江苏省南京市六校联合体考试2024-2025 学年高二下学期6 月期末英语试卷
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A determined 10-year-old girl(性格，决定命运) Callie lived with her parents and older
brother, Ben, on a quiet farm( 时间地点人物). Though she was
small and thi
n , she loved
helping with housework, especially feeding
the horses in their big barn
(现在分词短语做伴随动
作) . One side of the barn housed the horse stalls, while the other side was piled with
hay bales for feeding.
One afternoon, Callie went into the barn to feed the horses. As she walked
towards the tall stacks of hay
,s he suddenly stopped. A tiny, weak sound came
through the dusty air(无灵主语句). Meow... meow..
Her heart jumped. A kitten must be trapped in the hay! Breathing
hard
(现在分词短语描
写状态), she ran back to find Ben and her father. “Dad! Ben! Come quick! A kitten is
stuck in the hay!" she called urgently. Ben sighed, putting
down his tools
(现在分词做伴随动
作). Her father looked doubtful( 刻画人物的反应). “Probably just the wind, Callie," he said
gently. But they followed her to the barn.
They stood quietly near the hay stacks, listening(现在分词做伴随动作). The bar was silent(冲
突). “Hear anything?” Ben asked. Their father shook his head. “Nothing. sweetheart.
Maybe it was just a mouse. Don't worry about it.” Disappointed(过去分词做adj 做主语补语),Callie
watched them leave.
After dinner(注意时间过渡), Callie slipped back to the bar, determined(过去分词做adj 做主语补语).
She stood still, listening
attentively
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). And there it was again! Meow...
meow... Weaker now, but clear. She raced back to the house. Her father was
watching TV.“Dad. please!" she pleaded. “'I heard it again! It is a kitten! Please, just
come check one more time?”He looked unwilling but saw the real worry in her eyes.
“Alright, alright, one last look.”He returned a few minutes later, “Callie. I listened
hard. All I heard was an owl outside. No kitten. Try not to worry." He gave her a
tired smile.(冲突升级) “Thanks for checking, Dad." Callie whispered, though she still felt
uneasy
.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: That night, Callie woke up suddenly.
Paragraph 2: “I have no choice but to get help!” Callie thought to herself.
江苏省南京市六校联合体考试2024-2025 学年高二下学期6 月期末英语试卷
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
A determined 10-year-old girl Callie lived with her parents and older brother,
Ben, on a quiet farm. Though she was small and thin, she loved helping with
housework, especially feeding the horses in their big barn (畜棚)One side of the barn
housed the horse stalls (马厩), while the other side was piled with hay bales (千草)
for feeding.
One afternoon, Callie went into the ba to feed the horses. As she walked towards
the tall stacks of hay. She suddenly stopped. A tiny, weak sound came through the
dusty air. Meow... meow..
Her heart jumped. A kitten must be trapped in the hay! Breathing hard, she ran
back to find Ben and her father. “Dad! Ben! Come quick! A kitten is stuck in the
hay!" she called urgently. Ben sighed. putting down his tools. Her father looked
doubtful. “Probably just the wind, Callie," he said gently. But they followed her to the
barn.
They stood quietly near the hay stacks, listening. The bar was silent. “Hear
anything?” Ben asked. Their father shook his head. “Nothing. sweetheart. Maybe it
was just a mouse. Don't worry about it.” Disappointed
Callie watched them leave.
After dinner, Callie slipped back to the bar, determined. She stood still., listening
attentively. And there it was again! Meow... meow... Weaker now, but clear. She
raced back to the house. Her father was watching TV.“Dad. please!" she pleaded (恳
求). “'I heard it again! It is a kitten! Please, just come check one more time?”He
looked unwilling but saw the real worry in her eyes. “Alright, alright, one last
look.”He returned a few minutes later, “Callie. I listened hard. All I heard was an owl
outside. No kitten. Try not to worry." He gave her a tired smile. “Thanks for
checking, Dad." Callie whispered, though she still felt uneasy
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: That night, Callie woke up suddenly.
Paragraph 2: “I have no choice but to get help!” Callie thought to herself.
