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细节描写微技能之动作描写
【素材梳理】
动作描写策略回顾
▲动作描写的3个原则
①要准确:表现一个动作可以利用许多动词,但应恰当利用最准确的动词,刻画对应
的动作。
②有过程:展示人物个性的动作时,应通过细节描写展示出动作的过程,在续写时,
应按动作的先后顺序叙述整个过程。
③用修饰:在描写动作时,可利用各种状语,说明时间、地点、原因、伴随等情况,
使动作描写更丰富。
▲动作描写常用的高分素材举例
与肢体语言相关的动作描写素材
(1)head
①She turned and headed for the door.
她转身朝门走去。
②He buried/put/held his head in hands, greatly annoyed.
他双手抱头,非常生气。
③Many people in the audience nodded in agreement.
许多观众点头表示赞同。
④I fell asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow.
头一碰枕头我就睡着了。
⑤He hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.
他羞愧地低下了头。
(2)face
①Her face paled with fright.
她吓得脸都白了。
②A bright smile appeared on/spread across/crossed his face.
他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
③Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present.
我给她礼物时,她的脸上焕发出了光彩。
(3)cheek
①Color rushed/flooded/rose to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.
意识到有人在看她,她顿时涨红了脸。
②He felt his cheeks burning with shame.
他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。
③Her cheeks were wet with tears.
她泪流满面。
(4)eye①He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning.
听到门把转动的声音,他向门那边看去。
②Tina squeezed her eyes shut and bit her lip.
蒂娜闭上双眼,咬了咬嘴唇。
③She looked at her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.
她直视父亲的眼睛,诚实地回答了他的问题。
④She tried to sit up, her eyes fixed on Joan's face.
她试图坐起来,双眼紧盯着琼的脸。
⑤I felt tears well up in my eyes.
我感到泪水在眼里涌出来。
(5)mouth
①Our mouths dropped open in surprise.
我们惊奇地张大了嘴。
②My mouth started watering when I smelled the food.
闻到食物的香味,我开始流口水了。
③My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.
我走进她的办公室时,紧张得心都提到嗓子眼了。
(6)hand
①She took the child's hand and helped him climb the steps.
她拉住孩子的手牵着他爬上台阶。
②He reached for her hand and held it tightly.
他伸手抓住她的手并紧紧握住。
③She shrugged and spread her hands. “That's all I can tell you.”
她耸耸肩,摊开双手说:“我只能告诉你这么多了。”
④She shivered, rubbing her hands together fiercely.
她一边颤抖,一边使劲搓着双手。
⑤Her hands shook/trembled as she lifted the glass to her lips.
她的手颤抖着把杯子送到唇边。
(7)arm
①He was running forward, waving his arms.
他挥舞着胳膊向前跑着。
②He stood there with crossed arms, looking angry.
他交叉着双臂站在那里,看上去怒气冲冲。
③She folded her arms and stared at him.
她交叉着双臂注视着他。
动作描写词汇必背
部位 动作 例句
Head 低头 He hung/lowered/bent/bowed/drooped his head in shame. His head drooped.点头 They nodded their heads in agreement.
摇头 She shook her head in disbelief.
挠头 He scratched his head, not understanding a word.
埋头 She buried her head in the pillow.
靠....在... She rested her head on his shoulder.
双手抱头 He put/held his head in his hands, greatly annoyed.
清理思绪 I decided to go for a walk to clear my head.
头眩晕 He could feel his head spinning after only one drink.
前往 He turned and headed for the door.
Face 露出笑容 A bright smile appeared on/spread across/was written his face.
容光焕发 Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present.
满脸通红 Jack's face flushed/burned with embarrassment.
脸色惨白 Her face paled with fright.
皱眉 He had a slight frown on his face.
Cheek 亲吻脸颊 He kissed her on both cheeks and got on the train.
脸颊发烫 He felt his cheeks burning with shame.
流泪 Tears rolled down her cheek.
脸红 Color flooded her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.
Eyes 瞪大眼 His eyes were wide with horror.
His eyes grew wide(=widened with horror) at what she had done.
目光落 The dog's hungry eyes were on(=landed on/fell on) my sandwich.
在...
目光移 He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning
到...
闭上眼 Tina squeezed her eyes shut and bit her lip.
直视 She looked her father straight in his eyes and answered his question truthfully.
对视 He seemed unwilling to meet my eyes.
两眼闪光 She laughed, her eyes shining/ sparking/ sparkling/ glistening/glowing with
excitement.
