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专题十五 读后续写
[题组一] 人与自我
Writing 1
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A Run to Remember
Thirteen can be a challenging age. Not only did I have to adapt to my changing body, I also
had to deal with my parents’ bitter divorce, a new family and the upsetting move from my
country home to a crowded suburb.
When we moved, my beloved companion, a small brown pony(小马), had to be sold. Feeling
helpless and alone, I couldn’t eat or sleep, and I cried all of the time. I missed my family, my
home and my pony. Finally, my father, realizing how much I missed my pony, purchased an
old red horse for me at a local market.
My horse, Cowboy, was without doubt the ugliest horse in the world. He was pigeon-toed and
knock-kneed. But I didn’t care about his faults. I loved him beyond all reasons.
I joined a riding club and faced rude comments and mean snickers about Cowboy’s looks. I
never let on how I felt, but deep down inside, my heart was breaking. The other members
rode beautiful registered horses.
When Cowboy and I entered the events where the horse is judged on appearance, we were
quickly out of the game. I finally realized that my only chance to compete would be in the
racing events. I chose barrel racing(绕桶赛), an event in which a horse and its rider attempt to
complete a triangular pattern around three barrels in the fastest time.
One girl named Becky rode a big brown horse in the events. She always won the blue ribbons.
Needless to say, she didn’t feel threatened when I competed against her at the next show. She
didn’t need to. I came in next to last.
The bitter memory of Becky’s smirks(得意的笑) made me determined to beat her. For the
whole next month, I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena(竞技
场). We practiced for hours in the hot sun and then I would walk Cowboy home. On the way
home I would be so tired; those five miles seemed twice as long.
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All of our hard work didn’t make me feel confident by the time the show came. I sat at the
gate and sweated it out while I watched Becky and her horse charge through the pattern of
barrels, finishing the course with ease.
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My turn finally came.
No cheers filled the air when I finished my show.
答案
One possible version:
My turn finally came. As I urged Cowboy forward, he stumbled, and almost fell, much to the
delight of the other riders. I jammed my hat down on my head, stroked Cowboy’s big red
neck and entered the arena. At the signal, we dashed toward the first barrel, quickly whipped
around it and with perfect precision rounded the second and thundered on to the third. We
tore around the final curve and shot for the finish line.
No cheers filled the air when I finished my show. The end of our run was met with surprising
silence. With the sound of my heart pounding in my ears, I heard the announcer call our time.
Cowboy and I had beaten Becky and her proud fancy horse!I gained much more than a blue
ribbon that day. At thirteen, I realized that I’d always become a winner if I wanted something
badly enough to work for it. I can be the master of my own destiny.
Writing 2
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Taylor opened her sleepy eyes and looked out the window at the foggy field below. “NO!”
she cried, now fully awake. Buttermilk, the cow, was in Mama’s daisy(雏菊) field.
I must have forgotten to fasten the gate last night, Taylor thought as she pulled a sweatshirt
over her head. Mama was planning to sell daisy bouquets at the fair next week. But
Buttermilk was eating the flowers.
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Taylor hurried outside and grabbed the rope hanging on the porch. “Why can’t you behave
yourself?” she shouted at Buttermilk as she headed across the yard to the daisy field.
Buttermilk stood nipping (啃咬) tender flowers off their stems. Taylor rushed to the cow.
Angry and anxious, she thought to herself: “When I grow up, I’ll be an artist and paint
pictures all day. I’ll never own a cow. Too much trouble.”
Just as Taylor was about to snap the rope onto Buttermilk’s collar, the family dog, Red,
rounded the corner of the house. Buttermilk couldn’t stand Red.
Buttermilk took off, tearing through the daisies and across the yard. She finally ran through
the open gate and into the field.
“Thank goodness!” Taylor said as she closed the gate and secured the latch (门栓).
She turned to look at the flower garden. Most of the daisies were either eaten or crushed.
Mama came out of the house. “What’s going on?” she asked. She looked sadly at her garden.
“I forgot to latch the gate,” Taylor said. “I’m so sorry.”
“I know you are,” Mama sighed and gave Taylor a hug. “You learned an important lesson
today.”
Taylor’s heart was heavy as she went back into the house. She had to think of a way to make
up for the loss.
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A painting on the wall caught Taylor’s eye. “That’s it,” she whispered.
On the morning of the fair, Taylor said, “Mama, I have a surprise for you upstairs.”
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文讲述了泰勒决定长大后不养奶牛,而是要当一名艺术家,整天画画。
2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“墙上的一幅画引起了泰勒的注意。‘就是它,’她低声
说。”可知,第一段可描写她抓起美术用品,坐在书桌前,望着窗外剩下的雏菊,开始画起
来。
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由第二段首句内容“在有集市的那天早上,泰勒说:‘妈妈,我在楼上给你准备了一个惊
喜。’”可知,第二段可描写对泰勒画的雏菊的评价。
3.续写线索:画画—完成—欣赏—笑。
One possible version:
A painting on the wall caught Taylor’s eye.“That’s it,”she whispered. Taylor raced upstairs.
She grabbed her art supplies, sat down at her desk and looked out of the window at the
remaining daisies below. As her brush moved smoothly across the paper, daisies came alive.
Totally lost in painting, Taylor made one painting after another. To keep it a secret, every day
Taylor locked herself in her room, committed to painting more, which Buttermilk couldn’t eat
any more. Of course, never had she forgotten to lock the gate since then. By the end of the
week, she had completed two dozen paintings. Appreciating her great masterpieces, she
couldn’t contain her excitement, jumping and clapping,“I made it.”
On the morning of the fair, Taylor said,“Mama, I have a surprise for you upstairs.” Out
hurried Taylor, who exclaimed excitedly. Mama managed a weak smile.“Really? Let’s see
it.” Instantly they reached Taylor’s bedroom, and Taylor opened the door. What greeted them
were daisy paintings everywhere, bright and cheerful in the morning light. “Wow,”said
Mama, unable to utter more words.“Do you think anyone will buy them, Mama?”“Oh, yes,
sweetie. I’m sure they will. And you have learned a better lesson than I expected,”Mama
smiled.
