续写语料整合
目录
一、 情感细节描写：紧张、焦虑.................................................................................................2
二、 情感细节描写：羞愧、自责.................................................................................................4
三、 情感细节描写：激动、兴奋.................................................................................................7
四、 情感细节描写：开心快乐.....................................................................................................9
五、 情感细节描写：恐惧(一).................................................................................................... 11
六、 情感细节描写：恐惧(二).................................................................................................... 13
七、 情感细节描写：震惊、惊讶(一)........................................................................................15
八、 情感细节描写：震惊、惊讶(二)........................................................................................17
九、 情感细节描写：愤怒(一).................................................................................................... 19
十、 情感细节描写：愤怒(二).................................................................................................... 21
十一、 情感细节描写：困惑与迷茫...........................................................................................23
十二、 情感细节描写：伤心、难过...........................................................................................25
十三、 情感细节描写：伤心、沮丧、孤独...............................................................................27
十四、 情感细节描写：绝望不安...............................................................................................29
十五、 情感细节描写：爱与感动...............................................................................................31
十六、 情感细节描写：后悔、同情...........................................................................................33
十七、 动作细节描写：走、跑...................................................................................................35
十八、 动作细节描写：哭泣流泪(一)........................................................................................37
十九、 动作细节描写：哭泣流泪(二)........................................................................................39
二十、 动作细节描写：“眼看”...............................................................................................41
二十一、 动作细节描写：“腿动”...........................................................................................43
二十二、 动作细节描写：“脚动”...........................................................................................45
二十三、 动作细节描写：“动胳膊”.......................................................................................47
二十四、 动作细节描写：头部动作...........................................................................................48
二十五、 动作细节描写：眼部动作...........................................................................................50
二十六、 动作细节描写：手部动作...........................................................................................52
二十七、 修辞妙用之比喻...........................................................................................................54
二十八、 修辞妙用之夸张...........................................................................................................56
二十九、 修辞妙用之拟人...........................................................................................................58
三十、 自然环境细节描写(一).................................................................................................... 59
三十一、 自然环境细节描写(二)................................................................................................61
三十二、 自然环境细节描写(三)................................................................................................63
三十三、 外貌细节描写：身材、皮肤.......................................................................................65
三十四、 外貌细节描写：头发、眉毛.......................................................................................67
三十五、 主旨升华之善举助人...................................................................................................69
三十六、 主旨升华之善举助人...................................................................................................71
一、情感细节描写：紧张、焦虑
单
词
panic
①
n．恐慌；v.(使)惊慌，惊慌失措→panicked adj
stammer
②
vi.结结巴巴地说
tremble
③
vi.颤抖，哆嗦
unease
④
n.不安→uneasy adj.不安的
tense
⑤
adj.紧张的→tension n.紧张；压力
nervous
⑥
adj.紧张的→nervousness n．紧张
scare
⑦
vt.使恐惧；使害怕→scared adj.害怕的→scary adj.恐怖的；吓人的
terrify
⑧
vt.使恐惧；使惊吓→terrifying adj.极其可怕的→terrified adj.非常害
怕的；极度惊恐的
词
块
be on pins and needles
①
如坐针毡
have butterflies in one’s stomach
②
忐忑不安
palms sweat
③
手心出汗
be seized/overcome with panic
④
惊慌失措
one’s heart in one’s mouth
⑤
心提到嗓子眼
pace restlessly up and down
⑥
不安地踱来踱去
hands shake/tremble
⑦
手发抖
feel like ants on a hot pan
⑧
感觉像热锅上的蚂蚁
one’s heart beats/pounds wildly/violently with fear
⑨
吓得心怦怦跳
feel one’s throat tight and one’s mouth dry
⑩
感到喉咙发紧，嘴巴发干
句
型
1.All students were waiting for their first examination results anxiously，
being on pins and needles.(比喻句)所有的学生都焦急地等待着他们第一
次考试的结果，如坐针毡。
2.When he thought that he would be faced with completely new
surroundings，a flood of fear welled up in him.(无灵主语句)想到他将面
临全新的环境，一阵恐惧涌上了他的心头。
3.I felt so scared/nervous that my throat tightened and my knees weak.我
感到很害怕/紧张，嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。
4.Waves of fear swept over/seized/flooded over us. Our hearts pounded
violently with fear.阵阵恐惧涌上我们的心头，我们吓得心怦怦跳。
5．His heart beat/raced/pounded wildly and his legs trembled.他的心狂跳
着，双腿发抖。
6．I froze with terror，too scared to move an inch.我吓得呆住了，寸步
难行。
微场景运用
怀着忐忑不安的心情，我走上了舞
台。当我站在舞台上面对广大观众
的那一刻，我吓得心怦怦跳，手心
出汗。我的大脑一片空白，喉咙发
紧。明亮的灯光和众多面孔都在盯
着我，加剧了我的焦虑。我试图深
吸一口气并平静下来，但紧张情绪
仍将我笼罩。那一刻沉重氛围弥漫
在空中，我深知所有目光都聚焦在
我身上。当我开始发言时，我的声
音微微颤抖，开场的那句话也说得
结结巴巴。
Having butterflies in my stomach,I stepped
onto the stage.The moment I stood on stage
in front of a large audience,my heart began
to pound widely and my palms
grew
sweaty.My mind went blank and my throat
felt tight.The bright lights and a sea of faces
staring back at me,adding to my anxiety. I
tried to take a deep breath and calmed
down,but nervousness overwhelmed me.
The weight of the moment hung heavy in
the air,and I knew that all eyes were fixed
on me.As I began to speak,my voice
trembled slightly and I stammered over this
opening sentence.
二、情感细节描写：羞愧、自责
单
词
shame n
①
．羞愧→shameful adj.可耻的；丢脸的→ashamed adj.羞愧的
guilt n
②
．内疚→guilty adj.内疚的
complain v
③
．抱怨→complaint n．抱怨
discourage v
④
．使气馁；使沮丧→discouraged adj.气馁的，沮丧的
词
块
in shame
①
羞愧地
a sense of shame
②
羞耻感
be/feel ashamed of
③
对……感到羞愧
be struck dead with shame
④
羞愧得要死
feel one's face burning
⑤
感到脸在燃烧
lower/drop/bow one's head in shame
⑥
羞愧地低下了头
with a deep sense of shame/guilt
⑦
带着深深的羞耻/自责感
feel embarrassed and guilty about...
⑧
对……感到尴尬和内疚
feel the blood rushing to one's face
⑨
感到血液涌到脸上
句
型
1.Without a word，she hung her head in shame.她一句话也没有说，羞愧
地低下了头。
2．So ashamed was he that he could feel his face burning.他羞愧难当，
感觉脸在燃烧。
3 ．After a dead silence ，tears of guilt welled up in his eyes. Tom
murmured that he would never make fun of Mr Hope.在一阵沉默之后，
内疚的泪水从眼睛里涌出。汤姆低声说他再也不会取笑 Hope 先生了。
4．I felt embarrassed and guilty about my silly mistake.我为自己愚蠢的
错误感到尴尬和羞愧。
5．An expression of shame crossed his face.(无灵主语句)他面露愧色。
6．She stood still，head bowed，hands clasped in front of her.她一动不
动地站着，低着头，双手紧握在身前。
微场景运用
整个学期，他都沉迷于电脑游戏，
然后他的期末考试结果出来了。不
The whole term,he was addicted to
computer games
and then came the result of
his final examination.Needless to say,he was
not content with it.However,he made so
用说，他对此并不满意。然而，他
犯了那么多愚蠢的错误，这让他非
常羞愧和内疚。一想到父母失望的
表情，他就产生了一种深深的羞愧
感。他羞愧得快要哭了。深受打
击，他几乎失去了信心，打算彻底
放弃。幸运的是，他的老师来帮助
他，鼓励他对自己和未来负责。他
最终决定不再玩电脑游戏，从此专
心学习。
many silly mistakes,which made him
extremely ashamed and guilty.Thinking of
the
disappointed
expression
of his
parents,a deep sense of shame spread into
his mind(无灵主语句).So ashamed
was he
that( 倒装句) he was on the verge of
crying.Deeply discouraged( 形容词作状
语),he almost lost heart and intended to give
up completely.Fortunately,his teacher came
to his assistance,encouraging him to be
responsible for himself and his
future
(分词
作状语).Finally,he made up his mind to
quit
⑧
playing computer games and focused
on his study from then on.
三、情感细节描写：激动、兴奋
单
词
dance vi.
①
雀跃
skip vi.
②
蹦蹦跳跳
excited adj.
③
激动的，兴奋的→excitedly adv.激动地，兴奋地→excitement
n．激动，兴奋
thrilled adj.
④
激动的，兴奋的→thrill n．激动，兴奋
词
块
to one's excitement/thrill
①
令某人激动的是
tremble with excitement
②
激动得发抖
be flushed with excitement
③
激动得脸红
shed tears of excitement
④
流下了激动的泪水
thump/pound with excitement
⑤
心激动得怦怦跳
(heart) be filled with excitement
⑥
满心激动
dance/jump with excitement
⑦
激动得雀跃/跳起来
one's eyes sparkle/dance/shine/twinkle with excitement
⑧
眼里闪烁着兴奋的光
芒
句
型
1 ．On the journey to the lake ，a wave of excitement/thrill spread
through my body.(无灵主语句)在去湖边的路上，一股兴奋/激动的情绪在
我的身体里蔓延开来。
2．Hearing the exciting news，she shed tears of excitement.听到这个激
动人心的消息，她流下了激动的眼泪。
3．As it was the first time that we had a picnic in the open air，our
faces were flushed with excitement.由于这是我们第一次在户外野餐，我
们激动得脸红了。
4．Every time I arrived home，my pet dog would gladly greet me，
wagging its tail in excitement.每次我到家，我的宠物狗都会高兴地迎接
我，兴奋地摇着尾巴。
5．Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food，we danced in
excitement.呼吸着新鲜的空气，闻着美味的食物，我们兴奋地手舞足蹈。
微场景运用
暑假前，我们已经计划好了去杭州
的行程，并在网上预订了住宿。在
Early before the summer vacation,we ha
d
planned our journey to Hangzhou and
booked our accommodations on
the
Internet
．
On the journey to
去杭州的旅途中，妈妈的眼睛闪烁
着兴奋的光芒。一到达酒店，我们
立刻卸下行李，迫不及待地想要探
索这座城市。怀着激动的心情行走
在城市中，感觉就像走进了童话世
界。第二天，我们参观了令人惊叹
的西湖，那里美丽的景色很快让我
们屏息凝视。呼吸着新鲜的空气，
妈妈欣赏着美丽的风景，脸上洋溢
着兴奋的神采。
Hangzhou,m om's eyes
sparkled
/ twinkled
/ shone with excitement
(无灵主语句).The
moment we arrived at the hotel,we
immediately unloaded the luggage and
couldn't wait to explore the city.Our eyes
shining with excitement,walking in the city
is just like wandering into a fairy tale.The
next day,we paid a visit to the incredible
West Lake,whose amazing sight soon took
our breath away.Breathing the fresh
air,mom admired the beautiful view,her face
glowing/flushing with excitement．
四、情感细节描写：开心快乐
单
词
overjoyed adj.
①
欣喜若狂的 ②beam v．
眉开眼笑
dance v
③
.手舞足蹈 ④delighted adj.高兴的→delight n.开心；快乐
cheerful adj.
⑤
快乐的；高兴的→cheerfully adv.兴高采烈地
词
块
be wild with joy
①
欣喜若狂
glow with happiness
②
洋溢着微笑
clap one's hands with delight
③
高兴地拍手
dance/jump with joy
④
高兴地跳起来
light up with pleasure
⑤
喜笑颜开
wear a happy expression
⑥
面带喜色
sparkle/shine/twinkle with joy
⑦
闪耀着喜悦的光芒
to one's great joy/delight/happiness
⑧
令某人高兴的是
句
型
1．Knowing you are admitted to your dream university，I am excited
and weep for joy.得知你考上了心仪的大学，我欢欣鼓舞，流下了快乐的
泪水。
2．At the sight of the breakfast on the table，the mother felt a warm
wave of happiness welling up in her heart.Tears of joy in her eyes，she
gathered them in her arms and choked，“Thank you！”当看到桌上的
早餐时，母亲心中涌起一股温暖的幸福感。她眼中含着喜悦的泪水，紧紧
地抱住他们，哽咽着说：“谢谢你们！”
3．From the house come bursts of merry laughter.从房子里传出阵阵欢快
的笑声。
4．She had the pleasure of seeing him look surprised.看他好像吃了一
惊，她感到开心。
5 ．When the winning goal was scored in the final seconds of the
game，a yell of delight erupted from the crowd.在比赛的最后几秒，当制
胜一球被打进时，人群中爆发出一阵欢呼声。
6．His eyes twinkle with pleasure every time he remembers last winter.
