山西省长治市2024-2025 学年高三上学期9 月质量监测英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
On the street, I watched the elderly woman struggle with a walker, loaded
down with bags of groceries(过去分词做后置定语). I’d seen her before, each time feeling
guilty(现在分词短语做伴随动作) I didn’t offer her a lift
. This day, I stopped and led her into the
car.
“Bless you , child, ” she said. She directed me to go farther south. It seemed too
far for her to walk everyday. She explained that she usually took a bus but had
missed the last one. Gradually, it got dark ,and I began to feel uneasy(情绪描写). We
continued down unfamiliar streets until she finally pointed to an old apartment
building where she lived. Several rowdy young men in their early twenties had
gathered around the entrance. They were smoking something and appeared
threatening(刻画人物心理). Some were on motorcycles , and one, wearing
a hoodie(
连帽
衫
) over his bushy , long hair
(现在分词短语做后置定语), was staring at me intently, -too
intently- and smiling.
I felt uncomfortable(人物情绪描写), but the woman seemed fine. I stopped the car and
helped with her cart and groceries. She thanked me , and I drove away as fast as I
could. Half an hour later, back on the road I knew , I turned on the radio and
played some familiar music. Suddenly the peaceful atmosphere was interrupted
by the roar of a motorcycle behind me(预示冲突要到).Slowing
down
(现在分词做伴随动作),I was
hoping he would pass me.I recognized the biker from the apartment house - the
one with the hoodie and bushy hair who kept smiling at me familiarly. He didn't
pass me but continued to drive at the same speed as me, I realized he was waving
for me to stop.
Outside, it was pitch-dark(环境描写). No way was I going to stop on a deserted
street(部分倒装句，强化心理). I tried to speed away as fast as I could , but it didn't stop him. He
raced after me again. Getting
increasingly anxious
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I tried to use the
phone to call 911.With my eyes on the road ,one hand on the wheel and the other
hand searching on the seat next to me for my purse(with 复合结构) , I felt an empty seat. My
purse wasn 't there(冲突)!
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Looking back again,through the rear view mirror,I finally saw it -the
person was waving with something I recognized.
Paragraph 2: Seeing the note in the purse ,emotional tears welled up in my eyes.
山西省长治市2024-2025 学年高三上学期9 月质量监测英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
On the street, I watched the elderly woman struggle with a walker, loaded down
with bags of groceries. I’d seen her before, each time feeling guilty I didn’t offer her a
lift, This day, I stopped and led her into the car.
“Bless you , child, " she said. She directed me to go farther south. It seemed too
far for her to walk everyday. She explained that she usually took a bus but had missed
the last one. Gradually, it got dark ,and I began to feel uneasy, We continued down
unfamiliar streets until she finally pointed to an old apartment building where she
lived. Several rowdy(粗鲁的)young men in their early twenties had gathered around
the entrance. They were smoking something and appeared threatening. Some were on
motorcycles , and one, wearing a hoodie(连帽衫) over his bushy , long hair, was
staring at me intently- too intently- and smiling.
I felt uncomfortable, but the woman seemed fine. I stopped the car and helped
with her cart and groceries. She thanked me , and I drove away as fast as I could.Half
an hour later, back on the road I knew , I turned on the radio and played some familiar
music.Suddenly the peaceful atmosphere was interrupted by the roar of a motorcycle
behind me.Slowing down,I was hoping he would pass me.I recognized the biker from
the apartment house - the one with the hoodie and bushy hair who kept smiling at me
familiarly. He didn't pass me but continued to drive at the same speed as me, I
realized he was waving for me to stop.
Outside, it was pitch-dark, No way was I going to stop on a deserted street. I tried
to speed away as fast as I could , but it didn't stop him, He raced after me again,
Getting increasingly anxious, I tried to use the phone to call 911.With my eyes on the
road ,one hand on the wheel and the other hand searching on the seat next to me for
my purse , I felt an empty seat, My purse wasn 't there!
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Looking back again,through the rear view mirror,I finally saw it -the
person was waving with something I recognized.
Paragraph 2: Seeing the note in the purse ,emotional tears welled up in my eyes.