Writing 3
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In the fall of 2013, I was in fourth grade and my brother Mitch was in second. When many
students had puppies, of course we wanted one too!
“Mom, can we get a puppy?” I begged her.
“Well,” she said, “it’s a lot of work, so maybe when you are older.”
“But I’m already ten. I’m old enough to look after a puppy,” I said confidently.
“Yes, we should get a puppy!” echoed Mitch. “Everyone else at school has a puppy,” he
exaggerated (夸张). Then Mom had to repeat what she had just said: We could get a puppy
when we were a little bit older. Both Mitch and I were disappointed.
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The next day, before getting ready for school, we ran into the kitchen, where Mom was
preparing breakfast, and packing our lunches for school. With one voice, Mitch and I said,
“We are a little bit older. Can we get a puppy now?” Mom smiled and said, “We will talk
about it tonight with your dad, now go and get dressed!” We ran quickly into our room and
got ready for school, anxious to get the day over so we could talk about the puppy we were
going to get.
That afternoon, as soon as Mitch and I got home from school, we asked Mom once more
when we could talk about getting a puppy. Mom reminded us, “We’ll talk about it when your
dad gets home from work, okay?” “Okay,” we both said and Mitch followed by asking,
“When will Dad be home?” Mom told us that Dad would be home at about 7 o’clock and that
we could talk to him after we got our homework done and all ready for supper.
7 o’clock came super slow. And it was not until 7:05 that I heard the key turn and the door
open. I jumped up from the chair, and raced to greet Dad at the door.
“Dad!” I exclaimed. “Come on, come to the table so we can decide if we can get a puppy!”
“Okay,” Dad said as he came into the kitchen and sat down at the table. Then Mitch and I
brought out all the reasons we could think of to persuade Dad to be on our side.
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Finally, our parents agreed that if we could go thirty days on our best behavior, we could get a
puppy.
One afternoon, we returned from school to find a puppy running in the yard.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文以时间为线索展开,讲述了作者和弟弟Mitch千方百计说服父母同意他们养一只
小狗,父母最终同意的故事。
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2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“最后,我们的父母同意,如果我们三十天内表现好的话,
我们就能养一只小狗。”可知,第一段可描写作者和Mitch在家好好表现,期待小狗的到
来。
由第二段首句内容“一天下午,我们放学回家,发现一只小狗在院子里跑。”可知,第二段
可描写作者和Mitch与小狗一起生活,照顾小狗及自己的感悟。
3.续写线索:良好表现—期待小狗—得到小狗—照顾小狗—感悟。
One possible version:
Finally, our parents agreed that if we could go thirty days on our best behavior, we could get a
puppy.“Yeah!”Mitch and I gave each other a high five and we jumped with joy. From that
day on, we got up early to help Mom make breakfast, did some housework, and got along
very nicely with each other so we could make it one day closer to meeting a sweet little
puppy. We even decided on a good name, Luckie, for our future dog. Time dragged and we
were eagerly expecting the big day to come.
One afternoon, we returned from school to find a puppy running in the yard.“It’s a reward for
your good behavior last month,”Mom said.“Hi, Luckie!”Mitch and I were overjoyed and we
greeted the puppy excitedly. The little dog, wagging its tail happily, looked at us with the
cutest look of innocence. We felt our hearts melt instantly. We bought Luckie some puppy
food and several lovely toys. Ever since then, feeding, walking and cleaning Luckie have
been our daily routine. We really enjoy watching it grow and become our good companion.
Meanwhile, we get to know that if we really want something, we should strive hard for it.
Writing 4
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It was our turn to open our presents this particular Christmas morning. The living room was
already covered with torn wrapping paper. Obviously, the children could hardly wait to
discover the hidden treasures, which they had expected for nearly a month. Now we adults sat
around the room with our presents at our feet, slowly removing the paper, trying to maintain
our dignity in front of the children.
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My wife, Brenda, and her family have a tradition of getting each other gag (恶作剧) gifts.
This always makes me a bit uneasy at Christmas or on my birthday, never knowing what form
of embarrassment lies waiting for me under the thin borders of the wrapping paper.
Recently, my six-year-old daughter Christy seemed to busy herself with something while I
was playing computer video flight games. Now she was standing directly in front of me. The
excitement of the moment just beamed across her face. It was everything she could do to keep
herself from helping me rip the paper from each present. Finally, I came to the last gift and
with my natural Sherlock Holmes ability, I concluded that this had to be the gag gift. With
everyone looking on, I decided to go ahead and get it over with—just let them have their
laugh—and I tore the paper and there it was a toy airplane about two inches long. Our holiday
guests started giggling as I looked up to my wife with an unpleasant smile on my face and
blurted out (脱口而出), “A toy airplane? Are you kidding me?”
Brenda gave me the look—that look that always tells me I have just said something wrong
and should have given it a second thought. I had failed to look at the name tag before I
opened the present to see who it was from. As I picked up the paper from the floor and read
the name tag, my heart sank.
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On the tag were the letters that read, “To Dad, Love Christy”.
Staring at the gift, I suddenly thought of a way to cheer her up.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了作者收到圣诞节礼物后的情感变化。
2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“标签上写着‘给爸爸,爱你的Christy。’”可知,第一段
可描写当作者得知礼物是女儿送的后的举动和女儿听到爸爸的话后失望的心情。
由第二段首句内容“盯着这份礼物,我突然想到一个办法让她高兴起来。”可知,第二段
可描写作者是用什么办法让女儿高兴起来的及作者的感悟。
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3.续写线索:女儿失望—作者向女儿解释—女儿仍然难过—作者想出新办法—女儿高兴
起来—作者的感悟。
One possible version:
On the tag were the letters that read,“To Dad, Love Christy”. Seeing her joy replaced by a
look of total embarrassment and humiliation, I was seized by a strong sense of regret and
pain. She slowly lowered her head down, seemingly praying that nobody would discover
whom the gift came from. Without hesitation, I knelt down and embraced Christy tightly,
trying to take back those words. I explained I had thought it was from Mom, but since it came
from her, that made it different. However, no matter what I said, it could hardly remove the
disappointment in her eyes and hurt in her heart. Confronted with the embarrassing situation,
I was at a loss what to do.