眼里满是 Her eyes brimmed with tears =Tears brimmed in her eyes.=Her eyes were filled
泪水 with tears.=Tears filled her eyes.
注视 She tried to sit up, her eyes fixed on Jean's face.
盯着 His eyes never left mine.
扫视 His eyes scanned the room as he entered.
模糊视线 Tears blurred her eyes/vision.
泪水涌出 I felt tears well up in my eyes.
Nose 闻味道 She wrinkled her nose as if she had just smelled a bad smell.
流鼻涕 She was weeping loudly and her nose was running.擤鼻涕 He blew/wiped his nose with a handkerchief.
Mouth 张开嘴 She opened her mouth to say something.
捂嘴 He covered his mouth to hide his yawn.
流口水 My mouth started watering when I smelled the food.
塞食物 He began to stuff his mouth with pasta.
目瞪口呆 He straightened up and looked at me, open-mouthed.
的
心到嗓子 My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office
眼
嘴发僵 Her mouth grew stiff with pain and distress(悲伤).
嘴张开 She froze, her mouth hanging open.
Tooth 咬牙切齿 "Come here now!" she growled through her clenched teeth.
咯咯响 Their teeth were chattering with cold.
露出牙齿 The man smiled, revealing perfect white teeth.
牙齿闪闪 Her teeth flashed as she smiled.
发亮
Throat 清嗓子 She cleared her throat, then began to speak
轻叫 A small cry escaped his throat.
喉咙哽住 His throat tightened with fear when he saw the knife.
喉咙哽咽 He felt a lump in his throat, and tears forming in his eyes.
I stood there with a lump in my throat and tried to fight back tears.
Lip 咬着嘴唇 He bit his lip nervously, trying not to cry.
舔嘴唇 He licked his lip hungrily.
嘴唇发抖 His lips were quivering/trembling.
擦嘴 She wiped her lips with the back of her hand.
嘴上挂着 There was a smile on her lips.
微笑
Chin 下巴颤抖 His chin quivered and a tear ran down his cheek
搓揉下巴 He rubbed/fingered his chin thoughtfully.
扬起下巴 His chin rose in a proud gesture.
Ear 在耳边怦 My heart was pounding/ ringing/ echoing in my ears.
怦跳
He went home with the teacher's warning ringing in his ears.
把耳朵贴 He pressed his ears to the door, but heard nothing
着门
竖起耳朵 I strained my ears to catch the conversation in the other room.
听
笑得合不 He was beaming/grinned/smiled from ear to ear.
拢嘴
捂耳朵 She put her hands over her ears to block out what he was saying.
对...充耳 She decided to shut her ears to all the rumors.不闻
Hand 握手 He shook my hands as if we were long lost friends
伸手 A strong hand reached out and caught hold
of her arm. She smiled and hold out/reach
out a hand in welcome.
搓手 She shivered, rubbing her hands together fiercely.
摊开手 She shrugged and spread her hands."That's all I can tell you."
抓 She took the child's hand and helped him climb the steps.
They walked along, holding hands.
He grasped/grabbed the rope with both hands.
He reached for her hand and held it tightly.他伸手抓住她的手并紧紧握住
拍手 She clapped her hands in delight.
The class clapped warmly as Mr. Lee presented me with the reward.
Finger 竖手指 The teacher raised a warning finger and we stopped talking.
She raised/held up a finger to her lip to ask for silence
轻抚 She stroked her fingers through my hair, and said: “Of course there is a Santa
Clause.”
摇手指 "None of that!" cried the teacher, wagging/waving her finger.
用手指触 She nervously fingered her collar.
摸
蘸... I dipped my finger in the sauce and licked it.
打响指 He snapped his fingers and the waiter came running.
用手指敲 He was drumming his fingers nervously on the arm of the chair
椅子
Fist 用拳头 He struck/pounded/punched the table
捶... with his fist. He smashed his fist down
on the desk.
紧握拳 She clenched her fists to stop herself trembling.
头
Palm 用手拍 She slapped her palm against the desk in anger
手心冒 I could feel my heart thumping/pounding(=beat wildly) and my palm sweating
汗
Arm 抱住... He ran up to her and put/threw/ his arms around her.
拥入怀 He pulled her into his arms and kissed her.
臂挽臂 They walked along arm in arm.
抓 He reached out a hand and caught hold of/grabbed/took her arm.
交叉双 He stood there with crossed arms,
臂 looking angry. She folded/crossed her
arms and stared at him.
张开双 They are sure to welcome you with open arms.