1. 读后续写类型分析及构思指导
类型：本文属于人际温情+冲突反转类故事，聚焦陌生人之间的善意、误解
与情感反转，强调人性温暖与社会信任。
构思要点：
布局：两段续写需分别完成悬念解决与情感升华。第一段揭示摩托车手的真实
意图（归还钱包），第二段通过钱包内的线索（如感谢信或联系方式）深化主
题。
框架提炼：
冲突：主人公误以为被不良青年追踪，实则对方善意相助。
反转：通过“挥舞熟悉物品”化解误会，引出钱包丢失的伏笔。
主题：善意传递与刻板印象的打破。
实施步骤：
第一段：描写主人公从恐惧到发现真相的心理变化，衔接摩托车手的动作（如
举起钱包）。
第二段：通过钱包内的物品（如老妇人的感谢信）触发情感共鸣，升华主题。
承接原文事项：
需呼应老妇人的“Bless you”、摩托车手的“smiling intently”等细节；
保持主人公第一人称视角和心理描写连贯性。
巧妙设计：
利用“钱包”作为关键道具，串联老妇人的感恩与摩托车手的善意；
环境描写烘托情绪（如从“pitch-dark”到“路灯渐亮”象征安全感回归）。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
故事山模式：
开端：主人公帮助老妇人回家 → 发展：遭遇摩托车手，产生误会 → 高潮：被
追踪的紧张对峙 → 转折：发现对方挥舞钱包 → 结局：善意揭晓，情感升华。
伏笔与冲突点：
伏笔：老妇人提及“错过末班车”、摩托车手“微笑注视”、钱包丢失。
冲突点：主人公对陌生环境的恐惧 vs 摩托车手的真实意图。
隐含线索：摩托车手与老妇人可能相识（同一社区），其粗鲁外表下隐藏善
意。
解决方案：通过归还钱包的行为打破刻板印象，揭示互助主题。
3. 原文要素分析表格
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
主人公善良但易焦虑；
老妇人感恩；摩托车手
外表粗鲁实则友善。
“I’d seen her before, each time
feeling guilty...” / “some
rowdy young men... smiling
intently”
情感层次
从愧疚→不安→恐惧→
疑惑→感动。
“I began to feel uneasy” →
“Getting increasingly anxious”
→ “emotional tears”
关键情节点
帮助老妇人→遭遇摩托
车手→被追踪→发现钱
包丢失→真相揭晓。
“He was waving for me to
stop” / “My purse wasn’t
there!”
语言特色
多用短句和心理描写，
营造紧张感与反转效
果。
“No way was I going to stop...
I tried to speed away.”
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
关键词分析
“bless
you”“smiling”“wave”“pur
se” 串联善意与误会。
“Bless you, child” / “waving
for me to stop” / “My purse
wasn’t there”
心理描写
通过内心独白刻画恐惧
与愧疚。
“I felt uncomfortable” /
“Getting increasingly anxious”
动作描写
动作细节增强画面感
（如搜索钱包、加速驾
驶）。
“one hand on the wheel and
the other hand searching... for
my purse”
环境描写
黑暗、陌生街道烘托不
安氛围。
“it got dark” / “pitch-dark,
deserted street”
隐含主题
外表不可定善恶，微小
善意能引发连锁温暖。
老妇人的祝福与摩托车手的
归还行为形成呼应。
情感转折
由恐惧转为震惊，再转
为感动。
“I finally saw it – the person
was waving with something I
recognized.”
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
空间转换
从街道→老妇人公寓→
黑暗公路→安全环境。
“directed me to go farther
south” → “back on the road I
knew”
时间过渡
傍晚至黑夜的时间推移
加剧紧张感。
“Gradually, it got dark” →
“Half an hour later”
3. 动作、环境、心理描写与高级词汇
动作描写
He frantically waved the purse above his head.
（他疯狂地在头顶挥舞着钱包。）
I cautiously rolled down the window just a crack.
（我小心翼翼地把车窗摇下一条缝。）
My hands trembled as I clutched the steering wheel.
