会，你被选为学生代表，将在开幕式上发表演讲。请你以“Celebrating sportsmanship”为主
题，撰写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1.运动会的意义；
2.体育精神在运动会中的具体表现；
3.倡导同学们在比赛中践行体育精神。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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Thank you for listening.
【答案】 Good morning, everyone. The sports meeting is not just about competition.
It’s also a moment for us to celebrate sports, friendship and teamwork. It’s an opportunity for us to
showcase the spirit of sportsmanship.
There are a few qualities that we should strive to uphold on the playing field. The rules of
the competition require that we play in a fair manner, or else the enjoyment of the game will be
compromised. Furthermore, whether we win or lose, it is essential to show respect and avoid
insulting others.
In conclusion, I hope everyone will embrace the spirit of good sportsmanship as they enjoy
themselves at the event.
Thank you for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校即将举行学生运动会，你被选为学生代表，
将在开幕式上发表演讲。请你以“Celebrating sportsmanship”为主题，撰写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
庆祝：celebrate→observe要求：require→request
展示：show→showcase
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Furthermore, whether we win or lose, it is essential to show respect and avoid insulting
others.
拓展句：Furthermore, whether we win or lose, it is essential that we should show respect and
avoid insulting others.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There are a few qualities that we should strive to uphold on the playing
field. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In conclusion, I hope everyone will embrace the spirit of good sportsmanship as
they enjoy themselves at the event. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句和as引导的时间状语从
句)
4．（2025·吉林·三模）你代表学校参加青少年科技公益大赛，需以“A Small Invention, A
Big Change!”为题，写一篇提案介绍你设计的作品，内容包括：
1. 设计意图；
2. 功能特点；
3. 公益价值。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 按如下格式作答，题目已为你写好。
A Small Invention, A Big Change!
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【答案】One possible version:
A Small Invention, A Big Change!
I’m glad to introduce my invention, a Smart Recycling Bin, designed to guide users to sortwaste correctly and inspire eco-friendly habits.
Equipped with a camera and AI, it identifies trash types (plastic, paper, glass) and lights up
the matching bin. A voice reminder teaches recycling rules in fun ways. This invention solves two
issues: messy public bins and low recycling rates. By reducing landfill waste, it protects soil and
water. For schools and parks, it turns recycling into an educational game, raising eco-awareness.
Lightweight and solar-powered, it requires no extra energy. Small actions, like dropping a
bottle into the right bin, can lead to cleaner cities and healthier communities. Let’s make recycling
effortless for everyone!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学校参加青少年科技公益大赛，要求以
“A Small Invention, A Big Change!”为题，写一篇提案介绍设计的作品。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad →delighted
解决：solve →address
提高：raise →enhance
导致：lead to →contribute to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m glad to introduce my invention, a Smart Recycling Bin, designed to guide users to sort
waste correctly and inspire eco-friendly habits.
拓展句：I’m glad to introduce my invention, a Smart Recycling Bin, which is designed to guide
users to sort waste correctly and inspire eco-friendly habits.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Equipped with a camera and AI, it identifies trash types (plastic, paper,
glass) and lights up the matching bin.（运用了过去分词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】Lightweight and solar-powered, it requires no extra energy.（运用了形容词短语
作状语）
5．（2025·重庆·一模）第一节 (满分15分)
每年三月份最后一周的星期一，为全国中小学生“安全教育日”。假设你是学校安全宣传
小组的成员李华，请你以“提高安全意识，学会自我保护”为主题，写一封倡议书，号召
同学们关注日常生活中的安全问题。倡议书应包括以下内容：1.安全意识的重要性；2.具体
的安全防范措施；3.呼吁大家提高警惕，学会自我保护。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear fellow students,
As a member of the School Safety Promotion Team, I urge everyone to pay more attention to
safety in daily life.
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear fellow students,
As a member of the School Safety Promotion Team, I urge everyone to pay more attention
to safety in daily life. Safety is crucial. Being aware of potential risks and knowing how to
respond can significantly reduce accidents and ensure our well-being.
Here are some practical steps we can take: First, practice road safety by avoiding
distractions like phones while walking or cycling. Second, protect your online privacy by using
strong passwords and being cautious about sharing personal information on social media.
Additionally, familiarize yourself with emergency procedures, such as fire evacuation routes and
basic first aid.
In conclusion, safety is a shared responsibility. Let’s raise awareness and take action to
protect ourselves and others. Stay alert, be prepared, and work together for a safer future.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以学校安全宣传小组成员的身份撰写一封倡
议书，强调提高安全意识的重要性，提出具体的安全防范措施，并呼吁同学们学会自我保
护。
【详解】1.词汇积累
至关重要的：crucial→critical
确保：ensure→guarantee
另外：additionally→in addition提高：raise→boost
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, familiarize yourself with emergency procedures, such as fire evacuation
routes and basic first aid.