臂
He held out/opened his arms with a broad smile
Shoulder 拍肩膀 I tapped/patted the man on the shoulder and asked him to move.
耸肩 When I asked him why he had done it, he just shrugged his shoulders.肩膀耷 My shoulders dropped with relief.
拉
倾诉的 a shoulder to cry on
对象
扭头朝 He looked back over his shoulder.
后看
挤;闯 She shouldered her way through the crowd.
Chest 让 某 人 The smell of the dog turned his stomach.
恶心/反
感
不想吃.. She had no stomach for the leftover stew. They had no stomach for a fight.
不想做...
Heart 心怦怦 Her heart is beating fast/wildly.
跳
Her heart was pounding/thumping with excitement
心咯噔 Her heart seemed to miss a beat.
一下
Those words can make your heart skip a beat and bring tears to your eyes.
心碎 She broke his heart when she called off the engagement.
心融化 He smiled and her heart melted/softened.
对...不感 Your heart is not in sth.
兴趣
沉重的 With a heavy/sinking/broken heart, she watched him go.
心
刺痛...的 Her words pierced my heart.
心
向...倾诉 Finally, he broke down in tears and poured out his heart to her.
心声
Back 弯下腰 He bends/hunches his back when he walks.
倚靠 He leaned his back against the bar(柜台).
伸懒腰 He yawned and stretched his back as he got out of bed.
拍背 He smiled and gave me a hearty slap/pat on the back.
后退 He backed slowly out of the room.
He took a step forward and she nervously backed away.
Foot 拖着脚 She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents
步
站起来 She jumped to her feet when she
heard the news. He got shakily to his
feet.
跺脚 She was tapping/stamping her feet impatiently.
Knee 跪着 He went/got down on his knees and begged for
forgiveness He was on his knees, searching for the
missing ring.
腿发软 Suddenly her knees buckled/weakened and she fell to the floor.
抱膝 He hugged his knees to keep warm.
Leg 站起来 He rose to his feet on shaky legs.他用颤抖的双腿站了起来。
翘二郎 I moved the chair away from the table so I could cross his legs.腿
Skin 起鸡皮 Just thinking about it makes my skin crawl.
疙瘩
【提升练习】
1.(2024·吉林·三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
One bright Saturday morning, Mali and her mom walked around the neighbourhood. That is,
her mom walked, but Mali ran, skipped, jumped over puddles and visited the neighbours’ dogs.
Mali paused to look at the budding (发芽) trees on her block. “I can’t wait until summer,” she
said, “especially for Mrs. Fair’s great tomatoes at her market stand.” She pointed.
Mali’s mom stood looking at the empty lot where the market was set up every summer
weekend. She looked at Mali, “Honey, Mrs. Fair told me last week that she had to close her stand.
She’s really getting too old to run it anymore.”
Mali turned, stared, and put her hands on her waist. “But Mrs. Fair’s stand can’t close!” she
said. “It’s the only place in the neighbourhood we can buy fresh, delicious tomatoes.” Then she
added, to show she wasn’t being selfish, “Everyone needs fruits and vegetables for a healthy diet.”
After they got home, Mali headed out to her backyard swing to think. “If only I could plant a
garden,” she thought. “but our yard is way too small.” Just then, she noticed her neighbour, Mr.
Taylor, looking at his daffodils. Mali knew he was thinking about how he had planted those
flowers with his wife. This was the first spring since his wife had died, and Mali saw the sadness
on his face. Then she had an idea.
Mali cleared her throat, and Mr. Taylor looked up. Mali decided to walk over to the fence.
“Hi, Mr. Taylor,” she said. He waved, and turned away. “Wait!” Mali cried. Taking a risk while
she still felt brave, she rushed to gather her thoughts. “Mr. Taylor, Mrs. Fair isn’t doing her tomato
stand anymore because she’s getting old. So I’d like to grow tomatoes. I don’t want to get in the
way of your flowers, but I really want tomatoes.”
Suddenly, Mr. Taylor smiled. “Mali, I’m not sure what you’re talking about, but you’ve made
me smile. Reasons to smile have been scarce lately. What do you want to do?” Mali repeated, “I
wanted to plant tomatoes, but I have no big land.” She sounded a little awkward.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then, an idea came to Mr. Taylor.
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When the fruit ripened, there were more juicy, red tomatoes than even Mali could have
imagined.
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2.(2024·山西临汾·二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
I chewed on my pencil as I walked back and forth across my bedroom. What was I going to
do? It was bad enough that I was the new kid. But now I was sure to get laughed at by my
classmates. How could my first homework be such a disaster?