每当他想起去年冬天，就喜上眉梢。
微场景运用
得知孩子们的想法后，梅雷迪斯
夫人非常高兴，笑得格外灿烂。
然后，孩子们兴高采烈地开始准
备爆米花。他们拿着一篮爆米
花，愉快地前往伯纳德家，与伯
纳德分享这个好主意。听闻他们
Learning the children's idea,Mrs.Meredith
was so pleased/ delighted/ cheerful/
overjoyed that she smiled brightly.Then,the
children got down to preparing popcorn
happily/ cheerfully/ joyfully/merrily.With a
basket of popcorn,they left for the Bernard's
所言，伯纳德高兴地几乎跳了起
来，眼中盈满泪水。看到这一篮
爆米花，他的父母亦是满心欢
喜。随后，令他倍感愉悦的是，
爆米花美味可口，很快便销售一
空。
house cheerfully to share with Bernard the
good plan.Hearing what they said,Bernard
was so delighted/glad/happy/pleased/cheerful
that he almost jumped up,with tears filling
his eyes.At the sight of the basket of
popcorn,his parents were also seized with
happiness/wild with joy.Later,much to his
delight/joy/happiness/pleasure,the popcorn
was so tasty that it soon sold out.
五、情感细节描写：恐惧(一)
单
词
dreadful adj.
①
可怕的；极坏的
terrible/horrible/awful adj.
②
可怕的
frightened adj.
③
害怕的→frightening adj.令人害怕的→frighten v．使惊恐；
使惊吓
scare v
④
．使害怕→scared adj.害怕的→scary adj.惊悚的，吓人的
panic v
⑤
．(使)惊慌 n．惊恐→panicked adj.恐慌的
词
块
be in panic/be seized with panic
①
惊慌失措
be pale with fright
②
吓得面无血色
be numb/frozen with fear
③
吓呆了
tremble with terror/horror
④
吓得发抖
be scared to death/half dead with fright
⑤
吓得要死
cast a terrified look at
⑥
惊恐地看了……一眼
one's throat tightens with horror/fear
⑦
某人吓得喉咙发紧
(make) one's hair stand on end (
⑧
使)某人毛骨悚然
one's heart be stuck on one's throat
⑨
心卡在嗓子眼
句
型
1 ．A flood of fear welled up in her when she walked in the empty
street.(无灵主语句)走在空荡荡的街道上，一阵恐惧涌上她的心头。
2．I was wandering in the wood when a snake came out and scared me
to death.我正在林间散步，突然一条蛇蹿了出来，吓得我要死。
3．I froze with terror，too scared to move an inch.我吓得呆住了，寸步
难行。
4．Seeing the bloody scene，she uncontrollably let out a scream of terror
and fainted on the ground.看到这血腥的一幕，她不受控制地发出恐惧的
尖叫，昏倒在地。
5．I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.我吓
得嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。
微场景运用
大火开始蔓延到整个酒店，及时逃
离的人们仍然非常恐慌。就在这
时，人群中传来一声尖锐的尖叫。
一位吓坏了的年轻母亲哭着说她的
孩子还在酒店房间里。听到这句
话，人群中涌起一阵恐惧，他们不
The fire started to spread all over the
hotel，and people fleeing out of it in time
were still in great panic
. Just at that
moment ，a sharp scream came out of the
crowd. A young mother who was dead
with fright(定语从句) cried that her baby
was still in the hotel room.Hearing that，a
flood of fear welled up in the crowd(无灵主
知道在这种情况下能怎么办。他们
试图安慰那个被吓得魂不附体的女
人，却不知道说什么。他们几乎失
去了希望，这时一个年轻人迅速跑
到酒店前的游泳池，把水倒在夹克
上，然后冲进着火的房间。看到这
一幕，所有人都吓呆了，希望他能
成功地把孩子抱出来。每个人的心
都卡在嗓子眼里，直到他们听到了
婴儿的哭声。
语句) ，and they didn't know what they
could do in that situation.They tried to
comfort the woman who had been scared
out of her wits ，but words just failed
them.They almost lost hope when a young
man quickly ran to the pool in front of the
hotel，poured water on his jacket and then
rushed into the burning room.Seeing the
scene，everyone
was numb with fear ，wishing he could
successfully bring the baby out.
Everyone's heart was stuck in their throat
until they heard some cry of a baby.
六、情感细节描写：恐惧(二)
单
词
tremble/shake v
①
.颤抖
sweat v. & n
②
.出汗
freeze v
③
.吓呆
flee v
④
.逃离
scream v
⑤
.尖叫
shrink v
⑥
.退缩；畏缩
词
块
be rooted to the spot
①
定在原地
sweat with fear
②
吓得直冒汗
let out a scream of horror
③
发出惊声尖叫
shake/tremble with fear
④
吓得发抖；胆战心惊
one's knees feel weak
⑤
某人(吓得)膝盖发软
break out in a cold sweat
⑥
突然冒出一身冷汗
make one's hair stand on end
⑦
使某人毛骨悚然
have one's heart in one's mouth
⑧
某人的心提到嗓子眼
句
型
1.The horror movie made my hair stand on end.那部恐怖电影让我毛骨悚
然。
2．I could feel my heart pounding wildly and my palms sweating.我能够
感觉到我的心怦怦跳，手心直冒汗。
3．My heart seems to stand still when I got the terrible news.(夸张)听到
这个骇人的消息，我的心几乎停止了跳动。
4．Last night，I dreamed about a fierce dog chasing after me，which
had my heart in my mouth.昨晚，我梦到一只恶狗追赶我，我的心都提到
了嗓子眼。
5．My heart almost jumped into my mouth when the bear approached
me.当那只熊向我靠近时，我的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。
6．He wanted to run away but found himself rooted to the spot.他想逃
离，却发现自己一动也不能动。
微场景运用
然后轮到我了。站在舞台上，我可
以感觉到我的心怦怦直跳，手心直
Then came my turn.Standing on the stage，
I could feel my heart pounding wildly
and
my palms sweating. So nervous was I
that(倒装)my mind completely went blank.I
冒汗。我太紧张了以至于脑子一片
空白。我想逃跑，却根本动不了，
我的膝盖发软。我努力思考，试图
查阅我的笔记，尽管这是不被允许
的。我的手颤抖得太厉害了，我的
演讲稿滑到了地上。尽管是炎炎夏
日，我突然出了一身冷汗。“帮帮
我吧！”我能听到一个绝望的声音
在我的脑海中响起。
wanted to flee ，but I was rooted on the
spot ，with my knees weak(with 复合结
构).I struggled to think hard，attempting to
refer to my
notes
( 分词作状语
) ，
though it
was not allowed.My hands trembled too
wildly and my speech script slid onto the
ground.Summer day as it was，I broke out
in a
cold
sweat
．“ Help me please！”
I could hear a desperate voice ringing in my
mind.
七、情感细节描写：震惊、惊讶(一)
单
词
shocked adj.
①
震惊的
stun vt.
②
使震惊→stunned adj.目瞪口呆的
amazement n
③
．惊愕；惊诧→amazed adj.惊诧的→amazing adj.令人惊诧的
astonish vt.
④
使吃惊→astonishment n．惊讶→astonishing adj.令人惊讶的
→astonished adj.感到惊讶的
词
块
be numb with surprise/shock
①
惊呆
wear a look of surprise on one's face
②
面带惊讶的表情
to one's shock/surprise/amazement/astonishment
③
令人惊讶的是
a look of surprise spread over/flash across one's face
④
脸上闪过惊讶的表情
too surprised to utter a word/be speechless with shock
⑤
惊讶得说不出话来
句
型
1．So stunned was she that she could hardly say any word.(倒装结构)她
惊愕得说不出话来。
2．They stopped in their tracks，raised their heads and stared at him in
amazement.他们停下脚步，抬起头，惊讶地注视着他。
3 ．A look of surprise spread over the face of my companion as he
listened to my story.(无灵主语句)我的同伴听了我的故事，脸上露出惊讶
的表情。
4．At the news of his death，I was so shocked that I went numb.听到
他去世的消息，我太过震惊，呆若木鸡。
5．Rose froze with shock，as if rooted on the ground.(比喻句)罗斯惊呆
了，好像扎根在地上一样。
6．I stared at him in shock and a faint sound of surprise escaped my
throat.我惊愕地盯着他，喉咙里发出微弱的惊愕声。
微场景运用
令众人震惊的是，附近的
一个小镇发生了龙卷风。
听闻此噩讯，玛丽惊得呆
若木鸡，动弹不得。接
着，玛丽将此消息告知她
的孩子们，问他们是否愿
意和那些不幸的人分享他
们所拥有的东西。令她大
为惊讶的是，所有孩子都
甘愿捐赠一些物品。当安
妮把她心爱的玩具放进盒
子时，她哥哥脸上闪过一
丝讶异。他瞪大双眼盯着
她。未发一言，他返回房
Much to people's shock,a tornado occurred in a small
town nearby. At the bad news,Mary froze with
shock,as if rooted to the ground.Then,Mary shared the
news with her children,and asked if they would like to
share what they had with the less fortunate.She was
amazed/ surprised/astonished that all the children were
willing to donate something.When Anne placed her
favourite toy in the box,a spark of surprise flashed
across her brother's face.He stared at her with wide
eyes.Without a word,he went back to his room and ran
back with his favourite toy to the living room.
Astonished/Surprised/Amazed,Mary realized that he
间，拿着自己心爱的玩具
跑回客厅。玛丽感到惊
愕，她意识到他也明白了
自己此举的深意。
had also recognized what her action meant.
八、情感细节描写：震惊、惊讶(二)
单
词
surprisingly adv.
①
惊人地；出乎意料地
jaw-dropping adj.
②
令人震惊的
disbelief n
③
．
不信；怀疑
unbelievable/incredible adj.
④
令人难以置信的
open-mouthed adj.
⑤
(因惊愕)张着口的，瞠目结舌的
词
块
gasp in astonishment
①
惊得倒吸一口气
gape at
②
张口结舌地看
raise a lot of eyebrows
③
令人瞠目结舌
beyond one's expectations
④
出乎某人的意料
take one's breath away
⑤
使人大吃一惊
shake one's head in disbelief
⑥
难以置信地摇头
stare at sb with wide eyes
⑦
目瞪口呆地看着某人
eyes widen in surprise
⑧
惊讶地瞪大眼睛
one's mouth drop/hang open in surprise
⑨
惊讶地张大嘴巴
句
型
1．I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.He looked at me in
disbelief，asking me what to do.(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写)我跑回去告
诉甘特这个坏消息。他难以置信地看着我，问我该怎么办。
2 ．She stared at me when I described my adventurous travelling
experience，her eyes widening in astonishment.(独立主格结构)当我描述我
的冒险旅行经历时，她盯着我，震惊地瞪大了眼睛。
3．I attentively listened to his story，with my jaw dropping completely.
(with 复合结构)我聚精会神地听他的故事，目瞪口呆。
4 ．The natural beauty here almost took our breath away ，completely
knocking us out.这里的自然美景深深地震撼了我们，让我们完全为之倾
倒。
5 ．To his shock ，the whole matter changed completely beyond his
expectations.令他震惊的是，整个事情的变化完全出乎他的意料。
微场景运用
尽管汤姆下定决心要尽全力救
他的父亲，但他现在陷入了深
深的绝望，不知道下一步该怎
么办。汤姆漫无目的地走在街
上，突然发现一个用一些报纸
包起来的小包裹。他走上前，
弯下腰把它捡了起来。他好奇
地打开它的那一刻，惊讶地瞪
大了眼睛。里面有一堆现金和
一些卡片。汤姆惊得倒吸一口
气，努力保持冷静。他脑海中
闪过一个念头：他或许可以占
有这笔钱。然而，他很快冷静
下来，意识到他必须尽快找到
失主，以防他担心。在仔细检
查了包裹后，他终于联系上了
失主。看到失主，汤姆惊讶地
张大了嘴巴。正是那位催促他
为父亲筹钱做手术的医生。医
生紧紧地拥抱了汤姆，表示非
常感激。作为对汤姆诚实善良
的回报，他答应免费为汤姆的
父亲做手术。这是一个多么令
Though determined that he would be willing to
do whatever he could to save his father,Tom was
now in deep despair,not knowing what to do
next.Walking in the street aimlessly,Tom
suddenly spotted a small package wrapped by
some newspapers.He stepped forward,bent down
and picked it up.The moment he opened it with
curiosity,his eyes widened in amazement.Inside
were a pile of cash and some cards.Tom gasped
in astonishment,trying to keep calm.An idea
flashed in his mind: he may take possession of
the money.However,he soon cooled down and
realized he must find the owner as soon as
possible in case he was worried.Having
examined the package carefully,he eventually
managed to contact the owner.Seeing the
owner,Tom's mouth dropped open in surprise.It
was the doctor who urged him to raise money for
his father's operation.The doctor hugged Tom
tightly,showing his great gratitude.In return for
Tom's honesty and kindness,he promised to
operate on Tom's father for free.What an
unbelievable story it was(感叹句)！
人难以置信的故事！
九、情感细节描写：愤怒(一)
单
词
rage n
①
.愤怒；vi.发怒 ②boil vi.怒火中烧 ③cross adj.生气的
bark vt
④
.厉声发令 ⑤explode vi.勃然(大怒)；大发(雷霆)
mad adj.
⑥
很生气→madly adv.发狂地
angry adj.
⑦
生气的→anger n.生气；愤怒 vt.激怒→angrily adv.生气地
annoy vt.
