2023届高考英语读后续写晨背晚练30天
DAY 2 语言描写之“漂亮地说”
晨背--素材积累
在对话标签中加入语气，嗓音，情感以及伴随动作，让你的描写更生动传神。①in a/an+形容词+tone ②in a tone of +名词
对话标签 例句：
＋ ① “You must be Annie,”he said in a friendly tone.
语气（tone） ② “I would love to.” said Emily in a pleasant tone.
③ “I don't want to.” said Emily in a tone of impatience.
④ “No I didn't.” he said in a low tone .
in a/an+形容词+voice
例句：
对话标签 ① “I didn’t mean to,” she murmured in a low voice.
＋ ② “I don't know what you mean,” said Fran in a quavering voice.
嗓 音 ③ He called out in a loud voice .
（voice）
④ The woman at the desk greeted him in a bored voice.
介词短语
in: in surprise/shock/sorrow/horror/anger
对话标签 with: with delight /excitement /embarrassment /pride /caution/care/patience/certainty
＋ 副词 firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully
介词短语 例句：
/副词 ① “We’re not in trouble!” I shouted with joy.
② “I hate you !”she screamed in anger.
③ “Is it true ?”he whispered with astonishment.
④ “I've been waiting for you,”she said with a smile.
⑤ “Get over here this instant !”David called fiercely.
⑥ “It isn’t fair !”he exclaimed angrily.
⑦ “You are my hero!”Kylie said affectionately.
⑧ “I feel like you're abandoning me.” she responded bitterly.
① “Nobody could understand me!” Andy sobbed, burying his face in his hands.
② The farmer picked up the dog, knelt down and said in a soft voice, “It’s yours
now.”
③ With her head down/With tears in her eyes, she said, “Sorry.”
对话标签 ④ “Hi, Landy. I’m sorry about the spaghetti thing.” Catherine murmured an
＋
apology, her face reddening.
伴随动作
⑤ “Look!” Rose pointed out the window and cried in great excitement.
⑥ “Want to try one on ?” I said, touching Marina's hand.
⑦ I opened my window and shouted across. “I know we've met before, but I
can’t remember where.”⑧ The woman in the car jumped out, screaming, “You idiot! Why didn't you look
where you were going?”
晚练--素材运用
运用晨读表格中的四个对话描写技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。（2021 全国新高考 1 卷）
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. At the sight of the mess
and the kids' gloomy faces,he immediately realized what they were up to."Need any help?” 1
（爸爸微笑地看着双胞胎，温柔地
问）,who felt discouraged at being found screwing things up. Jeff 2 （结巴地说出） their
failed plan, 3 （他羞红了脸）. "That's a great
idea. May I join you?" At this the twins cheered up and rolled up their sleeves to clean the stove before
they learned to fry the bread following their father's instructions. Soon came the delicious smell of
French toast and chicken porridge,at which the twins felt a great sense of achievement. With everything
settled,father left the kitchen,4 （承诺道）to keep their secret.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Sitting up in confusion, mother
was greeted with the kids' smiling eyes and happy giggles. Before she could realize what was going on,
the twins presented the breakfast tray,5 （大声喊道）,"Happy Mother's Day!” 6
（惊讶地盯着精心准备的食物，妈妈饱含深
情地说）, "Thank you，darling.That's the biggest surprise I've ever had!” It was then that father
entered, 7 （回应） mother “That must be the best breakfast ever!” Mother bit into a piece
of toast，nodding her head approvingly with great satisfaction. Exchanging glances, father and the twins
beamed brightly with pleasure.
KEYS:
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. At the sight of the mess
and the kids' gloomy faces,he immediately realized what they were up to. "Need any help?” father
gently inquired, smilingly looking at the twins ,who felt discouraged at being found screwing things up.
Jeff stammered out their failed plan,his face flushing with embarrassment ."That's a great idea. May I
join you?" At this the twins cheered up and rolled up their sleeves to clean the stove before they learned
to fry the bread following their father's instructions. Soon came the delicious smell of French toast and
chicken porridge,at which the twins felt a great sense of achievement. With everything settled,father left
the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Sitting up in confusion, mother
was greeted with the kids' smiling eyes and happy giggles. Before she could realize what was going on,
the twins presented the breakfast tray, exclaiming ,"Happy Mother's Day!” Staring at the carefully
prepared food in wide-eyed surprise ， mother said affectionately , "Thank you，darling.That's the
biggest surprise I've ever had!” It was then that father entered, responding to mother “That must be the
best breakfast ever!” Mother bit into a piece of toast ， nodding her head approvingly with great
satisfaction. Exchanging glances, father and the twins beamed brightly with pleasure.