Staring at the gift, I suddenly thought of a way to cheer her up. I took that toy airplane in my
hand, turned on its switch and flew the plane. At the sight of the flying plane, I yelled with
excitement, which amused other children who eagerly asked for a try. My eyes resting on
Christy, I deliberately ignored their enthusiasm, flying the plane around her.“Let me try it
first!” It wasn’t long before Christy believed it was really a charming gift and grabbed for the
plane, a big smile radiating from her face. From then on, I kept the little plane as a reminder
of my girl’s love and also, the power of words.
Writing 5
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My father is a hard-working and friendly man. He taught me to drive, play baseball and fish
when I was young. However, one other thing my dad’s good at was holding a grudge(怨恨).
For most of my teen years, he didn’t speak to his younger brother, although they were at
many family events together.
I was never sure why my dad was so angry with my uncle in the first place. They spent many
festivals sitting at opposite ends of the table. It was simply something that we all accepted at
the time.
When I was nineteen, I got a call in my college dorm that my dad was having serious medical
problems. My mom picked me up in the middle of the night so we could be there in time.
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However, my dad was arranged to transfer to a better hospital the next day. I couldn’t fall
asleep. I tossed and turned.
That morning, as my mom and I walked down the hallway of the hospital, we could see
straight into my dad’s room. A tall man wearing a stylish suit stood by my father’s bed with
his back to us. Casually, my mom remarked how nice it was for the doctor to come by to see
my dad so early in the morning.
But through my misty eyes, something about the scene surprised me. The man with his back
to us was standing very quietly. He was holding both of my dad’s hands. It was definitely not
what a typical doctor would do. I stopped at the door of the room.
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I whispered softly to my mom, “That’s not a doctor.”
The other miracle was my father’s new relationship with his younger brother.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者的父亲和叔叔由关系冷漠到和好如初的故事。作
者最终感悟到,如果想要获得原谅,首先要表达自己的善意,尤其是在对方遇到困难的时候。
2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“我轻声对妈妈说:‘那不是医生。’”可知,第一段可描
写父亲在叔叔的照顾下恢复了。
由第二段首句内容“另一个奇迹是我父亲和他弟弟的新关系。”可知,第二段可描写父
亲与叔叔之间的关系变得亲近及作者对此事的感悟。
3.续写线索:发现真相—父亲恢复—兄弟亲近—思考及感悟。
One possible version:
I whispered softly to my mom,“That’s not a doctor.” My mother stepped forward curiously,
only to find that he was the last person we could imagine to have appeared. It was my uncle
who had been caring for my father. I was about to open the door when my mother stopped
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me, leaving the two brothers alone longer. It must have worked some kind of magic, and my
father soon recovered. All the doctors said it was nothing but a miracle.
The other miracle was my father’s new relationship with his younger brother. They might still
sit at the opposite sides, but the awkward silence was replaced by various jokes and stories.
Later, they frequently went fishing and hiking together. I thought that what my uncle did
during my father’s illness warmed my father’s heart and got the response it deserved. Now I
realize that if you want to be forgiven by others, you should show your kindness first. No one
will refuse the good will offered by others, especially when in trouble.
Writing 6
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In 1989, fresh out of high school, I had the difficult task of choosing a career path before
college started in three months. In those days in Pakistan, there were limited options:
becoming a doctor or an engineer, or entering the financial world after getting a business
degree. I wasn’t interested in engineering, so I was left with medicine and business. I couldn’t
decide.
My uncle, an influential person in the family, suggested that I do a work placement to
experience it for a month in an international company followed by a month in a hospital.
After that, I could make a decision. It seemed like a brilliant idea.
I was accepted for a month’s placement at a foreign bank in Karachi. I got a feel for how the
world of finance functioned, made new friends, and generally enjoyed the mostly easy-going
work surroundings.
The month passed rapidly, and soon I began working at a leading hospital in Karachi. The
experience couldn’t have been more different. The hospital had an intense environment. The
days started early (at 7 am, compared to 9 am at the bank), and were filled with endless
duties, and the night calls! This was crazy, working all day, through the night, and again the
next day.
I began thinking about my two experiences. The bank had offered a more relaxing
atmosphere, better working hours and less stress. The hospital was full of excitement and
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unpredictability, but the studying and training was difficult. It seemed that the business option
was going to win out.
Near the end of my month at the hospital, I was driving home after an especially busy night
call. In front of me was a public bus, with college students sitting on the top. As the driver
weaved through (穿梭) traffic, I could see the boys shaking from side to side.
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Suddenly, a boy fell off the back of the bus.
The next day, when I went to hospital to see the boy, all his family got up, with grateful
smiles on their faces.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文讲述了作者在高中毕业后,在叔叔的建议下分别体验了银行和医院的工作。作者
认为银行的工作相对轻松,而医院的工作繁忙且不可预知。有一天,作者在一场交通事故
中救助了一个受伤的男孩并及时将他送进了医院。在他第二天去看望男孩的时候,男孩
的家人非常感激。最后,作者明白了自己之后的工作方向。
2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“突然,一个男孩从公共汽车后面掉了下来。”可知,第一
段可描写作者如何救助受伤的男孩。
由第二段首句内容“第二天,当我去医院看望那个男孩时,他的家人都站了起来,脸上带着
感激的微笑。”可知,第二段可描写作者去医院看望男孩,男孩以及他的家人非常感激,作
者感到满足和激动,且明确了自己之后的工作方向。
3.续写线索:(男孩的)危机—营救—看望男孩—男孩家人的反应—感悟。
One possible version:
Suddenly, a boy fell off the back of the bus. He hit the road face down and rolled over.
He lay motionlessly in the middle of the road as the bus drove away quickly. The cars directly
behind the bus braked to avoid the boy, but none stopped. I knew that if the boy was having
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bleeding in his brain, he could die soon. I stopped my car.I lifted his unconscious body into
my car with the help of some passers-by, and then raced back to the hospital. Since I wasn’t
allowed into the operation room, I drove home.