（我双手颤抖地紧握方向盘。）
He gently placed the purse on the ground and stepped back.
（他轻轻地把钱包放在地上，然后向后退了几步。）
I let out a shuddering sigh of relief.
（我颤抖地松了一口气。）
Tears welled up in my eyes, blurring my vision.
（泪水涌上眼眶，模糊了我的视线。）
I fumbled through my purse with trembling fingers.
（我用颤抖的手指在钱包里摸索。）
A warm smile spread across his face, erasing my fears.
（他脸上绽开温暖的微笑，驱散了我的恐惧。）
I nodded gratefully, unable to find the words.
（我感激地点了点头，说不出话来。）
The motorcycle's roar faded into the distance.
（摩托车的轰鸣声渐渐消失在远处。）
心理描写
A wave of panic washed over me.
（一阵恐慌向我袭来。）
My mind raced with worst-case scenarios.
（我的脑海里飞速闪过各种最坏的情况。）
A glimmer of recognition dawned on me.
（我闪过一丝认出对方的念头。）
Guilt gnawed at me for misjudging him.
（因错怪了他，内疚感折磨着我。）
My initial fear gave way to overwhelming gratitude.
（我最初的恐惧被汹涌的感激之情所取代。）
I was paralyzed by a mixture of fear and curiosity.
（恐惧和好奇交织在一起，让我动弹不得。）
A profound sense of shame warmed my cheeks.
（一阵深深的羞愧让我脸颊发烫。）
My heart hammered against my ribs like a drum.
（我的心像打鼓一样砰砰直跳。）
An inexplicable sense of calm settled over me.
（一种莫名的平静笼罩了我。）
I was overwhelmed by the kindness of strangers.
（我被陌生人的善意深深打动了。）
环境描写
The deserted street was bathed in the eerie glow of a lone streetlamp.
（空无一人的街道沐浴在一盏孤零零路灯的诡异光芒下。）
A cold wind whistled through the car window.
（一股冷风从车窗呼啸而入。）
The pitch-black night seemed to swallow everything.
（漆黑的夜晚仿佛要吞噬一切。）
The familiar street lights welcomed me back to safety.
（熟悉的街灯欢迎着我回到安全之地。）
An unsettling silence hung in the air.
（一种令人不安的寂静弥漫在空气中。）
The roar of the motorcycle shattered the peace of the night.
（摩托车的轰鸣声打破了夜晚的宁静。）
Shadows danced menacingly under the dim light.
（阴影在昏暗的灯光下威胁般地舞动。）
The first light of dawn began to paint the horizon.
（黎明的第一缕曙光开始染亮地平线。）
The interior of the car felt like a fragile cocoon.
（汽车内部感觉像一个脆弱的保护茧。）
The world outside seemed to hold its breath.
（外面的世界仿佛屏住了呼吸。）
常见单词高级替换词（分类场景）
1. 说 (Say):
Whisper (v./n. 低语)： 用于秘密或温柔的场景。
Mutter (v./n. 咕哝)： 用于抱怨或不满的低语。
Exclaim (v. 惊呼)： 用于因惊讶、愤怒等突然大声说。
Utter (v. 说出)： 较正式，强调发出声音。
State (v. 陈述)： 正式、清晰地说明事实。
2. 走/开车 (Walk/Drive):
Proceed (v. 继续进行)： 正式，继续向前。
Accelerate (v. 加速)： 代替 speed up。
Descend (v. 下降，下去)： 用于从车出来或走下坡。
Advance (v. 前进)： 谨慎或坚定地向前移动。
Retreat (v. 撤退)： 向后退，离开。
3. 看 (Look):
Gaze (v./n. 凝视)： 长时间专注地看。
Glance (v./n. 瞥一眼)： 快速地看。
Peer (v. 仔细看)： 费力地或眯着眼看。
Witness (v. 目睹)： 看到事件发生。
Observe (v. 观察)： 仔细察看。
4. 害怕 (Afraid):
Terrified (adj. 吓坏了的)： 极度恐惧。
Apprehensive (adj. 忧虑的，担心的)： 对即将发生的事感到不安。
Panic-stricken (adj. 惊慌失措的)： 被恐慌占据的。
Horrified (adj. 惊恐的)： 感到惊骇的。
5. 好 (Good):
Beneficial (adj. 有益的)： 对…有好处。
Superb (adj. 极好的)： 质量极高的。
Gratifying (adj. 令人满意的)： 带来满足感的。
Commendable (adj. 值得赞扬的)： 应受表扬的。
4. 搭配、词法与语料积累
地道搭配与词法解析
Loaded down with...： 固定搭配，意为“满载着...”，形象地表示负担很重。
原文：loaded down with bags of groceries
Feel guilty (that)...： 常见搭配，表示“因...感到内疚”。
原文：feeling guilty I didn't offer her a lift