“My name is Anna, and this summer I...” I stopped. How could I stand in front of my class
and say that I’d spent the entire summer handling something that most people don’t even like to
talk about? Poop (粪便). I’d spent three months shoveling (铲), collecting, and analyzing cow
poop on my grandparents’ farm. I tried to think of a different adventure I could share. Maybe I
could say I’d spent the summer on the Weather Control Team preventing floods.
“Time for dinner,” my mom called.
I walked slowly down the stairs and slid into my chair.
“You’ve been in your room since you came home from school,” Mom said. “What are you
working on?”
I sighed. “I have to tell the class what I did this summer.”
My younger brother, Seymour, began to laugh uncontrollably. “No one will want to sit next
to you after they hear you were covered in cow poop all summer!”“OK, that’s enough, Seymour,” Dad said.
“Anna,” said Mom, putting green beans in a bowl, “be proud of the work we did this summer.
Our planet would be in sad shape without scientists like your grandfather.”
It’s true that my grandfather does important work. He developed an easy way to use poop as a
source of fuel. Using the poop is now easy, economical, and environmentally safe.
“I know, Mom,” I said, staring at my meatloaf. “But it’s not exactly something people want to
hear about before lunch.”
That night I dreamed about more splendid adventures: cave diving in Mexico, hiking through
the Amazon rainforest . . .
At school the next day, I bent over my desk, listening to each kid speak. My palms were
sweaty, and the knot (结) in my stomach grew tighter.
“And that was my journey to Mount Everest,” Ember Adams said, finishing her report. She
bowed and look her seat.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“It’s your turn, Anna,” the teacher said.
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After class, some of my classmates approached me.
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3.(2024·贵州·二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The smell of defeat filled the air on a warm October evening. In the school parking lot stood
Coach McDonald and me, a loser in the 160-pound weight class.
Coach McDonald’s hands firmly grasped my shoulders, his eyes looking through my
uncertainty. “Billy,” his voice cut through the uneasy quiet. “The potential for you to become an
excellent wrestler exists. It takes time,” he argued.
“Don’t you see? I lost... again. Ten matches. Never won.” Frustration struck me as I stepped
away from Coach McDonald. Pulling my cell phone from my equipment bag, I said definitively,
“I need to call my mom. She’ll pick me up.” I just wanted to get away as soon as possible and
flung myself into Mom’s arms. She had always been my best friend and supporter.
While waiting for her to answer my call, the thought of quitting the sport rumbled in my
mind. I was so frustrated at that time that I ignored the joy and satisfaction wrestling had brought
to me.
Coach McDonald closed in. “Billy, look at me,” he said. “Pound for pound, you’re the
strongest and most flexible (灵活的) kid on the team. That’s a winning combination. Master the
techniques in practice, and victory will be yours, I promise.”
I coughed and pulled my sweaty shirt off my chest. “When, Coach?”
With a knowing look, Coach said, “Do you know how long it took me to win my first
match?” He stood up straight, squinting (斜视) like he was recalling a tough time. “During my
first year, I lost every match. I ended the season 0-11. I didn’t lose at all in the following two
years, including two state championships. Billy, that can be you someday. But it’ll never happen if
you quit.”
In that silent moment, I felt a slight pain within me, but it was weak, not strong enough to
change my mind. Coach cleared his throat, glancing at his watch. “Well, I’m hungry.”
“And my mom’s here,” I said. Then I jumped into her car.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
In the car, I told her I lost again and I was hesitating about quitting the team.
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The next day, I walked into the training field again.
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4.(2024·安徽滁州·二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
Steven Green was a hardworking man who worked all his life to support his family. He
never finished college, so he had to take hard labor jobs around the neighborhood. He worked as a
builder and a carpenter through the years. He often helped his neighbors whenever needed.
However, as he grew older, he could no longer do these jobs. His knees grew weak, and his health
condition made it difficult for him to do difficult jobs.
Steven’s kids didn’t live in the same state as him and could only send him a little money
because they also led a poor life. Unfortunately, Steven experienced constant physical pain after
doing hard labor jobs for years, and he needed to take medicine every day. The money his kids
offered was only enough for food, and his savings were small. Realizing that he needed more
money, Steven decided to get a job again. Finally, he found a job as a doorkeeper. At first, his
salary was enough to pay for the groceries and the medicine he needed. However, due to his
advanced age, he started to need more medicine, and it cost a whole lot.