⑧
使生气；使恼怒→annoyed adj.生气的→annoying adj.令人生气的
→annoyance n．生气；愤怒
词
块
flame with anger/rage
①
气得脸通红 ②turn white with anger 气得脸色发白
be purple with anger/rage
③
气得脸色发紫 ④a flame of anger 怒火
cloud (over) with anger
⑤
怒容满面 ⑥boil with anger 勃然大怒
lose one's temper
⑦
发脾气 ⑧bite one's head off 气愤地对某人大喊大叫
glare/stare angrily/furiously/wildly at sb
⑨
怒视某人
give sb a look/glance of burning anger
⑩
愤怒地看/瞥了某人一眼
句
型
1 ．My teacher was extremely displeased at my conduct and almost
shouted at me angrily.我的老师对我的行为极为不满，几乎愤怒地对我大
喊大叫。
2．The moment I saw him，a flame of anger shot through me.一看到他
我就怒火中烧。
3．He got hot under the collar when he was asked to be responsible for
what he had done.当他被要求为自己的行为负责时，他很愤怒。
4．Rage flowed through her like lava when she got the annoying news.
当她得到这个令人气愤的消息时，愤怒像熔岩一样弥漫她全身。
5．Her silly conduct really made my blood boil.她愚蠢的行为真让我怒火
中烧。
6．One thing you should keep in mind is that your certain habits may
get on other people's nerves.你得记住一件事：你的某些习惯可能会把别
人惹毛。
微场景运用
我们的友谊起伏不定，犹如海
上漂泊的船只。对彼此的不满
持续累积。某个夜晚，冲突爆
发了。凯特走进房间。旋即，
我听闻她大声嚷道：“把你的
鞋子拿走！为何放在我床
下！”我被震住了，只见我的
鞋子朝我飞来。我气得满脸通
红。她怎么能如此行事？我同
样无法抑制自己的怒火。我愤
怒地起身，开始大声吼叫。她
回吼的声音更大。我们两人都
不愿冷静下来，好好倾听对
方。房间里弥漫着愤怒的气
息。若不是一通电话，我们连
一分钟都无法共处。
Our friendship went ups and downs like a
boat on the sea. Dissatisfaction with the other
was accumulating. War broke out one evening.
Kate came into the room. Soon ，I heard her
booming，“Take your shoes away! Why under
my bed！” Deafened，I saw my shoes flying
at me.I flushed with anger．How could she act
like that？ I could not control my anger either
．
I jumped to my feet angrily and started
yelling ．She yelled back louder.Neither of us
was willing to calm down to be a good
listener.The room was filled with anger ．We
could not have stayed together for a single
minute but for a phone call.
十、情感细节描写：愤怒(二)
单
词
shout vi.
①
喊叫 vi.& vt.怒骂 ②scream vi.& vt.尖叫
roar vi.
③
咆哮 ④stamp vi.& vt.跺(脚)
storm vi.
⑤
怒吼；大发雷霆
词
块
shout in anger/furiously
①
怒吼
answer through clenched teeth
②
咬牙切齿地回答
shake one's fist at sb
③
挥拳(威胁)
slam/pound sth with fists
④
用拳头猛捶
spring up in anger
⑤
气得跳起来 ⑥stamp one's foot in anger 气得跺脚
hands tremble with rage/anger
⑦
手因愤怒而颤抖
slam the door furiously/angrily behind sb
⑧
愤然摔门而去
句
型
1．Boiling with rage，he shook his fist at me fiercely.(动词-ing 形式短语
作状语)他勃然大怒，猛烈地向我挥舞拳头。
2．Being scolded without reason，he stamped his foot in anger.因为被毫
无缘由地责骂，他气得直跺脚。
3．I went from shock and disbelief to absolute horror，then came the
anger，and finally I just went numb.我从震惊和怀疑到彻底恐惧，再到愤
怒，最后只剩麻木了。
4．He was tongue-tied with anger，unable to utter a single word，his
hands trembling.他气得张口结舌，一句话也说不出来，双手直颤抖。
5．I sprang up in anger，turned around and stormed out of the room，
slamming the door furiously behind me.(动作链描写)我愤怒地跳了起来，
转过身，气呼呼地冲出房间，怒不可遏地砰地关上身后的门。
微场景运用
一大早，他踮着脚走进厨房，
打算为他喝醉酒的父亲做一顿
早餐。因为不知道做饭的窍
门，他很快就把整个厨房弄得
一团糟。就在这时，他的父亲
醒来，愤怒地责骂了他并要求
他立刻离开厨房。尽管男孩平
时很温顺、谦逊，但他这次差
点陷入愤怒并对父亲发脾气。
他的双手因愤怒而颤抖，他转
过头不去看他的父亲。他父亲
又命令他赶快出去。这一次他
再也无法抑制自己的愤怒和委
屈了。“我正在为你准备早
餐！”他愤怒地咆哮出来，眼
泪顺着他的脸颊流了下来。之
后，他怒气冲冲地走出房间，
怒不可遏地砰地关上身后的
门，冲回自己的卧室，留下震
惊和内疚的父亲。
Early in the morning，he tiptoed into the kitchen
with the intention of cooking a breakfast for his
drunk father.Not knowing the tricks of cooking，
he soon made the whole room in a mess.Just at
that time ，his father woke up ，who angrily
scolded him and ordered him to leave the kitchen
immediately(定语从句).Modest and mild as the
boy typically was ，he was to burst into anger
and lose his temper with his father this time.His
hands trembling with anger( 独立主格) ，he
turned his head not to see his father.Again，his
father ordered him to go out quickly.This time he
couldn't contain his anger/rage and grievance any
more.“I was preparing a breakfast for you ！”
he roared with anger，tears streaming down his
cheeks.After that，he stormed out of the room，
slammed the door angrily behind him，rushed
back to his bedroom，leaving his father in shock
and guilty.
十一、情感细节描写：困惑与迷茫
单
词
frown vi.& n
①
．皱眉 ②scratch vt.& vi.挠，搔
puzzle vt.
③
迷惑；使困惑→puzzled adj.困惑的；迷惑不解的→puzzling adj.
使为难的；令人费解的；令人困惑的
confuse vt.
④
混淆；使迷惑→confused adj.迷惑的→confusing adj.难以理解
的；不清楚的→confusion n．困惑
词
块
at a loss
①
不知所措；困惑
mind goes blank
②
头脑空白
eyebrows knot together
③
眉头紧锁
a frown stands on one's face
④
皱着眉头
scratch one's head
⑤
挠头
say/ask with a confused look
⑥
一脸疑惑地说/问
throw sb into total confusion
⑦
使某人陷入了完全的困惑之中
a flood of confusion sweeps over sb
⑧
困惑袭上某人的心头
句
型
1．With a confused look on his face，he had no idea what to do.他露出
困惑的表情，不知道该做什么。
2．When asked to make a speech in public，he scratched his head，
having no idea what to say.当被要求在公开场合发表演讲时，他挠了挠
头，不知道该说什么。
3．Eyebrows knotting together，I went into the office to ask what had
happened on earth.我眉头紧锁，走进办公室去问究竟发生了什么事。
4 ．Looking at the unfamiliar faces ，I felt I was thrown into total
confusion.看着这些陌生的面孔，我感到自己陷入了完全的困惑之中。
微场景运用
史密斯先生一宣布下周将举办
诗歌比赛，我就毫不犹豫地报
名参加了。然而，当我开始为
此做准备时，我的头脑一片空
白，不知道该写什么。 我眉
头紧锁，走到史密斯先生面前
征求他的建议。 得知我的困
惑，史密斯先生笑着说：“你
应该想到什么就写什么。”
他的话使我陷入了完全的困惑
之中，“真的？把我脑子里想
到的都写下来吗？”我一脸疑
惑地问。“是的，只有让你的
想象力自由发挥，你才能写出
有意义的内容。”史密斯先生
解释道。听了他的解释，我的
困惑似乎消失了。我回到教
室，安顿下来，开始了我的创
The instant Mr Smith announced a poetry
contest would be held next week ，I signed up
for it without hesitation．However，when I set
about preparing for it，my mind went blank，
not knowing what to write.With my eyebrows
knotting together(with 复合结构) ，I walked
over to Mr Smith to ask for advice.Learning my
confusion，Mr Smith smiled and said，“You
should write whatever comes into your mind.”
His words
threw me into total
confusion ．“ Really ？Just write whatever
comes into my mind ？” I asked with a
confused look ．“ Yes ，only if you let your
imagination fly freely can you write meaningful
content，” explained Mr Smith.When I heard
this，my confusion seemed to disappear．I went
back to the classroom，settled down and began
作。
my creation.
十二、情感细节描写：伤心、难过
单
词
bitter adj.
①
痛苦的 ②weep vi.哭泣 ③water vi.流泪 ④sink vi.消沉
heartbroken adj.
⑤
心碎的，极为伤心的 ⑥miserable adj.悲惨的,令人痛苦
的
desperate adj.
⑦
绝望的→desperation n．绝望
sad adj.
⑧
伤心的→sadness n．悲哀；悲伤；悲痛
sorrow n
⑨
．悲伤→sorrowful adj.伤心的
词
块
be in a bad mood/feel blue
①
心情不好
shed tears of sorrow
②
流下痛苦的眼泪
deep in sorrow
③
极度悲伤
burst into tears
④
嚎啕大哭
down in the mouth
⑤
垂头丧气，嘴角下垂
be overcome with sadness
⑥
悲伤不已
in a sorrowful/sad tone/voice
⑦
伤心地说
one's eyes be filled with/full of sadness
⑧
某人的眼里满是悲伤
with a heavy/sinking/sorrowful/broken heart
⑨
心情沉重/难过/心碎
with tears streaming/rolling down one's face
⑩
泪流满面
句
1．He seemed quite broken-hearted，and even cried a little.他似乎悲痛欲
型
绝，甚至还哭了一会。
2．As he looked at Katherine，great sorrow clouded his eyes.他看着凯瑟
琳，满眼忧伤。
3 ．I could not hold back my tears any more and I began to cry
uncontrollably.我再也无法遏制住自己的泪水，开始不由自主地痛哭起来。
4．When we heard the bad news，tears streamed down our cheeks.当我
们听到这个坏消息时，泪水顺着我们的脸颊流了下来。
5．Hearing the bad news，so desperate was he that he drowned sadness
in wine.(倒装结构)听到这个糟糕的消息，他绝望地借酒消愁。
微场景运用
作为一名新博主，她从未想过自己
会成为网络欺凌的目标。想到这些
疯狂的批评和尖锐的评论，她陷入
了绝望的深渊。这些天她总是心情
不好，想知道为什么会发生这种
事。心烦意乱之下，她向朋友寻求
安慰。正是她的朋友在她遇到麻烦
时总是陪伴着她。当她讲她的故事
时，喉咙哽咽了。她抱怨说，她总
是铭记要彬彬有礼，从不取笑别
人。他们为什么要针对她？她现在
完全不知所措，悲痛不已。
As a new blogger,never had she
thought she would become a target for
cyberbullies.Thinking
of these wild
criticisms and sharp comments,she fell into
the depth of despair．These days she was
always in a bad mood，wondering why that
should happen to her.Upset and
heartbroken(形容词作状语)，she turned to
her friend for comfort.It was her friend
that/who was always keeping her
company( 强调句)when she was in
trouble.When telling her story ，she had a
lump in her throat.She complained that she
always kept good manners in mind and
never made fun of others．Why should they
target her? She was totally at a loss and deep
in sorrow now.
十三、情感细节描写：伤心、沮丧、孤独
单
词
heartbroken adj.
①
心碎的②upset adj.沮丧的；n.沮丧③miserable adj.悲惨的
grief n
④
．悲伤；悲痛 ⑤lonely adj.孤独的→loneliness n．孤独
painful adj.
⑥
痛苦的→pain n．痛苦⑦sorrow n．悲伤→sorrowful adj.悲伤
的
frustrated adj.
⑧
沮丧的→frustration n．沮丧
词
块
with a heavy/sinking heart
①
心情沉重 ②with/full of sadness 满是悲伤
cry one's eyes out
③
痛哭 ④be down/low in spirits 情绪低落
cry one's heart out
⑤
悲痛 ⑥sadness surges within sb 某人心中涌起悲伤
sink into loneliness
⑦
陷入孤独 ⑧feel a surge of sadness 感到一阵悲伤
drown one's sadness in wine
⑨
借酒浇愁
be thrown into a world of darkness
⑩
被扔进黑暗的世界
a look of sadness/loneliness flashed across/spread over/crossed one's face
⑪
脸
上露出伤心/孤独的表情
句
型
1．Sadness surging within her，she burst into tears bitterly.(独立主格结
构)她心中涌起悲伤，突然痛哭起来。
2 ．She walked to me with great sorrow ，the light in her eyes
darkening，and said with sadness，“I failed again.”她极度悲伤地向我
走来，眼光黯淡，悲伤地说：“我又失败了。”
3．His heart sank when he heard the news.听到这个消息，他的心一沉。
4．So desperate was he at the news that he drowned sadness in wine
the whole day.听到这个消息，他绝望得一整天都在借酒消愁。
5．I felt like I was floating in an ocean of sadness.(比喻)我觉得自己在
悲伤的海洋里沉沉浮浮。
6．As a result of the accident，she was thrown into a world of darkness
and bathed in tears all days.由于这次事故，她被抛入了一个黑暗的世
界，终日以泪洗面。
微场景运用
置身于完全陌生的环境中，我被
一种孤独感淹没了。我是如此沮
丧以至于我觉得自己好像被扔进
了一个黑暗的世界。曾经有一段
时间，我每天都以泪洗面。幸运
的是，热心的同学们真诚地激励
我抓住每一个机会参加集体活
动，从中我收获了很多。渐渐
地，我不仅感到轻松自在，而且
增强了信心。有了同学们的支持
和安慰，我变得越来越乐观。我
脸上露出了幸福的微笑。
Exposed to the completely unfamiliar
surroundings,I was overwhelmed by a sense of
loneliness.So depressed was I that I felt as if I
were thrown into a world of darkness. There
was a time when I was bathed in tears every
day. Luckily, the warm-hearted classmates
sincerely motivated me to grasp every chance
to participate in group activities,from which I
gained a lot.Gradually not only did I feel at
home(倒装结构) but also I strengthened my
confidence.With my classmates siding with
me and comforting me,I became increasingly
optimistic.A smile of happiness appeared on
my face.