The next day, when I went to hospital to see the boy, all his family got up, with grateful
smiles on their faces. The mother held my hands and started weeping. “Son, you are an
angel,” she repeated over and over again. After comforting her, I went over to the boy. He
managed to smile and squeezed my hand. No words were spoken between us—none were
needed.I spent the rest of the day in a state of excitement, the most fabulous mood I had ever
experienced. I knew what I wanted to do for the rest of my life.
Writing 7
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Jim slumped on the couch. Mother’s Day was coming up, but he didn’t have a present. “How
can I buy a present without any money?”he thought.
Jim picked up the newspaper that was lying on the couch. He noticed a large advertisement on
the front page. The local department store was sponsoring a contest. “Tell us why your mom
is special and win a shopping spree(疯狂购物) for her,” said the ad.
“This is perfect!” thought Jim. He ran to his room with the newspaper. Taking a pencil and a
blank piece of paper from his desk, he started to write.
“My mom is the best mother in the world. She always makes lunch for me to take to school,
and she never forgets my dessert. She reads as many books to me before bed as I want. She
always remembers to check under the bed for monsters. And she gives the best hug, but never
in front of my friends, who would laugh at me for hugging my mom.”
Jim liked what he had written. He copied it neatly and got an envelope and a stamp from his
dad. He ran to the mailbox with his entry(参赛作品). “Mom will love having a shopping
spree,” he thought.
Jim checked the mailbox every day for his prize. Days passed by, and then weeks. Soon it
was the day before Mother’s Day. Jim still hadn’t heard anything about the contest.
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“What am I going to do now?” he wondered. He didn’t have a present, and he didn’t have a
shopping spree, and he still didn’t have any money. He had to think of something. Jim closed
his eyes and curled his toes and thought hard.
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Suddenly he had an idea.
The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom.
答案
[写作提示]
1.文章主要讲述了Jim思考怎么才能不花钱给妈妈送母亲节礼物,这时,他在报纸上看到
一则广告——告诉我们你妈妈的特别之处,为她赢得一个疯狂购物的机会。Jim立刻行
动,写下妈妈的特别之处,然后邮寄出去,焦急地等着结果。
2.续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:突然,他有了一个主意。所以这一段应该写Jim为妈
妈准备礼物,例如,给妈妈写一封信。要详细描写信件的内容。第二段开头是:第二天早
上,Jim把他的礼物送给了妈妈。这一段主要写妈妈读完信件的反应以及Jim解释写信的
原因。
One possible version:
Suddenly he had an idea. He fumbled in his drawers and fortunately found a piece of
delicate and fragrant paper.He sat down straight on his chair, and began to write a letter in his
best handwriting as a Mother’s Day present. “Dear Mom, I’m writing this letter to tell you
that you are the best mother in the world...” With a sincere heart, Jim finished the letter and
sealed it in an envelope. His lips curved in a smile.
The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom.Finishing reading the letter, his
mom swept him up into her arms with her eyes wet as if she wanted to squeeze the breath out
of him. “Thank you, my dear!” she sniffled, hugging Jim more tightly. Leaning against his
mom’s shoulder, Jim slowly explained why he chose to write a letter as a gift. After hearing
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the reason, his mom gently said, “To me, your letter is better than a thousand shopping
sprees.” Indeed, love should be made known to loved ones.
[题组二] 人与社会
Writing 1
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The last race of the day was over. My breathing gradually stilled along with the ripples in the
pool, but I stayed in the water, watching sadly as the winners gathered for the awards
ceremony.
“Don’t look so sad,” I heard a voice say behind me. I turned around to see a tall, blond, blue-
eyed man standing on the edge of the pool. “You came in fourth, but you are the best in your
country,” he smiled. “I’m Ken Schafer, and you?”
“Rima Datta.”
“And how old are you, Rima?”
“Fourteen, sir,” I replied lifting myself out of the water. Ken was a swimming coach from
California and asked me about my life as a swimmer until then.
My eldest brother Anil had taught me how to swim, but I had no real training until I was nine
when a coach from the National Institute of Sports came for just three months a year to train
the boys at Mayo College, where our father taught. She set aside a couple of hours a week for
the daughters of the staff. It was she who had corrected my mistakes and encouraged me to
take part in competitions.
Surprised to hear how little steady training I had had, Ken introduced me to the National
Institute of Sports in Patiala to be trained in summer. The training was hard, and I felt quite
lonely away from my parents and all that was familiar. But it was Ken, with his tireless
enthusiasm, his passion for swimming, and his faith in me that kept me focused.
I won my first gold medal at the national championship that year, a fact that filled me with
immense joy and Ken with a sense of satisfaction that his work with me was paying off. Yet
he realized that what I really needed was a team to train with and steady coaching.
Then he persuaded my parents to allow me to go to California and train there for a year. He
even helped find a host family for me.
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注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Alone on the long flight to Los Angeles, I was filled with doubts, as I had never lived with a
strange family.
The kindness of the host family and Ken gave me all the practical and emotional support
I needed to train in a swimming club of California.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在游泳比赛上认识了Ken,他说服了作者的父母让
作者去加利福尼亚训练一年。他甚至帮作者找了一个寄宿家庭。作者一开始还很担忧,
但是后来和寄宿家庭相处很愉快,游泳成绩逐步提高,而且作者从他们身上学到了慷慨、
爱和善良。
2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“在独自一人前往洛杉矶的长途飞行中,我充满了疑虑,因
为我从未与陌生的家庭生活在一起过。”可知,第一段可描写作者内心的疑虑和不安,以
及见到寄宿家庭后的感受。
由第二段首句内容“寄宿家庭和Ken的善良给了我在加利福尼亚的游泳俱乐部训练所
需的所有实际和情感支持。”可知,第二段可描写作者在寄宿家庭的生活情况以及感悟。
3.续写线索:充满疑虑—见到寄宿家庭—描述在寄宿家庭的生活—游泳成绩提高—感悟。
One possible version:
Alone on the long flight to Los Angeles, I was filled with doubts, as I had never lived with a
strange family. How would I manage to live with people I had never met before? What if I
can’t get along well with the host family? Would I fit in? I needn’t have worried. From the
first moment at the airport where they had come to meet me, I knew things would be all right.