To pay the growing bills, Steven began to take things from his home to a second-hand store
to get some money. One day, as he was carrying an old radio to the store, his neighbor, Ben, saw
him. “Mr. Green, it’s so good to see you! How have you been?” Ben asked. “I’m doing great. I’m
just selling couple of things I no longer use at home for some cash. Being weak is terrible when
you’re old, so take care of yourself when you are young, alright?” he said almost jokingly. Ben
nodded.“Thanks for the tip, Mr. Green!” he said before waving goodbye. That same day, Steven
was cooking dinner when he heard the doorbell ring. He wasn’t expecting anyone, so he curiously
walked towards the door.
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5.(2024·河北张家口·模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
We had a nice and laid-back Saturday. We took the kids to the park having a great time
during the day and we ordered pizza for dinner. After I got the kids into bed, I went to the kitchen
to get a drink for myself. That was when I unintendedly looked out of the window to our
neighbor’s house across the street. To my surprise, it was completely dark.
Our neighbor was an older woman, Mrs. Biddle. She was the kind of woman who kept to
herself. She lived in a big house by herself and rarely left except to go grocery shopping. Her son
would visit from time to time. Although I had attempted to get close to her, all my efforts to be
neighborly toward her failed. I tried to strike up conversations, but she would cut me short.
Oftentimes, if she saw me walking to her house, it was obvious from the expression on her facethat she didn’t want to be bothered. She would hurry inside to avoid me.
Now looking at her house, I thought it was odd that all her lights were off. Mrs. Biddle
never went out at night. As a matter of fact, she was a night owl like me, with her lights usually
burning way past midnight. That’s when it hit me: I had to go over to her house. I knew something
must be wrong.
Concerned about her safety, I walked across the street and rang her doorbell several times.
There was no answer. With a growing desire, I tried peeking through her window, but her curtains
were drawn. I went back to her door to ring the bell again when I heard something stir inside.
“Mrs. Biddle?” I called out loudly. Then I heard a small voice. I couldn’t make out what she was
saying, but I knew it was Mrs. Biddle, and she needed help.
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1.续写词数应为150个左右;
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Running back to my house, I told my husband, Harold, what had happened.
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The next day, we went to the hospital to visit Mrs. Biddle again.
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6.(2024·河北邢台·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was Mr. Morgan’s first day as a new history teacher. He was giving the students a lecture
on the Great Depression and World War II, when the door suddenly opened. A boy walked in with
his eyes fixed on the floor and took his seat without speaking a word or looking up at the teacher.
“Good morning, young man,” said Mr. Morgan, his voice was strict. “It’s 9:15, and you’re 20
minutes late for class. Do you have a good reason?” But the boy just sat without responding.
“Could you please stand up and introduce yourself?” Mr. Morgan added. “I’m Archie,” replied the
boy as he rose and looked up, rubbing his tired eyes. Archie looked very untidy and dizzy (头晕目
眩的), as though he hadn’t slept at all the previous nights. “Nice to meet you, Archie. I’m your
new history teacher. You’re late for class. Do you mind telling me why? You just walked in
without excusing yourself, and I won’t entertain such behavior.” Archie hesitated for a while. “I’m
sorry, sir. I overslept. I didn’t mean to come in late. I was just tired, sir,” he finished, unable to
control his yawn, and the whole class laughed. “Silence!” Mr. Morgan demanded. “Archie, you
cannot be late for class like this. Can I see your homework? I heard your previous history teacher
gave you assignments every weekend. Show it to me, will you?” Archie handed over his notebook,
and Mr. Morgan’s expression turned uneasy. “Umm, looks like you didn’t do your homework at
all.” “I didn’t do it, sir,” the boy said sheepishly as the teacher looked through the rest of the
pages. “Archie, what is this? You haven’t done any of your homework this whole term,” Mr.
Morgan scolded. “I want to meet your parents tomorrow, alright? Or I’m taking you straightto the
principal’s office. Is that clear?” “Yes, sir,” Archie murmured and sat on his seat.
But the boy didn’t show up the following day. The principal told him, “We’ve given Archie
chances, but there’s no improvement. His presence is affecting our academic statistics.” Mr.
Morgan started to worry.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mr. Morgan paid a visit to Archie’s home, only to discover the boy’s life was far more
difficult than he thought.
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Fifteen years later, successful Archie returned to his old school to thank Mr. Morgan.