Stare at someone intently： intently（专注地）是高级副词，修饰stare，增强画
面感。
原文：staring at me intently
The roar of a motorcycle： roar（轰鸣）比sound 或noise 更生动具体。
原文：the roar of a motorcycle
Speed away： 动词短语，生动表达“加速离开”。
原文：I tried to speed away
Search for...： 固定搭配，表示“搜寻...”。
原文：searching ... for my purse
A wave of (emotion)： 比喻用法，表示“一阵（情绪）袭来”。
扩展：a wave of panic/relief/gratitude
可积累的语料（生词短语）
1. Rowdy (adj.)
词意: 吵闹的；粗暴的。
词性: 形容词。
近义词: noisy, boisterous, unruly, disorderly。
反义词: quiet, peaceful, orderly, calm。
例句:
The bar was full of rowdy customers. （酒吧里满是吵闹的顾客。）
The police were called to deal with the rowdy crowd. （警察被叫来处理这群粗暴
的人。）
2. Intently (adv.)
词意: 专注地；专心地。
词性: 副词。
近义词: attentively, closely, keenly, fixedly。
反义词: absently, distractedly, carelessly。
例句:
She listened intently to every word he said. （她专注地听他说的每一个字。）
The dog watched intently as its owner prepared its food. （狗专注地看着主人准备
它的食物。）
3. Well up (phrasal v.)
词意: （泪水）涌出；（情感）涌起。
词性: 动词短语。
近义词: surge, rise, flow, spring up。
反义词: subside, recede, dry up。
例句:
Tears welled up in her eyes when she heard the sad news. （听到这个悲伤的消息，
她的眼泪涌了上来。）
A feeling of pride welled up inside him. （一股自豪感在他心中涌起。）
4. Shuddering (adj.)
词意: 颤抖的；战栗的。
词性: 形容词（现在分词作形容词）。
近义词: trembling, shaking, quivering, shivering。
反义词: steady, calm, firm。
例句:
She let out a shuddering breath after the frightening experience. （经历那件可怕的
事情后，她呼出一口颤抖的气。）
He felt a shuddering fear run down his spine. （他感到一阵战栗的恐惧顺着脊柱而
下。）
5. Give way to (phrasal v.)
词意: 让位于；被...代替。
词性: 动词短语。
近义词: be replaced by, surrender to, yield to。
反义词: resist, withstand, hold out against。
例句:
His anger gave way to sadness. （他的愤怒被悲伤所取代。）
The storm finally gave way to bright sunshine. （暴风雨终于让位于明媚的阳
光。）
5. Possible Version(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Looking back again, through the rear view mirror, I finally saw
it—the person was waving with something I recognized. For a split second, my
heart skipped a beat, but then I noticed the familiar shape of my purse. My pulse
quickened, not out of fear now, but from the sudden realization that I had left it
behind. His persistent chase suddenly made sense. Hesitating(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I
slowed the car, though doubt still lingered in my mind(无灵主语句). What if it was a
trap? My knuckles whitened on the steering wheel, the hum of the engine
echoing my tension(独立主格，本句刻画人物情绪). Yet, the clear sight of the purse in his hand
pushed me to pull over cautiously(无灵主语句), headlights casting long shadows on the
road(独立主格环境描写). He stopped beside me, breathing heavily but smiling in relief,(现在分词
短语做伴随动作) as if eager to prove his harmlessness. He extended his arm, passing
me
my purse carefully(现在分词短语做伴随动作), smiling
“My grandma sends me to return the
purse and a note”(现在分词短语做伴随动作).