1. 文章分类及续写思路分析
文章类型：遇险救险+动物+情感驱动型（以人物情感变化为核心，围绕“救助
小动物”展开）
续写构思方向：
情感主线：Callie 的坚持与责任感 → 最终解决问题（救出小猫）
冲突升级：家人不信任 → Callie 独自行动 → 危机出现（如小猫状态恶
化/环境危险） → 家人被感动
主题升华：善良与坚持的价值，家庭支持的重要性
布局与框架：
段落
内容设计
衔接原文要点
Paragraph 1
Callie 夜间听到更微弱猫叫，冒险进入
谷仓（环境危险：黑暗/干草堆松动）
承接“uneasy”心理，
强化决心
Paragraph 2
发现小猫被困深处，干草塌陷无法自
救 → 紧急呼叫父亲和Ben，最终合力
救援成功
呼应“determined”和
父亲“tired smile”
续写注意事项：
承接原文：
保留Callie 的“thin but determined”形象，动作描写需轻巧（如踮脚爬干草
堆）。
环境细节：延续“dusty air”“hay bales”的设定，可加入“月光透过裂缝”增加画
面感。
巧妙设计：
让家人态度转折合理（如父亲听到Callie 惊慌的喊声，想起她之前的坚持）。
用小猫的虚弱叫声作为情感触发器。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
故事山结构：
开端：Callie 发现小猫 → 家人不信任
发展：Callie 二次确认 → 父亲再次否定
高潮：夜间危机（续写部分）
结局：救援成功，家人认可
伏笔与冲突点：
伏笔：干草堆的“tall stacks”（暗示坍塌风险）、父亲“tired smile”（后续态度
转变基础）。
冲突：Callie 的坚持 vs 家人的忽视；小猫生存危机 vs 环境障碍。
隐含线索：小猫叫声“weaker now” → 时间紧迫。
解决方案：Callie 的勇敢行动触发家人参与，团队合作解决问题。
3. 原文分析表格
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
Callie 瘦小但坚定；父亲
疲惫但爱女儿
“a determined 10-year-old girl”, “He
gave her a tired smile”
情感层次
从急切→失望→不安→决
心
“Her heart jumped”, “Disappointed”,
“still felt uneasy”
关键情节点
发现猫叫 → 两次求助失
败 → 决定独自行动
“A tiny, weak sound...”, “Ben sighed”,
“He looked unwilling”
语言特色
短句突出紧张感，拟声词
增强画面感
“Meow... meow...”, “Breathing hard,
she ran back”
心理描写
通过动作和语言间接体现
“Callie whispered”, “she still felt
uneasy”
动作描写
Callie 的敏捷与急切
“ran back”, “stood still, listening
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
attentively”
环境描写
谷仓的杂乱与潜在危险
“tall stacks of hay”, “dusty air”
隐含主题
坚持与善良终获回报
父亲的态度变化（从怀疑到参与）
情感转折
父亲从“doubtful”到
“tired smile”暗示后续支
持
“He looked doubtful” → “Thanks for
checking, Dad.”
空间转换
房屋
谷仓的多次移动
↔
推动情节
“slipped back to the barn”, “raced back
to the house”
3. 读后续写例句 & 高级替换词
(1) 动作描写（Action）
She tiptoed towards the haystack, her heart pounding.
（她踮着脚尖走向干草堆，心跳加速。）
Her fingers trembled as she lifted the loose hay.
（她掀起松散的干草时，手指颤抖。）
The kitten let out a feeble cry, its tiny body shivering.
（小猫发出微弱的叫声，小小的身体颤抖着。）
Callie dropped to her knees, frantically digging through the hay.
（Callie 跪下来，疯狂地扒开干草。）
She stumbled backward as the haystack shifted dangerously.
（干草堆危险地晃动，她踉跄着后退。）
Ben rushed in, his boots thudding against the wooden floor.
（Ben 冲了进来，靴子重重地踩在木地板上。）
Her father knelt beside her, his strong hands carefully moving the bales.