十四、情感细节描写：绝望不安
单
词
despair n
①
．& vi.绝望 ②abandon vt.放弃；抛弃
uneasy adj.
③
担忧的；不安的④desperate adj.绝望的→desperation n．绝望
helpless adj.
⑤
无助的→helplessly adv.无助地
hopeless adj.
⑥
不抱希望的；无望的→hopelessly adv.绝望地；无望地
词
块
look in despair
①
绝望地看着 ②a look of desperation 绝望的眼神
sigh with despair
③
绝望地叹气
give sb a look of desperation
④
绝望地看了某人一眼
abandon oneself to despair
⑤
陷入绝望
throw sb into desperation
⑥
使某人陷入绝望
decline one's head in despair
⑦
垂头丧气
give sb a worried look
⑧
忧虑地看某人一眼
throw sb in low spirits
⑨
使某人陷入情绪低迷的状态
be seized with overwhelming despair
⑩
绝望到极点
a sense/feeling of hopelessness/helplessness
⑪
绝望/无力感
lift/glue one's eyes to sb with despair
⑫
绝望地抬起眼睛盯着某人
句
型
1．Trapped in the flood，tears of horror and despair mixed with rain
streamed down my face.被困在洪水中，恐惧和绝望的泪水夹杂着雨水顺
着我的脸流了下来。
2．I felt more frightened and sensed death was waiting for me.我感到更
加害怕，感觉到死亡在等着我。
3．Despair/Desperation was written all over his pale face.他苍白的脸上写
满了绝望。
4．A sense of despair swallowed/seized/took hold of him completely.他被
绝望吞没了。
5．Gazing at the darkness around him，Tod was seized by a feeling of
despair.托德看着四周的黑暗，他深感绝望。
6．As the result of an accident，Tony was suddenly thrown into a world
of darkness and sank into hopelessness.由于事故，托尼突然被投入黑暗之
中，陷入绝望。
微场景运用
我们没有手机信号，而且我们所
在的地方距离地面有900 英尺
高。我们所能做的就是大声呼
救，一段看似很长的距离似乎把
我们和可能的救援者隔开了。我
们的声音在山谷中回荡，每一次
绝望的呼喊都透露出我们的绝
望。随着时间的流逝，恐惧和绝
望淹没了我们，我们不禁怀疑是
否有人会听到我们的呼救声。更
糟糕的是，雾开始慢慢地弥漫整
个山谷。一切都被黑暗吞噬了，
这让我们更加无助。
We had no phone signal ，and the
highway was 900 feet above us.All we could
do was yell for help，and a seemingly great
distance seemed to separate us from potential
rescuers.Our voices echoed through the
valley，the despair mounting in every shout
that escaped our lips.As the minutes turned
into hours
，
fear and desperation
overwhelmed us and we couldn't help but
wonder if anyone would ever hear us.Worse
still
，
fog began creeping into the
valley.Everything was swallowed by
darkness，leaving us even more helpless．
十五、情感细节描写：爱与感动
单
词
hug v
①
.& n.拥抱 ②kiss v.亲吻 ③affection n.喜爱
attached adj.
④
依恋的 ⑤gentle/tender adj.温柔的
softly adv.
⑥
轻轻地；轻柔地
tightly/firmly/close adv.
⑦
紧紧地 ⑧moved/touched adj.感动的
词
块
a tender hug
①
一个温柔的拥抱
throw one's arms around...
②
拥抱……
be deeply moved to tears
③
感动得流泪
with gratitude/appreciation
④
感激地
shed tears of gratitude
⑤
留下感激的泪水
cup one's face in one's hands
⑥
用手捧着某人的脸
have a deep gratitude towards
⑦
对……深怀感激
never take one's eyes off...
⑧
目不转睛地看着……
句
型
1.Tears of happiness flowed down her cheeks.幸福的泪水顺着她的脸颊流
了下来。
2 ．I didn't even realize that my eyes had welled up, and tears of
gratitude were rolling down my face.我甚至没有意识到我的眼睛已经湿润
了，感激的泪水顺着我的脸颊滚落下来。
3 ．When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek ，his eyes danced
with joy and sweetness.当妈妈亲吻宝贝的面颊时，宝贝的眼睛里闪烁着
开心与甜蜜的光芒。
4．She gathered the child in her arms and held him close.她把孩子揽入
怀中，紧紧地抱住他。
5．The moment they met，they hugged together firmly as if they would
never separate again.他们一见面就紧紧地拥抱在一起，好像永远不会再分
开。
6．Surprised and overjoyed，she was on the verge of crying.(形容词作状
语)她又惊又喜，几乎要哭了。
微场景运用
经过如此多的艰苦训练，埃米莉终
于出现在舞台上。迎接她的是怀疑
的目光，甚至是冷笑。但是，她镇
定自若，开始唱出她的心声。当她
唱完歌后，全场鸦雀无声，然后响
起雷鸣般的掌声。埃米莉知道她成
功了，幸福的泪水顺着她的脸颊流
了下来。Mrs Butter 非常感动，她
走上舞台紧紧地拥抱了她。她亲吻
了她的脸颊，她们热泪盈眶。让
Mrs Butter 欣慰的是，埃米莉确实
凭借自己的自信呈现了一场完美的
演出，她们的努力终于得到了回
报，这让她非常满意。
Having gone through so much tough
training ( 分词作状语) ，Emily finally
appeared on the stage.She was greeted with
doubtful eyes and even sneering.But as cool
as a cucumber，she began to sing her heart
out.When she finished her song，there was
a moment of silence and then thunderous
applause broke out.Tears of happiness
flowing down her cheeks( 独立主格) ，
Emily knew she made it.Mrs Butter was so
moved that she stepped on the stage and
gave her a tight hug.She kissed her on the
cheek ，their eyes brimming with warm
tears( 独立主格).To Mrs Butter's relief ，
Emily did present a perfect performance
with her confidence and their hard work
finally paid off，which made her more than
satisfied(定语从句).
十六、情感细节描写：后悔、同情
单
词
compassion n
①
．同情；怜悯
regret v
②
.& n．懊悔→regretful adj.后悔的；遗憾的
sympathy n
③
.同情→sympathetic adj.同情的
pity n
④
.同情；怜悯 v.同情→pitiful adj.可怜的；令人同情的
mercy n
⑤
.宽恕；怜悯→merciful adj.仁慈的；宽恕的→mercifully adv.(不幸
中)幸运地；宽大地；仁慈地
词
块
regret doing sth
①
后悔做某事 ②utter a cry of regret 发出后悔的呼喊
take pity on sb/have mercy on sb
③
怜悯某人 ④express sympathy 表示同情
feel pity/mercy for
⑤
对……感到同情 ⑥out of sympathy/pity 出于同情
have guilt written all over one's face
⑦
满脸内疚
a guilty look on one's face
⑧
脸上露出惭愧的表情
be overwhelmed by feelings of guilt
⑨
愧疚难当
a surge of mercy sweeps over sb
⑩
某人心中涌起一阵怜悯之情
a wave of sympathy wells up in one's heart
⑪
心中涌起了一股同情之情
句
型
1．As I stared at Ann's face wet with tears，guilt and regret flooded me
in waves.I stood there，with regretful tears in my eyes.当我注视着安那
满是泪水的脸庞时，愧疚与懊悔如潮水般向我袭来。我站在那里，眼里噙
着悔恨的泪水。
2．With regretful tears welling up in my eyes，I dashed downstairs to
apologize to Ann.我眼里涌出了悔恨的泪水，飞快地跑下楼去向安道歉。
3．His painful eyes seem to beg me for my sympathy，making me feel
a surge of mercy welling up in my heart.他那双痛苦的眼睛似乎在乞求
我的同情，让我感到怜悯之情涌上心头。
4．Seeing her conditions，I immediately felt a huge sympathy for her，
which was coming from deep within my heart.看到她的境况，我立刻对
她产生了巨大的同情，这种同情来自我的内心深处。
5．At the sight of the scene，he felt a wave of sympathy welling up in
his heart.看到这一幕，他心中涌起了一股同情之情。
微场景运用
我的儿子又一次沉迷于午夜阅读那
本科幻小说，这让我勃然大怒。我
冲到他的床边，关了灯，对他大声
喊叫，命令他停止愚蠢的行为，专
心学习。他目瞪口呆，一动不动地
站在那里，泪水模糊了他的眼睛。
看到他水汪汪的眼睛，我感到一丝
同情，但一点也不后悔。第二天早
上上班前，我发现厨房桌子上放着
一张纸条，上面写着：“爸爸，很
抱歉昨晚让你生气了，但阅读完这
本科幻小说是我学校的任务之
一。”看到这张纸条，我忍不住发
出痛苦的悔恨声。我多么傻啊！要
是我昨天听了他的解释，没有对他
大喊大叫就好了。我站在那里，眼
里噙着悔恨的泪水，决定他一从学
校回来就立即向他道歉。
Again，my son was addicted to reading that
science fiction at midnight ，which made
me explode with extreme anger(定语从句).I
rushed to his bedside, turned off the lamp
and shouted at him violently，ordering him
to stop his silly behavior and focus on his
study.So stunned was he that (倒装结构) he
stood rooted to the spot，with tears blurring
his eyes(with 的复合结构).Seeing his
watery eyes ，I felt a little surge of
sympathy，but didn't regret at all.The next
morning before going to work ，I found a
note resting on the kitchen table ，saying
“Dad，I am sorry to make you annoyed last
night ，but to finish reading the science
fiction is one of my school tasks.” At the
sight of the note，I couldn't help uttering
a painful cry of regret.How silly I was! If
only I had listened to his explanation and
hadn't shouted at him yesterday(虚拟语气).I
stood there ，with regretful tears in my
eyes，and determined to apologize to him
immediately he came back from school.
十七、动作细节描写：走、跑
单
词
stride
①
大步走 ②rush/dash 冲 ③charge 猛冲
march
④
行军 ⑤flee 逃跑 ⑥pace 踱步
drag
⑦
拖着脚走 ⑧slip 溜 ⑨hop 单脚跳行
shamble
⑩
蹒跚 ⑪skip 蹦蹦跳跳地走
stumble
⑫
跌跌撞撞地走 ⑬tiptoe 蹑手蹑脚地走
词
块
force one's way to
①
挤到……
slide into/out
②
溜进/出……
wander around
③
闲逛
head for/toward
④
前往……
pace up and down
⑤
来回踱步
spring to one's feet
⑥
一跃而起
drag one's leg
⑦
拖着(受伤的腿)行走
raise oneself on tiptoe
⑧
踮起脚尖
feel one’s throat tight and one’s mouth dry
⑩
感到喉咙发紧，嘴巴发干
句
型
1.After dinner，Brace left the hotel to wander the park nearby.晚饭过
后，布雷斯离开酒店到附近的公园闲逛。
2．She angrily dashed into the office，demanding an immediate apology.
她气愤地直接冲进办公室，要求立刻向她道歉。
3．He forced a passage through the crowd.他从人群中挤过去。
4．Tony unlocked the back door and tiptoed up to the yard.托尼打开后
门，蹑手蹑脚地来到后院。
微场景运用
决心增强我的力量和意志力，三周
Determined to build up my strength and
willpower(
形容词短语作状语
) , I signed up
for the city half-marathon three weeks
前我报名参加了城市半程马拉松比
赛。经过几天的艰苦训练，重要的
一天终于到来了。比赛开始时，我
很放松，像箭一样冲在人群前面。
然而，接下来的部分对我来说越来
越难了。当跑到最后五百米时，我
的腿像冰块一样重，所以我不得不
拖着腿，跌跌撞撞地向前走，好像
喝醉了一样。我几乎崩溃了，完全
失去了信心。当我就要放弃的时
候，突然听到有人喊着我的名字，
激动地为我加油。我决定不能辜负
他们。我集中了所有的力量，用尽
全力冲向终点线。接着传来了兴奋
的尖叫声——我成功了，喜悦的泪
水顺着脸颊流了下来。从这段经历
中，我了解到只要努力，付出总会
有回报。
before.After several days of hard
training,finally came the big day.At the
beginning of the competition,I was at ease
and relaxed,rushing in front
of the crowd as
an arrow(
比喻句
). However,the following
parts began harder and harder for me.When
it came to the last five hundred metres,my
leg was as heavy as ice-blocks,so I had to
drag my legs,stumbling forward as if
drunk(
比喻句
). I almost fell apart and
completely lost heart.I was about to give up
when
I heard some voice shouting my name
and excitedly cheering up for me.I
determined that I wouldn't fail them.I
gathered all my strength and dashed to the
finishing line
with everything I had.Then
came screams of excitement—I made
it,tears of joy streamed down my
cheeks.From this experience I learned that
just work hard and efforts will pay off in the
end.