拓展句：Additionally, familiarize yourself with emergency procedures, which include fire
evacuation routes and basic first aid.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Here are some practical steps we can take. (运用了that/which引导的限
制性定语从句，省略了that/which)
[高分句型2] First, practice road safety by avoiding distractions like phones while walking or
cycling. (运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略形式)
6．（2025·辽宁大连·一模）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以How to Avoid Being
Replaced by AI为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.AI的优势;
2.避免被AI取代的策略。
注意：
1.词数80左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to Avoid Being Replaced by AI
As AI continues to advance, its applications are becoming increasingly widespread.
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【答案】How to Avoid Being Replaced by AI
As Al continues to advance, its applications are becoming increasingly widespread. Despite
the fact that AI has offered numerous advantages such as efficiency, accuracy, and the ability to
process vast amounts of data at incredible speeds, these benefits also pose a threat to certain jobs,
raising concerns about replacing humans.
To avoid being replaced by AI, one must focus on developing skills that AI cannot easilycopy, ranging from creativity to emotional intelligence. Additionally, continuous learning and
adaptation are also crucial, as staying updated with the latest technologies can make one
irreplaceable.
In conclusion, while AI presents challenges, it also offers opportunities for those willing to
adapt and evolve. By focusing on uniquely human skills and embracing AI as an assistant, we can
ensure that we remain independent in an AI-driven world.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友约翰写信邀请他周末看电影，表
示对他给予你的帮助的感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
此外：additionally→furthermore
关键的：crucial→essential
总之：in conclusion→all in all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：By focusing on uniquely human skills and embracing AI as an assistant, we can ensure that
we remain independent in an AI-driven world.
拓展句：When we focus on uniquely human skills and embrace AI as an assistant, we can ensure
that we remain independent in an AI-driven world.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Despite the fact that AI has offered numerous advantages such as
efficiency, accuracy, and the ability to process vast amounts of data at incredible speeds, these
benefits also pose a threat to certain jobs, raising concerns about replacing humans.（运用了that
引导同位语从句以及现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】To avoid being replaced by AI, one must focus on developing skills that AI
cannot easily copy, ranging from creativity to emotional intelligence.（运用了不定式作状语以
及that引导限制性定语从句）
7．（24-25江苏·模拟）假设你是天津晨光中学的李津，最近你在社交媒体小红书（Red
Note）上认识了一位美国的高中生James，他希望通过你了解中国的高中生使用社交媒体
的情况。请你在小红书上给他录制一段视频，并按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿，要点
如下：
1.高中生喜欢的社交媒体；2.介绍你使用社交媒体的情况（从生活、学习、文化传播等方面）；
3.希望以后多交流。
参考词汇：抖音 TikTok 微信WeChat B站 Bilibili
注意：
1.词数不少于100；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Hi James,
It’s great to connect with you here on Red Note!
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【答案】Hi James,
It’s great to connect with you here on Red Note! I’m more than happy to share some insights
about how Chinese high school students use social media.
TikTok is one of the most favored apps for its short videos which cover a wide range of topics
from daily life moments to creative arts. WeChat is another essential part of our digital lives where
we chat with friends and family and follow official accounts for news and learning resources.
In daily life, I often use social media to keep up with what’s happening around the world and stay
connected with friends. Moreover, I enjoy posting content related to traditional festivals,
calligraphy, and classic literature on TikTok.
Looking forward to hearing more about your side of the story.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国的高中生James写一个视频的文字稿，
介绍中国的高中生使用社交媒体的情况，要点包括：高中生喜欢的社交媒体，介绍你使用
社交媒体的情况和希望以后多交流。
【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：happy→delighted
见解：insight→point of view
必不可少的：essential→indispensable
另外：moreover→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Moreover, I enjoy posting content related to traditional festivals, calligraphy, and classic
literature on TikTok.
拓展句：Moreover, I enjoy posting content which is related to traditional festivals, calligraphy,
and classic literature on TikTok.
【点睛】[高分句型1] TikTok is one of the most favored apps for its short videos which cover a
wide range of topics from daily life moments to creative arts. (运用了which引导的限制性定语
从句)
[高分句型2] WeChat is another essential part of our digital lives where we chat with friends and
family and follow official accounts for news and learning resources. (运用了where引导的限制
性定语从句)
8．（2025·山东淄博·一模）中国春节申报非物质文化遗产(the Intangible Cultural Heritage)
获得成功。学校英文报要举办以“The Chinese Spring Festival in My Eyes”为主题的演讲比
赛，请你写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：
(1)一个难忘的场景；
(2)申遗成功的意义。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为100左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Hello everyone!Today, the theme of my speech is “The Chinese Spring Festival in My Eyes.”
