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专题十五 读后续写
Writing 1 (2021浙江6月改编)
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My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn’t understand my
world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my
dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn’t really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I
would surpass(超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at
high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-’70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing
a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read
about sports or practiced my trombone(长号).
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer
hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off,
riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer
stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over
and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb’s-quarters,
foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked
forward to the pay, even though I wasn’t sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said,“A job’s a big step to growing up. I’m glad you will be contributing to
the household.” My dad’s words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do
with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn’t
interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
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When I brought my paycheck home—it was$119—my dad wanted to talk to me.
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I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.
答案
One possible version:
When I brought my paycheck home—it was$119—my dad wanted to talk to me. When
he beckoned me over at the table, I edged closer reluctantly,expecting what would be in store
for me and my hard-earned money in the pocket. I stood before my dad, head drooping and
heart thudding. Silence fell upon us for a moment. Father then reached out his hand, stroked
my head and smiled, “I’m happy you are growing up and contributing to the family, son!”
“But why can’t I keep my own money? It’s unfair!” I blurted out these words bottled in my
heart, face crimson. Dad seemed to be shocked at my sudden eruption like a volcano, but soon
he understood. “Of course, you can have it,” he promised.
I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished. A surge of
excitement bubbling up inside me, I looked up into my dad’s dark eyes, which were shining
with delight. Dad nodded at me, “I know you love sports and will make a great quarterback.
So go for your future, son, and you don’t have to be another George.” I was speechless at this,
feeling ashamed of my selfishness and guilty at my misunderstandings.Quiet man as Dad was,
he clearly did more than he said and understood more than I thought. The next few weeks, I
worked on the farm with more interest and felt less tired. I learned that I could contribute to
the household in my own way.
Writing 2 (2020浙江7月改编)
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One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a
research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”—the town of Churchill in
Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears—like all wild
animals—should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar
bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said
than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake
sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence.
He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots
hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare
bears off. Not this polar bear though—he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his
massive paws(爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be
30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some
pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment.
The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but
doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed
him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
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A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.
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答案
One possible version:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Probably angered by the spray,
the bear started attacking the fence even more violently. Not knowing what to do, I just stood
there frozen with terror. Apparently, Elli kept a much more clear head facing this critical
situation. She grabbed a big piece of garlic bread from the plate and threw it across the fence,
which immediately drew the bear’s attention. The bear stopped pounding the fence and
walked towards the bread, but he went back again in a minute when he finished the bread.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The noises of the helicopter frightened the
bear away, leaping clumsily into the bush. Although he disappeared temporarily, we dared not
remain there anymore. Climbing quickly into the helicopter, I slowly recollected myself! At
our request, the helicopter circled the snowy area to follow the bear, so that we could take
more photographs of the bear running through the bush.The day was really an adventure, but I
thought it was worthwhile. The pictures taken that day were very beautiful. I felt the close-up
snaps we took were worth the danger we experienced.
Writing 3 (2018浙江6月改编)
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It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to
take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached
Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport
and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My
dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water
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rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have
breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm,”he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt
Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃
草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my
dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put
on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t
be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you don’t get
lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of
sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine
trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful
woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
答案
One possible version:
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance
frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain.
Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off.
Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that
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moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that
we got lost.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We didn’t know where the farm house
was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really
difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a
faint voice from the distance. “It must be Uncle Paul,” I said. So we cried back with
excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride!
Writing 4 (2017浙江11月改编)
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A Vacation with My Mother
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my
mother—loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took
when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to
spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first
day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye
to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our
departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into
the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned
home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was
driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)while I go, and
I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:
“Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet.”
We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any
chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in
vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-
looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our
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great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对). If
a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She
thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
答案
One possible version:
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to
camp along the river. The views there were surprisingly beautiful—the warm sunshine, the
fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when
Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel.
Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time
we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly,
laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the
historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. When we came
back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mom would hug us and kiss us on our
faces. How sweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to
express her love to us.
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Writing 5 (2017浙江6月改编)
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On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from
his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair,
but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac
pedaled(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home.
He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!”he thought.
But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly
catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired
the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell
back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back
of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell
back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow
down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy
caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t
think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit
later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As
they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.
He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
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A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived.
答案
[写作提示]
文章题材和野外生活相关,故事具有冒险性。原文是主人公Mac在和朋友一起外出骑车
旅游时不幸遭遇饿狼的故事。就在最危险的时候Paul和Becky驱车走近。这样,精彩的
故事进一步展开。本文故事设计具有很大发展空间。
根据文章的第一段提示句,本段应该描述Paul 和Becky是如何帮助Mac脱险的,而根据
第二段的提示句,本段则应该是Mac 的朋友到来之后发生的事。考生可以根据自己的理
解和想象进行合理的续写。一定要注意续写的内容的合理性,不可脱离原文的故事无限
发展。
One possible version:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac rushed down from his bicycle and waved
at the people inside the car for help. Paul and Becky inside the car got out immediately to help
him climb into the car, in spite of the danger that the fierce wolf was running near. They
quickly pushed Mac into their car and closed all the doors as hard as possible, legs trembling
and breathless. Seeing this, the wolf still howled outside the car for some time and then left
unwillingly.
A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived. Mac’s friends were shocked to hear the
story and very grateful to the young couple. Mac invited all of them back to his home for
dinner and he introduced his wife and daughters to his two new friends who saved his life.
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During the dinner they recalled the adventure and talked about the ways to deal with such
dangerous situations.
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