Their smiles and their words of welcome as they greeted me felt like a warm embrace. I could
not have found a kinder, more generous family than theirs.
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The kindness of the host family and Ken gave me all the practical and emotional support
I needed to train in a swimming club of California. During my stay there, it was the mother of
my host family who drove me to and from the training center every day. She could cook
delicious food and she knew how to comfort me while I was homesick. The training was hard,
yet it was Ken who always showed me concern and encouraged me to keep going. My
swimming performance improved slowly but steadily. From those kind people I have learned
generosity, love, and kindness.
Writing 2
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As we came down to breakfast that morning, with very shiny faces and clean aprons, we
found Father alone in the dining-room.
“Happy New Year, Papa! Where is Mother?” we cried.
“A little boy came begging and said his family was starving at home, so your mother went to
see and...Ah, here she is.”
As Papa spoke, in came Mamma, looking very cold, rather sad, and very much excited.
“Children, don’t begin till you hear what I have to say,” she cried and we sat staring at her,
with the breakfast untouched before us.
“Not far away from here, lies a poor woman with a little newborn baby. Six children are
huddled into one bed to keep from freezing, for they have no fire. There is nothing to eat over
there; and the oldest boy came here to tell me they were starving on this bitter cold day. My
little girls, will you give them your breakfast as a New Year’s gift?”
We sat silent for a minute, and looked at the nice, hot porridge, creamy milk, and good bread
and butter.
“I wish we’d eaten it up,” I thought, for I was rather a selfish child, and very hungry.
“I’m so glad you came before we began,” said Nan, cheerfully.
“May I go and help carry it to the poor, little children?” asked Beth, who had the tenderest
heart.
“I can carry the pot,” said little May, proudly giving the thing she loved best.
“And I shall take all the porridge,” I burst out, heartily ashamed of my first feeling.
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“You shall put on your things and help me, and when we come back, we’ll get something to
eat,” said my mother, beginning to pile the bread and butter into a big basket.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
We were soon ready and set out.
Seeing the house totally in a mess, we fell to work immediately.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文讲述了在新年里,作者的妈妈号召孩子们去帮助穷苦的一家人,作者刚开始不愿意
将自己的早饭奉献出来,但看到姐妹们都很慷慨,也决定成为其中的一分子,她们最终给这
家人送了食物,还帮忙打扫了卫生,度过了有意义的新年。
2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“我们很快就准备好并出发了。”可知,第一段可描写作
者一家出发并到达,最终见到这一家人的场景。
由第二段首句内容“看到房子里一片狼藉,我们立即开始工作。”可知,第二段可描写
作者一家帮忙打扫房屋,这一家人十分感激。
3.续写线索:出行—房屋状况—打扫卫生—结束工作—感悟—收到感激。
One possible version:
We were soon ready and set out. With May and Beth carrying the pot and I holding the
porridge, we closely followed Mom. We plodded forward in the harsh wind and heavy snow.
Then a shabby house appeared and we popped in. What greeted our eyes shocked us: At one
end of the bed huddled six kids shivering with cold and the other lay a weak woman who just
gave birth to a fragile child. Dirty pans and pots scattered about, with cockroaches creeping
on the cracked floor.
Seeing the house totally in a mess, we fell to work immediately. May helped sweep the floor.
Beth and Nan cleaned the sink. Mom and I started a fire, which immediately heated up the
place. The oldest brother joined us and set the table, which was now laid with lukewarm
porridge, creamy milk and yummy bread. All the work done, we sat around and enjoyed the
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delicious food with Mom saying it was the most meaningful New Year she had ever had.
Meanwhile, tears of gratitude twinkled in the family’s eyes as no words could convey their
appreciation towards us.
Writing 3
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Having been teaching anthropology (人类学) at Dartmouth College for 15 years, I still
remember the day when I first encountered Margaret Mead’s Coming of Age in Samoa, a
very important book on the study of the social and cultural development of peoples.
When I was fourteen, I earned money in the summer by mowing lawns, and within a few
weeks I had built up a body of customers. I got to know people by the flowers they planted,
by the things they lost in the grass or stuck in the ground on purpose. I learned something
about the measure of my neighbors by their preferred method of payment: by the job, by the
month—or not at all.
Mr. Ballou fell into the last category, and he always had a reason. On one day, he had no
change for a fifty, on another he was simply out when I knocked on his door. Still, except for
the money, he was a nice enough old guy, always waving his hat when he’d seen me from a
distance. Sure, I kept track of the total, but I didn’t worry about the amount too much.
Then, one late afternoon in mid-July, the hottest time of the year, I was walking by his house
and he opened the door, stopped me and let me in. The hall was cool, shaded, and it took me a
minute to adjust to the dim light.
“I owe you,” said Mr. Ballou. “But...”
I thought I’d save him the trouble of thinking of a new excuse. “No problem. Don’t worry
about it.”
“The bank made a mistake in my account,” he continued, ignoring my words. “It will be
cleared up in a day or two. But in the meantime I thought perhaps you could choose one or
two volumes for a down payment.”
He gestured toward the walls and I saw that books were stacked (堆放) everywhere. It was
like a library.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Mr. Ballou encouraged me to read, borrow or keep the books I liked.
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To this day, thirty years later, I clearly remember this experience.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者对于第一次读到玛格丽特·米德的《萨摩亚人的成
年》这本书的回忆。
2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“Ballou先生鼓励我读、借或保存我喜欢的书。”可知,
第一段可描写作者面对如此多的书无从选择。
由第二段首句内容“三十年后的今天,我仍然清楚地记得这段经历。”可知,第二段可描
写这段经历对于作者的影响和作者的感悟。
3.续写线索:自己选书的为难—Ballou先生帮助选书—第一次读书的感受—影响—感悟。
One possible version:
Mr. Ballou encouraged me to read, borrow or keep the books I liked. Facing so many books
for the first time, I had no idea which one to choose. Nice enough, he handed a fairly thick
book to me and asked me to tell him what the book was about the next week. It was my first
encounter with world literature, and I was so impressed by the power a novel could contain
and absorbed in reading all those vivid characters and the elegant language.