The Spring Festival is the holiday I look forward to the most each year. Last year during the
Spring Festival, I gathered with my family around the table to enjoy a sumptuous reunion dinner.
At that moment, the room was filled with laughter and joy, and the strong festive atmosphere
made me feel warm and cherished.
The successful application for the Spring Festival to be recognized as an Intangible Cultural
Heritage is not only an acknowledgment of our traditional culture but also allows the world to
understand the customs of the Chinese Spring Festival. This achievement inspires us to protect
and pass down these precious cultural traditions, so that future generations can experience the
charm of the Spring Festival.
Thank you all!
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以“The Chinese Spring Festival in My
Eyes”为主题写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
集合：gather →get together
充满：be filled with →be full of
理解：understand →comprehend
激励某人做某事：inspire sb to do sth →encourage sb to do sth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Today, the theme of my speech is “The Chinese Spring Festival in My Eyes.”
拓展句：Today, I will deliver a speech whose theme is “The Chinese Spring Festival in My
Eyes.”
【点睛】[高分句型1] The Spring Festival is the holiday I look forward to the most each year.
（运用了省略了that的定语从句）
[高分句型2] This achievement inspires us to protect and pass down these precious cultural
traditions, so that future generations can experience the charm of the Spring Festival.（运用了so
that引导目的状语从句）
9．（2024·湖北·二模）4月23日是世界读书日。你校将举办以“多读书、读好书、好读
书”为主题的一系列活动。假设你是英语文学社社长，为支持学校的读书活动，请你用英
语写一篇倡议书，号召大家积极参与活动。内容包括：1.阅读的意义；
2.活动的形式。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear students,
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Thank you!
【答案】Dear students,
April 23rd is World Book Day. Our school will hold a series of activities with the theme of
“Read More, Read Better, and Love Reading”. As president of the English Literature Club, I call
on everyone to actively participate in these activities.
Reading is of great significance. It can not only expand our knowledge, but also improve
our language skills and thinking abilities. Through reading, we can explore the world, experience
different lives and gain wisdom and inspiration.
The activities include book sharing, reading salons and essay competitions. These activities
provide a good opportunity for us to share reading experiences, exchange ideas and show our
talents. Let’s read more books, read good books, and enjoy reading. Looking forward to your
participation!
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇倡议书，号召大家积极参与校
将举办的以“多读书、读好书、好读书”为主题的一系列活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行：hold→throw
参加：take part in→participate in提高：improve→promote
获得：gain→acquire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our school will hold a series of activities with the theme of “Read More, Read Better, and
Love Reading”.
拓展句：Our school will hold a series of activities whose theme is “Read More, Read Better, and
Love Reading”..
【点睛】【高分句型1】Through reading, we can explore the world, experience different lives
and gain wisdom and inspiration.（运用了介词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】It can not only expand our knowledge, but also improve our language skills and
thinking abilities.（运用了not only…but also连接并列谓语）
10．（2025·天津红桥·一模）假定你是李津，你的英国笔友Tom对人工智能AI辅助英语学
习很感兴趣，他想了解你在英语学习中使用AI的情况。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)你使用的AI软件（如DeepSeek、豆包等）对你英语学习的帮助（整理错题、润色作文
等）；
(2)你对AI辅助英语学习的看法，重点阐述如何合理使用AI，避免过度依赖。
注意：
(1)邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
(3)词数：不少于100词。
Dear Tom,
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Best regards,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Tom,Delighted to know that you have interest in using AI to assist English learning. I’m excited
to share my experience with AI-assisted English learning, which has significantly improved my
study efficiency recently.
Among various tools I’ve tried, DeepSeek has become my favorite assistant for organizing
mistakes and polishing compositions. When I have trouble understanding complex grammar
points, I can simply ask it for explanations, which are always clear and easy to follow. Besides, it
is extremely useful in polishing my English compositions. What’s more, DeepSeek can organize
my wrong English exercises.
AI is a powerful tool for English learning. It can provide instant answers and abundant
learning resources. However, we must use it wisely to avoid over-reliance.
I hope my experience can be helpful to you. Looking forward to hearing from you.
S
Best regards,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom回一封邮件，分享自己使用
AI辅助英语学习的情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提高：improve → enhance
复杂的：complex → complicated
此外：besides → in addition
大量的：abundant → plentiful
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
简单句：However, we must use it wisely to avoid over-reliance.
复合句：However, we must use it wisely so that we can avoid over-reliance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m excited to share my experience with AI-assisted English learning,
which has significantly improved my study efficiency recently. (运用了which引导的非限制性
定语从句)
【高分句型2】When I have trouble understanding complex grammar points, I can simply ask it
for explanations, which are always clear and easy to follow. (运用了when引导的时间状语从
句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