十八、动作细节描写：哭泣流泪(一)
单
词
weep v
①
.哭泣 ②water v.流泪
sob vi
③
.呜咽 ④moan vi.呻吟
sniffle vi.
⑤
抽鼻子 ⑥wail/bawl vi.哭号
词
块
be bathed in tears
①
泪流满面
fight/hold back tears
②
抑制眼泪
be in floods of tears
③
泪如泉涌
shed tears of joy
④
喜极而泣
choke up
⑤
哽咽
cry one's eyes/heart out
⑥
悲痛欲绝
burst into tears/burst out crying
⑦
突然哭起来
cry bitter/lonely tears
⑧
留下痛苦/孤独的泪水
eyes be red and swollen from crying
⑨
因哭泣眼睛红肿
sob/weep with one's face buried in one's hands
⑩
掩面哭泣
句
型
1．When the girl heard the news，her heart ached，and she cried with a
burst of tears.听到这个消息，女孩心痛如绞，眼泪哗哗地哭了起来。
2 ．She sobbed bitterly ，tasting the salt from the tears that
streamed/rolled/ poured down her face.她痛苦地抽泣着，品尝着脸上流下
的咸咸的泪水。
3．After a while she looked up，her eyes red and swollen from crying.
过了一会儿她抬起头，双眼哭得又红又肿。
4．He stood silently outside her room，tears rolling/streaming/ pouring/
flowing down his cheeks.他静静地站在她的房间外，泪水顺着脸颊流淌下
来。
5．His mother，standing at the door，cried/shed tears of joy.他的母亲站
在门口，高兴得流下了眼泪。
微场景运用
苏珊在一场车祸中晕倒了。经过一
系列的手术后，她终于活了过来，
却永远失明，这让她陷入了绝望的
深渊。因为害怕面对未来，她经常
掩面哭泣。看到妻子泪流满面，丈
夫马克心碎了。他非常细心地照顾
她，决心帮助她恢复力量和信心，
走出困境。他给她买了一只导盲
犬，鼓励她学习盲文，并陪她参加
社区活动。渐渐地，苏珊的紧张情
绪被自信所取代。她轻声说：“马
克，谢谢你。是你帮助我渡过了难
关。”
Susan was caught in a car accident and
fainted.She finally came to life after a chain
of operations but went blind forever，which
threw her in the depth of despair．Scared to
face the future，she often sobbed/wept with
her face buried in her hands (with 复合结
构).Seeing his wife bathed in tears(分词短
语作宾语补足语)，her husband，Mark，
was heartbroken.He tended her with great
care and determined to assist her to regain
strength and confidence and step out of
such a passive dilemma. He bought her a
guide dog，encouraged her to learn Braille
and accompanied her to join in community
activities. Gradually，Susan's tension was
replaced by confidence.She whispered
gently ，“ Mark ，thank you.It is you
that/who carry me through the tough
situation(强调句).”
十九、动作细节描写：哭泣流泪(二)
单
词
misty adj.
①
泪眼模糊的
watery adj.
②
眼泪汪汪的
tearful adj.
③
眼含热泪的
crocodile tears
④
鳄鱼眼泪，假哭
词
块
tears cloud one's eyes
①
泪水模糊了双眼
tears well up in one's eyes
②
热泪盈眶
be wet with tears/in tears
③
泪流满面
break down
④
崩溃大哭
be close to tears
⑤
快要哭了
with a lump in one's throat
⑥
喉咙哽咽
tears roll/stream/run/flow down one's cheeks
⑦
泪水滑落脸庞
句
型
1．He stood silently，tears rolling down his cheeks，while the music
played.
(独立主格结构)音乐声响起时，他静静地站着，泪水顺着脸颊流淌下来。
2．There was a lump in my throat and I didn't speak because I knew I
would cry.我哽咽了，没有说话，因为我知道我会哭的。
3．I left quickly，not wanting to break down in front of the children.我
赶快离开了，因为我不想在孩子们面前大哭。
4．Realizing she would never come back to the land and never see her
dear friends and teachers，Emma's eyes went red and watery.想到她将不
会再回到这片土地上，再也见不到她亲爱的朋友和老师了，艾玛双眼发
红，泪水盈盈。
微场景运用
我还记得我有幸被选为这个国家的
交换生的时候。得到这个消息时，
我几乎要哭了。在这里，我度过了
一段非常愉快的时光，亲身体验了
真正的法国文化，结交了许多极好
的朋友。然而，俗话说，天下没有
不散的筵席。即便如此，当我想起
那一刻时，眼泪还是会顺着脸颊滚
落。当那一天真的到来时，我几乎
崩溃了。眼睛湿润，我终于振作起
来，鼓起勇气，决心向我在巴黎的
所有朋友告别。
I still remember the time when I was
fortunate to be selected as an exchange
student in this country.When getting the
news，I was close to tears．Here，I had a
very pleasant time, experiencing authentic
France culture first hand and making a lot of
great friends. However ，as the saying
goes，all good things come to an end.Even
so ，when thinking about the moment ，
tears would roll down my cheeks.When the
day really came, I almost broke down.Eyes
watery( 独立主格) ，I finally picked up
myself
，
gathered my courage and
determined to bid farewell to all my friends
in Paris.
二十、动作细节描写：“眼看”
单
词
spot vt.& vi.
①
发现 ②observe vt.& vi.
观察 ③witness vt. 见证
glare vi.
④
怒视 ⑤stare/peer/gaze vi.凝视 ⑥browse vt.& vi.浏览；翻阅
glimpse vt.
⑦
瞥见 ⑧glance vi. 瞥一眼 ⑨peek vi.偷看
spy vt.
⑩
突然看见；发现
词
块
catch a glimpse of
①
瞥见 ②stare into one's eyes 凝视
fix/focus one's eyes on
③
盯着 ④lower/drop one's eyes 垂下眼睛
glare angrily at
⑤
怒视 ⑥one's eyes fall on...目光落在……
one's eyes dance with amusement
⑦
眼中洋溢着欢乐
look sb in the eye/look into one's eyes
⑧
直视某人的眼睛
one's eyes shine/sparkle/twinkle with excitement
⑨
眼里闪着兴奋的光芒
句
型
1．I glanced/looked back over my shoulder to make sure that no one
was following me.我回头瞥了一眼以确保没有人跟着我。
2．Again he cast a look toward the window，and saw an excited face
against the glass.他又朝窗户看了一眼，看见一张激动的脸靠在玻璃上。
3．The teacher fixed/focused his eyes on the cellphone in her hand，
waiting patiently for her explanation.老师的眼睛紧紧盯着她手中的手机，
耐心等待她解释。
4．Swallowing hard，I stared into her eyes for a moment，wondering
how to cope with the annoying situation.我忍气吞声，盯着她的眼睛看了
一会儿，想知道如何应对这种烦人的情况。
5 ．He secretly glanced down the list of names ，finding his name
nowhere，which made him extremely disappointed.他偷偷地浏览了一下名
单，却找不到自己的名字，这让他非常失望。
微场景运用
雪莉非常满意地完成了她的画作。
她去厨房给母亲看，母亲碰巧朝窗
户看了一眼。看到雪莉，她困惑地
抬起眼睛，直到雪莉把画拿给她
看。她的眼睛落在这张非常吸引她
的画作上，她表达了她的极度钦
佩，说她真的很喜欢这幅作品。她
的眼睛盯着这幅画，她认为雪莉使
画中的人物变得非常鲜活了。听到
母亲的评论，雪莉无法抑制自己的
喜悦。她的眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光
芒，她冲出厨房，来到父亲面前，
父亲正惬意地浏览着今天早晨的报
纸。
Shelly finished her painting with great
satisfaction. She went to the kitchen to show
it to her mother who happened to cast a
look toward the window.Seeing Shelly，she
raised/lifted her eyes in confusion until
Shelly showed her the picture.Her eyes
falling on the picture(独立主格结构) which
really attracted her ，she conveyed her
extreme admiration，saying she was really
fond of it.With her eyes fixed on/upon the
picture(with 复合结构)，she believed that
Shelly had brought the character in her
picture to life. Hearing her mother's
comment ，Shelly couldn't contain her
happiness.Eyes shining/sparkling with
excitement( 独立主格结构)，she dashed
out of the kitchen to her father who was
glancing at today's morning newspaper with
great ease(定语从句).
二十一、动作细节描写：“腿动”
单
词
drag vt.
①
拖，拉，拽
kneel vi.
②
跪
crawl vi.
③
爬
slip vi.
④
滑倒
wander vt.& vi.
⑤
漫游；游荡；闲逛；徘徊
pace vt.& vi.
⑥
来回踱步
词
块
shaky/trembling legs
①
颤抖的双腿
with one's legs wide apart
②
双腿叉开
cross one's legs
③
盘腿
drag one's legs
④
拖着腿行走
get down on one knee
⑤
单膝下跪
句
型
1．Upon hearing this，I became overwhelmed by happiness and fell to
my knees.听了这话，我高兴极了，跪了下来。
2．Jenny walked slowly to the front，with her legs trembling and her
heart beating faster.珍妮慢慢地走到前面，两腿发抖，心跳加速。
3．With a sinking heart，he dragged his heavy legs back home，worn
out.他垂头丧气，拖着两条沉重的腿，疲惫不堪地回了家。
4．His feet slipped，and he fell over，flat on his back with his legs
wide apart.他脚下一滑，两腿叉开，仰面朝天摔倒在地。
5．Jill crossed her legs and rested her chin on one fist，as if lost in
deep thought.吉尔盘着腿，一个拳头支着下巴，仿佛陷入了沉思。
6．Overwhelmed by terror，he stood rooted to the ground and felt his
knees as weak as rubber.他惊恐万分，站在原地，双膝发软如同橡胶一
般。
微场景运用
汤姆最近压力很大，他决定慢跑来
缓解压力。今天早上，他像往常一
样在公园里慢跑。尽管感觉有点头
晕，他还是下定决心跑完最后两
圈。很快，他感到双膝发软如同橡
胶一般，他脚下一滑，两腿叉开，
仰面朝天摔倒在地。既尴尬又疼
痛，他挣扎着用一个膝盖站起来，
但没有成功。他不得不在地上盘腿
坐了一会儿。几分钟后，他似乎恢
复了点精力，慢慢地站起来，拖着
沉重的腿，疲惫不堪地回了家。同
时他向自己承诺，他不会不吃早餐
了，从那以后，他将在工作和生活
Having been extremely stressed out
recently(分词短语作状语)，Tom decided
on jogging to relieve his stress.This
morning ，he was jogging in the park as
usual.Though feeling a little dizzy ，he
made up his mind to finish the last two
laps.Soon ，he felt his knees as weak as
rubber，his feet slipped，and he fell over，
flat on his back with his legs wide
apart(with 复合结构).Embarrassed and
ached，he struggled to get up on one of his
knees ，but failed. He had to sit on the
ground for a while，crossing his legs(分词
短语作状语).Minutes later，he seemed to
have got a little refreshed，rose to his feet
slowly and dragged his heavy legs back
之间保持平衡。
home，worn out.Meanwhile，he promised
to himself that he wouldn't skip any
breakfast and he would keep a balance
between work and life from then on.
二十二、动作细节描写：“脚动”
单
词
tiptoe vi.
①
踮着脚走；蹑手蹑脚地走 ②barefoot adj.& adv.赤脚
dance vi.
③
雀跃；跳跃 ④spring vi.
跳；跃
creep vi.
⑤
悄悄地缓慢行进 ⑥chase vt.& vi.追赶 ⑦flee vt.& vi.逃跑
词
块
get/rise to one's feet
①
起立 ②struggle to one's feet 挣扎着站起来
spring to one's feet
③
一跃而起 ④jump to one's feet 猛地站起、跳起来
leap to one's feet
⑤
跳起来 ⑥in bare feet 光脚
raise oneself on tiptoe
⑦
踮起脚尖 ⑧stamp one's feet 跺脚
plant one's feet to the ground
⑨
双脚钉在地上
句
1 ．Disappointed and frustrated ，the poor man dragged his feet back
型
home.这个可怜的人既失望又沮丧，慢腾腾地回家了。
2．He leapt/jumped/sprang to his feet/jumped up and rushed out of the
living room.他一跃而起，冲出起居室。
3．She sprang to her feet and rushed to greet him.她一跃而起，冲过去
迎接他。
4．He was so worn out that he lifted his feet to leave as if they were
100 kilos.(比喻)他是如此疲惫以至于抬脚离开时好像双脚有千斤重。
5．She went to the window，raised herself on tiptoe，and cast a glance
on the street.Out of a car jumped an elegant man.她走到窗前，踮起脚
尖，朝街上看了一眼。一个优雅的男子从一辆车上跳了下来。
6．She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.她溜下床，踮起脚
尖走向窗户。
微场景运用
早春的一个早晨，雪还没有完全融
化，我和哥哥正在乡间小路上散
步，这时一只躺在干稻草上的小猫
吸引了我们的目光。出于好奇，我
们慢慢地踮着脚尖走向它。我们以
为它看到我们会跳起来逃跑，但这
只小猫只是挣扎着站起来，发出一
些虚弱而痛苦的呻吟。走近时，我
们惊讶地发现，这只小猫的一条腿
受了重伤，急需医疗救助。不知道
该怎么办，我们在原地一动不动站
了一会儿，然后决定把它带回家，
否则它会在寒冷的天气里死去。
On an early spring morning when the
snow hadn't melted completely，my brother
and I were having a walk along the country
track when a little cat lying on the dry
straw(分词短语作后置定语) attracted our
eyes.Out of curiosity ，we tiptoed to it
slowly．We thought it would spring to its
feet and flee away seeing us.But the cat just
struggled to its feet，releasing some weak
and painful moans. Approaching closer，we
found in surprise that the little cat got
seriously injured in one of its legs and was
badly in need of medical help.Not knowing
what to do，we planted our feet firmly to
the spot for a moment and then decided that
we should take it home，otherwise it would
die in the cold weather.