To this day, thirty years later, I clearly remember this experience. Now I am a teacher
teaching anthropology at college. For that year, Mr. Ballou never paid me money for mowing
his lawns but led me to the road that is far more valuable than money. A book, if it arrives
before you at the right moment, in the proper season, will change the course of all your life.
Writing 4
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Yoghurt
It was a rough week. The price of oil skyrocketed as the temperature dropped sharply in
Maine. We were looking at a high of eight degrees that week, and I had missed three days of
work so my paycheck was going to be lower than normal. I was stressed, to say the least. I
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shopped strategically, looking for every possible way to save money so I could buy groceries
and keep the house warm.
My eight-year-old son didn’t understand when I told him we were struggling that week. He
wanted a special kind of yoghurt, but I didn’t have the extra three dollars to buy it for him. It
was the kind of yoghurt with a cartoon kid riding a skateboard on the front of the box, and a
mere two spoonfuls in each cup. It was the kind of product that wastes a parent’s money and
makes me hate advertising.
I felt guilty as a parent when those big eyes looked at me with confusion, as if to say, “It’s
just yoghurt. What’s the big deal?” So I found a way. I put something back as single mothers
often do. He got his yoghurt.
On the way driving back from the grocery store, I noticed a homeless man holding a sign by
the side of the road. My heart hurt, and I tried not to look at him. I watched people stay away
from him on the street and walk by without even meeting his eyes. My son didn’t seem to
care much, either. I looked at the man closely then—bare hands grasping a piece of
cardboard, snot(鼻涕)frozen on his face, a worn-out jacket. And there I was struggling
because I had to buy oil and groceries. But I decided to help him. I pulled over to the man and
handed him a five-dollar bill.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Seeing this, my son became confused and surprised.
On that day, my son performed an act that most adults wouldn’t have done.
答案
[写作提示]
1.通读短文可知,由于物价以及自己工作的问题,本周在经济上对于作者来说是艰难的一
周,作者和儿子在杂货店里购物,为了让儿子能买到他想买的酸奶,作者不得不放回去一件
已经选好的商品。从杂货店开车回来的路上,作者注意到一个无家可归的人在路边举着
一个牌子,尽管作者经济困难,她还是给了这个无家可归的人5美元,短文续写由此展开。
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2.由第一段开头“看到这个,我儿子感到困惑和惊讶。”可知,短文要续写儿子与作者之
间的对话,以此介绍作者为什么要慷慨地给这个无家可归的人5美元,而在儿子买酸奶时
却如此吝啬。
由第二段开头“那天,我的儿子做了一件大多数成年人不会做的事。”可知,短文要续写
儿子将自己心爱的酸奶递给这个无家可归的人以及作者的感悟。
One possible version:
Seeing this, my son became confused and surprised. “Mum, why are you so generous to
this stranger while so mean to me when I asked for the yoghurt?” I explained that if we were
blind to the poor man’s situation he would be freezing. He didn’t have a home or food to eat
after all.We could spare five dollars even if we were financially stressed. Finally my son
nodded and fixed his eyes on his yoghurt.
On that day, my son performed an act that most adults wouldn’t have done. He took his
yoghurt and handed it to the man outside his window.Even if it was a matter of a few
spoonfuls of yoghurt, it was all he had, and he gave it to someone who needed it more than he
wanted it. He showed me that I was doing well as a mother. There are always blessings to
count if we open our eyes, and we always have the opportunity to be a blessing to someone
else.
Writing 5
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a frequent interstate traveler. I was born in Ontario, Canada and thus all my family
except my husband and children live there. So three times a year I make a trip north from
Georgia to visit. I often travel by myself as my children are all adults and my husband is
working.
Two years ago I went up in the spring and brought one of my sisters south for a month to take
away the pains of a long winter. This year I did the same. It is interesting that many of my
friends have said “Aren’t you scared?” or “What if you break down?” I always respond that I
have a lot of faith in the Lord and in myself. My husband is a mechanic and each year gives
my car a good checkup. He will come for me if I need help.
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Here is how my miracle happened in South Carolina. Heading north to take my sweet sister of
63 home to Canada, we were chatting away and I was driving 70 miles per hour in the third
lane. Yes, the fastest lane. All of a sudden, I started to lose power. I said anxiously I was
losing power and got over to the next and then the right lane. I was driving at about 40 miles
per hour when I got to the first exit. I finally arrived at a Citgo station and pulled off the road.
I immediately called my husband but he didn’t answer. I called two more times saying
“please answer the phone” to myself. I was getting pretty upset thinking what I should do. I
got out of the car and looked under it and smelled gas. Then I checked the oil and water.
Luckily, both were good! My sister went into the gas station and said to the clerk if he knew
anyone who could help us and then said prayers for us as she made her way to the rest room.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
I was standing by my car when a man with broken English suddenly appeared.
I thanked my rescuer and asked him if I could pay him for his help.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文讲述了作者在驾驶汽车时车子出现了故障,打丈夫的电话无人接听。在无助的时
候一个陌生人帮助了作者。
2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“我正站在我的汽车旁,这时一个英语很蹩脚的人突然出
现了。”可知,第一段可描写这个英语很蹩脚的人询问作者是否需要帮助,并在最后成功
帮助她修理好汽车。
由第二段首句内容“我向搭救我的人表示感谢,并问他我是否可以为他的帮助支付报
酬。”可知,第二段可描写这个男人拒绝了报酬,作者非常感激,给了他一个拥抱。作者和
这个陌生人都感到很高兴。对于这件事作者心存感激并有所感悟。
3.续写线索:询问—帮助—提出支付报酬—拒绝—感谢—感悟。
One possible version:
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I was standing by my car when a man with broken English suddenly appeared. He said if
he could he would help me. I said I thought there was a gas leak because I smelled it. He got
under the car, and two minutes later, he slid out and said it was all fixed.He asked me to start
it up and see if it worked well. Actually, at first, I was a little skeptical. But I did as he said.
To my delight and relief, my car had power.
I thanked my rescuer and asked him if I could pay him for his help. He shook his head
instantly and politely refused my offer. I thanked the nice man again and gave him a big hug.