Paragraph 2:
Seeing the note in the purse, emotional tears welled up in my eyes. Nestled
among my things lay a folded piece of paper(完全倒装句)—an old receipt with the
woman’s shaky handwriting. “Thank you, child, for your kindness. The world needs
more hearts like yours.” Reading
the words
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt a lump rise in my
throat. All the fear and suspicion melted into warmth. Looking
up
(现在分词短语做伴随动作),
I met the young man’s eyes, and for the first time, his smile didn’t seem
threatening but sincere(衔接原文). I managed to whisper a trembling “thank you,”
realizing(现在分词短语做做伴随动作)that kindness often hides behind rough appearances.
Driving
home
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), purse on the seat beside me(独立主格), I hummed to the
radio, my chest lighter than before(独立主格描写心情). That night, the deserted streets no
longer seemed so dark, for I carried with me
not just
my belongings
, but a
reminder of unexpected human goodness.
独立主格：headlights casting long shadows
强调句：It was my purse that he was holding.
地道搭配：
heart skipped a beat = 心跳漏了一拍（惊讶/害怕/激动）
knuckles whitened on the steering wheel = 握方向盘手指发白（紧
张）
lump rise in one’s throat = 哽咽
情绪描写亮点：pulse quickened, doubt lingered, lump in my throat, chest
lighter than before
动作描写亮点：pull over cautiously, extended his arm, breathing heavily
语料积累与替换：
realize → become aware of / come to see
hesitate → waver / pause / falter
sincere → genuine / heartfelt
Example:
She hesitated, wavering between fear and hope.
His words were not polished, but they were utterly genuine.
At that moment, I suddenly became aware of the kindness
hidden in his actions.
Version 2
Paragraph 1:
Looking back again, through the rear view mirror, I finally saw it—the person
was waving with something I recognized. It was unmistakably my purse, dangling
awkwardly in his hand(现在分词短语做后置定语). My mind raced—how could I have been so
careless? Fear was still wrestling with reason inside me.(刻画人物心理) The deserted
street, the roar of his motorcycle, and his intense stare all screamed danger(无灵主语句).
Yet, the purse was mine. Summoning
courage
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I eased the car to the
roadside, leaving
the engine running
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), ready
to flee
(adj 做补语) if
anything went wrong. He slowed down too, removed his hood, and approached
cautiously(动作串), his rough voice breaking the silence(独立主格), “You dropped this back
there. My Grandma send me to return it, and there is a note from her inside”
My breath caught in my throat, torn
between distrust and gratitude
(过去分词短语丛刻画人物的纠
结). At last, I rolled down the window just enough for him to pass the purse through,
my trembling hand brushing against his(独立主格) as I took it back.
Paragraph 2:
Seeing the note in the purse, emotional tears welled up in my eyes. The
wrinkled paper carried words simple yet powerful: “Your kindness today lightened
my burden. Bless you.” It was from the elderly woman. At that moment, all the
tension I had felt seemed foolish(主动表被动). The young man nodded once, started his
motorcycle, and disappeared into the night, leaving(现在分词短语做结果状语)behind
nothing
but
the echo of his engine and a restored faith in strangers
. Gripping the wheel
tightly(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I whispered thanks into the stillness. My reflection in the
mirror showed tear-stained cheeks, but also a smile that hadn’t been there before.
The city lights ahead seemed warmer, more welcoming(寓情于景), as if the night itself had
been softened by this small act of honesty and gratitude.
非谓语作伴随状语：his rough voice breaking the silence
倒装：So careless had I been that I almost paid a price.
地道搭配：fear wrestle with reason = 恐惧与理智交织
revved his motorcycle = 加油门
tear-stained cheeks = 泪痕满面的脸
情绪亮点：breath caught in my throat, torn between distrust and gratitude,
restored faith in strangers
动作亮点：rolled down the window just enough, gripping the wheel tightly
语料积累替换：
careless → inattentive / negligent
gratitude → thankfulness / appreciation
foolish → naive / unreasonable
Example:
She was too inattentive, missing the details everyone else
noticed.