二十三、动作细节描写：“动胳膊”
单
词
hug vi.& vt.
①
，n.拥抱 ②wave vi.& vt. 挥臂 ③raise vt.举起；提起
词
块
wave one's arms
①
挥动双臂
fold one's arms
②
某人双臂交叉
hold out/open one's arms
③
某人伸出/张开双臂
arm in arm
④
臂挽臂
pull/gather sb into one's arms
⑤
把某人拉/抱在怀中
with crossed arms
⑥
双臂交叉
put/throw one's arms around sb
⑦
搂住某人
take one's arm
⑧
挽住某人的胳膊
catch/grab one's arm
⑨
抓住某人的胳膊
句
型
1．He stood there with crossed arms，looking angry.他双臂交叉站在那
里，看起来很生气。
2．He had to approach her and reached out to catch/grab her left arm.他
只得走近她，伸出一只手抓住她的左胳膊。
3．Having won first prize in the speech contest，they walked home arm
in arm.在演讲比赛中获得第一名后，他们臂挽臂走回家。
4．Stunned，I stood up and gave her an awkward hug/hugged her in an
awkward way.我很惊讶，站起来尴尬地拥抱了她。
5．He parked down the street from Bobby's house，and rushed to his
front door，waving wildly inwards.他把车停在鲍比家的街上，冲到前门，
疯狂地向里挥手。
二十四、动作细节描写：头部动作
单
词
nod vi. & vt.
①
点头 ②shake vt.
摇头
scratch vt.
③
挠(头) ④pat vt.
轻拍
turn/twist vt.
⑤
转 ⑥bow vt.低(头) vi.
鞠躬
词
块
hang/drop/lower/bend one's head
①
低头
raise one's head
②
抬头 ③throw one's head back 头往后仰
shake one's head
④
摇头 ⑤with a nod 点头
rest one's head on/against
⑥
把头靠在……上面
put/hold/bury one's head in one's hands
⑦
双手抱头
句
型
1．Feeling ashamed，the boy lowered his head awkwardly.男孩感到羞
愧，尴尬地低下了头。
2．Steven walked slowly to the bus，his head down，tears in his eyes.
史蒂文低着头，眼里含着泪，慢慢地向公交车走去。
3 ．He felt a gentle touch on his arm.It was his friend John who
nodded and smiled at him/smiled at him with a nod.他感到有人轻轻碰了
一下他的胳膊。是他的朋友约翰向他点头微笑。
4．Though he was in a bad mood，he dropped/hung/lowered his head to
hide it and managed a smile.尽管他心情不好，但是他低下头来掩饰，勉
强笑了一下。
5．Steven rose，sat close to his mother，rested his head on/against her
shoulder，and could hardly resist weeping.史蒂文起来坐在母亲身边，将
头靠在她的肩膀上，再也忍不住哭泣起来。
微场景运用
我正走在街上，这时一个外国人拦
住了我们，焦急地说着些什么。我
不知道他在说什么，尴尬地挠了挠
头，扭过头来寻求帮助。幸运的
是，一位店主正把头伸出店外，我
立即走向他求助。店主跟我走到那
个外国人面前，看见他坐在路边，
把头靠在他的旅行包上。店主解释
说他现在一定需要医疗救助，我们
最好把他送到最近的医院。外国人
听了，虚弱地点了点头，松了一口
气。
I was walking in the street when a
foreigner stopped us,saying something with
anxiety(分词作状语).Not knowing what he
was saying ，I scratched my head with
embarrassment and twisted my head for
help.Fortunately ，a shop owner was
sticking his head out from his shop ，I
immediately headed him for help.The shop
owner followed me to the foreigner and saw
him sitting on the roadside ，resting his
head against his huge travel pack ．The
shop owner interpreted that he must be in
need of medical help now and we'd better
send him to the nearest hospital.Hearing
that，the foreigner nodded his head weakly
and sighed with relief.
二十五、动作细节描写：眼部动作
单
词
wink vi.
①
眨眼 ②stare vi.盯着看
glance vi.
③
瞥一眼 ④glare vi.怒视 ⑤scan vt.细看；端详
词
块
eyes be wide with horror
①
吓得瞪大眼睛
look sb in the eye
②
直视某人的眼睛
look straight into one's eyes
③
直视某人的眼睛
with one's eyes fixed on sth
④
眼睛盯着某物
one's eyes fall on...
⑤
目光落在……
make eye contact
⑥
眼神交流
narrow one's eyes
⑦
眯起眼睛
squeeze one's eyes shut
⑧
紧闭双眼
one's eyes shine/sparkle/glisten with...
⑨
眼里闪着……的光芒
句
型
1．Eyeing Anne come in，he eyed her up and down，confused.看到安妮
进来，他困惑地上下打量着她。
2．We stared at each other for a while，speechless.我们面面相觑了一会
儿，无言以对。
3．Learning the truth，he squeezed his eyes shut and bit his lip，with
tears running/rolling/streaming/flowing down his cheeks.得知真相后他紧闭
双眼，咬了咬嘴唇，泪水顺着脸颊滑了下来。
4 ．Upon hearing the news ，the boys jumped with joy ，their eyes
shining with excitement.一听到这个消息，男孩们就高兴得跳了起来，眼
睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
5．So absorbed was Jane that she fixed her eyes on the screen，lost in
deep thought.简全神贯注，目不转睛地盯着屏幕，陷入沉思。
微场景运用
当安妮的父亲听到门把手转动的
声音时，他将目光转向了门口。看
到安妮走进来，他困惑地上下打量
着她。接着，他眯起双眼，思索着
她究竟怎么了。尽管她蓝色的眼眸
充满泪水，但她始终关注着父亲的
神情。安妮正视着父亲的眼睛，并
告知了他真相。得知真相后他紧闭
双眼，咬了咬嘴唇，泪水顺着脸颊
滑了下来。
Anne's father turned his eyes to the
door
when he heard the handle
turning.Eyeing Anne come in,he eyed her
up and down,confused.Then,he narrowed
his eyes,wondering what had happened to
her.Though her blue eyes were full of/filled
with tears,she kept an eye on her father's
expression.Anne looked her father in the eye
and told him the truth.
Learning the truth,he squeezed his
eyes shut and bit his lip,with tears
running/rolling/streaming/flowing down his
cheeks.
二十六、动作细节描写：手部动作
单
词
clap vi.& vt.
①
鼓掌；拍手
shake vt.
②
(与某人)握手
applaud vi.& vt.
③
鼓掌
词
块
take/hold one's hand
①
牵某人的手
reach for one's hand
②
伸手抓住某人
shake one's hand
③
同某人握手
clap one's hands
④
拍手
hold out a hand
⑤
伸出手
spread one's hands
⑥
摊开双手
rub one's hands together
⑦
使劲搓着双手
with one's head in one's hands
⑧
双手抱头
hand in hand
⑨
手拉手
put one's hands to one's cheeks
⑩
用双手捂住脸
句
型
1．Without thinking，I held my hand up so the truck driver wouldn't
move forward，and bent down to look at the butterfly.我不假思索地举起
手不让卡车司机往前走，然后弯下腰去看那只蝴蝶。
2．She put her hands to her cheeks in embarrassment.窘迫之中她用双手
捂住了脸。
3．Her hands shook/trembled as she lifted the glass to her lips.她的手颤
抖着把杯子送到唇边。
4．He shook my hands as if we were long lost friends.他握住我的手好
像我们是失散多年的朋友。
5．They walked hand in hand along the path.他们手拉手沿着小路走。
6．A strong hand reached out and caught hold of her arm.一只有力的手
伸了出来抓住了她的手臂。
微场景运用
两个女孩正愉快地手牵着手走
着，这时一只大狗向她们冲来，
这让她们非常恐慌，发出绝望的
尖叫。面对狗的逼近，女孩们如
此害怕，一个女孩用双手捂住了
脸以免受到攻击，而另一个女孩
则双手抱头绝望地蹲在地上。就
在这时，一个把手伸进口袋的年
轻人立即吹口哨让狗回来。他急
忙走向女孩们，扶她们站起来，
笨拙地搓着手真诚地为他的狗道
歉。他一再保证他的狗没有伤害
过任何人，这慢慢缓解了女孩们
的极度恐慌。最后，女孩们耸耸
肩，摊开双手，表示原谅，但也
建议他在街上散步时不要松开他
的狗。
Two girls were happily walking hand in
hand when a big dog charged at them，which
greatly got them in panic ，letting out
desperate screams.Faced with the approaching
of the dog，so frightened were they that one
girl put her hands to her cheeks so as to avoid
being attacked while the other girl desperately
crouched on the ground with her head in her
hands. Just at that time，a young man who put
his hands into pockets(定语从句) immediately
whistled to the dog to come back.He hurried to
the girls ，helped them to their feet and
sincerely apologized for his dog，rubbing his
hands together awkwardly( 分词短语作状
语).He promised again and again that his dog
hadn't hurt anybody，which slowly eased the
girls from extreme panic.At last ，the girls
shrugged their shoulders and spread their
hands ，showing their forgiveness but also
suggested that he shouldn't loose his dog while
walking in the street.
二十七、修辞妙用之比喻
单
词
like pre.
①
像……
as...as...
②
像……一样……
look like/as if
③
看起来像
词
块
as soft as water
①
柔情似水
as hungry as a wolf
②
饥肠辘辘
like a duck to water
③
如鱼得水
as busy as a bee
④
忙忙碌碌
as proud as a peacock
⑤
傲如孔雀
as precious as a pearl
⑥
像珍珠一样珍贵
as unique as a fingerprint
⑦
独一无二
shine like a diamond
⑧
像钻石一样闪闪发光
句
型
1．After what seemed a century，it occurred to her that the shadow of
the oak tree was just like the landmark of a long distance.(2024·浙江1
月卷读后续写)仿佛过了一个世纪，她突然意识到那棵橡树的影子就像远
方的地标。
2．His smile was as warm as it was on that frantic evening.(2024·新课
标Ⅰ卷读后续写)他的微笑和那个疯狂的夜晚一样温暖。
3．“Daddy！” the little girl shouted excitedly and threw herself to the
man like a little merry bird.“爸爸！”小女孩兴奋地喊道，像一只快乐
的小鸟一样扑向那个男人。
4．His heart is as hard as a stone.他铁石心肠。
5．She ran into the house，as happy as a bird to get home again.她跑进
屋里，高兴得像只归巢的小鸟。
微场景运用
当我到达长城脚下的那一刻，我
被它的壮丽所折服。位于中国北
部的它就像一条巨龙，是世界奇
观之一。它是中国古代劳动者血
汗的结晶，是中华文化的象征，
是中华民族的骄傲，体现了古人
的巧夺天工。但随着越来越多的
人参观它，这一像珍珠一样珍贵
的世界文化遗产地已经遭到一定
程度的损坏。幸运的是，为了保
护这一文化瑰宝，政府已经采取
了一系列措施。但作为一个负责
任的公民，我强烈建议我们也做
出贡献。
The moment I arrived at the foot of the
Great Wall,I was overwhelmed by its
magnificence. Located in the north of China
like a giant dragon, it is one of the wonders
of the world.It is the crystallization of blood
and sweat of ancient Chinese labors, the
symbol of Chinese culture and the pride of
Chinese nation,reflecting the supernatural
workmanship of ancient people.But with
more and more people visiting it, this world
cultural heritage site which/that is as precious
as a pearl(定语从句)has been damaged to a
certain extent.Fortunately,in an attempt to
preserve this cultural treasure
，
the
government has taken a range of
measures.But as a responsible citizen ，I
strongly propose that we also make our
contributions．
二十八、修辞妙用之夸张
单
词
heavenly adj
①
.美好的②awfully adv.非常；极其③extremely adv.非常；极
其
词
块
take one's breath away
①
令人惊叹
as heavy as a mountain
②
像山一样重
laugh one's head off
③
狂笑不已
be half dead with fear
④
吓得半死
a ton of/tons of
⑤
许多，大量
cry one's eyes out
⑥
痛哭流涕
eat like a bird
⑦
吃得很少
with millions of reasons
⑧
千万个理由
be over the moon/on top of the world
⑨
欣喜若狂/心满意足
句
型
1．Her face beamed and her bright smile lit up the room.她容光焕发，
灿烂的笑容照亮了整个房间。
2．When she heard the bad news，a river of tears poured out.听到这个
坏消息时，她泪流成河。
3．My headache is killing me.我的头疼死了。
4．We have to wait in line for centuries.我们得排队等很久。
5．The rabbit made me jump out of my skin.这只兔子吓得我魂不附
体/吓了我一跳。
6 ．I have told you a thousand times that “ Don't speak when your
mouth is full.”我已经告诉你无数遍了：“嘴里塞满东西时不要说话。”
7．I was so hungry that I could swallow a horse.我饿得能吞下一匹马。
8．So guilty and regretful was she that she felt as if scores of arrows
pierced her chest.她既愧疚又懊悔，觉得好像有许多支箭射中了她的胸
口。
微场景运用
上周末，我父亲带我去了一个位
于偏远地区的度假胜地。我们正
沿着山谷骑马而行，那里的景色
真让我叹为观止，这时一只小兔
子从我的马前面跳了出来，吓了
我的马一跳。似乎过了一个世
纪，我的马才终于从震惊中恢复
过来。随着河水滚滚而下的声
音，我们继续探索，直到我们看
到一个小农舍，周围是无数的野
花。一位老太太从里面走了出
来，看到我们时欣喜若狂。不知
道发生了什么，我们被带到她
家，看到一个年轻女孩正痛哭流
涕。老太太解释说，女孩在山谷
里迷路了，需要人帮忙。我们欣
然同意了，她非常高兴，脸上洋
溢着笑容，灿烂的笑容照亮了整
个房间。
Last weekend，my father took me on a
trip to an amazing getaway located in a
remote area( 分词短语作定语).We were
riding horses along the valley where the
scenery really took my breath away when a
little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse，
making my horse jump out of its skin(分词短
语作状语).It seemed like a century before my
horse finally recovered from the shock. With
the sound of water rolling down the river ，
we went on our exploration until we saw a
little farm house surrounded by tons of wild
flowers(分词短语作定语).Out of the house
walked an old lady who was over the
moon( 定语从句) when seeing us.Not
knowing what happened，we were led to her
house and saw a young girl who was crying
her eyes out．The old lady explained that the
girl got lost in the valley and needed someone
to help her out.We happily agreed and she
was extremely glad ，her face beaming and
her bright smile lighting up the room(独立主
格结构).