My heart was full, and I said he was a blessing in my life. His face lit up and had a beautiful
smile. My sister and I were both teary eyed and extremely grateful.There are so many stories
of rudeness and unkindness to others but I have been helped many times by kind people.
[题组三] 人与自然
Writing 1
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
For two years, Mika and I were hunting for a cheap, cosy cottage by a stream. Then, late one
night, something appeared online. A log cabin(小屋)on four acres, with a dirt road to the
Susquehanna River and protected farmland on all sides. Perfect!
Except...
“You know where it is, right?” the realtor(房地产经纪人)warned when I called the next
morning. Only two houses were down there. Everything else, for hundreds of acres, was open
farmland. No police, no local government, not even a grocery store. The only place within
fifteen miles to buy food was a one-room shop in the back of an Amish farm. If we moved
there, he warned, we’d be completely on our own.
Whatever. It had to be better than our apartment here, right?
We pulled into the dirt driveway to find horses eating grass along the fence, flowers blooming
by the stream, and an Amish farmer rumbling(轰鸣着缓慢行进)past in a steel-wheeled truck.
Unbelievable! We threw open the car doors, excitedly talking about the wonderful view.
Pulling the realtor aside, we couldn’t wait to make an offer. And a few weeks later, we left
Philly for our dream home.
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Solitude(独处)was going to be our biggest problem—or so I thought, until I heard Mika
scream. I dropped the box I was unpacking and came running. I found her at the back door,
holding two-year-old Maya in her arms, moving away from a six-foot black snake winding at
her feet. She had been watering a row of plants and when she stepped from one to the next,
the snake dropped from the roof and fell down right where Mika had been standing a second
earlier.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
I grabbed a shovel(铲子).
I walked to our nearest neighbor for help.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文讲述了作者搬到了梦想中的家,高兴的情绪一直延续到有一天作者一家遇到了一
条六英尺的黑蛇,他惊慌失措地想要把它赶走的故事。
2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“我拿起一把铲子。”可知,第一段可描写作者想赶走黑
蛇的经过。
由第二段首句内容“我走到我们最近的邻居那里寻求帮助。”可知,第二段可描写作者
从邻居那里了解了情况。
3.续写线索:驱赶黑蛇—黑蛇进入房间—向邻居求助—邻居解释—如释重负地回家。
One possible version:
I grabbed a shovel. I tried to drive the monster away, but it began climbing up the roof. I
banged the shovel in front of its face to drive it back. Instead, the snake slid right over the
shovel and disappeared into the roof. Now what? The only thing worse than finding a giant
snake outside your house is driving it inside, especially when the inside contains a baby you’ll
soon be putting to bed.
I walked to our nearest neighbor for help. When I finally found an old Amish farmer and
asked him how to get rid of the snake, he didn’t understand the problem.“You’re lucky,”he
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said.“That’s a rat snake. It will eat the mice and stay out of your way.”So I needn’t have
worried at all! All I need is to get used to its being around. I went home in great relief.
Writing 2
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ellen Kalish runs the Ravensbeard Wildlife Center in New York. She is used to getting calls
about taking in wild animals. When a man called asking if she could rescue an owl(猫头鹰),
she was happy to help. Then, the caller told her where this tiny owl was hiding. It was found
inside the Christmas tree in the Rockefeller Center, where it is a yearly tradition to decorate
trees. But this year,the tree looked a little worse. Many people made fun of its sagging(低垂
的)branches. They called the tree a “symbol of 2020”, meaning its sad look reminded them
how tough the past year was.
The tale of the owl’s rescue quickly became the highlight of this year’s tree. Before the tree
was put up to decorate, one of the workers spotted the creature. It was buried in the base of
the tree. The owl most likely traveled with the tree on its journey to Manhattan. So, how did it
end up sticking in the tree in the first place?
Kalish offered a few possibilities. The owl could have flown to the tree to hide there because
it was injured and then got trapped later. Or maybe once the tree was loaded onto a truck, the
branches squeezed it into the trunk. The bird may have just been too scared to move.
Actually, there is no proof of where it came from. “That would be the last place it would want
to go. Why would it pick that tree if it had a choice not to? It’s smart and it wouldn’t do that,”
she explained.
In that case, the worker had to bring the owl home. He decided to find a place that rescues
wild animals. That was why he called the Center. After Kalish got the full story about the
bird, she met the man at a gas station. Then the man handed her a box with the owl inside.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Kalish opened the box gently.
Several days passing, the owl looked in good shape.
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答案
[写作提示]
1.本文主要记叙了Ellen Kalish接到陌生电话,询问她是否可以救治一只野生猫头鹰,她欣
然同意的故事。
2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“Kalish轻轻地打开盒子。”可知,第一段可描写Kalish
在盒子里看到了猫头鹰,讲述她照顾猫头鹰的经过。
由第二段首句内容“几天过去了,猫头鹰看起来很健康。”可知,第二段可描写Kalish对
猫头鹰进行户外训练,让它能适应环境,将来能够自由飞翔。
3.续写线索:打开盒子—发现猫头鹰—照顾过程—猫头鹰逐渐恢复—猫头鹰自由飞翔。
One possible version:
Kalish opened the box gently. The owl was standing in a cardboard box, looking straight at
her. “It’s a miracle! How did this bird survive this trip?”She named the owl Rockefeller, or
“Rocky”.“It was super hungry,”she said, estimating that it probably had not been able to eat
or drink for at least a few days. She immediately gave it water and food—a few frozen mice
—which it ate quickly. A veterinarian examined it, and X-rays showed that it had no broken
bones or inner damage. By Thursday, Rocky started to bathe itself—a sign that it was feeling
good.
Several days passing, the owl looked in good shape. On Friday, Kalish moved Rocky to an
outdoor practice cage so it could get used to new circumstance and Kalish could monitor its
flight. By Tuesday at dusk, it seemed ready to go. Kalish brought Rocky to a clearing in
nearby forest, removed it from its carrier and raised it toward the sky. Rocky sat on Kalish’s
hand for several moments, surveying its surroundings. Then, it flew off, settling in a nearby
pine tree.