His words filled me with deep appreciation for his honesty.
In hindsight, my fear seemed utterly unreasonable.
Version 3
Paragraph 1:
Looking back again, through the rear view mirror, I finally saw it—the person
was waving with something I recognized. There, shining
faintly under the
streetlight(现在分词短语做定语), was my purse. A flood of realization swept over me(无灵主语句)
—I must have left it when I carried the groceries. My grip loosened on the wheel,
replaced
by hesitation
(过去分词做后置定语). Could I trust him? The deserted street felt
endless(主动表被动), and every instinct told me to flee(无灵主语句). Yet, reason whispered
otherwise. Slowing down cautiously(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I lowered the window a crack,
cold night air brushing my face(独立主格刻画环境). He held out the purse, eyes no longer
threatening but almost pleading(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “This is yours, and a note from
my grandma” he said simply. His words, though rough, carried sincerity(无灵主语句).
Relief washed through me, though doubt still lingered at the edges.(无灵主语句) My
heart hammered wildly as I finally reached out to take it, the weight of the purse
reassuring in my trembling hands(独立主格刻画人物心理).
Paragraph 2:
Seeing the note in the purse, emotional tears welled up in my eyes. In shaky
handwriting, the woman had left me a message: “Kindness returns kindness. Trust
it.” My vision blurred as I read and reread the words. The irony struck me(无灵主语句)
—I had doubted the very people who had come to help. Looking
up
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I
caught a final glimpse of the young man speeding away, his silhouette fading into
the horizon(独立主格). The night remained dark, but inside me, light flickered—soft
but steady(adj 做补语). Clutching
the purse to my chest
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I drove on, the
radio humming gently in the background(独立主格刻画人物心理). No longer was I haunted by
fear(完全倒装句); instead, I carried gratitude and an unspoken promise: whenever I
encountered someone in need again, I would not hesitate to pass on the warmth I
had received tonight.
加分语法点：
倒装：Never had I felt so torn between trust and fear.
分词结构：Relief washing through me, though doubt still lingered.
强调句：It was the golden zipper that caught my eye first.
地道搭配：
flood of realization = 顿悟般的意识涌上心头
clutching the purse to my chest = 把钱包紧紧抱在胸口
light flickered—soft but steady = 光微弱但坚定地闪烁
情绪亮点：relief washed through me, heart hammered wildly, haunted by
fear, vision blurred
动作亮点：lowered the window a crack, reached out to take it, fading into the
horizon
语料积累替换：
hesitation → indecision / uncertainty
threatening → menacing / intimidating
relief → comfort / reassurance
Example:
Her eyes reflected deep uncertainty about what to do next.
The sound in the alley was strangely intimidating in the
silence.
His presence offered unexpected reassurance in the dark.
官方第二节 （25 分）
Looking back again,through the rearview mirror, I finally saw it—the person
was waving with something I recognized. Yes,It’s my purse! My heart leaped into
my throat, not from
fear now,
but from
overwhelming surprise and confusion
. I
immediately slowed down, pulled over to the curb and got out of the car(动作串).The
biker pulled up right beside me,killed the engine and handed me my purse(动作串),
explaining
in a friendly tone
(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that it had slipped out when I was
helping his grandma. I thanked him repeatedly, feeling
deeply moved by their
kindness.(现在分词短语做伴随动作) “There's a note from my grandma in the purse. You can
open it and have a look.”
Seeing the note in the purse, emotional tears welled up in my eyes.
It read:
"Thank you for your kindness, child. You reminded this old lady there’s still good in
the world. Please accept the little bit of cash inside for your trouble. God bless
you.”My fingers trembled as I found the folded bills tucked
neatly beside the
note(过去分词短语做伴随动作). I looked from the note to the guy’s earnest, smiling face,which
I had mistaken for a threat.That day, the lady’s gratitude and the young man’s
warmth had taught a lesson about trust and compassion. Sometimes, the world
feels darker not because of its dangers, but because of the walls we build between
ourselves and others.