（她的父亲跪在她旁边，用有力的手小心地搬开干草捆。）
The kitten weakly pawed at the air, desperate for help.
（小猫虚弱地抓挠着空气，拼命求救。）
Callie scooped up the tiny creature, cradling it in her arms.
（Callie 一把抱起这个小家伙，把它搂在怀里。）
They worked in silence, the only sound being the rustling of hay.
（他们默默地工作，唯一的声音是干草的沙沙声。）
(2) 心理描写（Emotion）
A surge of determination coursed through her veins.
（一股坚定的情绪涌上她的心头。）
Doubt gnawed at her, but she refused to give up.
（怀疑啃噬着她的心，但她拒绝放弃。）
Her chest tightened with anxiety as the meows grew fainter.
（随着猫叫声越来越微弱，她的胸口因焦虑而发紧。）
A flicker of hope ignited in her heart.
（她的心中燃起一丝希望。）
Fear gripped her, but she forced herself to stay calm.
（恐惧攫住了她，但她强迫自己保持冷静。）
Relief washed over her like a warm wave.
（如一股暖流般的解脱感冲刷着她。）
She bit her lip, fighting back tears of frustration.
（她咬着嘴唇，强忍着挫败的泪水。）
A stubborn resolve hardened in her mind.
（一种固执的决心在她脑海中坚定下来。）
Her breath hitched as she waited for a response.
（她屏住呼吸，等待回应。）
A mix of joy and exhaustion left her breathless.
（喜悦和疲惫交织，让她几乎喘不过气来。）
(3) 环境描写（Setting）
The barn loomed in the darkness, its wooden beams creaking ominously.
（谷仓在黑暗中若隐若现，木梁发出不祥的吱呀声。）
Moonlight filtered through the cracks, casting eerie shadows.
（月光从缝隙中透进来，投下诡异的影子。）
The air was thick with the scent of hay and dust.
（空气中弥漫着干草和灰尘的气味。）
A cold draft swept through the barn, making her shiver.
（一阵冷风扫过谷仓，让她打了个寒战。）
The haystack swayed precariously, threatening to collapse.
（干草堆危险地摇晃着，随时可能倒塌。）
The silence was broken only by the occasional hoot of an owl.
（寂静中只有偶尔传来的猫头鹰叫声。）
The wooden floorboards groaned under their footsteps.
（木地板在他们的脚步下嘎吱作响。）
The kitten’s faint cries echoed in the vast, empty space.
（小猫微弱的叫声在空旷的空间里回荡。）
Dust motes danced in the pale beam of her flashlight.
（尘埃在她的手电筒光束中飞舞。）
The night was still, save for the rustling of leaves outside.
（夜晚一片寂静，只有外面树叶的沙沙声。）
4. 高级替换词 & 语料积累
(1) 高级替换词（按场景分类）
场景
基础词
高级替换词
决心
determined
resolute, unwavering, steadfast
害怕
scared
terrified, petrified, apprehensive
快速
run
dash, sprint, bolt
场景
基础词
高级替换词
微弱
weak
feeble, faint, fragile
声音
sound
murmur, echo, rustle
(2) 固定搭配 & 词法解析
"Her heart jumped" → "Her heart leaped / skipped a beat"（心跳加速）
"Breathing hard" → "Gasping for air"（大口喘气）
"Looked doubtful" → "Wore a skeptical expression"（面露怀疑）
"Stood still" → "Froze in place"（僵在原地）
"Listened attentively" → "Ears pricked up"（竖起耳朵听）
(3) 可积累的生词短语
"Trapped in"（被困在）
词性：动词短语
近义词：stuck in, confined in
反义词：freed from
例句：
The kitten was trapped in the haystack.
She felt trapped in her own fears.
"Pile with"（堆满）
词性：动词短语
近义词：stacked with, loaded with
反义词：empty of
例句：
The barn was piled with hay bales.
His desk was piled with books.
"Slip back"（悄悄返回）
词性：动词短语
近义词：sneak back, creep back
反义词：march forward
例句：
Callie slipped back to the barn at night.
He slipped back into the room unnoticed.