Writing 3
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A freezing downpour washed the street in front of the small-town bar. I sat gazing into the
watery darkness, alone as usual. I had been in that old bar for half an hour, quietly drinking,
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when my thoughtful eyes finally focused on a medium-sized lump in a puddle (水洼) a
hundred feet away. For another ten minutes, I looked out through the window trying to decide
if the lump was an animal or just something.
The night before, a dog named Shep had come into the bar begging for potato chips. He was
starving and just the size of the lump in the puddle. Why should a dog lie in a cold puddle in
the freezing rain? I asked myself. The answer was simple: Either it wasn’t a dog, or it was,
and he was too weak to get up.
The wound in my right shoulder ached all the way down my fingers. I didn’t want to go out in
the storm. Hey, it wasn’t my dog. It was just a stray on a cold rainy night, a lonely drifter (流
浪者). So was I, I thought, as I gulped(大口吞咽) down what was left of my drink and
headed out the door.
He was lying in the three inches of water. When I touched him, he didn’t move. I thought he
was dead. I put my hands around his chest and raised him to his feet. He stood unsteadily, and
his head hung like a weight at the end of his neck. His floppy ears were just hairless pieces of
flesh dotted with open sores (伤口).
“Come on, Shep,” I said, leading him to a corner next to the bar, where he lay on the cold
cement floor and closed his eyes. A block away I could see the lights of a late-night
convenience store. It was still open. I bought three cans of dog food and fed him. He couldn’t
swallow but looked at me. He was dying!
注意:续写词数应为150 左右。
The local vet (兽医) was still at his office, so I loaded the poor creature into a taxi and
headed there.
Three days later, when I opened the door of the vet’s, Shep welcomed me with wild
enthusiasm.
答案
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[写作提示]
1.本文讲述了作者救助流浪狗的经历。
2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“当地的兽医还在他的办公室里,所以我把这个可怜的动
物放上一辆出租车,去了那里。”可知,第一段可描写作者带Shep去看兽医,和兽医一起
努力救治它。
由第二段首句内容“三天后,当我打开兽医诊所的门时,Shep非常热情地欢迎我。”可知,
第二段可描写三天后作者再去诊所时Shep已经恢复体力,此后作者收养了它。
3.续写线索:带Shep看兽医—情况不乐观—一起救治Shep—Shep得救—收养Shep—作
者的感悟。
One possible version:
The local vet(兽医) was still at his office, so I loaded the poor creature into a taxi and headed
there. After a quick check on the poor dog, the vet shook his head with regret. He promised
me he would try his best but Shep was unlikely to get through it unless there was a miracle.
While the vet treated the sores carefully, I tried to drop water in his mouth and fed him with
food bit by bit. I never gave up hope of getting him saved. Many times I would caress his
neck, whispering something in his ear to encourage him to hold on. He was so weak that he
had to stay in the vet’s.
Three days later, when I opened the door of the vet’s, Shep welcomed me with wild
enthusiasm. He wagged his tail from left to right as if to say “Thank you”. He was gaining
strength and improving for the better. Tears filling my eyes, I knew all our efforts were
worthwhile. Soon, the dog recovered from severe sores and I adopted him and took him
home. Once in a while, I would go to that bar with Shep, a drink for myself and potato chips
for him. What would have happened if I hadn’t stepped out on that stormy night? Care and
kindness really made a difference to both of us.
Writing 4
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Sunday, Nicholas, a teenager, went skiing with his father at Sugarloaf Mountain in Maine.
They had a wonderful day and decided to drive home to Massachusetts after a final run. They
took a chairlift to the top of the mountain, where they split up to go down in different trails.
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When the father finished his run, he headed to the parking lot to wait for his son. However,
Nicholas didn’t show up.
It turned out that a fierce snowstorm had swept into the area as Nicholas was on his way
down. Unable to see far, he accidentally turned off the path and ventured down the west side
of the mountain. Before he knew it, Nicholas was lost and all alone. His way back to the ski
trails was blocked. What’s worse, he didn’t have any food or water with him, let alone his cell
phone or other supplies. The sun began to sink and he was getting colder by the minute.
Nicholas had no idea where he was. He tried not to panic. He thought about Bear Grylls’
survival show Man vs. Wild that he used to watch on TV. In the show, Grylls was abandoned
in a wild area and had to help himself out. It was time to put the tips he had learned to use.
He decided to stop moving around. He needed the energy, and the winds weren’t as strong in
the valley where he stood as they were up on the mountain. Plus, there was a better chance of
someone finding him if he stayed put. The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the
freezing wind and snow. Using his skis, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass
of snow and dug out a hole in the middle. Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a
blanket, to stay as warm as he could.
When evening came, Nicholas was really hungry. He ate some snow and drank some water
from nearby stream so that he wouldn’t dehydrate (脱水). Then he returned to his cave and
slept.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong.
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文讲了十几岁的尼古拉斯和父亲去缅因州的Sugarloaf Mountain滑雪,在下山的时候,
尼古拉斯迷失了方向,孤身一人。他想起了以前在电视上看的贝尔·格里尔斯(Bear
Grylls)的生存节目《荒野求生》,积极地采取措施并最终获救。
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2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“当尼古拉斯没有出现时,他的父亲意识到一定出了什么
事。”可知,第一段可描写尼古拉斯的父亲报了警,警察派出救援队寻找尼古拉斯的过程;
由第二段首句内容“第二天,尼古拉斯听到了摩托雪橇的声音。”可知,第二段可描写尼
古拉斯被救的过程以及他的状况。
3.续写线索:意识到出了什么事情—报警—救援队出去搜索—发现尼古拉斯—状况良好
—与家人团聚。
One possible version:
When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. The father
contacted the police, and a search team was gathered to look for the missing teenager.
Although the weather condition was poor and the wind was still fierce, they didn’t lose hope
of finding Nicholas alive. However, they knew the clock was ticking, and Nicholas stood a
better chance of survival the earlier they found him. The team split up, and one of the
searchers who knew the area better decided to sweep a mountain trail he used to hike up.
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. He went out and followed the
sound to find help. He had walked for about a mile when he heard someone calling his name.
He moved towards the sound, and sure enough, a few minutes later, he came face to face with
the searcher. Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally in a good condition, and he was
really happy as he was carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family.
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