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7.(2024·江苏·模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
I was confident at the audition (试演) for the school play and felt pleased to get a role. It
just felt good to be in the play, even if I had only four or five lines. I worked hard at perfecting
those lines. I repeated them over and over again. I put in the emphases and intonations (语调) that
my drama teacher had suggested and, because I was on stage much longer than for just four or five
lines, I had many actions to rehearse (排练) and perform. “Do them in front of a mirror,” my
drama teacher had advised me. “Watch how you look; practice and rehearse as often as you can.” I
did just that. I worked and worked at it. It was fun and exciting rehearsing.
Then finally the big night came. Suddenly, things felt different. The theater was full of
people. As I dressed, I could hear the chatting and noises of the audience. I looked around at the
other more experienced actors and saw that their previous confidence seemed to have disappeared.
Had they got their makeup right? Was the costume done up correctly? What if they forgot their
lines? The more people talked about their anxiety, the more nervous everyone became. The
worries spread from person to another—like a baton (接力棒) being passed in a relay race—until
the whole of the backstage area seemed to be full of tension and worry.
I was on stage early, at first performing my non-spoken role in the background with several
other guys around the same age. When, suddenly, I heard my cue (出场提示), the lights were
bright in my eyes, I couldn’t see the audience but knew there were hundreds of people out there allwatching me. The words that had flowed so easily when I stood in front of a mirror didn’t want to
come, and when they did I found myself hurrying into them. I tried to slow down my thoughts and
my words.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But I suddenly realized I had missed a sentence.
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I bowed to the audience excitedly and went back to my drama teacher.
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8.(2024·重庆·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成
一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
We Survived Getting Swallowed by a Whale
Respect and revere (敬畏) nature. I’m Julie, 56 years old, living in San Luis Obispo,
California, about four miles from the beach. Every few years, the humpback whales come into the
bay for several days while migrating.
In November 2020, the whales were around, so I took out my yellow double kayak (皮划
艇) to watch the wildlife. I paddled out the pier (长堤) and saw seals, dolphins, and about 20whales feeding on silverfish. They sprayed through their blowholes. Each one is huge, about 15
metres long. Sometimes they turned side fins as if waving at me. It was incredible.
At the time, my friend Liz was with me. We had met 28 years earlier. I asked Liz if she
wanted to see the whales. I really wanted to share the magnificent experience with her.
“No way,” she said. She’s terrified of whales and sharks. I promised that the craft was
stable and safe enough. Moreover, humpback whales couldn’t swallow down kayaks for their
throats were tight even though they had enormous mouths and white-wall-like internal mouth
structures, not to mention that we got paddles and life jackets. After some persuasion, Liz finally
agreed.
We set off at about 8:30 the next morning. There were already about 15 other kayakers in
the bay. One hour later, I spotted two whales right past the pier, swimming toward us. We were in
awe, feeling amazed to be so close to a creature that size.
When whales swam down after breaching (跃身激浪), they disappeared in ripples. I figured
if we paddled there, we’d be safe since they’d just left. We followed them at a distance—or what I
thought was a distance. I later learned that it’s recommended to keep 90 metres away, or about the
length of a football field. We were probably 18 metres away.
All of a sudden, a swarm (群) of fish started jumping out of the water into our kayak. Their
movement sounded like crackling glass. Now I knew we were too close. I was terrified. Then our
kayak was lifted out of the water—about two metres—and tipped back into the ocean. I figured
the whale was going to drag us down somehow, and I had no idea how deep.
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I didn’t realize that Liz and I sitting in the kayak were in the whale’s mouth.
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9.(2024·河南·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
I should not have dressed up. Obviously, no other fifth grader had felt driven to celebrate the
first day of school via fancy clothing. So I stood out not just as a newcomer, but as an awkwardly
dressed one. Scratching at black tights with the toe of my sneaker, I paused uncertainly in the
doorway of the Writing Room.
Pausing uncertainly, however, was not the way of the world of Mr. Matthews. This red-
haired, red-beard, red-faced man seemed to call wildly to me to enter. I walked over to a seat and
in three minutes of casual observation I was convinced that I had never known an adult like him.
He laughed from his belly, moved his ears on request, and his face then turned even redder. His
students loved him; it was evident from the way they greeted him to the way they relaxed when
they entered his room.
On the contrary, I was not relaxed. I was uninterested in writing. My only previous writing
experience had been in cloth-covered books with more room for pictures than print. I had no idea
what to expect from a class that was just called "Writing", but I was certain I wasn't going to like
it.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Yet Mr. Matthews spent that first class entertaining us.
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That night, despite having dealt with a word processor all of twice in my life, I wrote with
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10.(2024·湖南衡阳·模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,
使之构成以一篇完整的短文。
It was Christmas Eve when my sister and I decided to open our presents before our mom got
home from work. She usually came home about an hour after we got home from school, which we
thought was plenty of time to sneak a peek at (偷看) the gifts under the tree. My sister opened the
first gift while I was ordered to stand guard at the big picture window in our front room.