二十九、修辞妙用之拟人
句
型
1 ．The mist swallowed them up and the icy wind started howling ，
stinging their faces violently.薄雾吞没了他们，冰冷的风呼啸着，猛烈地
刺痛了他们的脸。
2 ．Seeing such extraordinary beauty ，I think every cell in my body
woke up.看到这绝美景色，我想我身体里的每一个细胞都苏醒了。
3．The first rays of morning tiptoed through the grass.第一缕晨光蹑手蹑
脚地穿过草地。
4 ．Immediately an absolute darkness ruled the forest and an extreme
sense of fear seized me.刹那间，漆黑统治了整个森林，一种极度的恐惧
感笼罩着我。
5．One evening saw/witnessed a bus driver weaving through traffic.一天
晚上，一位公共汽车司机穿梭在车流中。
6．The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air，making a beautiful
picture.羽毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞，构成一幅美丽的图画。
7．The bees played hide-and-seek with the flowers as they buzzed from
one flower to another.蜜蜂嗡嗡地从一朵花到另一朵花上，与花朵进行捉
迷藏。
微场景运用
尽管山姆被警告暴风雨即将来
临，但几乎没有什么能阻止他
去。伴随着呼啸的寒风和吞噬一
切的浓雾，山姆在一个寒冷的夜
Although Sam had been warned that a storm
was coming，there was little that would keep
him from going.With the icy wind howling
and the thick fog swallowing everything(with
晚启航了。风暴在陆地上越来越
大，但还没有到达离岸很远的地
方。波浪摇晃着小船，小船开始
像游乐园里的游乐设施一样侧向
转弯。他们完全任凭风暴摆布。
船上挂着的昏暗的灯滑入愤怒的
大海，把他们抛在一片无尽的黑
暗中。直到这时，恐惧才开始笼
罩山姆。然后，黑暗的大海以及
闪烁着的几颗星辰见证了人与自
然之间的生死斗争。幸运的是，
惊涛骇浪的大海终于平静下来，
第一缕曙光蹑手蹑脚地出现在地
平线上。
的复合结构) ，Sam set sail on a freezing
night. The storm was gaining strength on
land ，but had not yet reached a place far
from the coast.Waves rocked the small boat，
which began to turn sideways like an
amusement park ride. They were completely
at the mercy of the storm．The dim lamps
hanging on the boat slipped into the angry
sea
，
throwing them in complete
darkness.Only then did the fear begin to seize
Sam(倒装句). Then the dark sea along with a
few twinkling stars witnessed a death-and-life
struggle between humans and nature ．
Fortunately ，the stormy sea finally calmed
down and the first rays of morning tiptoed on
the horizon.
三十、自然环境细节描写(一)
单
词
breeze n
①
．微风 ②mist n．薄雾 ③sunset n．日落
sunrise n
④
．日出 ⑤loom v．若隐若现 ⑥landscape n．景色
scenery n
⑦
．景色，风景 ⑧sight n．风景
track/path n
⑨
．小道，小径 ⑩reflect vt.
反映；反射
breathtaking adj.
⑪
壮观的；激动人心的
strike/shock/move vt.
⑫
给(某人以……)印象/使震惊/使感动
appear vi.
⑬
出现→disappear vi.消失
surround vt.
⑭
环绕→surroundings n．环境
词
块
at dusk/dawn
①
在黄昏/黎明时刻
at midnight
②
午夜时分
a gentle sea breeze
③
徐徐的海风
be bathed in
④
沐浴在
cast a light on...
⑤
照亮……
be spotted with shining stars
⑥
繁星点点
be a feast for the eyes
⑦
视觉盛宴
the sound of chirping birds
⑧
叽叽喳喳的鸟鸣声
shine brightly in the night sky
⑨
在夜空中闪闪发光
be attracted by the beauty of the landscapes
⑩
被风景的美丽所吸引
be struck by the breathtaking scenery
⑪
被令人叹为观止的景色所震撼
句
型
1．The sun was setting in the west，casting a golden glow over the
mountains in the distance.(分词作状语)太阳从西边落下，在远处的群山上
投下了金色的光芒。
2．In the night sky，the stars winked their eyes as if whispering to us.
夜空里，星星眨着眼睛，仿佛在对我们低语。
3．The moon was shining brightly in the night sky，casting a soft light
on the fields below.月亮在夜空中闪闪发光，在下面的田野上投下柔和的
光。
4．It was dark，but a giant moon shone so brightly on the streets that
you could see the surroundings clearly.天黑了，但一轮巨大的月亮明亮地
照耀着街道，周围的景物可以看得一清二楚。
5．When I woke up，the trees were already bathed in the morning sun.
当我醒来时，那些树已经沐浴在清晨的阳光中了。
微场景运用
森林茂密，生机勃勃，树叶沙沙
作响，鸟儿叽叽喳喳。我完全被
美丽的风景所吸引。突然，一只
小兔子从我的马前面跳了出来，
这让我想起了《爱丽丝梦游仙
境》的故事。“多么可爱的兔
子！”我喊道。爸爸也被这个特
殊的生物惊呆了，呆呆地看着
它。“爸爸，让我们把它抓来作
我们的宠物吧！”我建议道，出
乎意料地得到了他的同意。我们
完全忘记了保罗叔叔告诉我们的
话，沿着通往森林深处的蜿蜒小
路追赶那只漂亮的兔子。不幸的
The forest was thick and alive with the sounds
of rustling leaves and chirping birds.I was
completely attracted by the beauty of the
landscapes.Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out
in front of my horse，which reminded me of
the story of
Alice in Wonderland
(定语从句).
“What a lovely rabbit！”I shouted.Dad was
also stunned by this special creature，staring
at it blankly.“Daddy ，let's catch it as our
pet！”I suggested，unexpectedly receiving
his approval.Entirely forgetting what Uncle
Paul had told us，we chased after that pretty
rabbit along a winding path leading to the
deep forest ．Unfortunately ，so clever and
是，它既聪明又敏捷，没过多久
就消失在森林里。我们仔细地在
森林里寻找兔子，直到我们意识
到最后一缕阳光正在无数的树木
中间迅速消失，我们根本找不到
我们的踪迹！我们确实迷路了！
swift was it that it disappeared in the forest
before long.We searched the forest carefully
for the rabbit until we realized that the last ray
of sunlight was quickly disappearing among
the numerous trees and we couldn't find our
track at all！We did get lost！
三十一、自然环境细节描写(二)
单
词
thunder n
①
.雷声；vi.打雷
spring n
②
．春天；泉水
horizon n
③
．地平线
dew n
④
．露水；露
freezing adj.
⑤
极冷的
colourful adj.
⑥
五彩斑斓的
frozen adj.
⑦
结冰的
golden adj.
⑧
金黄色的
snow-covered adj.
⑨
积雪覆盖的
词
块
spring showers
①
春雨
cherry blossoms
②
樱花盛开
be dotted with shining stars
③
繁星点点
dark clouds spread/gather
④
乌云散开/密集
a season for harvest/revival
⑤
丰收/复苏的季节
be covered with a layer of green
⑥
覆盖一层绿色
wrinkle the surface of the lake
⑦
使湖面泛起波纹
be bathed in the golden sunshine
⑧
沐浴在金色的阳光下
tall branches waving in the wind
⑨
高高的树枝在风中摇曳
look like the boundless yellow carpet
⑩
看起来像无边无际的黄色地毯
句
型
1 ．Spring thunder rumbled with continuous rain which moistened the
whole earth.春雷隆隆，连绵的雨水滋润着整个大地。
2 ．With spring approaching ，the earth gets covered with a layer of
green.随着春天的临近，大地被覆盖了一层绿色。
3．The river was so clear that you could see your own reflection and
the fish swimming around in the water.河面非常清澈，你能看到自己的倒
影和在水里游来游去的鱼。
4．The ground was covered with tender grass，on whose blades some
dew drops were glistening in the sunshine.地上长满了嫩草，叶子上一些
露珠在阳光下闪闪发光。
5．A gentle breeze came up，wrinkling the surface of the lake.It was
really a beautiful morning.(分词作状语)一阵微风吹过，使湖面泛起波纹。
这真是一个美丽的早晨。
6．Birds flew around the woods singing cheerfully and restlessly.(拟人修
辞)鸟儿在树林里飞翔，不停地欢唱。
7．It was a clear stream which ran quite merrily along on its narrow
way through the damp greenness.穿过这片潮湿的绿草地，一条清澈的小
溪沿着狭窄的水道欢快地流淌着。
微场景运用
随着春天的临近，大地被覆盖了
一层绿色。在一个美丽的早晨，
我们开始在城市外露营。当我们
接近群山环绕的露营地时，我们
几乎无法抑制自己的兴奋。到了
那儿之后，妈妈马上打开了车
门，冲到外面，急切地催促我们
搭起帐篷。周围的景色如此迷
人，真是一场名副其实的视觉盛
宴。沐浴在金色的阳光下，我们
躺在草地上，心情轻松。鸟儿在
欢快地歌唱，好像它们在热情地
迎接我们。我们全家舒舒服服地
聊天，过去的美好回忆涌上我们
的心头。
With spring approaching,the earth gets
covered with a layer of green.On a beautiful
morning,we started our camping out of the
city.As we
approached the campsite
surrounded by mountains,we could hardly
contain our excitement.On reaching there,my
mom opened the door of the car
immediately,charged
outside and eagerly
urged us to put up the tent.The surrounding
landscape was so fascinating that it was really
a true feast for our eyes.Bathed in the golden
sunshine(,we lay on the grass with a light
heart.Birds were singing happily as if they
were warmly greeting us(方式状语从句).My
family chatted comfortably,sweet memories
of the past crowding in on us(独立主格结构).
三十二、自然环境细节描写(三)
单
词
dazzling adj.
①
耀眼的 ②burning adj. 炽热的
sunset n
③
．日落 ④sunrise n．日出
twinkle vi.
⑤
闪耀 ⑥glowing/shining/sparkling adj. 亮闪闪的
pale/faint adj.
⑦
暗淡的 ⑧wink/blink vi.眨眼
clear adj.
⑨
晴朗的 ⑩overcast adj. 阴天的；多云的
horizon n
⑪
.地平线
词
块
hover in the starry sky
①
悬在星空中
dark starless night
②
昏暗的没有星星的夜晚
like the blue Mediterranean
③
像蔚蓝的地中海一样
a giant moon
④
一轮巨大的月亮
be overspread with dark cloud(
⑤
天空)布满了乌云
against the blue sky
⑥
映衬在蓝天下
be bathed in the amber-like sunshine
⑦
沐浴在琥珀般的阳光下
句
型
1．The quiet sky was dotted with sparkling stars.静谧的天空中繁星点
点。
2．When I woke up，the trees were already bathed in the morning sun.
当我醒来时，那些树已经沐浴在清晨的阳光中了。
3．In the night sky，the stars winked their eyes as if whispering to us.