"Plead with"（恳求）
词性：动词短语
近义词：beg, implore
反义词：command, order
例句：
She pleaded with her father to help.
He pleaded with the judge for mercy.
"Let out a cry"（发出叫声）
词性：动词短语
近义词：emit a sound, utter a noise
反义词：fall silent
例句：
The kitten let out a feeble cry.
She let out a cry of surprise.
总结
动作描写：多用动态动词（tiptoed, stumbled, scooped）增强画面感。
心理描写：结合身体反应（chest tightened, breath hitched）使情感更真实。
环境描写：利用感官细节（sound, smell, touch）营造氛围。
高级替换词：避免重复，提升语言丰富度。
5. Possible Versions(3)
Version 1
Paragraph 1:
That night, Callie woke up suddenly
. The weak and soft cries kept echoing
in her ears. She sat up, heart pounding(独立主格). Grabbing her coat, switching on
the flashlight, and stepping quietly into
the cold night air
(现在分词短语并列), she headed
toward the barn. As the door creaked open, the familiar scent of hay greeted her.
Holding
the flashlight steady
and walking
cautiously
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she
approached the hay stacks. Then—there it was again: “Meow... meow...” Louder
now(adj 做补语). Her light swept across the lower corner of the stack. A faint shimmer
of eyes reflected back at her.(无灵主语句) A kitten! She dropped to her knees and tried
shifting a bale, but it was far too heavy. Her breath quickened. She couldn't do it
alone.
Paragraph 2:
“I have no choice but to get help!” Callie thought to herself. Without
hesitation, she dashed back inside and gently shook her brother awake. Ben
grumbled at first, but s eeing her serious face
(现在分词做原因状语), he followed her. Their
father, overhearing, joined too, rubbing his eyes(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Responding to
Callie's urgent voice and pointing flashlight(现在分词短语做伴随动作), the two quickly began
removing bales near the spot. With dust rising and the wood floor creaking under
pressure(with 复合结构), they finally cleared enough space. Hidden in the narrow gap was
a trembling gray kitten(倒装句), its fur matted and eyes blinking slowly(独立主格). Its
tiny body shivering in the chill(独立主格), it let out one last cry—soft but determined(adj
做主语补语). Her father reached in, hands steady(独立主格), and brought the kitten out. Callie
exhaled in relief, watching the fragile life finally(现在分词短语做伴随动作)embraced by
safety(过去分词短语做后置定语).
Version 2
Paragraph 1:
That night, Callie woke up suddenly
. S tartled
by the same faint meowing
(过去分
词短语做主语补语) that had haunted her thoughts, Callie sat up. Throwing on her coat,
snatching the flashlight, and stepping over her slippers(现在分词短语并列做伴随动作), she moved
silently across the wooden floor. The barn loomed in the moonlight, quiet yet
alive with possibility(adj 并列做补语). Pushing the door open and squinting into the
shadows(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she crept inside, trying
her
best
not
to
scare
the
kitten(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The meow returned, more desperate this time(adj 短语做补语). Her
light passed over straw and beams(无灵主语句，刻画场景) until—yes!—a tiny form was stuck
deep behind a stack of hay. She rushed to it, pulling and tugging(现在分词短语做伴随动作),
but the bales didn’t move. Her arms ached, and the kitten’s cries were growing
fainter. She couldn’t wait anymore.
Paragraph 2:
“I have no choice but to get help!” Callie thought to herself. Racing across the
yard(现在分词短语做伴随动作) her slippers wet with dew(独立主格), she burst into the house and
called, this time louder, “Dad! Ben! It’s real! I found it!” Her father, hearing
her
urgency and
believing
her unwavering eyes
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), stood without another
word. Ben, yawning and half awake(adj 做主语状态描写), grabbed his boots. Back in the
barn, with the beam of the flashlight flickering and the hay rustling under their
movements(with 复合结构), the three worked together. At last, a small gap opened(无必要不被动),
just wide enough(adj 做补语). A tiny kitten emerged slowly, its head tilting weakly, fur
stuck with dry grass(独立主格刻画形象). Callie knelt, arms open(独立主格), and the kitten
collapsed into her lap, barely strong enough to meow(adj 短语做补语). “You heard me,” she
whispered, tears forming(独立主格).