I was so excited that I could barely stand still. I also couldn’t keep my eyes on the window
very long. My head moved from the window to my sister and back to the window again. I felt like
I was watching a Ping-Pong match.
“All right!” my sister shouted. She pulled out a jewelry box. “You know what that means,
don’t you?”
I jumped up and down. “Yeah, it’s my turn!”
“No,” she said. “It means that there must be some jewelry under here. I watched my sister
rummage (翻找) through the presents under the tree trying to find one she thought was small
enough to be a necklace or earrings.
“Hey, that’s not fair!” I said, stomping my foot. I couldn’t do anything except stand guard as
she opened present after present. Finally, when my sister’s curiosity was satisfied and she had
finished, wrapping her last present back up, we traded places.
My heart hammered so hard that it felt like my chest was moving in and out. My sister
reminded me to be careful not to tear the paper, and wrap the presents back up the same way that Ihad found them.
After unwrapping a few presents, I found it faster to open one end of a present and peek
inside. “Cool! Mom and Dad got me headphones for my stereo (立体声音响设备)!” I pulled the
headphones out of the box and was about to put them on when my sister shouted, “Quick! Wrap it
back up! Mom’s coming!”
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
“Come on!” My sister’s face was as white as the paint on the wall.
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Our secret was safe, but somehow Christmas morning didn’t feel the same.
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11.(2024·湖北·三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
I remember that I was worn out when I got home that afternoon. I'd had to be at the theatre
for the audition (试演) at nine that morning, and then I'd been waiting around for about three
hours before the director finally saw me. I performed my song and almost at once he told me I
could go home. “I am very sorry,”he said,“but your voice isn't quite right for the part.”It had beena similar story at all the auditions that I'd done over the past few weeks.
It had been my dream for years to be in a famous musical like The Sound of Music or
Mamma Mia, so I'd taken lessons in singing and dancing, and had come to the city to try and get a
part in a show. I'd been really pleased when I'd managed to set up no fewer than ten auditions, but
so far all of them had gone the same way. As I arrived back that afternoon at the little apartment
where I rented a room, I really wondered whether I should bother going to the eleventh the next
morning. It was a show I'd have loved to be in — but really, what was the point? Someone I knew
had told me about a job at a local coffee shop, and had said that if I called in for a quick chat at ten
the next day, I'd almost certainly get the job. It meant missing the audition, but right now, it
seemed like a much more sensible thing to do.
I always sing when I need to cheer myself up, and because there was no one else in the
apartment, I slipped off my shoes, went and stood in front of the mirror and started singing.Quite
quickly I found myself belting out (大声唱) one of my favourite songs, Bridge over Troubled
Water. As I finished the song, I suddenly heard applause. I looked around the room thinking that
my roommate had perhaps slipped in without me noticing — but there was nobody. Then I went
over to the open window of the apartment, and saw an elderly woman standing on the far side of
the pavement below, looking up at me.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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12.(2024·山东·三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
My political career in the Student Union(SU)began by throwing frisbees (飞盘) on the
campus lawn. I would throw a frisbee to someone I didn’t know and they would throw it to
someone they didn’t know. Before long, we had built a community of people who met every day
at lunch to throw frisbees.
Besides frisbees, the group decided to climb the mountain near our campus. When we
reached the peak, it felt like we were at summer camp. We laughed, danced and told jokes.It was
totally fun. While playing like little children in the cool mountain air, we all decided to do it again
the following week. Our motto (座右铭) was “Bring a Friend” . We started out with a small group
of hikers. But as the word spread, the number of participants increased.We made it a rule to climb
the mountain every weekend. All of us were passionate about the fantastic experience, which we
were looking forward to.
One day on campus, I decided to throw my frisbee to some strangers, run over and invite
them to climb the mountain. Much to my surprise, a girl sitting in a wheelchair got hold of it. Her
name was Grace. I asked her if she had ever been to the top of the mountain.She said she hadn’t.
Holding the wheelchair tightly, she hung down her head in awkward silence. Then she told me that
she had suffered from lung disease when she was young and depended on oxygen twenty-four
hours a day. So, it was impossible for her to move without help. Fortunately, things got better.