夜空里，星星眨着眼睛，仿佛在对我们低语。
4．The sky，midnight blue，gave the scene a fairy-tale quality；and the
stars that dotted the sky lit up the night.深蓝色的天空让这个场景有种童
话般的感觉，点点繁星照亮了夜空。
5．The sky appears a red sun，like the blooming roses.(比喻句)天空升起
红日，像绽放的红玫瑰。
微场景运用
在父母的陪同下，我出发前往海
滨城市的海洋主题公园看日出。
起初，一些暗淡的星星还在昏暗
的天空中闪烁，海浪拍打着海
岸。然后，一个红色的太阳像盛
开的玫瑰一样慢慢出现在天空
中。海面上反射出的玫瑰色给人
一种宁静的感觉。海水在清晨的
阳光下闪闪发光，当我们悠闲地
沿着海滩漫步时，海浪拍打在我
们的脚上很凉爽。沐浴在琥珀般
的阳光下，大人们都被这迷人的
场景所震撼，无忧无虑的孩子们
则忙着开心地捡散落在海滩上的
贝壳和堆沙堡。
With my parents accompanying me(with
复合结构)，I set out for the Ocean Theme
Park located in the beach city to see the
sunrise.At first ，some pale stars were still
twinkling in the faint sky ，with the sea
waves buffeting the shore. Then a red sun
slowly appeared in the sky like the blooming
roses
( 比喻句).The layer of rose color
reflected in the sea surface gave people a
sense of peace.The sea water was glittering in
the morning sunlight and the sea wave was
cool buffeting our feet as we leisurely
wandered along the beach ．Bathed in the
amber-like sunshine( 分词作状语) ，adults
were all amazed by the appealing scene while
care-free children were busy picking up the
sea shells scattered on the beach and making
sandcastles happily.
三十三、外貌细节描写：身材、皮肤
单
词
skinny adj.
①
皮包骨的 ②slim adj.苗条的 ③overweight adj.超重的
ruddy adj.
④
红润的 ⑤dark adj. 黝黑的 ⑥wrinkled adj.有皱纹的
well-built adj.
⑦
身强力壮的，结实的 ⑧middle-sized adj.中等身材的
fair adj.
⑨
白皙的 ⑩sunburned adj.晒得黝黑而好看的
词
块
sun-kissed skin
①
晒黑的皮肤 ②a handsome/striking figure 仪表堂堂
a well-built person
③
身材魁梧的人 ④a wrinkled face 布满皱纹的脸
of medium/average height
⑤
中等身高
a lady walking in grace
⑥
走路优雅的女士
a skinny/slim figure
⑦
瘦削/苗条的身材
weather-beaten face
⑧
饱经风霜的脸
a person with an average build
⑨
中等身材的人
句
型
1 ．Before us was a gentle old lady whose wrinkled face formed a
portrait of beauty.站在我们面前的是一位温文尔雅的老太太，她那布满皱
纹的脸却无比的美丽。
2．There is still a heart of loving beauty under her wrinkled face.在她布
满皱纹的脸庞下仍有一颗爱美的心。
3．She sat there，speechless and numb with shock.She remembered her
mother's familiar face and weather-beaten hands.她坐在那里，说不出话
来，吓得麻木了。她想起母亲那张熟悉的面孔和她那饱经风霜的双手。
4．The person who came to see you yesterday had brown skin，bright
eyes，and brilliant teeth.昨天来见你的人，皮肤是棕色的，眼睛明亮，牙
齿洁白。
5.He was of average height and average build，with mousy hair and a
forgettable face.他中等身高，中等身材，留着灰褐色头发，长着一张过目
即忘的脸。
6.The old man slowly walked towards me，with a smile on his weather-
worn/weather-beaten face.那个老人缓缓走向我，饱经风霜的脸上挂着笑
容。
微场景运用
玛丽是一个美丽的女孩，有
着长长的黑发和大大的棕色眼
睛。她的皮肤白皙，有一个小鼻
子并且嘴唇丰满。她又高又苗
条，总是穿着整洁。当她走进一
个房间时，人们不禁会注意到她
的优雅和美丽。
有一天，我看到玛丽像一只
快乐的小鸟一样向我飞来。她告
Mary was a beautiful girl with long
black hair and big brown eyes．Her skin was
fair，and she had a small nose and a mouth
with full lips ．She was tall and slim ，and
she always dressed neatly.When she walked
into a room，people couldn't help but notice
her elegance and beauty．
One day，I saw Mary flying to me like a
诉我，她想和我做朋友。我高兴
地笑了。微风亲吻着我们的面
颊，我们相谈甚多，我惊喜地发
现我们有诸多共同之处。那宜人
的阳光见证着我们愉快地交谈，
因这纯粹的友谊，我们的心愈发
贴近。
joyful bird.She exclaimed that she would
befriend me.I grinned with delight. As the
breeze kissed our cheeks ，we talked a lot
and I was pleasantly surprised to find we had
a lot in common. The lovely sunshine
witnessed us chatting delightedly ，whose
hearts got closer thanks to the pure friendship.
三十四、外貌细节描写：头发、眉毛
单
词
wavy adj.
①
波浪形的 ②curly adj.卷曲的 ③jet black adj.乌黑发亮的
shiny adj.
④
有光泽的 ⑤shoulder-length adj.
齐肩的 ⑥pigtail n.辫
子
heavy/thick adj.
⑦
浓密的 ⑧thin adj.
稀疏的
词
a raised eyebrow
①
扬起的眉毛 ②raise one's eyebrows 扬起眉毛
块
wrinkle/knit one's brow
③
皱眉头 ④short blonde hair 金色短发
a cute girl with a pigtail
⑤
扎着辫子的可爱女孩
smooth one's unruly hair
⑥
捋平乱糟糟的头发
wear bangs on the forehead
⑦
额前留着刘海
句
型
1．My partner has a pair of sparkling eyes under heavy eyebrows.我的搭
档浓眉下面长着一双炯炯有神的眼睛。
2．Helen raised her eyebrows in surprise at his boldness.海伦抬了抬眉
毛，对他的大胆感到惊讶。
3．She lost much of the roundness of her face，her skin lost its youth，
and her hair was thinner.她往日丰润的脸庞消瘦了好多，皮肤失去了青春
的光泽，头发也不那么浓密了。
4．As she bent forward，her fine black hair fell over her cheek.她身子
前倾时，秀美的黑发倾泻在她的脸颊上。
5 ．Dad looked so handsome.His black hair combed back like Elvis
Presley's and a huge grin across his face.爸爸看起来很英俊。他的黑发像
Elvis Presley(猫王)那样梳在脑后，脸上挂着大大的笑容。
6．He has brilliant blue eyes，short blonde hair，and a well-defined jaw.
他有着明亮的蓝眼睛、金色短发和棱角分明的下巴。
7．Her thick curly black hair was twisted into a knot on the back of
her head.她那浓密的黑色卷发在后脑勺上盘成一个髻。
微场景运用
之前，克莱尔强烈反对由她测试
家用机器人的想法。然而，她的
丈夫说服她相信机器人不会伤害
她或允许她受到伤害。令她惊讶
的是，这个名叫托尼的机器人看
起来更像是一个人，而不是一台
机器。他高大英俊，留着一头浓
密的金色卷发。浓眉下是一双炯
炯有神的眼睛。克莱尔盯着他看
Previously
，
Claire was strongly
opposed to the idea that a household robot
was going to be tested out by her. However，
her husband persuaded her to believe that the
robot wouldn't harm her or allow her to be
harmed. To her amazement，the robot named
Tony seemed more like a human than a
machine.He was tall and handsome with thick
curly blonde hair ．Under the heavy
时，他微微扬起眉毛，露出温柔
迷人的笑容，似乎要轻声说些什
么。克莱尔乱糟糟的头发在后脑
勺上随意地盘成一个髻，当她面
对这样一个“机器人”时，她感
到惊讶。
eyebrows was a pair of sparkling eyes(全部倒
装句).When stared by Claire ，he slightly
raised his eyebrows，showing his gentle and
charming smile ，as if to say something
softly.Claire，whose
unruly hair was twisted
into a knot on the back of her head
casually(定语从句)，felt amazed when faced
with such a “robot”．
三十五、主旨升华之善举助人
句
型
1 ．From that day forward ，I understood the power of kindness and
never missed an opportunity to spread some around.从那天起，我明白了
善意的力量，从此不再错过任何传播善意的机会。
2．I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others.Just as the saying
goes，“Roses given，fragrance in hand.”我下定决心要把“爱”传递给
别人。俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香。”
3 ．Sometimes ，a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to
make a huge difference.有时候，一个小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影
响。
4．From that day on，every time I meet someone in need，I always
reach out to them ，hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican
family offered me.从那天起，每次我遇到有需要的人，我都会向他们伸出
援手，希望把墨西哥家庭对我的善意传递下去。
5．Only then did she realize how meaningful it was to help others.直到
那时她才意识到帮助别人是多么有意义的事。
微场景运用
我拖着疲惫的双腿走在尘土飞扬
的路上，希望有人能帮我提一下
沉甸甸的背包。一路上没有树
荫，天气太热，我汗流浃背。我
正在祈祷太阳能暂时离开一下，
这时一个骑自行车的男人停在我
身边，问我是否需要帮助。你永
远无法想象当我听到他天籁般的
声音时我有多高兴。他先递给我
一瓶水，然后把我的大背包放在
自行车后面。我对他的感激之情
溢于言表，主动提出给他一些
钱，我认为这是他应得的。他立
即拒绝了，告诉我那句谚语“予
人玫瑰，手留余香。”，并且说
他只希望我在以后能把这份善意
传递给需要的人。我承诺我会这
样去做的。从那天起，每次我遇
到有需要的人，我都会向他们伸
出援手，希望把善意传递给更多
的人。
I dragged my tired legs on a dusty
road，hoping that someone could give me a
hand with my heavy bag.With no shade along
the way ，so hot was it that I had been
sweating like a pig.I was praying that the sun
could temporarily resign from its post when a
man on his bike stopped beside me，asking
me if I needed some help.You can never
imagine how joyful I was when I heard his
heavenly voice.He firstly handed me a bottle
of water and then carried my huge bag on the
back of his bike.With no words to describe
my appreciation for him ，I offered to give
him some money，which I thought he really
deserved( 定语从句).He immediately
declined ，telling me the saying “Roses
given ，fragrance in hand.” and what he
wanted from me was just to pass on this
kindness to people who are in need in the
future．I promised I would do this and from
that day on，every time I meet someone in
need，I always reach out to them，hoping to
pass on the kindness to more people(分词短
语作状语).
三十六、主旨升华之善举助人
句
型
“and”连接多个并列谓语动词：
1．I rushed home，searched through my collection of hats，and grabbed
the cotton one.我冲回家，翻遍我收集的帽子，然后抓起那顶棉质的。
2 ．The boys rushed excitedly to the lake ，took off their clothes and
jumped into the water.男孩们兴奋地冲向湖边，脱下衣服跳入水中。
3．I gave him a firm handshake，made a mad dash for the bus and
jumped onto it just before it left.我和他紧紧地握了握手，疯狂地向公共
汽车冲去，在汽车开动前跳上了车。
4．Although the girl was terrified, she threw her hands and legs into the
water and tried to get close to Richard and grab his hand.虽然这个女孩
很害怕，但她还是把手和腿伸进水里，试图靠近理查德，抓住他的手。
借助非谓语动词表达多个动作：
1 ．Holding the necklace in her hand ，Jenny lifted her lip ，tears
beginning to blur her vision.珍妮手里拿着项链，扬起嘴唇，泪水开始模
糊了她的视线。
2．He dove into the water，kicking his legs and stretching his arms as
far as he could.他跳进水里，蹬了蹬腿，尽可能地伸展双臂。
3．Standing beside the empty road，they looked up into the sky，feeling
the precious peace from within.他们站在空旷的道路旁，抬头望向天空，
感受着来自内心的珍贵宁静。
4 ．Jane got to her feet shakily ，approached her husband and threw
herself into his arms，sobbing uncontrollably on his shoulders.简摇摇晃晃
地站了起来，走向她的丈夫，扑到他的怀里，在他的肩膀上情不自禁地抽
泣着。
微场景运用
从一所重点大学毕业并获得了医
学证书，我理所当然地认为自己
在选择职业道路时没有任何困
难。然而，那天当我盛装打扮，
走进办公室，坐在面试官面前
时，我意识到要得到我想要的工
作可能并不那么容易。幸运的
是，我被录取了，在我完全放弃
希望之前收到了他们的录取通知
书。我承诺我会全身心投入，一
Graduating from a key university and
acquiring a medical certificate(分词短语作状
语) ，I took it for granted that I had no
difficulty choosing a career path.
However ，the day when I dressed up ，
stepped into the office and sat in front of the
interviewer(动作链描写)，I realized it might
not be so easy to get the job I
wanted.Fortunately ，I was admitted ，
receiving their offer before I completely
心扑在上面。有一次，我遇到并
帮助了一个男孩，他脸朝下撞在
了路上。第二天，我接到一个电
话，电话中说他们很感激我所做
的事，这让我感到骄傲。那天晚
上我开车回家，下定决心要做一
名合格的医生，不仅要给人们带
来健康，还要给人们带来温暖。
deserted my hope ．I promised I would be
fully occupied with it，dedicating myself to it
all day long.There was one time when I came
across and helped a boy who hit the road face
down.The next day，I got a call saying they
were grateful for what I had done ，which
filled me with pride.Driving home that
evening，I made up my mind that I would be
a qualified doctor and bring people not only
health but also warmth.