Version 3
Paragraph 1:
That night, Callie woke up suddenly. A cold sweat formed on her forehead, as
if she heard the meow again. The memory of the faint cries stirred her heart
again(无灵主语句). She lay still, trying to dismiss it(现在分词做伴随动作), but guilt gnawed at her.
Sitting up, wrapping a blanket around her shoulders, and gripping her flashlight(现
在分词短语并列做伴随动作), she tiptoed toward the barn. Inside, the air was cold and thick with
dust. She paused by the hay stack, ears straining(独立主格刻画人物). “Meow…” It was
even weaker than before. Her heart sank. She dropped to the floor, pushing
away
aside bits of straw
bales
(现在分词做伴随动作) with shaking hands. At the base of a heavy
stack, something moved slightly. A gray blur. A kitten was trapped, barely able
to
move(adj 短语做补语). She pushed the hay hard, but her small hands weren’t enough.
Paragraph 2:
“I have no choice but to get help!” Callie thought to herself. She turned and
ran as fast as she could. Her knock on Ben’s door was firm this time. “I need your
help. Please.” Ben blinked, then nodded. Their father joined them moments
later, flashlight in hand(独立主格). Led by Callie’s steady voice and determined
steps(过去分词短语做方式状语), they reached the barn again. The bales were large, but together
they cleared a space. Beneath the final layer, the kitten lay curled, barely
breathing(现在分词短语做后置定语). It let out the tiniest meow. Callie’s father carefully
pulled it out, wrapped it in his scarf, and handed it to her(动作串并列). The warmth
of the moment melted the night’s cold, and Callie finally smiled, her hands
cradling
what she had believed in all along
(独立主格).
语言表达亮点积累
类型
表达
替换/升级词汇
情绪描写
heart pounding, breath quickened, tears
forming, cold sweat forming, her heart
sank, guilt gnawed at her
worried → uneasy, distressed；
sad → heartbroken, heavy-
hearted
动作描写
tiptoed, gripped flashlight, brushed aside
straw, knelt, tugged hay, burst into the
house, collapsed into her lap
walk → creep, move silently；
hold → cradle, clutch
非谓语结构
grabbing her coat, using all her strength,
trembling and exhausted, seeing her
worried face, responding to her voice
动作串联自然，体现高分语
法点
无灵主语
A faint shimmer of eyes was reflected.
A small gap was revealed. The warmth
of the moment melted the night’s cold.
用于制造情境描写、提升句
式多样性
独立主格结
构
Its eyes wide with fright, her hands
shaking with effort, the kitten’s body
shivering
增加句式高级感与紧张氛围
营造
官方：
That night, Callie woke up suddenly,
t he weak cries filled her mind.
She
couldn't rest. Quietly, she put on her coat, took a flashlight and slipped out(动作串并列).
Inside the barn, near
the hay stacks
, Callie held her breath, listening with full
attention(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Then, it came: Meow... meow... Her flashlight beam swept
across the bales. There! Near the bottom of a tall stack, she spotted a tiny
movement - a small patch of gray fur barely visible between two enormous
bales. She rushed over and pushed the bales again, but they wouldn't move.
“I have no choice but to get help!" Callie thought to herself. She raced back
home and quickly awoke Ben and their father. Seeing
Callie's worried face
and
absolute certainty(现在分词做原因状语), they both hurried with her back to the barn. Working
together( 现在分词做伴随动作), Ben and their father carefully moved the heavy hay bales
which Callie pointed at. Eventually, a narrow passage was revealed(无灵主语句). There
was a tiny gray kitten, its eyes wide with fright(独立主格). Trembling and exhausted(非谓
语动词做adj), it let out another pitiful meow. Carefully. Callie's father reached in and
gently held the little creature out. Callie's heart swelled with relief and joy as she
looked at the rescued kitten, safe and warm(adj 短语做补语)in her father’s large, gentle
hands.