With continuous efforts and treatment, she managed to live on her own with the assistance
of the wheelchair: I told her that my friends and I would carry her if she were up for it. On hearing
what I said, she refused without hesitation, adding that it would be a bother to carry her. But I triedmy best to persuade her to come along with us by talking about the interesting experiences.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Having thought for a while, Grace still refused my offer.
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On the downhilt path, Grace asked me why not run for the SU election.
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13.(2024·浙江嘉兴·二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
Special#2,Please
My flight arrived in San Diego around midnight, and by the time I drove home and got into
bed it was nearly 2:00 a. m. I was tired and jet-lagged when I dragged myself out of the bed.
Nevertheless,I had to be up bright and early that morning: I was the opening keynoter(主旨发言
人) at a national conference.
In short, I needed to recover quickly. A hearty breakfast in the early morning sun was what I
needed. I headed for Carlos & Annie’s, a popular restaurant located in the heart of the seaside
town.
“I’d like steak and eggs, please,” I said to the waitress after I had finally found a table in the
restaurant. “Oh, I'm sorry,” she apologized. “We're out of Special#2. We've served the last of our
steaks. How about Special#14?” “Oh, no steak and eggs?” I couldn't seem to accept it.
I'm not sure if it was my heartfelt sigh that caught Carlos, the owner's attention. His warm,
caring brown eyes seemed determined to pinpoint the best solution. He then said, “You know, Ithink I did see one final steak back
there.”
Pressing my luck,I quickly declared, “Wow,that would be great. But you know, I’m not sure
if I want a breakfast stenk at all. What I really want is a steak—one that’s two inches thick, tender
and juicy, served medium rare.” “Not to worry,” Carlos assured meand left. The young waitress
gave me a wink(眨眼) and said with a knowing smile, “Carlosis being Carlos again!” I did not
give her words much thought.
Then, I noticed Carlos as he left the restaurant through the side door and walked into a
neighborhood grocery store across the street. Carlos exchanged morning greetings with everyone
he knew and even helped the owner of the bookstore next door by holding the items that filled her
arms. Then he reentered the restaurant with a bag in his hand.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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14.(2024·山东枣庄·二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段,使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
Several years ago, I worked as a writing teacher in a rural middle school. I knew all mystudents. They trusted me with their stories and so I was given the privilege of having a secret
bond with each one of them. I taught my students about the power of words, and tried to let them
find expression through writing. We learned to trust each other, because we learned how hard it
was to write openly and honestly, and we learned sharing your words took courage. I was always
amazed at the words that came from my students’ hearts.
Later, we had a new student to the school, Al. Al was small and looked younger than other
students in my class. He was with us for only a short while and still trying to fit in. So I was a little
surprised when he volunteered to read. I smiled and nodded for him to do, while in my mind I was
afraid that the others would make fun of the new kid after he read. The room fell silent, and Al
began to read.
“If I had one wish, it would be to meet my dad...” He started out loud and clear.
He had held the attention of my usually restless students for what seemed like 15 minutes. He
told of how he had never known his father, who had left the family when he was a baby. He shared
the intimate details of his struggles to be the only man in the house at such a young age, of having
to mow the lawn and fix broken pipes. He revealed to us the thoughts that went through his mind
constantly about where his father might be and why he might have left.
注意:
1. 续写的词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I looked around the classroom, finding no snickers (窃笑).
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When Al finished the last sentence, all the class stood up and applauded.
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15.(2024·湖南娄底·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
As my mom says, love is simple. There came a time in my life, over two years ago, when I
had the desire to impact someone’s life positively. My friend Kelley told me about a volunteer trip
she had taken to Gary, West Virginia, and it was a life-changing experience. After looking into
service opportunities, I signed up to take a volunteer trip to Gary.
Volunteer trips have become increasingly popular among young people seeking meaningful
experiences. They gain access to a wide range of volunteer projects concerning various fields such
as education, environmental conservation, community development, and more.
When we arrived in Gary, I noticed how different the town was from where I lived. Houses
were built on little hills. There were few stores or restaurants in town; most had closed. You were
lucky to find a gas station or grocery store.
My job was to help build a new school. The work days were long and hot. We awoke at 6 a.
m. and worked through the day in 90 degree heat. There were always encouraging people by my
side who helped keep me going. Anyway, it was an unforgettable experience.
Then last summer, I decided to challenge myself by taking a volunteer trip abroad with
some other volunteers and taking up meaningful volunteer work in a foreign community. My
destination was a remote village in Honduras, a country in Central America. I wanted to teach
science to the poor children there.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Eager to participate, I talked to my parents, but they didn’t say yes at first.
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Then we wasted no time in getting ready for our science teaching.
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